Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

SANJU ( V. R. ) Aakash. DARK WOLFKING Death Kiñg GuptAbhishek .... Finally ye part likh dia jo kafi ime se pending tha. Ab sirf climax bacha hai jo thoda complex hai for sure. Time lagega.. warna chapal nikal kar maroge aap log mujhe... And now i will meet u soon very soon everyone.. itna lamba samay nahi lunga kyun ki dimag mein ek khurafati idea hai..

 

[mistyvixen]

Chapter titles sound so cool! Is it completed?
Want to start reading it... absolutely my type of read

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

Spoiler: INDEX

~~INDEX~~​

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

 

[GuptAbhishek]

SANJU ( V. R. ) Aakash. DARK WOLFKING Death Kiñg GuptAbhishek .... Finally ye part likh dia jo kafi ime se pending tha. Ab sirf climax bacha hai jo thoda complex hai for sure. Time lagega.. warna chapal nikal kar maroge aap log mujhe... And now i will meet u soon very soon everyone.. itna lamba samay nahi lunga kyun ki dimag mein ek khurafati idea hai..

Bhai jyada time Mt Lena jaldi wapas aana

 

[Aakash.]

Maybe we'll see later where this trip to the Amazon jungle takes us for now we're back in college.

We are so entangled in a problem that even if we explain to someone what the problem is they will think that we are crazy and this problem needs to be solved in such a case those who don't know about this will misunderstand us for example college people as I said before they are only concerned about the reputation of the college and money and I am not saying that Urvashi's concern for her children is just a pretense any parent will only think about the well-being of their children. In all this Aaruhi still not recovered from Meghnath's death, so her talking to her mother like this shows this. At first I also did not understand because Aaruhi's father died in front of Aaruhi but in the end Urvashi told such a truth which made all the beliefs wrong.

Now coming to the past, Urvashi is pregnant but how come she herself does not know this, there are many reasons for this if seen biologically then it can happen in unconscious state and it can happen spiritually also but I think both these reasons are wrong the reason is something else maybe I can also be wrong everyone has their own thinking. The bigger thing is that Urvashi is unmarried and no matter how much our society has advanced today people's thinking is still the same. At such a time the family should have supported Urvashi but they too left her which is very bad.

Urvashi is a mother now and her thinking like this for her child and introducing him to this beautiful life after facing so many difficulties is nothing less than praise. Aaruhi was angry today but she knows the truth so when her anger calms down she will realize her mistake. The last line of the last update makes us think whether all this is just Aaruhi's dream or someone is experimenting on Aaruhi or she is possessed by a ghost what does it mean that Shruti said this. I have a question in my mind but after reading the last line of the update I don't know why I don't feel like asking. My mind is running in every direction, I don't know what is going on in the story. Urvashi said that spirits lived in that ruin, so it is possible that a spirit has taken up possession over Aarohi.

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[Aakash.]

Barhal kahani ko samapat krna hai aur mai puri kosish mein hun ki abki end kar dun.

Finally ye part likh dia jo kafi ime se pending tha. Ab sirf climax bacha hai jo thoda complex hai for sure. Time lagega.. warna chapal nikal kar maroge aap log mujhe... And now i will meet u soon very soon everyone.. itna lamba samay nahi lunga kyun ki dimag mein ek khurafati idea hai..

Koi bhi kahani shuru hoti hai to kabhi na kabhi uska ant bhi hota hai hum to hamesha se hi aapke shukrgujaar hai jo aisi behtarin kahani ko aapke madhayam se humne jaana bus ek gujarish hai kahani khatam karne ki jaldbaazi me kuch gadbad mat kar dena jaisa maza abhi tak aaya hai wah barkaraar rahna chahiye late chaahe jitna bhi ho jaaye hum bhi yahi hai aap bhi...

Khair maza to bahot aayega jab sach saamne honga or ek taar dusre taar se judega jitne man me sawal hai sab ke jawab mil jaayege...

Or shayad Aarohi bhi chale jaayegi..

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[harshit1890]

Maybe we'll see later where this trip to the Amazon jungle takes us for now we're back in college.

