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Creepy story

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To gys meri 2 story pehle se chal Rahi Hain
ye kahani bhi mai shuru kar Raha hon jo ki aek scary story hogi is par episode ke bare me kuch nahi keh sakta
koi timing nahi lekin kahani jald puri ho jayegi ye jyada badi nhi hogi na short story hogi.
abhi mai free hon to mai complete ka r lunga iske sath sabhi stories bhi.

YE kahani howl movie se thori si milti jhulti hogi lekin kahani usse blikul hi different hai .

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Creepy story

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EPisode 1st.
Mumbai station.
raat ke 9 baj rahe they station par bhut bheed thi tabhi computer se aek announcement hoti hai.
yatri garh kirpya dhyan de gadi number 17575 Goa se mumbai platform number 2 par agayi hai .
dusri baar yahi same announcement hoti hai aur james kamar sidhi karte hue gadi se utar jata hai kyoki ab uski shift khatm ho chuki thi.
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ting ting .
PHone bajne par James call pic karta hai.
James : ha mom .
MOm: kab Tak Ghar aarhe ho.
James: mom mujhe aapki awaz nhi arahai hai mai andar jakar call karta hon.
kehte hue James call cut krke station ke us hisse me ata hai Jahan se ticket milte Hain akar James usme enrty feel karne lagta hai.
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James peshe se aek tt hai khubsurat magar normal sharir wala subah 10 baje se uski duty shuru hoti hai aur raat 10 baje hi apne ghar wapas aata hai James ki age is samay 23 saal hai James ko tt ki naukri join kiye hue bas 2 hi mahine hue hain isliye James tt ki choti rank par hi tainat hai..james ki family ke bare me aage pta chalega.
entry fill karke James station ke locker room me jata hai jahan tt apna saman rakhte hain.
locker room me akar aek locker kholkar James apna tt wala coat utarne lagta hai.
mat utaro ise James Aaj raat tumhe night duty par Jana hai.
aek higher rank wale tt ne James se kaha.
is bhosdiwale Ram Prasad ko mujh par oder chalane ke siwa kuch nhi ata.ram Prasad ki bat sunkar James man me galiyan Dene lagta hai.
James : sir meri duty khatm ho chuki hai mom mera Ghar wait kar rahi hongi.
Ram Prasad; mom ko call karke bata Do isme kya badi baat hai.
James: mai hi kyon sir.
Ram parsad : don't worry James jis train me tum Jaa rahe ho ye special train hai iska kiraya jyada log afford nhi kar sakte to tumhe koi problem nhi hogi 4 hi to dibbe hain.
James : oshiano 53728
Ram parsad : ha kuch der me niklegi Chale jana.
oshiano aek special train thi jisme sirf bhut rich log hi Safar karte they iska kiraya airoplane jitna tha char dabbe they fifth engine tha kul milakar panch.
man mar kar James fir apna coat pahen leta hai.aur locker ko band kar deta hai.
pure din ke Safar se James buri tarah se thak Gaya tha awaj se hi James ki thakan ka saaf pta chal Raha tha.
phone nikal kar James number dekhte hue apni mom ko call laga deta hai.dusri ring par call pic hoti hai.
James: mom mai aaj raat Ghar nhi aunga.
mom: Aaj fir duty hai beta.
James : han mom .
mom: kaha jaoge.
James: Goa mom acha mom rakhta hon.
mom : suno james.konsi train se Jaa rahe ho.
James : oshiano 53728.
mom : thik hai beta apna dhyan rakhna...
James : bye mom see you soon..kehkar James call cut kar deta hai.
train khadi thi to James locker room se bahar aakar aek stall par jata hai.
James : aek chaye 2 sandwich.
order dekar James baith jata hai kuch der baad aek ladka chaye aur sandwich lakar James ke pass rakh deta hai.
aek hath se chaye dusre se sandwich pakad kar James khane lagta hai.
khana khatm karke wo stall ke pass ata hai.
James : kitne hue.
stall wala: kya sahib Jane do sahab log se Paisa lekar mujhe apna stall band nhi karana hai.
James ghurkar: kitna hua.
stall wala : koi baat nhi sahab.
James Bina kuch kahe purse me se 100 ka note nikal kar stall par rakh deta hai.
stall wala : sahab ye jyada Hain mai chutte deta hon.
James sunkar ansuna karte hue platform number 4 ki taraf chal deta hai jahan oshiano train khadi thi.
James ka kaam itna acha nhi tha lekin James morality par believe karta haram khane se bachta tha.
train ke last dabbe me James ata hai Jo asal me kitchen aur staff ka compartment tha.
last dabbe se chalte hue James dabba number 3 me aata Hai jahan koi passenger nhi tha.
usse nikalkar James dabba number 2 me aata hai jahan 10 passenger baithe they jinme AEK old couple tha 3 young ladke unke sath 2 ladkiyan dekhne se lag raha tha wo friends hai aur Goa ghumne Jaa rahe hain. Unse thodi duri par aek aadmi baitha tha jiske aek hath me phone tha aur pass hi uske aek kala bag rakha tha dekhne se wo koi bada business men lag raha tha.
usse agli seat par aek 32 saal ki aurat baithi thi.aur unse door aek chota ladka aur aek aurat thi Jo dekhne me maa aur beta lag rahe they .
train kab Tak chalegi.
us 30 saal ki aurat ne pucha.
James : abhi mai driver se puch kar announcement karunga vaise iski timing 9: 52 pm hai.
aurat : bas 10 minutes reh Gaye Hain.
1 St dabbe me kareeb 22 ke ass pass passenger baithe they.
UNko ignore karke James first dabbe ke shuru me ata hai aur train ke telephone se driver ko call karta hai.
James : kitna samay lagega train chalne me.
driver : bas five minutes.


