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Romance EK MUTTHI AASMAN(short story)

Swaraj

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Do bacche bade se oled tv ke saamne baithe hue the

"Koun jeetega??"ladka bola

"Bet yaad hai??"ladki boli
Aur dono muskurate hue tv par dhyan se dekhne lage

"MGM ARENA,WHERE LIKES OF MUHAMMAD ALI,LLOYD MAYWEITHER AND MANY BOXERS HAD SHOWN THE SKILLS OF BOXING,WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT IT MUKESH??"commentator brian bola mukesh se

"Heavy weight championship title par nazar hai dono boxers ki, Edward hawkins from usa aur amit surana,5 times champion hai edward .kya amit edward se cheen lega title??"mukesh ne apni commentary jaari rakhi

"80,000 ke lagbhag darshak hai aur lowest ticket ka price 100 dollars hai.is bade match ko 130 desh aur 15 channels me telecast kiya ja raha hai.what a wonderful moment for india"mukesh fir bola

Edward lahuluhan tha.aur 7 round ke baad bhi khada tha.muskura raha tha.pehli baar jab amit ko autograph diya tha delhi me tabhi pata chal gaya tha ki ladka bohut aage jayega
Proud feel ho raha tha ki usne suggest kiya tha ami ko boxing sikhne ke liye

Amit ki aankhen lagbhag band thi.cut kiya gaya tha taaki dekh sake wo.itna aasan nahi tha jitna samajh raha tha wo
Ye national nahi pro wrestling hai.khoon pasina ek karna padta hai jeetne ke liye
Aur boxing jo edward ne mazak mazak me seekhne ke liye kaha tha
Aaj bata dega wo ki kitni badi galti ki hai usne apni nasihat de kar
Lekin boxing seekhne ki asli wajah to sirf ek hai.
Madhu

"ROUND 8,FIGHT"awaz ke saath hi amit ka focus is fight me a gaya

Dono boxers ka sirf ek hi target tha
World heavy weight championship
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NEW YORK AIRPORT
ek ladki airport se bahar aate hi daud daud kar cab khojne lagi

"Are madam indian hai kya aap??"ek sardarji ne dekh kar poochha

"Haan bhai sahab please kya aap mujhe pohuncha denge??"ladki haath jodte hue boli

"Kahan jaana hai aapko??kaafi chot bhi lagi hui hai??"sar par band aid aur hont fate hue hai aankhen bhi sooji hui hai..."sardarji bole

"Please wo sab baad me mujhe MGM arena jaana hai"ladki is baar paanv pakadte hue boli

"Are are behenji zaroor le jaunga.maine bhi ek ticket kiya hua hai.apne desh ka banda lad raha hai bhai.chaliye chalte hai"bol.sardarji ne gaadi start kar di

Ladki baithi rahi aur kaskar apne bag ko pakde rahi aur aankhen band kar di.
Purani baatein uske aankhon ke saamne flashback ki tarah ghoomne lage
 
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Swaraj

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5 years back

Apna chashma thik karte hue dubla patla ladka diwar se jhankne laga

"Hey madhu ,kuch baat karni hai tujhse"teen ladki ek saath ek ladki ko gher kar boli

"Kya baat hai??"madhu boli

"Suna hai tujhe bada ghamand hai ki tu boxer hai aur sabse best ha?'ek ladki boli

"Maine aisa kab kaha??"madhu boli

"Chup ,itna bol.jitna poocha jaaye"doosri ladki boli

"Maine to kuch kaha hi nahi"madhu bolj

"Lagta hai kisi ne sikhaya nahi ki seniors ka respect kaise karte hai"teeno me ek.ladki boli

"Depend karta hai ki seniors kaun hai aur kaise hai"madhu boli

"Oh aise nahi manegi,sabak to seekhna padega.aise ya waise"bol ek ladki ne apna haath ghumaya

