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Fantasy God of harem (desire with satifire)

Vickydoner1994

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"haank! haank!"

*taayar cheekhana*

*bam*

draivar ne brek lagaane kee koshish kee, lekin tab tak bahut der ho chukee thee. usane kabhee ummeed nahin kee thee ki ek saaph sadak par ek betarateeb aadamee apane trak ke saamane aa jaega.

"ugg! trak-kun, haalaanki mainne aapase apanee kuchh tippaniyon mein mujhe maarane ka anurodh kiya tha, mainne aisa sirph isalie kiya kyonki mujhe laga ki yah mujhe majaakiya aur shaant bana dega ... aapako ise gambheerata se nahin lena chaahie tha ..."

"bakavaas! yah dard hota hai!"

trak kee chapet mein aae 35 varsheey naks ne mahasoos kiya ki unaka poora shareer dard se karaah raha hai, unake shareer ko jameen par girane mein jyaada samay nahin laga, unakee aankhen bhaaree ho gaeen, unhonne koshish kee unhen khula rakha lekin ab aur sahan nahin kar saka, aur jald hee, usakee chetana pheekee pad gaee.



"hva!" jaagate hee naks ka poora shareer kaanp utha.

"vah ek daraavana sapana tha ..." usane aah bharee, usake maathe se abhee bhee paseena aa raha tha lekin achaanak, usane apanee bhaunhen phansa leen. rꪖꪕᦔꪖꪕꪫꪣꫀꪶ

"yah jagah kahaan hai…?" usane chaaron or dekha aur khud ko ek agyaat kamare mein paaya.

seement aur eenton se bane saamaany kamaron ke vipareet, yah kamara lakadee se banaaya gaya tha, haalaanki yah saaph tha, pharneechar se yah spasht tha ki is kamare mein rahane vaale vyakti kee rahane kee sthiti bahut achchhee nahin thee.

beshak, naks ke paas yah sab sochane ka samay nahin tha kyonki vah pahale se hee ajeeb paristhitiyon ke kaaran ghabara raha tha.

kya mera apaharan kar liya gaya tha?

nahin, isaka koee matalab nahin hai, koee raasta nahin hai ki koee mera apaharan kar le kyonki mera koee mooly nahin hai. koee merit nahin hai...

ruko, kya isaka matalab yah hai ki yah ek sapana nahin tha aur main vaastav mein us trak se takara gaya tha?

usane kaee cheejon ke baare mein socha jo use usakee vartamaan sthiti mein le ja sakatee hain. usane apane maathe ko chhoone ke lie apana haath uthaaya aur apane sir par ek asaamaany takkar mahasoos kar sakata tha.

kya mujhe kisee ne bachaaya tha?

hamm, yah hona chaahie ...

dhikkaar hai, ab mujhe aspataal ke bilon ka bhugataan karana hoga, ha... agar mujhe pata hota ki aisa hoga, to main svaasthy beema khareed leta...

naks andar se roya, pahale se hee bil ka bhugataan karane ke vibhinn tareekon ke baare mein soch raha tha aur agale kuchh varshon ke lie apane sabhee khelon aur upanyaas ko alavida kahane ke lie taiyaar tha kyonki use ovarataim kaam karana hoga.

haalaanki, use achaanak laga ki kuchh alag hai.

us sab bhram ke kaaran, usane pahale is par dhyaan nahin diya hoga, lekin ab jab vah spasht roop se soch raha hai, to usake haath pahale se adhik saphed aur patale ho gae the. usane neeche dekha aur dekha ki usane aam taur par istemaal kie jaane vaale kapadon se bilkul alag kapade pahane hue the.

usane apane chehare ko chhua aur dekha ki usakee daadhee pooree tarah se chalee gaee thee aur usaka chehara bhee mahasoos ho raha tha
 
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usane apane chehare ko chhua aur dekha ki usakee daadhee pooree tarah se chalee gaee thee aur yahaan tak ki usaka chehara bhee pahale se alag mahasoos ho raha tha...

pakadana…

achaanak usake dimaag mein ek bilkul naya siddhaant prakat hua aur usake bheetar ek ajeeb see uttejana paida ho gaee.

he, kya yah vahee hai jo mujhe lagata hai?

us dard ko nazarandaaz karate hue, vah tezee se daravaaze kee or bhaaga aur jaise hee usane use khola, usane ek gaharee saans lee, usakee aankhon mein chamak aa gaee aur usake chehare par ek badee see muskaan aa gaee.

