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Romance Kasam - Love is not Everything (Completed)

Sweet Pie

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UPDATE 1


Ek Park me ek ladka bahut hi udaas baitha tha…Chehre se pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna niraash aur dukhi hai…Jaise uska sab kuch usse cheen gaya hai…Wo ladka kuch pal baad apne chehra ko jhuka kar apne dono haath ke bich rakh leta hai aur rone lagta hai…Dard itna bhara tha uske dil me ki wo saamne dekh nahi paa raha tha…Kuch der tak wo aise hi munh chupaa kar rota raha tabhi uske kandhe par ek haath ko usne mehsus kiya.

Uss haath ka sparsh paate hi uss Ladka ko pata chal gaya ki wo kiska haath hai…Abb Ladke me itna himmat nahi tha ki wo uss chehre ki taraf dekh sake.

Wo waise hi apne chehre ko haath se chupaata raha lekin abb usne rona band kar diya.

Ladka ka kuch reaction na milne ke baad pareshan ho kar piche khadi ladki ne kaha.

Ladki:- Abb mujh se bhi baat nahi karoge Atul?

Ladki ki aawaj me bhi dard tha…Ladki bhi ussi tarah udaas thi jaise Atul tha.

Atul ko uss Ladki ki dard bhari aawaj sun kar bahut bura lagta hai…Atul se uss ladki ka dukh dekha nahi jaa raha tha…Lekin wo abb majbur tha…Chaah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paa raha tha.

Abb Atul ke paas itna himmat nahi tha ki wo uss ladki ki aankh me aankh daal kar baat kar sake…Pehle hi wo bahut tut gaya tha…Abb uss ladki ki maujudgi usse aur bhi kamjor bana raha tha.

Ladki:- Meri galti to bataao…Aise ignore kyu kar rahe ho? Jo ho raha hai wo hamaara majburi hai aur shaayad kismat bhi…Ham kuch nahi kar sakte hai.

Fir se uss ladki ne udaas aawaj me kaha.

Abb Atul se bhi nahi raha gaya…Ladki ki dard bhari aawaj ne iss baar usse bolne par majbur kar hi diya.

Atul:- Sahi keh rahi ho tum…Mere kismat me shaayad tum nahi ho…Warna itna pyar ke baawjud hame alag hona nahi padta.

Atul ne abhi bhi apne chehre ko dono haatho ke bich hi rakha tha.

Kuch pal ke khaamoshi ke baad Atul ne kaha.

Atul:- Shaayad abb tum he jaana chaahiye…Bahut jald tumhaari shaadi hone wali hai…Jaake taiyaari karo.

Iss baar Atul ki aawaj me bahut dard tha…Ek aashiq ko apne hi pyar se khud se dur jaane ke liye kehna bahut mushkil hota hai…Pata nahi Atul kaise khud ko sambhaal paaya tha abhi tak.

Atul ka ye dard ss ladki ne bhi mehsus kiya…Uski aankho me bhi abb aansu aane laga…Rote hue wo boli.

Ladki:- Meri majburi hai ye shaadi karna…Mai apne Papa ke khilaaf nahi jaa sakti…Maine tumhaare bare me unse baat bhi kiya tha…Lekin tumhaare naam sun kar unhone ek dam se mana kar diya…Pata nahi kyu wo tumse itna nafrat karte hai.

Maine socha tha jitne bhi din baaki hai utne din tumhaare saath hansi khusi bitaaungi…Shaadi ho jaane ke baad aise vakt to kabhi waapas nahi aayega…Lekin tum abhi se mujhe jaane ke liye bol rahe ho.

Aankho me aansu aur aawaj me dard ke saath Ladki ne kaha…Bina dekhe hi Atul ne mehsus kiya ki wo ladki ro rahi hai…Atul se uski dard bhari aawaj suna nahi jaa raha tha.

Atul:- Ek na ek din hame alag ho hi jaana hai…To fir der karne se koi faaidaa nahi…Agar maine tumhaari baat maan kar baaki ke kuch pal tumhaare saath bitaa liya to fir se tumhe pane ki meri khwaahish fir jag jaayegi…Aur bicchadte vakt khud ko sambhaal paana mere liye bahut mushkil ho jaayega…Behtar hoga ham abhi se alag ho jaaye…Aadat pad jaayega.

