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sharma ji_91

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Hey everyone ye meri pehli story hone wali hai maa bete par maine bohot si Stories padhi lekin unme se bohot Kam ya yu kahu 100 me se sirf 1 ya 2 hi achhi nikli.

jinko maine appreciate bhi kiya lekin kuch jo or achhi ho sakti thi vo incomplete hai ya to writer ne kisi wajah se update dene band kardie ya bohot si cheezo ki wajah se ye stories poori nahi ki.

Or kuch logo ne stories me sirf sex add kardia ya fir be matlab ke baki character's jisne incest or love ki story ko porn story ya adult story bana diya.

Pyaar ka matlab sex nahi hota or na hi 3some 4 some ya fir faaltu ki fantasy ko poora karna nahi hota.

PYAAR To vo hai jo do dilo ka rishta hai jiski dor Dil Se Dil Tak jude or ek doosre ko samjhe sharir ka kya hai aaj nahi to kal sharir ka milan ho hi jayega mazbooran ya pyaar se ya kuch log sirf shadi ho jaati hai islie sex karte hai kyuki partner ko mana nahi Kiya jaa sakta.

Lekin ye story main apne hisab se likhuunga jisme sirf pyaar hoga or kuch nahi sex hoga lekin utna nahi kyuki ye story ke kuch part kisi ke past se related hai jo ki main bata nahi sakta lekin itna kahunga ki story bohot achhi lagegi aapko koi shikayat nahi hogi.

Important Note : ( Ye story Adult Story Nahi Hai To Kripya Krke Isme Sex YA Fantasy Ya Affair Add Karne Ke Liye Mat Boliyega Dosto Pls Ye Love OR Emotions Wali Kahani Hai To Us Hisab Se Padhiyega ✌🏻 Or Agar Aapko Kahani Pasand Na Aaye To Sorry 😊 Ye Meri First Kahani Hai To Agar Koi Galti Ho Jaye To Mafi Maangta Hu Dhanyawad 🙌🏻 Or Ek Or Important Baat Ki Ye Kahani 50% Fake Or 50% Real Hai To Isme Kuch Add Karne Ke Liye Mat Boliyega Or Main Aapse Koi Like Ya Comment Karne Ke Liye Bhi Nahi Kahunga Jisko Karna Hi Karde Nahi To Koi Baat Nahi Peace.........😉🤍

To Jaisa ki aap logo ne title padh liya hoga to aap samaj hi gaye honge ki ye ek maa or bete ki kahani hai. Ji haa ye hai lekin ye kahani aaj ki nahi hai balki aaj se 20 saal pehle ki yani 2005 ki hai is kahani me ek maa ko kaise apne hi bete se pyaar hota hai ab ushe mazboori kahe ya kismat ka khel ye to bolna mushkil kabhi kabhi insaan naa chahte hue bhi kuch aisi galtiya kar deta hai ye fir kuch aisa kardeta hai jisse ya to uski zindagi barbaad ho jaati hai ya to khushiyo se bhar jaati hai aisa hi kuch is kahani me bhi hota hai jab (RASHMI) Yani is kahani ki heroine Or Kahni ke hero (Himanshu Urf Jerry Ghar ka Naam) Se Pyaar ho jaat hai kahani me bohot kuch hai emotions drama suspense romance or haa pyaar to hai hi.......💕

To Jaldi Hi Mulakaat Hogi 🤍 Tab Tak Ke Liye Thoda Sa Wait Karo
 
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To kahani shuru hoti hai saal 2005 me delhi me ***** jagah se ek jagah thi jahan na jayada gareeb na jayada ameer log rehte hai bas lower middle class log rehte the unme se ek ghar tha jisme ye kahani shuru hui.....

Lekin ye kahani khatam hui ya nahi hui ye to aapko kahani me hi pata chalega.......

Kahani ke kirdaar..

1: (Father) Manoj Age: 48 Years
2: (Mother) Rashmi Age: 39 Years

JAISA KI AAP SABHI JAANTE HAI PEHLE KE TIME ME SHADI JALDI HO JAATI THI TO AGE US HISAB SE RAKHI GAI HAI 🙏🏻💯

3: (Hero) Himanshu Urf Jerry Age: 23 (Note -: Himanshu Ko Jerry Uski Maa Yani Rashmi Bulati Hai Pyaar Se To Confused Mat Ho Jaana.....🤭

AB Baari Hai Manoj Or Rashmi Ki Judwa Betiya Yani Ki Jerry Ki Behno Ki......

4: (Sister's/Betiyan) Priya OR Parul Age: 13 Saal.

