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Hello dosto ye meri pheli story hai so please is story ko support karna. Ye story sachii aur kalpanik dono hai isliye please isse enjoy kare aur apna valuable suggestions zaror de taki main story ko aur behtar bana saku
Ye story ka main character yani main. ka naam jayesh hai pyaar se gharwale aur dost muje Jay bulate hai main abhi apni 12 standard ke exams de raha hu vaise mere ghar main Sirf do log hai. main aur meri mummy jinka naam hai minakshi meri mummy business women aur main unka ek Lauta beta jay. Aur mere papa nahi hai jab main 3 saal ka tha unki ek plane crash main death ho gayi tabhi se meri mummy ne akele muje bada kiya hai. Main Mumbai main Rehta hu apni mummy ke saath dost yaha par hai sab sahi chal raha hai aur aaj tho exams ka last din hai ab tho 4 mahine aur dhamal karunga dosto ke saath. Yahi Sochte Sochte main exams de kar ghar aa gaya.
Ghar par:
Ghar pe alag hi mahol tha sab saman Yaha vaha bikare pade the aur mummy phone pe kisiko chilla rahi thi lagta hai aaj kisi ka din kharab hai bhai...
[Minkashi - (gusse main) ek kaam tike se nahi karte ho tum log kuch nahi Hoga tumhara......call end]
Jay - mummy kya hua..
Minakshi - aa gaye tum...kaisa raha paper tumhara.
Jay - aacha tha.
Minakshi - dekhte hai.....chalo jaldi fresh hokar aa jao
Phir main apne kamre main jaakar fresh hokar niche aa gaya. Abhi mummy ka mood aacha lag raha tha aur mummy ne sab saman bhi tik se rakh diya tha.
Minakshi - chalo aao dining table par lunch kar lo
Jay - ok
(Main shanti se apna khana kha raha tha )
Minakshi - aur phir kya plan kiya hai chutti main kya kya karne hai.
Jay - vaise kuch plan tho kiya nahi hai. Shaam main Rohan se milunga phir dekte hai kya karna hai.
Minkashi - hmmmmm.
(Jay -Bas hmmmm kahi mummy ne dusra plan tho nahi banaya hai.....wow koi foreign trip hogi shayad )
Jay - kyu mummy kuch aur plan hai apna.
Minakshi - haa wohi baat karni thi tumse
Jay - haa boliye.
Minakshi- baat aisi hai ki tumhare exams hone ke vajase pichla ek mahina mera ek bhi kaam nahi hua hai...tho
Jay - haaa
Minakshi- main 1 mahina out of town rahungi.
Jay - tike
Minakshi - kya tike tum akele reh love.
Jay - haaa.
Minakshi -(tension main) kya haaa.
Jay - mazak kar raha hu......apne Kuch arrangements ki hogi.
Minakshi - sahi kaha.
Jay - batayiye kya arrangements hai.
Minakshi - tumhe apne Mama ke ghar Goa jana hoga.
Jay - what......nahi main nahi jaunga.
Minakshi - kyu kya hua.
Jay - mummy main unhe janta tak nahi hu bas phone 1-2 bar baat hui hai.
Minakshi - koi aur option nahi hai jay.
Jay - par...
Minakshi - par kya jay...tum nahi chahte ki main apne kaam main dhyan du.
Jay - hmmm
Minakshi - agar tum vaha rahoge mera tension kam ho jayega
Jay - (mummy tik keh rahi hai muje vaha jana chahiye) tike main karunga.
Minakshi - wow....phir kal 12 baje ki flight hai tumhari Goa ke liye.
Jay - kya apne tickets bhi nikal kar raki thi.
Minakshi - Muje pata tha tum maan jaoge.
Jay - ok
Phir maine apna lunch khatam kiya aur apne kamre main aa gaya. Vaise Goa aachi jagah hai par main Kabhi apni relatives se mila nahi hu tho vaha par adjust hone main muje thoda Time lagega. Par main manage kar lunga.
