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  • Ariyan

  • Minakshi

  • Rashmi

  • Jeniya

  • Anvi

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Story jis jis era se gujrega, vah yah Raha. ⬇️

1. The first love era ( completed )

2. Ariyan's past reveal (completed)

3. Jaggu vs Ariyan era ( running )

4. Don-Ravi vs Ariyan era (upcoming)

5. National to international era (upcoming)

7. *********** Era ( upcoming )

8.********* Era ( upcoming )

9. Zenithomniforge Era ( upcoming)

8. Xentari centauran era (upcoming)

9. System secret reveal Era (upcoming)

10. Final Era ( upcoming )

Stroy in-sab era mein se gujrega, Shayad in future Mein kuchh aur bhi era's add Karu- according to the Stroy. And obviously stroy mein kafi incest hoga, so stay tuned.

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Jin logon Ko fantacy, thriller, suspense, action, adventure, romance and love, incest stories pasand hai unhin logon ke liye yah story Hai

Ye ek Novel type series hai jismein sab kuch hoga


Ismein kafi incest hoga

lekin ha ismein vah sab bhi hoga Lekin story ke hisab se

Chaliye ham sab is series ko ek sath padhte Hain


Shuru hota Hai
domination of The lion King

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update 47

Duniya main har jagah kisi na kisi dard se logon safar karte hai, sabhi k jivan mai koye na koye Dard hota hi hai, koye iss dard se bhagta hai to koye iss dard ko hi apna jivan man ke chalta hai, jivan yahi hai.......

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Dupeher 3:46 * Ariyan's house*

Iss waqt Minakshi or Ariyan maa beta dono ek dusre ki honton ka raspan karne main vyast hai, jo ankahi Prem dono maa bete mai hai uss Prem ka ehsas ek dusre ki honton chuste huye beh ankahi Prem ka sukh le rahe hai, na jane Minakshi kabse aas liye baithi thi ki bas Ariyan or wo thoda karib aaye thoda akele main time spent kare, aj ja k Minakshi ka mano kamna Purna huya aj Ariyan Minakshi k karib bhi tha or usske sath sukhad time bhi sent kar raha tha.

Chumban adhe ghante tak chala jab dono ke sanshe fuli tab ja k wo ek dusre ke honton se alag huye ~huh" huf" huf", Minakshi Sharmate huye Ariyan ko dekhi par Ariyan chinta mai pad gaya akhir Minakshi ne aisa kyun kiya.

*Ariyan man mai~ what the!!! Ye abhi abhi kiya huya!

Ariyan. Maa!! Ye!....

Minakshi. Ssssssss, Ariyan kuch mat puchu

Ariyan. Par!! Ye!......

Minakshi. Mat pucho Ariyan..mat..mat pucho

Kehte waqt Minakshi k Aankhon se aanshu girne lage, ye aansu ka karan tha sharam aur beinteha pyar tha

Ariyan. Maa! Ap ro.....

Minakshi Ariyan to tokte huye

Minakshi. Ma...mat pucho Ariyan, Kyu ro raha hu ma..mat pucho, ee..edhar ayo mere pas Ariyan..

Minakshi ne Ariyan ko aur Karib khinch laye, apne gale se laga Lia, minakshi k Aankhon nam thi, Minakshi thoda haklate huye kehti hai

Minakshi. Relax..Ariyan..tumhe nind aa rahi hogi na...haa, chalo so jao mere pass..mai..mai tumhe pyar se suladungi, tumhe acchi nind aayegi Ariyan

Minakshi Ariyan k balo mai ungli karte hue use sulane ki koshish kar rahi thi, Ariyan bhi jaldi nind mai aagaya akhir itni pyaar se koye sulaya ga to nind kaise nahi atti upar se Minakshi or koye nahi uski hi maa thi, to nind anahi tha Ariyan har sawal, dard, dukh bhul ke Sharn bhar mai so gaya, jab Minakshi ko laga Ariyan abhi geheri nind mai so Chuka hai, Minakshi ne Ariyan k mathe par ek pucchi di, "puch" Minakshi sote huye Ariyan ko nihare ja rahi thi Minakshi k man Mai kuch baatein chal rahi thi

*Minakshi man mai~ you..you are my first love Ariyan!!!! only you..yes! only you, but mai kyu kahu ki mai tumse pyar karti hu, haa!! Tum bhi to mujhe keh sakte ho "hum", but I feel so good!!! Today Ariyan! Today I'm varey happy, ye galat hai par it's feel so good Ariyan it's feel so good, I love you mere bacche.

