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Fantasy ek kahani aisi bhi(short story)

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naam-ravi kumar
umra-24 saal

mai abhi belgium me kaam karta hoon ek intenational bank me lekin mai aaj jo kahani sunane jaa raha hoon wo hai aaj se 3 saal pahle ki hai jab mai india me rahta tha. mai odisha ek ek garib family se belon karta hoon mere ghar me hum do bhai ek bahan the. mai graduation complete kar liya tha aur different banks ke exam de raha tha. isi bich mera ek exam aaya jo vijag me tha.
mere ghar ke pass hi railway station tha jahan se raat ko train jaati thi jo subah 5 baje vijag me pahucha deti thi. mai usi train me ticket liya. mai amir to tha nahi to general dabbe ka ticket liya. general dabba khachakhach bhara hua tha badi muskil se mai us dabbe me chadh paya aur gate ke pass hi khada ho gaya. ab mujhe pata tha puri raat yahi khada rahna padega ya kismat achha hua to andar jamin pe baithne ki jagah mil jaye kyunki seat pe jagah to milne se raha. train chalne laga hawa ka jharokha aata aur mere chehre ko garmi ke mousam me bhi thanda kar jata . dheere dheere train speed pakda mai bahar ki hawa khaa raha tha tabhi humare dabbe me ek bhikhari aaya jiska ek haath nahi tha wo bhikh mang raha tha use dekhte hi mujhe daya aa gaya aur mai apne pocket se 10 rupya ka note nikal kar use de diya idhar train chalta raha kuch logon ne us bhikhari ko paisa diya to kuch ne gaali. adhe ghante baad train dusre station pahucha yahan bhi ek-do log humare dabbe me ghuse baaki dusre dabbe me chale gaye. fir train chalu hua. mujhe bhi ab thoda jagah mila tha to gate se mai thoda andar aa gaya tha. train chal pada tabhi taali ka awaj ayaa takkk takkkk aeee chikne denaaaaaa.
mujhe samajh aa gaya ki is dabbe me chakke log chadhe hai ab wo paise wasulenge. wo log abhi is dabbe ke dusre side the.
mere bagal me ek aadmi tha wo bola-ye chakka log ka sahi hai sala do char train me ghumo aur khub paisa kama lo. socho to is dabba me kam se kam 150-200 aadmi hoga sabse 10-10 rupya bhi lega to yahi adha ghanta me 1500 rupya kama lega, is train me 4 general dabba hai matlab 6 hazar sirf yahan se. do-tin train me ghum liya to ek din 12-15 hazar rupya ho jata hai
mere bagal me jo ladka tha wo bola-inlogon ka dhandha hi yahi hai kuch karna dharna hai nahi khali jab dekho nanga hokar baith jayega.
us aadmi ka baat sunkar mai socha sahi hai in chakko ka.
mai socha mai itna mehnat karunga tab jakar ek noukari lagega jo mujhe mahine ka 50 hazar dega itna to ye log 3 din me do ghante kaam karke kama leta hai.
mai soch liya chahe jo bhi ho jaye mai to paisa nahi dunga.
dheere dheere chakka log dabbe ke dusre side se vasuli karte karte hum tak pahuch gaya. mai dekha do chakke the. ek dikhne me ladke jaisa tha lekin dusra bilkul ladki jaisa. jo ladke jaisa tha uska naam tha moni aur jo ladki jaisi thi uska naam tha soni.
soni bola-moni tu udhar dekh mai idhar dekhti hoon. aur jo ladke jaisa tha matlab moni wo humare pass aaya. pahle usne mere bagal wale se bola-aee chikne chal nikal paisa.
wo ladka bola-mere pass paisa nahi hai.
moni bola-dekh chikne chup chap de de kyun nakhre kar raha hai.
ladka bola-paise hai hi nahi.
moni mujhse bola-ae chikne denaaaa.
mai bola-nahi dunga paise.
moni bola-ae chikne hoshiyari nahi chal khali kar jaldi.
mai bola-na.
moni bola-soni idhar aana.
soni idhar aa gaya.
moni bola-ye dono chikna de nahi raha.
soni bola-ae chikne chal jaldi de.
mai gusse me bola-koi paisa waisa nahi milega.
soni gusse me apne haath me pahne kangan se ek alpin nikala aur mujhe dikha ke bola-deta hai ki nahi. nahi to bhok denge samjha.
ye dekh kar to mujhe gussa aa gaya. mai gusse me chattakkkk se ek thappad mara soni ko.
moni gusse me bola-sale harami soni pe hath uthata hai aur wo mere chehre pe ek mukka khich ke mara. mere naak se khoon nikal gaya uske baad to mai pagal ho gaya. mai soni moni dono ka baal pakda aur khich ke gira diya aur laat se marne laga. dabbe me ho halla hone laga aur fir agla station aa gaya. dabbe me police aa gaya aur wo hum tino ko train se utar diya. train ti chala gaya lekin hum tino station pe hi rah gaye.
