Fantasy Ghar ki khushi

[Mahesh10]

Ek bade se mahal me ek ladka apne bisatr par aaram se soya hua hai or uski badi bahan use jagane ki koshish kar rahi hai lekin vah ladka uthane ka naam bhi nhi le rha hai.
Ladki : bhai uth jaa kitna soyega aaj tera college kaa pahla din hai kya pahle din hi let jaoyege
Ladka : di bas kuchh der or so lene do naa bas abhi uthata hu
Ladki : thik hai mat utho mai papa ko jakr bol deti hu vahi tumhe uthayenge
Ladka itna suna or sunte hi bistar chhodke khada ho gya or bola
Ladka : kya di aap bhi subah subah mujhe darane me maja aata hai aapko
Ladki : agar tu sidhi tarah se uth jata to mai tujhe is trah kyu uthati or ab jaldi se taiyar hokar niche aaja kahi aisa naa ho ki suabh subah hi dant sunane ko mil jaye.
Itna bol kar vah ladki vanha se chali gayi or vah ladka bhi bathroom me fresh hone chala gya
Intro
Raja Rana pratap singh. : ghar ke mukhiya or Rajgarh ke raja. Inka pure Rajgarh me koi bhi inka virodh nhi karta hai dar ki vajh se nhi balki ye pure Rajgarh ko apni santaan ke saman samjhte hai or puri janta bhi inhe pita ke sman samman deti hai
Indu devi : rana ji ki patni ghar me inka hi raaj hai inke aage to rana ji bhi kuchh nhi bolte hai
Inke 3 putri or 1 putr hai
Ist Varsha singh : yah rana ji ki sabse badi santan hi or inki shadi ho gayi hai or yah ek hwife hai


Rajendra singh : Varsha ke pati or yah sahar ke bahut bade businessman hai or inki ek beti hai
Radha singh abhi MBA kar rahi hai or inke bare me age pata chalega
2nd Maya singh : yah Rana ji dusri santan hai inki shadi hui thi magar shadi ke kuchh hi dino baad inke husband ki ek acident me deth ho gayi ghar walo ne dusri shadi ke liye bahut kaha par yah taiyaar nhi hui or ab yah sahar ki jani mani doctor hai


3rd Vipul singh Rana ji ek matr putr lekin jis accident me Maya ji ke pati ke deth hui usi accident me inki ridh ki haddi tut jane ki vajah se yah apahij ho gaye or ab sara din gahr me rahte hai
Madhu singh Vipul ki patni hai or ab pura business yahi dekhti hai or inke bare me age pata chalega


Inki ek beti or ek beta hai
Ragini singh vipul or madhu. Ki beti or yah bhi Radha ke sath MBA kar rhi hai apne bhai ko jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hai


Beta Ayush singh (ayu) yani ki mai maine abhi jald hi 12th pass kiya hai or college join kiya hai


4th Anamika singh rana ji ki sabse chhoti beti hai or inki shadi ek rajparivar me hui thi
Mahendr singh : Anamika ke pati or virgarh ke raja hai inki do santan hai or dono hi putri hai
Ist Rubi singh yah medical ki student hai yah bhi apni maa ki trah dikhti hai



2nd Richa singh yah ek poolice officer hai


Age or bhi log ayenge samay samy par intro deta rahunga

 

[Nasn]

Nice intro......
But Raja rana pratap singh...
Agar ek ek karke sab betio ko
Kalyan karein to sone pe suhaga ho jaye
Sir...............Plzzz....

 

[Black water]

Congratulations for new story
Nice intro

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

For new story..?