"haan! yah nishchit roop se hai jo mujhe lagata hai ki yah hai!" unhonne kaha.

hava alag hai, nazaara alag hai, isamen koee shak nahin. vah doosaree duniya mein tha.

"haahaaha! main sthaanaantarit ho gaya!"

"trak-kun, mere dost! main nishchit roop se gambheer tha jab mainne kaha ki main chaahata hoon ki tum mujhe maaro! haahaaha!" vah zor se hansa aur ek aur gaharee saans lene ke baad apane kamare mein laut aaya aur chehare par ek utsaahit nazar ke saath zameen par baith gaya.

"skript ke anusaar, ab samay aa gaya hai ki meree cheet entree kare sahee!" apane dhokhe ke saamane aane ka intajaar karate hue usakee aankhen utsaah se chamak utheen.




5 minat ho gae...

...

10 minat ho gae...

...

30 minat ho gae...

usaka utsaah kam ho gaya...

usaka dhokha saamane nahin aaya ...

"theek hai... theek hai, kuchh dhokhebaaz emasee kee bhaavanaon ke saath khelana pasand karate hain aur keval tabhee dikhaee dete hain jab emasee khatare mein hota hai... haan aisa hee hona chaahie..." yah sochate hue, usane chaaron or dekha aur usakee nazar pharsh par padee ek thodee tej chattaan par padee . rꪖꪕᦔꪖꪕꪫꪣꫀꪶ

bina kisee hichakichaahat ke, usane chattaan ko uthaaya aur theek apane pet par vaar kar diya.

…ya nahin।

"nahin। nahin nahin nahin nahin nahin nahin nahin! aisa nahin kar rahe!

main ab ek kaalpanik kahaanee ke aadhaar par khud ko chot nahin pahuncha sakata, kya main kar sakata hoon? isaka koee arth nahee ban raha hai.

aisa nahin hai ki mujhe dar lag raha hai ya kuchh bhee... yah vyaavahaarik nahin hai... haaha..."


vah baahar nikala aur thoda aur intajaar karane ka phaisala kiya.
samay beetata gaya, kuchh nahin hua...

ant mein, naks ne apana dhokha praapt karana chhod diya.

ummeed ke mutaabik, ledee lak kabhee bhee mere saath nahin hoga...

...

trak-kun, tumhen meree tippaniyon ko gambheerata se nahin lena chaahie tha...

unhonne apane bhaagy ko sveekaar karate hue aah bharee aur ek aur saamaany jeevan jeene ka raasta khojane ka phaisala kiya.

tabhee usakee najar kamare ke kone mein lage ek chhote se sheeshe par padee, vah usakee or badha aur jaise hee usakee najar apane pratibimb par padee, usane gaalee dee.

"bhaad mein jao! main sundar hoon!"

unhonne saamaany jeevan jeene ke baare mein apane vichaaron ko turant door kar diya.

"theek hai, imma jigolo ban jaatee hai aur meree dekhabhaal karane ke lie shugar maama dhoondhatee hai! vaah!"

ek tvarit nirnay!
 
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"main vaastav mein sundar hoon"

naks khushee se bola jab usane apane chehare ko alag-alag konon se dekha, jitana adhik usane dekha utana hee use yah pasand aaya. unake lambe ghane rookhe baal, unakee chikanee goree tvacha ke saath pooree tarah se nakkaasheedaar chehare ke saath. unakee sunaharee aankhon mein ek anokhee chamak thee. unakee talavaar jaisee bhauhen, patalee naak aur tej jabade ne unake chehare ko amar kar diya, bhale hee vah thodee see chot lagee ho.

