Romance Kachi Umar Diyan Kaliyan

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Hayee dekh ni.....kiven akhan kadd - kadd dekhi janda tainu.

Eh aawaz c Jasmeen di, jehdi ke apni dost Navneet(Neetu) naal school de gate te khadi gall kr rhi c.
Dovein saheliyan shehar de ik manne-parmanne school vich 12th class diyan students han, te othe non-medical di pardai kr rhian c.
Dovein hi saheliyan top diyan rannan c-
Jasmeen - Gora shareer, vadde-laal bull, lammi gardan, fit-fit tikhe mumme te lamme baal.
Navneet - Pakke rang da shareer , Gundva shareer, vadde mumme , tikhe nain naksh.
Jasmeen te neetu, roj pooriyan tyaar-shyaar hoke school aundia c, godean ton uchi skirt, bullan te lipstick, shirt de thalle sports bra(jis naal mumme ik dum gol-gol nazar aunde c).
School de students tan ik paase, balki teachers v tedi akh naal dohan de shareer nu taarde rehnde c. Te eh gall dovan nu bhali-bhanti pata c, te is vich ohna nu swaad v bahut aunda c.
Dohan di seal tan 10th class vich hi tutt gayi c, ohna de pind de mundean ne hi ohna dohan da udghaatan kita c.
Motor te dovein saheliyan ne ikathe hi ikko kamre vich apne-apne boyfriends to seal tudvaai c, te pata ni kinne hi vaari ik dooje de boyfriend naal v sex kita hoia c.
Dovan de ang ik dam khulle hoe c, te fer v dono jaaniyan shikaar te rehndian c, te kite koi nava munda takkar je jehda ehna de shonk poore kar sake.

Neetu - Haan haan, ajj tan teeja din ho gaya, eh tan pakke dheeth lagde aa mainu.
Jasmeen - haan nii, dekhan nu v change ghar de lagde aa, changa paisa lgda ehna kol tan.
Neetu - Main v aahi soch rhi c, chal koi na......kar dinne aa ehna da v man-parchaava.

Neetu ne school de gate te khade do mundea vall dekhia , te halki jahi smile pass kr ditti. Eh dekh ke tan dovein mundea diyan akhan chaudiyan ho gayian.
Jeet - Oh dekh oye, saali kiven smilan pass krdi aa, main tainu kiha c na, bss do din di khed aa, eh tan aape bhajji-bhajji aau.
Anmol - Haan oye, bss ik vaari ehdi laini aa, sunya bade mundea thalle lammi pai aa ehe, bss ik vaari avde thalle pauni aa.
Jeet - Tension na laii,, hun tan kabootri apni chhatri te aai lai.

Ohna nu smile de ke dovein saheliyan rickshaw te baith gayian, te apnin tution vall nu jaan laggiyan. (Tution v bss ayaashi krn nu lvaayi c, tanke ghare late jaan da bahana mil sake)
Jeet te anmol v bulletan te ohna de pichhe pichhe tur paye.
Jado rickshaw ik khaali gali vich enter hoia tan, ohna ne bullet rickshaw de naal-naal chalauna shuru kr ditta.
Jeet - Anmol yar ajj kal zamana theek ni....Kudian nu inj kalle nahi ghummna chahida.
Anmol - sahi gall aa yr,,aiven koi raah ch rok lave fer.
Jeet - aaho yr, saare apne varge ni na hunde. kudian di help krn vaale.
Anmol - hor kii, je koi bura na manne tan bullet di pichhli seat khaali aa, aake beh sakdi aa.(Anmol ne Jasmeen vall vehnde ne kiha)

Jasmeen te neetu ohna diyan gallan sun ke hassdiyan rahian.
Jasmeen - ni eh tan lagda haan krake hi hatange.
Neetu - Hor yrr, naale ajj tan mere kol paise v hainige, yr naale film dekhan da vada man aa, nava laggi aa gippy grewal di/
Jasmeen - haan ni, mera v vada man aa.
Neetu - chal fer laune aa jugaad.