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Ek bade se mahal me ek ladka apne bisatr par aaram se soya hua hai or uski badi bahan use jagane ki koshish kar rahi hai lekin vah ladka uthane ka naam bhi nhi le rha hai.
Ladki : bhai uth jaa kitna soyega aaj tera college kaa pahla din hai kya pahle din hi let jaoyege
Ladka : di bas kuchh der or so lene do naa bas abhi uthata hu
Ladki : thik hai mat utho mai papa ko jakr bol deti hu vahi tumhe uthayenge
Ladka itna suna or sunte hi bistar chhodke khada ho gya or bola
Ladka : kya di aap bhi subah subah mujhe darane me maja aata hai aapko
Ladki : agar tu sidhi tarah se uth jata to mai tujhe is trah kyu uthati or ab jaldi se taiyar hokar niche aaja kahi aisa naa ho ki suabh subah hi dant sunane ko mil jaye.
Itna bol kar vah ladki vanha se chali gayi or vah ladka bhi bathroom me fresh hone chala gya
Intro
Raja Rana pratap singh. : ghar ke mukhiya or Rajgarh ke raja. Inka pure Rajgarh me koi bhi inka virodh nhi karta hai dar ki vajh se nhi balki ye pure Rajgarh ko apni santaan ke saman samjhte hai or puri janta bhi inhe pita ke sman samman deti hai
Indu devi : rana ji ki patni ghar me inka hi raaj hai inke aage to rana ji bhi kuchh nhi bolte hai
Inke 3 putri or 1 putr hai
Ist Varsha singh : yah rana ji ki sabse badi santan hi or inki shadi ho gayi hai or yah ek hwife hai


Rajendra singh : Varsha ke pati or yah sahar ke bahut bade businessman hai or inki ek beti hai
Radha singh abhi MBA kar rahi hai or inke bare me age pata chalega
2nd Maya singh : yah Rana ji dusri santan hai inki shadi hui thi magar shadi ke kuchh hi dino baad inke husband ki ek acident me deth ho gayi ghar walo ne dusri shadi ke liye bahut kaha par yah taiyaar nhi hui or ab yah sahar ki jani mani doctor hai


3rd Vipul singh Rana ji ek matr putr lekin jis accident me Maya ji ke pati ke deth hui usi accident me inki ridh ki haddi tut jane ki vajah se yah apahij ho gaye or ab sara din gahr me rahte hai
Madhu singh Vipul ki patni hai or ab pura business yahi dekhti hai or inke bare me age pata chalega


Inki ek beti or ek beta hai
Ragini singh vipul or madhu. Ki beti or yah bhi Radha ke sath MBA kar rhi hai apne bhai ko jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hai


Beta Ayush singh (ayu) yani ki mai maine abhi jald hi 12th pass kiya hai or college join kiya hai


4th Anamika singh rana ji ki sabse chhoti beti hai or inki shadi ek rajparivar me hui thi
Mahendr singh : Anamika ke pati or virgarh ke raja hai inki do santan hai or dono hi putri hai
Ist Rubi singh yah medical ki student hai yah bhi apni maa ki trah dikhti hai



2nd Richa singh yah ek poolice officer hai


Age or bhi log ayenge samay samy par intro deta rahunga

Nice intro.?

 

[Rohitsingh]

Nice start congrats for new story

 

[Mahesh10]

Mai jab fresh hokar niche aya to dekha ki sabhi log naste ke teble par baith kar mera hi intjaar kar rahe the. Maine sabhi logo ko good morning vish kiya or dada dadi ke pair chhue or uske baad jakr apni jagah par baith gaya tb dada ji bole ki
Dada ji : beta itna let uthoge to kaise chalega kal se jaldi uthane ki koshish karo
Mai : thik hai dada ji kal se jaldi uthunga.
Uske baad sabhi log nasta karne lage or nasta karne ke baad dadi boli ki
Dadi : beta aaj se tumhara bhi college khul raha hai tum dono ko ek hi college me jana hai to ek sath hi chale jana or dhyan rahe college me kisi ke sath mar pit mat karna
Mai : dadi aap janti ho ki mai kisi se pahle maar pit nhi karta lekin kuchh galt hote dekh kar mai khud ko rok nhi pata hu
Maa : beta ab tum chhote bachhe nahi ho khud par control karna sikho or haa bahar tum dono ke liye ek new car khadi hai usi me jana.
Iske baad ham sabhi log nasta karke bahar aye to dekha ki bahar ek new gadi khadi hai jo ki meri manpasnd car thi


