• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

[Extra] Vengeance ~ Revenge is Sweet

Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
Prime
1,829
19,313
144
Hey everyone :wavey:

This is my second thread on this forum. Instead of a new story, I’m starting a thread for extra update related to my ongoing story, Vengeance ~ Revenge is Sweet.

What are extra updates?

Extra updates are bonus parts of the story that don’t affect the main plot. You can skip them if you want! Think of them like filler updates in anime.

Why make extra updates?

Some readers have asked for scenes that don’t fit into the main story, so I’ll post them here. If you’re interested in these extras, make sure to read the main story first! If you haven’t started the main story yet, don’t read these extras—they might spoil things!


Important Points


1. Extra updates aren’t the main story. They might be a little different, and the characters could act a bit silly.


2. No fixed schedule. Extras will be posted randomly whenever I get the chance.


3. Open discussion here. You can talk about less important details from the story so the main thread stays focused on meaningful reviews.


4. Just for fun! Don’t take the extras too seriously. These updates are meant to be fun and entertaining, so just relax and have a good time reading them.


PS:- I hope you all have fun with these bonus scenes :ciao:

 
Last edited:

Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
Prime
1,829
19,313
144
Extra Update 1
(Last Time)


****
Day 884

“Vansh”

“Vansh!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Vansh”

Vansh ko apne kareeb Sonia ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi aur uske paas hone ka ehsaas bhi ho raha tha. Lekin wo uske bavajud bhi aankhen nahi khol raha tha.

Sonia: Vansh ...Mom Dad ko bura lage ga! Ap kyu mujhe unke saamne sharminda karna chah rahe ho?

*Silence ~*

Sonia (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ap ko bacchon ki tarha he uthana padega...!

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

Vansh ko Sonia ke kadmon ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi aur usko Sonia ke bed ke upar chadhne ka bhi ehsaas ho gaya. Vansh gehri saanse lene laga.

*Thud*

*Slash*

*Bam*

Vansh ne uski aankhen kholi to uske upar Sonia ek chaku pakde khadi huwi thi. Vansh ne usko dhaka dete huwe bistar se gira diya aur tabhi ek taraf se mask lagaye huwa Vansh ka dusra roop chaku liye khada tha.

*Woooosh*

*Thud*

Mask wale Vansh ne chaku se vaar kiya to Vansh uchalte huwe peeche ho gaya aur usne dodge ker liya. Bina kuch bhi kahe ya aur daikhe Vansh kamre ke darwaze ki taraf bhaga aur usko kholte huwe baahir nikal gaya.

*Thud*

*Thud*

*Thud*

“Vansh”

“Ye kya ker rahe ho Vansh?”

“Vansh beta ruko”

Vansh ne bhaagte huwe he sidhiyon se neeche ki taraf daikha to uska pura parivar usko neeche khada daikh raha tha. Lekin Vansh unko daikh ker bhi ruka nahi aur upar he bhaagta raha.

Vansh (Panting): A-Ab aur nahi ...Ab aur dhokhe mein nahi rahu ga. Ye sab jhoot hai. Yanha se nikalte he main iss nightmare se baahir nikal sakta hu aur sach mein mar sakta hu.

*Thump-Thump*

Vansh hanfte huwe bhaag raha tha. Usne peeche daikha to Sonia aur Mask wala Vansh ab bhi uske peeche bhaag rahe the. Lekin wo ruka nahi aur ab bhi bhaagta raha.

Vansh: Just a little more...!

Vansh ne saamne daikha to usko ek badi window dikh gayi. Vansh ab tezi se uski taraf bhaagne laga aur window ke paas ate he kud gaya.

*CRASH*

*SHATTER!*

Vansh window todte huwe baahir nikal aya seeshe ke pieces uske chehre mein ghus rahe the aur uske shareer per bohat se cut lag rahe the.

*Bam*

*Crack*

Vansh (Groan): Ughhhh!

Vansh abhi third floor se neeche gira tha. Uske paas abhi uski player abilities nahi thi to uski body bohat weak thi aur uske pairon ki hadiya bhi toot si gayi thi.

Vansh (Groaning): Finally *Panting* B-Baahir aa he gaya...! *Groaning*

Vansh himmat ker ke mushkil se uske pairon per khada ho gaya aur haatho ka sahara bhi lete huwe aage Gate ki taraf badhne laga. Vansh buri tarha se ladkhada raha tha aur uska shareer bhi kaanp raha tha.


“Vansh”

“Vansh ap ke pairon ko kya huwa hai?”

“Vansh mere bache ye kya ho gaya hai?”

“Vansh Bachao”

“VANSH!!!”

