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Ravi aaj koi 5 saal baad apne gaon wapas aaya tha....
Wo Army main hai...Kargil ke jung khatam hui hai... Sare desh main desh ke jawanao ke liye ek josh thaa....
Usne apne ghar main kisi ko bhi apne aane kee suchana nahin dee thee wo ek surprise dena chahata thaa.....
Wo jaise hee station par pahuncha use laga jaise sara kasba uske swagat ke liye umad pada ho......
Station par DM , SSP , MLA aur sabhi ganmanaya nagrik uske swagat ke liye khade hui the..... us par dheron Maalein daal dee..
Tabhi us kee nazar bheed main ek bala ki sundar ladkii par gayi...wo use dekh kar mand-mand muskaa rahii thee.....
Jab sab kee mallein dal gayi to wo dheere se Ravi ke paas aayi aur usne bhii Ravi ke gale main Maala daal dee....
Bagal main khade College ke Principal saab ne batayaa kee ye hamare yahan Maths kii teacher hain.... dono kee aakhein takrai...
aur ek dusre ko wish kiyaa.... phir sab log use College ke Ground main le gaye jahan Hajoron kee bheed use dekhane aayi ui thee...
Sari bheed R.P. Singh Jindabad- Jandabad Jindabad ke naare laga rahi thee.....College ke Prangan main uska phir swagat huaa...
phir sab logo kee bhashan baaji shuru hui....Ravi ko 10 lac kaa state Government kee taraf se Chq mila bahaduri ke liye....
Asal main Ravi ko Jung main veerta ke liye Shaurya Chakra mila hai.....Iske alawaa use ... paas ke Thermal power plant ke chief kee taraf se bhi
10 lac ka chq mila.... Kendra sarkar se 20 lac ka chq mila, use tamaam inaam mile....
Jab sara karya kram khatam ho gaya.....aur sab log snacks lene lage ...usne ek baat notice kee...wo ladki baraabar use dekh rahi thee....
aur uskee jheel kee jaise pyari aakhon main ek ajab seee chamak thee..... dono kee najarein phir ek dusre se takrai.... aur wo jhenp gayi
aur usne najarein dusri taraf pher lee.... Ravi ne apni plate main kuch snacks liye aur wo us ladkii kee taraf chala gayaa....
Hello..... wo dusri taraf muhan kar ke khadi hui thee.... Ravi kee awaaj sun kar jaise wo neend se uthi ho ... Oh... Hai Hello ...Kaise hain aap...
Asal main wo Ravi ke aura ke samne ek dum se nervous see ho gayi.....
Ravi: main theek hun... aap kaisi hain...
Wo: Jee main bhi theek hun....
Ravi: yahan kab se padha rahi hain aap...
Wo: Abhi join kiya hai... 3-4 mahine hue hain.....
dono baaton main mashgul ho gaye..... Ravi bhiii army main reha kar bahut handsome ho gayaa thaa.....Iss samay usne aakhon par Rayban ka sunglass laga rakha thaa...aur Army kee dress main wo gajab kaa smart lag rahaa thaa....
Ravi: kahan rehati hain aap....
Wo: Jee Ramgarh main.....
Ravi: Chonkate hue... Ramgarh are wo to mera bhii gaon hai....
Tabhi kisis ne use peeche se awaaj lagai Ravi Saab.... wo udhar muda aur ishare se bola ... Coming....
Ravi: Ab chalna hoga....
Wo : jee theek hain....
Ravi : Par apna to ek hee gaon hain... Milte hain wahin...
Uske Muhan se bar-bas nikal gaya ho jaise ....
Kab....!
Ravi : Aaj shaam ko ...Ganga ke kinare.... theek 6 baje...
Wo: sharmate hui.... jee theek hai....
Ravi jaane ko muda aur phir us ladki kee taraf mudaa... aur bola....Aap bahut sunder hain..!
Us ko laga jaise us par dheron paani daal diya ho..... wo sharam se laal ho gayi.....
Aur Ravi mud kar logo se milne lagaa... sab us se haath milana chahate the.....
kuch der main usne sab se chalne kee aagyaa mangi... aur wo apne gaon ke liye nikal padaa.......
Ghar ke aage Taxi ke rukte he... usne apne ghar ko dekhaa.. Gaon bhii bahut badal chukaa thaa.... bahut development ho gaya thaa gaon main....
RE: Didi ki NATH ka Dard....... - Rebel.desi - 20-04-2019
Ghar main ander aate hiii usne dekhaa .. Maa samne hee baithi hui thee.... Maa to Ravi ko dekhate hee pagal see ho gayi...
Betaa... are kitna badaa ho gayaa hai.... Maa ne turant apni aakhon ka kajal nikal ke use laga diyaa.... kahin najar na lag jaaye...
Maa kee aakhein khusi se dab-dabaa rahin thee.......
Tabhi Ravi ne puchaan Maa Didi kahan hai... abhi -abhi nikali hai.... shayad kisi saheli ke ghar hogi....
Tabhi ravi ke najar wrist watch par gayi.... Oh my God.... 6 baj gaye..... Use yaad aayaa use us ladki se bhi milne jaana thaa...
Jo usko College main mili thee...
Kyaa huaa... aisa kyaa ho gayaa.... Ma boli...