Ariyan is bhari dupeher mai hi minakshi ka pyar ki wajah se sukun se so gaya, aur minakshi bed 🛏️ k Side rakha gaya table pe baith k company ka kuch kam mai lag gai, kam karte waqt bhi Minakshi tukur tukur Ariyan ko sote huye Dhak rahi thi, Minakshi k honton par halki muskan saaf nazar aa rahi thi
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* Location mumbai* don Ravi's farmhouse*
Arthik. To Ravi Bhai Ariyan mare ga na?

Ravi. Hahaha sure! Sure! Tujhe Kiya laga mai is mukam par aise hii aa gaya hahahahahahaha

Arthik ( thoda darte huye ). Main..main janta hoo! Isliye to ap k pass aya, par ek question tha mera kiya main puchu?

Ravi. Puch puch

Arthik. Bhai ap ko to Paisa ki kami nahi to fir ap ye 25% kyu le rahe ho?

Ravi. Good question hahahahaha. Bhale hi mai underworld pe mera kabza hai par duniya ki nazar mai main ek business man hu.. isiliye police mera bal bhi baka nahi kar paya, as a business man mujhe tera RBM company ka 25% share chahiye and as a underworld leader mai Ariyan ko marunga! Ab samjha, aur tera export import bhi mujhe chahiye drugs supply k liye

Arthik. Main samajh gaya bhai, ap bas Ariyan ko mar do fir Mai sab sambhal lunga

Ravi. Main bahar Jaa Raha hu ek mahine k liye par mera admi yaha hai..wo Tera Kam kar dega ..

Arthik. Thik..thik hai bhai

Fir arthik Ravi k farmhouse se chala gaya, arthik waha se jate hi

Ravi. Jaggu wo "anvi juwal" hat mai aya kiya

Jaggu. Nahi Bhai...uska security bahut kadak hai aise hi ham use nahin utha sakte bhai

"Thakkkkkkk"
Ravi gusse mai mej par apna hat patak ta hai

Ravi. Bahanchod...., "Apna gusse ko thoda sant karte huye" mai aj nikal raha hu jaggu ek Maline k liye, tu Ariyan ka Kam tamam kar dena aur anvi k piche hamare loga dena

Jaggu. Ji..ji Boss main sambhal lunga aur wo chuza Ariyan hahaha usse to mai kha jayenga

Ravi. Good
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• Location * Mumbai *
*Juwal industries*
Indian ka top no1 richest industry juwal industry, stock market, fashion business, automobile, food, clothes, export import, gas stations, airlines, sabhi business mein juwal industry apna dabdaba banaya Rakha tha iske piche ka Karan sirf ek 25 sal ki ladki "anvi juwal"

Entrepreneur business tycoon "anant juwal" ki beti "anvi juwal" apni office mai baithi huye thi...

"Thuk" "thuk"

~ Miss may I come in

~ yes! Come in

Ek aurat andar aati hai, pratit hota hai ki beh secretary hai,

Anvi. What is it? Rabika!

Rabika ( excited). We have a good news miss

Anvi. what is the news?

Rabika. We crossed 9.13 lakh caror valuation today Miss!!!!

Ye sunke bhi anvi k chahare pe koye Kushi ya dukh ka bhaw nahi tha, uske chahare dhak koye bhi nahi keh sakta ki wo abhi kush hai ya nahi

Anvi. Okay!

Rabika. Miss! Why are you not excited? Humne 9.13 lakh crores ki valuation crossed kardi? Are you not happy about this news! Miss!

Anvi. Why it's important to be excited! Tell dad he will be happy!

Rabika. Ok Miss

Anvi. I'm leaving now

Rabika. Ok Miss

Anvi apne office se bahar aye, bahar aate hi paparazzi and News reporters ki bhir usse ghar liya sabhi miss anvil juwal ki photo click karne laga

"Click" "click"
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~miss ap ko kisa lagraha hai juwal industry 9.13 lakh caros ki valuation pe agaye

~miss one pic

~miss wait, give us some exclusive bites

~you are so beautiful miss anvi, what is the secret behind it

~please mam one selfie

Lekin anvi k chahare par kore bhaw nhi tha, wo Jake car mai baith gaye, car ki window band karte huye wo bas yahi boli