Iss pyar ka koi future nahi hai…Ham dono ek dusre se jindagi bhar pyar karte rahenge aur ek dusre ki yaado me jinda rahenge hamesha ke liye…Lekin ham dono kabhi ek nahi ho paayenge.

Atul ne chehra ko uthaaye bina hi kaha…Aawaj me dard to tha hi lekin wo khud ko bebash mehsus kar raha tha aur abb wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha.

Ladki:- To fir thik hai…Mai jaa rahi hu…Shaayad ye hamara aakhiri mulaakat hai…Lekin jaane se pehle ek baat jarur kahungi…Mere jaane ke baad khud ko sambhaal lena…Koi nashe ki aadat mat daal lena aur meri yaad me jindagi bhar kunwara mat rehna…Tum bhi koi acchi si ladki dhund kar shaadi kar lena.

Itna keh kar ladki chup ho gayi…Wo aage kuch nahi bol paa rahi thi…Fir himmat karke boli.

Ladki:- Accha abb mai chalti hu.

Itna keh kar ladki Atul ka jawaab sune bina hi waha se nikalne lagi…Wo waha se nikal paati Atul ne usse pehle hi keh diya.

Atul:- Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena…Mera Kasam adhura reh gaya…Jindagi bhar tumhaara saath na chhodne ka kasam khaaya tha…Lekin mai apna kasam nibha nahi paaya…Ham dono hi majbur hai…Haalat aur Pariwar ke inkaar ke saamne hamara kasam kamjor pad gaya…Hamara pyar haar gaya.

Ye kehne ke baad Atul ki aankh se bhi aansu nikal gaya.

Atul ka iss baat ka jawaab ladki nahi de paayi…Abb wo kuch bhi bol pane ki haalat me nahi thi…Iss baar wo Atul ko jawaab diye bina hi waha se chali gayi.




Achanak hi neend se Atul utth gaya…Usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki usne kaisa sapna dekha tha…Wo washroom me jaa kar jaldi se fresh ho kar aaya aur apne uss ajeeb sapne ke bare me sochne laga.

Atul:- Ye kaisa sapna aaya tha aaj raat me…Mujhe kisi si pyar ho gaya tha aur ham dono bicchad rahe thhe.

Itna keh kar Atul hasne laga.

Atul:- Pyar aur wo bhi mujhe…Impossible…Mai aise bakwas baato par bilkul bhi bharosha nahi karta…Love is time passing material…Aur mere paas aise faaltu vakt nahi hai waste karne ke liye.

Ye kehne ke baad Atul chup ho gaya…Wo fir apne sapne ke bare me sochne laga.

Atul:- Kya dekha tha wo sapne me abb thik se yaad bhi nahi aa raha hai…Haa yaad aaya…Koi buddha mujhse itna nafrat karta hai ki wo apni beti ki shaadi mujhse nahi karwana chaahta…Sapne me wo dikha kyu nahi…Agar mil gaya hota to pakka murder kar deta.

Atul ne hanste hue kaha…Usne jo murder ke bare me kaha tha majaak me khud se hi kaha tha.

Atul:- Ha…Ek aur baat yaad aaya…Mai kabhi aise bakwaas Kasam nahi khaata hu aur wo bhi pyar me…Agar khaa liya to har haal me nibhaata hu…Kabhi kisi haalat ko apne kasam se jitne nahi dunga…Agar maine kisi ladki se jindagi bhar saath rehne ki kasam diya to uss kasam ko har haal me nibhaaunga…Agar ladki ki parents ne mana kiya to usko bhaga kar le jaaunga.

Atul ne aatma vishwaas ke saath kaha…Wo abhi tak pyar aur pyar ki jaadu se anjaan tha…Usse ye tak pata nahi tha ki pyar naam ka rog lagne ke baad insaan me kitna badlaaw aata hai aur koi bhi insaan apne liye nahi apne pyar ke bare me sochta hai…Abhi to ye saari baato ko majaak ke roop me lekar hans raha tha lekin usse kya pata tha aane wala vakt me uska haal uska dekha hua sapna se bhi bura hone wala hai.