Vansh ko uske peeche se lagatar awaazen aa rahi thi. Lekin usne khud ko bohat mushkil se roka huwa tha aur bina kisi per bhi dhayan diye Gate ki taraf badh raha tha. Usko 884 din ho gaye the ye he sab bardasht karte huwe.

Lekin har baar uske liye ye aur se aur mushkil ho raha tha. Lekin ab ki baar usne baahir nikalne ka nirnay ker liya tha. Uske paas ye aakhiri raasta bacha tha.

“Vansh”

“Vansh”

“Master”

Vansh (Stunned): Huh ...?

Awaazon ke beech mein ek awaaz sun ker Vansh ke kadam udhar he tham gaye. Vansh ki aankhen bhi hairat se fail gayi. Usne ye awaaz bohat samay ke baad suni thi. Usko khud ke kanon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

“Master...Ye ap ko kya huwa hai? Ye itne ghayal kaise ho gye ap?”

Vansh (Shivered): Huh...?

Ek haath Vansh ke chile huwe ghutne per aya aur usko daikhne laga. Vansh ne bheegi huwi aankhon ke saath neeche daikha to usko awaaz ka chehra bhi dikh he gaya.

*Thud*

Vansh seedhe neeche gir gaya. Usko vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

Vansh (Stunned): Flora?

Vansh ke saamne Flora baithi huwi thi. Vansh ko Flora ache se yaad thi. Uski virginity usne Flora ke saath he khoyi thi. Lekin Vansh ke liye Flora usse kayi zyada thi. Flora ne he uska aur Vanshika ka dhayan rakha tha. Flora uski teacher caretaker aur Maa sab thi.

Flora: Ye kya ker rahe ho? Aur kitne ghayal ho gye ap? Uthiye andar chalte hai.

Flora ne Vansh ka haath pakda aur usko dobara se khade ker diya. Vansh sirf usko daikhta he reh gaya aur khada ho gaya.

Vansh (Tearful): Sorry Flor...Huh?

*Slash*

Vansh kuch kehne he wala tha ke ek chaku Flora ke peeche se aur flora ke gale ko kaat gaya.

*Thud*

Flora neeche gir gayi aur uska khoon zameen per failne laga. Vansh ghutnon per gir gaya aur baitha Flora ke bejan shareer ko daikhne laga.

Flora (Whisper): Vansh...A-Ap ne ye kyu kiya?

Vansh (Crying): Main ne kuch bhi nah-

*Stab*

Vansh kuch keh sakta ke usse pehle he uski peeth mein chaku ghuste huwe uske dil mein ghus gaya. Vansh bhi neeche gir gaya aur wo saamne giri huwi Flora ko daikhta raha.

Flora: Ap ne ye kyu kiya? ~

Vansh ki aankhen band hoti gayi aur wo ek baar dobara mar gaya.

Day 885

“Master”

“Master!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Master...Ap ki saza abhi khatam nahi huwi hai... Master...!”

.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
[Abhi ke liye itna he. Ye tha hamara first extra update. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye pasand aya ho ga aur ap aage bhi ye daikhna chaho gye. Ab mile gye next Saturday story per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
 

Gaurav1969

Nobody dies as Virgin. .... Life fucks us all.
637
1,229
123
Extra Update 1
(Last Time)


****
Day 884

“Vansh”

“Vansh!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Vansh”

Vansh ko apne kareeb Sonia ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi aur uske paas hone ka ehsaas bhi ho raha tha. Lekin wo uske bavajud bhi aankhen nahi khol raha tha.

Sonia: Vansh ...Mom Dad ko bura lage ga! Ap kyu mujhe unke saamne sharminda karna chah rahe ho?

*Silence ~*

Sonia (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ap ko bacchon ki tarha he uthana padega...!

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

Vansh ko Sonia ke kadmon ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi aur usko Sonia ke bed ke upar chadhne ka bhi ehsaas ho gaya. Vansh gehri saanse lene laga.

*Thud*

*Slash*

*Bam*

Vansh ne uski aankhen kholi to uske upar Sonia ek chaku pakde khadi huwi thi. Vansh ne usko dhaka dete huwe bistar se gira diya aur tabhi ek taraf se mask lagaye huwa Vansh ka dusra roop chaku liye khada tha.

*Woooosh*

*Thud*

Mask wale Vansh ne chaku se vaar kiya to Vansh uchalte huwe peeche ho gaya aur usne dodge ker liya. Bina kuch bhi kahe ya aur daikhe Vansh kamre ke darwaze ki taraf bhaga aur usko kholte huwe baahir nikal gaya.