Anvi. Leave me alone! If you guys want to ask something then ask my dad he is the owner of juwal industries.
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*Ariyan's house*
*sham ke 6:30 bajeh*

Minakshi wahi baith k apna company wala Kam kar rahi thi, aur Ariyan abhi bhi so raha tha, Ariyan ko sote huye 3 ghanta ho chuka tha, Ariyan nind se uthta hai aur samne hi minakshi ko dhakta hai, Minakshi ka pith Ariyan k samne, Minakshi ko Dhakte hi Ariyan ko yaad ata hai thodi der pehle hi wo dono kaise ekdusre ko chume ja rahe the,

Ariyan khada huye aur minakshi k piche ja ka khada ho gaya, Minakshi baithi huye thi par usse ehsaas ho chuka tha ki Ariyan uske piche khada hai, Minakshi halki smile k sath Ariyan ko dekhe bina hi keh ti hai

Minakshi. Uth gaye Ariyan!

Ariyan. Ap ko jaise pata cha!?

Minakshi. Mujhe sab pata hota hai! Mere bacche k bare mai

iske aage Ariyan kiya ho kehta, Ariyan wahi khada raha choup hoke

Minakshi. Tum kuch kehna chahte ho Ariyan?

Ariyan. Maa wo humne........

Isse aage Ariyan kuchh bole Minakshi uth ke Ariyan k samne khadi ho gaye, Minakshi k honton par halki sararat bhari muskan thi

Minakshi. Kiya tumhen mera kiss pasand nahi aya Ariyan

Ariyan ( haklate huye). Nahi woo..matlab..wo

Minakshi ( smiles). Kiya mere honthon tumhe pasand nahi Ariyan?

Minakshi thora ruthne ki jutha natak karke dusri aur ghum Gaye.....

Ariyan. Maa!

Minakshi. Huh! Kiya maa! Tumhe to mera honth pasand nahi

Ariyan ko laga uski maa naraz hai uski baat se, Ariyan Minakshi k karib gaya aur piche se Minakshi ko gale Lage kiya Ariyan ka sine mai Minakshi ka pith or Ariyan ka hat Minakshi k chinki kamar pe,

Minakshi iss hamle k liya taiyar nahi thi wo turant hi Sharma gaye, badan kanp utha uska, kamar pe uske Ariyan k mardana hat ka garmi usse saaf mehesus ho rahi thi

Is hamle se Minakshi Abhi jujh hi rahi thi tabhi Ariyan ne Ek aur hamla Kiya, Ariyan ne Minakshi ko apne aur karib khinch liya dono k baith ab koye gap nahi batcha, Ariyan k hat Minakshi k kamar par aur kas gaya, Ariyan apna mu Minakshi k kaan k pass lake kehta hai

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Ariyan. Maa! Ap k honton bohat pyari hai, ekdam soft, ekdam gulabi, rasili hai bohar ap ka honton maa!

Minakshi ( kapte huye). Such!..such mai? Pasand aaya tumhe Ariyan?

Ariyan ( dhumi garam awaz mai). Haa!!! Maa!!

Ye sunte hi Minakshi ko fir se Ariyan ko kiss karne ka man ho raha tha, wo dono Ghar akele the Sham ho chuka tha par abhi tak Nana nani ghar nahi aye the aur ishi ka fayda uthate huye Minakshi boli sharmate huye.

Minakshi ( blushing ). To..to Kiya tum tum firse mere honthon ki...raspan karoge....

Ariyan Minakshi ko apni or ghuma k aankhon Mai aankhe dal k kehta hai

Ariyan. Haa!! Maa!!

Ariyan aage Minakshi k honton k or badha or Ariyan apna jiv nikal k Minakshi honton par perne laga

Ariyan k iss harkat se Minakshi Sharma gaye ekdam se, par Minakshi ko ye sab bohat accha lagraha tha,
Ariyan bade pyare se apne maa k honton k upar apna jiv fer Raha tha, Minakshi madhosh ho rahi thi, fir Minakshi ne apna jiv nikal k Ariyan k jiv se milaya, Ariyan Minakshi dono ka jiv ek dusre se takra rahi thi, Minakshi ka mu Ariyan k thuk se bhar Gaya tha, Ariyan lagatar apni jib ko Minakshi k jiv pe sahla raha tha
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Minakshi iss thuk bhari jiv ke khal se ekdam nashe mai aa chuki thi, uska apna beta uski jiv se jiv milakar aisa khel khel Raha tha yehi baat sochte hi minakshi k chut apne app pani chhod rahi thi

