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Chalakmanus

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To chalo suru karte hai kahani ko.or koi disha dete hai isse.

Gaon se kahin dur ek ghar ke andar ek purus age lagbhag 40 saal kuch likh raha tha.uske face pe kapdo pe khun laga hua tha.uske hath bhi khun se sane the.eske bagal main ek laash thi .jisne khun nikal raha tha.wo brush ko khun main dubota or likhta.uske samne ek laltein jal rahi thi. Baki ghar andhere main tha.



Wo vykti likhne main itna vyast tha ki uska dyan kahi or ja hi nahi Raha tha.



Wo waha se uthta Ghar main tahalta or phir likhne baith jata jaise kuch yaad aa gaya ho.



Ye silsila kuch ghanto tak chala.



Or akhir kaar uske chehre par ek shaitani muskurahat aa gayi.



Aadmi-tum mujhe to maar doge par ye kitab ko nahi.


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Subah ke 4 baj gaye the.gaon ke log ab uth gaye the.sath hi iss gaon ke sarpanch bhi.



Tabhi uske pass do log aaye.



Aadmi-1-gupta g...gupta g... Ek or lash mili hai ladki ki.or khun ke nisan uss lekhak ke ghar ke pass bhi mile hai.



Gupta-ab humme or dairy nahi karni chahiye.or chal kar uske ghar ke talashi leni chahiye.uss din to wo mere hath se bach gaya tha.iss baar nahi bachega.



10 15 gaon Wale uss lekhak ke ghar ke pass aa gaye or aawaz dene lake.



Lekhar bahar nikla



lekhak-tum sab phir aa gaye.lagta hai iss baar saar tudwa ke hi jao....



Wo ista hi bol pata tha ki ek gaon Wale ne piche se uske sir pe ek dande se prakaar kiya.



Wo wahi jamin pe gir gaya or uske sar se khun nikalne laga.



Gaon waale ghar ke andar Gaye wahan unko ek laas mili jo kuch khai hui thi.ek gaon Wale ne uski pehchan gaon ki ek aurat ke roop main ki.



Ab gaon walon ka gussa satve aasmaan pe tha.ve log usko pakad ke ek ped se bandh dete hai.


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Gupta-bol tune aisha q

Kyu kiya.tumhe iss se kya mila.



Lekhak-(aankh band karke khuch sochta hai.or aankhe band kiye huye hi bolta hai)main to yahan santi ke talash main aaya tha.socha yahan achhi koi kahani likhunga.

(Phir us ne aankh khol di)Par tumhare gaon ki khuch auraton ne mujhe aisha bana diya.ek aadam khor.mera bus nahi chalta raat ke 11 se 12 ke bich.mujhe maans chahiye insani maans.

Or aisha mujhe banaya.tumhare hi gaon ke 5 aurat ne.



Gupta-kon hai wo pach aurat-

Lekhak- unko main maar chuka hu.or sath main kai nirdosh logon ko bhi.



Aur aisha bol kar ro joor joor se rone laga.phir ek dum se hasne laga.



Gupta-jala do iss saitan ..



Lekhak-tum mujhe to maar doge par main jaise bana tha us kala ka kya karoge.main uss kala ko ek kitab main likh diya hu.or usko kaise use karte hai wo dusri kitab.jo tumko kabhi nahi milegi.aur jisko milegi aur aisha bolke wo joor joor se hasne lagta hai.



Gaon Wale usse wahin jala dete hai.


Aapke feedback ka intejaar rahega.
 
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Abhishek Kumar98

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Update-1 (do kitab)

To chalo suru karte hai kahani ko.or koi disha dete hai isse.

Gaon se kahin dur ek ghar ke andar ek purus age lagbhag 40 saal kuch likh raha tha.uske face pe kapdo pe khun laga hua tha.uske hath bhi khun se sane the.eske bagal main ek laash thi .jisne khun nikal raha tha.wo brush ko khun main dubota or likhta.uske samne ek laltein jal rahi thi. Baki ghar andhere main tha.



Wo vykti likhne main itna vyast tha ki uska dyan kahi or ja hi nahi Raha tha.



Wo waha se uthta Ghar main tahalta or phir likhne baith jata jaise kuch yaad aa gaya ho.



Ye silsila kuch ghanto tak chala.



Or akhir kaar uske chehre par ek shaitani muskurahat aa gayi.



Aadmi-tum mujhe to maar doge par ye kitab ko nahi.


grok-image-1768466521207

Subah ke 4 baj gaye the.gaon ke log ab uth gaye the.sath hi iss gaon ke sarpanch bhi.



Tabhi uske pass do log aaye.



Aadmi-1-gupta g...gupta g... Ek or lash mili hai ladki ki.or khun ke nisan uss lekhak ke ghar ke pass bhi mile hai.



Gupta-ab humme or dairy nahi karni chahiye.or chal kar uske ghar ke talashi leni chahiye.uss din to wo mere hath se bach gaya tha.iss baar nahi bachega.



10 15 gaon Wale uss lekhak ke ghar ke pass aa gaye or aawaz dene lake.