*Thud*

*Thud*

*Thud*

“Vansh”

“Ye kya ker rahe ho Vansh?”

“Vansh beta ruko”

Vansh ne bhaagte huwe he sidhiyon se neeche ki taraf daikha to uska pura parivar usko neeche khada daikh raha tha. Lekin Vansh unko daikh ker bhi ruka nahi aur upar he bhaagta raha.

Vansh (Panting): A-Ab aur nahi ...Ab aur dhokhe mein nahi rahu ga. Ye sab jhoot hai. Yanha se nikalte he main iss nightmare se baahir nikal sakta hu aur sach mein mar sakta hu.

*Thump-Thump*

Vansh hanfte huwe bhaag raha tha. Usne peeche daikha to Sonia aur Mask wala Vansh ab bhi uske peeche bhaag rahe the. Lekin wo ruka nahi aur ab bhi bhaagta raha.

Vansh: Just a little more...!

Vansh ne saamne daikha to usko ek badi window dikh gayi. Vansh ab tezi se uski taraf bhaagne laga aur window ke paas ate he kud gaya.

*CRASH*

*SHATTER!*

Vansh window todte huwe baahir nikal aya seeshe ke pieces uske chehre mein ghus rahe the aur uske shareer per bohat se cut lag rahe the.

*Bam*

*Crack*

Vansh (Groan): Ughhhh!

Vansh abhi third floor se neeche gira tha. Uske paas abhi uski player abilities nahi thi to uski body bohat weak thi aur uske pairon ki hadiya bhi toot si gayi thi.

Vansh (Groaning): Finally *Panting* B-Baahir aa he gaya...! *Groaning*

Vansh himmat ker ke mushkil se uske pairon per khada ho gaya aur haatho ka sahara bhi lete huwe aage Gate ki taraf badhne laga. Vansh buri tarha se ladkhada raha tha aur uska shareer bhi kaanp raha tha.


“Vansh”

“Vansh ap ke pairon ko kya huwa hai?”

“Vansh mere bache ye kya ho gaya hai?”

“Vansh Bachao”

“VANSH!!!”

Vansh ko uske peeche se lagatar awaazen aa rahi thi. Lekin usne khud ko bohat mushkil se roka huwa tha aur bina kisi per bhi dhayan diye Gate ki taraf badh raha tha. Usko 884 din ho gaye the ye he sab bardasht karte huwe.

Lekin har baar uske liye ye aur se aur mushkil ho raha tha. Lekin ab ki baar usne baahir nikalne ka nirnay ker liya tha. Uske paas ye aakhiri raasta bacha tha.

“Vansh”

“Vansh”

“Master”

Vansh (Stunned): Huh ...?

Awaazon ke beech mein ek awaaz sun ker Vansh ke kadam udhar he tham gaye. Vansh ki aankhen bhi hairat se fail gayi. Usne ye awaaz bohat samay ke baad suni thi. Usko khud ke kanon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

“Master...Ye ap ko kya huwa hai? Ye itne ghayal kaise ho gye ap?”

Vansh (Shivered): Huh...?

Ek haath Vansh ke chile huwe ghutne per aya aur usko daikhne laga. Vansh ne bheegi huwi aankhon ke saath neeche daikha to usko awaaz ka chehra bhi dikh he gaya.

*Thud*

Vansh seedhe neeche gir gaya. Usko vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

Vansh (Stunned): Flora?

Vansh ke saamne Flora baithi huwi thi. Vansh ko Flora ache se yaad thi. Uski virginity usne Flora ke saath he khoyi thi. Lekin Vansh ke liye Flora usse kayi zyada thi. Flora ne he uska aur Vanshika ka dhayan rakha tha. Flora uski teacher caretaker aur Maa sab thi.

Flora: Ye kya ker rahe ho? Aur kitne ghayal ho gye ap? Uthiye andar chalte hai.

Flora ne Vansh ka haath pakda aur usko dobara se khade ker diya. Vansh sirf usko daikhta he reh gaya aur khada ho gaya.

Vansh (Tearful): Sorry Flor...Huh?

*Slash*

Vansh kuch kehne he wala tha ke ek chaku Flora ke peeche se aur flora ke gale ko kaat gaya.

*Thud*

Flora neeche gir gayi aur uska khoon zameen per failne laga. Vansh ghutnon per gir gaya aur baitha Flora ke bejan shareer ko daikhne laga.

Flora (Whisper): Vansh...A-Ap ne ye kyu kiya?

Vansh (Crying): Main ne kuch bhi nah-

*Stab*

Vansh kuch keh sakta ke usse pehle he uski peeth mein chaku ghuste huwe uske dil mein ghus gaya. Vansh bhi neeche gir gaya aur wo saamne giri huwi Flora ko daikhta raha.