Telephone rakh kar James transmetre ke pass ata hai.

James : train ab se kuch minutes baad chalne wali hai sabhi passengers apne apne ticket nikal kar rakhe .

pooooooo.....

AEk wisal ke baad train chal padti hai .

James chalte hue first compartment me aata hai aur chalte hue ticket mangta hai.

aek seat par char log baithe hote Hain James pehle unhi ke pass aata hai.

James : ticket Plz..
aek admi ke sath waki teeno bhi apne tickets nikal kar James ko de dete Hain.

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JAmes unhe check karne lagta hai.


check karke James sabke tickets wapas karke agli seat par aata hai jahan aek ladki phone par baat kar rahi hoti hai.

ladki : ha yar mai party me aayi thi bhut maza aya tha abhi mai Goa Jaa Rahi hon.

james: excuse me mam ticket plz..

ladki: kya sach me...wow ab to aur maza ayega.ladki James ko ignore kar phone par hi tej awaz me baat kiye Jaa Rahi thi.

James : ticket plz..

Ladki: wait ye tt mujhe pareshan karne agaya .is bar ladki James ki awaz sun leti hai aur ticket nikal kar use de deti hai.

LAdki: ha yar wo tt tickets check kar Raha isko lagta hai mai ese hi bagair tickets ke baithi hon.

James ka is trah ke passenger se Roz samna hota hai isliye wo ladki ko ticket dekar aage badh jata hai
ticket par hi James ko ladki ka naam padne ko mil jata hai Jo tha Ramya.

pass ki seat par aek old couple baithe dikhte hain James ko.

James : ticket plz.

OLd couple ne pehle hi tickets nikale rakhe hote Hain isliye wo James ko tickets de dete Hain.

James naam parte hue : praksh Sharma parwati Sharma.

JAmes tickets check karke wapas lauta deta hai.


Parwati Sharma: bete is larki ki tej awaz se mere husband ko problem ho Rahi hai kya tum use chup Kara sakte ho.

James sar hilakar usi ladki ke pass aata hai.
James: excuse me mam aap thodi kam awaz me baat kar lengi in old couple ko problem ho Rahi hai.

Ramya: kya hai ab kyo aaye khubsurat ladki dekhi nhi line Marne aagaye.. .

James ladki ko ignore kar fir apna question repeat karta hai.


RAmya : unse kaho kahin aur jakar baith Jaye.

James : mam aapko dhire bolna hoga apni seat change karni hogi.

Ramya : wait ye tt fir agaya hai..phone pe kehkar Ramya James ko dekhne lagti hai...dekho agar tumne ab mujhse batamizi ki to abhi tumhari report kar dungi get lost.

parwati: rehne do beta ham piche jakar baith jate Hain.

James : rukiye mai apki help karta hon.


Jhagra barta dekh old lady apne husband ke sath piche baith jati hai James bhi unki help karta hai.

unhe bithakar James fir tickets check karne lagta hai.

aek mota aadmi burger khate hue mobile chala Raha tha James uske pass aata hai.

James : ticket plz.

mota admi : meri jeb me se nikal lo.khate hue wo uth jata hai James uski jeb me se tickets nikal kar check karke use lauta deta hai aur wahin khada ho jata hai.


