Thriller Ek daastan....... Pyar ki (Romance, Thriller & Sci-Fiction)

[harryharsh31]

Namaskar, adab, sat sri akal doston.... Maine yeh story kuch din pehle hi xossip pe shuru ki thi, but xossip ab band ho chuki hai, bahut afsos hua yeh janker, main apni story ko incomplete nahi chodna chahta tha, isliye main yeh story yahan per likhne wala hoon, ye meri pehli story hai agar koi galti ho to aap mujhe maaf kar dena or apna sujhav dete rahiye gaa.
main koi itna acha writer bhi nahi hu..... Fir bhi main puri koshish krunga ki aap ko story pasand aaye... isi liye aap sabhi se anurodh hai ki aap sabhi apni kimti comment ya sujhav mujh tak pahuchate rahe. 
Mai kabhi-2 update naa de paau to aap plzzzz gusa mat hoiiyega aur na hi main dailly update dene ka wada krta hoon.. But ek promise krta hoon ki story jrur puri krunga..

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Ok bhai

 

[Assassin]

 

[harryharsh31]

Thanks for comment doston
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[harryharsh31]

Update-1
Ek sunsan sadak charo tarah ghanghor andhera bs street lights se aati madhaym roshni, sadak ke dono taraf ghanna jungle, her taraf bs sanatta...
Usi sadak pe ek adami paidal chlte hue ja raha tha.... Dark blue jean, white shirt with jacket... Ek hath me jalti hui cigarette aur dusre hath me bear ki bottle... Wo thoda nashe me hone ke karan ladkhda raha tha......
Achanak ek car bahut tezi se us sadak pe chlti hui aati hai aur us adami ke pass se guzarte hue aage chli jati hai.......karib 10-15 min aur chlne ke baad us adami ko kisi ki cheekh sunai deti hai.... Pehle to wo ignore krke agge chlne lagta hai but baad me use fir se kisi ki cheekh sunai deti hai wo kisi ladki ki cheekh thi.... Es baar wo adami us awaz ki disha ki taraf chal padta hai jo jungle se aa rahi thi.... Use kuch der agge chlne per jungle ke ander wahi car khadi milti hai jo kuch der pehle uske pass se tezi se guzri thi.... Wo thoda aur agge chal ke dekhta hai to waha do ladke ek ladki ke sath zabardasti krte hue pata hai...... Ladki ka top pura fat chuka tha aur abhi sirf red bra aur jean me thi.... Us adami ko yeh sab dekh bahut gussa atta hai to wo idher udher kuch dhundhne lagta hai.... Jald hi use ek ped ki tuti hui tahni (branch) milti hai.... Wo use uthake ladko ki taraf jata hai...... Pehle wo apna chahra rumal se dhak leta hai.... Fir savdhani se ek ladke ke sur pe wo tahni marta hai jis se us ladke ka sir phat jata hai aur wo wahi behosh ho jata hai... Dusra ladka jab tak sambhlta wo uspe us tahani se anginat war krta hai jis se us ladke ki halat bahut kharab ho jati hai... Akhir me uske sir pe war krke use bhi behosh kr deta hai...... Ladki jab ye sb dekhti hai to bahut dar jati hai aur ghutne mod apne app ko dhkne lagti hai..... Tab wo adami apni jacket utar ke use deta hai.... Wo ladki jhat se jacket lekr pehn leti hai... But wo abhi bhi dar rahi thi.... Is per wo adami kehta hai...

Adami... Mujhse darne ki jarurat nahi hai.... Chalo main tumhe tumhare gher chod deta hu...

Aur wo mod ker gadi ke pass jakr (jisme wo do ladke is ladki ko laye the) driving seat pe beth jata hai to wo ladki bhi uthkr uske bagal wali seat pe beth jati hai..... Adami us se address puchker us taraf chalne lagta hai...... Pure safar dono me koi baat nahi hoti ladki bs ghor se us adami ko dekhe ja rahi thi... Jiska chehra abhi bhi dhakka hua tha bs ankhen hi dikh rahi thi.... Gehri kali ankhen jinme ek ajeeb se kahmoshi aur kuch bhi nahi..... Wo adami use uske gher chod ke apne raste chal padta hai....

 

[harryharsh31]

Update-2
Agle din subah ko mumbai shahar ke ek bade se gher me ek cute si ladki aram se apne bed pe so rahi thi ki ek khubsurat si ladki uske room me aati hai aur use uthane lg jati hai...

Ladki 1.... Aru! Betu aru uth ja, dekh subah ho gyi.

Aru.....(adhi neend me hi) are di sone do na, waise bhi aaj sunday hai.