Flora: Ap ne ye kyu kiya? ~

Vansh ki aankhen band hoti gayi aur wo ek baar dobara mar gaya.

Day 885

“Master”

“Master!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Master...Ap ki saza abhi khatam nahi huwi hai... Master...!”

.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
[Abhi ke liye itna he. Ye tha hamara first extra update. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye pasand aya ho ga aur ap aage bhi ye daikhna chaho gye. Ab mile gye next Saturday story per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
Extra mein hi maza hai 👌. Vansh abhi tak illusion mein bandha hua hai aarav ne jaisa bola tha prison mein jane se pehle wo kar ke dikha diya ab aisa lagne laga hai .vansh is literally crying for death but usko ye bhi nasib nahi hai . Reality mein vansh ki body ko kahan rakha gya hai ?.
884 din illusion mein mar chuka hai wo 😐.may his soul rest in hell
 
  • Like
Reactions: Vky01

RAAZ

Well-Known Member
2,433
6,426
158
Hey everyone :wavey:

This is my second thread on this forum. Instead of a new story, I’m starting a thread for extra update related to my ongoing story, Vengeance ~ Revenge is Sweet.

What are extra updates?

Extra updates are bonus parts of the story that don’t affect the main plot. You can skip them if you want! Think of them like filler updates in anime.

Why make extra updates?

Some readers have asked for scenes that don’t fit into the main story, so I’ll post them here. If you’re interested in these extras, make sure to read the main story first! If you haven’t started the main story yet, don’t read these extras—they might spoil things!


Important Points


1. Extra updates aren’t the main story. They might be a little different, and the characters could act a bit silly.


2. No fixed schedule. Extras will be posted randomly whenever I get the chance.


3. Open discussion here. You can talk about less important details from the story so the main thread stays focused on meaningful reviews.


4. Just for fun! Don’t take the extras too seriously. These updates are meant to be fun and entertaining, so just relax and have a good time reading them.


PS:- I hope you all have fun with these bonus scenes :ciao:
Nice and new thing on the forum. Maza aayega isme bhi aur koi time limit nahi jab dil kia tab post kia ya kuch alag se dekhnaa hua jo ki story me fit nahi Beth Raha thaa magar story se related thaa to usko yaha discuss ya present kia jaa sakta hai.
 

Akil

Well-Known Member
3,107
8,506
158
Extra Update 1
(Last Time)


****
Day 884

“Vansh”

“Vansh!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Vansh”

Vansh ko apne kareeb Sonia ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi aur uske paas hone ka ehsaas bhi ho raha tha. Lekin wo uske bavajud bhi aankhen nahi khol raha tha.

Sonia: Vansh ...Mom Dad ko bura lage ga! Ap kyu mujhe unke saamne sharminda karna chah rahe ho?

*Silence ~*

Sonia (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ap ko bacchon ki tarha he uthana padega...!

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

Vansh ko Sonia ke kadmon ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi aur usko Sonia ke bed ke upar chadhne ka bhi ehsaas ho gaya. Vansh gehri saanse lene laga.

*Thud*

*Slash*

*Bam*

Vansh ne uski aankhen kholi to uske upar Sonia ek chaku pakde khadi huwi thi. Vansh ne usko dhaka dete huwe bistar se gira diya aur tabhi ek taraf se mask lagaye huwa Vansh ka dusra roop chaku liye khada tha.

*Woooosh*

*Thud*

Mask wale Vansh ne chaku se vaar kiya to Vansh uchalte huwe peeche ho gaya aur usne dodge ker liya. Bina kuch bhi kahe ya aur daikhe Vansh kamre ke darwaze ki taraf bhaga aur usko kholte huwe baahir nikal gaya.

*Thud*

*Thud*

*Thud*

“Vansh”

“Ye kya ker rahe ho Vansh?”

“Vansh beta ruko”

Vansh ne bhaagte huwe he sidhiyon se neeche ki taraf daikha to uska pura parivar usko neeche khada daikh raha tha. Lekin Vansh unko daikh ker bhi ruka nahi aur upar he bhaagta raha.

Vansh (Panting): A-Ab aur nahi ...Ab aur dhokhe mein nahi rahu ga. Ye sab jhoot hai. Yanha se nikalte he main iss nightmare se baahir nikal sakta hu aur sach mein mar sakta hu.

*Thump-Thump*

Vansh hanfte huwe bhaag raha tha. Usne peeche daikha to Sonia aur Mask wala Vansh ab bhi uske peeche bhaag rahe the. Lekin wo ruka nahi aur ab bhi bhaagta raha.