Lekhar bahar nikla



lekhak-tum sab phir aa gaye.lagta hai iss baar saar tudwa ke hi jao....



Wo ista hi bol pata tha ki ek gaon Wale ne piche se uske sir pe ek dande se prakaar kiya.



Wo wahi jamin pe gir gaya or uske sar se khun nikalne laga.



Gaon waale ghar ke andar Gaye wahan unko ek laas mili jo kuch khai hui thi.ek gaon Wale ne uski pehchan gaon ki ek aurat ke roop main ki.



Ab gaon walon ka gussa satve aasmaan pe tha.ve log usko pakad ke ek ped se bandh dete hai.


grok-image-1768466769498


Gupta-bol tune aisha q

Kyu kiya.tumhe iss se kya mila.



Lekhak-(aankh band karke khuch sochta hai.or aankhe band kiye huye hi bolta hai)main to yahan santi ke talash main aaya tha.socha yahan achhi koi kahani likhunga.

(Phir us ne aankh khol di)Par tumhare gaon ki khuch auraton ne mujhe aisha bana diya.ek aadam khor.mera bus nahi chalta raat ke 11 se 12 ke bich.mujhe maans chahiye insani maans.

Or aisha mujhe banaya.tumhare hi gaon ke 5 aurat ne.



Gupta-kon hai wo pach aurat-

Lekhak- unko main maar chuka hu.or sath main kai nirdosh logon ko bhi.



Aur aisha bol kar ro joor joor se rone laga.phir ek dum se hasne laga.



Gupta-jala do iss saitan ..



Lekhak-tum mujhe to maar doge par main jaise bana tha us kala ka kya karoge.main uss kala ko ek kitab main likh diya hu.or usko kaise use karte hai wo dusri kitab.jo tumko kabhi nahi milegi.aur jisko milegi aur aisha bolke wo joor joor se hasne lagta hai.



Gaon Wale usse wahin jala dete hai.


Aapke feedback ka intejaar rahega.
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Chalakmanus

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Shaam ho chuki thi.ya kaho to hone wali thi.puss ka mahina chal raha tha. or Aaj dhup bhi nahi hi nakli thi.samay 5 bajne wala tha.andhera hone laga tha.



Do ladkiya gaon se khuch dur ek jungle ke najdeek bakriya chara rahi thi.



Ladki 1-are ab chalte hai, dekh na andhera hone wala hai.



Ladki 2- haan haan chal tu bakri ko ek jagan la . Main lakdiyo ka gathar bhandhti hu.thand bhi bohot hai.



Dono apne apne kaam main lag jate hai.kuch der main hi ladki 2 ne do gathar taiyaar kar liye the.

Lekin ladki 1 abhi bhi nahi aayi thi.



Ladki 2-(aawaj de ke)are kaha bur marwa rahi hai chhinar.hua nahi abhi tak.



Ladki 1-(khandhar ke pass se aawaj de ke boli)idhar sun na kutiya.aaj to nasib hi kharab hai.lagta hai ek bakri khandhar main chali gayi hai.



Ladki 2 bhag ke uske pass pahuchi.

Ladki 2- ab kya hoga.ghar main bohot maar padegi.

Ladki 1-kuch nahi hoga tu chal mere sath.hum andar ja ke dhundne ki kosish karte hai.



Ladki 2- na baba na main nahi jaungi.andar bhoot rehta hai.suna tha na wo kissa.main nahi jaungi.bhale hi maar kha lu.

Ladki 1-are chal na tujhse bada bhoot thode na hoga.tujhe dhekh ke hi bhag jaiga.



Ladki 2-(gusse se usse marti hui)main bhoot hu to tu kya hai chudel.har jagah mazak nahi karte hai.chal tu bolti hai to chal ke dekh lete hai.



Dono khandhar ke andar jane lage.ye lekhak ka hi ghar tha jo ab khandhar main tabdil ho gaya tha.

Kuch hisso ki chhat Tut gayi thi or andar ped nikal aaye the.

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Wo dono hath pakad ke andar jane lage.dar to dono ko lag raha tha.par or koi chara bhi to nahi tha.

Roshni dhere dhere khatam ho rahi thi.

Shaam raat se apna astitwa bachane ki ladai lad rahi thi.



Kuch andar jane main unhe bakri dikhai di.jo wahi ghass kha rahi thi.



Dono bhaag ke uske pass pahuche or ladki 2 ne usse goad main utha liya.



Ladki 2-kahan chala jati hai tu dekh yaha nahi aana phir.



Or phir wo log wahan se niklne lage.tabhi ek jor ki aawaj aayi kuch girne ki.wo log bhag ke waha pahuche to dekha ki ek kamre ki dewar gir gayi hai.

Or us gire huye deewar ke itton ke dhair main ek bartan hai jis pe hare rang ka kapda lapeta hua hai.



Ladki 1-are dekh na ye deewar gir gayi hai.



Ladki 2-haan or dekh na ye bartan sayad dewar ke andar tha.



Wo dono us bartan(jo ki ek pital ka kalas tha) ko dekhne lagte hai.usse utha ke kandhar ke baahar aa jate hai.



