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Niche pahunch kar Atul breakfast ke liye table par baith gaya…Waha usne dekha ki uske Papa aur bade bhaiya Gaurav bhi baithe hai…Dono hi Atul ko kabhi ghurte to kabhi kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahe the…Lekin keh nahi paa rahe the.
Atul bhi dono ke haalat se anjaan nahi tha…Wo jaanta tha uske Papa aur bhaiya baatein dhund rahe hai kehne ke liye…Atul ne bhi khud ko taiyaar kar liya tha unke sawaalo ka jawaab dene ke liye.
Jab 5 minute tak bhi dono kuch nahi bole tab Atul bhi bore hone laga…Kitchen me naashta taiyaar kar rahi Maa ko aawaj de kar usne kaha.
Atul:- Maa…Jaldi kijiye…Late ho raha hu.
Kitchen se Maa ne kaha.
A. Mom:- Bas laa rahi hu…Ready ho gaya hai.
Gaurav:- Bahut jaldi hai tujhe college jaane ki.
Na khus aawaj me Gaurav ne Kaha.
Atul:- College ka first day hai…Thoda jaldi pahunchna chaahta hu.
Full attitude ke saath Atul ne jawaab diya.
A. Dad:- Kitna mana kiya tha tujhe MBBS mat padh aur commerce padh ke family business ko sambhaal…Lekin tere sar me to Doctor banne ka bhut chadha hua hai.
Abb jaake Atul ke Papa ko kuch bolne ka mauka mila…Wo kisi tarah kuch bolne ka mauka dhund rahe the.
Wo Atul ke MBBS padhne ke decision se bahut naraaj the.
Gaurav:- Ye hamara baat kyu sunega…Abb to bada insaan ho gaya hai…Jo accha lagega wo hi karega…Dekh raha hu isse…Ghamand kuch jyada hi badh raha hai.
Gaurav ko bhi ek mauka mil gaya apni baat kehne ka.
Atul:- Bhai ek baat kahu.
Chehre me fiki si muskaan aur aawaj me halka gussa ke saath Atul ne kaha.
Gaurav:- Ha bol.
Atul:- Agar tune apna ye over react karna band nahi kiya to ek din buri tarah se mujh se peet jaayega…Tu apne kaam se matlab rakh…Mere life me pehli bhi bahut dakhal andaazi kar chukka hai…Aisa hi karta raha to tere liye bilkul accha nahi hoga.
Atul ne bhi apna frustration nikaalte hue kaha…Aaj pehli baar usne Gaurav se iss tarah se baat kiya tha…Gaurav ka hamesha uske life me dakhal dena usko bilkul bhi pasand nahi tha…Lekin aaj se pehle usne kabhi Gaurav ko iss tarah se jawaab nahi diya tha…Kabhi dene ka mauka bhi nahi tha.
Tab tak Atul ki Maa bhi naashta le kar waha pahunch gayi thi.
A. Mom:- Beta wo tera bada bhai hai…Iss tarah se tujhe baat nahi karna chaahiye.
Atul ki Maa ne Atul ko samjhaate hue kaha.
Atul kuch jawaab deta usse pehle hi Gaurav ne kaha.
Gaurav:- Dekh rahe hai Papa…Abb to iski jubaan bhi chalne lag gaya hai…Mere saath saath ye aap ko bhi keh raha hai ki hame iske bare me kuch sochna bhi nahi chaahiye…
Gaurav itna hi bol paaya tha ki Atul ne uski baat ko kaat kar kaha.
Atul:- Agar tera bakwaas yun hi chalta raha to mera jubaan hi nahi laat aur mukka bhi chalega…Wo baat sirf tujhe bola tha…Papa ko nahi…Papa ko hak hai mere bare me decision lene ka…Lekin tujhe bilkul bhi nahi hai.
Abb agar fir se kuch bola tune to pakka abhi acchi tarah se peet jaayega.
Itna keh kar Atul chup ho gaya…Wo Gaurav ko gusse se ghurne laga.
A. Dad:- Kitna badtameez ho gaya hai tu…2 saal ghar se baahar kya raha tu to bolne ki tarika bhi bhul gaya…Koi apne bade bhai se aise badtameezi se baat karte hai kya.
Atul ki baato se uske Papa ka gussa bhi bahut badh gaya tha.
Atul:- Papa…Maanta hu abhi badtameezi se baat kiya hai maine…Lekin majbur bhi issi ne kiya…Hadd hota hai sehne ka…Aaj tak sehta raha iska sabhi hokum lekin abb saha nahi jaata.
