Horror kurbani.. a love story..

[rebellover]

kehte hain ki duniya me har sikke ke do pehlu hote hain.. sach aur juth.. khushi aur ghum.. bhagvan aur shiatan.. ye kahani insaani fitrat ke do pehlu par aadharit hai.. koi pyaar ke lie paagal hai toh koi nafrat ke mare pagal hota hai..

kahani me kahi pyar hai to kahi nafrat.. nafrat insaan ko marne ke bad bhi nahi chhodti and pyar insaan ko marne ke bad bhi zinda rakhta hai.. kya hoga jab apko apka khoya hua pyar wapis mil jaye par ap is bat se anjaan ho ki apka pyar kisi musibat me hai..

ye kahani hai ek ese ladke ki jisne apne pyar ko bachane ke lie apna sav kuchh kurban kar dia.. apni jaan bhi.. kya uski kurbani rang layegi? kya uska pyar kabhi mukammal ho payegi?. janne ke lie padhie..
KURBANI.. A LOVE STORY..

intro..
vihaan.. hero..
katha.. heroin..
roshan.. dada ji of vihaan..
friends of vihaan..
tara.. ashish and jai..

update 00.. the beginning ..
andhera.. kehte hain ki andhera apne andar kai sari chize chhupaye betha hota hai.. esa hi ghana andhera ooty ke pahadi ilaake me fela hua tha.. esa andhera ke insaan apni har ummid kho bethe..

ooty ke jungle are me bani pahadi par ek banda khada hua tha jiske hatho me ek lakdi thi jiske sahare woh khud ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha.. akho me ek ummid aur kisi ko khone ka dar dono ek saath lie woh kuchh soch raha tha.. tabhi koi pichhe se aata hai and uske kandhe par hath rakhta hai..

unknown : woh kahi nahi hai puri pahadi chhan mari par uske hone ki koi nishani toh kya woh kaha ho sakti hai uska koi clue nahi mila..

uski bat sun kar pehle se khade bande ne kaha, "use milna hi hoga.. bina uski madad ke hum use nahi bacha sakte.. guruji ke hisab se use bachane ke lie hamare pas maximum 10din hai.. par yeh 10din bhi kafi dangerous hai.. woh shaitan usko ek pal bhi chain se nahi jine dega har pal tadpata rahega.. "

unknown : i know.. par tumhara pyar uski taqat banega.. rahi bat us shaitan ko harane ki to us shaitan ka raaz uske past me hi hai.. guruji ne kaha tha ki yaha par us shaitan se jude har sawal se judi pehli kadi mil jayegi par yaha par kuchh bhi nahi hai.. "

person 1.. : yeh andhera hi hame rasta dikhayega ashish.. andhera hi ujale ke janm ka reason banta hai.. kuchh esa dhundo jo alag aur ajib ho..

ashish : jesa tum kaho vihaan.. i hope hamari koshish rang laye.. mujhe tum par tumhare pyar par bharosa hai tum use bacha hi loge chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye.. and dono apni manzil ki talash me aage chale jate hain..

few months back..
ooty ka jungle area jo ki raat me bahot darawna lagta hai.. din me bhale hi jungle hara bhara and khubsurat lagta ho raat me yeh khubusrati manhusiyat me badal jati hai..

raat ka waqt tha 4 log jungle me camping karne ke lie aaye hue the and woh camping ke lie ek badhia jagah dhund rahe the..

thodi der bad unhe woh jagah mil bhi gai par woh jagah thodi darawni and ajib lag rahi thi.. ajib sa sannata and manhoosiyat feli hui thi waha par..

khair unlogo ne camping ke lie saman set kia and tambu gaadne ke baad aag jala di.. wese ooty me thand kafi rehti hai par raat me thand ka alag hi aalam rehta hai..

intro.. ( in sabhi me se sirf 1insaan ka role aage story me thoda important hone wala hai.. lets see who is that person..)