Minakshi isbar madhosh hoke khud se apne jiv ko Ariyan k mu k andar gusha diya

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Mano Minakshi kehna chah rahi thi "chuse mere jiv ko Ariyan, jitna man kare chusho"

Minakshi ka jiv apne mu mai Mehesus hote hi Ariyan ka land khada hogaya, Ariyan Minakshi ko kamar se pakar k uska jiv chusne laga, Minakshi sukun k mare moaning karti rahi

Minakshi. Mmmhaaa

~mmmmm જ⁀➴ ♡

~Nnnhhmmmmm ♡

Par ye sukhad pal jiyada der na tik paye

"Ding dong"

Darwaja par ghanti baji, Minakshi na chahate huye bhi Ariyan se thoda alag hona pada

~ "huh" "huh"

Minakshi. Lagta hai koye aya hai Ariyan mai Ja k dhakti hu

Ye keh k Sharma huye Minakshi Ariyan k samne se bhag gaye, Ariyan bas apni maa ko dhakta raha,

Minakshi bhag k bahar aye aur apne honton par Ariyan ka laga huya thuk ko saf karke darwaza khola
Darwaza kholte hi minakshi man Mai bas ak hi baat kahi~ "inhe abhi Anna tha"

Minakshi ( fake smile). maa! App aa gaye

Nani. haa beta, sorry thoda late ho gaya aane mai

Minakshi ( fake smile ). Koye baat nahi! Aaye..

*Minakshi man hai~ aap aur bhi let aati jyada achcha hota!!! "Huh"

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Update 48

Ariyans past reveal



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Minakshi bhag k bahar aye aur apne honton par Ariyan ka laga huya thuk ko saf karke darwaza khola
Darwaza kholte hi minakshi man Mai bas ak hi baat kahi~ "inhe abhi Anna tha"

Minakshi ( fake smile). maa! App aa gaye

Nani. haa beta, sorry thoda late ho gaya aane mai

Minakshi ( fake smile ). Koye baat nahi! Aaye..

*Minakshi man hai~ aap aur bhi let aati jyada achcha hota!!! "Huh


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Minakshi ( fake smile ). Koye baat nahi! Aaye..

Nani. Haa chalo! Ariyan kaha hai?

Ariyan ka naam sunte hi Minakshi Sharma gaye, thodi der pahale wo dono maa bete chumban Mai vyast the Minakshi ko bah pal yaad aa gaya

Nani. Kiya huya! Ariyan kaha hai?

Minakshi. Ohh Ariyan! Hoga apne kamre Mai! Mujhe kiya pata!

Nani. Tumhen kiya pata? Ka kiya matlab!!!, tumhare papa ne mujhe call karke bataya tha ki tum dono aj ghumne gaye the?

Minakshi ka jhut pakra gaya, Minakshi danto se apna jiv karti hai.

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Minakshi ( harbarate huye ). Ha maa! Wo hum gaye the! Par mera sar Dard kar raha tha! To hum wapas aa gaye, ate hi main so gaya, sayad Ariyan bhi so raha hoga........
( Minakshi safed jhut bolti hai )

Nani. Aacha! Chalo ye prashad lo! Ariyan jag jaye to usse de dena

Minakshi. Thik hai! Mai ja rahi hoo khana Banane, aap fresh ho jaye
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*Mumbai* anvi's house*

Mumbai main sab se aalishan Bangla tha ye,.5 male ki building, aur niche 5 10 security guards baha tainat the, aur ise aalishan ghar ke Kamra, jaha anvi baithi thi, usske kamre mai kisi bhi chiz ka kami nahi thi, balki itna kuchh tha am admi soch bhi nahin Sakta, par anvi k chere pe koye bhav nahi tha, wo apne aalishan couch mein baithi thi, dhak kar pratit hoti thi wo abhi naha ke aaye hai.

Uske sharni jaisa satik aankhe, Dhanush jaisa unchi eyebrows, choti cute patli nak, uske stylesh bal jo usske gardan ke thoda hi niche Tak aate Hain, aur ek lal dark red dress mai wo baith huye thi, uske personality ka aura kuchh alag hi level Par tha

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"Thak" "thak"

Elena~may I come in!!! miss!?

Anvi. Come!