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JAmes jaise hi jane ko hota hai uske samne aek food wali larki aajati hai.
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James : tumhari bhi duty hai.

ladki : ha us ram Prasad ne fasa diya.

ye ladki sanjana Mehta hai middle class family se sanjana ko man hi man James pasand karta tha lekin kabhi keh nahi paya sanjana 22 year old hai sanjana special trains me hostess ka kaam karti hai sanjana dikhne me khubsurat thi isliye use ye job asani se mil gayi.

sanjana: bhukh lagi hai tumhe.

James : nhi kuch der pehle hi sandwich khaye they.

muskurate hue dono apni apni side chale jate Hain.

James aage jakar tickets check karne lagta hai aur sanjana food Dene lagti hai.

sanjana : food ..aapko kuch chahiye sir.

mujhe ice cream chahiye..

sanjana: thando me ice cream nhi milti..lekin mere pass tumhare liye chocolate hai.

mujhe pizza chahiye..usi mote admi ne kaha.

Sanjana chocolate dete hue : pizza nhi hai sir burger sandwich mil jayega.

mota admi : do burger do sandwich de do.




James tickets check karte hue 2 ladkio ke pass ata hai Jo magzine se chahera chupaye use padh Rahi thi.

James : ticket plz... excuse me mam ticket plz...

ladki : nhi hai .Bina magzine hataye ladki ne jawab Diya.

James : fir aapko mam fine bharna hoga..mam aap ticket dijiye..James ne dusri ladki se kaha..

ladki 2: mere pass bhi nahi hai.

James : mam aapko fine bharna hoga warna agle station par aapko security ke hawale kar Diya jayega... ticket ke 34 k aur 6 thousand fine aap dono ke total 40 hazar hue Hain fine ke.

ladki 1: himmat hai tum me itni jo hame security ke hawale karoge abhi ruko mai apni boss ko call karti hon.

awaz James ko Jani pehchani lagti hai aur wo apne sar par hath rakh leta hai.


Ladki 1: ye lo baat Karo meri boss se ..kehkar ladki magzine face se hata deti hai aur khilkhila kar hasne lagti hai.

James phone leta hai.

James : ji kahiye..

James : mam in dono ko fine bharna hoga.

aurat: Jo Maine tumhe itna bada Kiya paal posh ke uska ye sila doge tum meri hi betio se fine loge.

James : kya mom kam se kam tickets lekar to bhejti kisi ko pta chal gaya to meri naukri khatre me padh jayegi.

mom : kuch nhi hoga.. thodi bachat to ham bhi kar sakte Hain dono Goa Jaa Rahi hai raste bhar khyal rakhna.

ye dono ladkiyan James ki hi behne thi badi ladki ka naam julia hai Jo James se badi hai aur Dr.hai dikhne me behad sundar

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.choti ladki jenna hai Jo modelling karti hai.

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BAat karke James phone deta hai.

Julia: ab bhi ticket chahiye..aur dono behne khilkhila kar hasne lagti Hain.

James : didi kam se kam ticket to le leti acha kyo jaa Rahi Hain Goa.

Julia : meri Dr. Ki training hai aek week ki fir Mai Dr. Ban jaungi.

JAmes : aur ye..

dono chup ho jati Hain thoda rukkar julia jawab deti hai.

Julia : James naraz nhi hona Jenna ka shoot hai goa me.

Julia ki baat sunkar James gusse me jenna ko dekhne lagta hai James ko gusse me dekh Jenna nazre niche kar leti hai .

James : mere sath subah tum wapas Mumbai chalogi aayi baat samjh me...

jenna : mummy aur didi se permission le li hai Maine .

Julia : kyo Dara rahe ho James..kab se kosish kar rhi thi bechari ab jakar chance Mila hai.

James : iska wahan chi..two piece me photoshoot hoga kya mai ye dekh paunga shayad nude bhi ho.

jenna : to kya hua ankhe band kar lena apni...sab karti hai meri friends ke Bhai khud apni behno ko bhejte hain shoot par wo actress ban gayi aur aapki wajah se mai wahi ki wahi reh gayi..

chatakkkk...

jenna ke jawab se James gusse me uske face par thappar Marta hai.

James : wo dalali karte Hain apni behno ki tu chahti hai mai bhi ye karun..




Julia : James dfa ho jao yahan se..Jenna ko rota dekh Julia ne gusse me kaha.


James aek khuddar ladka tha wo ye bilkul bardast nhi kar sakta tha uski behne modelling kare.


GUsse me James aage badh jata hai.

TIsre compartment me jyada log nhi they.

James pehle buisness men ke pass aata hai.
James : tickets plz.