"is chehare ke saath, is kamajor dikhane vaale shareer ke saath, main vaastav mein sabase achchhee gunavatta vaala jigolo hoon jo kabhee bhee ho sakata hai! mujhe apane yogy graahak khojane ke lie kadee mehanat karanee hogee!"

naks ne khud ko sir hilaaya lekin phir apanee bhauhen tedhee kar leen.

lekin mujhe chot kyon lagee hai? usane socha.

unake pravaas ke baad, kuchh bhee skript ke anusaar nahin chal raha tha, unhen apana dhokha nahin mila aur na hee unhen apane poorvavartee kee smrti thee.


kya ve mere atyadhik sundar chehare se jalate the? hamm, aisa hee hona chaahie... hammf! haare hue! ruko jab tak mujhe ek achchhee cheenee maan nahin mil jaatee, tab tak main apana badala loonga. hamf! hamf! jaise hee unhonne parikalpana kee, naks ne andar kee or soongh liya.

*baadal kee garaj*

vah badala lene ke baare mein soch hee raha tha ki usane apane pet kee gurraahat sunee, tabhee use ahasaas hua ki vah bahut bhookha hai. usane idhar-udhar dekha aur apanee tebal par kuchh aadoo jaise phal pae.

yah jahareela nahin hona chaahie kyonki yah mere ghar mein hai... rꪖꪕᦔꪖꪕꪫꪣꫀꪶ

yah sochakar usane jaldee se ek nivaala kha liya. ve hare sebon kee tarah chakh rahe the, unhen svaadisht paakar usane bina samay ganvae sab kha lie.

haalaanki vah thode se phal usakee bhookh ko pooree tarah se santusht nahin kar sakate the, phir bhee yah pahale jaisa kharaab nahin tha.

haalaanki, agar use pata chala ki usane abhee jo khaaya vah usake poorvavartee ke do din ke bhojan ke baraabar tha, to vah santusht nahin hone kee shikaayat nahin karega.

khat khat*

*smaish*

achaanak, usane daravaaje par dastak sunee, lekin jaise hee vah javaab dene vaala tha, daravaaja patak diya gaya aur 3 mote dikhane vaale log andar aa gae.

agar aap daravaaja patakana chaahate the to dastak dene kee jahamat kyon uthaee... naks ne andar se socha lekin vah jaanata tha ki yah is tarah ke savaal poochhane ka samay nahin hai.

"kya aapane hamaare saath aane ka phaisala kiya hai?" daag-dhabbe vaala aadamee, jise naks ne is samooh ka neta maana tha, ne poochha.

"..."

naks ne ek gaharee saans lee aur bina kuchh kahe unhen ghoor raha tha, haalaanki, usake chehare par dar ka koee nishaan nahin tha.

neta ne apane maatahaton kee or dekha, keval jab unhonne pushti kee ki unake chehare par ek hee bhramit nazar thee, to unhonne naks kee or rukh kiya aur apanee bhaun uthaee.

"mainne poochha, kya aapane hamaare saath aane ka phaisala kiya hai?" usane phir poochha, is baar usaka svar pahale se thoda bhaaree hai.

"beshak!"
 
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:congrats:bhai story start karne ke liye. Hope so aapki story is foram ke kai sare records tode kar nahi uchaiyan touch kare.
Kuch suggestions dena cahunga ki apne story ke starting me upar Upadte no -1 aur usi tarah aage likh dijiye taki read krne wale ko koi bhi problem na ho usase koi update miss na ho.
 

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mainne poochha, kya aapane hamaare saath aane ka phaisala kiya hai?" usane phir poochha, is baar usaka svar pahale se thoda bhaaree tha.

