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Ek Park me ek ladka bahut hi udaas baitha tha…Chehre se pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna niraash aur dukhi hai…Jaise uska sab kuch usse cheen gaya hai…Wo ladka kuch pal baad apne chehra ko jhuka kar apne dono haath ke bich rakh leta hai aur rone lagta hai…Dard itna bhara tha uske dil me ki wo saamne dekh nahi paa raha tha…Kuch der tak wo aise hi munh chupaa kar rota raha tabhi uske kandhe par ek haath ko usne mehsus kiya.
Uss haath ka sparsh paate hi uss Ladka ko pata chal gaya ki wo kiska haath hai…Abb Ladke me itna himmat nahi tha ki wo uss chehre ki taraf dekh sake.
Wo waise hi apne chehre ko haath se chupaata raha lekin abb usne rona band kar diya.
Ladka ka kuch reaction na milne ke baad pareshan ho kar piche khadi ladki ne kaha.
Ladki:- Abb mujh se bhi baat nahi karoge Atul?
Ladki ki aawaj me bhi dard tha…Ladki bhi ussi tarah udaas thi jaise Atul tha.
Atul ko uss Ladki ki dard bhari aawaj sun kar bahut bura lagta hai…Atul se uss ladki ka dukh dekha nahi jaa raha tha…Lekin wo abb majbur tha…Chaah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paa raha tha.
Abb Atul ke paas itna himmat nahi tha ki wo uss ladki ki aankh me aankh daal kar baat kar sake…Pehle hi wo bahut tut gaya tha…Abb uss ladki ki maujudgi usse aur bhi kamjor bana raha tha.
Ladki:- Meri galti to bataao…Aise ignore kyu kar rahe ho? Jo ho raha hai wo hamaara majburi hai aur shaayad kismat bhi…Ham kuch nahi kar sakte hai.
Fir se uss ladki ne udaas aawaj me kaha.
Abb Atul se bhi nahi raha gaya…Ladki ki dard bhari aawaj ne iss baar usse bolne par majbur kar hi diya.
Atul:- Sahi keh rahi ho tum…Mere kismat me shaayad tum nahi ho…Warna itna pyar ke baawjud hame alag hona nahi padta.
Atul ne abhi bhi apne chehre ko dono haatho ke bich hi rakha tha.
Kuch pal ke khaamoshi ke baad Atul ne kaha.
Atul:- Shaayad abb tum he jaana chaahiye…Bahut jald tumhaari shaadi hone wali hai…Jaake taiyaari karo.
Iss baar Atul ki aawaj me bahut dard tha…Ek aashiq ko apne hi pyar se khud se dur jaane ke liye kehna bahut mushkil hota hai…Pata nahi Atul kaise khud ko sambhaal paaya tha abhi tak.
Atul ka ye dard ss ladki ne bhi mehsus kiya…Uski aankho me bhi abb aansu aane laga…Rote hue wo boli.
Ladki:- Meri majburi hai ye shaadi karna…Mai apne Papa ke khilaaf nahi jaa sakti…Maine tumhaare bare me unse baat bhi kiya tha…Lekin tumhaare naam sun kar unhone ek dam se mana kar diya…Pata nahi kyu wo tumse itna nafrat karte hai.
Maine socha tha jitne bhi din baaki hai utne din tumhaare saath hansi khusi bitaaungi…Shaadi ho jaane ke baad aise vakt to kabhi waapas nahi aayega…Lekin tum abhi se mujhe jaane ke liye bol rahe ho.
Aankho me aansu aur aawaj me dard ke saath Ladki ne kaha…Bina dekhe hi Atul ne mehsus kiya ki wo ladki ro rahi hai…Atul se uski dard bhari aawaj suna nahi jaa raha tha.
Atul:- Ek na ek din hame alag ho hi jaana hai…To fir der karne se koi faaidaa nahi…Agar maine tumhaari baat maan kar baaki ke kuch pal tumhaare saath bitaa liya to fir se tumhe pane ki meri khwaahish fir jag jaayegi…Aur bicchadte vakt khud ko sambhaal paana mere liye bahut mushkil ho jaayega…Behtar hoga ham abhi se alag ho jaaye…Aadat pad jaayega.
Iss pyar ka koi future nahi hai…Ham dono ek dusre se jindagi bhar pyar karte rahenge aur ek dusre ki yaado me jinda rahenge hamesha ke liye…Lekin ham dono kabhi ek nahi ho paayenge.
Atul ne chehra ko uthaaye bina hi kaha…Aawaj me dard to tha hi lekin wo khud ko bebash mehsus kar raha tha aur abb wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha.
Ladki:- To fir thik hai…Mai jaa rahi hu…Shaayad ye hamara aakhiri mulaakat hai…Lekin jaane se pehle ek baat jarur kahungi…Mere jaane ke baad khud ko sambhaal lena…Koi nashe ki aadat mat daal lena aur meri yaad me jindagi bhar kunwara mat rehna…Tum bhi koi acchi si ladki dhund kar shaadi kar lena.
Itna keh kar ladki chup ho gayi…Wo aage kuch nahi bol paa rahi thi…Fir himmat karke boli.
Ladki:- Accha abb mai chalti hu.
Itna keh kar ladki Atul ka jawaab sune bina hi waha se nikalne lagi…Wo waha se nikal paati Atul ne usse pehle hi keh diya.
Atul:- Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena…Mera Kasam adhura reh gaya…Jindagi bhar tumhaara saath na chhodne ka kasam khaaya tha…Lekin mai apna kasam nibha nahi paaya…Ham dono hi majbur hai…Haalat aur Pariwar ke inkaar ke saamne hamara kasam kamjor pad gaya…Hamara pyar haar gaya.
Ye kehne ke baad Atul ki aankh se bhi aansu nikal gaya.
Atul ka iss baat ka jawaab ladki nahi de paayi…Abb wo kuch bhi bol pane ki haalat me nahi thi…Iss baar wo Atul ko jawaab diye bina hi waha se chali gayi.
Achanak hi neend se Atul utth gaya…Usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki usne kaisa sapna dekha tha…Wo washroom me jaa kar jaldi se fresh ho kar aaya aur apne uss ajeeb sapne ke bare me sochne laga.
Atul:- Ye kaisa sapna aaya tha aaj raat me…Mujhe kisi si pyar ho gaya tha aur ham dono bicchad rahe thhe.
Itna keh kar Atul hasne laga.
Atul:- Pyar aur wo bhi mujhe…Impossible…Mai aise bakwas baato par bilkul bhi bharosha nahi karta…Love is time passing material…Aur mere paas aise faaltu vakt nahi hai waste karne ke liye.
Ye kehne ke baad Atul chup ho gaya…Wo fir apne sapne ke bare me sochne laga.
Atul:- Kya dekha tha wo sapne me abb thik se yaad bhi nahi aa raha hai…Haa yaad aaya…Koi buddha mujhse itna nafrat karta hai ki wo apni beti ki shaadi mujhse nahi karwana chaahta…Sapne me wo dikha kyu nahi…Agar mil gaya hota to pakka murder kar deta.
Atul ne hanste hue kaha…Usne jo murder ke bare me kaha tha majaak me khud se hi kaha tha.
Atul:- Ha…Ek aur baat yaad aaya…Mai kabhi aise bakwaas Kasam nahi khaata hu aur wo bhi pyar me…Agar khaa liya to har haal me nibhaata hu…Kabhi kisi haalat ko apne kasam se jitne nahi dunga…Agar maine kisi ladki se jindagi bhar saath rehne ki kasam diya to uss kasam ko har haal me nibhaaunga…Agar ladki ki parents ne mana kiya to usko bhaga kar le jaaunga.
Atul ne aatma vishwaas ke saath kaha…Wo abhi tak pyar aur pyar ki jaadu se anjaan tha…Usse ye tak pata nahi tha ki pyar naam ka rog lagne ke baad insaan me kitna badlaaw aata hai aur koi bhi insaan apne liye nahi apne pyar ke bare me sochta hai…Abhi to ye saari baato ko majaak ke roop me lekar hans raha tha lekin usse kya pata tha aane wala vakt me uska haal uska dekha hua sapna se bhi bura hone wala hai.
Atul:- Lekin mujhe uss ladki ki chehra kyu yaad nahi aa raha hai…Dekha hi nahi uski taraf to kaise yaad aayega…Abb to uska aawaj bhi bhul gaya.
Accha chance miss kar diya…Sapne me hi sahi aisi kaun si ladki hai jo mera dil chura sakti hai…Aur mai usse dil haar gaya…Accha chance tha uss ladki ka chehra dekhne ke liye lekin maine miss kar diya.
Kya fark padta hai…Ek sapna hi to tha…Aur aisi baatein sapne me hi possible hai ki mujhe kisi se pyar ho jaayega…Hakikat me bilkul bhi nahi.
Atul ne kuch iss tarah se kaha…Jaise usko khud par bahut garv hai ki usse kisi se pyar nahi hua hai aur naa hi kabhi hoga.
Itna kehne ke baad Atul ne ek baar ghadi me time dekha…Ghadi me time dekha…Subah 6:00 am baj raha tha…Abb wo sapno ki duniya se baahar nikal kar asli jindagi ke bare me sochne lagta hai.
Atul:- Abb ready hone ka time ho gaya hai…8:00 am se hai college lekin aaj 7:30 me pahuch jaaunga…First day me hi late nahi hona chaahta.
Iske baad Atul 10 minute me ready ho jaata hai aur niche naashta karne jaata hai…Usse pata tha ki aaj fir se usse apne Papa aur bade bhaiya ki sawaal ka saamna karna padega…Atul ne khud ko mentally prepare kar liya aur niche ki taraf chala gaya.
Aabhi padhna shuru Kiya hai .....
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very nice....start... Atul Ko sapna aata hai.... Aur usme joh ladki hai.... Uske bare me sochta hai.... aur attitude.... Jis tarah see.... Bataya hai.... Superb....