Jasmeen ne anmol vall dekhia te
Jasmeen - beh tan jaiye, par dekh lo kite pichhli seat te swaari bithauni mehngi na pai jaave
Anmol - oh baitho tan sahi sohneo, asin saare kharcha chukkan nu tyaar aan.
Jasmeen te neetu ne rickshaw rukvaya te jhatt dene Anmol te Jeete pichhe baith gayian.

(Anmol te jeeta dovein college second year de munde c, te naal-naal kabaddi de khidaari, so dohan da shareer ek dum fit c, te paise vallo v koi ghaata nahi c, dovein jaane apne ghardiyan de paisian te full aish krde c)

Anmol- hnji maalko kithe lai challiye fer?
Jasmeen - Jithe thoda man kare...!
Neetu(Jeete de bullet pichhe baithi) - ni naale tan kehndi c film dekhani aa....!
(Eh sun dovein anmol te jeeta hassan lage)
Jeeta - chalo fer ajj film e dekh aune aa.

So hun chaare jane mall ch pahunch gaye, te ticketan laike cinema ch enter kr gaye.
Jiven ke thoun aashiq hamesha corner seat hi lainde ne, te fer eh tan poore machhare hoe aashiq c, eh kyon na mauka da faida chakkde .
Hun Anmol-Jasmeen , Jeeta-Neetu theater diyan ik dam corner vaalian seats te baith gaye.
Seating kujh aida c - ke bilkul left corner te anmol fer usde right te Jasmeen, jasmeen de right te neetu, te neetu de right te Jeeta.
Anmol - Jasmeen - Neetu - Jeeta.
Film shuru hoi, film di heroin Sonam Bajwa c, jo ke ajj kal saare hi mundea di favorite hai.
Ohnu dekh ke tan pehla hi anmol te jeeta de moonh ch paani aa gya. Jasmeen te neetu tan film vich gwaachiyan hoian c.
Anmol ne hauli-hauli apna hath jasmeen de hath utte rakhiya, te halka jiha daba ditta.
Jasmeen ne anmol vall tedi akh naal dekhiya te fer film dekhan lagg payi.
Odar Jeeta ne v hauli-hauli neetu naal khedan khedaniyan shuru kr dittian c.
Anmol ne hath ton hunde hoe apna hath jasmeen de patt uppar rkh ditta. Jasmeen di skirt pehla hi uchi c, tan hath sidda nange patt te jaake ke tikiya.
Jasmeen diyan ik vaar tan akhan band ho gayian.
Anmol smjh gya ke maal garm e aa. Jasmeen ne kujh na kiha te fer ton film dekhan lgg pyi.
Jasmeen diyan akhan tan film vall c, par man usda apne patt te rkhe hoe anmol de hath te hi c.
Anmol hauli hauli apna hath uppar nu krn lgga te naal naal apna sar v jasmeen de nede krn lgga.
Jasmeen de saah tez ho rhe san, ohdi fuddi ne halka halka paani chhadna shuru kr ditta c.
Anmol ne baahli der na kiti, te apne bull laja ke jasmeen di gardan te tika ditte, te ik lambi jahi chummi usdi gardan te kar ditti.
Jasmeen tan poore hawas ch c, oh tan eh kamm bhaaldi hundi c. Oh smjh gayi c ke munde tan chajj de hi takkre ne.