mera train chut gaya yani exam bhi chut gaya mujhe un dono pe aur jada gussa aaya tabhi station pe ek sub inspector aaya wo soni aur moni ko bola-tumko mana kiya hai na lafda karne se fir bhi lafda karta hai.
dono haath jod ke bola-sorryy sir maaf kar dijiye ye ladka hi ladayi suru kiya tha. fir wo police wala dande se mujh dhad dhadd do danda mara fir do danda soni aur moni ko bhi mara. sala police ka danda itna dumdaar tha do do danda me to hum tino jamin pe baith ke rone lage.
wo sub inspector soni moni ko bola-chal paise nikal.
mai dekha dono apne apne purse se 1000-1000 nikal kar use diya. uske baad jo sub inspector tha wo to chala gaya lekin do sipahi abhi bhi wahi khada tha.
sipahi mujhe bola-dekh tere naam pe case nahi kar rahe wahi bahut hai ab agle train se chale jana. jaa bhaag yahan se. mai udhar se jaane laga to wo sipahi soni aur moni ko bola-aee chal udhar.
dono soni moni sipahi se gidgidate hue bola-nahi sahab humko jaane do sahab.
sipahi gusse me bola-aee chal chup chap
aur dono ka haath pakad kar udhar andhere me le gaya.
ye dekh kar mujhe bhi man hua jara dekhu kya chakkar hai aur mai chup kar denkhne laga.
wo dono sipahi soni moni ko khich kar andhere me ek gali me le gaya. jahan ek sipahi apna pant khol kar lund moni ke mooh me thoos diya wahi dusra apna soni ko jhuka kar uske gaand me lund ghusa diya.
mai to ye dekhkar sadme me chala gaya. mai dekha dono dukhi the lekin ro nahi rahe the aur na hi chilla rahe the iska matlab saaf tha ki in dono ke saath aisa pahle bhi kai baar ho chuka hai.
mai ye sochne pe majboor ho gaya ki kya hi jindagi hai in logon ki. ye log na to padh sakte hai. na koi noukari kar sakte hai aur na vote de sakte hai. kisi ke ghar me beta hota hai to wo log khusiyan manate hai beti hota hai to bhi thoda kam hi sahi lekin khusiyan mana lete hai lekin kisi ke ghar me chakka ka janm ho jaye to log rote hai matam manate hai. isme us bachhe ka kya dosh.
mujhe apne bagal me khade aadmi ki baat yaad aa gayi ki har train se ye log 5-6 hazar kamate hai.
mai socha-har din 5-6 hazar kamate hai usme se 2000 ye sub inspector hi le liya aur uske junior iski ijjat le rahe hai.
kuch der me wo police wale jhad gaye aur wo bhi un dono ko gaali dekar us se 100-200 chin kar bhaga diye.
mujhe ab un dono pe daya aa raha tha. mujhe un logon ko chakka bulana achha nahi lag raha tha lekin hay re humara samaj itne saalon se humare samaj ne chakko ke liye ek dhang ka naam tak nahi de paya. kya hi bulate hai hum unhe chakka, hijda. kinnar koi bhi naam thik nahi hai sab ek gaali hai. humara samaj chakko ko ek achha naam tak na de paya to unhe unka hak dilayega ye sochna bhi bekar hai. wo dono log sayad yahi ke the kyunki wo log udhar andhere se aage jane lage. mera bhi exam to chut hi chuka tha socha dekhun to akhir kya hai inki jindagi. mai bhi piche piche jaane laga. wo log un galiyon se hote hue ek basti ki taraf chal gayi. mai dekha jis bhikhari maine 10 rupaye diye the wo bhi usi basti ki taraf jaa raha tha.
mai bhi udhar pahucha to dekha wahan basti me thoda khula jagah tha jiske charo taraf chote chote kapde ke aur sirf ito ke ghar the wahi bich me ek khatiya pe ek 50-55 saal ka aadmi tha ya chakka pata nahi lekin baitha hua tha. wo soni moni ko dekhte hi bola-aa gaye mere bachhe aao aao aur wo dono ke sar chuma fir unka purse unke haath se liya aur sare paise nikal liye. fir dono ko 500-500 diya aur bola jao.
fir wo us bhikhari ko bola-kitne paise laya hai. wo bhikhari 200 rupaye diya.
wo aadmi bola-lagta hai tera ek taang bhi katna padega tabhi log tumpe daya karenge.
mai ye sunte hi socha-sala hum inlogon pe daya kare isliye inke haath pair tod diye jaate hai. yani agar hum kisi bhikhari ko paise dete hai iska matlab hai hum is dhandhe ko badhawa de rahe hai fir mujhe soni moni ka khyala aya.