*Elena ek Latin American 41 saal ki aurat hai, wo anvi k Ghar ka maid maise main maid hai, anvi ke pita ji usse 15 saal pahale anvi ka dhak bhal karne ke liya rakhe the, Elena k paribar royal and rich parivaron ke liye kam karte hai*

Elena ( smiles ). Congratulations! Miss!

Anvi ( blank ). For what?

Elena ( smiles ). For crossing 9.13 lakh crores valuation! Miss!

Anvi ( blank ). Oh! Thanks!

Elena. Are you not happy about it! Miss!

Anvi ( blank ). What is happyness? Can you tell me?

Elena. Miss! Happyness is a feeling of Joy 😊

Anvi ( blank ). Whare I can find happiness! And Joy!

Elena apne miss ki aisa bhav bina chahera dhak bura lagta hai

Elena. Happyness comes with love! Miss!

Anvi ( blank). Love! What is love?

Elena ( smiles ). Love is the greatest happiness that any one can have in their life!!! Miss!

Anvi ( blank ). Life! What is life! What is love! And what is happyness! Elena?

*Apne miss ko aise dhak Elena ko bohat hi bura lag raha hota hai*

Elena. I am not the right person to tell you all this! Miss! You have to find the right person that right one can tell you! Miss!!

Anvi. Right person?

Elena. Yes Miss!

Anvi ( blank ). Anyways! I'm tired! I need to sleep

Elena. O-okay! Miss!

*Elena Baha se bahar aati hai aur man Mai bolti hai

Elena man mai~ poor Miss! 15 saal hogaya mujhe yeha aaye huye, tab se leke aj tak dekhe ja rahi hun, miss sabse bas yehi puch ti hai, pata nahi kab miss ko apne sawalon ka jawab milega.*

Anvi apne alishan bista par jati hai, aankhe band karne se pahale wo apne ap se bolti hai

Anvi~ Right person?

Fir wo aankhe band karke so jati hai



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• Mumbai* Sham ka waqt*
* Kisi bade hotel *

Aankhe band karke Ek admi bada sa bathtub mai leta huya tha, use admi ka adha pair pani mai tha aur uske land ke samne 2 ladki baithi huye thi aur Bagal mai ek ladka khada tha....wo ladka uss admi se kuchh baat kar raha tha.

Ladka. Jaggu boss! Aage kiya karna ka socha hai apne?

Jaggu. Tu ruk jara!!!

Ye kehke jaggu apne land k samne baith huye un 2 ladkiyon ko dhakta hai, aur unke gal mai jor se thappad Marta hai

*Chatakkkkkkkkkkkk*

Jaggu. Land chusna kyu band kiya! Sali! Randiyo, land chus mera~

Wo 2 ladki darte huye, ghinn-ghinate huye, jaggu ka land mu mai bharti hai aur chusne lagti hai

Jaggu. Haaahhhhhhhhhhhh, aise hi chus sali randiyo, ahhh chus aacha se mera land chus.... Ahhhhhhhwwwhhhh

Jaggu firse apna aankhe band karta hai aur uss ladke se kehta hai.

Jaggu. Ha! Ab bol kiya keh raha tha tu!

Ladka. Wo boss! Ab aage kiya karna hai! Yehi puchh raha tha

Jaggu. Ariyan singhania!! ko marna hai, bade boss ka oder hai, yah sab chhote mote kam bade Boss thode hi karenge mujhe hi karna hoga.........ahhhhhh....haaa...chuss...chusti ja aise hi randiyo.......wahhhhh

Wo ladka samne chal raha seen Ko dekhkar thuk apne gale se gatak te huye...

Ladka. To boss! Kaise kiya karna hai!!..aur kitne admi ko bulaya!!....20/ 25 admi bula lu?

Jaggu ( laughing ). Hahahahhaha kiya! Kiya kaha tune! Hahahaa matherchod wo Ariyan baccha hai!!, chuza hai!! bas ek, hahaha use Marne ke liye 20/25 admi hahahahaha, chal thik hai tu keh raha hai to 15 admi bula lena.

Ladka. Ok boss!

Jaggu. Ariyan singhania! kaha jata hai kaha aata hai, kis waqt Ghar se nikalta Hai kis waqt ham vah sirf Akela rahata Hai, ye sab details mein mujhe chahie 2 din k andar.

Ladka. Th-thik hai boss!!!

