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Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

sethi

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kal deta hun guyzz

Aapki shadi hone jaa rahi.hai. Aap apni zindagi ke naye pehlu me kadam rakhne jaa rahe hain.

Ek baat yaad rakhna, hum sab bhi aapke well-wishers hain aur aapke behad acchi stories ke diehard followers hain. Agar aapke zindagi ke nai pehlu me kadam rakhne ke baad agar aapko samay ki paabandi ho jati hai aur aap apni story likhne ke liye samay nahin nikal sakte hain to kripya kam se kam jo bhi stories chalu ki hain woh pura karna, bhale shortcut me hi sahi.

Abhi abhi ek aur story likhne wale ne apni story bund ki hai aur koi reason nahin diya. Yeh Xossip pe over 7 saal chali aur phir writer ne raato raat aadhe me bund kar diya. Story me bahut sare loose ends the aur usse complete karne ke liye bahut sara samay lagne wala tha. Kai logon ne usse complete karne ki koshish ki lekin koi story ke business ke pehlu ko pakad liya aur kisi dusre ne koi aur pehlu, aur usse ek aad mahine me khatam karne me lag gaye. Logon ko pasand nahin aiya aur unnhe discourage karke bhaga diya.

Pichle saal koi isse forum par aiya aur us story me thoda sa changes karke phir se likhne laga. Likhawat theek thi lekin kai jagah ek tarah se repetitive ho gai aur aage badne ke bajay ek hi jagah par stagnant ho gai.

Main sooch hi raha tha ke usko likhun ke story ko repetitive mode se nikal ke aage le jaye aur jald hi khatam kar le quon ke muje laga shayad usse samaj nahin aah raha hai ke story aage kaise le jaye. Lekin - no surprise - aaj ek moderator ne post kiya ke writer ne story bund kar di hai aur koi message bhi nahin kar sakta hai.

Aap ke stories acche hain aur woh problem yahan nahin dikh raha hai. Lekin agar aapko time ki pabandi mehsoos ho to story ko chahe shortcut me pura kar lena lekin aadhe me aur bahut sare loose ends ke sath nahin chodna. Agar aapko lage ke samay ki paabandi ho sakhti hai to story ko jaldi khatam kar lena aur agar baadme aapko lage ke aap samay de sakte hain to story ka second part ya new story shuru kar lena. Ho sake to aap achi achi stories post karte rehna quon ke aapki stories acchi hain aur bahut log pasand karte hain.
 
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Rajesh

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ROUNAK DHOLAKIA SANVY SE NIPATNE SE PEHLE APNE FRIEND KO DIMPLE KA BIODATA NIKAALNE KE LIYE BOLTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ANJALI,NITS AUR SONU KO REALIZE HOTA HAI KI SANVY DIMPLE KO LIKE KARTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-1

(THE ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)


UPDATE-39

15TH APRIL


CITY-DEHRADUN

PLACE-SIRIUS





OHHO BHAIJI...AAJ TOH CHAA GAYA LOUNDA APNA...AKELE HI FAAD KAR RAKH DI TUNE A WAALON KI..


friendly match ke baad ek chair me baith apne pads nikaal rahe ROHAN ko side se hug karte hue bada khush dikh raha tha NEERAJ..

NEERAJ hi kya,pura B khema behadh khush tha aaj...

A section waalon ko aaj ka cricket match haraya jo tha unhone ya phir ye kahun ki one man show ROHAN ne...

ROHAN...

Australia me apne mom dad ke saath lagbhag 1 mahine lamba holiday tour bitaane ke baad finally aaj jab school ka new summer session shuru hue do hafte guzar chuke the,aaya tha ROHAN..

waise aaj kyunki saturday hai,aana nahi chaiye tha usse but kal shaam usse aajke friendly match ke baare me pata chala aur isiliye hi ROHAN aaj school me present tha..

aur uski ye presence vardaan saabit hui uski class ke liye..

toss jeetkar SAM ne A section ke liye batting chuni thi...

but first ball me hi strike par khade opener ne apni gilli udwali thi..

but woh pehli wicket aakhri saabit hui..

first down par aaya NITS jisne SAM ke saath milkar match ke pure 15 overs creeze par nikaal diye...

in 15 overs me SAM ke exact 100,NITS ke 88 aur kul 11 extras ki madad se A waalon ne banaye the 199...

200 ka total mila tha B waalon ko jiska picha karte hue pehle 4 overs me hi unke 5 wickets gir gaye the..

but ek taraf se ROHAN naa sirf tika hua tha balki apne hisse me aaye 13 gendo me 40 runs pel diye the usne aur uska ye form match ke aakhri ball tak jaari raha...

aakhri ball par B waalon ko jeetne ke liye 4 runs chahiye the jo pure hue ROHAN dwara maare ek picture perfect cover drive ke through...

us chownke ki madad se naa sirf ROHAN ne apni team,apni class ko jeeta diya tha balki 200 ke chase me apne bhi nabaad 140 runs pure kiye..

hence,the one man show...


BHAVESH-bhai aaj toh party dega tu..!!!

ROHAN-saalon match maine jitaya hai aur party bhi mai hi dun...

HEY MAN,WELL PLAYED....


ROHAN ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi ek feminine awaaz padi uske aur baaki bando ke kaano me..

aur jisne ye appreciation di thi,usse dekh jahan ek taraf baaki B waale halka piche hote hue ekdum chup ho gaye the wahin dusri taraf khamosh toh ROHAN bhi hua tha but uske chuppi ki wajah uske aankhon ke saamne khadi woh bemisaal khubsoorati thi jaisi naa dekhi thi uski nazaron ne pehle kabhi...

woh ektak apne saamne khadi ladki ko dekh raha tha jispar..


koi compliment kare toh normally thanks bolte hain..by the way i am DIMPLE...

ROHAN-RROHAN.....


halka hadbadane ke baad khud ko control kiya tha ROHAN ne..


DIMPLE-tumhe naam bataane ki zaroorat nahi hai..

tumhare batting ke waqt lagbhag har stands se tumhare naam ka hi chant ho raha tha...

aur hona bhi chahiye...that was quite a display of batsmanship...

ROHAN-thanks..are you new...???

DIMPLE-haan...

ROHAN-which class...!!!

AA RAHA HUN BE.....!!!!!


ROHAN ke sawal ka jawab deti new girl ke tabhi uske baaju se nikalte hue door khade ek bande ko zor se kahi thi maine ye baat jispar DIMPLE bhi hadbada gayi..

bola jo itne zor se tha maine..

turant palti woh piche aur mujhe piche se jaata dekh bhadak gayi woh..


DIMPLE-hey you.... baat karne ka koi tarika hai bhi ya nahi.. mere kaan ke paas aakar chillaana zaroori tha...

MAI-pehli baat toh mai baat nahi kar raha tha, announcement kar raha tha...

dusri baat mere mooh ke paas tumhara kaan tha toh mai kya karun...!!!

DIMPLE-announcement...kis chiz ki...!!!

MAI-apne wahan tak jaane ki..by the way,tum kyun interested ho...!!

DIMPLE-mai aur tumhare maamlon me interest...!!!get i life dude...

MAI-kaun si dukaan me milti hai life bata do...i will get it..

DIMPLE-you....!!!just buzz off...

MAI-ab toh nahi jaa raha mai kahin...!!!aur ROHAN,kya haal chaal.. waise badhiya khela aaj tu...


apne dono haath taayi kar relax hone ke andaz me khada ho chuka tha mai..

wahin ROHAN jisse mere aur new girl ke beech ho rahi jhadap ke dauran bata diya tha uske friends ne ki A section se hai woh aur ye sun us new girl ke liye jo ashlil feelings paida ho rahi thi uske andar,unhone theek se ufaan maarne se pehle hi dum tod diya tha..

aur tabhi ki maine uski taarif jisse sun hadbada gaya tha woh...


ROHAN-tthanks man...tu nahi khela aaj...

DIMPLE-ye...bat pakadna bhi aata hai isse..

MAI-actually mai stumps se batting karta hun..any problem...!!!

DIMPLE-agar mujhe problem hui hoti toh tum ab tak dikhayi dena band ho chuke hote...