sachin.. group ka leader jo ki sare planning karta hai and travelling bhi iska department hai..

tarun.. ek engineer student jo ki is group me naya naya hai and cooking me expert hai..

rizwaan.. yeh ek company me clerk ki job karta hai and is group ka finance sambhalta hai.. wese to padha likha hai fir bhi bhoot pret vagera me manta hai and darpok kisam ka bhi hai..

satish.. yeh banda romeo type hai yeh ek gym me trainer hai and ab tak inki koi gf nahi ban paai..

charo camp fire ke samne bethe hue the and charo ke hath me beer ke cans the.. charo apni dosti ke purane lamhe yaad kar rahe the..

sachin : mene suna hai ki yaha par ek haweli hai jo kafi ajib hai.. usme jo bhi jata hai woh ya to wapis aata nhi ya uska koi na koi body part gayab hota hai ya sad chuka hota hai.. police ne doctors ne sab ne investigate kia par kuchh pata nahi chal paya..

tarun : kya yar sab bakwas hai.. science me bhi esi kai sari chize hain jin ki madad se body parts ko asani se sadya ja sakta hai.. and sab se badi baat bhut vagera kuchh nahi hota..

rizwan : bhoot pishach chudail hote hain bhai.. bhale hi ham unhe dekh na sakte ho par unka wajud hai is dunia me.. mene ye bhi suna hai ki unki dunia and hamari dunia ke bich ek patli diwar hoti hai ya darwaza hota hai jinse woh hamari dunia me jab chahe aa ja kar sakte hain.. and yeh darwaza kuchh manhoos ya shetani jagaho par hi hota hai..

satish : ha baba rizwaan gyani ji apke pas toh insab mamlo ka kafi gyaan hai.. kya ap batane ki krupa karenge ki esa darwaza kin kin jagaho par ho sakta hai and kesa dikhta hai..

rizwan ke pas shayad jawab tha par in sab ka ravaiya dekh kar use malum pad chuka tha ki woh sab uska mazak hi udayenege.. is lie woh chup raha..

khair ese hi baate karte hue charo thak chuke the and tent me aa kar so gaye.. par shayad rizwan ki baat sahi thi woh jane anjane kaha aa chuke hain unhe nahi pata tha..

raat ke 2baje ke aas pas us ilaake me kohra achanak had se jyada badhne laga tha.. un 4ro ne 2razai+kambal+shawl odhi hui thi and ek hi bed par so rahe the fir bhi unhe thand lag rahi thi.. jab thand bardasht nahi hui to sachin ne bahar aake dekha toh paya ki aag bujh chuki hai and kohra bhi kafi badh chuka hai..

usne aag jalane ka socha par lakdi nahi thi is lie woh lakdi dhundane laga.. wahi thand ke karan baaki 3ki nind bhi khul chuki thi.. thodi der bad jab sachin khali hath lauta tab unhe pata chala ki unki ummid ne dam tod dia hai..

sab soch hi rahe the ki satish ki nazar dur jal rahe bulb par gai.. jo ki kisi bade ghar ke darwaze par jal raha tha.. unhone socha ki waha ja kar check kia jaye..

charo dosto ne jaldi se tent aur baki saman sameta and kandhe par laad dia and kambal odh kar us taraf chal die.. jab waha pahoche tab unhone dekha ki yeh ek haweli hai jo shayad bahot samay se bandh hai.. unhone aas pas ke environment ka jayza kiya toh pata chala ki yaha par shayad hi koi rehta hoga.. woh sab andar jane ka rasta dhundane lage q ki woh main gate khul nahi raha tha..

woh rasta dhund hi rahe the ki achanak woh darwaza ek karkash awaz ke sath khul gaya.. ye dekh kar sab khush hogaye and jaldi se andar chale gaye.. par unhe nahi pata tha ki woh jaha ja rahe hai wo jagah kitni bhayanak hai and wo apne anjaam se bekhabar andar ghus gaye..

