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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Abhi abhi sapna aaya aur sapne me kisi ne bola uth aur likh kuch bakchodi
Pehle to soch Nashe me kuch bhi soch raha hu lekin do minutes baad fir vohi sapna aaya
Ab yakeen hogya ki nashe me hi hu aur jab nasha kuch karvana chah raha hai to mana kaise kar sakte hai
Esliye new story
Bas first update ki sapna aaya tha to uske bare me pata hai kya hone wala hai uske baad kya hoga?
I have no fucking clues
Kya pata kal fir ek sapna aajaye aur bata jaye Esliye shanti banaye rakhe
Gali galoch ke liye comments sections ka prayog kare, DM kharab na kare
Sukriya
 
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:congrats:
For starting new story thread
Hope this story will touch our hearts

All the best
:goteam:
 

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UPDATE-1

Kisi jungle me bahut sare log kisi aadmi ko jaal me pakad ke kahi le ja rahe the

Aisa lag raha tha ki aaj us aadmi ka sikar hoga kyuki vaha ki hahakar se hi ye pata chal raha tha ki aaj unhone kuch to bada Kiya hai ya fir kuch bada hone wala hai

Jis admi ko leke ja rahe the uske sareer par niche sirf ek pant thi aur upar ke sareer ko kuch dhak raha tha to vo tha uska khoon

Bahut muskil se vo bas apni aankhen khol pane ki kosis Kar raha tha aur us dhundli najar se kahi door kisi ke hath me apni talvaar aur kapde dekh raha tha

Lekin usko kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha ki yaha kya hua aur vo yaha kaise pahucha

Sayad raat ko Nasha jada Kar liya tha jiski vajah se usse pata hi nahi chala ki koe usse hath ke le gaya ho ya fir...

Ya fir vo aaj haar gaya kisi se

Lekin ye to possible hi nahi tha
Guruji ne khud kaha tha ki esse harana lagbhag namumkin hai

To fir hua kya uske hath aur hoga kya aaj uske sath

**kaun ho tum log** vo bas etna hi bol paya kyuki uska sareer uska sath nahi de raha tha

Aur na usko apne sawal ka jawab mila kyuki usse bas hasne ki, guraane ki hi aawaz jo sunae de rahi thi

Thodi hi der me uski sawari ruki matlab char log jinhone esko hawa me utha rakha tha unhone niche fek diya aur ye aadmi ludakhta hua thodi aage aake gira

Aur es aadmi ko dekh ke vaha ka mahool hi badal gaya
Kuch ko to abhi bhi yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki jo unke samne admari halaat me hai vo vohi hai ya fir vo log koe sapna dekh rahe hai

**Malik ye to ye to ...**
Lekin eski bhi kismat achi nahi thi kyuki jawab to esse bhi nahi mila

** kaha tha na aapse jis din bada sikar karenge ussi din aapke samne aaenge **
Ussi bhid me se ek bola

Tab tak vaha sab ko realize ho chuka tha ki samne kon hai aur thoda thoda normal bhi hone lage the

** tum esko nahi leke aaye ho yaha, hum sab ki maut leke aaye ho**
Ek bujurg aadmi bola jisko dekh ke hi lag raha tha ki ye unka boss type ka kuch hai

** eski halaat to dekho guruji, ye kya marega hume?**
Guruji- aur na hum esko maar sakte
Aaj nahi to kal eske jhakham bharega aur ye fir uthega aur hum humesha humesha ke liye so jayenge

** eske sareer ke chhote chhote tukde Kar denge, fir eska zinda rahna ya nahi rahne se kya hi fark padega?**
Guruji- utna nuksaan dena bhi humare hath me nahi hai aur na hum kar sakte hai

** guruji hume laga tha aap khush honge hume inaam doge lekin aap to hume hi daat rahe ho?*
Guruji -daat nahi raha hu Putra
Esse marna to main bhi bahut chahta hu
Lekin hum es yogy nahi ki esse maar sake

** ab hum kya kare**
Guruji- esse thode aur jhakham denge taki hum sab yaha se kahi door bhagne me kamyab ho

** kya kare guruji**
Guruji- ander leke chalo esse

Aur guruji mud ke ander Jane lage aur uske piche piche baki sab

Ander ek bahut badi aur bahut uchhi gufa thi
Uski uchae to etni thi ki hum aankhon se dekh bhi nahi sakte the ki ye khatam kaha ho rahi hai