"beshak!" naks ne turant uttar diya, yah jaane bina ki ve use kahaan le jaenge.

unaka tark saral tha, ve jaanate the ki yadi ve ladate hain to unake khilaaph koee mauka nahin hai, isalie yadi ve use nukasaan pahunchaana chaahate hain, to ve ise yahaan kar sakate the. ve use kaheen le jaane kee jahamat nahin uthaenge, jahaan unhonne usake jaise kamajor vyakti se nipatane ke lie jaal bichhaaya hai.

mammahamm, vah taarkik roop se sochane ke baad sahamat ho gaya, isalie nahin ki vah apane saamane daag-dhabbe vaale aadamee se darata tha. bilkul bhee nahin.

daagee chehare vaala neta usake javaab se chaunk gaya lekin usaka chehara jaldee se saamaany ho gaya aur usane sir hilaaya aur usamen ek ajeeb bainganee rang ka taral yukt kaanch kee botal phenk dee.

"ise piyo"

bina kuchh poochhe, naks ne jaldee se botal khaalee kar dee, haalaanki yah thodee kadavee thee, jaise hee yah usake gale se neeche utaree, usane mahasoos kiya ki usake poore shareer mein garm oorja pravaahit ho rahee hai aur usaka chehara, jo chotil tha, bina kisee nishaan ke theek ho gaya tha!

haalaanki aashchary hua, usake paas yah sochane kee vilaasita nahin thee ki usane kis tarah kee eeshvareey cheej pee lee thee kyonki vah jaldee se purushon ka peechha kar raha tha
 

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kuchh der chalane ke baad, vah ek imaarat ke saamane prakat hua, jo usake jeern-sheern lakadee ke ghar ke bilkul vipareet thee. yah saphed rang ke maarbal se banee ek badee imaarat thee jisane is imaarat ko ek pavitr ehasaas diya. us par kuchh shabd likhe hue the, lekin naks us bhaasha ko nahin pahachaan saka, isalie usane unhen nazarandaaz kar diya.

jald hee, paartee ne imaarat mein pravesh kiya aur ek vishisht kamare kee or chal diya, haalaanki vah daravaaje par kya likha tha, dijain aur doosaron ke ravaiye se yah nahin padh saka, yah spasht tha ki kamara kisee mahatvapoorn vyakti ka tha.

*khat khat*

ek dastak ke baad, klaasik naukaraanee kee poshaak pahane ek sundar ladakee dvaara daravaaja khola gaya, usane naks kee or dekhane se pahale jakhmee chehare vaale aadamee ko sir hilaaya, usake saamaany, bhaavaheen chehare par vaapas jaane se pahale usake chehare par thoda aashchary dekha ja sakata tha . rꪖꪕᦔꪖꪕꪫꪣꫀꪶ

vah kamare mein chalee gaee aur paartee usake peechhe-peechhe chalee, vahaan unhonne ek aadamee ko dekha jo mahange dikhane vaale labaade pahane hue tha jo itmeenaan se ek kursee par baitha tha. phraanseesee moonchhon ke saath us aadamee ke sunahare baal the, jisase vah ek klaasik vyaapaaree jaisa dikhata tha.

isake baad unhonne naks par nazar daalee aur poochha, "aap jaanate hain ki aapako yahaan kyon laaya gaya hai, hai na?"

naks ke man mein anaginat vichaar daud rahe the,


kya main use bata doon ki main kuchh nahin jaanata?

lekin us daagadaar chehare vaale vyakti ke ravaiye se yah spasht hai ki usane mere poorvavartee ko sthiti ke baare mein bataaya tha. kya ve nahin jaan paenge ki main vah nahin hoon jo ve sochate hain ki main hoon?

lekin yah jaanane ka mera yahee ekamaatr mauka hai ki kya ho raha hai, mujhe ise barbaad nahin karana chaahie...

in sabhee tvarit vichaaron ke kaaran, naks thoda ghabara gaya aur sir hilaaya aur usee samay apana sir hilaaya, jo kaaphee majaakiya lag raha tha.

usakee pratikriya par us vyakti ne apanee bhauhen uthaeen aur naks kee or vaapas mudane se pahale usane ghaav ke nishaan vaale vyakti ko dekha.