Ladki 1-are is main to lagta hai kuch hai.



Ladki 2-dekh to sahi kya hai.kahi koi khajana to nahi.



Tabhi kahi duur se siyar ki rone ki aawaj aane lagti hai



Aaauuuuuuuuuuu.....aaaauuuuuuuuuu...





Ladki 1-chal pehle ghar chal mujhe bohot dhar lag raha hai.



Ladki 2-par isse kya karen.ghar to le ke jainge to sab puchhenge.ki Kahan Mila.



Ladki 2- haan or hum bata bhi nahi sakte hai ki humko ye khandhar main mila tha.kyu na hum isse idhar hi chipa de.



Ladki 1-haan chal chipa dete hai.raat hone wali hai.



Dono milkar usse ek badi si jhaadi main chhipa dete hai.



Aur wahan se ghar ki tarf nikal padte hai.unka ghar yahi koi 1km dur hoga or kheton se ho kar gujarna padta tha.



Ladki 1-agar usmain sone ke sikke nikle to??

Ghar main kya kahenge???



Lakdi 2-pehle mil to jai.bol denge ki chulhe ke liye mitti khod rahe the to mila.



Dono baat kate karte ghar ke pass aa gaye the.



(Ab baari aati hai introduction ki)



Ladki 1-seema age 22 saal.

Sheetal -maa umra 40 saal ek vidhwa.

Rakesh- umra 20 saal (bhai).

Reema-umra 18 saal chhoti behen







Ladki 2-zeba umra 20 saal.

noor-age 24 saal badi behen shadi ho gayi hai.or abhi sasural main hai.

Rajiya-maa umra 50 ke aas pass.

Rafi-umra 60 saal.kheto main kaam karte hai.ganja ke saukhin.

Naaz-umra 18 chhoti behen.



Dono ka ghar agal bagal main hi tha.chhat dono ka Mila hua tha.



Rajiya chulhe pe khana bana rahi thi.



Rajiya-kahan reh gayi thi.itni raat ho gayi dekh to bus sareer se ghodi hote ja rahi hai dimag naam ki sayad koi chiz bhi nahi hai tum main.



Zeba-are ammi Kahan jyada time hua hai abhi to 6 hi baj rahe hai.or main aapko Kahan se ghodi dikhti hu.mujh se to jyda naaz ghodi huye ja rahi hai.dekh udhar phir se iski choli tight ho gayi hai.



Or dono hasne lagte hai.



Naaz sarma jati hai.



Ammi-naaz tu ja or abu ko bula la.dudh nikal denge gaye ka.samaye ho gaya hai.dekh ab bolne bhi lagi hai.



Naaz wahan se nikal ke abu ko bulane jati hai.





Dusri taraf







Ek alaaw jala hua tha kuch log wahan baithe huye the.jin main ek rafi bhi tha.
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Introduction



Bholu-purane sarpanch(gupta-g) ka nokar.55 60 ke pass umra hogi.

Zafar-naya sarpanch umra 40 saal(jab tak gupta g ka tabiyat thik tha tab tak to wahi sarpanch rahe phir unhone zafar ko apna utradhikaari banaya.or uske liye prachaar bhi kiya.ab wo iss duniya main nahi hai.)nek dil hai gaon ko sath mila ke chalte hai.



Hariya-umra 50 saal.sheema ke chacha.

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Bholu-hume to koi aishi kitab us ke ghar main kahi nahi mili.jaisa us saitaan ne bola tha.kahan chipa diya us saitaan ne.



Rafi-pata nahi kya hua uss kitab ka.aakash nigal gayi ya patal kha gaya.



Hariya-main usse khoj kar hi rahunga us kaal saitani takat ko.main nahi chahta ki jo chiz meri patni ke sath hua hai wo ab kisi or ke sath ho.



Zafar-or ye saitani takte do kitabo main hai.or agar..



Tabhi wahan naaz aa jati hai.



Naaz-abu ghar chali ammi bula rahi hai.



Sab chup ho jate hai.iss baat ko naaz bhi mehsus karti hai.



Rafi main chalta hu bol ke naaz ke sath ghar aa jate hai.



Rafi-zeba beta balti or rassi lana andar se.



Or wo dudh nikalne lagta hai.





Ab chalte hai itne dair main sheema ke ghar kya hua.



Sheema ghar aayi to bakrio ko ek jhhopdi main jismain ek gaye thi.us main band kar deti hai .



Ek do bakriya abhi bhi bahar thi.jinke chhote chhote bachhe the.sheema ne bachho ko pakda or usse bakri ke than se laga ke dudh pilane lagi.



Sab ko pila ne ke baad uske bacho ko tokariyo se dhak di.



Sheema-maa khana bana kya bohot bhuk lagi hai.



Sheetal -haan ban gaya hai tu hath muh dho ke baith main lagati hu.reema tu ja or chacha ko bula la.



Itne main hi hari bhi aa jata hai.

Hariya-main aa gaya hu bhabhi.tum khana nikalo main hath muh dho leta hu.
 
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