Jaggu. Chal ja ab yahan se

Ladka Baha se chala jata hai, wo ladka Baha se jate hi jaggu wo 2 ladkiyon ka bal khinch kar upar utha tha hai

2 ladki ( dard mai). ehhhhhh...ahhhhh

Jaggu. Bohat chus liya mera land, ab Chut nikal sali randiyo



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*Mumbai se bahar *
* jeniya's house*




Dopahar se Sham Ho Gaya wo dono maa beti "jeniya aur Rashmi abhi tak Ariyan ko lekar aur Mumbai kaise Jaye uss bare main hi charcha kiye jaa rahe the

Jeniya. Ap bataya aap sath do gi na mera?

Rashmi. Mai to sath hi hun, par tere papa ko jab pata chalega to wo gussa honge bohat, tab tu kiya karegi

Jeniya. Isiliye to aap ho, app ye samjha Lena?

Rashmi. Wo sab thik hai main dhak lungi. Par Paisa! Tu agar Mumbai jaye gi padhne, Ariyan se Milne to Paisa lage ga na! Aur tere papa ko jab pata chale ga tu ghar se bhag k Mumbai chala gaya padhna k liya aur Ariyan se Milne to wo tujhe ek bhi Paisa nahi dega tujhe firse wapas ghar le aayenge, aur jitna mujhe lagta hai Mumbai ka kharcha, tera collage fees, hostel ka kharcha, tera khane pine ki kharacha, kul milakar kamse kam 5 se 6 lakhs kharcha ayega, aur tu Ariyan se mil paye ya na mil paye, tere papa ne jo kiya hai usse agar Ariyan aj bhi hum sabse nafrat karta hai to..tab tu kiya karegi tu?

Jeniya ( sad face ). Keh to aap thik hi rahe ho maa! Par Mai apne bhai se milkar hi rahungi! No matter what! Agar wo mujhe nafrat bhi karega to bhi mai usse kuch bhi karke milungi, akhir kyu na milu main apne bhai se, haa maa? Mera to koye dosh nahi jo kiya papa ne kiya..humne to kuch nahi kiya na.. to fir kyu ye judai?....wo bhai jiske sath mera pura bachpan gujra, aj dekho na maa! wo mere pass nahi hai, nahi mai use dhak paa rahi hu, nahi use batee kar paa rahi hu,"crying"

Rashmi. Yaad to mera bhi bohat aata hai Ariyan ka aur minakshi di, Minakshi di ko to mai apna didi hi manti hu...par Paisa... paise k bina tu kaise jayegi..kaise waha pade gi... Pahle jaisa situation hota to yah 5/10 lakh hamare liye kuchh bhi nahin tha, lekin beta ab situation bahut alag hai, Jo kuchh lakh paise bache The pata nahin tere Papa ne kahan dubo Diya kis kam mein un paison ko laga Diya.

Jeniya ( smiles ). Main mera har jewellery girvi rakh ke Shayad usse 7, 8 lakh nikal aaenge

Rashmi. Kiyaaaaa! Jeniya tu!......

Jeniya ( smile ). Haa maa! Mein mera har jewellery girvi rah Dunga

Rashmi. Par...

Jeniya ( smiles ). Maa! Ye sab Ariyan k pass Jane k liya hi to hai

Rashmi. Ha par..., Aisa hai to! tu mera jewellery girvi rakh ke Paisa le aa!

Jeniya ( smiles ). Nahi maa! wo mera bhai hai maa! Main badi didi hone k Nate! Mera hi jewellery girvi rakhungi! Ariyan mera bhai hai maa! Mera chota bhai, uske liya kuchh bhi maa! Kuchh bhi, aur dekhiye na usse mile huye 3 saal ho gaya hai, in 3 saalo mai uska Barthday mai samil nahi ho paye, jab mai usse milungi to 3 Birthday ka gift ekhi bar mai de dungi, ap ko pata hai na usse gifts kitna pasand tha, Barthday ke din subha subha uthke wo bolta tha........

Chota Ariyan~ didi! Didi! Gifts! Gifts kaha hai Mera!

Chota jeniya( jhut bolte huye)~ kaisa gift?

Chota Ariyan ( naraj hote huye )~ areh! Didi!! mere gift! Huh!! Aap ko yaad nahi aj mera Barthday hai!!?

Chota jeniya ( smiles ). Ohh!hoo! Mai to bhul gaye!!, ab Kiya karu?