(Gaurav ko dekhte hue) Respect bhi mai ussi ko karta hu jo deserve karta hai…Ye to bilkul bhi nahi karta…Ye jarur mera bada bhai hai lekin kabhi isne mujhe apna chhota bhai nahi maana…Ye to jaante hi honge aap…Bachpan se hi mujh par apna hukum chalata raha aur agar iska kisi baat ko inkaar kar diya to maar bhi khaana padta tha.
Mai 11 aur 12 bhi hostel me reh kar padha hu to vajah ye hai…Iske saath rehne ka bilkul bhi man nahi tha.
Lekin abb aur dar kar nahi jeeyunga…Abb itna to yakin hai khud par ki jarurat padne par iska acche se dhulaayi kar sakta hu.
Mai aap ko aur Maa ko bahut respect karta hu…Maine aapka commerce padhne ki baat iss liye nahi maana kyu ki mujhe uss subject me utna interest nahi hai…Ek baar doctor banne ka sapna dekh liya to wohi banna chaahta hu…Bahut soch samajh kar maine ye faisla liya hai.
Itna keh kar Atul chup ho gaya…Usne sabhi ki taraf ek najar ghumaaya…Sabhi chup the…Kisi ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kahe.
Atul:- Papa agar iss bare me baat karne lage to baat kabhi khatam nahi hoga…Bas itna kahunga ki ek din aap ko mera iss faisla par garv hoga.
Accha chalta hu abb mai…Late ho raha hai.
Itna keh kar Atul waha se utth gaya.
A. Mom:- Abhi to tune kuch khaaya bhi nahi.
Atul:- Abb late ho raha hai…Canteen me jaake khaa lunga.
A. Maa:- Thik hai…Pehla din hai tere college ka…Man laga ke padhna…All the best.
Atul ki Maa ki iss baat par Atul ke chehre me smile aa gaya.
Atul:- Thanks Maa…Acche se padhunga.
Itna keh kar Atul ghar se nikal gaya…Aur apni bike se college ki taraf chala gaya.
College me pahunch kar usne apne dost Ajay ko phone kiya.
Atul:- Kaha hai tu.
Ajay:- Canteen me…Tu kaha hai?
Atul:- Abhi parking me hu…Ruk 5 minute me pahunchta hu.
Itna keh kar Atul ne phone cut kar diya…Aur wo bhi canteen ki taraf chala gaya.
Canteen me pahunchte hi Atul ne dekha ki Ajay ek ladki ke saath baith kar coffee pee raha tha.
Wo man hi man soch kar dono ki taraf aage badhne laga.
Atul:- (In his mind) Ye Ajay ko bhi prem rog lag gaya hai…Isne phone me to bataya tha ki isko kisi se pyar ho gaya hai…Shaayad yahi hai wo ladki…Pata nahi aaj kal ye kya fashion chal raha hai…College me aaye nahi ki inhe pyar ho jaata hai…Pyar to ek fashion sa ho gaya hai.
Itna sochne ke baad wo dono ke paas pahunch gaya…Ajay ne Atul ko dekh liya.
Ajay:- Aa gaya tu…Baith yaha.(Apne paas ke seat dikhaate hue)…Ye hai Anjali meri dost…(Ladki ki taraf ishaara karte hue).
Aur Anjali ye hai Atul…Mera best friend.
Anjali:- (Haath badhaate hue) Hi Atul.
Atul:- (Haath milaate hue) Hi.
Uske baad Ajay aur Anjali ke bich fir se baat suru hone lagta hai…Wo dono apne baat me itna vyast ho jaate hai ki dono lagh bhag bhul hi jaate hai ki waha Atul bhi hai.
Atul:- (In his mind) Waah re Ajay…Gf kya mil gaya tu to mujhe hi bhul gaya…Laga reh.
Atul apne man me baatein soch hi raha tha ki ek ladki Anjali ke paas aati hai aur kehti hai.
Ladki:- Tu yaha hai…Maine tujhe kitni jagah dhund liya…Lekin kahi nahi mili…Chal class me chalte hai.
Ladki ki aawaj sunte hi Atul ko laga ki ye aawaj kuch jaani pehchaani si hai…Jab usne ladki ko dekha to munh se apne aap hi ye baat nikal gaya.
Atul:- Nisha.
Atul ki munh se apne naam sunne ke baad Nisha ne bhi Atul ki taraf dekha.
Nisha:- Atul tum.
Dono hi ek dusre ko dekh kar hairan ho gaye…Dono ne socha hi nahi tha ki dono iss tarah se fir milenge…Dono hairaani se ek dusre ko dekhne lage.
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