Thoda aaram karke main sham main 5 baje utkar fresh ho gaya aur Rohan se Milne uske ghar chala gaya. Rohan piche vali block main hi Rehta hai main uske ghar pahoch kar usko awaz di par koi response nahi Mila muje maine aur zor se awaz di phir bhi koi response nahi mila bhar se door lock bhi nahi tha shayad wo soo raha hoga.
Thoda Sochne ke baad mere dimag main ek idea aaya ki main uske bedroom ki khidki ke niche jaakar awaz lagta ye sochkar main uske ghar ke piche aa gaya. Kismat se uski bedroom ki window khuli thi main awaz lagane hi wala tha ki kuch bartan girne jaisi awaz aayi main awaz ki taraf dekha tho niche wala window khula tha awaz vaha se aayi thi. Main uss window ke karib gaya aur andar dekhne ki koshish karne laga aur andar ka nazara dekhkar mere Hosh udd gaye.
Andar Rohan ki behen tanya kisiko kiss kar rahi thi maine dhyan se dekha tho uss insan ka Chehra muje dhikayi diya ye tho harsh hai uska boyfriend par ye dono khule aam ghar par kiss kar rahe hai inhe kisika darr nahi kya.
Par unhe Aisa karte dekh muje aacha lag raha tha pata nahi kyu par maine Aisa mehsus nahi kiya tha main unhe dekte dekte kho chuka tha. Thodi der baad muje Hosh aaya ki ye main kya kar raha hu dost ki behen ki privacy main ghus raha hu ye galat hai aur main vaha se vapas front door pe aa gaya aur kuch der intezar karne laga shayad Rohan bahar se aa jaye par wo nahi aaya isliye main ghar aa gaya par mere dimag main wohi sab ghum raha tha tanya kaise apne boyfriend ko kiss kar rahi thi.
Maine apna mind divert karne ke liye TV dekhna shuru kiya Aise hi Time nikal gaya. Aaj maine jaldi khana kha liya kyuki muje packing bhi karni thi aur kal jaldi bhi utna hai muje.
Maine apne kamre main gaya aur packing karke jaldi sone chala gaya.....
Hello dosto ye meri pheli story hai so please is story ko support karna. Ye story sachii aur kalpanik dono hai isliye please isse enjoy kare aur apna valuable suggestions zaror de taki main story ko aur behtar bana saku
Ye story ka main character yani main. ka naam jayesh hai pyaar se gharwale aur dost muje Jay bulate hai main abhi apni 12 standard ke exams de raha hu vaise mere ghar main Sirf do log hai. main aur meri mummy jinka naam hai minakshi meri mummy business women aur main unka ek Lauta beta jay. Aur mere papa nahi hai jab main 3 saal ka tha unki ek plane crash main death ho gayi tabhi se meri mummy ne akele muje bada kiya hai. Main Mumbai main Rehta hu apni mummy ke saath dost yaha par hai sab sahi chal raha hai aur aaj tho exams ka last din hai ab tho 4 mahine aur dhamal karunga dosto ke saath. Yahi Sochte Sochte main exams de kar ghar aa gaya.
Ghar par:
Ghar pe alag hi mahol tha sab saman Yaha vaha bikare pade the aur mummy phone pe kisiko chilla rahi thi lagta hai aaj kisi ka din kharab hai bhai...
[Minkashi - (gusse main) ek kaam tike se nahi karte ho tum log kuch nahi Hoga tumhara......call end]
Jay - mummy kya hua..
Minakshi - aa gaye tum...kaisa raha paper tumhara.
Jay - aacha tha.
Minakshi - dekhte hai.....chalo jaldi fresh hokar aa jao
Phir main apne kamre main jaakar fresh hokar niche aa gaya. Abhi mummy ka mood aacha lag raha tha aur mummy ne sab saman bhi tik se rakh diya tha.
Minakshi - chalo aao dining table par lunch kar lo
Jay - ok
(Main shanti se apna khana kha raha tha )
Minakshi - aur phir kya plan kiya hai chutti main kya kya karne hai.
Jay - vaise kuch plan tho kiya nahi hai. Shaam main Rohan se milunga phir dekte hai kya karna hai.