Odar Neetu tan jasmeen ton v ik kadam agge c, ohne tan jeeta de bullan vich bull v paa lae c, te dono jaane ik dooje diyan jeeban choos choos ke saara ras peen ch lagge hoe c. Jeeta da lunn tan poora aakad gya c. Jeeta da hath neetu de mummean te c, te ik ik krke dohan nu aate vangu gunn riha c. Neetu tan agg vangu garm hoi pai c.
Anmol ne v hun agge vadan da faisla kita te apna hath hor agge laja ke jasmeen di panty te rakh ditta.
Jasmeen di halki jahi aaaaahhhhhhh nikli par oh film de shor vich hi gwaach gayi.
Anmol ne panty upparo hi usdi fuddi nu ghutt ditta , te uppar usdi gardan te ik chakki v vadd ditti.
Jasmeen - cccccc..........hayyeeeeee aaraamm naalll.
Anmol andro-andri halka jiha muskuraya.
Jasmeen ne hun apna moonh v anmol vall kita te dovein french kiss vich ulajh gaye.
Jasmeen de hath anmol de vaala andar ghum rhe c, te dovan de bull ik dooje ch fase hoe c.
Dovein hi jode hun poore ik doosre ch gwaach gaye c, te har ik chheti apni agg shaant krn vich lagga hoia c.
Anmol te Jeeta nu tan pehla hi pata c ke eh do kudian, koi sache pyaar vaalian nahi, sago eh tan bss lunn te paisa bhaal diyan ne, te ohna dovan nu v bss fuddi chahidi c, so ohna ne baala romantic hon di jagah chheti apna kamm pooora krn vall dhyaan ditta.
Anmol ne jasmeen da hath fadya te apne pant uppar rkh ditta, jis andar usda 6 inchi lunn poora khada hoia c.
Anmol ne apni zip kholi te lunn ohde hath ch fada ditta.
Jasmeen ne v apne hath te thukk laai, te anmol da lunn uppar-thalle krn lggi.
Jasmeen te neetu nu tan ehna kamman da poora experience c. Pata ni kinnia de lunn pichhle ik saal ch ohna ne apni fuddi ch lae c.
Anmol ne 2 ku mint tan jasmeen de hath da nazaara liya, par fir usne jasmeen da sir fadya te ohnu khich ke apne lunn kol lai aaya. Jasmeen ne v mint na laaya te jhatt dene ohda lunn apne moonh andar bhar liya.
Ohdar jeeta v neetu ton kass kass ke choope mara riha c.
Hun scene eh c ke jasmeen anmol de pairan ch baithi ohda lunn choos rhi c, te neetu jeeta de pairan ch baithi ohda lunn te choope maar rhi c.
Dono yaaran ne ik dooje vall dekhiya te shaitaani bhari smile pass kiti.
lgbhag 5 min dovan ne choope lavae te fir ton jasmeen te neetu apnian apnian setan te baith gayian.
Hun theater diyan seatan ohnian khullina nahi c , ke kudi di fuddi layi jaa ske, te theater vich rush v kaafi c, so panga pai skda c.
So dono jode interval vich theater vicho nikal gaye te fir parking vall nu tur paye.

 

[lusty_chhora]

Parking vicho saare bulletan te baithe te otho nikal gye.
Hun chaare jane hi poore garm c, kyonki kise da paani nahi niklaya c, te chaare hi sex krn nu mare jaa rhe c.
Jasmeen te neetu dono anmol te jeeta nu ghutt ke jaffi paake baithian c, jis krke ohna da saara jism ik dooje naal chipakya piya c.
Jasmeen te neetu de mumme apni pith te mehsoos krke anmol te jeeta ton hor wait krni aukhi ho rhi c.
So ohna ne bullet shehar ton baahar vall nu paa laye, te kudian de pind vall nu khich ditte.
Raste vich khet hi khet c, ohna vich laggian motoran.
Hun motor de naal ik kamra tan hunda hi hai khetan vich, te eh tan pind vaalian layi fuddi lain layi default jagah hundi hai.
So ohna ne v ik sunni jahi motor dekhi te apni bullet ohde saamne jaa rok laye.
Motor main road ton kaafi door c, te motor de chaare paase Ganna(Kamaad) lagya hoia c, jis naal koi v road ton motor nu dekh nahi skda c.
Motor da darwaaza tuttya hoia c, bss ik teen di chaadar naal darwaaza band kita hoia c.
Ohna ne teen di chaadar side te sutti te andar bss ik manja te ik kursi payi hoi c. Manja v vaan da c, te kursi v plastic di bss apne akhri saah lai rhi c.