Mai : maa aap janti hai yah meri pasndida gadi hai
Maa : mai janti hu tabhi to yah li hu lekin yah tum dono ke liye hai.
Mai : maa agar aap nhi bhi bolti to bhi mai didi ke sath hi jata or aap to janti hi hai ki didi ke bina mere liye koi bhi khushi mayne nhi rakhti hai
Dadi : isliye hi to hamne sirf tumhari khushi ke liye aisa kiya. achha chalo ab college jao let ho jaoge pahle hi din lekin ek baat ka dhyan rakhna ki pahla din college ke senior student kuchh parshan kare to jhagada mat karne lagana
Didi : dadi aap chinta mat karo mere hote hue koi mere bhai ko kuchh bhi nhi kar sakta hai . aap to janti ho ki dada ji ke karan koi bhi mujhe kuchh bhi nahi kahata hai to bhai ko koi kaise bolega
Maa : thik hai tum dono ab jao mujhe bhi let ho rha hai office jane ke liye
Iske baad mai or didi dono gadi se college ke liye nikal liye pure raste me mai didi se college ke baare me puchhata raha or didi mujhe batati rahi jab ham college pahuche to sabhi log hamari gadi ki traf hi dekhe jaa rahe the. Jb ham dono gadi se bahar aye to to didi ko dekh kar kuchh ladkiya unki traf aa gyi or di se gale mili jab unki najar meri traf padi to unme se 1 ladki boli ki
Ladki 1 : yar ye tere sath ladka kon hai kahi koi boyfriend to nhi fasha li
Ladki2 : mujhe bhi aisa hi lag rha hai lekin tujhe nahi lagta ki iska boyfriend isase kuchh chhota hai
Didi : ab tum sab mere hatho mar khaogi bina soche samjhe kuchh bhi bolti rahti ho tum sab yah mera chhota bhai hai na ki boyfriend samjhi
Dono ladkiya ek sath mafi mangti hai or bolti hai ki
Ladki1 " yar ab itna handsome ladka tera bhai nikla to ham kya kar sakti hai lekin kya hamra intro nhi karvaogi.
Didi : achha thik hai karvati hu yah mera bhai or iska naam Ayush hai or abhi **** city se 12th pass karke aya hai or **** class me admission liya hai or Ayush yah hai Purvi or yah Rani or ab mai tumko iske baare me nahi bataungi ise to tum khud pahchano
Di itna bol kar chup ho gayi. Mai us ladki ko dhyan se dekhane laga mujhe bhi vah ladki kuchh jani pahchani lag rhi thi bas dhyan nhi aa raha tha kha dekha hu tbhi us ladki ne kuchh aisa bola ki mujhe use pahchanne me 1 mint bhi nhi laga
Ladki 3 : ayu mujhe tujhse aisi ummid nh thi mujhe to lga tum mujhe dekhate hi pahchan jaoge lekin mai galt nikli.
Mai : Radha di aap ho mai to aap bilkul bhi nhi pahachan paya aap kitna badal gayi ho pahle se bhi jyada khubsurat ho gayi ho
Radha : tu bhi to bhut badal gaya hai pahle kaisa tha or ab to bilkul hiro lag rha hai. Vaise kitni gf hai teri.
Mai : kya di aap bhi meri abhi tak ek bhi gf nahi hai.
Didi : Radha ham yah baat to cainteen mai baith kar bhi kar sakte hai
Uske baad ham sabhi log cainteen ki traf chal diye meri najar ground par gayi to maine dekha ki vanha par kuchh ladke ek ladki ko pareshan kar rahe the mujhse yah dekha nahi gaya to uski traf jane laga to di ne mujhe rokate hue boli ki
Didi : bhai udhar kaha jaa raha hai cainteen idhar hai
Mai : di vo ladke us ladki ko parshan kar rahe hai bas vahi jaa raha hu
Purvi : jane do un ladko se panga mat lo vo sab bahut badmaash hai

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice start

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Nice update

 

[Nasn]

Nic

Mai jab fresh hokar niche aya to dekha ki sabhi log naste ke teble par baith kar mera hi intjaar kar rahe the. Maine sabhi logo ko good morning vish kiya or dada dadi ke pair chhue or uske baad jakr apni jagah par baith gaya tb dada ji bole ki
Dada ji : beta itna let uthoge to kaise chalega kal se jaldi uthane ki koshish karo
Mai : thik hai dada ji kal se jaldi uthunga.
Uske baad sabhi log nasta karne lage or nasta karne ke baad dadi boli ki
Dadi : beta aaj se tumhara bhi college khul raha hai tum dono ko ek hi college me jana hai to ek sath hi chale jana or dhyan rahe college me kisi ke sath mar pit mat karna
Mai : dadi aap janti ho ki mai kisi se pahle maar pit nhi karta lekin kuchh galt hote dekh kar mai khud ko rok nhi pata hu
Maa : beta ab tum chhote bachhe nahi ho khud par control karna sikho or haa bahar tum dono ke liye ek new car khadi hai usi me jana.
Iske baad ham sabhi log nasta karke bahar aye to dekha ki bahar ek new gadi khadi hai jo ki meri manpasnd car thi