kya hoga insab ke sath? kya hai is haweli ka raaz?

end of update 00.
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[Shetan]

kehte hain ki duniya me har sikke ke do pehlu hote hain.. sach aur juth.. khushi aur ghum.. bhagvan aur shiatan.. ye kahani insaani fitrat ke do pehlu par aadharit hai.. koi pyaar ke lie paagal hai toh koi nafrat ke mare pagal hota hai..

kahani me kahi pyar hai to kahi nafrat.. nafrat insaan ko marne ke bad bhi nahi chhodti and pyar insaan ko marne ke bad bhi zinda rakhta hai.. kya hoga jab apko apka khoya hua pyar wapis mil jaye par ap is bat se anjaan ho ki apka pyar kisi musibat me hai..

ye kahani hai ek ese ladke ki jisne apne pyar ko bachane ke lie apna sav kuchh kurban kar dia.. apni jaan bhi.. kya uski kurbani rang layegi? kya uska pyar kabhi mukammal ho payegi?. janne ke lie padhie..
KURBANI.. A LOVE STORY..

intro..
vihaan.. hero..
katha.. heroin..
roshan.. dada ji of vihaan..
friends of vihaan..
tara.. ashish and jai..

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Superb start. Name se lag raha he ki ye story Emotional hogi.

Love story horror forum par. Mazedar hoga romance or dar ka sauad misran. Aage padhne ko betab hu.

Best of luck.

 

[rebellover]

update 01.. khel..

chaaro dost haweli ke andar chale jate hain.. jese hi sab andar jate hain woh dekhte hain ki andar saf suthra hall tha and hall ke hi ek kone me chimni bani hui thi jisme lakdia rakhi hui thi jalane ke lie and aur bhi sukhi lakdia rakhi hui thi side me..

stairs par jakar dekhne se pata chal raha tha ki upar ki ore bahot sare rooms the jo ki shayad bandh the.. kitchen me grocery and taaza sabji rakhi hui thi.. sab khush the yeh sab dekh kar.. rizwan chimni me aag lagata hai jisse waha par garmi peda ho jati hai jisse unhe jaanlewa thand se raahat mil rahi thi..

chaaro apne bags me se kambal and nikal lete hain and hall me rakhe hue sofas par let jate hain and sone ki koshish karne lag jate hain and so bhi jaate hain ..

few days later morning time ..
log us haweli ke area me jaane se toh kya us area me jane ka sochne se bhi kaanp uthte hain par aaj ek charwaha galti se waha aa chuka tha.. par uska waha par aana shayad uske lie uski life ka sabse darawna pal banne wala tha..

woh jese hi us haweli wali jagah par aata hai to woh dekhta hai ki waha par tent and 4 kambal pade hue hain and aas pas khoon hi khoon faila hua tha par insaan ka koi namonishan nahi tha.. woh jaldi se gaav valo ko ittala karta hai par koi bhi gaavvala waha par jaane ko taiyar nahi hota.. khabar aag ki tarha fail jati hai and police ko bhi is ghatna ke bare me pata chal jata hai..

intro. time..
yogesh insp. and station incharge.. age 32..
hari.. head constable.. age 55
rahim.. khabri..
girish.. police jeep driver..

station me khabar fail chuki thi ke us area me woh sab samaan and khoon mila hai.. pehle toh sab janwar ka khoon samajh kar ignore karte hain par ek phone call ke aate hi sab dar jaate hain.. insp. yogesh and uski team station me beth kar time pass kar rahe the ke tabhi insp. yogesh ka mobile baj utha and call dgp sir ka tha.. yogesh ne call jese hi pick kia dgp us par baras pade..

dgp : tum log kya jakh maar rahe ho udhar? tumhare area me aakar india ke top business man ka beta sachin apne friends ke sath gum ho gaya hai.. sunne me aaya hai ki woh jungle ke kisi area me gaya hua tha usko dhund nikalo jaldi se and mujhe report karo..