Minkashi - hmmmmm.
(Jay -Bas hmmmm kahi mummy ne dusra plan tho nahi banaya hai.....wow koi foreign trip hogi shayad )
Jay - kyu mummy kuch aur plan hai apna.
Minakshi - haa wohi baat karni thi tumse
Jay - haa boliye.
Minakshi- baat aisi hai ki tumhare exams hone ke vajase pichla ek mahina mera ek bhi kaam nahi hua hai...tho
Jay - haaa
Minakshi- main 1 mahina out of town rahungi.
Jay - tike
Minakshi - kya tike tum akele reh love.
Jay - haaa.
Minakshi -(tension main) kya haaa.
Jay - mazak kar raha hu......apne Kuch arrangements ki hogi.
Minakshi - sahi kaha.
Jay - batayiye kya arrangements hai.
Minakshi - tumhe apne Mama ke ghar Goa jana hoga.
Jay - what......nahi main nahi jaunga.
Minakshi - kyu kya hua.
Jay - mummy main unhe janta tak nahi hu bas phone 1-2 bar baat hui hai.
Minakshi - koi aur option nahi hai jay.
Jay - par...
Minakshi - par kya jay...tum nahi chahte ki main apne kaam main dhyan du.
Jay - hmmm
Minakshi - agar tum vaha rahoge mera tension kam ho jayega
Jay - (mummy tik keh rahi hai muje vaha jana chahiye) tike main karunga.
Minakshi - wow....phir kal 12 baje ki flight hai tumhari Goa ke liye.
Jay - kya apne tickets bhi nikal kar raki thi.
Minakshi - Muje pata tha tum maan jaoge.
Jay - ok
Phir maine apna lunch khatam kiya aur apne kamre main aa gaya. Vaise Goa aachi jagah hai par main Kabhi apni relatives se mila nahi hu tho vaha par adjust hone main muje thoda Time lagega. Par main manage kar lunga.
Thoda aaram karke main sham main 5 baje utkar fresh ho gaya aur Rohan se Milne uske ghar chala gaya. Rohan piche vali block main hi Rehta hai main uske ghar pahoch kar usko awaz di par koi response nahi Mila muje maine aur zor se awaz di phir bhi koi response nahi mila bhar se door lock bhi nahi tha shayad wo soo raha hoga.
Thoda Sochne ke baad mere dimag main ek idea aaya ki main uske bedroom ki khidki ke niche jaakar awaz lagta ye sochkar main uske ghar ke piche aa gaya. Kismat se uski bedroom ki window khuli thi main awaz lagane hi wala tha ki kuch bartan girne jaisi awaz aayi main awaz ki taraf dekha tho niche wala window khula tha awaz vaha se aayi thi. Main uss window ke karib gaya aur andar dekhne ki koshish karne laga aur andar ka nazara dekhkar mere Hosh udd gaye.
Andar Rohan ki behen tanya kisiko kiss kar rahi thi maine dhyan se dekha tho uss insan ka Chehra muje dhikayi diya ye tho harsh hai uska boyfriend par ye dono khule aam ghar par kiss kar rahe hai inhe kisika darr nahi kya.
Par unhe Aisa karte dekh muje aacha lag raha tha pata nahi kyu par maine Aisa mehsus nahi kiya tha main unhe dekte dekte kho chuka tha. Thodi der baad muje Hosh aaya ki ye main kya kar raha hu dost ki behen ki privacy main ghus raha hu ye galat hai aur main vaha se vapas front door pe aa gaya aur kuch der intezar karne laga shayad Rohan bahar se aa jaye par wo nahi aaya isliye main ghar aa gaya par mere dimag main wohi sab ghum raha tha tanya kaise apne boyfriend ko kiss kar rahi thi.
Maine apna mind divert karne ke liye TV dekhna shuru kiya Aise hi Time nikal gaya. Aaj maine jaldi khana kha liya kyuki muje packing bhi karni thi aur kal jaldi bhi utna hai muje.
Maine apne kamre main gaya aur packing karke jaldi sone chala gaya.....
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