Vansh: Just a little more...!

Vansh ne saamne daikha to usko ek badi window dikh gayi. Vansh ab tezi se uski taraf bhaagne laga aur window ke paas ate he kud gaya.

*CRASH*

*SHATTER!*

Vansh window todte huwe baahir nikal aya seeshe ke pieces uske chehre mein ghus rahe the aur uske shareer per bohat se cut lag rahe the.

*Bam*

*Crack*

Vansh (Groan): Ughhhh!

Vansh abhi third floor se neeche gira tha. Uske paas abhi uski player abilities nahi thi to uski body bohat weak thi aur uske pairon ki hadiya bhi toot si gayi thi.

Vansh (Groaning): Finally *Panting* B-Baahir aa he gaya...! *Groaning*

Vansh himmat ker ke mushkil se uske pairon per khada ho gaya aur haatho ka sahara bhi lete huwe aage Gate ki taraf badhne laga. Vansh buri tarha se ladkhada raha tha aur uska shareer bhi kaanp raha tha.


“Vansh”

“Vansh ap ke pairon ko kya huwa hai?”

“Vansh mere bache ye kya ho gaya hai?”

“Vansh Bachao”

“VANSH!!!”

Vansh ko uske peeche se lagatar awaazen aa rahi thi. Lekin usne khud ko bohat mushkil se roka huwa tha aur bina kisi per bhi dhayan diye Gate ki taraf badh raha tha. Usko 884 din ho gaye the ye he sab bardasht karte huwe.

Lekin har baar uske liye ye aur se aur mushkil ho raha tha. Lekin ab ki baar usne baahir nikalne ka nirnay ker liya tha. Uske paas ye aakhiri raasta bacha tha.

“Vansh”

“Vansh”

“Master”

Vansh (Stunned): Huh ...?

Awaazon ke beech mein ek awaaz sun ker Vansh ke kadam udhar he tham gaye. Vansh ki aankhen bhi hairat se fail gayi. Usne ye awaaz bohat samay ke baad suni thi. Usko khud ke kanon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

“Master...Ye ap ko kya huwa hai? Ye itne ghayal kaise ho gye ap?”

Vansh (Shivered): Huh...?

Ek haath Vansh ke chile huwe ghutne per aya aur usko daikhne laga. Vansh ne bheegi huwi aankhon ke saath neeche daikha to usko awaaz ka chehra bhi dikh he gaya.

*Thud*

Vansh seedhe neeche gir gaya. Usko vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

Vansh (Stunned): Flora?

Vansh ke saamne Flora baithi huwi thi. Vansh ko Flora ache se yaad thi. Uski virginity usne Flora ke saath he khoyi thi. Lekin Vansh ke liye Flora usse kayi zyada thi. Flora ne he uska aur Vanshika ka dhayan rakha tha. Flora uski teacher caretaker aur Maa sab thi.

Flora: Ye kya ker rahe ho? Aur kitne ghayal ho gye ap? Uthiye andar chalte hai.

Flora ne Vansh ka haath pakda aur usko dobara se khade ker diya. Vansh sirf usko daikhta he reh gaya aur khada ho gaya.

Vansh (Tearful): Sorry Flor...Huh?

*Slash*

Vansh kuch kehne he wala tha ke ek chaku Flora ke peeche se aur flora ke gale ko kaat gaya.

*Thud*

Flora neeche gir gayi aur uska khoon zameen per failne laga. Vansh ghutnon per gir gaya aur baitha Flora ke bejan shareer ko daikhne laga.

Flora (Whisper): Vansh...A-Ap ne ye kyu kiya?

Vansh (Crying): Main ne kuch bhi nah-

*Stab*

Vansh kuch keh sakta ke usse pehle he uski peeth mein chaku ghuste huwe uske dil mein ghus gaya. Vansh bhi neeche gir gaya aur wo saamne giri huwi Flora ko daikhta raha.

Flora: Ap ne ye kyu kiya? ~

Vansh ki aankhen band hoti gayi aur wo ek baar dobara mar gaya.

Day 885

“Master”

“Master!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Master...Ap ki saza abhi khatam nahi huwi hai... Master...!”

.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
[Abhi ke liye itna he. Ye tha hamara first extra update. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye pasand aya ho ga aur ap aage bhi ye daikhna chaho gye. Ab mile gye next Saturday story per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
Mast hai re baba.....
 

Jitu0786

Bhai RJ13 WALA
232
238
43
Extra Update 1
(Last Time)


****
Day 884

“Vansh”

“Vansh!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Vansh”

Vansh ko apne kareeb Sonia ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi aur uske paas hone ka ehsaas bhi ho raha tha. Lekin wo uske bavajud bhi aankhen nahi khol raha tha.