MAI-wooo...ab tak toh theek se jaana bhi nahi hai tumne mujhe aur itna asar karne lag gaya mai...

door raho new girl...lath GALATH naa laga baithna...


pure convo ke dauran jahan new girl ki aankhein ghusse se ghoor rahi thi mujhe wahin meri aankhon me ek thairav tha..

ek aisa thairav jo new girl ke ghusse ko bin uski ijazat ke dabane laga tha..

aur us aakhri baat ko kehte waqt jab mai halka kareeb hua new girl ke toh aisa laga usse maano khudke upar se apna control chhutne laga ho uska..

aisa kabhi hua nahi tha new girl ke saath aur isiliye ek second ke liye aankhen band kar dimag ko jhatka usne aur..


DIMPLE-ye new girl kya hai...!!! DIMPLE naam hai mera...

MAI-purani toh nahi ho jaati tum usse...you are the new girl...toh waise hi bulaane me kya harz hai...

HEY GUYZZZ... WHAT'S UP...!!!


mere baat se ek baar phirse frustrate ho kuch bolne ko hui thi new girl par tabhi hamare paas se ubhri ye nayi awaaz...

civil dress me ek 6 feet lamba hatta katta aur smart banda tha ye jo apne kuch friends ke saath hamare paas aakar rooka tha...

ROHAN aur uske friends jo halke dar aur confusion ke beech meri aur DIMPLE ki tu tu mai mai dekh rahe the,unka bhi dhyan is naye group ki taraf gaya...


ROHAN-ROUNAK DHOLAKIA....

ROUNAK-you know me...!!!!

ROHAN-junior level state champ ho tum.. ofcourse i know you..


kaafi garm joshi se haath milaya tha ROHAN ne ROUNAK se...


ROUNAK-same baat tumhare liye bhi kahi jaa sakti hai waise...you yourself are quite a famous sportsman aur ab reason bhi pata chal gaya..

bohot achi batting kar lete ho tum...

ROHAN-you saw the match...!!!???

ROUNAK-final glimpses jisme single handedly baazi palat di tumne.....


aakhri baat nazar ko ghumate hue DIMPLE ko dekh kahi thi ROUNAK ne..


ROHAN-waise yahan kaise...???

ROUNAK-is baar interschool boxing championship hamara school host kar raha hai..

tumhari PRINCI ko invite dene ke liye hamari PRINCI ne mujhe kaha tha..

ROHAN-oh..nice...


baaton ke dauran lagatar nazar jaa rahi thi ROUNAK ki DIMPLE par...

aakhir yahan as in ROHAN ke saamne isiliye hi toh aaya tha woh..

ek aur reason bhi tha...mai..

PRINCI ko invite dene ke baad jab idhar ground ki taraf aaya woh toh nazar padh gayi thi uski stands me baithi DIMPLE par...

aur uske saath aaye doston me se do jinki thukayi ki thi pichle hafte maine,unhone mujhe dekh aur pehchaan liya tha..

aur ab jab uski hawas aur ghusse ke dono kaaran ek hi spot par the,toh aise me yahan aana toh uska laazmi hi tha...


ROUNAK-hie..ROUNAK...


in saari baaton ke beech ek baar mujhe ghoorne ke baad palatkar jaane hi lagi thi new girl ki tabhi ROUNAK ne apna haath uski taraf badha diya...


DIMPLE-hello... DIMPLE....


new girl ke naazuk haath ROUNAK ke bade hatheli me jaise chhup se gaye the aur us hatheli ko chhu new girl ke pure jism ko mehsoos kar liya tha ROUNAK ne...

waise toh face smiling aur straight rakha tha usne par chuppi nahi thi uski aankhon ke zariye man me basi gandagi mujhse...

anyways, DIMPLE se hand shake kar meri taraf palta ROUNAK aur..


ROUNAK-hey buddy...tum bhi sportsman ho...!!

DIMPLE-arre pucho mat...super strong...


taunt maara tha new girl ne mujhe jispar dekhne laga mai usko...


ROUNAK-really...tum bhi boxer ho...!!!

HAHAHAHAHA...


meri taraf haath aage badhate hue kahi thi ye baat ROUNAK ne jispar jaise hi usse hand shake kiya maine,apna grip strong karne laga woh..

is beech ROUNAK ke mujhe boxer kehne par hasne ke baad..


DIMPLE-super strong as in mooh chalaane me...


ROUNAK apni hatheli ka grip continous pressure ke saath halka halka badhane laga jispar kaha toh kuch nahi maine par kuch seconds baad apni grip thodi aur dheeli kar di maine..

mere aisa karte hi ek smile naach uthi ROUNAK ke face par..

REASON....

hand shake ke dauran grip loose karna surrender karne jaisa hota hai..

anyways, kuch seconds ke baad grip loose karte hue mera haath release kar diya ROUNAK ne...


ROUNAK-its is really nice meeting you....

MAI-SANVEER... you too..

KYA HO RAHA HAI...????


SAM tha ye jo EKPREET, RAJAT,NITS, SONU ANJALI,RASHI,NAISHA aur KHANAK ke saath hamare paas pahuncha tha...


KHANAK-you are ROUNAK, right...from PRINCE...

ROUNAK-have we met...!!!

KHANAK-i am an ex student...

ROUANK-really..great then..hey guyz...


baari baari sabse haath milaane ke beech apne SIRIUS me aane ka reason bataya ROUNAK ne jiske baad..


ROUNAK-formal invite toh sirf tumhari PRINCI ke liye the but informally,on a personal basis,mai tum sabko invite karta hun,ek nahi do occasions par...

SAM-matlab...!!!

ROUNAK-matlab ek occasion toh boxing meet hua par usse pehle aaj shaam tum sabko VIBE TRIBE(club) aana hoga...

its my birthday and i am throwing a party there...

SAM-happy birthday brother but...

ROUNAK-no no no no no...no buts... dekho yaar,PRINCE aur SIRIUS hamesha rivals ki tarah mile hain...

for a change,friends jam bhi toh hona hi chahiye....what say ROHAN...!!!


A aur B section saath me clubbing aur party karen,its an impossible plan..

ROHAN se naa bolne ke kisi bahane ki ummid kar rahe the A waale...


ROHAN-i dont have a problem...i am in..


ROHAN ki baat sun A waalon ke saath uske friends bhi hairan ho gaye the but kisine kuch kaha nahi..


ROUNAK-great...so guyz,aaoge na tum sab...???

SAM-ok,i guess...


hum sabki aur khaaskar mere taraf dekhte hue jaise permission si maangi thi SAM ne...

SAM hi kya,baaki sab bhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the...

afterall B waale bhi saath hone waale the wahan aur saath hi saath PRINCE waale bhi...

risk waali situation thi aur aise me woh sab trust bhi sirf mere decisions ko karte the siway ek ke...

new girl jisne sabki nazar me mujhe diye authority ko pehchan liya tha, pasand nahi aayi usse ye baat..

no body takes decision on her behalf aur mai toh tha hi uski nazar me ek looser...

waise toh is get together aur party me zara sa bhi interest nahi tha usse but mere chakkar me mood badal gaya uska..


DIMPLE-i am in too..

NAISHA-DIMPLE...!!!!

DIMPLE-what...!!!

MAI-we are going....


new girl aage kuch kehti ki tabhi mere faisle par chup ho bas ghurne lagi woh mujhe...


ROUNAK-awesome...toh phir 7 pm...VIBE TRIBE..dont be late...

KHANAK-ek second guyz...we are underage... entry kaise milegi club me...???

ROUNAK-babes..i own that club...so chill...baa-izzat aur bindaas entry le paaoge tum sab..

ok then,see you there..


ROUNAK aur uske friends nikal chuke aur hn sabke just baad hum sab bhi apni class ki taraf badh chale...


NEERAJ-what the hell ROHAN...!!!un A waalon ke saath clubbing ke liye haan bol diya tune...


itni der se man me chal raha sawal aakhir puch hi liya NEERAJ ne...


ROHAN-correction... clubbing maine PRINCE waalon ke saath karne ke liye haan kaha hai...A waale toh random hain bas...


BHAVESH-par honge toh woh sab bhi wahan... SANVY bhi..bhai, uske saath kya saamne bhi party karna nightmare jaisa hai hamare liye...

ROHAN-SANVY ki tention ab hamari nahi us ROUNAK ki hai..and i think ki woh usse handle bhi kar lega...

aakhir boxing champion hai banda...