Are nahin Maa main abhii aataa hun.... Didi aaye to unhain mat batana main aayaa hun ...Main unhain surprise dungaan.....
Kahan jaa rahaa he...
Dost se milne Ravi bola.. aur doudata huaa..... Nadi kee taraf bhaag niklaa....
Ravi man hee man soch rahaa thaa.... Pata nahin wo aayegi ya nahin aayegi.... wo apne aap ko kos rahaa thaa usne uskaa naam bhii nahin puchaan.. Nahin to kam se kam wo use dhund hee letaa... ..udhed bun main...wo Ganga ke kinare pahunch gayaa....
Bada hee shandaar aur bhavya drashya thaa Ganga kinare kaa... samne suraj dubne ko thaa..... sari nadi.... suraj kee laalimaa se laaal ho rahiii thee..... charon taraf panchiion kee gunj se vatavaran bada surnamamya ho rahaa thaa.... tabhi usne charon taraf dekhaa.... use dur ek saayaa....
khada dikhai diyaa..... Suraj ke beecho beech..... wo us saaye kee taraf badh chalaa ...
Shayad ye wohii thee..... uskaa muhan Suraj kee taraf thaa.... Ravi kee taraf uskee peeth thee..... kyaa Gajab thaa wo scene ....
Ravi uske kareeb pahunchaa........ usne choli ghagraa pehane huaa thaa..... choli keval Ek dori se bandhii hui thee.... peeche se uskee peeth
aise lag rahii thee jaise... damakta huaaa.... Kundan (Gold)..... chaaron taraf paathaar the... aur aas paas ghani jhaadiyaan thee.... wo ghutne-ghutne paani main thee....
Ravi uske paas gayaa..... Suniye.... Ravi kee awaaj sun kar wo mudi...... Kyaa damaktaa roop thaa uskaa...background main.... Suraj... neeche Ganga nadi kaa paani...charon taraf kal-kal karte...panchion kee awaajein , pani kee awaajein.......
Wo jaltarang see boli... aa gaye aap.... Haan.... Ravi pasine se sarobar thaa.... suna hain Army wale time ke bade punctual hote hain....
Ravi ne apni ghadi dekhi ...6.15 ho rahe the.... Sorry...wo main ghar gayaa & u cant belive main seedhaa bhagte hue aa rahaa hun....
Usne dekhaa Ravi puraa pasine se sarobar hai.... are lagta hai daudate hui aa rahehain.... Haan & can u belive ..aaj maine record time main yahaa aa gaya hun... Main army main sprinter bhii hun.....
Wo hanste hui chalo accha hai issi bahane aapne apnaa record bana liyaa.....
Ravi ne ab gaur se use dekhaa... Kyaa gajab kaa roop diya thaa bhagwan ne uss ladkee ko...... Rang Goraa.... surahidaar gardan....Ubhaar..Chuchiyaan.... shayad Ravi ne itnii badi pahadiyaan Kargil main bhi nahin dekhi thee...... Gajab Kadak Choochak the... aur pichwaadi ... Hai..... Itne cahude- chaude chutar..... Jinhain shastron main..... Gajgamini kehate the.... wo roop thaa uskaa.....
Wo: Kya dekh rahe ho....?
Ravi sharmata huaa...are kuch nahin....bas aise hee.....
Wo: Aise kyaa...?
Ravi thoda samhalte hui.....Ye dekh rahaa hun....kee ye Pari Jameen par kahan se aa gayi.......
Apni taarif sun kar Muskra gayi wo...aur boli .... Aate hee flirt chaalu.....
Ravi: Nahin flirt nahin... sach keha raahaa hun.... Kasam se...
Tabhi kisi patthar par pair rakhne se uskea balance bigad gayaa....aur wo girne lagi aur usne... Ravi kee baahein pakad lee.....
Ravi ne bhi turant use saharaa diyaa.... aur apni majboot baahon main bhar liyaa...... aur use pakde-pakde hee ek pathhar se sat ke dono khade ho gaye....... Ravi ne abhi bhii use kandhe ke paas se pakad ke rakhaa thaa...
Usne Ravi kee taraf muhan kiyaa aur boli... bolo kyon bulaya thaa....
Maine bulaya tha ? ...aur nahin to kyaa...wo thoda naraj hote hue boli....
Ravi ne sochaa kahin ye sach main naraj nahin ho jaaye..... bola are hum Ek hee gaon ke hain aur maine sochaa.... Milte hain....
Jaise ladkiyon main hota hai.... nakhare zaroor karti hain....
wo boli theek hai mil liye na ...ab main chalun.....
Are nahin Ravi chonkte hue...use laga jaise duniyaa hee khatam ho jaayegi agar ye chali gayi to....
Itni jaldi kyaa hai....
Jaldi hai ..Maa intezaar kar rahi hogi.... andheraa bhii ho rahaa hai.....
OK Ok Ravi bola... use laga jaise ye sach main kahin chali hee nahin jaaye.....
wo hadbadata huaa.. bola aur kafi nervous bhii thaa....... U R my dream girl..... Im in love with you ....
aur wo jo bhiii bol rahaa thaa wo dil se hee bol raha thaa.... asal main use us se sachha pyaar ho gayaa thaa....
aur aage bhi bolta chala gayaa.... Main apni zindagi tumhare saath bitana chahataa hun....