SMOOOSSSSSSSHHHHH

jhuk gayi madhu aur jhuk kar hi ek punch utha diya jabde par

DHAMMM

ladki DHAPP se neeche gir gayi

"Ise kehte hai upper cut"madhu boli

Dono ladkiya dar gayi aur dono taraf se gher kar ek saath jhapti

DHADDDDDDD

"Ye hai hook"madhu boli

DHAAMMMMMMMMM

"Straight punch"madhu boli aur apne haath ko saaf karke boli
"Hope maine boxing lesson de diye thik se"

Aur ek nazar daal kar ek diwar ki aur dekhne lagi.shayad koi hai wahan.khair chalna chahiye use
Aur wo chali gayi teen ladkiyon ko Zameen par litakar

Madhu sharma nayi student hai college ki aur amit ka dil us par pata nahi kyun a gaya hai
Lekin wo kahan aur amit kahan,ek boxer hai madhu aur sports quota se admission mila hai use kisi se zyada baat nahi karti aur apne dhun me rehti hai
Kai baar amit se nazar mili lekin isse zyada kuch nahi hua

Amit ne apne sapat baalon ko thik kiya
Aur muskuraya use pata hai kahan jaana hai
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PARTICK'S BOXING ACADEMY
Jahan india ke best boxers practice karte hai aur is academy ne india ko best gold medalist bhi diye hai

hah finally amit wahan a hi gaya jahan wo aana chahta tha

Darwaza to khol liya usne lekin.....ab.....
Thar thar kaampne laga wahan ke boxers ko dekhkar
Sab ke sab jallad lag rahe the

"Can i help you?"ek sweet si awaz ne amit ko aur nervous kar diya

"M m mai wo....wo mai...."amit badbadane laga

"Now now pehli Baar sab hota hai,please ander aao fir baat karte hai,oh by the way in kanika"ladko jaisi baalon wali ladki shorts me thi amit ko lekar ek room me gayi

"Ye form bhar do.2,000 per month "kanika boli

Ye gaya paisa mera.lekon madhu se badkar kuch nahi
Amit ne form bhar kar paise nikal liye aur kanika ko de diya

"Fine ab change kar lo,ye raha locker key aur ye raha boxing gloves,mouth piece"kanika boli

Amit ne boxing gloves pehen liya aur ek khali jagah chala gaya aur door se madhu ko dekhne laga
Uff kya ladki hai.jis hisab se practice kar rahi hai ek din bohut badi boxer banegi

"Hello mr"ye awaz waha ke coach ki thi
Ko amit ko dekh raha tha

"I'm mihir seth.coah hoon yahan ka,naya join kiya hai??"mihir ne poochha

Amit ne haan me sar hilaya

"Baap re fir to tum ekdum sahi jagah aaye ho,chalo mass practice karte hai"coach bola

"Mass practice??"maut ne poochha

"Are bhai ye sirf trial hai seekhne ke liye dekhte hai tum me kitna talent hai.agar tum ek minute bhi tik paye to is mahine ka paisa wapas"mihir haste hue bola

"Pakka??"amit ne poochha

"Kasam se"mihir bola

Amit head gear, boxing glove pehen kar ring me gaya

"Heya madhu,tumhara opponent mil gaya.ready ho jao"mihir ke bolte hi madhu ne bhi gear pehen liya aur ring me a gayi

"A apne head gear nahi pehni"amit bola

"Zaroorat nahi hai mujhe"bol madhu ne apne haath ko boxing pose me liye taiyyar ho gai
 
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Swaraj

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:congrats: swaraj bhai.................... kuchh alag hi andaj ki kahani hai

airport wali wo ladki shayad madhu hi hai
Ek ladki kaise inspiration banti hai ek seedhe saadhe ladke ke liye
Yahi is story me hai
Amit is story ka hero hai aur uske ek hi inspiration hai madhu jaisa banna
Saath rahiye
 
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Swaraj

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Madhu ne gear up kiya
Saamne ek usi ke age ka akela khada tha.dheela sa ladka .na koi josh na koi passion .mare hue machli jaisa hai

Madhu ne pose liya aur ..

