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Thriller Devanand...with some magic

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To all my xfourm.... friends........yeh story kalpanik hai....... agar meri iss stor se kisi ko hurt ho to phle hee sorry bolunga......mai koi professional writer nahi hu..... agar koi galti to jaye to pls maaf krnaa...... update thodi der me deta huuu...........


Thankss & support me guyys.......
 

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Introduction


Hero........ Devanand rathore

Hero's father..... prithvi singh rathor (chota sa furniture house hai)

Hero's mother ....... urmila rathore...... ( Maa house wife hai aur devanand se bahut pyaar karti hai)

Hero's friend.......
1.....Raj rana


2..... Dhruv sharma

3.....Vipul verma

Aur characters aaggee aate rahenge unka naaam ussi tym likhta rahunga........
 

John Cena

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Introduction


Hero........ Devanand rathore

Hero's father..... prithvi singh rathor (chota sa furniture house hai)

Hero's mother ....... urmila rathore...... ( Maa house wife hai aur devanand se bahut pyaar karti hai)

Hero's friend.......
1.....Raj rana


2..... Dhruv sharma

3.....Vipul verma

Aur characters aaggee aate rahenge unka naaam ussi tym likhta rahunga........
Nice bhai
 

John Cena

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Bhai is magic wagera hoga?
 
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Devanand

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Mai subha apne tym pe utha aaj clg ka phla din taa aur main late nahi hona chahta tha clg ke phle din hee..... main uthkar washroom gyaa fresh hua aur bath leker bahar ayyaa aur dressup hokar apne room se bahar aayyaa aur neeche dining table ke pass akar chair par baith gyaa.......... papa bhi ready hokar wahi baithe hue the... maa kotchen me break fast tyaar kar rahe thee.......

( Humari family midleclass family hai...... naa toh ameer naa gareeeb ....... humara ghar 2 floor thaa.... neche maa papa rehte hai aur uper ke floor me mai....)

Main....... maa khana de do late ho rha hai....... aaj first day hai aur main late nahi hona chahta....


Maaa........aaa rriii hu dev.... bas 2 mint...

Main...... papa woh....

Papa......haan dev bolo.....

Main....... papa woh bike chaiye thi.... ab clg bhi jana hai toh .....

Papa....... dev bas 1 month jaise taise nikaal lo beta...... bas agle month paka hai........ es baaar thoda busines loss me hai toh.....beta samjho....

Main..... ok papa koi baat nahi.....

Tabhi maa khana le aayyee.... hum dono ne break fast kiya ..

Breakfast karke main uthaa hath dohkar papa aur maa kaa ashirwaad liya aur papa ne kuch paise diye aur main bus stan ki trf chal diyaa...........

Meri admisin to scholarship ki bajah se ho gae thi..... sath me mere friends ne bhi mere sath hee admission le liii.... hum total 4 friend hai........ RAJ.DHURV AND VIPUL.......hum chote hote se hii friends hai......... ..

Jaise hee main bus stand pahuncha ussi waqt raj aur dhuruv apni bike par aayyee.... dhuruv ke peeche vipul baitha thaa ..... raj mere passs akar rukaa...... aur main uske peeche jaker baith gya.......

Hum aise he gedi shedi maarte hue clg pahunche ..... ki tabhi...........

 

John Cena

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Mai subha apne tym pe utha aaj clg ka phla din taa aur main late nahi hona chahta tha clg ke phle din hee..... main uthkar washroom gyaa fresh hua aur bath leker bahar ayyaa aur dressup hokar apne room se bahar aayyaa aur neeche dining table ke pass akar chair par baith gyaa.......... papa bhi ready hokar wahi baithe hue the... maa kotchen me break fast tyaar kar rahe thee.......

( Humari family midleclass family hai...... naa toh ameer naa gareeeb ....... humara ghar 2 floor thaa.... neche maa papa rehte hai aur uper ke floor me mai....)

Main....... maa khana de do late ho rha hai....... aaj first day hai aur main late nahi hona chahta....


Maaa........aaa rriii hu dev.... bas 2 mint...

Main...... papa woh....

Papa......haan dev bolo.....

Main....... papa woh bike chaiye thi.... ab clg bhi jana hai toh .....

Papa....... dev bas 1 month jaise taise nikaal lo beta...... bas agle month paka hai........ es baaar thoda busines loss me hai toh.....beta samjho....

Main..... ok papa koi baat nahi.....

Tabhi maa khana le aayyee.... hum dono ne break fast kiya ..

Breakfast karke main uthaa hath dohkar papa aur maa kaa ashirwaad liya aur papa ne kuch paise diye aur main bus stan ki trf chal diyaa...........

Meri admisin to scholarship ki bajah se ho gae thi..... sath me mere friends ne bhi mere sath hee admission le liii.... hum total 4 friend hai........ RAJ.DHURV AND VIPUL.......hum chote hote se hii friends hai......... ..

Jaise hee main bus stand pahuncha ussi waqt raj aur dhuruv apni bike par aayyee.... dhuruv ke peeche vipul baitha thaa ..... raj mere passs akar rukaa...... aur main uske peeche jaker baith gya.......

Hum aise he gedi shedi maarte hue clg pahunche ..... ki tabhi...........
Nice start bro
 

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Aasha hai ki hame daily update milega aur ek behtareen kahani padhne ko milegi.

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Ng_TheViper

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It's seems fantasy story so looking forward to it...


Waiting for next...
 
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