Tumhe us ladki ko marna nhi chahiye tha shayad tumhara koi rishta hai unse.buisnesmen ne ticket dete hue kaha.


shise se use us agle compartment ke passenger dikh rahe they isiliye usne James ko apni behno se ladte dekh liya tha.

Chandra Shekhar.ticket check karte hue James ne uska naam pada.

James ticket dete hue : wo meri behne hain.

Chandra : ladkiyan bhut nazuk hoti hai inse pyar se deal karni chahiye..dekho dost ladkiyo ko jis kam se rokoge askarke ye wahi kaam karengi inse bas pyar se hi deal ki jaa sakti hai.Chandra ki bhari awaz ansuni karte hue James aek aurat ke pass aata hai Jo Chandra ko hi dekh rahi thi.


James : ticket plz..

aurat apna ticket nikal kar James ko deti hai.

vaishnavi Dixit James ne us lady ka naam pada .ticket check karke James use wapas kar deta hai.

vaishnavi: shakal se hi kamina lag raha hai ye..


JAmes aek aur old couple ke pass aata hai.


James : tickets plz.

mere pass aaiye ye hamare sath hain..James ko us couple ke piche se awaz aati hai.

james unke pass jata hai wo dono aek newly married couple lag rahe they.wo aek ladka aur ladki thi ladki ke face par mask tha aur ladka dikhne me behad hi Sundar tha.

ticket lekar James use dekhne lagta hai.

Ziyan ,Natasha ,Eddie aur Nancy ۔ziyan aur Natasha young couples they aur old couple Eddie aur Nancy they۔

james: aapke parents Hain wo۔

natasha : ji mere parents Hain aur ye mere husband.

james samajh jata hai is ziyan ke wo dono sas sasur hain.

aage james AEK lady aur uske 8 saal ke bete ke pass aata hai.ticket lekar James use check karne lagta hai.

arshita, Rohan.ladke ki Maa ka naam arshita tha ladke ka Rohan.


FIr chalte hue James huddang macha rahe 3 boyz jinke naam hain channi singh , dilbagh Singh aur Arman Khan.

channi : oye balle balle kya gal kahi khub beach par dhamal machayenge ..

dilbagh : mai to aek angrejan ko fasaunga..

ladki : tumhara mooh na tod du maai.

james : ticket plz..

channi : chal Bai arman ticket de ina nu..

pancho ke tickets aek me hi they.

Tickets lekar James check karne lagta hai.pehle wo ladko ke naam padta hai fir ladkio ke pehli ladki ka naam tha jashan Kaur dusri ka harshita pandit.

james : aaaahhh...James ticket waps hi kar Raha tha itne me mota bargur khate nikalta hai aur James ki peeth par uska kandha lagta hai aur James ladkio par girta hai.

MOta : sorry sorry mai toilet jaa Raha hon.
channi dhime se: sale pehle kha le fir nikalna hahaha.
James khud ko sambhal kar khada hota hai.

james : us compartment me nahi hai washroom

mota : usme koi hai..


fir James aage badh jata hai..bache hue ticket check karne lagta hai.



harshita : chalo gys ab antakshari khele lekin Hindi song gane honge.
Dilbagh: hang ye thik rahega ese time bhi pass hoga.kya kehta hai channi..

channi : thik hai aja bai Arman.

arman: mai book padunga gys aur tumhe dekhunga.

harshita: tum judge ban jao Arman..

arman : thik hai.

CHanni: mai aur jashan harshita tum aur dilbagh.

jashan : mai nhi khel rahi gys..ye bhut old ho Gaya aao ham sab bhoot ki kahaniya sunaye aek dusre ko..

harshita : na baba na mujhe bhuto se bhut dar lagta hai.

arman : mai tumhe bachaunga...jashan tumhare piche..

jashan furti se piche ghum kar dekhti hai.

jashan : awwww very funny...mai nahi darne wali..

arman : race 3 ka Salman Khan..haha Maine daraya kab..bas mazak kar Raha hon.

jashan : I know bhut jaisa kuch nhi hota bas enjoyment ke liye kahi mai.

Dilbagh: Teri badi fikr hai harshita is Arman ko mai tumhe bachunga.

Arman : tang khichna band karega ab agar sach me bhoot aate hai to mai tujhe bhi bachaunga..

harshita : shut up gys chalo ab ham jahsan ki baat manege aur apni apni darawni kahani sunayenge shuru jashan tum karo..




aek akhiri ticket check karke James first compartment me aata hai.

jahan julia cofee aur sandwich sanjana se le Rahi thi.

julia : one coffee and a sandwich for her.

jenna : mujhe bhuk nhi hai.

julia : puri rat lag jayegi chalo le lo jaldi jaldi me ham Ghar se bhi kuch kha kar nhi aye.

jenna : mom ne mere bag me tiffin rakha hai use bhi kha lo aap lekin Mai nhi khaungi.

julia ko jenna ki tiffin ki bat sunkar bhut bura laga tha.ye sonchkar ki ye hostess na jane kya sonchti hogi uske bare me.

sanjana : foodie girls kuch chahiye aapko.

julia sanjana ki baton se Sharma jati hai.