Chota Ariyan Ruth gaya, sar jhuka liya naam aankhon se

Rashmi~Tu bhi na jeniya....dhak to bechara kaisa Ruth gaya hai..aj uska Barthday hai aur tune usse rutha diya'

Chota jeniya Ariyan ko apne godi mai uthate huye...

Chota jeniya~ areh!! mera pyara Bhai! Tumhen kiya lagta hai! Kiya mai tumra birthday kabhi bhul sakti hun bhala!!

Chota Ariyan~ to fir lao!! Lao!!! Gift kaha hai mera!!

jeniya Ariyan k galo pe kiss karte huye

~ umahh

Chota jeniya~ gift sham ko milega! Abhi nahi

Chota Ariyan~ yeeeeeee!!! Woohhooo!!! You are the best di

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Jiniya. Kitna kush ho jata tha gift dhak ke, ab jab bhi Mai usse milungi tab usse 3 Birthday ka gift ek bar mai hi dungi

Rashmi ( aankhon Mai nami ). Yaad hai mujhe sab yaad hai jeniya

Jeniya. To fir yah Tay Raha main usse milane jaungi maa!

Jeniya. Bas ek mahina Ariyan! Ek mahina intejar karo mera! Tumhari didi aa rahi hai tumhare pass mera bhai ♡

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*Mumbai*
*Ariyan's house*

~wo din mujhe yaad hai.....

Ye tha Ariyan ka awaj, Minakshi jab kiss Tod ke bahar chali Gaye thi par tab tak Ariyan ka land khada hoo chuka tha, isliye Ariyan turant bathroom chala Gaya khud saant karne ke liye, Ariyan ne shower chalu Kiya thanda pani Ariyan ke sar se lekar land se hote hue pair Tak beh raha tha, dhire dhire Ariyan ka land bhi sant ho gaya abhi k liya, par saant hoye hi Ariyan gujre kuchh saalon pahale ghati ghatna ko yad karne Laga

*Flashback*
5saal pehele

5saal pehele 2 ghatna Ariyan k jivan main huya tha, ek tha wo Minakshi se naraz tha kyuki usske dad ne Minakshi ko marte ghasitte huye kamre mai band karke kuch kar rahe the, Ariyan k lakho pukar ne par bhi Minakshi ne darwaza nahi khola, isliye Ariyan gussa tha wo jak apne kamre mai khud ko band kar liya, gusse mai Ariyan leit gaya..par kuch der baad jab usse Minakshi khana khane bula rahi thi Minakshi ka awaz sune Ariyan ko or bhi gussa aa jata hai, Minakshi usse pukar ti rahi par Ariyan ne koye jawab nahi Diya.

Ariyan gusse main apne man Mai bolta hai
~ I hate you maa! I hate you
~ main..main chala jaunga iss jagah se, I hate you
~apne darwaza kyu nahi khola, abhi ap mujhe khane liye pukar rahi ho, nahi...mai yeha nahi rahung ek bhi nahi

Ariyan khidki se kudke bahar chala gaya, udhar Minakshi ko pata bhi nahi Ariyan khidki se bahar chala gaya tha, Ariyan Daud ke bahar nikla or daudta hi gaya jabtak na na wo ghar se bohat bohar dur bhag aya, Andheri raat tha or Ariyan tab chota tha usse pata nahi tha ki kaha kidhar Jaa Raha hai, par gussa chehre par saf dikhai de raha tha, Ariyan daudte daudte aisi jagah a chuka tha jahan Na koi Insan tha na koi janwar na koi lights baha sirf ek baithane ke liye ek bench jaisa tha, itna daudne ki vajah se Aryan ka pair Dard kar raha tha isliye wo baith Gaya, aur gusse mai bolta Raha.

~why papa! Why! Ap daru pike maa ko marte kyu ho! Why!
~ I hate you pappa! I hate you!
~ maa ap papa se kyun mar khati rehti ho kyun? I hate you maa! I hate you!
~ap ko pata hai! Ap ko papa se mar khate dhak mujhe kitna gussa! Aa raha tha!
~ap ne maa ko marte huye kamne mai kyun le gaye the! Whyyyyyy! Papa!
~maa apne darwaza kyu nahi khola! I hate you! I hate everyone of you! I hate everyone
~mere har dost ka mummy papa mai kitna pyar hai, par ap dono Mai pyar kyun hai!
~i hate! Everyone, I hate you mom! I hate you, "I love you maa" but I hate you! Ap ne darwaza Kyu nahi khola!!! Chi! Kiya kar rahe the ap dono andar!! Chi!!