mai socha-sala inki bhi kya hi jindagi hai train me itne logon se paise mango fir sabse galiyan khao bhale log bahar se nahi dete lekin man me to dete hi hai. fir police se pitayi khao fir police ko paise do fir police gaand bhi marega uske baad baaki paise ye chakka le leta hai. aisi jindagi se achi mout hai. tabhi mere man me khyal aaya isliye to bahut sare chakke jawan hone ke pahle hi atmhatya kar lete hai. bahuto ke to maa baap hi maar dete hai. jo bach jate hai wo khusnasib nahi badnasib hote hai. ye sab dekh kar mera man kharab ho gaya aur mai wahan se wapas station pe aa gaya. dusre train se mai ghar aa gaya. ghar me jhuth bol diya ki tabiyat kharab tha isliye lout aaya. lekin jab se mai wapas aaya tha mera najariya hi badal gaya. uske 4 din baad hi mera ek aur exam tha jo mai diya jisme mai pass bhi ho gaya aur meri training ke liye mujhe mumbai jana pada.
mai wahan ek society me flat le liya. us society me do tin ladkia thi jinhe janwaro se bahut lagaw tha. pahle jab mai kisi ladke ya ladki ko daya karte dekhta tha to mujhe achha lagta tha lekin ab mujhe pata hai jo daya kar raha hai ya to wo newkoof hai ya dikhawa kar raha hai. jab mai un ladkio ko dekhta tha to mujhe lagta tha ye kitne badnasib log hai jinke pass apne koi nahi hai isliye janwaro se man bahla rahe hai. kitni ajib duniya hai ek flat me 5 kutte do billi aur 4 khargosh milk aur butter kha rahe hote hai usi flat ke kinare ek bachha bhukha baitha ro raha hota hai. us bachhe ko do rupaye do to agle din 4 aur bachhe wahan bhukhe milenge kyunki yahi dhandha hai.
mai soch liya mai puri duniya to thik nahi kar sakta lekin kuch na kuch to karke hi jaunga lekin kuch kar nahi paya aise hi saal nikal gaya. mai fir ek baar kaam se bombay se vijag gaya aur fir usi train se mai apne ghar aa raha tha jis train se ye kahani suru hua tha. ab mera seat AC me tha kyunki mere pass manager ki post thi. lekin pata nahi kyun jab mai wo station pe pahucha jahan un chakko ka ghar tha to ek baar train se utar gaya aur aas pass dekhne laga. jab dekha to aaj bhi do policewale soni moni ko khich kar andhere ki taraf le jaa rahe the. mai doud kar gaya us police wale ke pass aur akad ke bola-ae kya kar rahe ho.
police wala mujhse bola-aap jaiye sir ye log chor hai inhe sabak sikhane jaa rahe hai.
mai samajh gaya aaj police wala mujhe ijjat mere kapde ki wajah se de raha tha.
mai bola-dekho inko chodo jaane do.
meir baat pe police wale use chod diye isliye nahi ki wo mujhse dar gaye isliye kyunki unhe laga sayad panga ho sakta hai.
unke jaate hi mai soni moni ka haath pakda aur bola-chalo.
dono boli-kahan.
mai-yahan se bahut door.
soni moni bola-pagal hai kya. hum tumhe jaante bhi nahi hai apna kaam karo samjha.
mai fir dono ko purani baat bataya fir ye bhi ki mai chahta hoon un dono ki jindagi sawar jaye.
aaj bhi train mera chut chuka tha. soni moni ko mujhpar bharosa nahi ho raha tha lekin mai un dono se 3-4 ghante baat kiya. ab wo bhi mujhse thoda khul gaye aur apni kahani bataye ki kaise unke maa baap ne bachpan me unhe chod diya fir wo log dar dar bhatakate rahe aur fir yahan aa gaye aur baki chakko ke saath kaam karne lage.
mujhe pata tha mai in dono ko ghar nahi le ja sakta lekin maine dono ko kuch paise diye aur bola-mai fir aaunga ek mahine me aur phone number bhi unse le liya. fir mai ghar gaya aur pata kiya ki transjender ke liye kya kiya jaa sakta hai usme mujhe ek trust mila jo india aur belgium mil kar chalata tha. mai fir se job switch kar liya taki un dono ki help ho sake. aur fir mai belgium chala aaya saath hi un dono ko bhi yahan le aaya. wo dono bhi ab mere saath hi rahte hai aur dono padhayi bhi karne lage hai. kismat hi hai ki mujhe soni aur soni ko mai pasand aa gaya hoon. hum dono yahi shaadi karne wale hai aur bachhe adopt karne wale hai. ummid hai moni ko bhi yahan koi dil laganewali mil jayegi. kyunki yahan utna bhedbhav nahi hai aur modern system hai.



 

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

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Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
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