BHAVESH-hain..!!!abbe ROUNAK ka SANVY se kya panga jo woh bhidega usse...

ROHAN-panga toh hai.. jaise haath daba raha tha ROUNAK SANVY ka,that was not normal..

and for the first time in my life,maine SANVY ko retaliate karte nahi dekha..guards jaise down se the uske ROUNAK ke aage...

ab asal maamla kya hai,ye toh shaam ko hi pata chalega...

ye opening hai guyzz...un A waalon and most importantly, SANVY ki haalath bigadne ki opening...

NEERAJ-aee bhai..bas involve hone ke liye mat bolna..

chaahe kitna hi dhaansu plan kyun naa ho but agar SANVY involved hai toh i am out..

BHAVESH-tu kya hum sab out hain...

AJAY/AMIT-true...

ROHAN-chill guyz..hume kuch nahi karna..jo karna hai woh PRINCE waale karenge..

woh ROUNAK karega...hum toh spectators hain bas..show enjoy karenge...

NEERAJ-phir theek hai...

ROHAN-alright then..bag toh laaya nahi mai...so sidhe ghar nikal raha... direct shaam ko milte hain,VIBE TRIBE me...




PLACE-VIBE TRIBE




OHHHH...JAB BHI DELHI JAATA HUN TOH CLUBBING KARTA HI HUN BUT APNE HI SHEHER ME ITS GONNA BHI MY FIRST VISIT TO A DISCO THEQUE....


black sneakers,brownish casual trouser,upar black party jacket jiske andar ek jagmagati red tshirt jhaank si rahi thi,pehne VIBE TRIBE ke third floor entrance ke bahar khada bada cool dikh raha tha SAM...

EKPREET aur RAJAT ne bhi kuch kuch SAM ki tarah hi outfit pehna hua tha..

wahin unke saath aayi RASHI aur NAISHA ne ghutno tak aati red aur dark green sparkled sequined party dress pehni thi jisme stunning dikh rahe the dono...

nazar unki bhi apne saamne jagmagati vibe tribe ke board ke taraf hi thi...


VIBE TRIBE....


DEHRADUN CENTRAL AVENUE BLOCK me bani ek teen manzila imaarat jiske ground floor par fast food centre, first floor par restuarant aur dusre floor par bana hua tha ek shaandar disco theque..

bohot popular tha ye club youngsters ke beech...waise toh normally har din rich youth brigades ko bheed lagi rehti thi yahan but saturday aur sunday me yahan hone waale rush ki baat hi kuch aur thi..

cover charge hone ke baawjud 7.30 pm tak pura club jam packed ho jaata tha aur aaj ka nazara bhi koi alag nahi tha...

abhi lagbhagh 7 hi baje the par NO MORE ENTRIES ka board club ke entrance door ke bahar lag chuka tha...


RAJAT-dont be to sure...ho sakta hai aaj bhi pehla visit naa ho paaye...


no more entries waale board ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi thi ye baat RAJAT ne...


NAISHA-hey DIMPLE..wow..now that's a cool casual....


RAJAT ki baat par kuch kehta SAM ki tabhi lift ka gate khula aur entry hui DIMPLE ki aur usse dekh jahan NAISHA ne taarif ki uski,boys ke dil ka haal unki aankhein bayan kar rahi thi jo DIMPLE par atak si gayi thi...

NAISHA aur RASHI se alag casual pants ke upar ek black fitting top pehna hua tha usne and a red leather jacket to go with it..

chehre par behadh halka make up jo us rukhsaar par hamesha dikhne waale noor se sharmshar hokar pehle hi chhup sa gaya tha,gazab ki dikh rahi thi DIMPLE...

VIBE TRIBE ke bheed ka ab tak hissa bhi nahi bani thi woh par personality itni zyada aakarshan se bhari hui thi uski ki"kahan pade ho chakkar me, koi nahi hai takkar me" waala muhavara abhi se hi fit hone laga tha uspar...


RAJAT-this girl is something else man..i mean committed hun mai but still nazar hatana mushkil lagta hai jab aas paas hoti hai ye...

EKPREET-agreed man....


DIMPLE jo boys ko hie karne ke baad NAISHA aur RASHI se baat karne lagi thi, chhup chhup ke usse hi taad rahe the RAJAT,EKPREET aur ye dekh sir shake karte hue has raha tha SAM...


SAM-there you go...abhi aa rahe ho be...


ek baar phir lift open hua jisse bahar nikle mai,NITS,SONU,ANJALI aur KHANAK jiske liye yahan aane ki permission SHILPA AUNTY se har baar ki tarah mujhe hi leni padi thi...


ANJALI-shukr manao,aa gaye..SAN ko dekhne ke baad isse chhodne ko taiyar hi nahi thi SHILPA AUNTY...

NAISHA-koi na chhode aaj isse toh... looking very handsome SANVY...


baaki boys se alag ek simple yet trendy white shirt pehni thi maine with a denim blue jeans to go with it...

NAISHA ke compliment ko EKPREET ne bhi back kiya aur is dauran DIMPLE ne bhi mujhpar ek sarsari nazar daal eye dusri taraf roll kar liya tha...


NITS-sambhal be RAJAT...behek rahi hai bandi teri...

NAISHA-shut up... compliment me bhi faaltu angles hi nikaal tu bas..

NITS-hume toh naa diya tune kabhi koi compliment...

NAISHA-uske liye banana bhi padta hai compliment ke laayak..

MAI-tum logon ko naye bouncers oppoint kiya hai kya club waalon ne...!!!!bahar kyun khade ho...


NITS aur NAISHA ki behes ko mere sawal ne fullstop laga diya tha...


SAM-abbe hum sab bhi abhi abhi hi pahunche hain...

MAI man me-ghante ka champion..chutiya hi rahega saala...yahan hum sabko wait karwakar apni authority aur superiority show kar raha hai woh ROUNAK aur in sabka ganit hi kharab ho rakha hai...


camaras ki taraf halka sa dekhte hue sochi thi maine ye baat jiske baad..


MAI-G.F ka wait naa karun mai kabhi aur idhar chowkidar banaye hua hai woh birthday boy hume..

NAISHA-G.F...!!!ye kab bani....???

MAI-phir wahi baat...jazbaat ko samajh chhori....

hoti toh bhi naa karta mai phir yahan rukne ka sawal hi naa uththa...chala mai...


HEY GUYZZZ..SORRY YAAR THODA LATE HO GAYA...ANDAR SCENE ITNA CAOTIC HAI KI KYA BATAUN...


club ka woh band door khula jisse bahar nikalte hue hamare paas aakar ruka ROUNAK...

par apni baat kehte waqt nazar uski ek pal ke liye DIMPLE par theher hi gayi thi...

kisi tarah apne jazbaat aur pant me bane tambu ko control kiya saale ne...


SAM-no worries man...suna hai humne ki saturday sunday yahan ka mahoul kuch zyada hi crowdy hota hai...

ROUNAK-aur happening bhi.. chalo,time to feel the thrill..


waise ROHAN aur uske saath aaye friends toh pehle hi aa chuke hain..


ek host ki tarah hume guide karta hua club ki taraf badh gaya woh aur hum sab bhi ho liye uske piche..

ab club owner tha woh isiliye STAG aur COUPLE waala chutiyapa bhi nahi hua hamare saath...

bouncers ne humare liye turant entrance door khol diya tha...


ANJALI-waise GALATH nahi thi NAISHA...you are looking hot... infact ,jabse thoda thoda health gain karna shuru kiya hai tune, sexiness badhne lagi hai teri...

and trust me,agar SAM aur us ROHAN ki tarah bulk up ho gaya naa tu toh jaw line aisi hai teri ki puchegi bhi nahi koi bandi un dono ko...

upar se teri aankhein.ufff..ladka hai tu phir bhi natural kajal sa hai teri eyelashes me...

they are like cherry on the cake..


bas darkhwaast itni hai ki jab jama hone lage ladkiyan toh hume naa bhul jaana sanam....


halki flirting tone me chheda tha mujhe ANJALI ne jispar bas smile kar diya maine..

buddies ki tarah ek dusre ke kandhon par haath daal club me enter hue the mai aur ANI...