"mera naam eltan peyatan hai, main is marchent gild ka pramukh hoon.

tum, mere dost, ek bhaagyashaalee vyakti ho jisane viskaunt phelabarta kee najaren kheenchee."

jaise hee usane eltan ko dekha, naks kee aankhen khuleen, yah dekhane ke lie ki kya vah mazaak kar raha tha.

"haan, mere dost, viskaunt phelabarta aapako apane kaarmik ladake ke khilaune ke roop mein lena chaahate hain," eltan ne khulaasa kiya aur naks kee aankhen us jhatake ko chhipa nahin sakeen jo vah anubhav kar raha tha.

bhaad mein jao haan!
 

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naks ke hairaan nazar ko dekhakar eltan ne santosh mein sir hilaaya aur savaal kiya,

"achchha, kya aap viskaunt phelabarta se milane ke lie taiyaar hain?"

"beshak! lekin kya mujhe pahale khud ko taiyaar nahin kar lena chaahie aur apana sarvashreshth dikhane ke lie kuchh upayukt kapade nahin khareedane chaahie?" naks ne savaal kiya, pahale se hee viskaunt phelabarta ke achchhe paksh mein aane ke tareekon ke baare mein soch raha tha.

vah ek achchha jigolo tha.

praakrtik jitana achchha.

naks ne jo kaha, use sunakar eltan ne naks ke tejasvee chehare par nazar daalee aur usake honth phadakane lage.

phir bhee, ek peshevar vyaapaaree ke roop mein, unhonne apanee abhivyakti ko chhupaaya aur javaab diya, "nahin, mujhe nahin lagata ki aapako aisa karana chaahie. viskaunt phelabarta jaisee mahila ke paas kamajor ladakon ke lie kuchh hai, aap jaanate hain ki mera kya matalab hai? aapaka kamajor dikhane vaala shareer un ghise-pite dheele vastron ke saath milakar vah aur adhik utsaahit ho jaegee."

"main dekh raha hoon" naks ne gambheerata se sir hilaaya. usake haav-bhaav se aisa lag raha tha jaise vah kuchh gambheer soch raha ho.

"theek hai, ham viskaunt ko pahale se jyaada intajaar nahin karaate hain" eltan ne taalee bajaate hue kaha aur sabhee ko taiyaar hone ke lie daudaaya.
 

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ek ghante kee gaadee kee savaaree ke baad, naks ne khud ko ek mahila ke saamane paaya.

jaise hee mahila kee nazar naks par padee, usakee aankhon mein chamak aa gaee aur usake chehare par ek badee see muskaan aa gaee.

"namaskaar, naks, mera naam phelabarta elve hai, main vah tha jisane tumhen marchent gild se khareeda tha. ab se, tum yahaan mere saath rahogee aur jo main kahoon vahee karogee, theek hai?

vhaataviveer ~ main kahata hoon, theek hai?"

doosaree or, naks abhee bhee khada tha aur apane chehare par ek goonga nazar ke saath aage dekh raha tha.

usakee teevr aur tarah-tarah kee khoee huee nigaahon ko dekhate hue, viskaunt thoda sharama gaya, isase pahale ki usane poochha, "kya aapake koee prashn hain?"

"..." naks chup rahee.

yah dekhakar kamare mein maujood sabhee logon kee bhauhen tan gaeen lekin naks ko isase koee phark nahin pada.

usane kamare mein maujood kisee kee bhee paravaah nahin kee, yahaan tak ki viskaunt phelabarta kee bhee nahin. abhee, vah skreen kee jaanch karane mein vyast tha jo usakee aankhon ke saamane dikhaee de raha tha aur saath hee usake sir ke andar ek ding dhvani bhee thee.

[ding]

[pahala lakshy pata chala]

[supreem harem god sistam kee shuruaat]

[sarvochch harem dev pranaalee ko mejabaan kee aatma se jodana]

[kanekshan poora hua]

[charitr soochana] rꪖꪕᦔꪖꪕꪫꪣꫀꪶ

[naam: naks liendar]

[aayu: 18]

[man khetee: nashvar.]

