Avinashraj agar story likhte waqt koi salah ki jarurat ho to aap Adirshi sahab se salah maang sakte.... ye khud romance prefix kayi extraordinary stories likh chuke hai... xp par bhi aur yaha xf par bhi...on new story macha
Thanku ji waise I m big fan unka huun main comments nahin karta tha aapsabhi logo ke kahani pe but main aapka devil bhai ka, engima bhai ka ,raja bhai ka ,mahi ji ka , jay bhai ka ,manali ji ka aur bhi adi bhai ka sabhi ka I m huge fan but main comment nahin kiya uske liye sorry aap sabhi ko...Avinashraj agar story likhte waqt koi salah ki jarurat ho to aap Adirshi sahab se salah maang sakte.... ye khud romance prefix kayi extraordinary stories likh chuke hai... xp par bhi aur yaha xf par bhi...
Thanku naina jiKisi bhi pariwar mein Nayi jindagi aane se sabhi khush ho jaate hai... khushi ki ek lahar daud jaaye sabhi pariwar ke sadasya tatha ristedaaro mein....
Jaise is kahani ka hero khushiyo ka bahar leke aaya pure pariwar ke liye...
hmm... so nani ghar rahkar study continue karne wala hai hero...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills..
Suruwat achhi huyi....
1)kahani likhte waqt mind ko zyada pressurize na kare... bilkul feel free hoke likhiye
2) jarurat ke hisab se kirdaaro ki entry karwaiye...
3) pehli koshish hai isliye zyada plot zyada complicated na kijiyega... warna baad khud hi confuse ho sakte hai ki aage kaise kahani ko badhaiye...
4) jald baazi mat kijiyega... bich bich thodi bahot details bhi dijiyega kahani ki jarurat ke mutabik pehlu, mod, jagah, kirdaar ko leke...
Baaki pehli koshish ke hisab se kahani ki suruwat bahot achhi huyi hai..
a formal intro jisne chand mukhya kirdaro ke bare me jankari di hai ab kaun kaisa hai kiska swabhav kaisa hai ye to kahani me pata chalega
Achi shuruwat hai ek nayi jaan ke sath kahani ka agaj hua hai, hushiyo ke sath shuruwat hui hai badhiya haiUpdate 1
Kahani suru karte hain ek aurat abhi room mein bahot jod se tarap rahi hain sabhi teen char aurte usko bahot kas ke pakad ke rakhe hain (ye 95 ke aas paas ka tym hain us time jayadatar bache ghar mein heen paida hote the ) wo aurat kafi jod se chilla rahi hain usi tym ek bache ki kilkari gunj uthti hain ...aur usi tym janm hota hain hamare cute se hero ka jo apni bua ke ghar paida hua hain sabhi log bahot khush the us ghar mein kyunki unke bua ka ghar bana tha uske baad ye pehla ladka th jo us ghar mein janm liya tha ..(aisa nahin hain jo ladka janm nahin liya tha bua ka jo beta tha wo hero se 15 saal bada tha but wo bua ke purane ghar mein paida hua tha ) aate hain kahani ki aur us ghar mein sabhi log bahot khush the ...ladke ka baap us tym bhi nashe mein dhut tha ...aur wo insabse bekhbar sirf itna pata tha ki ek ladka uske ghar janm liya hain ye khabar hero ke nani ghar chithi dwara bheji gayi wahan bhi chithi padke sabhi log bahot khush hue kyunki unke ghar ka us generation ka wo pehla ladka tha hero ke nani ghar mein sabhi ke yaha jelebi banti gayi ...aur usi tym hero ke nani ghar se chithi bheja gaya ki jitna jaldi hosake unke nati ko unke yahan laya jayen...( Yahan se main story ko direct hero ko uske nani ghar bhej raha huun kyunki us tym gaon ye sab mein itna naamkaran ye sab ka jayada kuch nahin tha isliye main direct story ko uske nani ghar le ja raha huun )..
Aise heen 2 mahine beet gayen aur hero ke nana aayen train se hero ko le jane ke liye unhone hero ko apni goad mein liya usko sone ka chain pehnake aur wo log dusre heen din nikal gayen bokaro ke liye ( ye hero ka nani ghar hain) hero ki maa ,hero ,aur uske nana gayen wo log saam ko nikle kyunki train raat ki thi Patna se isliye aur agle heen din wo log pahoch gayen bokaro wahin se dhumdham se hero ki entry hui ek dum baaje waaje ke saath wahan bhi sabhi hero ke saath bahot khush the khash kar hero ke masi ki ladki jo hero se 2 saal badi thi usko to uska khilona mil gaya tha wo dinbhar uske saath rehti wo hero ko apne nanhe haatho se leti aise heen karke hero ek saal ka ho gaya aur hero ab chalne bhi laga tha wo ek bahot heen cute aur masoom sa tha bole to golu molu uske 1 saal hone ke baad hero gaon chala aaya.. aise heen karte karte time nikalta gaya ....hero study ke liye nani ghar chala gaya ...
Aage ki story next part mein wahan se kahani proper tarike se suru hogi ..I know aap logo ko mere lekhni mein maja nahin aayega iske liye main mafi mangta huun but new huun dheere dheere patri pe aa jaunga..
ye kisne bol diya bhau ke maja nahi aayega ye decide karna reader log ka kaam hai aap kahani likhe aur aapki ye pehli kahani hai bindass likhne ka aur mafi mangne ki jarurat hi nahi hai yaha toI know aap logo ko mere lekhni mein maja nahin aayega iske liye main mafi mangta huun but new huun dheere dheere patri pe aa jaunga..
Avinashraj agar story likhte waqt koi salah ki jarurat ho to aap Adirshi sahab se salah maang sakte.... ye khud romance prefix kayi extraordinary stories likh chuke hai... xp par bhi aur yaha xf par bhi...
anytime msg karne ka kuch bhi puchna ho toThanku ji waise I m big fan unka huun main comments nahin karta tha aapsabhi logo ke kahani pe but main aapka devil bhai ka, engima bhai ka ,raja bhai ka ,mahi ji ka , jay bhai ka ,manali ji ka aur bhi adi bhai ka sabhi ka I m huge fan but main comment nahin kiya uske liye sorry aap sabhi ko...
jis hisab se xf ke har writer ko nishchal aur hela ko main lead me likhne kaha ja raha hai us hsab se kuch dino me xf par nishchal aur hela hi dikhengeNice intro....
Btw hero ka naam nischal rakhiye aur heroine ka naam Hella rakhiye plz
Thank youanytime msg karne ka kuch bhi puchna ho to
bhai
Okkk madam Ritesh naam ko change kar duun kya ji..Nice intro....
Btw hero ka naam nischal rakhiye aur heroine ka naam Hella rakhiye plz