Guruji- charo taraf aag jala do aur niche kaanch bicha do

Guruji vaha sab ko batate ja rahe the aur unke chele vaisa hi kar rahe the

Guruji- ab esko upar leke jao aur ye chain se eske hath pair sab band ke upar latka do
Charo hath pair alag alag direction me band do taki agar ye gire to sidhe kaanch me gire aur nahi gire to aag eske sareer ko etna kamjor bana de ki esko theek hone me saal lag jaye

** hahhahhahahhahhahahahhahahahhahahhahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahhahahahhahha**
Jis aadmi ko band rakha tha ye hassi ussi ki thi sayad vo un sab ki halaat dekh ke has raha tha

** aap mujhe maar sakte ho guruji
Haha aap mujhe maar sakte ho
Lekin kya aapne aisa karne ka courage hai guruji?
Hahhahahaha ***
Guruji- eska muh bandho aur jaldi se latka do esse upar

Fir aisa hi hua aur niche aag jala di gaye aur pure jagah kaanch hi kaanch gaad diye gaye the

Usko vaha vaise hi chhod ke sab log vaha se ja chuke the
Ye soch ke ki ye marega to nahi lekin jitna jada samay vaha se nahi nikle utna hi un sab ke liye acha hai

Usse abhi bhi vaha latke hue ek week ho chuka tha lekin chain etni tight thi ki vo bilkul bhi movement nahi kar pa raha tha aur niche aag ki vajah se uska sareer jal raha tha

Aise mokke par hi apne yaad aate hai
Vo bhi apne guru ko yaad karna chahta tha
Unse aaj pehle baar madad mangna chahta tha lekin aisa karne ke liye usse dono hatho ka use karna padega aur aisa vo kar nahi sakta tha

Do din aur beete aur ab uske jhakam to bhar gaye the lekin pehle se kahi jada jhakam us aag ne de diye the aur diye hi ja rahi thi

Fir usne apne man ko shant kiya aur dhayan lagane laga
Usse apni shaktiyo ko bhadkana tha kyuki usse vohi rasta dikh raha tha yaha se nikalne ka

Fir ek jhatke se uski aankhen bilkul kaali pad gaye aur bahut jor se vo chain khichi
Etni jor se ki chain ke sath sath vo diwar bhi ukhad gaye

Sabse pehle vo ladka niche Gira sidha kaanch me aur vo to usse time behosh jaisa ho Gaya tha lekin etna hi sayad bhagwan ko kafi nahi laga kyuki uske just baad vo jo diwar tutti thi vo bhi uske hi upar aake giri aur ab vo sach me behosh ho chuka tha....
 
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UPDATE-1

Kisi jungle me bahut sare log kisi aadmi ko jaal me pakad ke kahi le ja rahe the

Aisa lag raha tha ki aaj us aadmi ka sikar hoga kyuki vaha ki hahakar se hi ye pata chal raha tha ki aaj unhone kuch to bada Kiya hai ya fir kuch bada hone wala hai

Jis admi ko leke ja rahe the uske sareer par niche sirf ek pant thi aur upar ke sareer ko kuch dhak raha tha to vo tha uska khoon

Bahut muskil se vo bas apni aankhen khol pane ki kosis Kar raha tha aur us dhundli najar se kahi door kisi ke hath me apni talvaar aur kapde dekh raha tha

Lekin usko kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha ki yaha kya hua aur vo yaha kaise pahucha

Sayad raat ko Nasha jada Kar liya tha jiski vajah se usse pata hi nahi chala ki koe usse hath ke le gaya ho ya fir...

Ya fir vo aaj haar gaya kisi se

Lekin ye to possible hi nahi tha
Guruji ne khud kaha tha ki esse harana lagbhag namumkin hai

To fir hua kya uske hath aur hoga kya aaj uske sath

**kaun ho tum log** vo bas etna hi bol paya kyuki uska sareer uska sath nahi de raha tha

Aur na usko apne sawal ka jawab mila kyuki usse bas hasne ki, guraane ki hi aawaz jo sunae de rahi thi

Thodi hi der me uski sawari ruki matlab char log jinhone esko hawa me utha rakha tha unhone niche fek diya aur ye aadmi ludakhta hua thodi aage aake gira

Aur es aadmi ko dekh ke vaha ka mahool hi badal gaya
Kuch ko to abhi bhi yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki jo unke samne admari halaat me hai vo vohi hai ya fir vo log koe sapna dekh rahe hai