DHAMMM

amit ka sar chakra gaya.sar chakrane laga isse pehle wo kuch samajh paata

SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHHHHH

"Uh..."amit ki aankhen dar ka maare band ho gayi
Madhu ki punch pet ke kuch hi inch pehle ruk gayi thi

"Agli baar ladne aana to taiyyar hokar aana wo bhi apne mukable wale se"bol madhu chali gayi ring chodkar

"OH GOD TUM THIK TO HO"kanika daukadkar aayi

Amit ne apna headgear nikal kar haath me rakh liya

"Kisne kaha tumhe ladne ke liye"kanika amit ke sar ko dekhne lagi

"Wahi mihir ne kiya hoga...uski to.."kanika gusse se chali to gayi mihir ke pee he lekin amit abhi bhi madhu ko dekhe ja raha tha

Isi se ek din shaadi karega amit
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COLLEGE ME
amit ka purja purja dheela tha aur dard kar raha tha

"Hi chutiye"peeche se kedar ne maara
Aur amit ka saara sharir jhanjhana utha

"Kedar harami,kis baat ki dushmani nikal raha hai tu"amit gusse se bola

"Kyun??aisa kya ho gaya??kisi ne maara waara kya??"kedar ne fir poochha

"Abey maine boxing join kiya hai"amit sharmate hue bola

"Kya?? boxing??kyun??kisi ne dadagiri dikhai kya"kedar ne poochha

"Nahi yaar bas aise hi,chal canteen chalte hai"bol amit aur kedar ek saath canteen ki aur chal diye

Raaste me amit ne madhu ko ek senior ladke ke saath dekha
Dono usi aur a rahe the

"Chalo na madhu canteen chalte hai.uske baad ek achi si movie lagi hai theatre me waha chalte hai"Wahi senior bola
Senior gurwinder,poore college me uski dhaak hai
Aur college me wo union me hai

"Hi amit"madhu ne achanak se poochha

Amit ka dil dhadkana band ho gaya
Madhu ne use pukara wo bhi us senior ke saamne

"Amit naam hai na tumhara??"madhu ne poochha

"Haan"itna hi bol paaya amit

"Chalo na canteen chalkar samose khate hai.badi bhool lagi hai"apna haath amit ke haath me rakhkar kedar aur gurwinder ka muh khula chodkar hairan amit ke saath canteen chali gayi madhu
 
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Raj142

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Hello Bhai
Me aapka bhot bda fan hu
main ab tak aap ki 3 storey padi he
AGENT , AGENT 2 aur PAGLA SAB KI KBAR
me chahta Ho AGENT ki Teesri Kadi nikale

A STORY BHI READ KRNI SHURU KI HE
 

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Raaste me amit ne madhu ko ek senior ladke ke saath dekha
Dono usi aur a rahe the

"Chalo na madhu canteen chalte hai.uske baad ek achi si movie lagi hai theatre me waha chalte hai"Wahi senior bola
Senior gurwinder,poore college me uski dhaak hai
Aur college me wo union me hai

"Hi amit"madhu ne achanak se poochha

Amit ka dil dhadkana band ho gaya
Madhu ne use pukara wo bhi us senior ke saamne

"Amit naam hai na tumhara??"madhu ne poochha

"Haan"itna hi bol paaya amit

"Chalo na canteen chalkar samose khate hai.badi bhool lagi hai"apna haath amit ke haath me rakhkar kedar aur gurwinder ka muh khula chodkar hairan amit ke saath canteen chali gayi madhu
:lol1::lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1: :lol1:
ise kahte hain bandar ke hath khajur lagna
us gurvinder se bachne ke liye madhu ne chilgoje ko hi gift de diya
 
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