[shaareerik khetee: nashvar. ]

[jaati: maanav]

[pratibha: kam]

[elaveeel:1]

[himaachal pradesh: 100/100]

[esateeaar: 6]

[ejeeel: 8]

[veeaeetee: 10]

[esateeem: 7]

[aaeeenatee: 9]

[deeeeeph: 5]

[rikt bindu: 10]

(ek saamaany maanav kee seema: 10)

[kshamata: laalasa sparsh]

[laalasa sparsh: aapaka sparsh ek mahila ko aur adhik ke lie laalasa dega aur vah kabhee bhee kisee aur ke dvaara yaun santusht nahin hogee. jitana adhik samay aap kisee mahila ke saath bitaate hain, prabhaav utana hee majaboot hota jaata hai.]

[harem sadasy: koee nahin]

[praarambhik bonas ke roop mein, sistam mejabaan ko 10 rikt bindu pradaan karega jise vah apane kisee bhee aankade mein jod sakata hai]

[supreem harem god sistam saphalataapoorvak sthaapit kiya gaya hai. ab se, mejabaan us mahila kee shakti, pratibha, kaaya aur rakt rekha praapt kar sakata hai jise vah chodata hai. lakshy jitana majaboot hoga, mejabaan ko utana hee adhik laabh hoga...]

jitana adhik vah padhata tha, utana hee behatar hota jaata tha, usakee aankhon mein ek asaamaany chamak aa jaatee thee.

aakhirakaar, aakhirakaar, mujhe mera mil gaya ab mujhe wahi ghisi piti life nahi jini padegi
 
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ant mein, aakhirakaar, mujhe mera dhokha mil gaya! ab mujhe saamaany jeevan nahin jeena hai!

vah bheetar se aanandit hua.

"naks!"

achaanak, usane kisee ko apana naam chillaate hue suna aur usake vichaar jaldee se prthvee par laut aae.

"aah, vaah- kya?" usane poochha ki usakee nigaah aakhirakaar viskaunt phelabarta par padee.

"aap kya soch rahe hain ki itana mahatvapoorn hai ki aapako mujhe anadekha karane kee himmat thee?" viskaunt ne naks kee or dekhate hue savaal kiya.

"aah, yoo-um, es-soree, aaee-aaee em soree. mainne-mainne kabhee kisee ko aapake jitana sundar nahin dekha-to main kho gaya ..." usane ajeeb tarah se apane chehare par ek halka sa blash ke saath javaab diya.

vaastavik chikana.

usaka javaab ek aakarshan kee tarah kaam karata tha kyonki viskaunt kee nazar chakaachaundh se garm nazar mein badal gaee thee.

haah! yah gem aasaan mod par hai

naks ne andar hee andar socha aur usakee abhivyakti mein badalaav dekha.

lekin vah jhooth nahin bol raha tha, jab usane use dekha to vah vaakee hairaan rah gaya.

usane socha tha ki vah kisee motee badasoorat mahila kee tarah hogee, lekin vah... yaar, vah ek emaeeeleph ka ek utkrsht udaaharan thee! rꪖꪕᦔꪖꪕꪫꪣꫀꪶ

usaka paraphekt ovaraglaas phigar utana hee aakarshak tha jitana ki vah kabhee bhee mil sakata tha, naks madad nahin kar sakata tha, lekin un doodhiya stanon par nazar daalen jo ek saamaany veb ke lie naak se khoon bahane ke lie paryaapt the. usake reven baal naks se mel khaate the, jabaki usakee kaalee aankhen ek rasaatal kee tarah gaharee theen. usakee patalee bhauhen, chhotee naak aur cheree jaise laal aur susvaadu honth use aakarshak sakkubas kee tarah bana rahe the.

usane yah bhee socha ki usake jaisee mahila ko ladake ka khilauna kyon chaahie aur vah isake lie bhugataan bhee kyon karegee? billee! log khud bhugataan karenge agar unhen usaka ladaka khilauna banane ka mauka mil sakata hai.