James khade khade sab dekh Raha tha.

sanjana : kar liye check..

james : huhh..

sanjana : meri help karoge trali ko kitchen Tak pahuchane me.

james : kyo nhi..

sanjana: inhe dekar chalti hon.
samjana James ki behno ki baat kar Rahi thi.

julia : aap esa kare aek aur coffee aur aek sandwich de do.

Jenna : you can go I don't need.

sanjana muskura kar aankho se James ko apni pareshani batati hai.

James: sanjana nikal kar de do agar nhi khayi to fir ye aek aur thappar khayegi .

jenna : ab markar dekho Mai abhi train se kud jaungi..

sanjana ankho ke ishare se puchti hai kon hai ye
James bhi rukne ka kehkar coffee aur sandwich nikal kar jenna ke pass rakh deta hai.


JAmes : chup chap kha lo..acha I'm sorry ab nhi marunga lekin modelling ka khayal apne mind se nikal Dena.


kehkar James tralli ko aage le Jane me sanjana ki help krne lagta hai.


akhiri bogie kitchen me akar sanjana sab chize sat karne lagti hai.

james dekhta hai to kafi khana hota hai kitchen me.

sanjana : kon thi wo.

james : wo meri behne Hain badi wali Julia aur choti wali jenna.


sanjana : khubsurat hai dono..kya hua unse kuch kaha tumne.

james : hmm Jenna modling karna chahti hai is par Maine use thappar mar Diya... isliye naraz hai.


Sanjana : pyar se samjhana chahiye tha ..khair tum jao kaam khatm karke mai bhi aati hon.


james kitchen se nikal jata hai.


aur chalte hue first compartment me aata hai.


jenna ko dekhkar James uske pass aakar baith jata hai sandwich aur coffee vaisi hi rakhi hoti hai.

itne me mota aadmi toilet se nikal kar aata hai aur James se 2 seat dur baithkar khane lagta hai .

james : I'm sorry jenna tumhe marna nhi chahiye tha ...tum janti ho modelling ki Kali dunia ke bare me ..

jenna : mujhe tumhare lecture nhi sunne di inse kaho chale jaye yahan se nhi to Mai chikhne lagungi.

Julia: jao James yahan se..

apna sa mooh lekar James uth jata hai.



aur aage akar let jata hai .

lete lete hi James ki ankh lag jati hai.



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khiccccccccc.........


train ke rukne ki awaz se James ki aankh khulti hai.




james uthkar transmeter ke pass ata hai.


james transmetre lekar announcement karne lagta hai.

JAmes : sab log apni apni jagah par baithe rahe Mai abhi driver se train ke bare me puchkar aapko inform karta hon.


transmetre rakh kar James khidki se bahar jhankta hai..

bahar bhut hi Ghana jungle tha..James sonch raha tha wo Kai bar din me idhar se guzra lekin usne kbhi aesa khaufnak itna darawna jungle nahi dekha..

KHidki band karke James driver ko call krta hai.


JAmes : kya hua train kaise ruk gayi..

driver : shayd kahin se leakage ho Raha hai mai check karke abhi thik karta hon tab Tak sabhi passengers ko bahar mat nikalne Dena .


kehkar driver..aek torch lekar pehle dabbe se nikal kar train ke niche leakage dekhne lagta hai.


kuch na pakar wo dusre dabbe ki taraf badh jata hai..


chrrr.....

patto ki khadkhat sun kar driver pichey mud kar dekhta hai.

kuch na pakar wo fir leakage check karne lagta hai.

thik hone par wo aur piche jata hai.



4th dabbe ke pass akar wo jaise hi jhuk kar dekhta hai use oil leakage dikh jata hai..


wo hatho se jhuk kar wire aur pipe set karta lekin nhi hota..

Driver man me tape ka sonchkar apne dabbe ki taraf chal deta hai.


chalte hue jaise hi wo apne dabbe ke pass pahuchta hai use kisi ke hone ka ahsas hota hai.

driver piche mood kar dekhta hai.
dar aur khauf se uski aankhe fail jati Hain uske kadam bhari ho jate Hain...


driver : aaaaaaaaaaa......


driver ki aek chikh nikalti hai aur uski torch aur uski topi ussse chhut jati hai.




announcement karke James .sabke pass aata hai.


james : aap log panic na kare abhi driver leakage thik karne Gaye Hain kuch der me ham yahan se chal denge.


ramya : tumhari is khatara ko kya hua chalate kyo nahi.