Sonia: Vansh ...Mom Dad ko bura lage ga! Ap kyu mujhe unke saamne sharminda karna chah rahe ho?

*Silence ~*

Sonia (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ap ko bacchon ki tarha he uthana padega...!

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

Vansh ko Sonia ke kadmon ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi aur usko Sonia ke bed ke upar chadhne ka bhi ehsaas ho gaya. Vansh gehri saanse lene laga.

*Thud*

*Slash*

*Bam*

Vansh ne uski aankhen kholi to uske upar Sonia ek chaku pakde khadi huwi thi. Vansh ne usko dhaka dete huwe bistar se gira diya aur tabhi ek taraf se mask lagaye huwa Vansh ka dusra roop chaku liye khada tha.

*Woooosh*

*Thud*

Mask wale Vansh ne chaku se vaar kiya to Vansh uchalte huwe peeche ho gaya aur usne dodge ker liya. Bina kuch bhi kahe ya aur daikhe Vansh kamre ke darwaze ki taraf bhaga aur usko kholte huwe baahir nikal gaya.

*Thud*

*Thud*

*Thud*

“Vansh”

“Ye kya ker rahe ho Vansh?”

“Vansh beta ruko”

Vansh ne bhaagte huwe he sidhiyon se neeche ki taraf daikha to uska pura parivar usko neeche khada daikh raha tha. Lekin Vansh unko daikh ker bhi ruka nahi aur upar he bhaagta raha.

Vansh (Panting): A-Ab aur nahi ...Ab aur dhokhe mein nahi rahu ga. Ye sab jhoot hai. Yanha se nikalte he main iss nightmare se baahir nikal sakta hu aur sach mein mar sakta hu.

*Thump-Thump*

Vansh hanfte huwe bhaag raha tha. Usne peeche daikha to Sonia aur Mask wala Vansh ab bhi uske peeche bhaag rahe the. Lekin wo ruka nahi aur ab bhi bhaagta raha.

Vansh: Just a little more...!

Vansh ne saamne daikha to usko ek badi window dikh gayi. Vansh ab tezi se uski taraf bhaagne laga aur window ke paas ate he kud gaya.

*CRASH*

*SHATTER!*

Vansh window todte huwe baahir nikal aya seeshe ke pieces uske chehre mein ghus rahe the aur uske shareer per bohat se cut lag rahe the.

*Bam*

*Crack*

Vansh (Groan): Ughhhh!

Vansh abhi third floor se neeche gira tha. Uske paas abhi uski player abilities nahi thi to uski body bohat weak thi aur uske pairon ki hadiya bhi toot si gayi thi.

Vansh (Groaning): Finally *Panting* B-Baahir aa he gaya...! *Groaning*

Vansh himmat ker ke mushkil se uske pairon per khada ho gaya aur haatho ka sahara bhi lete huwe aage Gate ki taraf badhne laga. Vansh buri tarha se ladkhada raha tha aur uska shareer bhi kaanp raha tha.


“Vansh”

“Vansh ap ke pairon ko kya huwa hai?”

“Vansh mere bache ye kya ho gaya hai?”

“Vansh Bachao”

“VANSH!!!”

Vansh ko uske peeche se lagatar awaazen aa rahi thi. Lekin usne khud ko bohat mushkil se roka huwa tha aur bina kisi per bhi dhayan diye Gate ki taraf badh raha tha. Usko 884 din ho gaye the ye he sab bardasht karte huwe.

Lekin har baar uske liye ye aur se aur mushkil ho raha tha. Lekin ab ki baar usne baahir nikalne ka nirnay ker liya tha. Uske paas ye aakhiri raasta bacha tha.

“Vansh”

“Vansh”

“Master”

Vansh (Stunned): Huh ...?

Awaazon ke beech mein ek awaaz sun ker Vansh ke kadam udhar he tham gaye. Vansh ki aankhen bhi hairat se fail gayi. Usne ye awaaz bohat samay ke baad suni thi. Usko khud ke kanon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

“Master...Ye ap ko kya huwa hai? Ye itne ghayal kaise ho gye ap?”

Vansh (Shivered): Huh...?

Ek haath Vansh ke chile huwe ghutne per aya aur usko daikhne laga. Vansh ne bheegi huwi aankhon ke saath neeche daikha to usko awaaz ka chehra bhi dikh he gaya.

*Thud*

Vansh seedhe neeche gir gaya. Usko vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

Vansh (Stunned): Flora?