Atul:- Lekin mujhe uss ladki ki chehra kyu yaad nahi aa raha hai…Dekha hi nahi uski taraf to kaise yaad aayega…Abb to uska aawaj bhi bhul gaya.

Accha chance miss kar diya…Sapne me hi sahi aisi kaun si ladki hai jo mera dil chura sakti hai…Aur mai usse dil haar gaya…Accha chance tha uss ladki ka chehra dekhne ke liye lekin maine miss kar diya.

Kya fark padta hai…Ek sapna hi to tha…Aur aisi baatein sapne me hi possible hai ki mujhe kisi se pyar ho jaayega…Hakikat me bilkul bhi nahi.

Atul ne kuch iss tarah se kaha…Jaise usko khud par bahut garv hai ki usse kisi se pyar nahi hua hai aur naa hi kabhi hoga.

Itna kehne ke baad Atul ne ek baar ghadi me time dekha…Ghadi me time dekha…Subah 6:00 am baj raha tha…Abb wo sapno ki duniya se baahar nikal kar asli jindagi ke bare me sochne lagta hai.

Atul:- Abb ready hone ka time ho gaya hai…8:00 am se hai college lekin aaj 7:30 me pahuch jaaunga…First day me hi late nahi hona chaahta.

Iske baad Atul 10 minute me ready ho jaata hai aur niche naashta karne jaata hai…Usse pata tha ki aaj fir se usse apne Papa aur bade bhaiya ki sawaal ka saamna karna padega…Atul ne khud ko mentally prepare kar liya aur niche ki taraf chala gaya.

Aabhi padhna shuru Kiya hai .....
I like Stories.... Jisme pyaar.... Emotions.... Magic.... Fantasy aur suspense ho.....

very nice....start... Atul Ko sapna aata hai.... Aur usme joh ladki hai.... Uske bare me sochta hai.... aur attitude.... Jis tarah see.... Bataya hai.... Superb....
 

Sweet Pie

New Member
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UPDATE 2


Niche pahunch kar Atul breakfast ke liye table par baith gaya…Waha usne dekha ki uske Papa aur bade bhaiya Gaurav bhi baithe hai…Dono hi Atul ko kabhi ghurte to kabhi kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahe the…Lekin keh nahi paa rahe the.

Atul bhi dono ke haalat se anjaan nahi tha…Wo jaanta tha uske Papa aur bhaiya baatein dhund rahe hai kehne ke liye…Atul ne bhi khud ko taiyaar kar liya tha unke sawaalo ka jawaab dene ke liye.

Jab 5 minute tak bhi dono kuch nahi bole tab Atul bhi bore hone laga…Kitchen me naashta taiyaar kar rahi Maa ko aawaj de kar usne kaha.

Atul:- Maa…Jaldi kijiye…Late ho raha hu.

Kitchen se Maa ne kaha.

A. Mom:- Bas laa rahi hu…Ready ho gaya hai.

Gaurav:- Bahut jaldi hai tujhe college jaane ki.

Na khus aawaj me Gaurav ne Kaha.

Atul:- College ka first day hai…Thoda jaldi pahunchna chaahta hu.

Full attitude ke saath Atul ne jawaab diya.

A. Dad:- Kitna mana kiya tha tujhe MBBS mat padh aur commerce padh ke family business ko sambhaal…Lekin tere sar me to Doctor banne ka bhut chadha hua hai.

Abb jaake Atul ke Papa ko kuch bolne ka mauka mila…Wo kisi tarah kuch bolne ka mauka dhund rahe the.

Wo Atul ke MBBS padhne ke decision se bahut naraaj the.

Gaurav:- Ye hamara baat kyu sunega…Abb to bada insaan ho gaya hai…Jo accha lagega wo hi karega…Dekh raha hu isse…Ghamand kuch jyada hi badh raha hai.

Gaurav ko bhi ek mauka mil gaya apni baat kehne ka.

Atul:- Bhai ek baat kahu.

Chehre me fiki si muskaan aur aawaj me halka gussa ke saath Atul ne kaha.

Gaurav:- Ha bol.