Chudai de bhukhe premi jodian ne naa manja dekhia na kursi bss ik dooje te tutt ke pai gye.
Dekhde hi dekhde chaare jane ik dum nange ik dooje de jism naal fevicol vangu jude hoe c.
Jasmeen te neetu de nange shareer dekh ke tan banda da door khade da hi paani chhut je, ehdar tan fir anmol te jeeta ne ohna di fuddi da paani kaddna c.
Jeeta te anmol layi eh pehli vaar nhi c ke ohna ikathe do kudian diyan fuddian layian hon, pehla v kayi vaar hotelan ch jaa-jaake paise de ke ohna kayi vaar ikko bed te do-do kudian nu chodian hoia c. Te dovein ik dooje nu nanga dekhan de aadi c.
Edar jasmeen te neetu ne v kayi vaar kathea fuddian marvaiyan hoian c.
So hun anmol ne jasmeen nu godi chukkiya te manje te lammi paa liya, manje te painde saar hi vaan jasmeen de komal jism te chuban laggi, par anmol nu iss naal ki fark paina c.
Ohne pehli satte apna lunn ohdi fuddi te takaya te ikko ghasse vich adda lunn te fir dooje ghasse vich poora lunn ohdi fuddi andar vaard ditta.
Jasmeen - hayeeee....kutteaaaaa haulliiiiiiiii...
Anmol - Kuttiyeeeee......nakhre naa karrr........tu kehda pehli vaar den laggi aa.
Anmol ne apne pair manje di baahi te tikaye te ghassean da meenh vara ditta.

Odar jeeta ne v neetu nu kamre ch bane baari de sahare kodi kita, te pichheo ohdi fuddi andar apna 6.5 inch da lunn vaard ditta.
Hun dovein chobar apni apni navi baniyan mashukan di tasalli karaun vich lagg gaye.
Anmol ne jasmeen de change ghasse maare jis de vaar naal usdi pith te manja hun poora shap gya c.
Jinna maza ohnu ghassea da aa riha c, ohna hi dard ohnu manje de chuban krke mil riha c.
Jasmeen - hayeeee......ruk jaaaa kutteyyaaaa......hor tarah krde aa.... aa manje ne tan jaan hi kadd layii..
Anmol ne jasmeen nu thalle jasmeen te ghodi banan nu kiha te aap usde pichhe aake baith giya.
Aje oh ohdi fuddi andar lunn paun hi lagga c ke jeeta ne ohnu ishara kita.
Anmol smjh gaya ke jeeta hun fuddian exchange krn baare keh riha hai.

Anmol jhatt jasmeen pichho utheya te hun neetu pichhe jaa khalota, te jeeta neetu pichho hat ke jasmeen piche jaake baith gaya.
Dono hi saheliyan diyan gardan thalle suttiyan hoia c, ohna nu tan pata v nahi lgga ke kado ohna di fuddi andar pain vaale lunnan ne position exchange kr layi.
Anmol ne jado pehla ghassa neetu di fuddi andar marya tan....
Anmol - hayeee neetu....teri fuddi tan jasmeen naalo v tight aa.
Anmol di aawaz sun neetu hairan ho gayi, ohne jhat pichhee mud dekhya.
Neetu - hayyeeee kanjaraa....tuuuuu......ki gall ik fuddi naal jee nahi bharya....?????
Anmol - kitheeeee........sochia hun dooji saheli da v swaad lai hi laiyee..
Neetu - hayeee vee....jihdi mrji laiii.....par chheti karr.....asin ghar v jaanaaa.

Odar jasmeen ne v jeeta de ghassea da maza laina shuru kar ditta c....
Jasmeen - aahhhhhhhhh......aahhhhhhhh.........saalyaaaaa chhetiiiii kadddddd........
Neetu - uuummmmmmm.......bhenchodaaaa........hor tezzz karrr........