Vansh ke saamne Flora baithi huwi thi. Vansh ko Flora ache se yaad thi. Uski virginity usne Flora ke saath he khoyi thi. Lekin Vansh ke liye Flora usse kayi zyada thi. Flora ne he uska aur Vanshika ka dhayan rakha tha. Flora uski teacher caretaker aur Maa sab thi.

Flora: Ye kya ker rahe ho? Aur kitne ghayal ho gye ap? Uthiye andar chalte hai.

Flora ne Vansh ka haath pakda aur usko dobara se khade ker diya. Vansh sirf usko daikhta he reh gaya aur khada ho gaya.

Vansh (Tearful): Sorry Flor...Huh?

*Slash*

Vansh kuch kehne he wala tha ke ek chaku Flora ke peeche se aur flora ke gale ko kaat gaya.

*Thud*

Flora neeche gir gayi aur uska khoon zameen per failne laga. Vansh ghutnon per gir gaya aur baitha Flora ke bejan shareer ko daikhne laga.

Flora (Whisper): Vansh...A-Ap ne ye kyu kiya?

Vansh (Crying): Main ne kuch bhi nah-

*Stab*

Vansh kuch keh sakta ke usse pehle he uski peeth mein chaku ghuste huwe uske dil mein ghus gaya. Vansh bhi neeche gir gaya aur wo saamne giri huwi Flora ko daikhta raha.

Flora: Ap ne ye kyu kiya? ~

Vansh ki aankhen band hoti gayi aur wo ek baar dobara mar gaya.

Day 885

“Master”

“Master!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Master...Ap ki saza abhi khatam nahi huwi hai... Master...!”

.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
[Abhi ke liye itna he. Ye tha hamara first extra update. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye pasand aya ho ga aur ap aage bhi ye daikhna chaho gye. Ab mile gye next Saturday story per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
Very nice update
 

☣️Alpha_werewolf☣️

I am "Dream writer"👑
131
185
44
Mast extra update tha ....par is topic ko "Lucifer series " ka hell ka wala seen copy kiye hai.. bro..
 

Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
Prime
1,829
19,313
144
Mast extra update tha ....par is topic ko "Lucifer series " ka hell ka wala seen copy kiye hai.. bro..
It's a similar concept, but it's not a direct copy or anything like that :nope:

I couldn't avoid using it just because there was something similar. It was an idea that fit perfectly with my story, so I went with it :dazed:

It doesn't matter if there's something alike. Honestly, I didn't even remember that scene :dontknow:
 
Last edited:

Ng21G

Member
227
231
43
Extra Update 1
(Last Time)


****
Day 884

“Vansh”

“Vansh!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Vansh”

Vansh ko apne kareeb Sonia ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi aur uske paas hone ka ehsaas bhi ho raha tha. Lekin wo uske bavajud bhi aankhen nahi khol raha tha.

Sonia: Vansh ...Mom Dad ko bura lage ga! Ap kyu mujhe unke saamne sharminda karna chah rahe ho?

*Silence ~*

Sonia (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ap ko bacchon ki tarha he uthana padega...!

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

Vansh ko Sonia ke kadmon ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi aur usko Sonia ke bed ke upar chadhne ka bhi ehsaas ho gaya. Vansh gehri saanse lene laga.

*Thud*

*Slash*

*Bam*

Vansh ne uski aankhen kholi to uske upar Sonia ek chaku pakde khadi huwi thi. Vansh ne usko dhaka dete huwe bistar se gira diya aur tabhi ek taraf se mask lagaye huwa Vansh ka dusra roop chaku liye khada tha.

*Woooosh*

*Thud*

Mask wale Vansh ne chaku se vaar kiya to Vansh uchalte huwe peeche ho gaya aur usne dodge ker liya. Bina kuch bhi kahe ya aur daikhe Vansh kamre ke darwaze ki taraf bhaga aur usko kholte huwe baahir nikal gaya.

*Thud*

*Thud*

*Thud*

“Vansh”

“Ye kya ker rahe ho Vansh?”

“Vansh beta ruko”

Vansh ne bhaagte huwe he sidhiyon se neeche ki taraf daikha to uska pura parivar usko neeche khada daikh raha tha. Lekin Vansh unko daikh ker bhi ruka nahi aur upar he bhaagta raha.

Vansh (Panting): A-Ab aur nahi ...Ab aur dhokhe mein nahi rahu ga. Ye sab jhoot hai. Yanha se nikalte he main iss nightmare se baahir nikal sakta hu aur sach mein mar sakta hu.