Atul:- Agar tune apna ye over react karna band nahi kiya to ek din buri tarah se mujh se peet jaayega…Tu apne kaam se matlab rakh…Mere life me pehli bhi bahut dakhal andaazi kar chukka hai…Aisa hi karta raha to tere liye bilkul accha nahi hoga.

Atul ne bhi apna frustration nikaalte hue kaha…Aaj pehli baar usne Gaurav se iss tarah se baat kiya tha…Gaurav ka hamesha uske life me dakhal dena usko bilkul bhi pasand nahi tha…Lekin aaj se pehle usne kabhi Gaurav ko iss tarah se jawaab nahi diya tha…Kabhi dene ka mauka bhi nahi tha.

Tab tak Atul ki Maa bhi naashta le kar waha pahunch gayi thi.

A. Mom:- Beta wo tera bada bhai hai…Iss tarah se tujhe baat nahi karna chaahiye.

Atul ki Maa ne Atul ko samjhaate hue kaha.

Atul kuch jawaab deta usse pehle hi Gaurav ne kaha.

Gaurav:- Dekh rahe hai Papa…Abb to iski jubaan bhi chalne lag gaya hai…Mere saath saath ye aap ko bhi keh raha hai ki hame iske bare me kuch sochna bhi nahi chaahiye…

Gaurav itna hi bol paaya tha ki Atul ne uski baat ko kaat kar kaha.

Atul:- Agar tera bakwaas yun hi chalta raha to mera jubaan hi nahi laat aur mukka bhi chalega…Wo baat sirf tujhe bola tha…Papa ko nahi…Papa ko hak hai mere bare me decision lene ka…Lekin tujhe bilkul bhi nahi hai.

Abb agar fir se kuch bola tune to pakka abhi acchi tarah se peet jaayega.

Itna keh kar Atul chup ho gaya…Wo Gaurav ko gusse se ghurne laga.

A. Dad:- Kitna badtameez ho gaya hai tu…2 saal ghar se baahar kya raha tu to bolne ki tarika bhi bhul gaya…Koi apne bade bhai se aise badtameezi se baat karte hai kya.

Atul ki baato se uske Papa ka gussa bhi bahut badh gaya tha.

Atul:- Papa…Maanta hu abhi badtameezi se baat kiya hai maine…Lekin majbur bhi issi ne kiya…Hadd hota hai sehne ka…Aaj tak sehta raha iska sabhi hokum lekin abb saha nahi jaata.

(Gaurav ko dekhte hue) Respect bhi mai ussi ko karta hu jo deserve karta hai…Ye to bilkul bhi nahi karta…Ye jarur mera bada bhai hai lekin kabhi isne mujhe apna chhota bhai nahi maana…Ye to jaante hi honge aap…Bachpan se hi mujh par apna hukum chalata raha aur agar iska kisi baat ko inkaar kar diya to maar bhi khaana padta tha.

Mai 11 aur 12 bhi hostel me reh kar padha hu to vajah ye hai…Iske saath rehne ka bilkul bhi man nahi tha.

Lekin abb aur dar kar nahi jeeyunga…Abb itna to yakin hai khud par ki jarurat padne par iska acche se dhulaayi kar sakta hu.

Mai aap ko aur Maa ko bahut respect karta hu…Maine aapka commerce padhne ki baat iss liye nahi maana kyu ki mujhe uss subject me utna interest nahi hai…Ek baar doctor banne ka sapna dekh liya to wohi banna chaahta hu…Bahut soch samajh kar maine ye faisla liya hai.


Itna keh kar Atul chup ho gaya…Usne sabhi ki taraf ek najar ghumaaya…Sabhi chup the…Kisi ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kahe.

Atul:- Papa agar iss bare me baat karne lage to baat kabhi khatam nahi hoga…Bas itna kahunga ki ek din aap ko mera iss faisla par garv hoga.

Accha chalta hu abb mai…Late ho raha hai.

Itna keh kar Atul waha se utth gaya.

A. Mom:- Abhi to tune kuch khaaya bhi nahi.

Atul:- Abb late ho raha hai…Canteen me jaake khaa lunga.

A. Maa:- Thik hai…Pehla din hai tere college ka…Man laga ke padhna…All the best.

Atul ki Maa ki iss baat par Atul ke chehre me smile aa gaya.