**Malik ye to ye to ...**
Lekin eski bhi kismat achi nahi thi kyuki jawab to esse bhi nahi mila

** kaha tha na aapse jis din bada sikar karenge ussi din aapke samne aaenge **
Ussi bhid me se ek bola

Tab tak vaha sab ko realize ho chuka tha ki samne kon hai aur thoda thoda normal bhi hone lage the

** tum esko nahi leke aaye ho yaha, hum sab ki maut leke aaye ho**
Ek bujurg aadmi bola jisko dekh ke hi lag raha tha ki ye unka boss type ka kuch hai

** eski halaat to dekho guruji, ye kya marega hume?**
Guruji- aur na hum esko maar sakte
Aaj nahi to kal eske jhakham bharega aur ye fir uthega aur hum humesha humesha ke liye so jayenge

** eske sareer ke chhote chhote tukde Kar denge, fir eska zinda rahna ya nahi rahne se kya hi fark padega?**
Guruji- utna nuksaan dena bhi humare hath me nahi hai aur na hum kar sakte hai

** guruji hume laga tha aap khush honge hume inaam doge lekin aap to hume hi daat rahe ho?*
Guruji -daat nahi raha hu Putra
Esse marna to main bhi bahut chahta hu
Lekin hum es yogy nahi ki esse maar sake

** ab hum kya kare**
Guruji- esse thode aur jhakham denge taki hum sab yaha se kahi door bhagne me kamyab ho

** kya kare guruji**
Guruji- ander leke chalo esse

Aur guruji mud ke ander Jane lage aur uske piche piche baki sab

Ander ek bahut badi aur bahut uchhi gufa thi
Uski uchae to etni thi ki hum aankhon se dekh bhi nahi sakte the ki ye khatam kaha ho rahi hai

Guruji- charo taraf aag jala do aur niche kaanch bicha do

Guruji vaha sab ko batate ja rahe the aur unke chele vaisa hi kar rahe the

Guruji- ab esko upar leke jao aur ye chain se eske hath pair sab band ke upar latka do
Charo hath pair alag alag direction me band do taki agar ye gire to sidhe kaanch me gire aur nahi gire to aag eske sareer ko etna kamjor bana de ki esko theek hone me saal lag jaye

** hahhahhahahhahhahahahhahahahhahahhahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahhahahahhahha**
Jis aadmi ko band rakha tha ye hassi ussi ki thi sayad vo un sab ki halaat dekh ke has raha tha

** aap mujhe maar sakte ho guruji
Haha aap mujhe maar sakte ho
Lekin kya aapne aisa karne ka courage hai guruji?
Hahhahahaha ***
Guruji- eska muh bandho aur jaldi se latka do esse upar

Fir aisa hi hua aur niche aag jala di gaye aur pure jagah kaanch hi kaanch gaad diye gaye the

Usko vaha vaise hi chhod ke sab log vaha se ja chuke the
Ye soch ke ki ye marega to nahi lekin jitna jada samay vaha se nahi nikle utna hi un sab ke liye acha hai

Usse abhi bhi vaha latke hue ek week ho chuka tha lekin chain etni tight thi ki vo bilkul bhi movement nahi kar pa raha tha aur niche aag ki vajah se uska sareer jal raha tha

Aise mokke par hi apne yaad aate hai
Vo bhi apne guru ko yaad karna chahta tha
Unse aaj pehle baar madad mangna chahta tha lekin aisa karne ke liye usse dono hatho ka use karna padega aur aisa vo kar nahi sakta tha

Do din aur beete aur ab uske jhakam to bhar gaye the lekin pehle se kahi jada jhakam us aag ne de diye the aur diye hi ja rahi thi

Fir usne apne man ko shant kiya aur dhayan lagane laga
Usse apni shaktiyo ko bhadkana tha kyuki usse vohi rasta dikh raha tha yaha se nikalne ka

Fir ek jhatke se uski aankhen bilkul kaali pad gaye aur bahut jor se vo chain khichi
Etni jor se ki chain ke sath sath vo diwar bhi ukhad gaye

Sabse pehle vo ladka niche Gira sidha kaanch me aur vo to usse time behosh jaisa ho Gaya tha lekin etna hi sayad bhagwan ko kafi nahi laga kyuki uske just baad vo jo diwar tutti thi vo bhi uske hi upar aake giri aur ab vo sach me behosh ho chuka tha....
Nice update
 
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