We are so entangled in a problem that even if we explain to someone what the problem is they will think that we are crazy and this problem needs to be solved in such a case those who don't know about this will misunderstand us for example college people as I said before they are only concerned about the reputation of the college and money and I am not saying that Urvashi's concern for her children is just a pretense any parent will only think about the well-being of their children. In all this Aaruhi still not recovered from Meghnath's death, so her talking to her mother like this shows this. At first I also did not understand because Aaruhi's father died in front of Aaruhi but in the end Urvashi told such a truth which made all the beliefs wrong.

Now coming to the past, Urvashi is pregnant but how come she herself does not know this, there are many reasons for this if seen biologically then it can happen in unconscious state and it can happen spiritually also but I think both these reasons are wrong the reason is something else maybe I can also be wrong everyone has their own thinking. The bigger thing is that Urvashi is unmarried and no matter how much our society has advanced today people's thinking is still the same. At such a time the family should have supported Urvashi but they too left her which is very bad.

Urvashi is a mother now and her thinking like this for her child and introducing him to this beautiful life after facing so many difficulties is nothing less than praise. Aaruhi was angry today but she knows the truth so when her anger calms down she will realize her mistake. The last line of the last update makes us think whether all this is just Aaruhi's dream or someone is experimenting on Aaruhi or she is possessed by a ghost what does it mean that Shruti said this. I have a question in my mind but after reading the last line of the update I don't know why I don't feel like asking. My mind is running in every direction, I don't know what is going on in the story. Urvashi said that spirits lived in that ruin, so it is possible that a spirit has taken up possession over Aarohi.

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Are bhai itna bada suspense khol dia maine kahani mai... tumhare aage to villian bhi le aya tab kahe confuse ho.. Tanik thoda sa dhayan se pado.. akhri ki kuch line... Bas itna samajh nahi ayega ki ye sab ho kyun rah ahai par itna pata chl gaya na ki villian kaun hai Anyways.. thank u so much bro.. for reading.. Jungle nahi abhi mai vo dikhaunga ki tarre bhi nazar ayenge... yes but it will take time for me to write warna duvidha mein hi reh jaoge... Thanks aakaash bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Chapter titles sound so cool! Is it completed?
Want to start reading it... absolutely my type of read

Ant ke najdeek hai bhai.. Welcome here

 

[harshit1890]

Bhai jyada time Mt Lena jaldi wapas aana

Jaldi aunga bhai tensn mat lo...

 

[mistyvixen]

Ant ke najdeek hai bhai.. Welcome here

THANKS but I'm not bhai. Complete jarur karna...main bhi start karte hoon

 

[harshit1890]

Koi bhi kahani shuru hoti hai to kabhi na kabhi uska ant bhi hota hai hum to hamesha se hi aapke shukrgujaar hai jo aisi behtarin kahani ko aapke madhayam se humne jaana bus ek gujarish hai kahani khatam karne ki jaldbaazi me kuch gadbad mat kar dena jaisa maza abhi tak aaya hai wah barkaraar rahna chahiye late chaahe jitna bhi ho jaaye hum bhi yahi hai aap bhi...

Khair maza to bahot aayega jab sach saamne honga or ek taar dusre taar se judega jitne man me sawal hai sab ke jawab mil jaayege...

Or shayad Aarohi bhi chale jaayegi..

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Ant hoga tabhi kuch naya ayega.. Mai waise bhi purana ho chuka hun.. ab hum budhon ki kahani mein kisko dilchaspi hai.. Jaldibazi nahi karunga.. Fast end dena hota to detailing kam kar deta.. Lekin likhne baithta hun to man nahi karta short cut mein likhne ka.. Bilkul vistar se ek ek chiz kahani ka point jo shuru hua tha aur end tk har kisse ka jikar hoga.. Bas samjhna aapko hai... COnfusing lagega.. kosish karunga jitna clear likh paun likh lun.. Pata nahi kya hoga bht risky end hai.. aur aap log sochoge ki kya chutiya banaya hai writer ne..