Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Aakash.]

Hows everyone

I know long gone and busy somewhere yeah i understand its been too long.. Ahh

Kaise ho bhai log aap sab? Baht din baad aya idhar.. Kya karein yaar life bht jada busy ho gayi hai. Khud ke liye time hi nahi bacha hai ab. Aisa nahi hai maine kosish nahi ki aur na likhne ki jabki maine kafi had tak kahani likh kr end tak le aya tha lekin fir jab khud pada to pasnd hi nahi aya aur sab hata dia aur dubara likhne ka mauka nahi laga. Pata nahi shayad ye kahani end tak atte hue adhui hi reh jayegi...

Aap log kaise ho? hope sab apni apni life mein kush hoge...

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Ki kisi kahani ko agar anjaam tak le jaana ho namumkim,
To use ek khubsurat mod dekar chod dena accha hai..

Story complete hona chahiye ​

 

[harshit1890]

Hariya kaku Bhabhi ke pallu se bahar aane ka waqt mil gaya

Khair chodo sabhi baate aapko online dekhkar accha laga hope ju shadi ke Laddu acche se kha rahe honge ​

Are laddu chhodo bhai baht kuch khaa rhe hai Are aya to mai bich mein pehle bhi tha lekin sirf do teen minute ke liye login kiya fir chala gaya tha kafi time pehle. Zindagi badal jati hai dost. Umar badh rahi hai budhape ki taraf badh rhe hai ab ye sab yaadein reh jayegi ek din. 2012 se 2021 tk ka safar bahut kuch dekha

Bilkul aapka kehna sahi hai or jab hum sehmati de rahe hai koi do raay nahi hai is kahani jaisi koi kahani na hai na hongi ​

Are vo sab chhodo kya haal chal ye batao

Aapke comment ko dekhkar ek khubsurat shayri yaad aa gayi...

Ki kisi kahani ko agar anjaam tak le jaana ho namumkim,
To use ek khubsurat mod dekar chod dena accha hai..

Story complete hona chahiye ​

Uski guranttee nahi de sakta bhai Par kosish karunga

 

[harshit1890]

Something is cooking and will be there for all.. I Know itna lamba samay ho gaya hai grasp karna asan nahi.. lay bhi nahi banegi.. par maine jitni jaldi kar sakta hu kar dunga.. Hopefully kar hi dunga.. baki dekho bhavshye mein kya likha hai...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Are laddu chhodo bhai baht kuch khaa rhe hai Are aya to mai bich mein pehle bhi tha lekin sirf do teen minute ke liye login kiya fir chala gaya tha kafi time pehle. Zindagi badal jati hai dost. Umar badh rahi hai budhape ki taraf badh rhe hai ab ye sab yaadein reh jayegi ek din. 2012 se 2021 tk ka safar bahut kuch dekha

Are vo sab chhodo kya haal chal ye batao

Uski guranttee nahi de sakta bhai Par kosish karunga

हर सवाल का जवाब अतीत मे छुपा रहता है ।

और कम से कम " सारा जीवन नप चुका ...." वाली बात मत ही कहिए हर्षित भाई ! उम्मीदें , हसरतें , आशाएं , पोजिटिव माइंड सेट ही एनर्जी का काम करती है ।

 

[harshit1890]

हर सवाल का जवाब अतीत मे छुपा रहता है ।

और कम से कम " सारा जीवन नप चुका ...." वाली बात मत ही कहिए हर्षित भाई ! उम्मीदें , हसरतें , आशाएं , पोजिटिव माइंड सेट ही एनर्जी का काम करती है ।

Bhai biwi aa gayi to nap hi chuka hota hai patiyun ka to

 

[Aakash.]

Are laddu chhodo bhai baht kuch khaa rhe hai Are aya to mai bich mein pehle bhi tha lekin sirf do teen minute ke liye login kiya fir chala gaya tha kafi time pehle. Zindagi badal jati hai dost. Umar badh rahi hai budhape ki taraf badh rhe hai ab ye sab yaadein reh jayegi ek din. 2012 se 2021 tk ka safar bahut kuch dekha

Hum abhi unmarried hai but fir bhi ju ki baato ko samjhne ki puri koshish kar rahe hai rahi baat safar ki to wo suhana hota hai yaade rah jaati hai kuch acchi kuch buri​

Are vo sab chhodo kya haal chal ye batao

Apan badiya men ju jald hi apan bhi shadi kar lenga Sahu waqt aane pe
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Uski guranttee nahi de sakta bhai Par kosish karunga

I miss Aarohi so much ​

 

[Aakash.]

Something is cooking and will be there for all.. I Know itna lamba samay ho gaya hai grasp karna asan nahi.. lay bhi nahi banegi.. par maine jitni jaldi kar sakta hu kar dunga.. Hopefully kar hi dunga.. baki dekho bhavshye mein kya likha hai...

Waiting buddy ​

 

[harshit1890]

Hum abhi unmarried hai but fir bhi ju ki baato ko samjhne ki puri koshish kar rahe hai rahi baat safar ki to wo suhana hota hai yaade rah jaati hai kuch acchi kuch buri

Apan badiya men ju jald hi apan bhi shadi kar lenga Sahu waqt aane pe


I miss Aarohi so much ​

Achi baat hai shadi jaruri hai zindagi mei.. par bandh degi ye bhi satya hai..
Aaruhi miss mat karo... shadi karwa dunga warna

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Bhai biwi aa gayi to nap hi chuka hota hai patiyun ka to

कुछेक सालों की खुमारी तो रहेगी ही ।
लेकिन सोचने वाली बात यह है कि एक लड़की , एक बीवी ने आप को पिंजरे मे बंद करने जैसा हालात पैदा कर दिया , अगर दो चार लड़कियों के साथ एक्स्ट्रा मैरिटल अफेयर्स वाली सिचुएशन पैदा हो गई तो फिर क्या करेंगे ?

 

[Aakash.]

Achi baat hai shadi jaruri hai zindagi mei.. par bandh degi ye bhi satya hai..
Aaruhi miss mat karo... shadi karwa dunga warna

Story ke Kitne points the jo apan apne review me mention kiya note down kiya ab apan bhul gaya men dobara puri story read karna honga fir apan sahi se review de paayega

Plus aarohi is mine OK ​