Army main front par dushmano ke chakke chudane wala ye jawaan...aaj pyar ke front par dharashaahi ho rahaa thaa......
Kyaa tum bhii ?....... please Na mat bolna.... Nahin to main shayad..wo kuch aage bolta us ne apnaa haath Ravi ke muhan par rakh diyaa....
dono ek dusre ko ek-tak dekh rahe the..... pyar main dubaa ye yuva jodaa...dono kee aakhien aasunon se bhari hui thee.....
Udhar Suraj bhii ruk-ruk kar doob rahaa thaa....wo bhi iss premi jode ke romantic drishaya ko dekhana chahataa ho jaise.........
Tum mujhe chod kar to nahin chale jaaoge..... usne aasuon se dab-dabati aakhon se poochaan.....
Nahi kabhi nahin....... tum bolo to main kal tumhare ghar tumhara hath maagne aataa hun.....!
Dono bhaav vibhor ho kar ek dusre ke aalingan main badh jaate hain...... Hum kabhi judaa nahin hogein.... chahe kuch bhii ho jaaye...
Haan hum kabhi juda nahin hongein.....
Ravi ne apne kaan se ek ring nikali aur ghutno ke bal baith kar use uskee ungalin main pehanaa diyaa...... ladkiii to jaise hil gayi.....ander se....
phir to dono ne ek passionate hug kiyaa ek dusre ko....
Uskee kathore choochiaan Ravi ke seene se kuchal rahin thee...... Ravi uskee peeth par haath pher rahaa thaa.... tabhi dono ke hoth mile aur ek pyaar bharaa..... smooching kiss shuru huaa..... Ravi ne uskee jeebh apne muhan main le lee.... aur dono ek dusre kaa laavaa peenee lage..... na jaane kitni der wo ek duje kee baahon main rahe.....
Dono ke saath ye shayad pehali baar ho rahaa thaa iss liye dono bahut bhaavuk the.......
Ravi uske haath ko chumte hue... Mere ko chod kar to nahin chali jaayogii...... usne Ravi maathaa chum liyaa ... Kabhi nahin meri Jaaaaan.....
Par ab mujhe chalna hoga... dekho kitna andhera ho gayaa hai...... Ravi ka man nahin thaa par use to jaana hee thaa....
Wo jaane ko jase hee mudi Ravi ne phir uskaa hath pakad ke apni aur kheench liyaa...... Ek baar phir dono kaa shareer ek dusre se takrayaa.....Iss baar uskee pichwadi Ravi se takrai....
Ravi ne use peeche se hee pakad liyaa.... aur uskee peeth par ek jordaar chumban jad diyaa... Laundiyaa sihar gayi....
Oh.... chodo pls der ho rahi hai......Maa chintaa kar rahii hogi....par Ravi kee majboot baahon main use apaar sukh aur anand mil rahaa thaa....
Ravi ne apne gaal uske gaalon se ragadte hui..... ek pyaaraa saa chumban uske gaal par de diyaa..... Hai... laundiyaaa ka buraa haal ho rahaa thaaa.......Achanak Ravi ne aage se use phir apne se bilkul sataa liyaa...uska laudaa poore taav par thaa... laundiyaa kee chaude- chaude chutaron kee daraar main... jabran thok diyaa..... Ghaghre ke upar se bhiii use aseem anand ke anubhuti ho rahiii theee.....aur apne dono haath uske pet par rakhate hui usmain ek jor se jhatkaa maaraa.... uske poore phoole hui lund kaa anand use de diyaa....
Phir achanak jo huaa.... uskee kalpana dono ne aaj ke liye to nahin sochi thee.....
Pata nahin Ravi main kahan se itni himmat aa gayi......... aur usne apna haath pet se uthaa kar laundiyaa ke zoban par daaal diye............ uskee dono jabraat chuchiyaan.....apne haath main bhar lee uske mote -mote kadak choochakon ko jor se masal diyaa..... ek -ek choocjak itna bada thaa kee wo Ravi ke dono haathon main nahin aa rahaa thaa......
Laundiyaa kee siti bajne lagi.....aur uskee choot ka baandh tut gayaa aur khade-khade hee jhar gayi.................
Ravi 10 minute tak..... tak uske joban se khelta rahaaa....
Tabhi use hosh aayaa.... aur use lagaa..... agar isse aur lift dee to yahin.... par choot kaa chittorgarh bana dega...
Chalo chodo....aur apne ko Ravi se chadati hui... apne baalon ko theek karte hui..... Ravi ko dhakaa diya aur jeebh chidate hui bhaag gayi.....Ravi peeche se chillate hui ... Are apna naam to bata jaa..... khud pata kar lo...... kab milogi..... kal yahin par.....aur
Wo jungle kee chanchal hirani kee tarah... kulache marti hui ..... na jaane andhere main kahan gayab ho gayi.....
RE: Didi ki NATH ka Dard....... - Rebel.desi - 20-04-2019
Ravi ....ke man ek khushi ke bhaav the..... wo muskata huaa... doobte suraj ko dekhata rehata hai aur phir apne gaon kee taraf mud jaataa hai.....
Ghar pahunch kar wo Maa se punchata hai.... Maa ...Didi aa gayi kya ?