ANJALI-wow.....!!!!this place is actually happening...!!!


ek retro mix me kareeb 500 se thode zyada youngsters thirak rahe the is waqt disco me...

hamare group waale bhi enter hote saath groove karne lag gaye the..

NITS toh ek naye dance form ko janm deta hua sharir ko ajeebogarib tarah se hila macchli dance karne laga tha jisse dekh sab hasne lage the..


MAI-chutiya hi rahega ye...

ROUNAK-so guyzz..what do you think....!!!


ROUNAK ko follow kar halka halka thirakte hue sab pahunche club ke west edge par bane private room ke paas jo khula hua tha..

ek round gigantic sofa set rakha hua tha us room me aur uske just aage ek big glass table rakha hua tha..

har side me kuch couches bhi pade hue the...

wahin is waqt us private room me PRINCE ke kuch students ke saath B section ke lounde chilled mocktails ka lutf utha apni apni jagah me khade khade naach rahe the..


ROUNAK-so guyzz..floor hit karna hai ya room me chill karoge...!!!

NITS-room ne hi rehna hota toh apna ghar kahan se bura hai..

apan toh floor me hi jaayenge bhai...

RAJAT-true...

ROUNAK-hahaha...ok then... let's hit the floor...

common girls...


girls bol new girl ke baaju me sarak gaya tha ROUNAK...

anyways, hum sab pahunche club ke centre point me jahan sabse zyada bheed thi...

"jisne bhi party hai karni,aa jaao mere ghar ke bheetar"se shuru hote hue apna khud ka mix kiya ek bada hi cool party mash-up baja raha tha D.J jispar thirakne lage hum sab...

SONU waise toh aise saarvjanaik atrangi naach ka hissa banta nahi par aaj mood uska bhi smooth tha..

NITS ke saath dance kam ucchal kood zyada me laga hua tha woh..

wahin mai aur ANJALI apni hi masti me ek dusre ko chidhane waale steps me lage hue the..

the couples,RAJAT aur NAISHA fast beat bajane ke baawjud kisi romantic track par dance karne jaise saath saath hil rahe the..

SAM, EKPREET,KHANAK aur RASHI bhi unke aas paas hi the aur bachi DIMPLE..

mere just opposite meri peeth se halka piche khudme hi halki halki groove kar rahi thi woh..

par is beech jitne bhi loundo ki nazar padi uspar, single ya committed,sabhi lagatar checkout kar rahe the usse...


ROUNAK-i hope you are enjoying...


loud music ki wajah se DIMPLE ke paas aa uske kaano me zor se pucha tha ye sawal ROUNAK ne jispar haan me bas sir hilaya DIMPLE ne...


ROUNAK-well i must say..

DIMPLE-hey..watch for your steps...


ROUNAK ki baat aadhi hi reh gayi kyunki tabhi dance karte hue mera pair tezi se piche jahan new girl ka pair tha, chala gaya...

pair hit karte hi mudi meri taraf woh aur mujhe dekh ek baar phirse bhadak gayi...


DIMPLE-you...kya aisa koi kaam hai jo theek se kar sakte ho tum..!!!

MAI-kar sakta hun naa,ignore tumhe...


jahan ye bol wapas saamne mood gaya mai wahin mood off hone ke kaaran ROUNAK se excuse le mocktail counter ki taraf badh gayi new girl..


ANJALI-wash room se aati hun...

MAI-cool....


ANJALI ke jaate hi mai bhi NITS aur SONU ki taraf mood chuka tha...

par ROUNAK jiski convo meri wajah se adhuri reh gayi,new girl aur ANJALI ke jaate hi woh badha meri taraf..

is waqt meri peeth thi uski taraf..mere right shoulder par zor se haath rakhne ke liye uthaya apna haath usne..


DHABBBB....AHHHHH....WHAT THE FUCK....

ROUNAK ka haath padne hi waala tha mere shoulders par tabhi mai thoda left side me sarak gaya..

wahin mere baaju me ek ladki dance karte hue thoda tezi se hil rahi thi par tabhi usse laga jaise kisine usse left ki taraf kheencha ho..

jab tak woh left dekhti,ek haath uske left shoulder par aakar hit ho gaya...

tagda pain utha uske shoulders par..

apna shoulder pakde woh ladki neeche baiththi chali gayi...

wahin ye sab dekh hadbada gaya ROUNAK aur turant khisak liya woh...


ANJALI-DIMPLE...ek sawal puchun...


SANVY ko wash room ka bol DIMPLE ke paas joki Cinderella (mocktail) pee rahi thi,pahunchi thi ANJALI...


DIMPLE-sure..whats up...???

ANJALI-problem kya hai tumhari SANVY se...???

DIMPLE-excuse me..!!

ANJALI-you heard me...mai dekh rahi hun ki jabse SIRIUS aayi ho tum, interactions par dhang se baat nahi karti tum usse..

kisiko like karna naa karna,ye tumhara personal preference hai but insult karne ka hakh kisne diya tumhe...

club me hone ke baawjud awaaz thodi loud thi ANJALI ki..

upar se jaise confront kar rahi thi woh DIMPLE ko, pasand nahi aayi ye baat usse..

but kahin na kahin baat sach bhi thi ANJALI ki.. reaction thoda over the top tha DIMPLE ka..

battamizi kabhi nahi SANVY ne usse..haan behes ki thi par us behes ki shuruat hamesha DIMPLE ki taraf se hi hota tha...

yahi sab soch rahi thi DIMPLE...wahin ANJALI ko bhi apna tone harsh laga tha isiliye..


ANJALI-listen..sorry for sounding rude....but mujhe lagta hai tumhara ravaiya GALATH hai...


apni baat bol nikal gayi ANJALI aur chhod gayi apni soch me goom DIMPLE ko...

wakayi harsh rahi thi DIMPLE SANVY se... but kyun...!!! isiliye kyunki woh har chiz taken for granted leta tha yaa phir isiliye kyunki woh aisa pehla banda tha jiski aankhon me DIMPLE ne khudke liye taarif nahi dekhi thi..

pehla shaksh jisne usse impress karne ke liye, khud ko cool show karne ke liye kuch nahi kiya tha..

completely natural and 100 percent authentic...


ROUNAK-hey gorgeous...yahan akeli baithi kya kar rahi ho tum...!!!


DIMPLE ko uski soch se bahar nikaalte hue uske saamne baitha ROUNAK...


DIMPLE-nothing..just...

ROUNAK-oh yeah.. drinking cinderella is actually nothing..

rooko,mai kuch order karta hun tumhare liye...you will love it..

DIMPLE-arre, uski zaroorat nahi hai...cinderalla is fine...

ROUNAK-no it's not...aur waise bhi, birthday hai mera aur birthday boy ko mana nahi karte..

common yaar,meri choice ko ek baar try karke toh dekho...just a sip..maza naa aaye toh mat peena..

DIMPLE-nothing hard, right...???

ROUNAK-arre nahi yaar..pure mocktail...buddy bana mera waala...


club ke tapster se kahi thi ye baat ROUNAK ne jispar sir haan me hilaate hue counter ke last edge ki taraf badh gaya woh...


ROUNAK-so,new in DEHRADUN...!!

DIMPLE-tumhe aisa kyun laga ki new hun mai...!!!

ROUNAK-oh come on..tumhari jaisi personality zyada waqt tak kahin rahe toh andho tak ko dikh jaayegi...

DIMPLE-hahahaha... charming...nice...waise agar taarif hai toh thankyou lekin agar close hona chah rahe ho mujhse toh sorry...

koshish bekaar hai...i am not interested...

ROUNAK-really..!!!waise interest kisme nahi hai..date karne me ya mujhme..

DIMPLE-tumme...


bilkul sapat face ke saath straighy kahi thi ye baat DIMPLE ne jispar hairan hua ROUNAK..


ROUNAK-puch sakta hun kyun..??

DIMPLE-ghuma phirakar bolna aata nahi mujhe aur jo sach bola toh bura lag jaayega tumhe...

ROUNAK-i like honesty...

DIMPLE-ok then..you are good enough...laayak aur takkar ke nahi ho tum mere..

ROUNAK-excuse me...!!!


ab ye baat hit kar gayi thi DIMPLE ki ROUNAK ko.....


ROUNAK-shayad tumhe pata nahi hai ki mai....

