Fantasy LUCIFER - Morningstar

[ʜeisenberg]

Ye kahani hea Devil Lord LUCIFER ak fallen archangle ki jab insani duniya mea wo rehene aaye.

Es story ka savi story character place mere dimag ki pedayish hea aur kisi jivit ya mrit prani se similar vaye its only coincident....

Hello guyz i am not from india .. mera 1st 2nd 3rd koe v language hindi nahi hea.. bachpan se hindi movie dekh dekh k hindi sika hea agar language mistake huwa toh maaf kardena..

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[TKhan]

for new story bro

 

[ʜeisenberg]

UPDATE -1​

Starting me duniya me bas ek massive white light thea aur unki rahene wali place kaali(black as duniya)… kudh light thea wo aur sap ko pata hea kali place light ko kavi acchi nahi lagti.. GOD ye kali jaga hatake ak sundar rup dena chate thea par usknea pass itna sakti nahi tha k wo duniya banaye .. avi avi toh unka janam huwa tha unko sikna samajna bohot kuch baki tha akele wo kuch v nirman nahi kar sakte the kisi k saath ki jarurat tha… uswath samay toh nahi tha par aaj k samay k hissab se samjho toh carodo saal baad ak dusra light ka janam huwa Yellow light… halaki WHITE light ka janam bohot aage huwaa tha par saktiyo k mamle mea WHITE light k pass YELLOW light se bohot kam(less) saktiya tha.. WHITE light k pass av tak bohot idea tha duniya banane k liye aur ye sapne pure karne k liye uske pass 1 dost ka janam hocuka tha.. Dono light milke pehele kudh ko 1 rup dena dono nea decide kiya fir formation huwa aaj ki date ka GOD (WHITE light) and GODDESS (YELLOW light).. Halaki unka koe v gender nahi tha fir v khud k rup dete wakth GOD ladka bane aur GODDESS ladki (ye ladka ye ladki matlab insan bannea k baad division kiya huwa gender usbakth nahi tha)...

Dono milke duniya banahi sap aachi aachi jagha banahi…

Sap kuch toh bangaya tha fir v av tak 1 v jibit parni nahi tha.. Dono ne mil k pehe banaye ped (trees) pouda jinea pass koe v emotion nahi tha ye v kaha jasakta ki duniya mea emotion naam k bastu hi nahi tha GOD and GODDESS k pass v nahi… fir dhire dhire emotion nea v janam lene start kiya aur dono hi toh thea ye dinya mea ak dusre ko saath dene k liye toh dono k bich pyar huwa.. Ped paude jese khud bade ped se janam hote the yese hi dono k saktiya milake khud apnea jesa koe rachana karnea ka irada liya dono nea…


Aur janam huwa LUCIFER ka (1st son of GOD)

 

[John Cena]

Fantastic bhai
Story to zabardast lag rahi ho keep posting and

Congrats for your new thread

 

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[King]

 

[Avir]

Nice start

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

nice update

 

[John Cena]

Waiting for next

 

[Jay Sutar]

nice start bhai..........................waiting for the next one.