JAmes : James mam kuch der intezar kare bas abhi chal denge.


itne me sanjana bhi ajati hai.

sanjana : kisi ko kuch khane ke liye chahiye..
koi jawab nhi deta to sanjana James ke pass akar baith jati hai


ramya : hello Ruchi mai hon Ramya...yar so Rahi thi is tt ki ye khatara band ho gayi bich jungle me soncha time pass ke liye tumse baat kar lon.

ramya : kya sach me bag me rakhi Hain.okay subah milte Hain bye..

CAll cut karke Ramya apne bag se sigrat ka packet nikalti hai.aur pine lagti hai
James ye dehkkar Ramya ke pass aata hai.

james : mam aap yahan sigrat nhi pii sakti ye rules ke against hai.



ramya : passengers ko is andhere jungle me rokna bhi rules ke against hai.kehkar Ramya dhuan james ke upar chhod deti hai.
James koi bahes nhi karna chahta tha isliye hontho me fasi sigrat lekar pairo se raund deta hai.

ramya : station aane de tujh par rape charges lagaungi.

Mai bhi Teri report karungi ki tu prostitute hai .julia jhagra barte dekh bich me akar boli.

julia : tt ne tujhe yahan dhanda karne se roka isliye tu us par jhute ilzam lagane lagi..

ramya : tu kon hai kyo hamare bich me arahai hai.

julia : bhai hai ye Mera..

ramya kuch nahi kehti man me galiyan dete hue baith jati hai.

james : chalo sab apni apni jagah par baith jao.


koi mujhe batayega yahan chal kya Raha hai aur ye train kyo is jungle me ruki hai.sannate ko chirti hui candra ki awaz aati hai.

james : kahin par leakage hai driver thik karne Gaya hai aap baithiye bas kuch der me ham niklenge.
oooooooooooonnnnnnnnn......