Ab Confusion door kar deta hu jaisa maine aapko bataya ki pehle ke time me shadiya jaldi ho jaati thi khas kar ladki ki hamare parent's me bhi kafi age difference hai to Rashmi ki shadi 16 saal ki age me ho gai thi kyuki uske maa baap bohot jayada ameer to nahi the halaki bohot jayada gareeb bhi nahi the lekin unki 5 Betiyan thi isiliye un hone shadi jaldi kardi jo ki unki galti bhi thi........ Ab vo galti kya hai aage bataunga or betio ki Age itni kam kyu hai. Vo bhi aage hi pata chalega.......


To baat us wakt ki hai jab barsaat ka mosam khatam ho kar sardiyo ka yani winter mosam aane wala tha. Or aapko to pata hi hai winter aate aate kitne saare festival's 🎎 bhi aane lagte hai aise hi dekhte dekhte Dusshera bhi aagya.....

Sabko pata hai usdin shree ram ne Ravan ka vadh kiya tha lekin ek ravan to khatam ho gaya bakio ka kya ?

Kher us maidaan yani us ground me aapko pata hi hai ravan dahan kafi open area's me hota hai...

US maidaan me bohot se log apne apne pariwaron ke saath aaye the koi apne biwi,pati,bachhe,maa,baap, ya yu kehlo koi na koi kisi na kisi ke saath aaya hi hua tha ab ye kahani 2005 ki hai to us time ladka ladki bhi Aashiqui na ke barabar ya yu kaho aisa kuch 1000 me se 1 hota tha vo bhi bohot chup chup ke kher un 1000/1500 logo ki bheed me 4 logo ka ek pariwaar bhi tha....

Samjhe kon apni Rashmi ka pariwaar to aaj bohot hi mushkil se vo log yaha aa paye the MUSHKIL Se ? Ji ha mushkil se chaliye is sawal kaa jawab bhi de hi deta hu.......

4 Hour's pehle......

Rashmi: (kaapte hue): Suniye vo bachho ko ravan dahan dikhane le jaana tha...

Silent..........

Rashmi: Aadmi ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue jo ki chair par baitha hua tha.

Thoda tej aawaj me SUNIYE......

Tabhi vo aadmi khada hota hai or Rashmi ke gaal par ek kheech kar thappad maar deta hai.....


SAALI Teri Himmat kaise hui mere se uchi aawaj me baat karne ki.....kutiya.....

Or aap samjh hi gaye honge ki ye aadmi kon hai hai ji haaa ye aadmi Rashmi ki Pati Manoj hai jisne bohot jayada sharab pi rakhi hai..

Rashmi Jo abhi thappad se sahem chuki thi (darte hue..)


Rashmi : Ji ji (hoth kaapte hue) ji ji mujhe mujhe mujhe maaf kar dijiye (cry)

Manoj Rashmi ke baal pakadte hue..

Manoj : Bol saali jaldi Varna yahi maar dunga thuje


Rashmi : ji bachho ko Dusshera dekhina le jana tha ishi lie aapse bola lekin aapne suna nahi ishi liye maine aapke khande par haath rakha tha(rote hue)

Manoj : Kyu tere baap ka theka le rakha hai kya maine huh? Kya mujhe kuch or kaam nahi hai jo teri in dono sali kutiya betiyon ko Dusshera dikhane lekar jaau jo ki teri hi tarah kisi kaam ki nahi hai paida ho gai meri chati par mongdalne ke liye huh? Bol kutiya ab chup kyu hai bol sali randi. Teri maa ki chut bolnaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

Ek baat note karne wali hai ki manoj ne sirf Betiyan hi kyu kahan?

Doosre kamre me:-

Priya OR Parul Jo apne pita ke chillane se dari hui thi sehmi baithi thi or apna maa ke thappad ki aawaj se jo Dusshera dekhne Jane ki excitement or masti thi vo sab tehs nehs hogai or bechari dono chota sa mooh lekr dar ke maare nam aakhon se ek doosre ko dekhti hai or kehti hai..

(Priya jo ki Parul ko didi bolti hai kyuki Parul Thodi si height me lambi hai priya se or healthy bhi hai)

Priya : didi kya papa kabhi hame pyaar nahi denge kya papa hamse nafrat karte hai vo kabtak hamse aise hi nafrat krte rahenge aakhir hamne kiya hi kya hai sabke papa unse kitna pyaar parte hai or hamare papa hame dekhte tak nahi...... or fir vo parul ke gale lag kar bohot roti hai (crying 😭)

Parul Jo khud kuch nahi kar sakti thi vo khud nam aanko se apni bahen ko sambhal ti hai or kehti hai.