DIMPLE-boxing champion ho..i know..shayad uttarakhand ke junior level me bhi best..

aur is achivement ki khushi aur ghamand dikhta hai tumhare face par..

but for me,ye koi achievement hai hi nahi..

otherwise mat lena par DELHI se hun mai aur wahan tumhare jaise champions har moholle me chaar milte hain...

on the other hand, acadamics bolo ya sports..

different genres me paanch baar national champion aur winner reh chuki hun mai ab tak..

last year jo result tha mera,woh all india top five me se ek tha..

itne sab ke baad bhi still i feel apne limits ka aadha bhi touch nahi kar paayi hun mai..

ab tum khud batao,kahan se match ho tum mere..naa ho aur jo attitude hai tumhara, ho bhi nahi paaoge...


apni cinderella ka aakhri sip lete hue kahi thi ye aakhri baat DIMPLE ne joki ROUNAK ke liye ek aisi insult thi jo pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi ki thi usne..

koi ladka hota toh ab tak mooh tod chuka hota woh but DIMPLE uske liye woh dish thi jisse chakhne ke liye har keemat de sakta tha ROUNAK aur filhal woh keemat thi bardasht..

woh bardasht jo DIMPLE ke mooh se nikli insult ke baad bhi usse shaant rakhe hue thi...


ROUNAK-wooo...kuch zyada hi straight forward ho tum..

DIMPLE-pehle hi bola tha maine..bura lagega tumhe..

ROUNAK-aur maine bhi kaha tha ki i like honesty...isiliye woh sab chhodo and try this...


ek shining red colour ki drink jo tapster ne ROUNAK ke paas laakar rakh diya tha,usse badhaya usne DIMPLE ki taraf...


ROUNAK-this is called...

DIMPLE-SHIRLEY TEMPLE... mixture of ginger ale and grenadine..

in dono ingredients ki wajah se hai iska ye shining red colour...

but most importantly,its garnished with marachino cherry jo iske flavour ko ek alag hi non sticky sugary taste deta hai..

ROUNAK-wow... drinks ki bhi knowledge hai tumhe...!!!i am impressed..


ROUNAK ke compliment par kuch kaha nahi DIMPLE ne aur drink ka sip lene ke liye glass hold kar liya.

aur aisa hone par ek lustful excitement dikhne laga tha ROUNAK ke face par..

REASON...

kuch der me pata chal jaayega..

glass hold kar SHIRLEY TEMPLE ka first sip lene hi waali thi DIMPLE par tabhi..


DIMPLE-what the hell...

ROUNAK-fuck...


NITS ke saath masti karte hue ulta hokar backside badh raha tha mai aur tabhi takkar ho gayi meri new girl se..

jhalak gaya woh pura Shirley temple ka glass aage ki taraf aur sidhe ROUNAK ke kapdon me jaakar gira...

kuch drink ki bunde uske mooh me bhi chali gayi thi...

ghusse se bhar utha tha ROUNAK jo mujhe dekh aur badh gaya tha..

waise ghussa toh new girl bhi hui thi..kuch der pehle ANJALI se hui convo me jo guilt feel kiya tha usne,woh mujhe dekh gayab hi ho gaya tha...


MAI-oops..so sorry yaar..mai dance kar raha tha isiliye dhyan nahi raha..

DIMPLE-to hell with your dance.. koi kaam dhand se nahi kar sakte tum...

MAI-arre kaam karne thodi naa aaya tha idhar mai..

sorry buddy...tutututu..pura drink gir gaya yaar tere upar toh.. koi baat nahi,abhi taaza gila hua hai naa,clean up karle,daag nahi baithega...

washroom toh pata hi hai hoga.. ofcourse pata hi hoga,tera hi toh club hai...

aur agar phir bhi reh gaya daag toh bhi tention nako lene ka.. paas hi jhakanlaal dress waale ki dukaan hai.

tere size ke badhiya badhiye t-shirt 100 me milte hain udhar...mai gift karunga.. afterall birthday hai tera...


mujhe dekh man hi man ghusse se ubaal maar raha tha ROUNAK par ek toh ye ussika club tha aur upar se invite bhi hum sabko ussine kiya tha, isiliye kisi tarah khudko control me rakha hua tha usne..


ROUNAK-its ok buddy..i will manage..


ye bol turant washroom ki taraf badh chala tha woh...


MAI-dekha...ye hota hai reaction...drink uspar giri par phir bhi kitna cool behave kiya usne..

aur tumhare tevar dekho.. accidently hua sab phir bhi bhadak rahi ho..

DIMPLE-usse pata nahi hai naa ki kitne bade looser ho tum...ek advice hai...just stay away...


ghusse me pair patakti hui nikal gayi woh...


NITS-drink pee liya hota toh idhar hi stay ho jaana tha madam ka.. without clothes...

MAI-kahan hain baaki sab...!!!

NITS-B waalon ke baaju waale room me baithe hain..

MAI-drink ka drama fail hua hai ROUNAK ka..par easily give up nahi karega woh..

koi nayi noutanki kare,usse pehle nikal sabko lekar..waise bhi SHILPA AUNTY ko bas 2 ghante ka bola tha maine...

NITS-aur tu...!!!

MAI-aata hun..


meri baat ka matlab samajh muskurate hua nikal gaya NITS..

wahin Shirley temple joki ek gaadha drink hota hai,usse clean up karne me thoda time laga ROUNAK ko..

is dauran ek taraf SANVY ko gaali bakte hue aur dusri taraf DIMPLE ko kisi tarah yahan club me rokne ka plan banaane laga ROUNAK..

clean up ke beech kuch soch turant nikla washroom se woh aur badh chala counter ki taraf is ummid ke saath ki ab bhi wahin hogi DIMPLE..

par is pure waqt me halke halke ladhkhadane lage the uske kadam...

halka nasha aur khumari chadh chuki thi ROUNAK ke dimag me...

khair,pahuncha woh counter me par dikhi nahi usse DIMPLE wahan...

turant private rooms ki taraf badha woh jahan ek room me toh B section waale dikh gaye usse par baaki saare rooms vacant the..

aakhri room ko bhi khaali dekh ghusse se fat hi pada tha ROUNAK ka dimag..


ROUNAK-shit....

MAI-koi message hai toh de de..de dunga usse mai..


piche hi khada tha ROUNAK ke mai..palatkar jaise hi dekha usne mujhe toh mere prati jo uska ghussa tha,woh dobara bhadak utha...


MAI-G.H.B....gama hydroxybutyrate...nice but common choice...ab tak kitni ladkiyon ko pila chuka hai isse..

ek choti si shishi jisme aadhi bachi liquid saaf dikh rahi thi,woh saamne kiya maine ROUNAK ke aur jisse dekh uska ghussa hairangi me badal gaya...

G.H.B ek depressant hai...high hone ke liye club aur rave parties me youth khud istemaal karte hain iska..

plain water ki tarah dikhta hai ye jo kisi bhi drink ke saath badi asaani se dissolve ho jaata hai..

agar thoda zyada le liya jaaye ye toh behosh hona confirm hai..

apne tabster ke through issi ko milwaya tha DIMPLE ke drink me ROUNAK ne jiske kuch boond uske hi mooh me chale gaye the..

isiliye hi ladhkhada raha tha woh...


ROUNAK-kya bakwas kar raha hai..!!

MAI-koi nahi hai yahan par..sharafat ki noutanki band kar aur dhyan se sun meri baat..

ladki pataani hai toh waise pata jaise patayi jaati hai.. sidhe aur authentic tarike se...

ye chhiltapan agar dobara dikhaya toh woh haal karunga ki paachan kriya ka bhugol badal jayega tera..

khaaye gaand se aur nikaalega mooh se...

ROUNAK-sahi bola tu..bohot hui sharafat..aur tujhe toh pelna hi tha mujhe...


galti ki jo yahan private room me akela hi milne chala aaya tu mujhse..teri toh cheekhen bhi naa sun paayega koi...


apna typical boxing stance lete hue ek ke baad ek kayi mukke swing kiye ROUNAK ne mere face par jisse badi asaani se dodge dene laga mai...

aur jab haath chalana kaam nahi aaya uska toh frustrate hokar pair ghuma diya usne par tabhi..


DHAKKKK...AHHHHH....

apne ghutne se ROUNAK ke foot ko block kiya maine aur ussi pal apna woh pair ghuma diya maine..

leg slap pada tha ROUNAK ke face par jispar halka chillate hue peeche sofe par gira woh..

nashe me toh tha hi woh halka halka..kisi tarah wapas khada hua woh aur phirse badhne laga meri taraf..

DHAKKK..

tezi se aage badha mai aur uske hand swing ko block kar ek palm attack kiye stomach me uske..

behadh napa tula but effective hit tha ye jiske padte hi apna pet pakad jhukta chala gaya ROUNAK..

BHAKKKK..

agle hi second ulti nikal chuki thi uske mooh se jiske baad mooh saaf karte hue wapas uthne laga tha woh but usse kandhe se pakad dhakka diya maine jispar wapas sofe par jaakar gira ROUNAK..


MAI-asal birthday 8 January ko aata hai naa tera..agar dobara koi cheap harkat ki toh birthday toh aayega par manane ki condition me nahi hoga tu...


meri baat sun hairan ho gaya tha ROUNAK...kundali thi mere paas uski,jaan chuka tha woh but jaisa ki hota hai,ghussa,ahankar buddhi ko brasht kar deti hai logon kk..

yahan bhi wahi haal tha...


ROUNAK-chhodunga nahi tujhe saale aur woh loundiya...usse toh mai..


MAI-SHHHHHHH....kuch aisa naa bol jaana jiske baad kuch bhi bolne ke liye zubaan hi naa rahe..


jitni tezi se wapas uske theek saamne aakar khada hua tha mai,hadbadate hue bilkul chup ho gaya tha ROUNAK...


MAI-aakhri baar bol raha hun..stay away,kyunki...




is baar baksh raha hun,ummid mat karna ki agli baar bhi CHHOD DUNGA MAI...

tere hi milkiyat me teri kabr KHOD DUNGA MAI....

tum jaiso ka baap hun mai aur baap se hoshiyari nahi karte warna..

jisne jana nahi,teri us maa ko bhi CHOD DUNGA MAI....












AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...










AAPKA APNA V...J...
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ROHAN APNI CLASS KO A SECTION KE KHILAF KHELE MATCH ME APNE DUM PAR JITWA DETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF CLUB ME SANVY ROUNAK KO KUCH BHI GALATH NAA KARNE KE LIYE WARN KARTA HAI.

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CHAPTER-1

(THE ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)


UPDATE-40

18TH APRIL


CITY-DEHRADUN

PLACE-36TH MALL





CHAL BHAI...FINALLY TERA 19TH CENTURY WAALA PRACHIN JEEVAN KHATM HONE WAALA HAI...


mall me enter karte hi apni bakwas shuru kar di thi NITS ne.

waise toh bakwas ka kota ghar se nikalte ke saath hi shuru ho gaya tha uska par mudde waali bakwas ab chaalu ki thi usne..


SONU-hhaan bbhai...ttere sse zzyada ttoh hhum exccited hhain kki ffinally ttu mmobile lle rraha hhai...

Vvivo 1901 hi utthana hhai nna..

MAI-yup..second floor par hai store...

NITS-tu paise mujhe pakda saale..warna pata nahi kab mood badal le apna....

aisa naa ho ki store me kadam rakhte hi"phir kabhi lenge" bolke manhusiyat faila de tu...

MAI-abbe nahi bhi liya toh kya ho jaana hai.. itne time bina mobile ke hi toh chala hun mai...

NITS-tu chala hai beta par hume toh doudna pada hai naa..har program ki maa behen ek ki hai tune sirf issi excuse se ki info late se mila tujhe...

par ab naa chalne denge tera woh bahana...mobile toh aaj lekar hi rahega tu...


NITS aur SONU...dono hi one plus ke alag alag models chalate the...

range 30 plus tha dono mobiles ka par mai jo set lene aaya tha,uski keemat 12000 ke aas paas thi but jo excitement in dono ko thi is baat ki woh wakayi dekhne layak thi...

NITS ki baat par bas halka smile kiya maine aur is beech lift se naa hokar accelerator stairs par chadh gaye hum..


MAI-CHUTKI....


bohot kam hota hai aisa jab awaaz meri tez aur excitement se bhari hoti hai jo is naam ko lete waqt hua tha..

REASON..

NIHARIKA SHRIVASTAV urf chutki..SONU ki behen..standerd 3rd me hai ye abhi.. choti,gol matol, bilkul kisi barbie doll ki tarah dikhti hai..

SONU ki hi tarah isse bhi stammering ki problem hai...

anyways,chutki ko godh me liye uske aur SONU ke dad KISHORE SHRIVASTAV first floor me lift ke saamne khade the..

SHALINI aunty as in sonu ki mom bhi thi saath me...

jahan mujhe dekh chutki turant utri apne dad se godh se aur doud padi meri taraf wahin uncle aunty bhi mujhe dekh bohot khush ho gaye..

NITS ke parents ki tarah bete se kam nahi tha mai inke liye....


MAI-kaisi hai meri barbie doll....!!

CHUTKI-ttheek hhun bbhaiya...


chutki ke jawab ke beech do baar uske mote mote gaalon ko chum chuka tha mai..


UNCLE-arre pehle batate ki tum log bhi yahin aane waale the toh sab saath me hi aa jaate...

NITS-last minute plan kiya uncle...


uncle ki baat par NITS ne toh jawab de hi diya par mai bas unhe aur aunty ko ghur raha tha.


UNCLE-arre, hamara sher hume hi ghoor raha hai aaj..!!!kya kar diya bhai humne...

MAI-udaas kyun hai chutki...!!!


is pure douran chutki ka face halka dull tha jo obvio mujhse toh chuppne se raha tha...


AUNTY-arre kuch nahi beta...ye toh aise hi.. actually isse..

MAI-kuch chahiye tha jiske liye aapne mana kar diya...


AUNTY ki baat puri ki thi maine jispar bas muskurate hue bas haan me sir hilaaya aunty ne..

ab itne saalon me unhe bhi maalum chal chuka tha ki mere aage koi tark kaam aana hai nahi....


MAI-aap dono jaaiye ghar...chutki ko hum le aayenge...

UNCLE-par beta...

MAI-lift khulne waala hai..jaaiye...


mujhse behes ka koi faayda tha nahi,jaante the ye baat uncle aunty isiliye sir shake karte hue mood gaye woh..


MAI-hmm.. toh,kya chahiye tha meri barbie doll ko...

CHUTKI-aap lle ddoge...

MAI-pakka...


badi khushi aur excitement thi CHUTKI ki awaaz me..chehre ko dullness bhi jaise ek jhatke me gayab ho chuka tha...


CHUTKI-wwoh nna,uss wwaale sshop mme ekk pprincess wwaali ddress hhai,wwoh cchahiye mmujhe...


ek shop ki taraf joki thodi hi door me tha,point kiya chutki ne jispar usse godh me liye hue hi us taraf badh gaya mai...


SONU-bhai wwoh ttoh....


ek haath upar kiya maine jispar aage ki baat andar hi reh gayi SONU ki..

darasal jis shop ki taraf hum badh rahe the,woh ek international kids brand thi,U.C.B as in united colors of benetton..

ab international brand thi toh price range bhi 500,1000 toh hone se raha...

aur isiliye hi uncle aunty ne CHUTKI ko dress nahi dilwayi thi...

SHRIVASTAV GARMENTS naam se ek achi khaasi mid aur low range readymade aur wholesale shop thi SONU ke dad ki par unlike other retailers and wholesalers,fake price tag chipka customers ko chuna nahi lagate the woh...

imaandari se jitna profit lena chahiye,utna hi kamate the uncle..

ab hamare desh me imaandari se izzat toh mil jaati hai par rokde waala department thoda tang ho jaata hai..

agle saal se CHUTKI bhi SIRIUS me admission lene waali thi jiska matlab tha ki per year apne dono bacchon par kareeb 12 lakhs sirf education par kharch karne waale the uncle..

isiliye shopping se lekar har extra kharch par thodi rok lagayi hui thi unhone...


THEIRS YOUR BILL SIR...


pinkish red colour ki v-shape neckline with handmade organza flowers dress ka bill tha ye jiska kul total hua tha 11 thousand...

counter par bill pay kar ek haath me us polly bag ko hold karte hue dusre haath me CHUTKI ko utha liya tha maine..


CHUTKI-tthanks bbhaiya..


ek meethi si puppy di thi CHUTKI ne mere cheeks par..


MAI-arre baap re..ek dress ke badle 1 lakh ki puppy.. profit ho gaya mera toh..ice cream...

CHUTKI- chocolate flavour me...

MAI-double chocolate...


CHUTKI ko godh me liye hue hi icecream joint jo same floor par hi tha,pahuncha mai..

ek wood stool par baithaya maine usse aur order karne chal pada..

wahin ab tak upar se shaant par andar se restless SONU turant mere saamne aakar khada ho gaya...


SONU-ppagal hho ggaya ttha kkya bbe...11 hhazar kki ddress...

ssaale kkabse ppaise jjama kkar rraha ttha ttu mmobile kke lliye aurr aajj jjab ffinally llene kki bbaari aayi ttoh aisse hhi udda diye...

MAI-abbe 1000 bacha hai naa...

SONU-cchup bbe..mmai kkar rraha hhun ddad kko pphone..bbhej ddenge wwoh ppaise online...


apna phone nikaala hi tha SONU ne ki usse pakad wapas uski jeb me daal diya maine..


MAI-mobile lene se utna satisfaction nahi milta mujhe jitna CHUTKI ke liye dress lekar mila hai aur mere liye wahi matter karta hai..

SONU-ppar bhai..

MAI-chup be...apne paise se kuch bhi karun mai,tere ko kya karna hai...

waise bhi gift maine...

teri nahi,meri behen ko diya hai...hakh samajh kar diya hai,karz samajhkar nahi..hakh hi rehne de....


NITS jo is pure scene me bas muskura raha tha,uske saath icecream order karne ke liye badh gaya mai wahin meri kahi aakhri baat sun kuch flash sa hua tha SONU ki aankhon ke aage...

standard 2nd se SIRIUS me padh raha hun mai par DEHRADUN session shuru hone se do mahine pehle april first week me hi aa gaye the hum...

hum as in mai aur MAA..DAD toh 4 months pehle hi aa chuke the yahan taaki where abouts check kar len...

pehle week me hi ek garden me coincidently mila tha mai dono NITS aur SONU se..

dono apni moms ke saath aaye the wahan aur mai apni MAA ke saath..

ek aur bhi thi..ANJALI..but unlike us,apne nanny ke saath aaya karti thi garden woh...

pehle ANJALI aur uske baad in dono se ussi garden me mila tha mai..

baccha hone ke baad bhi waise toh kaafi reserved rehta tha mai but pehle meet se hi SONU,NITS aur ANJALI se kaafi khul gaya tha....

anyways, admission ke waqt mera aur NITS ka admission toh SIRIUS me ek saath ho raha tha but us dauran tezi mandi ki chapet me fas financial crisis se guzar rahe KISHORE uncle ne SONU ka admission kisi dusre chote school me karwaya tha...

khub roya tha SONU hamare saath school na share karne ki baat jaankar par lekin uska woh rona bas ek baargi hi raha..

mere dad ne turant uska bhi admission SIRIUS me karwa diya tha...

SONU ko godh me lekar jab unhone usse ye baat batayi thi toh jahan ek taraf woh khush ho gaya tha wahin uske dad ne haath jod kaha tha mere dad se ki woh ikattha kar dad ke admission me lagaye paise wapas kar denge...

tab unke haathon ko thaam muskurate hue kaha tha dad ne...


"aapke nahi,mere bete ko diya hai...hakh samajh kar diya hai,karz samajhkar nahi..hakh hi rehne dijiye..."


jo CHUTKI ke liye abhi kaha tha maine SONU se,woh kabhi dad ne SONU ke liye kaha tha..

ussi yaad ko,un shabdon ko dobara jiya tha aaj SONU...


SONU-kkamina ssaala...mmeri bbehen se appna rrishta bbatakar mmujhe appna rrishta yaad ddila ggaya...





PLACE-BAMBOOZA




HEY GUYZ...WHATS UP...!!!


ROUNAK aur DEEPESH joki BAMBOOZA ke family rooms me se ek me baithe the,wahan enter kar unke saamne waali lounge par baitha ROHAN....


ROUNAK-all good buddy..kya lega...!!

ROHAN-arre nothing yaar..waise bhi ye jagah toh apna hi spot hai..

aate rehta hun mai idhar..

ROUNAK-phir bhi...lets have some coffee...

ROHAN-cool..


jahan ROUNAK waiter ko kuch cappuccino ko order dene laga wahin is douran jab ghuma uska face right ki taraf toh ROHAN ki nazar padi us taraf ke cheek ki taraf jahan halka bruise bana hua tha...

ab ROUNAK boxer tha toh aise me bruises toh common baat thi isiliye kuch kaha nahi usne par ROUNAK ki body language jisme aaj ek alag hi desperation jhalak rahi thi,woh bhi chuppi nahi thi ROHAN se...


ROHAN-hey man,kya haal chaal...!!!


cappuccinos order karne ke baad ROUNAK wapas muda hi tha ROHAN ke taraf ki tabhi us private room me enter hua NAMITH jisse haath milaane ke baad apne paas hi baitha liya tha ROHAN ne..


NAMITH-kya baat hai be..mere place me aaya hai tu,iski khabar tujhse nahi managar se mil rahi hai mujhe...

ROHAN-abbe planned nahi tha..ye toh ROUNAK ne bola ki urgently milna hai isse toh yahi bula liya maine..

he's ROUNAK...DEEPESH ko toh jaanta hi hai tu...


NAMITH-ye toh bhai hai apna..aur inka bhi naam suna hai maine.. boxing champion,right..!!!


apni jagah se uth DEEPESH ko side se hug karne ke baad ROUNAK se hand shake karte hue kahi thi apni baatein NAMITH ne jispar bas smile kar diya tha ROUNAK ne...

par is oupcharik intro ke baad jab ROUNAK ne ROHAN ko dekha toh us nazar ko samajh gaya ROHAN..


ROHAN-arre chill..buddy hai mera ye..jo bhi baat hai,bindaas bol sakte ho tum NAMITH ke saamne..


ROHAN ki baat par ek lambi saans chhodi ROUNAK ne aur...


ROUNAK-i want to know about SANVEER AHARYA...!!!info chahiye mujhe uski..

CRRRR....


turant khade hone par saamne rakhi table ko hit karne ki hi awaaz nahi thi ye balki SANVEER..is naam ko sun jo gaand fat si gayi thi NAMITH ki,uska bhi reaction tha..

aur jahan aisa reaction dekh ROHAN toh shaant hi raha wahin ROUNAK hairan reh gaya...

same reaction DEEPESH ka bhi tha jab ROUNAK ne kal uske saamne SANVEER ka naam liya tha..

bas itna hi bola tha DEEPESH ne ki SANVEER AHARYA is not the guy jisse bhidna chaahega woh..

ego hurt hui thi ROUNAK ki DEEPESH ke us comment se..

SANVEER kya hai,ROHAN se detail le lene ki raay bhi ussine di thi ROUNAK ko isiliye sirf DEEPESH ko saath lekar aaya tha woh yahan..

but ab jab NAMITH ka reaction dekha usne toh itna samajh aane laga tha usse ki badi pahunchi hui chiz hai SANVEER...

anyways,khade hone ke turant baad ek baar ROHAN ko dekha NAMITH ne aur..


NAMITH-dude... tujhe bhi pata hai...agar koi matter USSE related hai toh just stay away....


ek baar ROUNAK ko dekh sir shake kar nikal gaya NAMITH..

wahin NAMITH ke reaction ko dekh dimag ghum gaya tha ROUNAK ka..


DHADDHHH..

ROUNAK-who the hell is this SANVY..hain kahan ki top ye jo ithi fat rahi hai sabki usse...

saala ek punch me gira dunga usse mai...


table par zor se haath maar apni frustration nikaali thi ROUNAK ne jisse dekh sir naa me hilaya ROHAN ne aur..


ROHAN-shayad haan.. gira sakta hai tu usse..but gira ke waise hi grounded rakh nahi paayega...

kabhi nahi..he will get up.. but firstly toh usse sidhe tour par maar hi nahi sakega tu...

jaanta hun boxing champion hai tu par trust me...

uski league ke aaspas bhi nahi hai tu..

apne personal experience se bol raha hun mai..

anyways,saala sanki hai woh.

agar khudse bhi tujhe usse maarne ki permission de di na usne toh tu maarte maarte thak jaayega par woh maar khaate khaate nahi thakega...

aur phir woh shuru karega bajana tujhe jisse tu ek minute bhi jhel nahi paayega..

iska bhi personal experience hai mujhe..aaj se 3 saal pehle jhaant barabar the hum sab par the toh ek hi size ke....

hum 15 bando ne usse akele me ghera tha..us ladhayi me uska ek haath toota tha, hockey stick se guthne ki dono katori par direct hit kiya tha humne..woh bhi ek se zyada baar..

pura mooh khoon me san chuka tha uska aur continous hits se body ke har part me swelling aayi thi uske par woh behenchod pata nahi kis mitti ka bana hai,he never stayed down...

haan,aakhir ne gira zaroor woh par waisa hone se pehle hum 15 ko gira chuka tha woh...

par ye teen saal purani baat hai..

ab toh bhosdika pata nahi kahan se kya sikh raha hai ki 15 kya 20 bande bhi bhide usse toh araam se nipat lega woh..

and trust me,i am not making this up..sach hai ye.. reflexes dekhe hain maine uske... it's deadly...

isiliye dude,agar tu usse bhidne ki soch raha hai toh yakin maan, it's not a good idea...

aisi haalath kar dega woh ki agar sir salaamat bhi raha toh usse utha kar nahi chal paayega tu...

waise uske ek thappad me samajh aa jaani chahiye thi ye baat tujhe...


is aakhri baat ko sun hadbada gaya tha ROUNAK...


ROUNAK-abbe kya bol raha hai..!!

ROHAN-dont act dude...tere gaal par jo ye bruise dikh raha hai,ye SANVY ki hi den hai, right...

ROUNAK-ye..ye toh kal practice ke time...

ROHAN-hit lag gayi thi... pehle maine bhi yahi socha tha but teri SANVY ke liye nafrat aur frustration dekh kar samajh gaya mai ki theek se mil liya hai woh tujhse...

waise bhi parso tere club me private room se bahar mila tha woh mujhse and he said just one line...

"get out of the club"..

bas itna hi bola tha woh jispar mai samajh gaya ki he was upto something...

ab uske maamlon ke beech padna nahi tha mujhe isiliye mai baaki sabko lekar nikal gaya...


ROHAN ki baat sun ab ghusse se nahi dimag se sochne laga tha ROUNAK...

itna toh ab tak uske bhi palle padh chuka tha ki jis bande ka dar itne saare logon ko hai,baat toh usme hogi hi..

but chhodne toh waala tha nahi woh usse aur naahi DIMPLE ki jawani ke ras ko peene ka bhoot utra tha uske dimag se...

DIMPLE....ye naam jaise hi gunja ROUNAK ke dimag me,ek idea ne hit kiya usse jisse aankhein chamak uthi uski...


ROUNAK-matlab taakat se nahi haraya jaa sakta usse...

ROHAN-woo.. taakat...dude,taakat uska secondary weapon hai..

primary weapon uska dimag hai..

DEEPESH-that's true...saala chanakya ka baap hai behenchod...


DEEPESH ki baat sun ek baar ghoora ROUNAK ne usse aur..


ROUNAK-hoga dimag aur taakat dono uske pass par kami toh mere paas bhi nahi hai..

lekin mere pass ek aur chiz bhi hai jo i am sure ki uske paas nahi hogi...

ROHAN-really...kya...???

ROUNAK-influence..itne bande hain mere network me ki un sabko ek saath dekhkar hi gaand fath jaani hai us SANVEER ki..

par is factor ko use mai thoda alag tarike se karunga...

ROHAN-galti kar raha hai ROUNAK...maine pehle hi kaha hai ki haath pair se zyada dimag chalta hai SANVY ka...

tujhe khabar bhi nahi hogi but he will sense your people aur counter plan bhi ready hoga uske paas..

aisa plan jisse naa bach paayega tu...

ROUNAK-ho sakta hai...but hai toh woh ek hi..ek hi waqt par do do jagah toh naa uski body pahunch sakti hai aur naa uska dimag...

par hona usse dono hi jagah padega woh bhi ek hi time par taaki mere waar ko jhel paaye..

ROHAN-kuch sense kare,kuch aisa bol bhai...

ROUNAK-do do baar bhid chuka hai woh SANVY humse..pehli baar CREATION ke paas hamare hi campus me mere friends ko maara tha usne aur phir behenchod ne mere hi club me aakar mujhe hi dhamki di...

par ye dono bhindat me ek chiz ya phir ye kahun ki ek naam common tha....DIMPLE...

dono baar usse hi bachaya SANVEER ne...

ab jisse woh bachana chaahta hai,usse kaise bache rehne de sakta hun mai...

ROHAN-agar wakayi SANVEER ne bachaya hai DIMPLE ko toh tujhe kyun lagta hai ki you can do something with her or to her..!!!

woh usse kuch hone nahi dega..

ROHAN-mai us DIMPLE ke saath kuch nahi,bohot kuch karunga..

waise toh usse dekhne ke baad se hi usse haasil karne ke baare me soch liya tha maine but us behenchod SANVY ne thoda zyada personal bana diya is khwahish ko...

rahi SANVY ki aisa naa hone dene ki baat toh jab woh khud apne aap ko hi bachane me laga hoga toh bhala DIMPLE ko kaise bacha paayega.....




ek hi waqt me un dono ko alag alag NACHAUNGA...

ROUNAK kis bala ka naam hai,bade salike se unhe SAMJHAUNGA....

daawat-e-husn-o-ranj dono saath me hoga...

SANVEER mere bando se bajega, aur DIMPLE ki mai BAJAUNGA...











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....









AAPKA APNA V...J...
Superb update bro maza aa gaya
 

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Aapki shadi hone jaa rahi.hai. Aap apni zindagi ke naye pehlu me kadam rakhne jaa rahe hain.

Ek baat yaad rakhna, hum sab bhi aapke well-wishers hain aur aapke behad acchi stories ke diehard followers hain. Agar aapke zindagi ke nai pehlu me kadam rakhne ke baad agar aapko samay ki paabandi ho jati hai aur aap apni story likhne ke liye samay nahin nikal sakte hain to kripya kam se kam jo bhi stories chalu ki hain woh pura karna, bhale shortcut me hi sahi.

Abhi abhi ek aur story likhne wale ne apni story bund ki hai aur koi reason nahin diya. Yeh Xossip pe over 7 saal chali aur phir writer ne raato raat aadhe me bund kar diya. Story me bahut sare loose ends the aur usse complete karne ke liye bahut sara samay lagne wala tha. Kai logon ne usse complete karne ki koshish ki lekin koi story ke business ke pehlu ko pakad liya aur kisi dusre ne koi aur pehlu, aur usse ek aad mahine me khatam karne me lag gaye. Logon ko pasand nahin aiya aur unnhe discourage karke bhaga diya.

Pichle saal koi isse forum par aiya aur us story me thoda sa changes karke phir se likhne laga. Likhawat theek thi lekin kai jagah ek tarah se repetitive ho gai aur aage badne ke bajay ek hi jagah par stagnant ho gai.

Main sooch hi raha tha ke usko likhun ke story ko repetitive mode se nikal ke aage le jaye aur jald hi khatam kar le quon ke muje laga shayad usse samaj nahin aah raha hai ke story aage kaise le jaye. Lekin - no surprise - aaj ek moderator ne post kiya ke writer ne story bund kar di hai aur koi message bhi nahin kar sakta hai.

Aap ke stories acche hain aur woh problem yahan nahin dikh raha hai. Lekin agar aapko time ki pabandi mehsoos ho to story ko chahe shortcut me pura kar lena lekin aadhe me aur bahut sare loose ends ke sath nahin chodna. Agar aapko lage ke samay ki paabandi ho sakhti hai to story ko jaldi khatam kar lena aur agar baadme aapko lage ke aap samay de sakte hain to story ka second part ya new story shuru kar lena. Ho sake to aap achi achi stories post karte rehna quon ke aapki stories acchi hain aur bahut log pasand karte hain.
Kabil.e.tareef bro:applause:
 
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