Ramya : kya tumne wo suni...wo...wo kya tha..Darke mare Ramya James se chipat jati hai.
jenna ki nind bhi is awaz se khul jati hai wo uthkar darte hue julia ke pass akar khadi ho jati hai.
James : dariye mat mam kisi bhediye ki awaz hai ham jungle me hai yahan bhediya hona aam baat hai.
kehkar James Ramya ko alag karta hai.
James : aap sab yahin rukiye mai driver se baat karke aata hon.
Kahkar james telephone ki taraf chal deta hai wahi par sanjana khadi hoti hai.
James Kai baar driver ko call karta hai.lekin driver call nhi uthata.
James : sanjana pichle compartment me jitne log hain un sabko yahan le aao.
sanjana : kya hua James sab thik hai.
James : ha Mai driver ko dekhta hon.
sanjana chali jati hai aur James gate kholkar bahar dekhne lagta hai.
use driver kahi nhi dikhta .
James Gate lock karke fir sabke pass ajata hai.
Kuch der me sanjana bhi piche se sabhi passengers ko le aati hai.
James count karta hai total 42 log they use aur sanjana ko laga kar 44.
tumhari kya baat Hui driver se .sannate ko chirti hui fir Chandra ki awaz aati hai.
James : aap sab yahi baithe train bas kuch der me chalne wali hai.
Chandra : kya matlab hai yahi baithe driver se tumhari kya baat hui ye batao.
James dhire se : wo response nahi kar Raha.
Chandra : hahaha to tum hame is bhayanak jungle me fasa kar keh rahe ho driver response nahi kar Raha... kahi tum kisi dakait se mile hue to nahi aur tumhra irada hame lutne ka to nahi aur driver tumhare waki sathio ko lene Gaya hai..
James : sir ab agar apne kuch kha to acha nahi hoga mai apni is naukri me khush hon ..aapki wajah se waki passengers panic ho rahe hain.
kya hua hai Bai kyo tang kar Raha hai tt nu.dilbagh bhid ko chirta hua James aur Chandra ke pass ata hai.
Chandra : sardar baith ja apni jagah par...dekho dost mai bas taunt mar Raha tha ...ham is ghane jungle me fas gaye hain aur hame ye bhi nahi pata ham kaha Hain.
Arman : tameez se baat Karo isse...kya hua hai sir train kyo ruki hai.
Chandra : dost ham sab fas chuke hai is jungle me aur driver gayab hai...subah meri bhut important meeting hai mujhe Goa har haal me pahuchna hai.
James tej awaz me : aap sab yahi apni apni seat par baithe mai check karke aata hon ki ham Kahan par hai fir jaisa hoga karenge.
ooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn...
aek khufnak chinghad fir nikalti hai.sab darkar aek dusre ko dekhne lagte Hain.
Ramya : kya tumne wo suni ..
James : ha Maine suni aap baithe aur sabhi log khidkio darwazo ko lock kar len.
JAmes : sanjana waki sabhi compartment ke khidki darwaze band karke jaldi yahan aaao...didi aap sanjana ke sath jao .
uncle kya train chalegi nahi kya ye monster ki awaz hai.rote hue Rohan ki awaz aati hai .
James : nahi beta ye kisi monster ki awaz nahi hai bas abhi ham nikalne Wale Hain.
JAmes sabko tasalliyan de Raha tha lekin andar hi andar wo bhi dar raa tha.
kehkar James Jane lagta hai.
James keys lekar driver ke dabbe me aata hai aur location dekhne lagta hai.
KAhi ki bhi location show nhi ho Rahi thi.
ye dekhkar James driver ke dabbe ki khidki darwaza bhi band kar deta hai.
fir James station par call lagta hai lekin network nhi hote.
James fir sabke pass ajata hai.
chandra : kuch pta chala ham Kahn par Hain.
James : nahi...
James: apna Mobile..
Chandra : mere phone me network nahi hai .
James waki sab se bhi puchta hai sab network issues se jujh rahe they.
JAshan : gys ye sach me horor train ban gayi hai ...ab harshita Tera kya hoga..
Arman : kyo Dara Rahi ho.
dilbagh : driver kitthe chala Gaya pai.
James : wo ajayega.
Chandra : to ham fas gaye hain..suno sab hame yahan baithe baithe un bhedio ke intezar ki jagah bahar nikal kar dekhna chahiye..
Dilbagh : thik gal hai ..
James : bahar khatra ho sakta hai hame train me hi rukna chahiye.
Chandra : mai to chala dosto jise sath aana hai aa sakta hai.
James : sabhi doors lock hain meri permission ke Bina yahan se koi nahi Jaa sakta .
Itne me old couples aate Hain.
old men: hame bahar chal kar madad talash karni chahiye yahan baithne se kuch nhi ho hoga ham sab ese hi fase rahenge.
Chnadra : mai is old men ki baat se puri tarah sehmat hon subah meri caroro ki meeting hai ham sab ka koi na koi jaruri kam hai agar yahan ruke rahe hamne khud apni help nhi ki to yahi fase rahenge...bachhe keys do samjhe.
James : aap log samjhte kyo nahi bahar khatra ho sakta hai abhi ham log aek jungle me hai yahan kuch bhi ho sakta hai hamare sath budhe bache sab hai.
Ramya : khatra to yahan bhi aasakta hai hame kosish karni chahiye shayad ass pass koi basti ho .
Ab tak sanjana Julia aur Jenna bhi agayi thi .
Jenna : ha hame bhar jakar help dekhni chahiye..
Julia dhire se : kya kar rhi hai Jenna.
jenna : didi kal Mera photoshoot hai.
Chandra : ab to tumhari behne bhi bahar Jane ke liye keh rahi hain..ghabrao mat young men kuch nahi hoga keys do mujhe..
James aek bar Jenna ko dekhta hai fir aage badh jata hai.
aek jagah se aek pistol aur 2 torch nikal kar sabke pass aata hai.
James : sab log line se chalenge bacche aur old log bich me honge jyada males piche aur 5 male aage...sanjana tum piche rehna.
sanjana ankho se ishara karti hai.james aek torch uski taraf badha deta hai.
gate par akae James keys se door kholta hai fir khud utarkar dhire dhire sabko utarne lagta hai.
jenna ke aate hi James uski kamar ko pakad kar use niche utarta hai.
James : yahi khadi raho .
fir James old couple ko utarta hai.
uske baad ziyan utarta hai pehle wo apne saas sasur ko utarta hai fir apni wife ko..
sabko utarkar James sath sath line se chalne ka kehta hai.
torch ki roshni me James aage aage chal Raha tha sab log uske piche piche...James aek Nazar jungle ko dekhta hai to dar se uske rongte khade ho jate hain.itne purane purane ped dekh kar James ko badi hairani hoti hai.
FIrst dabbe ke pass aakar James ki Nazar driver ke cap aur torch par padti hai pass hi use khun dikhta hai.
James chikh kar : train ki taraf bhago.....
James ki awaz me itna dar tha sab Bina kuch sonche samjhe train ki taraf bhagte hain...
oooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn...
fir wo darawni chinghad sunai deti hai..
is awaz ko sunkar sab jaldi jaldi dabbe me ghusne lagte Hain.
ab sab dar se buri tarah kanp rahe they..
James jaldi se piche se uthakar jenna ko andar karta hai fir khud khud chadhta hai.
meri madad Karo meri madad Karo..old couple ki awaz sunkar James door close karna band kar deta hai..
OLd admi door ke pass agaya tha lekin old lady piche reh gayi thi ..
admi ka hath pakad kar James use upar Lata hai.