Parul : chup hoja meri pyaari bahen ro mat sab theek ho jayega...😭 ( Lekin vo khud bohot ro rahi thi lekin vo kamzor pad gai to uski bahen ko kon sambhalega isiliye vo apne aasu rokne ki koshish karti hai)

mazbooran usko ye bolna padta hai kyuki uske pita un dono se nafrat kyu karte hai ye ushe bhi nahi pata.... Akhir kya Raaz hai iske piche vo to kahani me aage pata lagega dosto...

Parul apne aashu pochte hue:-

Parul: pagal aise rote nahi papa hamse pyaar nahi karte to kya hua bhaiya to hamse kitna pyaar karte hai na..🥺(nam aakhon se ye sab vo bolti hai)

Or ji haa guys hamara Jerry apni behno se bohot pyaar karta hai itna ki shayad Jerry apni khud ki aulad se bhi na kare usne hi apni dono behno ko Bachpan se laad pyaar karke bada kiya hai jaise ek baap apni beti ko karta hai ya yu kaho ek baap se bhi jayada ek bhai ek baap sab kuch uski behno ke lie unka bhai hi tha or kehte hai na bada bhai baap saman hota hai 😊😘


Andar karme me jaha Rashmi or Manoj the :-


Rashmi rote hue.... Dekhiye aapko nahi jaana to mat jaiye lekin meri betiyo ke baare me kuch mat boliye ( chukte hue ) maine aapko pehle bhi samjhaya hai hamesha samjhati hu lekin aap meri baat nahi maante aapko galat femi hai aap mera yakin kyu nahi karte.....


Manoj kuch bolne wala hi hota hai lekin tabhi tarwaaj par thak thak hoti hai.....

Manoj : jaa dekh ja kar sali randi bahen ki lodi dekh Tera koi khsam aaya hoga jaa....

Rashmi ji bohot gusse me thi or ro bhi rahi thi lekin kya karti vo apne aap ko thik karti hai or aasuo ko saaf karti hai vo chup chap chali jaati hai darwaja kholne or darwaja kholne se pehle apni betio ko dekhti hai jo chup chap so gai thi ab Rashmi unhe dekh kar darwaja kholti hai

Darwaja kholte hi:-

Saamne apna hero Jerry khada tha jo bohot hi khush tha or ushe dekh kar Rashmi jo ki abhi to rahi thi vo bohot khush ho jaati hai

Jerry : kya hua maa itna time laga diya gate kholne me...
Rashmi : are nahi nahi beta aisi baat nahi hai vo to tumhare papa...jaise hi Rashmi ne bola tabhi manoj ki aawaj aati hai..

Manoj : Kon Hai Rashmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Rashmi : (Kapte hue) ji ji j j ji vo himanshu hai

Ek baat or note kijiyega ki Rashmi himanshu Ko Jerry manoj ke saamne nahi bolti aisa kyu ye aage janne ko milega kher abhi....

Rashmi ki aawaj sunte hi Jerry ko kuch kuch samaj aagya tha kyuki ye pehli baar nahi tha pehle na jaane kitni baar aisa hua hai shayad hamesha hi...

Manoj nashe me Rashmi ki baat ka bas itna hi jawab deta hai sali randi kutiyaaaaa...

Or ye sunte hi Rashmi fir se udas ho jaati hai

Jerry jo abhi bohot kuch tha andar aakr darwaja lagata hai or :-

Jerry : mujhe maaf kardo maa ( nam aakhon se ) main samaj gaya ki kya hua tha yaha thodi der pehle lekin main khush tha kisi or baat pr isiliye aapki taklif nahi samj paya mujhe maaf krdo 🥺 main kisi kaam ka nahi hu maa main kisi kaam ka nahi hu" kisi kaam ka nahi" or vo gusse;pyaar;nafrat ke saath bohot zor se punch wall lar maarta hai jishe dekh kar raskhmi dar jaati hai

Rashmi darte hue lekin pyaar se or dheere se

Rashmi : tum"tum"tum" pagal ho gaye ho jerry ye kya kar rahe ho...😰 Dekho khoon nikal raha hai jerry ye tumne kya Kiya ( ghabraye hue jerry ko sambhalti hai )

Or tab tak dono bahene bhi aawj sunkar aa jati hai dono bohot udas thi...or bhi aate hai mummy kya hua bhaiya ko (nam aakhon se🥺) or ye khoon kaise 😰😭 or vo dono bohot ghab ra jaati hai ..Rashmi dod kar un dono ko kamre me lekar jaati hai or unhe samjhati hai.....