Ladki... Sunday hai to kya itni der tk soyegi, tu her Saturday apne dosto ke sath late night party krti hai aur sunday subah madam g ko hosh nahi hoti, ab sach bta raat ko tu bahut der se aayi hogi, pta hai maine tera kitna wait kiya, aur tera phone bhi nahi lg raha tha, ab bta raat ko kab aayi thi.

Yeh sunte hi aru uth ke beth jari hai aur kal raat ki ghatna use yaad aati hai, kaise wo ladke usko noch rahe the, yeh yaad aate hi uske ander darr ki ek leher daud jati hai, jis se wo kamp jati hai aur rone lag jati hai.
Samne bethi jab aru ko rota hua dekhti hai to preshan hi jati hai aur aage aake aru ko gale lga leti hai.

Ladki 1.....kya hua betu tu ro kyu rahi hai, kisi ne kuch kaha kya tujhase bta na, acha agar mere kuch puchne se tujhe bura lga to sorry baba, aage se tujhase kuch nahi punchungi, pls yun ro mat, chup ho ja aru.

Aru.... (subkate hue) nahi di main apke wajah se nahi ro rahi.

Ladki 1.... To kya baat hai bta mujhe.

Aru...... Wo di.... Wo.... Wo.... Kal... Wo...

Ladki 1..... Yeh kya wo.. wo kr rahu hai, sahi se bta dekh tujhe meri kasam.

Aru..... Di kal main apne dosto ke sath party krne ek club gyi thi.. Wahan do ladke mere aur meri dost ritu ke sath badtmizi krne lge, to humara un ladko ke sath jhagda ho gya, to maine unhe waha ki security se pitwa kr bahr fikwa diya tha... Fr jab main gher aane ke liye nikali to unhone mera kidnap kiya aur mujhe jungle me le gye aur waha mere sath..........

Itna keh kr aru zor-2 se rone lgi

Ladki 1....(aru ko kas ke gale lgake aur pure gusse me) kaun the wo dono mujhe bta main unko chodungi nahi, jinhone meri behen ki izzat........

Aru uski baat bich me kat te hue

Aru... Nahi di mujhe kuch nahi hua hai, wo log apne mansubo me safal ho pate us se pehle waha ek farishta aa gya jisne mujhe bchaya aur sahi salamt gher chod kr gya.

Ladki 1.... Hey bhagwan tera lakh-2 shuker hai meri behen sahi salamat gher aa gyi, wo farishta jo koi bhi hai bhagwan uski her icchha puri kre....chal ab fresh ho ja main niche tera khane pe intzar krti hu...

Aru... Ok di...

Aru bathroom me ghus jati hai aur wo ladki bahr ko chli jati hai...

Ab thoda intro........
Sanjay kapoor.. Ek bahut bade businessman, india me inki her state me branches hain, nature se soft apne usuloon ke pakke hai, inki age 48 yrs hai, yeh apni family se bahut pyar krte hai sply badi beti se aur haan inka khud ka apna ek newz Channel bhi hai jo inki badi beti sambhalti hai.

Isha kapoor.... Sanjay ki wife, waise to peshe se doctor hai aur sath me ngo bhi chlati hai, inka khud ka ek hospital hai jo yeh chlati hai, inki age 44 yrs hai, yeh bhi apni family se bahut pyar krti hai sply choti beti se.

Simran kapoor(simi).. Ye gher ki badi beti apne papa ki parchayi, yeh ek shant nature ki ladki hai, ise simple rehna hi pasand hai, yeh bahut khubsurat hai, rang dudh sa safed, kali nashili ankhen, lambe ghane baal, choti si naak, phool ki pankhudiyon jaise honth, ye abhi 24 yrs ki hai, isne apni study complete krli hai, isne journalism kiya hai, to ye apne papa ka newz chanal handle krti hai, 

Aradhya kapoor (aru)... Ye gher ki ladli aur bahut shararti hai, yeh ek chulbuli, muhfat aur bahut gusse wali hai, yeh abhi graduation final me hai, iski age 21 hai, yeh bahut hi cute aur shakal se bilkul masoom lagti hai...

Ab aate hai story pe.....

Jahan ye dono behenein dining table pe khanna kha rahi hai sath me tv pe newz chanal dekh rahi hai, tabhi ek newz aati hai ki shahar ko lagne wale jungle me aaj subah do ladko ki lash bramad hui hai, sath me ek car bhi hai jo in ladko ki hi btai ja rahi hai, hairani ki baat yeh hai ki dono ladko ki lash jungle me nange halat me mili aur inke private part ko katta gya hai, jis se jyada khoon behne ke karan dono ki maut hi gyi..

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Zabardast udate

 

[Night Warrior]

Arey waah shuruwat hi action bahut khub aur ladki bhi bach gayi

 

[Hacker]

Nice start

 

[The Predator]

:congrats.jpeg: for new story bro
keep going