Admi : meri wife piche reh gayi hai plz uski help Karo...
James gate par khade hokar old lady ko awaze lagane lagta hai.
James : jaldi kigiye...jaldi ...

Old lady dar se kanpte hue dhire dhire bhag Rahi thi..use apne pass kisi ke hone ka ahsas ho Raha tha dar se aur uski halat buri ho Rahi thi...old lady ko apne pass koi mehsus ho Raha tha ye ahas uske asab ko nidhal kar deta hai aur wo mooh ke bal girti hai.

Old lady ko gira dekhkar James niche jump kar deta hai .

bhagkar wo old lady ko uthata hai ab James ko bhi kisi ke hone ka ahsas ho Raha tha .

wo jaldi se old lady ko uthata hai aur bhagte hue use dabbe ki pehli Sidi par khada karke khud andar jata hai..andar se old lady ko pakad kar andar karna chahta hai old lady cheekh padti hai.....

old lady : aaaaaaaaaaa.....

samne use old lady ke piche James ko koi khada dikhta hai bas halki si hi uski jhalak James ko dikhti hai aur uski bhi Dil ki dharkane badh jati hai.aek hath se old lady ko andar karte hue James dusre se darwaza band karne lagta hai.

james : meri madad Karo...

kai log aur Julia sanjana ziyan Arman dilbagh aage aakar kuch gate band karne me James ki help karne lagte Hain kuch old lady ko andar khichne lagte hain ..gate band ho chuka tha bas old ka aek pair bahar tha.

koi use pakde bahar ko khich Raha tha old lady dard me chighad rahi thi..

kisi tarah se James gun nikal kar thode se khule hisse me tang ki disha me shoot karta hai aur waki sab jhatke se old lady ko andar khinch lete Hain aur James jaldi se door band karke use lock kar deta hai..


dhammmmm khirrrr....

pehle kisi ka hath door par lagta hai fir kisi ke nakhuno ke ghisne ki awaz aati hai.

OLd lday : aaaaaaaaaaaa...wo dard me chilla Rahi thi...


james : didi Inka ilaj karo ..

aurat ke ghutne ke niche ka hissa pura fat Gaya tha jisme se khun nikal raha tha pura Maas saaf dikhai de Raha tha.

CHandra : koi is budhiya ka mooh band Karo wo bahar hi hai ..


JUlia : mujhe first aid box do ..

sanjana bhag kar first aid box lene jati hai.
vaishnavi jaldi se old lady ka mooh band kar ti hai.

first aid box lakar sanjana julia ko deti hai..

Julia jaldi se old lady ke pehle tanke lagati hai fir use silkar Patti bandhne lagti hai .

ramya : kya tha wo tt...

james : Maine nhi dekha shayad koi bhediya tha ya tendua..


OLd lady : nahi...wo koi janwar nhi tha ....wo insano ki tarah tha uske unkglio jitne bade nakhun bhut bada chahera wo koi....aaaaa...
ITNA kehte hi old lady kanpne lagti hai aur use daura padhne lagta hai .
 
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Creepy story

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Gye first episode de diy hai padar batana kaisa hai.

ab aage kahani ap logo ke suggestions se badhegi.

kahani me kya chahte hai sirf kahani or intimacy bhi agar intimacy Dali to kahani badhi ho jayegi aur shayad dar ka ahasas na ho ..

kuch ahem bate sabhi kirdaro ke bare me past me hi pata chalega .
milte hai agle episode me
 
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Abhishek Kumar98

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Gye first episode de diy hai padar batana kaisa hai.

ab aage kahani ap logo ke suggestions se badhegi.

kahani me kya chahte hai sirf kahani or intimacy bhi agar intimacy Dali to kahani badhi ho jayegi aur shayad dar ka ahasas na ho ..

kuch ahem bate sabhi kirdaro ke bare me past me hi pata chalega .
milte hai agle episode me
Bhai James hero kardo aur sex wagaira bhi daalo aur long story kardo
 
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