Atul:- Thanks Maa…Acche se padhunga.

Itna keh kar Atul ghar se nikal gaya…Aur apni bike se college ki taraf chala gaya.

College me pahunch kar usne apne dost Ajay ko phone kiya.

Atul:- Kaha hai tu.

Ajay:- Canteen me…Tu kaha hai?

Atul:- Abhi parking me hu…Ruk 5 minute me pahunchta hu.

Itna keh kar Atul ne phone cut kar diya…Aur wo bhi canteen ki taraf chala gaya.

Canteen me pahunchte hi Atul ne dekha ki Ajay ek ladki ke saath baith kar coffee pee raha tha.

Wo man hi man soch kar dono ki taraf aage badhne laga.

Atul:- (In his mind) Ye Ajay ko bhi prem rog lag gaya hai…Isne phone me to bataya tha ki isko kisi se pyar ho gaya hai…Shaayad yahi hai wo ladki…Pata nahi aaj kal ye kya fashion chal raha hai…College me aaye nahi ki inhe pyar ho jaata hai…Pyar to ek fashion sa ho gaya hai.

Itna sochne ke baad wo dono ke paas pahunch gaya…Ajay ne Atul ko dekh liya.

Ajay:- Aa gaya tu…Baith yaha.(Apne paas ke seat dikhaate hue)…Ye hai Anjali meri dost…(Ladki ki taraf ishaara karte hue).

Aur Anjali ye hai Atul…Mera best friend.

Anjali:- (Haath badhaate hue) Hi Atul.

Atul:- (Haath milaate hue) Hi.

Uske baad Ajay aur Anjali ke bich fir se baat suru hone lagta hai…Wo dono apne baat me itna vyast ho jaate hai ki dono lagh bhag bhul hi jaate hai ki waha Atul bhi hai.

Atul:- (In his mind) Waah re Ajay…Gf kya mil gaya tu to mujhe hi bhul gaya…Laga reh.

Atul apne man me baatein soch hi raha tha ki ek ladki Anjali ke paas aati hai aur kehti hai.

Ladki:- Tu yaha hai…Maine tujhe kitni jagah dhund liya…Lekin kahi nahi mili…Chal class me chalte hai.

Ladki ki aawaj sunte hi Atul ko laga ki ye aawaj kuch jaani pehchaani si hai…Jab usne ladki ko dekha to munh se apne aap hi ye baat nikal gaya.

Atul:- Nisha.

Atul ki munh se apne naam sunne ke baad Nisha ne bhi Atul ki taraf dekha.

Nisha:- Atul tum.

Dono hi ek dusre ko dekh kar hairan ho gaye…Dono ne socha hi nahi tha ki dono iss tarah se fir milenge…Dono hairaani se ek dusre ko dekhne lage.

[Note:- Friends abhi tak to jaisa xp me likha tha wohi post kar raha hu...Aage kuch changes bhi aa sakte hai...Koshish karunga kuch part ko skip karke present tak pahunchpahunchne ki aur kuch important part add bhi kar sakta hu...Plot aur theme wohi hai...Kuch mistakes ko improve karunga...Stay tuned.]

Very nice update..... Jisme interest hi na ho us... Rah par chalke koi faydaanahi....

Waise yeh... college mein huva reaction.... Aage update mein patah.... Chalega...
 

Sweet Pie

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Update 3 nice hai....
Doh friends.... Kaise hoteh hai... Aur kaise ek dusre see.... Apni problem aur mann ki Baat kehte hai....

Superb..... Nice story line .....
 

Champ_AK_81

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Bhai bohot hi achchha update hai bhai. Par ye kya pehle jese hi aap 2 din me ek bar ab update doge. Bhai ese me story me maza nahi ayega. Plzz bhai continue rakhiye story ko.
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Thanks Mbindas bhai for your support and comment...Bhai abhi bahut din baad ghar aaya hu to sabhi ke saath time spend karne ki vajah se update ke liye jyada time nahi mil raha hai...Vacation baad college hai aur fir study me busy hone ke baad bhi jyada time nahi milta...Koshish to har baar yahi hai ki jitna ho sake utna regular rahe....Aage bhi yahi koshish rahega...Bas aap sab saath bane rahiye bhai.
 
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