Kahan chala gayaa thaa tu..kab se dono kee raahaa dekh rahin hun.....
to kyaa didi abhi tak nahin aayi..... Nahin abhi-abhi aayi hai.... Maa ne waaj lagaai.....
Alka dekh kaun aayaa hai..... ander se awaaaj aayi aati hun Maa.....
Ravi: Maa tumne bataya to nahin main aa raha hun....
Nahin...Maa boli....
Tabhi Ravi ko pairo kee aahat sunai dee..... aur wo andhere main diwar kii aut main chup jaataa hai..
Kaun aaya hai....?
Tu pehachaan Maa boli....
Tabhi Ravi ... Hooo..... keha kar darata huaa..... DIDIIIIIIIIIIII........Keha kar jor se chillayaaa................
Wo ek dum se ghabraa gayi....... par jab usne Didi kahaa to Raviii kehate hue ...Us Saaye main khade Ravi ke gale se lag gayi....
Dono ek dusre ko dekh bhii nahin... paaye...... Are kitnaa bada ho gayaa hai tu....
Ravi bhi apni behan ko apni baahon main le kar jhulaa diyaaa.....
2 minute tak do ke dusre se kase rahe....
Mil bhii to saalon baad mil rahe the..
Dono kee aakhon main aasoon the....Ravi ke daraane ke karan uskee dil abhi bhii joron se dhadak rahaa thaa.....
Aur uskee Maansal chuchiyaan..... barbas hil rahin thee.....
Ravi kee majboot pakad se wo sihar gayi....
Thodi der main dono alag hue....aur dono ne ek dusre ko dekhaa.... aakhon main aasoon ke vajah se sab dhundhala- dhundhala dikh raha thaa....
dono ne aasoon ponche....aur ek dusre ko dekhaa...aur dono kaa muhan khula kaaa khulaa reha gayaa.....aur dheere se wo Ravi se alag ho gayi.....
Vismay kee rekhaa..... Ravi ke chehare par khinch gayi.....
Aur yahi haal Alka kaa thaa.....
Maa ne dono ko aise dekha to wo soch main pad gayi.... kyaa huaa tum dono khush nahin hue....
Nahin Maa aisaa nahin hai..... bahut dino baad mil rahe hain... Iss liye.....
Par vidi ki vidambana to dekho......
Aap log soch rahe hongein... Kyaa huaa jo Ravi aur Alka ko wo itna chonk gaye...ek dusre ko dekh kar....
Asal main Alko wohi ladkee thee jo use College main mili thee aur jo uskee aaj hee premikaa bani thee....
Ravi ne apnaa samaan uthaaya...aur upar wale room kee taraf chal diyaa......
wo apne bed par leta huaa thaa tabhi ...Alka aayi aur boli chai....
Ravi jaise kisi gehari neend main se uthaa ho.... haan.... kyaa.....
Chai ,Alka boli ...haan...ye kehate hue usne chai apne haath main le lii....
dono chup the aur kamre main sannaataa pasra huaa thaa.....
Alka thodi der wahin khadi rahi.... na to uske lab khule aur naa hee Ravi ke.....
khana khaa ke Ravi thodi der Maa se idhar udhar kee baat kartaa rahaa.... Maa ko to bas alka kee shaadi kee chintaa thee..
wo har baar yahi baat dohara rahii thee...dekh jawaan behan hai ghar main koi ladkaa dekh ....aur iss ke haath peele kar de....
Haan Maa kartaa hun kuch...
Maa: Ye to Mangali bhi hai... mangali ladkee ke liye jaldi ladkaa bhi nahin miltaa....
Ravi Maa ko keval sun rahaa thaa...phir uthaa aur bola Maa main sone jaa raha hun....
aur 1st floor par bane apne room kee taraf chal diyaa.....
Aakhon main neend to koso dur thee..... aur yahi haal Alka kaa thaa....
Raat naa jaane kitni der dono karwate badalte rahe aur.. aur aakhari pehar aakhan lagi....
Subha Ravi jaldi uth kar jogging karne nikal gayaa.... aur laut ke aayaa to Maa aur Alka aangan main baithee hui thee....
Usne chai pee aur ...phir Maa se gufta-gu karne lagaa..... Alka keval sun rahii thee....
dono kankhiyon se ek dusre ko dekh lete the..... par baat chit kuch nahin hui....
Ravi ne ghar main ek bullet motor cycle dekhi .... are Maa ye Motor cycle kis kee hai....
Beta ye Birju Mama kee ....
Birju Mama.... kahan hain wo aajkal.... beta wo apne gaon main hain aur yahan bhii aate jaate rehate hain.....
wo hi sab kaam samhalte hain yahaa kaa.....
Ok Ravi bola.... Aap sab soch rahe hongein kaun hain ye Birju Mama.....
Ab thoda hum aapko bataate hain...... Ravi kee Maa Ravi jo kee abhi koi 42 saal kee hogi.... Gaon main jaldi shaadi ho jaati hai....
Shadi ke baad use pataa chala kee uska pati namard hai...par thaa bada jameendaar...... ye baat early 70's kee hai.....
Aapko ab ..thoda flash back main chalna hoga.....
RE: Didi ki NATH ka Dard....... - Rebel.desi - 20-04-2019
Wo Army main hai...Kargil ke jung khatam hui hai... Sare desh main desh ke jawanao ke liye ek josh thaa....
Usne apne ghar main kisi ko bhi apne aane kee suchana nahin dee thee wo ek surprise dena chahata thaa.....
Wo jaise hee station par pahuncha use laga jaise sara kasba uske swagat ke liye umad pada ho......
Station par DM , SSP , MLA aur sabhi ganmanaya nagrik uske swagat ke liye khade hui the..... us par dheron Maalein daal dee..
Tabhi us kee nazar bheed main ek bala ki sundar ladkii par gayi...wo use dekh kar mand-mand muskaa rahii thee.....
Jab sab kee mallein dal gayi to wo dheere se Ravi ke paas aayi aur usne bhii Ravi ke gale main Maala daal dee....
Bagal main khade College ke Principal saab ne batayaa kee ye hamare yahan Maths kii teacher hain.... dono kee aakhein takrai...
aur ek dusre ko wish kiyaa.... phir sab log use College ke Ground main le gaye jahan Hajoron kee bheed use dekhane aayi ui thee...
Sari bheed R.P. Singh Jindabad- Jandabad Jindabad ke naare laga rahi thee.....College ke Prangan main uska phir swagat huaa...
phir sab logo kee bhashan baaji shuru hui....Ravi ko 10 lac kaa state Government kee taraf se Chq mila bahaduri ke liye....
Asal main Ravi ko Jung main veerta ke liye Shaurya Chakra mila hai.....Iske alawaa use ... paas ke Thermal power plant ke chief kee taraf se bhi
10 lac ka chq mila.... Kendra sarkar se 20 lac ka chq mila, use tamaam inaam mile....
Jab sara karya kram khatam ho gaya.....aur sab log snacks lene lage ...usne ek baat notice kee...wo ladki baraabar use dekh rahi thee....
aur uskee jheel kee jaise pyari aakhon main ek ajab seee chamak thee..... dono kee najarein phir ek dusre se takrai.... aur wo jhenp gayi
aur usne najarein dusri taraf pher lee.... Ravi ne apni plate main kuch snacks liye aur wo us ladkii kee taraf chala gayaa....
Hello..... wo dusri taraf muhan kar ke khadi hui thee.... Ravi kee awaaj sun kar jaise wo neend se uthi ho ... Oh... Hai Hello ...Kaise hain aap...
Asal main wo Ravi ke aura ke samne ek dum se nervous see ho gayi.....
Ravi: main theek hun... aap kaisi hain...
Wo: Jee main bhi theek hun....
Ravi: yahan kab se padha rahi hain aap...
Wo: Abhi join kiya hai... 3-4 mahine hue hain.....
dono baaton main mashgul ho gaye..... Ravi bhiii army main reha kar bahut handsome ho gayaa thaa.....Iss samay usne aakhon par Rayban ka sunglass laga rakha thaa...aur Army kee dress main wo gajab kaa smart lag rahaa thaa....
Ravi: kahan rehati hain aap....
Wo: Jee Ramgarh main.....
Ravi: Chonkate hue... Ramgarh are wo to mera bhii gaon hai....
Tabhi kisis ne use peeche se awaaj lagai Ravi Saab.... wo udhar muda aur ishare se bola ... Coming....
Ravi: Ab chalna hoga....
Wo : jee theek hain....
Ravi : Par apna to ek hee gaon hain... Milte hain wahin...
Uske Muhan se bar-bas nikal gaya ho jaise ....
Kab....!
Ravi : Aaj shaam ko ...Ganga ke kinare.... theek 6 baje...
Wo: sharmate hui.... jee theek hai....
Ravi jaane ko muda aur phir us ladki kee taraf mudaa... aur bola....Aap bahut sunder hain..!
Us ko laga jaise us par dheron paani daal diya ho..... wo sharam se laal ho gayi.....
Aur Ravi mud kar logo se milne lagaa... sab us se haath milana chahate the.....
kuch der main usne sab se chalne kee aagyaa mangi... aur wo apne gaon ke liye nikal padaa.......
Ghar ke aage Taxi ke rukte he... usne apne ghar ko dekhaa.. Gaon bhii bahut badal chukaa thaa.... bahut development ho gaya thaa gaon main....
RE: Didi ki NATH ka Dard....... - Rebel.desi - 20-04-2019
Ghar main ander aate hiii usne dekhaa .. Maa samne hee baithi hui thee.... Maa to Ravi ko dekhate hee pagal see ho gayi...
Betaa... are kitna badaa ho gayaa hai.... Maa ne turant apni aakhon ka kajal nikal ke use laga diyaa.... kahin najar na lag jaaye...
Maa kee aakhein khusi se dab-dabaa rahin thee.......
Tabhi Ravi ne puchaan Maa Didi kahan hai... abhi -abhi nikali hai.... shayad kisi saheli ke ghar hogi....
Tabhi ravi ke najar wrist watch par gayi.... Oh my God.... 6 baj gaye..... Use yaad aayaa use us ladki se bhi milne jaana thaa...
Jo usko College main mili thee...
Kyaa huaa... aisa kyaa ho gayaa.... Ma boli...
Are nahin Maa main abhii aataa hun.... Didi aaye to unhain mat batana main aayaa hun ...Main unhain surprise dungaan.....
Kahan jaa rahaa he...
Dost se milne Ravi bola.. aur doudata huaa..... Nadi kee taraf bhaag niklaa....
Ravi man hee man soch rahaa thaa.... Pata nahin wo aayegi ya nahin aayegi.... wo apne aap ko kos rahaa thaa usne uskaa naam bhii nahin puchaan.. Nahin to kam se kam wo use dhund hee letaa... ..udhed bun main...wo Ganga ke kinare pahunch gayaa....
Bada hee shandaar aur bhavya drashya thaa Ganga kinare kaa... samne suraj dubne ko thaa..... sari nadi.... suraj kee laalimaa se laaal ho rahiii thee..... charon taraf panchiion kee gunj se vatavaran bada surnamamya ho rahaa thaa.... tabhi usne charon taraf dekhaa.... use dur ek saayaa....
khada dikhai diyaa..... Suraj ke beecho beech..... wo us saaye kee taraf badh chalaa ...
Shayad ye wohii thee..... uskaa muhan Suraj kee taraf thaa.... Ravi kee taraf uskee peeth thee..... kyaa Gajab thaa wo scene ....
Ravi uske kareeb pahunchaa........ usne choli ghagraa pehane huaa thaa..... choli keval Ek dori se bandhii hui thee.... peeche se uskee peeth
aise lag rahii thee jaise... damakta huaaa.... Kundan (Gold)..... chaaron taraf paathaar the... aur aas paas ghani jhaadiyaan thee.... wo ghutne-ghutne paani main thee....
Ravi uske paas gayaa..... Suniye.... Ravi kee awaaj sun kar wo mudi...... Kyaa damaktaa roop thaa uskaa...background main.... Suraj... neeche Ganga nadi kaa paani...charon taraf kal-kal karte...panchion kee awaajein , pani kee awaajein.......
Wo jaltarang see boli... aa gaye aap.... Haan.... Ravi pasine se sarobar thaa.... suna hain Army wale time ke bade punctual hote hain....
Ravi ne apni ghadi dekhi ...6.15 ho rahe the.... Sorry...wo main ghar gayaa & u cant belive main seedhaa bhagte hue aa rahaa hun....
Usne dekhaa Ravi puraa pasine se sarobar hai.... are lagta hai daudate hui aa rahehain.... Haan & can u belive ..aaj maine record time main yahaa aa gaya hun... Main army main sprinter bhii hun.....
Wo hanste hui chalo accha hai issi bahane aapne apnaa record bana liyaa.....
Ravi ne ab gaur se use dekhaa... Kyaa gajab kaa roop diya thaa bhagwan ne uss ladkee ko...... Rang Goraa.... surahidaar gardan....Ubhaar..Chuchiyaan.... shayad Ravi ne itnii badi pahadiyaan Kargil main bhi nahin dekhi thee...... Gajab Kadak Choochak the... aur pichwaadi ... Hai..... Itne cahude- chaude chutar..... Jinhain shastron main..... Gajgamini kehate the.... wo roop thaa uskaa.....
Wo: Kya dekh rahe ho....?
Ravi sharmata huaa...are kuch nahin....bas aise hee.....
Wo: Aise kyaa...?
Ravi thoda samhalte hui.....Ye dekh rahaa hun....kee ye Pari Jameen par kahan se aa gayi.......
Apni taarif sun kar Muskra gayi wo...aur boli .... Aate hee flirt chaalu.....
Ravi: Nahin flirt nahin... sach keha raahaa hun.... Kasam se...
Tabhi kisi patthar par pair rakhne se uskea balance bigad gayaa....aur wo girne lagi aur usne... Ravi kee baahein pakad lee.....
Ravi ne bhi turant use saharaa diyaa.... aur apni majboot baahon main bhar liyaa...... aur use pakde-pakde hee ek pathhar se sat ke dono khade ho gaye....... Ravi ne abhi bhii use kandhe ke paas se pakad ke rakhaa thaa...
Usne Ravi kee taraf muhan kiyaa aur boli... bolo kyon bulaya thaa....
Maine bulaya tha ? ...aur nahin to kyaa...wo thoda naraj hote hue boli....
Ravi ne sochaa kahin ye sach main naraj nahin ho jaaye..... bola are hum Ek hee gaon ke hain aur maine sochaa.... Milte hain....
Jaise ladkiyon main hota hai.... nakhare zaroor karti hain....
wo boli theek hai mil liye na ...ab main chalun.....
Are nahin Ravi chonkte hue...use laga jaise duniyaa hee khatam ho jaayegi agar ye chali gayi to....
Itni jaldi kyaa hai....
Jaldi hai ..Maa intezaar kar rahi hogi.... andheraa bhii ho rahaa hai.....
OK Ok Ravi bola... use laga jaise ye sach main kahin chali hee nahin jaaye.....
wo hadbadata huaa.. bola aur kafi nervous bhii thaa....... U R my dream girl..... Im in love with you ....
aur wo jo bhiii bol rahaa thaa wo dil se hee bol raha thaa.... asal main use us se sachha pyaar ho gayaa thaa....
aur aage bhi bolta chala gayaa.... Main apni zindagi tumhare saath bitana chahataa hun....
Army main front par dushmano ke chakke chudane wala ye jawaan...aaj pyar ke front par dharashaahi ho rahaa thaa......
Kyaa tum bhii ?....... please Na mat bolna.... Nahin to main shayad..wo kuch aage bolta us ne apnaa haath Ravi ke muhan par rakh diyaa....
dono ek dusre ko ek-tak dekh rahe the..... pyar main dubaa ye yuva jodaa...dono kee aakhien aasunon se bhari hui thee.....
Udhar Suraj bhii ruk-ruk kar doob rahaa thaa....wo bhi iss premi jode ke romantic drishaya ko dekhana chahataa ho jaise.........
Tum mujhe chod kar to nahin chale jaaoge..... usne aasuon se dab-dabati aakhon se poochaan.....
Nahi kabhi nahin....... tum bolo to main kal tumhare ghar tumhara hath maagne aataa hun.....!
Dono bhaav vibhor ho kar ek dusre ke aalingan main badh jaate hain...... Hum kabhi judaa nahin hogein.... chahe kuch bhii ho jaaye...
Haan hum kabhi juda nahin hongein.....
Ravi ne apne kaan se ek ring nikali aur ghutno ke bal baith kar use uskee ungalin main pehanaa diyaa...... ladkiii to jaise hil gayi.....ander se....
phir to dono ne ek passionate hug kiyaa ek dusre ko....
Uskee kathore choochiaan Ravi ke seene se kuchal rahin thee...... Ravi uskee peeth par haath pher rahaa thaa.... tabhi dono ke hoth mile aur ek pyaar bharaa..... smooching kiss shuru huaa..... Ravi ne uskee jeebh apne muhan main le lee.... aur dono ek dusre kaa laavaa peenee lage..... na jaane kitni der wo ek duje kee baahon main rahe.....
Dono ke saath ye shayad pehali baar ho rahaa thaa iss liye dono bahut bhaavuk the.......
Ravi uske haath ko chumte hue... Mere ko chod kar to nahin chali jaayogii...... usne Ravi maathaa chum liyaa ... Kabhi nahin meri Jaaaaan.....
Par ab mujhe chalna hoga... dekho kitna andhera ho gayaa hai...... Ravi ka man nahin thaa par use to jaana hee thaa....
Wo jaane ko jase hee mudi Ravi ne phir uskaa hath pakad ke apni aur kheench liyaa...... Ek baar phir dono kaa shareer ek dusre se takrayaa.....Iss baar uskee pichwadi Ravi se takrai....
Ravi ne use peeche se hee pakad liyaa.... aur uskee peeth par ek jordaar chumban jad diyaa... Laundiyaa sihar gayi....
Oh.... chodo pls der ho rahi hai......Maa chintaa kar rahii hogi....par Ravi kee majboot baahon main use apaar sukh aur anand mil rahaa thaa....
Ravi ne apne gaal uske gaalon se ragadte hui..... ek pyaaraa saa chumban uske gaal par de diyaa..... Hai... laundiyaaa ka buraa haal ho rahaa thaaa.......Achanak Ravi ne aage se use phir apne se bilkul sataa liyaa...uska laudaa poore taav par thaa... laundiyaa kee chaude- chaude chutaron kee daraar main... jabran thok diyaa..... Ghaghre ke upar se bhiii use aseem anand ke anubhuti ho rahiii theee.....aur apne dono haath uske pet par rakhate hui usmain ek jor se jhatkaa maaraa.... uske poore phoole hui lund kaa anand use de diyaa....
Phir achanak jo huaa.... uskee kalpana dono ne aaj ke liye to nahin sochi thee.....
Pata nahin Ravi main kahan se itni himmat aa gayi......... aur usne apna haath pet se uthaa kar laundiyaa ke zoban par daaal diye............ uskee dono jabraat chuchiyaan.....apne haath main bhar lee uske mote -mote kadak choochakon ko jor se masal diyaa..... ek -ek choocjak itna bada thaa kee wo Ravi ke dono haathon main nahin aa rahaa thaa......
Laundiyaa kee siti bajne lagi.....aur uskee choot ka baandh tut gayaa aur khade-khade hee jhar gayi.................
Ravi 10 minute tak..... tak uske joban se khelta rahaaa....
Tabhi use hosh aayaa.... aur use lagaa..... agar isse aur lift dee to yahin.... par choot kaa chittorgarh bana dega...
Chalo chodo....aur apne ko Ravi se chadati hui... apne baalon ko theek karte hui..... Ravi ko dhakaa diya aur jeebh chidate hui bhaag gayi.....Ravi peeche se chillate hui ... Are apna naam to bata jaa..... khud pata kar lo...... kab milogi..... kal yahin par.....aur
Wo jungle kee chanchal hirani kee tarah... kulache marti hui ..... na jaane andhere main kahan gayab ho gayi.....
RE: Didi ki NATH ka Dard....... - Rebel.desi - 20-04-2019
Ravi ....ke man ek khushi ke bhaav the..... wo muskata huaa... doobte suraj ko dekhata rehata hai aur phir apne gaon kee taraf mud jaataa hai.....
Ghar pahunch kar wo Maa se punchata hai.... Maa ...Didi aa gayi kya ?