*Thump-Thump*

Vansh hanfte huwe bhaag raha tha. Usne peeche daikha to Sonia aur Mask wala Vansh ab bhi uske peeche bhaag rahe the. Lekin wo ruka nahi aur ab bhi bhaagta raha.

Vansh: Just a little more...!

Vansh ne saamne daikha to usko ek badi window dikh gayi. Vansh ab tezi se uski taraf bhaagne laga aur window ke paas ate he kud gaya.

*CRASH*

*SHATTER!*

Vansh window todte huwe baahir nikal aya seeshe ke pieces uske chehre mein ghus rahe the aur uske shareer per bohat se cut lag rahe the.

*Bam*

*Crack*

Vansh (Groan): Ughhhh!

Vansh abhi third floor se neeche gira tha. Uske paas abhi uski player abilities nahi thi to uski body bohat weak thi aur uske pairon ki hadiya bhi toot si gayi thi.

Vansh (Groaning): Finally *Panting* B-Baahir aa he gaya...! *Groaning*

Vansh himmat ker ke mushkil se uske pairon per khada ho gaya aur haatho ka sahara bhi lete huwe aage Gate ki taraf badhne laga. Vansh buri tarha se ladkhada raha tha aur uska shareer bhi kaanp raha tha.


“Vansh”

“Vansh ap ke pairon ko kya huwa hai?”

“Vansh mere bache ye kya ho gaya hai?”

“Vansh Bachao”

“VANSH!!!”

Vansh ko uske peeche se lagatar awaazen aa rahi thi. Lekin usne khud ko bohat mushkil se roka huwa tha aur bina kisi per bhi dhayan diye Gate ki taraf badh raha tha. Usko 884 din ho gaye the ye he sab bardasht karte huwe.

Lekin har baar uske liye ye aur se aur mushkil ho raha tha. Lekin ab ki baar usne baahir nikalne ka nirnay ker liya tha. Uske paas ye aakhiri raasta bacha tha.

“Vansh”

“Vansh”

“Master”

Vansh (Stunned): Huh ...?

Awaazon ke beech mein ek awaaz sun ker Vansh ke kadam udhar he tham gaye. Vansh ki aankhen bhi hairat se fail gayi. Usne ye awaaz bohat samay ke baad suni thi. Usko khud ke kanon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

“Master...Ye ap ko kya huwa hai? Ye itne ghayal kaise ho gye ap?”

Vansh (Shivered): Huh...?

Ek haath Vansh ke chile huwe ghutne per aya aur usko daikhne laga. Vansh ne bheegi huwi aankhon ke saath neeche daikha to usko awaaz ka chehra bhi dikh he gaya.

*Thud*

Vansh seedhe neeche gir gaya. Usko vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

Vansh (Stunned): Flora?

Vansh ke saamne Flora baithi huwi thi. Vansh ko Flora ache se yaad thi. Uski virginity usne Flora ke saath he khoyi thi. Lekin Vansh ke liye Flora usse kayi zyada thi. Flora ne he uska aur Vanshika ka dhayan rakha tha. Flora uski teacher caretaker aur Maa sab thi.

Flora: Ye kya ker rahe ho? Aur kitne ghayal ho gye ap? Uthiye andar chalte hai.

Flora ne Vansh ka haath pakda aur usko dobara se khade ker diya. Vansh sirf usko daikhta he reh gaya aur khada ho gaya.

Vansh (Tearful): Sorry Flor...Huh?

*Slash*

Vansh kuch kehne he wala tha ke ek chaku Flora ke peeche se aur flora ke gale ko kaat gaya.

*Thud*

Flora neeche gir gayi aur uska khoon zameen per failne laga. Vansh ghutnon per gir gaya aur baitha Flora ke bejan shareer ko daikhne laga.

Flora (Whisper): Vansh...A-Ap ne ye kyu kiya?

Vansh (Crying): Main ne kuch bhi nah-

*Stab*

Vansh kuch keh sakta ke usse pehle he uski peeth mein chaku ghuste huwe uske dil mein ghus gaya. Vansh bhi neeche gir gaya aur wo saamne giri huwi Flora ko daikhta raha.

Flora: Ap ne ye kyu kiya? ~

Vansh ki aankhen band hoti gayi aur wo ek baar dobara mar gaya.

Day 885

“Master”

“Master!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Master...Ap ki saza abhi khatam nahi huwi hai... Master...!”

.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
[Abhi ke liye itna he. Ye tha hamara first extra update. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye pasand aya ho ga aur ap aage bhi ye daikhna chaho gye. Ab mile gye next Saturday story per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
Nice 👍👍👍👍
 

Shanu

Deadman786
6,094
16,899
188
Very nice update bhai ☺️ 😊
 
Top