Mai : maa aap janti hai yah meri pasndida gadi hai
Maa : mai janti hu tabhi to yah li hu lekin yah tum dono ke liye hai.
Mai : maa agar aap nhi bhi bolti to bhi mai didi ke sath hi jata or aap to janti hi hai ki didi ke bina mere liye koi bhi khushi mayne nhi rakhti hai
Dadi : isliye hi to hamne sirf tumhari khushi ke liye aisa kiya. achha chalo ab college jao let ho jaoge pahle hi din lekin ek baat ka dhyan rakhna ki pahla din college ke senior student kuchh parshan kare to jhagada mat karne lagana
Didi : dadi aap chinta mat karo mere hote hue koi mere bhai ko kuchh bhi nhi kar sakta hai . aap to janti ho ki dada ji ke karan koi bhi mujhe kuchh bhi nahi kahata hai to bhai ko koi kaise bolega
Maa : thik hai tum dono ab jao mujhe bhi let ho rha hai office jane ke liye
Iske baad mai or didi dono gadi se college ke liye nikal liye pure raste me mai didi se college ke baare me puchhata raha or didi mujhe batati rahi jab ham college pahuche to sabhi log hamari gadi ki traf hi dekhe jaa rahe the. Jb ham dono gadi se bahar aye to to didi ko dekh kar kuchh ladkiya unki traf aa gyi or di se gale mili jab unki najar meri traf padi to unme se 1 ladki boli ki
Ladki 1 : yar ye tere sath ladka kon hai kahi koi boyfriend to nhi fasha li
Ladki2 : mujhe bhi aisa hi lag rha hai lekin tujhe nahi lagta ki iska boyfriend isase kuchh chhota hai
Didi : ab tum sab mere hatho mar khaogi bina soche samjhe kuchh bhi bolti rahti ho tum sab yah mera chhota bhai hai na ki boyfriend samjhi
Dono ladkiya ek sath mafi mangti hai or bolti hai ki
Ladki1 " yar ab itna handsome ladka tera bhai nikla to ham kya kar sakti hai lekin kya hamra intro nhi karvaogi.
Didi : achha thik hai karvati hu yah mera bhai or iska naam Ayush hai or abhi **** city se 12th pass karke aya hai or **** class me admission liya hai or Ayush yah hai Purvi or yah Rani or ab mai tumko iske baare me nahi bataungi ise to tum khud pahchano
Di itna bol kar chup ho gayi. Mai us ladki ko dhyan se dekhane laga mujhe bhi vah ladki kuchh jani pahchani lag rhi thi bas dhyan nhi aa raha tha kha dekha hu tbhi us ladki ne kuchh aisa bola ki mujhe use pahchanne me 1 mint bhi nhi laga
Ladki 3 : ayu mujhe tujhse aisi ummid nh thi mujhe to lga tum mujhe dekhate hi pahchan jaoge lekin mai galt nikli.
Mai : Radha di aap ho mai to aap bilkul bhi nhi pahachan paya aap kitna badal gayi ho pahle se bhi jyada khubsurat ho gayi ho
Radha : tu bhi to bhut badal gaya hai pahle kaisa tha or ab to bilkul hiro lag rha hai. Vaise kitni gf hai teri.
Mai : kya di aap bhi meri abhi tak ek bhi gf nahi hai.
Didi : Radha ham yah baat to cainteen mai baith kar bhi kar sakte hai
Uske baad ham sabhi log cainteen ki traf chal diye meri najar ground par gayi to maine dekha ki vanha par kuchh ladke ek ladki ko pareshan kar rahe the mujhse yah dekha nahi gaya to uski traf jane laga to di ne mujhe rokate hue boli ki
Didi : bhai udhar kaha jaa raha hai cainteen idhar hai
Mai : di vo ladke us ladki ko parshan kar rahe hai bas vahi jaa raha hu
Purvi : jane do un ladko se panga mat lo vo sab bahut badmaash hai

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