Anmol te jeeta ne top gear paata c......lunn bijli di speed naal andar baahar ho rhe san.
Kabaddi khedan krke dohan de shareeran andar poora jor c.
Anmol ne neetu di bund te taka- taka ke thappad maarne shuru kita....te odar jeeta ne v anmol di nakal krni shuru kr ditti...
Dovein saheliyan diyan bundan poorian laal-surkh ho gayian c.
Hun bss paani nikalan da wait c.
Jado paani nikalan lagga tan anmol te jeeta ne dohan saheliyan nu ik dooje de kol baitha ditta....te aap ohna agge khad ke apne lunn hilaun lgge. Te agle hi pal dohan ne apna saara paani dovein sahelian de moonhan te vaha dittaa.
Jasmeen te neetu ne v ohna da paani vade swaad naal chakhya te fir kapde paake chaaro jane pind vall nu tur paye. te ohan nu ghar pind di firni te drop krke anmol te jeeta vaapis mud gaye.

 

[mahic4f]

chalak system sigi ehh taa

 

[lusty_chhora]

Din aida e sukke-sukke langde gaye.
Jasmeen te neetu nu gharo zayada paise nhi milde c, kyonki ghardian nu v kite na kite shakk hunda e aa ke ohna di aulaad kiho jahi aa.
So apne shaunk poore kraun vala koi Sugar Daddy oh labb diyan hi rehndiyan c.
Anmol te jeeta tan ik vaari fuddi laike ohh gayee. Hun koi nava shikaar labbana paina c.
Te ohi shikaar di udeek krdian board-exam v aa gaye.
Te jasmeen te neetu dovein hi pardai vich pooriyna dull c. Ajj tak bss nakal maar ke hi pass hundia rhia, oh v bss 33-33 numberan te.
Te eh tan c v board de paper, sakhti v zyada honi c.
So hamesha di tarah pardai tan ehna doha ne 0 kiti c, aunda janda kujh haini c.
Akhiri paper da din aa hi gya.
Math a paper c pehla, dovein neetu te Jasmeen class ch baithian te teacher paper vandan lagga.
Class vich do male teacheran, sir'an di duty c. So harek dooje mard vangu, jasmeen te neetu de husan ne ehna dovein teacheran da v dhyaan avde vall khichiya.
Jado sir neetu kol paper vandan aaya tan, neetu ne apni chunni thodi side te kar ditti, te sir vall dekh ke shaitaani bhari smile pass kr ditti.(ASal ch thand de din c, so skirt di jagah saariyan kudian ne salwar te kameej paiyan san)
Ik vaari tan sir nu v current jiha lagya. Neetu de mumme tan pehla hi bhaare c, te ohne jaan bujh ke deep gale vala suit svaaya c.
So paper shuru hoia, te paper read krde saar hi doha di bund paad gayi. Doha nu ik v swaal nahi aunda c. Zero number pakke c.
Dohan de moonh uttar gaye, neetu nu smjh aa gyi c ke eh paper sidde tareeke naal pass nhi hona, ohnu koi tarkeeb launi paini aa.
Neetu ne thoda time wait kiti te, fir sir kolo extra paper di mang kiti.
Jado sir extra sheet den aaya tan, neetu ne ohde hath naal apna hath halka jiha touch kar ditta. Sir ik vaar tan sunn jiha ho gaya. Ehni sexy kudi oh v addi umar je tuhade te dore paave tan kise da v lunn khada ho skda hai.
Neetu nu pta lg gya ke eh sir tan jaal vich fas gya hai.
Neetu ne sir vall nu apni pichhle adde ghante ton khaali pai sheet vall ishara kita, te ohnu bholi jahi banke ohdi help krn layi ishara kita.
Sir ne ik vaar tan apna sir fer liya, par fir neetu ne apna agla hathyaar chalaya.
Ohne apna paper jaan bujh ke desk ton thalle sutt ditta te aap kursi ton khadi hoke poori jhuk ke paper chukkan laggi, jis naal kol khade sir da sidda dhyaan ohdi gol-gol bhaari bund te gaya, jisdi lakeer vich usdi kameej da palla fasya hoia c, ik vaari tan sir da v jee kita ke oh neetu di bund nu ghutt ke fad lave.
Neetu hauli hauli uthi te ohne sidda sir vall dekhiya jehda aje v ohdi bund vall hi dekh riha c.
Neetu ne sir nu hosh ch liaundea kiha - "sir"
Sir(hosh ch aunda hoia) - "yes?"
Neetu - sir may i go to washroom?(Te ehe kehnde kehnde ohne sir nu akhan naal baahar aun da ishara kar ditta)
Neetu apni bund matkaundi class ton baahar chali gayi, te jandi jandi sir nu fir ton akh maar gayi.
Saari class apne paper ch busy c, so kise da v dhyaan neetu vall nahi c.
Sir v neetu de pichhe-pichhe hi tur piya.
Paper c is krke koi v teacher baahar nhi c, te student v apne paperan ch busy c, sivaae neetu te jasmeen ton.
Neetu jaan bujh ke Men's washroom ch vad gayi te ohde ton 2 ku minute baad hi sir v aa gya.
Neetu - sir, mainu bss thodi jahi help chahidi aa paper ch, te ohde badle jo tuc kaho main krn nu tyaar aa...!
Sir - Par je kise nu pta lg gya fer, Navneet meri naukari chali jaani.
Neetu - kuchh nhi hunda sirr...!!! Bss tin ku swaal e krne main.
Sir - par navneee.............
Sir aje kujh kehn e lagga si ke neetu ne sir da hath fadya te apne ik mumme te rkh ditta(Neetu nu v pta ke aahi hun aakhir option hai)
Sir da moonh tan khulla da khulla hi reh gya.
Neetu de pole-pole mummean te hath rkhde saar hi sir da lunn ne chhaal maari.
Neetu - tuc kujh keh rhe c sirr...!!!!!!!
Sir hun ki kehnda, jihde hathan vich aida ghaint shareer hove, oh banda kitho bolan joga rehnda.
Neetu ne sir de hath te dbaav paya te apna mumma hor ghutt ditta.
Neetu - aahhhhhhhhh......sirr mannjo na pleasee......!!!!
Sir aje v kacha-pakka jiha c.
Neetu ne sochia - Eh saala tan mannan ch e ni aunda, lgda hun kamm pakka krna e paina.
Neetu ne sir di sir nu doha hathan naal fadya, te apnian addian chukk ke ohde bullan te apne bull rkh ditte, te ohda bullan nu choosan lgg pyi.
Sir diyan tan akhan addian reh gayian, ohnu smjh ni aai ke eh ki ho gya..
Neetu aithe na ruki, ohne sir de hath fade te pichhe apni bund te rkh ditte, te upparo ode bull hun zor-zor naal choosan lg pyi.
Kareeb 2-3 mint bull choosan baad,
Neetu - sirr...eh tan trailer c...je tuc mainu te meri friend jasmeen nu paper cho pass karva deo...tan poori film v dikha skdi aa thonu.
Hun sir dimaag ton nahi blki lunn ton soch riha c. hawas de bhare hoe ne neetu nu haan kar ditti.
Te dono jaane fir class vall nu tur paye. Neetu ne class ch enter hundi ne hi jasmeen nu ishara kar ditta ke kamm ban gya hai.
Jasmeen ne v neetu di khilri hoi lipstick dekh ke hisaab laa liya ke eh saali koi kaand krke aai hai.
Aida hi agle 2 ghantean ch sir ne doha sahelian ne kiven na kiven krke pass hon joga paper kra ditta.
Te agle paper v dohan ne teacheran de hatho apnian bundan patva-patva ke pass kr hi laye.

 

[king_jatt]

Krda update

 

[king_jatt]

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[mahic4f]

ehnaa saaliya da ta sahi jugaaad hega har kaamm kad vaun daa

 

[Kool420]

Sehi veere, story nu lambi khich te hor character vi add karo ta Ziada Mazda aaoga

 

[Kool420]

Neetu te Jasmine de past bare v likho ki eh doven kidan te kadon start ho gayean.ajj tak kinne lun kha chukian dono. It will make the story interesting.Baki writer di marzi

 

[lusty_chhora]

Neetu te Jasmine de past bare v likho ki eh doven kidan te kadon start ho gayean.ajj tak kinne lun kha chukian dono. It will make the story interesting.Baki writer di marzi

Sure. Aje hor characters add krde aa. aje start kiti story.