"yah koee samasya nahin hai, abhee se saavadhaan rahen.

theek hai, main aapase phir poochhoonga, kya aap apana saamaany jeevan chhodane aur jeevan bhar mere saath rahane ke lie taiyaar hain?"

"beshak!"

haalaanki yah javaab pahale jaisa hee tha, lekin agar gaharaee se dekha jae to usakee sunaharee aankhon mein ek alag hee chamak thee.

ek shikaaree kee nazar.

pahale, vah sirph ek ladaka khilauna banana chaahata tha taaki vah ek sthir jeevan jee sake jabaki vah kuchh samay kisee ke saath bitaata hai lekin ab…

ab vah yahaan sirph ek ladaka khilauna ya jigolo banane ke lie nahin tha, ab vah phelabarta naamak is mahila ko jeetana chaahata tha.

unhonne apanee haasyaaspad roop se prabal kshamata, [laalasa sparsh] par nazar daalee, aur adhik mahilaon ko paane aur apanee shakti badhaane ke vibhinn tareekon ke baare mein socha.

trak-kun, mere dost! main nishchit roop se gambheer tha jab mainne kaha ki main chaahata hoon ki tum mujhe maaro! haahaaha!
 

Vickydoner1994

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"haaha..."

naks ne raahat kee saans lee jab vah ek naram bistar par baith gaya aur chaaron or dekha, abhee vah ek nae kamare mein tha jo usake pichhale ghise-pite kamare se bilkul alag tha. yah spasht tha ki viskaunt ne usake saath kaaphee achchha vyavahaar kiya.

apane saamane sistam skreen par nazar daalate hee naks ne apana sir hila diya.

[smrti khand ka pata chala, kya aap ise punah praapt karana chaahenge?]

[laagat: 10 khaalee ank]

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yah mere poorvavartee kee yaaden honee chaahie ... kya mujhe ise punah praapt karana chaahie? mamm, lekin kya yah vaastav mein isake laayak hai? mera matalab hai ki vah sirph koee nahin tha vah kya jaan sakata tha jo meree madad kar sakata hai? nishchit roop se yah adhik suvidhaajanak hoga lekin kya mujhe 10 blaink point kharch karane chaahie? mere paas abhee sabhee khaalee bindu hain.

isake alaava, mujhe nahin pata ki in rikt binduon kee drop dar kya hai, isalie main unaka mooly nahin jaanata…

lekin tantr ke anusaar ek saamaany maanav kee ek nishchit visheshata ke lie seema 10 hai, jisaka arth hai ki yadi main taakat par sabhee rikt binduon ko jod doon, to yah saamaany manushyon kee tulana mein seedhe meree taakat ko doguna kar sakata hai. yah nishchit roop se ek bahut bada laabh hai, haan, main in keematee rikt binduon ko kisee aisee cheez par barbaad nahin kar sakata jisake baare mein main anishchit hoon.

ab takaneekee roop se, mujhe in rikt binduon ko sahejana chaahie aur unhen kisee any visheshata mein nahin jodana chaahie taaki main kamajor hone ke dauraan aur adhik ank pees sakoon aur in binduon ko jod sakoon jab main unhen aur haasil nahin kar sakata.

lekin yah tabhee achchha lagata hai jab yah ek veediyo gem ho, aur mera jeevan nishchit roop se ek nahin hai.

theek hai, mainne phaisala kiya hai, main in binduon ko abhee jodoonga aur baad mein praapt hone vaale ankon ko surakshit rakhoonga.

theek hai, isake baare mein sochane ke lie jyaada kuchh nahin hai, chapalata par 6 ank, sahanashakti par 4 ank.

naks ne mahasoos kiya ki usake shareer mein oorja kee ek anokhee dhaara bah rahee hai, achaanak use laga ki usaka shareer pahale se kaaphee halka ho gaya hai, use laga ki vah daud mein duniya ke sabase tej dhaavak ko aasaanee se pachhaad sakata hai. yah ek hee samay mein ajeeb aur achchha laga.
 
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