head constable hari ne sari baat sunli thi par jese hi usne jangal ke us area ka nam suna woh dar se kaanp utha.. use us haweli ke bare me pata tha par use yeh bhi pata tha ki wha jane par kya hone wala hai..

hari : sachin sir.. main apse kuchh kehna chahta hu.. uski awaz me dar and maut ka khauf saaf dikhai de raha tha esa lag raha tha ke jese woh dar se hi mar jayega..

yogesh : kya hua hari dada.. aap toh ese dar rahe ho jese apne maut ko abhi abhi dekha ho..

hari himmat karte hue, "sir maine maut ko bhale hi na dekha ho abhi tak par dgp sir ne jis jagah ke bare me bataya hai wo jagah maut ke samrajya se kam nahi hai.. aaj tak waha jo bhi gaya uski laash nahi mil paai hai and jo bhi bach gaya uski haalt janwar se bhi buri kar di hai us shetaan ne.. "

yogesh kuchh kehta nahi bas sawalia nazro se hari ki ore dekhta hai and usko aage bolne ko kehta hai..

hari : mene suna hai ki woh haweli sirf aadhe ghante ke lie dikhai deti hai and fir gayab ho jati hai.. is lie waha jaane se ghantaa kuchh nahi milega and agar raat me jayenge toh aadhe ghante me usme jaakar sab ko dhund kar wapis bahar aana padega... bada hi mushkil kaam hai boss..

yogesh : hmm.. hari dada main agar apna opinion batau to main bhi insab chizo me yakin rakhta hun par bina preparation ke waha par jana yani apni maut ko khud gale lagana.. ek kaam karie ap.. ap us area and haweli se judi saari jankari ikattha karie and pata karie kisi ne un chaaro logo ko waha jate hue dekha to hoga hi..

hari gaanv me patrolling ke lie nikal jata hai and ese bande ko bhi dhund raha tha jisne un chaaro ko dekha ho us taraf jaate hue ya esa koi jo us haweli ke itihas ke bare me jaanta ho.. par uske hath me ab tak sirf failure hi laga tha thak haar kar woh ek jagah par jeep rok kar beth gaya and aage kya karna hai woh sochne laga par tabhi uske kaano me kuchh alfaz sunai pade..

"nahi bachega koi us shaitaan se.. woh haweli nahi shaitan ka kila hai.. nahi chhodega woh kisi bhar wale ko jese usne us ladki ko bandi banaya hai.. " yeh alfaaz ek budhe chacha ke the jinhone pile rang ka kurta pajama pehna tha..

hari jeep se utar kar unke paas gaya and request karne wale lehze me kaha, "kya aap mujhe batayenge ki us haweli ki kahani kya hai.. kyu woh sirf raat me hi dikhti hai woh bhi sirf 30minutes ke lie.."

dada ji.. : main batata apko agar mujhe puri baat pata hoti.. maine us haweli ke wajah se apne pote ko khoya hai jo is jaalim dunia me mera eklauta apna tha.. maine us haweli ke bare me pata karne ki koshish kari par kuchh khas malum nahi kar paya.. agar apko woh sab janna hai toh ap mujse mil sakte hain mai mahadev ke mandir me hi rehta hu har samay.. itna keh kar woh aage chale gaye..

hari ko kuchh ummid mili thi us dada ji ke jarie.. usne rahim ko call kia and usko sab baat batai and use information nikalne ko bol dia..

mumbai.. location khanna mention..
vihaan bed par soya hua tha and uske expressions se lag raha tha ki woh bahot darawna sapna dekh raha hai.. achanak woh ek bahot hi dard bhari chikh ke sath uth jata hai.. uski chikh sun kar uski mom uske pas aajati hai apni mom ko dekh kar unke gale lag jata hai jese ki woh kisi ke hone ke ehaas se dar kar unke mamta ke chhav me khud ko chhupa lena chahta ho..

maa : kya hua bachcha.. ap chikhe kyu.. koi bura sapna dekha kya..