Ye kehte kehte gusse se chote Ariyan ka chehere lal ho chuka tha, Ariyan ki sanse upar niche hone lagi thi, itni Tej sanse chal Rahi thi mano Ariyan ka sine bahar nikal aayega, Ariyan apne maa, papa main kabhi bhi pyar nahi dekha tha, anjun ( Ariyan's father) daru k nashe mai Minakshi ko pitta tha Ariyan ne bachpan se yehi dhakta aaya hai, Ariyan ko gussaa aata hai kyunki usske har dost ka mom dad main pyar tha par Ariyan k mom dad mai pyar nahi tha, isliye Aryan depressed and traumatiz rehtaa tha, par aj Arjun ne Minakshi ko bohat mara or kamre mai le jakar.....bas kisses ki awaz ati rahi, Ariyan bahar se sab sun liya tha..or ye sab chote Ariyan k liya jhelane ki layak nahin tha, chote Ariyan ka chota sa dill yesab sehan nahi kar sakta tha,

Ariyan ko gusse main sanse le Raha tha jor jor se, Ariyan bohar emotional ho chuka tha sath hi sath gusse mai chahare lal ho chuka tha, Minakshi iss waqt agar Ariyan ko dhakti to usse pata chalta ki usska beta kitna Dard mai hai

Chota Ariyan emotionally itna break down ho chuka tha ki usske aankhe dhire dhire band hone laga, itna gussa ki wajah se uska manspeshi mein khinchav aane Laga, blood flow had se badh chuka tha, chota Ariyan ka sarir ye sab sahan nahi kar paa Raha tha, Ariyan waha let gaya, Ariyan ka aankhe ojhal hone lagi, uska dill ab akdam dhire dhire dharak raha tha

"Dhak dhak" "dhak dhak" ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ....ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ﮩ٨

"Dhak" *Heart fail*

Dhire dhire Ariyan ka Aankhe band ho gaya, aur usska dil dharakna band ho gaya, usske aankhon se bas 1 bund annkhu nikla jo Ghana andhkar hone ke bavjud Chand ki Roshani ki vajah se chamakta dhikraha tha

Aryan ka sharir kisi bejan lash ki tarah vah padha Raha, Aryan ko aise pare rahte hue ek ghanta ho chuka tha, aisa lagraha tha ki Ariyan heart failure ki wajah se mar chuka tha

Lekin tabhi, Ariyan ke dimag mein Ek awaaz gunji







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Aj ke liye itna hi guys, isbar like aim rakhte hai 30 likes, aur Stroy kaisa lag Raha hai wo bhi comments karke
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*Milte Hain next update mein, dhanyvad
Bahut badhiya update
 
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coollog Bhai update kab aaye ga, ab Intezar Nahin Hota:waiting1: . Itna Achcha suspense bana Rakhe Ho mann Karta hai bas padhta jaaun. No doubt story bahut badhiya hai. bas update de do itna bhi maat tadapaao :rondu:
 
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coollog bro kab tak update aaraha Hai yah to bata do
 
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Nice updates. Jeniya ko ghar chhode huwe 5 sal ho gaye hain to Ariyan se wo 5 saal se nahi mili hain na na ki 3 saal se. Waiting for next update
 
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Bhai galatfami nahi hai mujhe Warewolf bhai ki story Badhehah se bahut milta Julta hai please check once again
Listen brother, let the man talk here.
Most Things are sorted out, this is Just a misunderstanding. Yah misunderstanding kyon Ho Raha Hai yahan per main batata hun, aap logon ne system books hi nahin padhi kabhi bhi.
Anyway humne privately baate ki. And things are cool. It's just a miss understanding nothing more than that.

And don't spread dumb-shit on my thread
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Damha bhai :smile2:
 
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Bhai jaldi jaldi update do . Nehi to padne ka mod hat jate hai
You should share atleast one update in each week
Update will be 🔜, and mein try kar raha hoon har hafte Mein at least Ek update a jaaye.
 

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Nice updates. Jeniya ko ghar chhode huwe 5 sal ho gaye hain to Ariyan se wo 5 saal se nahi mili hain na na ki 3 saal se. Waiting for next update
Sach kahun to mein bhul chuka hun jeniya kitne saal se ariyan se aalag ha, agar aapko surely pata ho, to mujhe bata sakte ho. nahi to mujhe phir se purani updates padhna padega.
 
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