Rashmi: (fake sime ke saath) are meri gudiyaon bhaiya ko kuch nahi hua vo to bhaiye injection lag waya hai ishi lie aisa hi raha hai agar tum dono bhi jaldi nahi sogi to tumhe bhi lagega 😂

Ab dono betiyan choti thi to vo Rashmi ki baat ko seriously lete hue thoda darti hai or kehti hai dono ek saath nahi hame nahi lag wana injection or dono jaldi se ek doosre ki bahon me sone lagti hai... Ye dekh Rashmi ko thodi si hasi aati hai lekin agle hi pal vo jerry ko yaad krke bhar aati hai or bahar se betiyon ke room ka gate band kardeti hai lekin jaise hi vo bahar aati hai vo dekhti hai jerry kahi nahi hai vo ushe dekh ti idhar udhar

Rashmi : (nam aakhon se ) man me :- tum kaha chale gaye mere jerry tum kaha chale gaye mujhe chod kar is halat me kaha chale gaye

Vo bilkul pagal si ho jaati hai lekin tabhi vo dekhti hai khoon ki boonde stairs so hoti hui terrace par jaa rahi hai vo samj jaati hai ki mera jerry upar hai.

Or jaise hi Rashmi khoon ki boondi ka picha karte hue jaati hai or upar jaakr jerry ko dekhti hai to uske haath se bohot khoon beh ra tha or saamne lage hue mirror 🪞 ke tukde tukde ho rahe the or Jerry apne ek haath me sigarate lie hue bas nam aakno se bas gusse me khada apne daatho ko mask raha tha or cigrate ke kushhh laga raha tha Rashmi ye sab dekh kar dar jaati hai or lekin ushe sigarate ko dekh kar bohot gussa bhi aata hai vo sidha jerry ke paas jaati hai.......

Or ek zor dard thappad ki aawaj aati hai

Next part jaldi hi batana kaisi lagai story ye pehla part tha sorry kuch galti ho gai ho to or haa main koi like paane ya comment pane ke liye ye story nahi likh ra hu bas aise hi likh di achhi Lage to zaroor bata na 😘

Next part 🔜.......
 
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Update 2


Pichle Update Me Bohot Si Cheeje Reh Gai Thi Unme Se Kuch Aapko Abhi Bata Deta Hu Or Kuch Aage Kahni Me Pata Lagega 😊

1: Sabse pehle Jerry ke baare me bata du jerry 10th ke baad se hi kaam kar raha tha lekin kya kaam karta tha ye kisi ko nahi pata tha jab Rashmi ne poocha to jerry ne bola ki vo kuch bachho ka homework krta hai paiso ke badle lekin vo kya kaam karta tha ye kisi ko nahi pata....

Lekin sabse badi baat ki jerry ne aaj tak apne liye kuch nahi kamaya tha usme apni betiyon jaisi baheno ke lie or apni jaan se jayada maa ke liye kamata tha....

Darasal jab 10th ka result aane ke baad jerry ne socha tha ki Ghar par baat krunga ki jis school me uske dost ja rahe h usme jaaye lekin jab vo ghar me aaya to usne dekhna ki uska baap uski maa ko maar raha tha or us din jerry pehle se hi tension me tha or vo gusse me aagya or usme apne baap ki aankhon ke gusse se dekha lekin kuch kaha nahi apni maa ko lekar vaha se chla gya us din vo bohot dukhi hua tha
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Uske baad usne school bhi chod diya.😱


Ji haa usne school chod diya tha or ye baat usne kabhi kisi ko pata nahi lagne di lekin vo karta kya tha...... Iska jawab to aage milega or rahi baat paiso ki to maine batau hi diya h ki kaise paise aate the...

Or ek baat or ki jerry ki personality bohot achhi thi....dekhlo khud hi


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EJ dam hoo ba hu aise hi dikhta hai Jerry lekin uski is body ke baare me uski maa yani Rashmi ko nahi pata reason jaise ki vo bechari ko kabhi hasne ki foorsat nahi mili to body to kya hi dekhegi bas Ghar ke kalesh bete ka ghar chalana or ghr me rashan bhi jerry hi bharta tha or uske baap ki daaru ka kharcha bhi jerry hi karta tha. Ishi lie uska baap apne bete ko kuch nahi kehta tha lekin sach to ye tha ki vo apne bete se darta tha kyuki bhali hi Rashmi ne uski body na dekhi ho lekin ek din Manoj ne apne bete ko tarece kar push-up

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Marte dekha tha kr upr usne jo punching bag rakha hai upr


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IShi li liye vo apne bete se darta hai lekin ye baat usne kabhi samne nahi aane di (kyuki uski jhooti mardangi na samne aajaye ishi liye kyuki vo nahi chata tha ki rashmi ko pata lage ki vo apne bete se darta hai )


Abbb aage kya hua vo dekhte hai

Rashmi jaise hi upr aati hai vo dekhti hai ki jerry ke haath se bleeding ho rahi hai uska haath bhot ghayal hai


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Vo kuch bolti lekin usse pehle uski nazar apne bete ke chehre par or uske doosre haath or or upar ki manzil (floor par ud rahe cigrate ke dhooe ko or vo jerry ko dekhti hai jo kuch soch raha tha or apne man me kuch soch raha tha

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Rashmi ye dekh kafi shoked ho jaati hai hai kyuki usne Aaj se pehle kabhi apne jerry ko smoke karte nahi dekha tha uske aashu ek dam se ruk jaate hai vo sirf jerry ko gore se dekh rahi thi uske man me lakho sawal chl rahe the ushe samj nahi aar tha ki kya kre

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Rashmi ko samj nahi aara tha vo kya bole uske mooh se ghabrahat dukh mix hokar bas itna hi nikal ta hai dheere se ( ye mera jerry nahi hai ye mere jerry ko kya hogya hai 🥺 )


Vo bas jerry ko dekh rahi thi fir Achanak jerry ki cigrate khatam ho jaati hai or vo doosri cigrate jalane lagta hai usko ye tak nahi pata tha ki uski maa uske piche aa chuki hai uska man or vo jaise aapas me lad rahe the....
Jerry apne man me:-

Man me :- Main kayar hu*" main kayar hu kya fayeda mere mard hone ka kya fayeda mere jeene ka jab meri maa meri bahene har pal roti hai kya fayeda hua mera school chodne ka or jab maa ko ye bataunga ya ushe pata legega to kya hoga main kya socha tha lekin main kuch nahi kar paya or jab maa puchegi tab kya bolunga huh? Ki aapka jerry haar gya aapka jerry kuch nahi kar paya kuch nahi kar paya (or ye soch te hue uski aankhein nam hogai 🥺 )

Tabhi vo doosri cigrate jala hi raha hota hai ki Rashmi gusse me chillati hai JERRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY or tab kahi jaakar jerry hosh me aata hai or piche mudke dekhta hai.


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Or Rashmi jerry ki ye harkat dekh kar he ran Rehgai ki abhi bhi usne apne mooh se cigrate nahi faiki or doosri cigrate jala li Rashmi ko samj nahi aara tha ki ye achank ho kya raha hai uska poora sharir kaap raha tha vo samaj hi nahi paati ki uske jerry ko ho kya gya hai kya ho gya h ushe aaj kya kami Rehgai uski mamta me kya uska pyaar kam rehgaya kya usne apne bete ke dil me vo jagah nahi banai jo banani thi ya uska beta kisi moosibat me hai ye kya uska beta ye sab dekh kar depression me jaa rha hai ya fir................or itna soche hi vo rook jaati hai ab vo kya tha vo pata chalega abhi

Jerry abhi bhi cigrate pi raha tha or ye dekh Rashmi uske paas aati hai or kheech kar ek thappad marti hai
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Jerry jo apni duniya me tha vo ek dam se shoked ho jaata hai ki ye hua kya kyuki aaj pehli baar uski maa ne ushe maara tha lekin jab usne apni halat dekhi to ushe samaj aaya ki ye maine kya kiya ushe bohot bura laga usne cigrate faiki or tab ushe apne kate hue haath ka ehsas hua or jaise hi ushe dard hua vo haath rakhni ne dekhna vo jerry ko rote hue vaha bethaya or niche jaakar first-aid lekar aaio or uski bandages krne lag gai lekin ye sab karte hue vo to rahi thi bas ro rhi thi or rote rote jerry se:-

Rashmi : ye kya hua kaise hua main nahi jaanti jerry tumne Aaj jo kiya hai uske lie main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi krungi apne haath ko itna kaat diya poora kanch ghoos gya hai aakhir kya baat hai jo tumhne aisa kiya tumhe isk jawab dena hoga or upar se cigarete pee rahe ho aaj tak to tumne aisa nahi kiya kya tum bhi apne pita ke jaise....

OR BAS itna bolna tha ki jerry gusse khada ho jata hai......

Age kya hua agle part me jo ki kal aaega aaj election ki wajah se itna hi likha hai Varna or likhta hope aapko pasand aaya hoga batana kaisa likh raha hu 😘
 
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Vaise aap logo ne kisko vote diya 🤭💯
 
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