vihaan bahot dara hua tha usne apni maa ko aur zor se hug kar lia par kuchh nahi keh paya.. maa ko pata chal gaya tha ki vihaan bahot dara hua hai usne vihaan ko bed par bithaya and uske pas beth gai.. vihaan ne maa ki god me sir rakh lia and unka hath pakad liaa..

maa ne uske sar par hath firate hue baar bar puchha tab jaa kar uske muh se bas ek hi naam nikla "KATHAA.. usne use baandh ke rakha hai and use bahot dard de raha hai and woh mujhe chilla chilla kar yad karte hue ro rahi hai.. " kehta hue vihaan tadap utha jese ki woh khud dard me hai..

maa : betu kaun hai yeh katha? kya aap use jante ho? kya aap use pyar karte ho and kisne and kaha usko kaid kar ke rakha hai is bare me ap jante ho kya?

vihaan : main nahi janta woh kaun hai kaha hai kis haiwan ne use kaid kia hua hai kuchh nahi maalum.. aur rhi bat pyar ki toh main bhi nahi janta ki kya rishta hai hamara bas itna malum hai ki main usko dard me dekh nahi sakta nahi dekh sakta use tadapte hue..

maa vihaan ki baat sun kar dar bhi rahi thi and khush bhi thi ke uska beta kisi se saccha pyar karta hai .. unko yeh bhi lag raha hai ki vihaan par kisi bhoot ya chudail ka saya hai ya kuchh aur hi matter hai..

maa : vihaan ap subeh me ready rahio apko mere sath kahi pe chalna hai ap mana mat kariega.. please meri khatir..

vihaan : thik hai maa mai aaunga apke sath.. vihaan apni maa ki godi me sar rakh kar sone ki koshish karne laga and thodi der baad woh so bhi gaya.. uski maa bhi uske pas hi so gai taaki use dar na lage..

location ooty.. police station..
hari ab wapis laut aaya tha and abhi woh yogesh ke sath betha hua tha and usne jo bhi info. un dada ji ne di thi woh use suna di thi..

par dono ek proper theory and sabut ke bina aage nahi badh sakte the.. yogesh ne ooty shehar ke baki ke stations se contact kia and unko request kari ki is tarha ki jitni bhi ghatnyae darj hui thi unki details email ke through bhejne ko kaha.. thodi hi der mein sabhi case files mail ke roop mein aa gai thi.. yogesh ne apni team ko waha par bulaya and sari files ka print out nikal kar sab ko de dia and un sabko bhi files study karne ke kaam me laga dia..

next day morning..
vihaan uski mom ke sath kahi jane ke lie ready ho raha tha ki tabhi ghar ki door bell baj uthi.. maa ne door khola toh unhone ashish tara and jai ko dekha.. wese to woh tino kabhi bhi vihaan ke ghar pe aa sakte the par woh kabhi subeh sawere nahi aaye the..

khair maa ne un tino ko andar aane ko kaha.. woh sb sidha vihaan ke room main chale gaye jaha vihaan ek ladki ki painting ko dekh raha tha jise khud vihaan ne draw kia tha.. ​

vihaan us painting ko dekhne mein itna khoya hua tha ki uske dost uske room me aa kar beth gaye par usko pata nahi chala.. tino vihaan ko dekh rahe the jab unse sabr nahi hua to tara chupke se uthi and woh vihaan ke sath khadi ho gai and uske kandhe par dosto ki tarha style mein hath rakhte hue boli, "bhabhi bahot khubsurat hai.. nice choice wese naam kya hai.. "

vihaan bekhyaali me hi bola KATHA.. par jese hi use khayal aya usne kya kaha woh jhenp gaya and woh tara se dur khada ho gaya.. tara ashish and jai ko vihaan ke aakho mein katha ke lie beshumar pyar dikhai de raha tha..

tara : haash.. akhir hamare lallu laal ko pyar ho hi gaya.. wese katha kaha rehti hai kab aur kaha mile usse.. sabse badi baat tum ham sab ko kab mila rahe ho usse..