Kahan chala gayaa thaa tu..kab se dono kee raahaa dekh rahin hun.....
to kyaa didi abhi tak nahin aayi..... Nahin abhi-abhi aayi hai.... Maa ne waaj lagaai.....
Alka dekh kaun aayaa hai..... ander se awaaaj aayi aati hun Maa.....
Ravi: Maa tumne bataya to nahin main aa raha hun....
Nahin...Maa boli....
Tabhi Ravi ko pairo kee aahat sunai dee..... aur wo andhere main diwar kii aut main chup jaataa hai..
Kaun aaya hai....?
Tu pehachaan Maa boli....
Tabhi Ravi ... Hooo..... keha kar darata huaa..... DIDIIIIIIIIIIII........Keha kar jor se chillayaaa................
Wo ek dum se ghabraa gayi....... par jab usne Didi kahaa to Raviii kehate hue ...Us Saaye main khade Ravi ke gale se lag gayi....
Dono ek dusre ko dekh bhii nahin... paaye...... Are kitnaa bada ho gayaa hai tu....
Ravi bhi apni behan ko apni baahon main le kar jhulaa diyaaa.....
2 minute tak do ke dusre se kase rahe....
Mil bhii to saalon baad mil rahe the..
Dono kee aakhon main aasoon the....Ravi ke daraane ke karan uskee dil abhi bhii joron se dhadak rahaa thaa.....
Aur uskee Maansal chuchiyaan..... barbas hil rahin thee.....
Ravi kee majboot pakad se wo sihar gayi....
Thodi der main dono alag hue....aur dono ne ek dusre ko dekhaa.... aakhon main aasoon ke vajah se sab dhundhala- dhundhala dikh raha thaa....
dono ne aasoon ponche....aur ek dusre ko dekhaa...aur dono kaa muhan khula kaaa khulaa reha gayaa.....aur dheere se wo Ravi se alag ho gayi.....
Vismay kee rekhaa..... Ravi ke chehare par khinch gayi.....
Aur yahi haal Alka kaa thaa.....
Maa ne dono ko aise dekha to wo soch main pad gayi.... kyaa huaa tum dono khush nahin hue....
Nahin Maa aisaa nahin hai..... bahut dino baad mil rahe hain... Iss liye.....
Par vidi ki vidambana to dekho......
Aap log soch rahe hongein... Kyaa huaa jo Ravi aur Alka ko wo itna chonk gaye...ek dusre ko dekh kar....
Asal main Alko wohi ladkee thee jo use College main mili thee aur jo uskee aaj hee premikaa bani thee....
Ravi ne apnaa samaan uthaaya...aur upar wale room kee taraf chal diyaa......
wo apne bed par leta huaa thaa tabhi ...Alka aayi aur boli chai....
Ravi jaise kisi gehari neend main se uthaa ho.... haan.... kyaa.....
Chai ,Alka boli ...haan...ye kehate hue usne chai apne haath main le lii....
dono chup the aur kamre main sannaataa pasra huaa thaa.....
Alka thodi der wahin khadi rahi.... na to uske lab khule aur naa hee Ravi ke.....
khana khaa ke Ravi thodi der Maa se idhar udhar kee baat kartaa rahaa.... Maa ko to bas alka kee shaadi kee chintaa thee..
wo har baar yahi baat dohara rahii thee...dekh jawaan behan hai ghar main koi ladkaa dekh ....aur iss ke haath peele kar de....
Haan Maa kartaa hun kuch...
Maa: Ye to Mangali bhi hai... mangali ladkee ke liye jaldi ladkaa bhi nahin miltaa....
Ravi Maa ko keval sun rahaa thaa...phir uthaa aur bola Maa main sone jaa raha hun....
aur 1st floor par bane apne room kee taraf chal diyaa.....
Aakhon main neend to koso dur thee..... aur yahi haal Alka kaa thaa....
Raat naa jaane kitni der dono karwate badalte rahe aur.. aur aakhari pehar aakhan lagi....
Subha Ravi jaldi uth kar jogging karne nikal gayaa.... aur laut ke aayaa to Maa aur Alka aangan main baithee hui thee....
Usne chai pee aur ...phir Maa se gufta-gu karne lagaa..... Alka keval sun rahii thee....
dono kankhiyon se ek dusre ko dekh lete the..... par baat chit kuch nahin hui....
Ravi ne ghar main ek bullet motor cycle dekhi .... are Maa ye Motor cycle kis kee hai....
Beta ye Birju Mama kee ....
Birju Mama.... kahan hain wo aajkal.... beta wo apne gaon main hain aur yahan bhii aate jaate rehate hain.....
wo hi sab kaam samhalte hain yahaa kaa.....
Ok Ravi bola.... Aap sab soch rahe hongein kaun hain ye Birju Mama.....
Ab thoda hum aapko bataate hain...... Ravi kee Maa Ravi jo kee abhi koi 42 saal kee hogi.... Gaon main jaldi shaadi ho jaati hai....
Shadi ke baad use pataa chala kee uska pati namard hai...par thaa bada jameendaar...... ye baat early 70's kee hai.....
Aapko ab ..thoda flash back main chalna hoga.....
RE: Didi ki NATH ka Dard....... - Rebel.desi - 20-04-2019
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