jai and ashish ek sath, .. " sahi kaha tara ne ham bhi sab janna chahte hain.. jaldi se hame apni story batao.. "

vihaan sad face banate hue.. " mujhe nahi pata kaha hai woh.. kesi hai.. kya rishta hai mera usse kisi bhi sawal ka jawab nahi hai mere pas.. mai agar use mil paya hu toh apne nightmares ke zarie hi mil paya hu.. " itna keh kar woh khud ko dikhne wale nightmares ke bare mein tino ko bata deta hai..









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[The Immortal]

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[rebellover]

update 2..

maa vihaan ko le kar apne kul guru ke ashram jane ke lie nikal gai thi.. wo nahi janti thi ke aaj konsa raaz unke samne aane wala tha..

thodi hi der bad woh dono ashram pahoch chuke the.. jese hi vihaan ne ashram ki dehliz ke nazdik pehla kadam badhaya waha ka mausam badal gaya and din me hi andhera ho gaya maano puri kaynat ki manhusiyat wahi par aa kar ikattha ho gai ho..

vihaan badi himmat kar ke dehliz par kadam rakhta hai par use bahot bada jhatka lagta hai and wo wahi gir jata hai.. wahi par guru ji ko kuchh abhas hota hai woh apne pas khade ek shishya ko kehte hai ki jo ashram ki dehliz par gira hai use sidha unke pas le aaya jaye bina deri kie..

woh shishy esa hi karta hai.. woh vihaan and uski mom ko sidha guru ji ke room me le jata hai.. guru ji us shishya ko vihaan ko mahadev ke shivling ke samne bichhaye hue aasan par litane ko kehte hain..

jese hi vihaan ko vaha litaya jata hai uska sharir ek jhatke ke sath hava me uth jata hai and uske sharir se kaala saya bahar nikalta hai and kahi chala jata hai aur vihaan zamin par gir jata hai..

guru ji vihaan ke pas jate hain and uske forehead par bhabhut lagate hain.. jese hi bhabhut usko chhuti hai vihaan ke muh se dard bhari aah nikalti hai and uske muh se nikalta hai "KATHA KO BACHAO.. WOH USE MAAR DALEGI.. MERI KATHA KO BACHALO.." itna keh kar woh fir se behosh ho jata hai..

maa : guru ji kaun hai yeh katha.. kya rishta hai mere bete ka usse.. kyu uske sapne use aate hain and jisme uske dard ko dekh kar mera beta dard se til til tadap uthta hai..

guru ji : rishta hai bahot gehra aur sadio purana hai.. abhi ke lie bas itna kahunga ki vihaan katha ke bina adhura hai.. agar is sapno ke silsile ko rokna hai toh in dono ke bich me jo dhaga hai use jodna hi hoga warna sab tabah ho jayega..

maa : par kese.. na vihaan ko malum hai na kisi aur ko ki katha kaha hai.. aur dono ki kahani ko janenge kese..

guru ji : woh waqt bhi bahot jald ayega.. bas intezar karo.. unhone ek rudrax ka bracelet dia and kaha ki yeh vihaan ko pehna dena and yad rahe yeh iske hath se na nikalne paye khas kar raat ke time..

maa vihaan ko voh bracelet pehna deti hain and vihaan ko le kar ghar aa jati hain..

next day..
vihaan apne papa ki company ki office me beth kar kaam hi kar rha tha ki uske table par rakha phone baj utha.. usme message dia gaya ki jis builing ki design banane ke lie kaha gaya tha woh ready hai.. vihaan apne Chief architect ko cabin me aane ko kehta hai.. thodi der bad woh banda cabin me apni asistant ke sath enter karta hai.. vihaan jese hi us assistamt ko dekhta hai woh chaunk jata hai.. uske muh se ek hi word nikalta hai KATHAAA..




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[Damon_Salvatore]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff