Hello doston,
Ye meri pehli kahani hai...Maa bani bete ki patni ....umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aaye
Sabse pehle mai family se aapka parichay karwata hoon..bahut hi khush haal pariwaar ki kahani hai..sab ek dusre se bahut payaar karte hain..ek ghar me jitni bhi...jis cheez ki bhi zaroort hai wo sab hai..inke pass
1.Vinod: Ye hero ke pitaji hain umar 45 saal...inki private naukari hai...accountant hain company me..bikul shaant aadmi hain.kisi se koi dusmani nahi...bas job se ghar aur ghar se job...
2.Nirmla: ye hain hero ki maa umar 40 saal...dikhne me kisi heroin se kaam nahi...charhara mansal sareer...height 5.6 inch..per ye hain per bahut tej... inki aagya ke bina patta bhi nahi hilta ghar me..
3.Renu: ravi ke choti behan...umar 19 saal..is college me dakhila liya hai...dikhne me sundar aur lagti bilkul aaliya bhatt jaisi..
4.Rahul: ye hai kahani hai hero..umar 21saal...college me hain..dikhe me average hai...apne me khoya khoya rehne walon me..dost kam hai...per hain sabse pakke...
To story per aate hain.
Ye aaj se kareeb 1 saal pehle ki baat hai...sab kuch theek chal raha tha...vinod kumar ki naukri...ravi ka college...pramila ka ghar...saksham ka school..
Vinod: office se aane ke baad...Pramila aaj ka office ka din theek nahi gaya...kaam ka kafi dawab hai..ab pehle jaisa aaraam nahi...naya boss ne pareshan kar rakha hai..
Pramila: are..kya hua...kuch gadbad to nahi hui kaam me...tumse
Vinod: nahi...bas pata nahi kyun mujhse chiddta hai..naya boss
Pramila:hmmm..tension mat lo...sab theek ho jayega...mai chay banati hoon tumhare liye..
Vinod:bachhe kahan hai...aur ravi aa gaya college se..
Pramila: reema baju me dubey ji ke ghar apni dost se milne gayi hai..ravi abhi nikla hai..maine use ghar ka samaan laane bheja hai
Vinod: theek hai...main fresh ho kar aata hoon.
Pramila: theek hai..
Thodi der baad
Ravi: maa ye lo samaan...ek baar check kar lena ...sab samaan hai na
Pramila: theek hai..mai dekh lungi..tu ja aur reema ko bula la..
dubey ji yahan se bahut der ho gayi..use gaye hue..
Ye kehte hue pramila ravi ke hath se samaan le leti hai
Ravi: ok maa
Thodi der baad sabhi dinning table per ek sath chay pite hain...vinod kumar drawing me ja kar t.v per news dekhne chala jata hai...pramila kitchen me hi raat ke khane ki tayari karne lagti hai...reema apne karme me ja college work karne lagte hain..tabhi
Ravi: maa..mai bahar se thoda ghoom kar aata hoon..
Pramila: theek hai...per jaldi aana...teri fav sabzi bhindi masalaa bana rahi hoon
Ravi: wow..to..phir abhi gaya aur abhi aay
Pramila muskrate..hue apne kaam me lag jaati hai...
Ab aage...
Raat kareeb 10 baj chuke hai..per Ravi abhi tak ghar nahi aaya..
Pramila: suno ji
Vinod ko kitchen se awaj dete hue
Ja kar pata karo ye ladka abhi tak kyu nahi aaya..pehle to aisa nahi kiya usne...mobile bhi ghar per chodd gaya hai
Vinod:hmmm..ruko ja kar dekhta hoon
Idhar ravi tehlte tehlte..apne school time ke dost ke ghar aa gaya tha...ravi ka dost jo ab bahar naukri kar raha hai kafi dino baad ghar aaya hai..to usse milne me ravi ko time ka dhyan nahi raha
Vinod bhi bahar kafi dhunte hue wapas ghar aa jata hai
Pramila: kyu ji kya hau..kahan hai ravi
Vinod: pata nahi..bahut dhoonda use..
Pramila: pata nahi kahan chala gaya..aane do uski aaj khair nahi..
Vinod: aa jayega..ab bada ho gaya hai...kisi dost ke chala gaya hoga...tehalte hue..bike bhi ghar per hi hai uski
Pramila: hmmm...chalo tum aur bachche khana kha lo...bahut der ho gayi
Vinod: theek hai..
Sabhi log khane ke liye dinning table me aate hai...aur khana suru karte hain
Per pramila ka dhyan khane per nahi tha...wo bas baar ke darwaze ki taraf dekh rahi hai...ki kab aayega ravi..pehle to aisa kabhi nahi kiya usne
Idhar ravi..apne dost se
Ravi:Chal yaar...chalta hoon..bahut der hi gayi...ghar per sab intezaar kar rahe honge...
Aur ghar ke liye niklata hai
Thodi der me ravi ghar pahuchta hai
Sabhi log khana kha chuke hote hain
Pramila ne bas nahi khaya tha...
Jaise hi..ghar me ravi enter hota..
Vinod:kahan reh gaya tha ravi..ye kya time hai ghar aane ka
Ye sun ka reema khil khila kar hass padte..kyun unke bade bhai to daant jo pad rahi thi
Ravi: sorry papa...wo school ka dost mil gaya tha..usse baate karte hue time ka pata nahi chala..
Vinod: theek hai dubara aisa mat karna..tumhari maa ko kitni tension ho gayi thi...dekho usne khana bhi nahi khaya
Ravi apni maa...ke taraf dekhta hai..per pramila us per dhyan nahi deti..to uth kar kitchen ke taraf jane lagti hai
Vinod : pramila mai..ja raha hoon sone....tum ravi ko khana khila do...
Reema: haan maa..mai bhi ja rahi kal college jaldi jaana hai
Pramila kuch nahi bolti...
Vinod aur reema apne kamre me wahan se chale jaate hai...
Pramila sink per ja raha bartan saaf karne lagti hai..tabhi
Ravi: sorry maa..ab aisa nahi karoonga
Pramila kuch bolti
Ravi:ye pehli baar tha
Pramila ka dhyan uski baaton per tha per wo koi reply nahi deti..
Ravi:sorry maa..
Pramila apne kaam ne lagi rehti hai..
Tabhi
Ravi uthta hai...aur wahan se apne kamre ki taraf jane lagta hai...
Pramila ye dekh kar..
Pramila:kahan ja rahe ho
Ravi:sone..maa
Pramila:kyun...khana bahar se kha kar aaya hai kya
Ravi sar jhuka leta hai
Pramila: chal hath muh dho le..main khana garam karti hoon
Ravi man hi man khush ho jata hai..ki chalo ab maa ki naraazgi door hui
Bathroom se wapas aane ke baad dono maa bete dinning table per baith jate hain..pramila ravi ko khana deti hai..aur wahin baithi rehti hai
Ravi:maa tumne kyun nahi khaya
Pramila: mujhe bhook nahi hai
Ravi:kyun
Pramila: bas aise hi
Ravi man me sochta hai..ki uski hi wajah se uski maa ne khana nahi khaya aur bolta hai
Maa...lo tum bhi khao
Pramila:nahi..tu kha le
Ravi:lo na maa..ab gussa mat karo..dekho wapas aa gaya hoon...
Pramila use dekhti rehti hai
Ravi:tum aisa behave kar rahi ho...jaise main 20 saal baad wapas aaya hoon...agar tum nahi khaogi to mai bhi nahi khaunga..
Aur niwala wapas thali me rakh deta hai...
Ye dekh kar
Pramila: chal ab jada baate mat bana..mai laati hoon apne liye khana
Ravi itna sunte hue hi khush ho jata hai..aur bolta..rehne do na maa...mak tumhe apne haath se khana khilata hoon
Pramila...ye sun thoda sharma jaati hai...kyunki aaj se pehle ravi ne aisa kabhi nahi bola..
Ravi apne haath se ek niwala leta hai aur apni maa ke taraf badha deta hai
Pramila bhi uske haathon se khana khati aur apne ek haath se use bhi khilati hai..
Aisa karte hue kareeb raat ke 1 baj jaate hai...
Tabhi...pramila kar nazar ghadi per padti aur bolti hai
Ravi jaldi kha beta bahut der ho gayi..
Ravi: ruko na maa...aaj mujhe bahut achha lag raha hai..tumhare sath time bitana...waise bhi ka satuday hai..mera college kal band rahega
Pramila:per mera kahan off....wahin subah se ghar ka kaam..inke liye aur bachchon ke liye tiffin ki tayari..
Ravi:hmmm..theek hai..kal mai aapki madad kar doonga kaam me
Pramila ye sun kar hass deti hai
Aur bolti hai...achha ..madad karega..theek hai phir...kal adhaa kaam tumse karwati hoon
Ravi: haan maa..sach...per abhi thoda ruko na...mere sath
Pramila: theek hai baba...ruk aati hoon bartan sink per rakhkar
Ravik maa...
Aur uthkar bahar ka darwaja band karne chala jata hai
Thodi der me dono wapas kitchen ke pass milte hain..
Ravi:maa..chalo na chaat per chalte hai...bahut achha mausam hai
Pramila:time dekha hai
Ravi:1.30 to baje
Pramila:1.30 aise bol raha hai jaise shaam hui hai tere liye..tum ladko ko neend nahi aati kya
Ravi:aati hai..per koi sath ho aur mausam aisa ho to nahi aati
Pramila man...me...ravi ko aaj kya ho gaya hai..lagta meri narazgi se hua hai aisa...aur hasne lagti hai
Ravi:chalo na maa...papa bhi so gaye honge
Pramila: theek hai baba tu chal mai aati hoon inko dekh kar ...kahin pani to nahi chahiye inko dawai ke liye
Ab aage...
Ravi pehle chaat per aa jata hai..thandi hawa chal rahi thi..garmi ka.musam tha per mausam me thandak thi..ravi ja kar uper diwaar ke sahara le kar baith jata hai aur apni maa ka intezaar karta hai..
Kafi der ho jati per pramila nahi aati...
Idhar pramila apne room me aati to dekti ki vinod kharrate marte hue soya hua hai...aur reema bhi apne kamre me gahri need me soye hue hai...ye dekh pramila apne room ka darwaja band karti hai aur bahar aa jati hai...uska bhi mann ab thoda ravi ke sath bitane ko karta hai...uski nazar ghadi per jaati to raat kareeb 2 baj chuke hai..per us ab neend nahi aa rahi wo to jaldi uper chatt ki taraf chalne lagti hai
Idhar
Ravi baar baar uper aane wale darwaje ki taraf dekh raha hota hai...tabhi achanak utha hai aur dwarwaje ke piche ja kar chupp jata hai...wo apni maa ko darana chahta hai..
Thodi der baad pramila chaat ki taraf aati hai..aur darwaje se aa kar dhire dhire se ravi ko awaaj lagati nahi per ravi reply nahi deta..
Pramila: ravi..ravi( dhree se)
Koi reply nahi aata
Jaise hi pramila darwaze se uper aati hai..ravi darwaje se nikal apni maa ko piche se pakad leta hai...aur ek haatn moh me rakh deta hai..
Pramila ki cheekh nikal jaati hai..per awaaz nahi hoti
ravi ne bahut kass ke apni maa ko padka hua hai..aur usko dawarjae ke piche le jaane lagta hai..pramila tabhi bahut darr jaati hai..aur zor se ravi ka haath datoon se kaat deti hai..
Ravi ki cheekh nikal jaati aur bolta hai..maa
Pramila:ravi...tum..nalayak.
Ravi:mai nahi to aur kaun
Pramila:mai to darr gayi thi
Ravi:aapne kya socha
Pramila:mujhe laga ki koi aur hai
Ravi:maa ye hamara hi ghar hai..yahan koi aur kaun hoga
Aur apna haath dekhne lagta hai
Ye dekhkar pramila dhuki hoti hai..aur apne bete ka haath apne hath me le kar sehlane lagti hai..
Ravi: ab kya hog isse...aur hasne lagta hai
Pramila bhi hasne lagti hai..kafi dini baad ghar ke kaam se fursat mili aur itna khushnuma samay pramila bita rahi thi..
Ravi: maa tum aise hi haste raha karo
Pramila:kyun ji
Ravi:Aap haste hue acchi lagti ho
Pramilaoo hooo..aaj bada khayal kar hai apni maa
Ravi: sach ma
Pramila: tabhi... aaj bina bataye ghar se chala gaya tha
Ravi: nahi maa...jaan bhujh kar nahi kiya tha
Pramila :theek hai per dubara aisa mat karna
Ravi: kaisa maa
Pramila: yehi bina bataye ghar se mat jana
Ravi: ohhh..mujhe laga ki
Pramila: kya laga
Ravi: ki aapko aise piche se na pakdoon
Pramila: nahi wo nahi kaha maine
Ravi:achha to pakad karta hoon
Pramila: haan per katoongi..
Aur dono maa bete hasne lagte hai..
Ab aage
Dono maa bete haste ek dusre haath apne haathon me lekar baithe rehte hain tabhi
Pramila: ravi ek baat puchu
Ravi: haam maa
Pramila:tu hame chodd kar kahin chala to nahi jayega na
Ravi:kyun maa..aisa kyun bol rahi ho
Pramila: aaj tu thodi der ke liye hi gaya tha per aisa laga ki kai saal ho gaye...hum bahut pyaar karte hai tujhe ravi..
Aur pramila ki aakhoon me aansu aa jate hain
Ravi: nahi maa kabhi nahi jaunga chood kar
Aur ek haath apni maa ke kandhe per rakh deta hai..pramila bhi apna sar ravi ke kandhe per rakh deti hai...
Thodi der baad...raat kareeb 3 baje
Ravi kehta hai...maa chalo chalte hain..raat kafi ho gayi..per pramila ka mann jane ka nahi tha..wo aur rukna chahti thi..
Pramila: meri need uda kar tujhe ab need aa rahi hai
Ravi:haste hue...kya kiya maine
Pramila: achha tujhe nahi maloom aur uske chehre per haansi aa jati hai
Phir dono haanth me haanth daale niche aate..aur hall ke kareeb ruk jaate ..ravi abhi maa ko hi dekhta rehta hai..aur pramila use
Phir dono muskuraate hue aage badhte hain..aur pramila apne kamre ke saamne pahuchti hai..ravi ka kamra apne maa papa ke kamre se kareeb 15 foot door tha..tabhi..pramila ravi ke sath aage badh jaati hai..ravi ye dekhta hua aage bahdta rehta hai..wo maa ki taraf dekhta aur bolta hai..maa aapka room
Pramila kuch nahi bolti aur ravi sath aage badhti hai
Tabhi ke kamre ke saamne pahuch kar
Pramila:haan pata hai mujhe...mai to tujhe tere kamre tak chodne aayi hoon ki kahin to phir na bhaag jaye..
Ravi: haste hue...maa tum bhi na
Pramila hasti hai..aur apne bete ke sar per kiss karti
Ravi..kuch samjh nahi pata...kyunki aaj tak uski maa ke aisa nahi kiya..
Pramila wapas apne kamre ki taraf bahdti hai..aur darwaze per aa wapas ravi ki taraf halki muskurahat dete hue dekhti hai..ravi bhi apni maa ko hi dekhta rehta...phir uski maa darwaza band kar leti hai..
Ravi: kya hua maa..itna late ho gayi(haste hue)
Pramila:teri wajah se(haste hue)
Ravi:meri wajah se
Pramila: haan...chal break fast kar...bahut kaam hai
Ravi: are maa...phir wahi kaam kaam
Pramila: to kya
Ravi:thodi der baitho na
Pramila: kyun ji
Ravi: aapse baat karne ka mann kar raha hai
Pramila: to kal 4 baje tak kya kar raha tha
Ravi: wo to bas aapko dekh raha tha
Pramila:achha..ji
Ravi:to chale chatt per
Pramila:betaji abhi din hai...
Ravi: to kya hua
Pramila: aaju baju ki ladies hongi chatte per...pura khula hai chatt
Ravi:hmmm...per raat me theek rahega
Pramila:pakad to abhi bhi sakta hai(haste hue)
Ravi: raat ki baat kuch aur hai
Pramila: raat me aisa kya hai
Ravi:raat me koi disturb nahi karega
Pramila: waise abhi bhi koi nahi hai
Dono maa bete hasne lagte hai..tabhi
Ravi:theek hai to phir
Pramila: kya phir
Ravi..apne chair se uthta hai maa ki taraf badhta hai
Pramila samjh jaati ki ravi kya karne wala hai aur wo bhi uth jaati aur sidhiyon ki taraf bhaagti hai...
Ravi: ruko maa
Pramila haste hue apni jeebhi nikal kar use chidati hai..aur bhaagti hai
Jaise hi pramila sidhiyaan chadne ki kosish karti ravi tezi se aa kar use sidhiyon per hi piche se dabooch leta hai...pramila uski bahon me aa jaati hai.aur chootne ki kosish karti hai...
Pramila:chood na
Ravi:nahi
Pramila:please
Ravi:nahi...kahan bhaag rahi thi
Pramila:chaat per
Ravi:achha
Pramila:haan
Ravi:aapne kaha tha ki wahan koi dekh lega
Pramilahhh main to darr ki wajah se bhool gayi thi
Ravi:kaisa darr..
Dhree se apni maa ke kaan me bolta hai aur kass kar apni maa ka pet pakad kar apni taraf bheechta hai
Pramila:jo kal tu raat me mera muh band karke darwaje ke piche le ja raha tha..
Ravi:to kya hua
Pramila:achha kuch nahi..hua...beta ji...koi beta apni maa ko darwaje ke piche nahi le jata
Aur ravi ka haath dhila hote hi pramila choot kar ravi ko chidate hue kitchen ki taraf bhaagti hai..
Ravi pramila ke piche aata hai...tab tak ravi ka lund buri taraf akad gaya tha..pramila apni tirchi nazar se dekhti hai uske beta ta tambu jo subah se bhi jada bada dikh raha raha..
Pramila uper se aata nikaal ti hai use rotiyan banane ki tayari karne lagti hai..
Ravi phir phiche se aata hai apni maa se sat jata hai..jaise hi wo apni se sat kar apne dono haath ke kamar me rakhta..pramila shihar uthti hai..wo apne beta ka lund saaf saaf mehsoos karti..aur apne pati ke lund se tulna karne lagti hai
Tabhi..
Ravi:maa(dhiree se kaan me)
Pramila:bolo betaji
Ravi:chalo no
Pramila:kahan
Ravi:wahin
Pramila:chatt me darwaje ke piche(haste hue)
Ravi:nahi..mere kamre ke darwaje ke piche
Pramila:kyun kya hai wahan
Ravi:chalo pehle phir bataunga
Pramila:na baba..mujhe darr lagta hai
Ravi:kyun..
Pramila:raat ki baat se
Ravi:abhi to din hai
Pramila:wo hai..per darr apni jagah hai
Ravi:araam se dabaunga na
Pramila:kya
Ravi:aapka muh
Pramila lagatar Aate ko masle ja rahi..aate ja paani sookh chuka tha
Pramila aapna chehra thoda ravi ki or karte hue..sach me
Ravi:haan maa dhiree se dabaunga
Pravila:nahi..tujh per bharosa nahi..jada tej daba diya to kya karoongi..na baba na...
Agle din subah..
Pramila ki need late se khulti hai...kareeb 9 baje wo uthi to dekhti hai..ki vinod office jaane ki liye tayar ho raha hai..aur reema bhi college ke liye nikalne wali..aaj subah hai naasta reema ne bana diya tha..
Pramila: reema mujhe uthaya kyun nahi..
Reema: maa...mai gayi thi aapke kamre me aap uthi hi nahi..kitni awaaj lagayi maine..
Pramila mann me...4 baje soyi hoon..to kahan se uth pati...
Vinod: ok..mai nikal raha hoon aur reema ko college drop kar doonga
Pramila: ok
Pramila tabhi...sochti hai laat sahab kahin nahi dikh raha hai jiske wajah se mai late hui...aisa bolte hue to aas pass dekhti hai..us ravi nazar nahi aata...
Pramila: lagta hai...abhi bhi so raha hai...
Aisa bolte hue hue uske kamre ki tarah badhti..aur dawarwaja knock karti hai..
Bahut knock karne per ravi utha jata aur darwaze ki taraf badhta hai...per use need ke aagosh me dhyaan hi nahi rehta ki uski chaddi lund ke tanao se bilkul tani hui hai..aur wo darwaja khol deta hai...
Pramila: kyun re kab tak soega
Ravi: maa thodi der aur
Pramila: nahi...chal bahut so liya aur haan kya kaha tha tune ki kal college off rahega..to ghar ke kaam me hath batayega...
Ravi: ok maa..tum chalo mai aata hoon
Pramila: jaldi haan..
Aur jaise hi pramila jaane ki liye mudti hai...uski nazar ravi ki chaddi per jaati jo bilkul tani hui hai..pramila jaldi nazar ghuma leti hai jaldi jaldi bathroom ki taraf badh jaati hai
Bathroom me aate hi pramila me mann me wahi scene baar baar aa raha tha...wo sochti hai ki ravi ki chaddi ka tanao bahut jada tha...aisa tanao to usne apne pati ka bhi nahi dekha...wo apne apne pati ke lund ka size janti per ye to.....wo apne mann ko samjhati hai kya soch rahi hai aur..
Phir wo brush karke sidhe shower ke niche aa jati hai...kareeb 1 ghante baad wo bathroom ne towel lapte kar bathroom se nikalti hai..aur sidhe aaine ke saame aati hai..aaine ke saamne aate hi wo towel phek deti hai aur apne sareer ko dekhti hai...phir achanak use dhyaan aata hai ki ravi ne nasta nahi kiya hoga wo.jaldi jaldi apne kapde pehnati aur room se bahar aa jati...ravi dinning table per baitha hua..apni maa ka wait kar raha hota...
Tabhi...door bell bajti hai aur maa bete darwaze ki taraf jane wale raaste ki taraf dekhte hain...
Pramila: ravi dekh jara kaun hai
Ravi anmane mann se..dekhta hoon
Ravi jaise hi dawarza kholta saamne uski choti behan khadi rehti
Reema:kitni der laga di darwaza kholne me
Ravi:tu jaldi aa gayi college se..kyun
Ravi use kabab ki haddi ki tarah dekh raha hota hai
Reema: are...aaj sirf assigment submit hua hai..ab side me ho ..aur ander jane do
Pramila: ravi kaun hai...
Reema: mai hoon maa..
Pramila mann me..ye ladki abhi kyun aa gayi..
Pramila:are beta aaj jaldi aa gayi
Reema: haan college ka kaam ho gaya tha
.isliye jaldi aa gayi
Dono maa bete ek dusre ko badi aas se dekhte hain...per kuch nahi bolte..
Reema: maa mujhe jaldi khana dedo..mujhe archana ke ghar jana hai...monday assignement submit karna hai uske liye
Ravi ye sun ka saatwe aasmaan per pahuch jata hai...aur apni maa ki taraf haste hue dekhta hai..pramila bhi apne bete hi taraf dekhti hai...aur uske chehre per halki halki muskurahat aa jaati hai
Tabhi ravi bolta hai...maa mai bhi ja kar naha leta hoon..phir mujhe bhi khana de dena..aur ghar ke piche chote se plot aur kue se lage bathroom ki taraf jane lagta hai..pramila use jaate hue dekhti hai aur sochti hai...ravi apne kamre ke bathroom me nahane kyun nahi gaya...piche wala bathroom to wo kam hi istemaal karta hai..
Pramila yehi soch soch kar garam hui ja rahi hai....mann me bolti hai...aaj se pehle kabhi aisa kabhi nahi hua...2 din me hi aisa kya hua...ki use apne bete ka sath zada achha lagne laga..vinod busy rehta hai..per office se aane ke baad use time deta tha...per vinod se jada use apne bete ke kareeb rehna pasand aane laga...
Tabhi..
Reema: maa...lao do jaldi khana...bahut bhook lagi hai..mujhe jaldi jaana bhi hai..
Pramila:bas beta...5 min..tere bhaiya bhi aate honge..sath me khana
Reema:maa..bhaiya kahan hain
Pramila: nahane gaya hai..aata hooga
Reema:are maa..unka koi bharosa nahi..kab aayenge..tum mujhe jaldi khana do...
Pramila: theek hai..ruk
Reema: waise bhaiya college kyun nahi gaye
Pramila: aaj uska college band tha
Reema:mera college bhaiya ke college se aage ja kar padta hai...unka college to khula tha...
Pramila ye sun kar kuch nahi bolti aur man me sochti hai ravi ne aaj college kyun bunk kiya...kahin jhooth bol kar wo mere sath ghar me hi samay to nahi bitana chah raha tha...ye sochte sochte uski panty gili hone lagi..aisa to vinod ke sath bistar per hone per bhi nahi hua..wo garam pehle se thi...ye sochte hue aur garam ho gayi...
Tabhi..
Reema:maa mai ja rahi hoon..archana ke ghar..abhi 1 baje hai..3 baje tak wapas aa jaungi
Pramila:theek hai...jaldi aana
Reema: ok maa..bye
Aur wahan se nikalti hai..pramila garden ka gate band karke...main door band karti hai..aur ander aakar sidhe kictchen me chali jati hai..
Thodi der baad..usi nazar gaadi ki taraf jaati hai..to dekhti hai..kareeb 1 baje the..aur badbati hai
Pramila: 2 gante se ye ladka kya kar raha hai bathroom me...aise kaise naha raha hai...
aur piche bathroom me jaane walen raaste ki taraf dekhti hai..
Idhar ravi bathroom me aaj subah aapni maa ke sath hue ghatna ko yaad kar raha hai...abhi usne shower chalu nahi kiya hai...bas sabun le kar apne lund per masal raha hai...is beech kai baar sabun sukhta jata hai...ravi phir thoda pani le kar sabun ragane lagta hai...sirf apne lund aur niche latke hue...goto ko kass kass ke ragda raha hai..usne apne sareer per sabun nahi lagaya hai sirf lund aur niche goto per..
aur bolta hai..lagta hai tumahri zaroorat padne wali hai..
tabhi
Pramila: 1.30 bajne ko aaye ye ladka...na..reema bhi ab to aati hogi
Aisa bolte hue piche bathroom ki taraf jaane lagti hai..
Pramila aas pass dusre ghar ki taraf dekhti jo uske piche khali plot se sate hue the..per use koi nazar nahi aata..dopahar thi..koi apne ghar ke piche nahi aata is samay...dhire dhire wo bathroom ke kareeb pahuchti hai..ravi ka saabun sookh chuka hai..wo phir thoda pani aur saabun le kar apne lund per ragta hai..
Pramila bathroom ke kareeb ja kar darwaze ke pass pachuti hai wo phir piche dekhti hai..ki kahin koi dekh to nahi raha..uske mann me thoda darr hai..wo darwaze se kaan laga kar sunne ki kosish karti hai..ki ander kya ho raha hai..per andar pani girne ki awaz nahi aati..wo hairaan hoti hai..wo phir sunne ki koshish karti hai..is baar use kuch..sapad sapad jaisa sunaiye deta hai...
Aage..
Pramila darwaze ke pass aa kar ravi ko awaaz deti hai...
Pramila:ravi...
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Pramila: raviiiiii
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Ravi bas masti me dooba rehta hai..aur tezi se apne 9 inch lambe lund per chalta jata jata..
Pramila:ravi kya kar rahe ho...2 ghante ho gaye..(darwaza band hai)
Aur darwaze me apna haath dhire me marti hai...ravi ko hosh aa jaata hai..
Pehle use yakeen nahi hota ki bahar uski maa khadi hai...phir dubara pramila kehti hai
Ravi..jaldi nikal na..kab se hai andar tu
Ravi:haa maa aaya..hadbada kar bolta hai
Pramila: kya kar raha hai 2 ghante se(dhire se)
Ravi:maa..wo naha raha tha
Pramila: per pani ki awaz nahi aa rahi thi...balki sappad sappad ki awaz zaroor aa rahi thi
Ravi kuch nahi bolta use samjh nahi aata ki kya bole apni maa se...
Pramila: theek hai..jaldi aa bahar..
Ravi:maa reema chali gayi
Pramila: haan kab ki...aur ab uske aane ka time bhi ho gaya hai...(sochti hue ke iske nahane ki wajah se keemti time nikal gaya)
Ravi turant mauke hai fayda uthana chahta hai..
Ravi: maa..ek kaam kar sakti ho(darwaze ke andar se)
Pramila: kya
Ravi:wo maa jaldi jaldi me underwear aur towel wahi apne room me bhool gaya..aap la sakti ho
Pramila: chaukte hue...kya
Ravi: haan maa
Pramila: kaisa ladka hai tu..jaroori samaan hi bhool gaya...haste hue
Ravi:are..maa wo mera dhyaan kahin aur tha
Pramila samjh jaati ki uska dhyan kahan tha...
Pramila:mai nahi laati
Ravi: maa..please
Pramila:na matlab na
Ravi: la do na maa..warna aise hi bahar aana padega
Pramila: to aa ja..kisne roka hai
Ravi: soch lo
Pramila: soch liya aur hass deti hai
Ravi tabhi darwaze ki kundi khole ka natak kar karta..
Jaise hi pramila ko kundi khulne ki awaaz aati wo chauk.jaati hai..aur bolti hai
Ruk ruk..
Ravi: ander se..kya hua
Pramila: ruk mai laati hoon
Ravi:ab kya hua..darr gayi kya
Pramila:mai nahi darti
Ravi:achha..to phir aaun
Pramila: badmash..ruk abhi lekar aati hoon underwear aur towel..
Aur ander jaane lagti hai..
Is samay uski panty puri gili ho gayi hai
.use apni choot me kuch chalta hua samjh me aata hai..
Ravi ke room me aakar..wo ek haath ravi ki underwear uthati hai..aur dusre haath se use sehalane lagti hai..use aisa.lagta hai ki ab wo apne aap ko sambhaal nahi payegi..ko jhad jayegi...per kisi tarah khud ko control karke under wear aur towel le kar piche bathroom ki taraf badhti hai..
Bathroom ke pass pahuch kar ek baar phir wo aas pass dekhti hai ki kahin koi dekh to nahi raha..aur darwaze ke pass aa kar dhire se bolti hai..
Ravi mai le aayi..
Ravi: maa ek min.
Wo abhi bhi nahaya nahi hai...bas sabun apne lund per ragta raha tha
Aur dhire darwaza aadha khol kar apna haath badhata hai
Ravi:do maa
Pramila:le na
Ravi:kahan hai..towel
Pramila huste hue towel use me touch karke door kar deti hai..
Ravi:maa mazaj mat karo...jaldi.do
Pramila:kya
Ravi:wahi jo tumahre haath me hai
Pramila:kya hai mere haath me
Ravi:meri izzaat..haste hue
Pramila: wo aaj lut gayi..haste hue
Tabhi ravi thoda darwaza aur kholta hai aur zhat se apna haath aage badha deta...aise karne per pramila ka haath uske haath me aa jata hai..pramila chauk padti hai..
Pramila:ravi...
Ravi: haan
Pramila:chood na
Ravi: nahi..
Pramila: please
Ravi:nahii....aur use bathroom me khichne ki kosish karta hai
Pramila:please beta..chood na
Ravi..apni maa ko bathroom ke under aadha kichhe leta hai..aur hasta hai
Pramila..jaise hi aadhi bathroom ke under jaati hai..wahan ka nazara dekh kar uksa gala sukh jata hai..wo dekhti hai uske bete ka lund saabun me tipta hua aur bilkul akada hua uper ki or tana hua hai..uske bete se ka sareer bilkul sukha hai..sirf uske lund per aur goto per sabun laga hai....wo samjh jaati ki ravi naha nahi raha tha...kuch aur kar raha tha..ravi ki pakad dhili hote wo apna haath chuda leti aur bahar nikalte hue ravi ko bolti hai..
Pramila: kamine..kitne kass ke padka tha
Ravi hasta hai..ab darwaza pura khul.jaat hai
Ravi bilkul naga apni maa ke samne rehta hai..pramila.apne bete ke lund ki taraf dekhte hue bolti
Pramila: aise dabate hai kisi
Aage..
Pramila darwaze ke pass aa kar ravi ko awaaz deti hai...
Pramila:ravi...
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Pramila: raviiiiii
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Ravi bas masti me dooba rehta hai..aur tezi se apne 9 inch lambe lund per chalta jata jata..
Pramila:ravi kya kar rahe ho...2 ghante ho gaye..(darwaza band hai)
Aur darwaze me apna haath dhire me marti hai...ravi ko hosh aa jaata hai..
Pehle use yakeen nahi hota ki bahar uski maa khadi hai...phir dubara pramila kehti hai
Ravi..jaldi nikal na..kab se hai andar tu
Ravi:haa maa aaya..hadbada kar bolta hai
Pramila: kya kar raha hai 2 ghante se(dhire se)
Ravi:maa..wo naha raha tha
Pramila: per pani ki awaz nahi aa rahi thi...balki sappad sappad ki awaz zaroor aa rahi thi
Ravi kuch nahi bolta use samjh nahi aata ki kya bole apni maa se...
Pramila: theek hai..jaldi aa bahar..
Ravi:maa reema chali gayi
Pramila: haan kab ki...aur ab uske aane ka time bhi ho gaya hai...(sochti hue ke iske nahane ki wajah se keemti time nikal gaya)
Ravi turant mauke hai fayda uthana chahta hai..
Ravi: maa..ek kaam kar sakti ho(darwaze ke andar se)
Pramila: kya
Ravi:wo maa jaldi jaldi me underwear aur towel wahi apne room me bhool gaya..aap la sakti ho
Pramila: chaukte hue...kya
Ravi: haan maa
Pramila: kaisa ladka hai tu..jaroori samaan hi bhool gaya...haste hue
Ravi:are..maa wo mera dhyaan kahin aur tha
Pramila samjh jaati ki uska dhyan kahan tha...
Pramila:mai nahi laati
Ravi: maa..please
Pramila:na matlab na
Ravi: la do na maa..warna aise hi bahar aana padega
Pramila: to aa ja..kisne roka hai
Ravi: soch lo
Pramila: soch liya aur hass deti hai
Ravi tabhi darwaze ki kundi khole ka natak kar karta..
Jaise hi pramila ko kundi khulne ki awaaz aati wo chauk.jaati hai..aur bolti hai
Ruk ruk..
Ravi: ander se..kya hua
Pramila: ruk mai laati hoon
Ravi:ab kya hua..darr gayi kya
Pramila:mai nahi darti
Ravi:achha..to phir aaun
Pramila: badmash..ruk abhi lekar aati hoon underwear aur towel..
Aur ander jaane lagti hai..
Is samay uski panty puri gili ho gayi hai
.use apni choot me kuch chalta hua samjh me aata hai..
Ravi ke room me aakar..wo ek haath ravi ki underwear uthati hai..aur dusre haath se use sehalane lagti hai..use aisa.lagta hai ki ab wo apne aap ko sambhaal nahi payegi..ko jhad jayegi...per kisi tarah khud ko control karke under wear aur towel le kar piche bathroom ki taraf badhti hai..
Bathroom ke pass pahuch kar ek baar phir wo aas pass dekhti hai ki kahin koi dekh to nahi raha..aur darwaze ke pass aa kar dhire se bolti hai..
Ravi mai le aayi..
Ravi: maa ek min.
Wo abhi bhi nahaya nahi hai...bas sabun apne lund per ragta raha tha
Aur dhire darwaza aadha khol kar apna haath badhata hai
Ravi:do maa
Pramila:le na
Ravi:kahan hai..towel
Pramila huste hue towel use me touch karke door kar deti hai..
Ravi:maa mazaj mat karo...jaldi.do
Pramila:kya
Ravi:wahi jo tumahre haath me hai
Pramila:kya hai mere haath me
Ravi:meri izzaat..haste hue
Pramila: wo aaj lut gayi..haste hue
Tabhi ravi thoda darwaza aur kholta hai aur zhat se apna haath aage badha deta...aise karne per pramila ka haath uske haath me aa jata hai..pramila chauk padti hai..
Pramila:ravi...
Ravi: haan
Pramila:chood na
Ravi: nahi..
Pramila: please
Ravi:nahii....aur use bathroom me khichne ki kosish karta hai
Pramila:please beta..chood na
Ravi..apni maa ko bathroom ke under aadha kichhe leta hai..aur hasta hai
Pramila..jaise hi aadhi bathroom ke under jaati hai..wahan ka nazara dekh kar uksa gala sukh jata hai..wo dekhti hai uske bete ka lund saabun me tipta hua aur bilkul akada hua uper ki or tana hua hai..uske bete se ka sareer bilkul sukha hai..sirf uske lund per aur goto per sabun laga hai....wo samjh jaati ki ravi naha nahi raha tha...kuch aur kar raha tha..ravi ki pakad dhili hote wo apna haath chuda leti aur bahar nikalte hue ravi ko bolti hai..
Pramila: kamine..kitne kass ke padka tha
Ravi hasta hai..ab darwaza pura khul.jaat hai
Ravi bilkul naga apni maa ke samne rehta hai..pramila.apne bete ke lund ki taraf dekhte hue bolti
Pramila: aise dabate hai kisi
Ye meri pehli kahani hai...Maa bani bete ki patni ....umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aaye
Sabse pehle mai family se aapka parichay karwata hoon..bahut hi khush haal pariwaar ki kahani hai..sab ek dusre se bahut payaar karte hain..ek ghar me jitni bhi...jis cheez ki bhi zaroort hai wo sab hai..inke pass
1.Vinod: Ye hero ke pitaji hain umar 45 saal...inki private naukari hai...accountant hain company me..bikul shaant aadmi hain.kisi se koi dusmani nahi...bas job se ghar aur ghar se job...
2.Nirmla: ye hain hero ki maa umar 40 saal...dikhne me kisi heroin se kaam nahi...charhara mansal sareer...height 5.6 inch..per ye hain per bahut tej... inki aagya ke bina patta bhi nahi hilta ghar me..
3.Renu: ravi ke choti behan...umar 19 saal..is college me dakhila liya hai...dikhne me sundar aur lagti bilkul aaliya bhatt jaisi..
4.Rahul: ye hai kahani hai hero..umar 21saal...college me hain..dikhe me average hai...apne me khoya khoya rehne walon me..dost kam hai...per hain sabse pakke...
To story per aate hain.
Ye aaj se kareeb 1 saal pehle ki baat hai...sab kuch theek chal raha tha...vinod kumar ki naukri...ravi ka college...pramila ka ghar...saksham ka school..
Vinod: office se aane ke baad...Pramila aaj ka office ka din theek nahi gaya...kaam ka kafi dawab hai..ab pehle jaisa aaraam nahi...naya boss ne pareshan kar rakha hai..
Pramila: are..kya hua...kuch gadbad to nahi hui kaam me...tumse
Vinod: nahi...bas pata nahi kyun mujhse chiddta hai..naya boss
Pramila:hmmm..tension mat lo...sab theek ho jayega...mai chay banati hoon tumhare liye..
Vinod:bachhe kahan hai...aur ravi aa gaya college se..
Pramila: reema baju me dubey ji ke ghar apni dost se milne gayi hai..ravi abhi nikla hai..maine use ghar ka samaan laane bheja hai
Vinod: theek hai...main fresh ho kar aata hoon.
Pramila: theek hai..
Thodi der baad
Ravi: maa ye lo samaan...ek baar check kar lena ...sab samaan hai na
Pramila: theek hai..mai dekh lungi..tu ja aur reema ko bula la..
dubey ji yahan se bahut der ho gayi..use gaye hue..
Ye kehte hue pramila ravi ke hath se samaan le leti hai
Ravi: ok maa
Thodi der baad sabhi dinning table per ek sath chay pite hain...vinod kumar drawing me ja kar t.v per news dekhne chala jata hai...pramila kitchen me hi raat ke khane ki tayari karne lagti hai...reema apne karme me ja college work karne lagte hain..tabhi
Ravi: maa..mai bahar se thoda ghoom kar aata hoon..
Pramila: theek hai...per jaldi aana...teri fav sabzi bhindi masalaa bana rahi hoon
Ravi: wow..to..phir abhi gaya aur abhi aay
Pramila muskrate..hue apne kaam me lag jaati hai...
Ab aage...
Raat kareeb 10 baj chuke hai..per Ravi abhi tak ghar nahi aaya..
Pramila: suno ji
Vinod ko kitchen se awaj dete hue
Ja kar pata karo ye ladka abhi tak kyu nahi aaya..pehle to aisa nahi kiya usne...mobile bhi ghar per chodd gaya hai
Vinod:hmmm..ruko ja kar dekhta hoon
Idhar ravi tehlte tehlte..apne school time ke dost ke ghar aa gaya tha...ravi ka dost jo ab bahar naukri kar raha hai kafi dino baad ghar aaya hai..to usse milne me ravi ko time ka dhyan nahi raha
Vinod bhi bahar kafi dhunte hue wapas ghar aa jata hai
Pramila: kyu ji kya hau..kahan hai ravi
Vinod: pata nahi..bahut dhoonda use..
Pramila: pata nahi kahan chala gaya..aane do uski aaj khair nahi..
Vinod: aa jayega..ab bada ho gaya hai...kisi dost ke chala gaya hoga...tehalte hue..bike bhi ghar per hi hai uski
Pramila: hmmm...chalo tum aur bachche khana kha lo...bahut der ho gayi
Vinod: theek hai..
Sabhi log khane ke liye dinning table me aate hai...aur khana suru karte hain
Per pramila ka dhyan khane per nahi tha...wo bas baar ke darwaze ki taraf dekh rahi hai...ki kab aayega ravi..pehle to aisa kabhi nahi kiya usne
Idhar ravi..apne dost se
Ravi:Chal yaar...chalta hoon..bahut der hi gayi...ghar per sab intezaar kar rahe honge...
Aur ghar ke liye niklata hai
Thodi der me ravi ghar pahuchta hai
Sabhi log khana kha chuke hote hain
Pramila ne bas nahi khaya tha...
Jaise hi..ghar me ravi enter hota..
Vinod:kahan reh gaya tha ravi..ye kya time hai ghar aane ka
Ye sun ka reema khil khila kar hass padte..kyun unke bade bhai to daant jo pad rahi thi
Ravi: sorry papa...wo school ka dost mil gaya tha..usse baate karte hue time ka pata nahi chala..
Vinod: theek hai dubara aisa mat karna..tumhari maa ko kitni tension ho gayi thi...dekho usne khana bhi nahi khaya
Ravi apni maa...ke taraf dekhta hai..per pramila us per dhyan nahi deti..to uth kar kitchen ke taraf jane lagti hai
Vinod : pramila mai..ja raha hoon sone....tum ravi ko khana khila do...
Reema: haan maa..mai bhi ja rahi kal college jaldi jaana hai
Pramila kuch nahi bolti...
Vinod aur reema apne kamre me wahan se chale jaate hai...
Pramila sink per ja raha bartan saaf karne lagti hai..tabhi
Ravi: sorry maa..ab aisa nahi karoonga
Pramila kuch bolti
Ravi:ye pehli baar tha
Pramila ka dhyan uski baaton per tha per wo koi reply nahi deti..
Ravi:sorry maa..
Pramila apne kaam ne lagi rehti hai..
Tabhi
Ravi uthta hai...aur wahan se apne kamre ki taraf jane lagta hai...
Pramila ye dekh kar..
Pramila:kahan ja rahe ho
Ravi:sone..maa
Pramila:kyun...khana bahar se kha kar aaya hai kya
Ravi sar jhuka leta hai
Pramila: chal hath muh dho le..main khana garam karti hoon
Ravi man hi man khush ho jata hai..ki chalo ab maa ki naraazgi door hui
Bathroom se wapas aane ke baad dono maa bete dinning table per baith jate hain..pramila ravi ko khana deti hai..aur wahin baithi rehti hai
Ravi:maa tumne kyun nahi khaya
Pramila: mujhe bhook nahi hai
Ravi:kyun
Pramila: bas aise hi
Ravi man me sochta hai..ki uski hi wajah se uski maa ne khana nahi khaya aur bolta hai
Maa...lo tum bhi khao
Pramila:nahi..tu kha le
Ravi:lo na maa..ab gussa mat karo..dekho wapas aa gaya hoon...
Pramila use dekhti rehti hai
Ravi:tum aisa behave kar rahi ho...jaise main 20 saal baad wapas aaya hoon...agar tum nahi khaogi to mai bhi nahi khaunga..
Aur niwala wapas thali me rakh deta hai...
Ye dekh kar
Pramila: chal ab jada baate mat bana..mai laati hoon apne liye khana
Ravi itna sunte hue hi khush ho jata hai..aur bolta..rehne do na maa...mak tumhe apne haath se khana khilata hoon
Pramila...ye sun thoda sharma jaati hai...kyunki aaj se pehle ravi ne aisa kabhi nahi bola..
Ravi apne haath se ek niwala leta hai aur apni maa ke taraf badha deta hai
Pramila bhi uske haathon se khana khati aur apne ek haath se use bhi khilati hai..
Aisa karte hue kareeb raat ke 1 baj jaate hai...
Tabhi...pramila kar nazar ghadi per padti aur bolti hai
Ravi jaldi kha beta bahut der ho gayi..
Ravi: ruko na maa...aaj mujhe bahut achha lag raha hai..tumhare sath time bitana...waise bhi ka satuday hai..mera college kal band rahega
Pramila:per mera kahan off....wahin subah se ghar ka kaam..inke liye aur bachchon ke liye tiffin ki tayari..
Ravi:hmmm..theek hai..kal mai aapki madad kar doonga kaam me
Pramila ye sun kar hass deti hai
Aur bolti hai...achha ..madad karega..theek hai phir...kal adhaa kaam tumse karwati hoon
Ravi: haan maa..sach...per abhi thoda ruko na...mere sath
Pramila: theek hai baba...ruk aati hoon bartan sink per rakhkar
Ravik maa...
Aur uthkar bahar ka darwaja band karne chala jata hai
Thodi der me dono wapas kitchen ke pass milte hain..
Ravi:maa..chalo na chaat per chalte hai...bahut achha mausam hai
Pramila:time dekha hai
Ravi:1.30 to baje
Pramila:1.30 aise bol raha hai jaise shaam hui hai tere liye..tum ladko ko neend nahi aati kya
Ravi:aati hai..per koi sath ho aur mausam aisa ho to nahi aati
Pramila man...me...ravi ko aaj kya ho gaya hai..lagta meri narazgi se hua hai aisa...aur hasne lagti hai
Ravi:chalo na maa...papa bhi so gaye honge
Pramila: theek hai baba tu chal mai aati hoon inko dekh kar ...kahin pani to nahi chahiye inko dawai ke liye
Ab aage...
Ravi pehle chaat per aa jata hai..thandi hawa chal rahi thi..garmi ka.musam tha per mausam me thandak thi..ravi ja kar uper diwaar ke sahara le kar baith jata hai aur apni maa ka intezaar karta hai..
Kafi der ho jati per pramila nahi aati...
Idhar pramila apne room me aati to dekti ki vinod kharrate marte hue soya hua hai...aur reema bhi apne kamre me gahri need me soye hue hai...ye dekh pramila apne room ka darwaja band karti hai aur bahar aa jati hai...uska bhi mann ab thoda ravi ke sath bitane ko karta hai...uski nazar ghadi per jaati to raat kareeb 2 baj chuke hai..per us ab neend nahi aa rahi wo to jaldi uper chatt ki taraf chalne lagti hai
Idhar
Ravi baar baar uper aane wale darwaje ki taraf dekh raha hota hai...tabhi achanak utha hai aur dwarwaje ke piche ja kar chupp jata hai...wo apni maa ko darana chahta hai..
Thodi der baad pramila chaat ki taraf aati hai..aur darwaje se aa kar dhire dhire se ravi ko awaaj lagati nahi per ravi reply nahi deta..
Pramila: ravi..ravi( dhree se)
Koi reply nahi aata
Jaise hi pramila darwaze se uper aati hai..ravi darwaje se nikal apni maa ko piche se pakad leta hai...aur ek haatn moh me rakh deta hai..
Pramila ki cheekh nikal jaati hai..per awaaz nahi hoti
ravi ne bahut kass ke apni maa ko padka hua hai..aur usko dawarjae ke piche le jaane lagta hai..pramila tabhi bahut darr jaati hai..aur zor se ravi ka haath datoon se kaat deti hai..
Ravi ki cheekh nikal jaati aur bolta hai..maa
Pramila:ravi...tum..nalayak.
Ravi:mai nahi to aur kaun
Pramila:mai to darr gayi thi
Ravi:aapne kya socha
Pramila:mujhe laga ki koi aur hai
Ravi:maa ye hamara hi ghar hai..yahan koi aur kaun hoga
Aur apna haath dekhne lagta hai
Ye dekhkar pramila dhuki hoti hai..aur apne bete ka haath apne hath me le kar sehlane lagti hai..
Ravi: ab kya hog isse...aur hasne lagta hai
Pramila bhi hasne lagti hai..kafi dini baad ghar ke kaam se fursat mili aur itna khushnuma samay pramila bita rahi thi..
Ravi: maa tum aise hi haste raha karo
Pramila:kyun ji
Ravi:Aap haste hue acchi lagti ho
Pramilaoo hooo..aaj bada khayal kar hai apni maa
Ravi: sach ma
Pramila: tabhi... aaj bina bataye ghar se chala gaya tha
Ravi: nahi maa...jaan bhujh kar nahi kiya tha
Pramila :theek hai per dubara aisa mat karna
Ravi: kaisa maa
Pramila: yehi bina bataye ghar se mat jana
Ravi: ohhh..mujhe laga ki
Pramila: kya laga
Ravi: ki aapko aise piche se na pakdoon
Pramila: nahi wo nahi kaha maine
Ravi:achha to pakad karta hoon
Pramila: haan per katoongi..
Aur dono maa bete hasne lagte hai..
Ab aage
Dono maa bete haste ek dusre haath apne haathon me lekar baithe rehte hain tabhi
Pramila: ravi ek baat puchu
Ravi: haam maa
Pramila:tu hame chodd kar kahin chala to nahi jayega na
Ravi:kyun maa..aisa kyun bol rahi ho
Pramila: aaj tu thodi der ke liye hi gaya tha per aisa laga ki kai saal ho gaye...hum bahut pyaar karte hai tujhe ravi..
Aur pramila ki aakhoon me aansu aa jate hain
Ravi: nahi maa kabhi nahi jaunga chood kar
Aur ek haath apni maa ke kandhe per rakh deta hai..pramila bhi apna sar ravi ke kandhe per rakh deti hai...
Thodi der baad...raat kareeb 3 baje
Ravi kehta hai...maa chalo chalte hain..raat kafi ho gayi..per pramila ka mann jane ka nahi tha..wo aur rukna chahti thi..
Pramila: meri need uda kar tujhe ab need aa rahi hai
Ravi:haste hue...kya kiya maine
Pramila: achha tujhe nahi maloom aur uske chehre per haansi aa jati hai
Phir dono haanth me haanth daale niche aate..aur hall ke kareeb ruk jaate ..ravi abhi maa ko hi dekhta rehta hai..aur pramila use
Phir dono muskuraate hue aage badhte hain..aur pramila apne kamre ke saamne pahuchti hai..ravi ka kamra apne maa papa ke kamre se kareeb 15 foot door tha..tabhi..pramila ravi ke sath aage badh jaati hai..ravi ye dekhta hua aage bahdta rehta hai..wo maa ki taraf dekhta aur bolta hai..maa aapka room
Pramila kuch nahi bolti aur ravi sath aage badhti hai
Tabhi ke kamre ke saamne pahuch kar
Pramila:haan pata hai mujhe...mai to tujhe tere kamre tak chodne aayi hoon ki kahin to phir na bhaag jaye..
Ravi: haste hue...maa tum bhi na
Pramila hasti hai..aur apne bete ke sar per kiss karti
Ravi..kuch samjh nahi pata...kyunki aaj tak uski maa ke aisa nahi kiya..
Pramila wapas apne kamre ki taraf bahdti hai..aur darwaze per aa wapas ravi ki taraf halki muskurahat dete hue dekhti hai..ravi bhi apni maa ko hi dekhta rehta...phir uski maa darwaza band kar leti hai..
Ravi: kya hua maa..itna late ho gayi(haste hue)
Pramila:teri wajah se(haste hue)
Ravi:meri wajah se
Pramila: haan...chal break fast kar...bahut kaam hai
Ravi: are maa...phir wahi kaam kaam
Pramila: to kya
Ravi:thodi der baitho na
Pramila: kyun ji
Ravi: aapse baat karne ka mann kar raha hai
Pramila: to kal 4 baje tak kya kar raha tha
Ravi: wo to bas aapko dekh raha tha
Pramila:achha..ji
Ravi:to chale chatt per
Pramila:betaji abhi din hai...
Ravi: to kya hua
Pramila: aaju baju ki ladies hongi chatte per...pura khula hai chatt
Ravi:hmmm...per raat me theek rahega
Pramila:pakad to abhi bhi sakta hai(haste hue)
Ravi: raat ki baat kuch aur hai
Pramila: raat me aisa kya hai
Ravi:raat me koi disturb nahi karega
Pramila: waise abhi bhi koi nahi hai
Dono maa bete hasne lagte hai..tabhi
Ravi:theek hai to phir
Pramila: kya phir
Ravi..apne chair se uthta hai maa ki taraf badhta hai
Pramila samjh jaati ki ravi kya karne wala hai aur wo bhi uth jaati aur sidhiyon ki taraf bhaagti hai...
Ravi: ruko maa
Pramila haste hue apni jeebhi nikal kar use chidati hai..aur bhaagti hai
Jaise hi pramila sidhiyaan chadne ki kosish karti ravi tezi se aa kar use sidhiyon per hi piche se dabooch leta hai...pramila uski bahon me aa jaati hai.aur chootne ki kosish karti hai...
Pramila:chood na
Ravi:nahi
Pramila:please
Ravi:nahi...kahan bhaag rahi thi
Pramila:chaat per
Ravi:achha
Pramila:haan
Ravi:aapne kaha tha ki wahan koi dekh lega
Pramilahhh main to darr ki wajah se bhool gayi thi
Ravi:kaisa darr..
Dhree se apni maa ke kaan me bolta hai aur kass kar apni maa ka pet pakad kar apni taraf bheechta hai
Pramila:jo kal tu raat me mera muh band karke darwaje ke piche le ja raha tha..
Ravi:to kya hua
Pramila:achha kuch nahi..hua...beta ji...koi beta apni maa ko darwaje ke piche nahi le jata
Aur ravi ka haath dhila hote hi pramila choot kar ravi ko chidate hue kitchen ki taraf bhaagti hai..
Ravi pramila ke piche aata hai...tab tak ravi ka lund buri taraf akad gaya tha..pramila apni tirchi nazar se dekhti hai uske beta ta tambu jo subah se bhi jada bada dikh raha raha..
Pramila uper se aata nikaal ti hai use rotiyan banane ki tayari karne lagti hai..
Ravi phir phiche se aata hai apni maa se sat jata hai..jaise hi wo apni se sat kar apne dono haath ke kamar me rakhta..pramila shihar uthti hai..wo apne beta ka lund saaf saaf mehsoos karti..aur apne pati ke lund se tulna karne lagti hai
Tabhi..
Ravi:maa(dhiree se kaan me)
Pramila:bolo betaji
Ravi:chalo no
Pramila:kahan
Ravi:wahin
Pramila:chatt me darwaje ke piche(haste hue)
Ravi:nahi..mere kamre ke darwaje ke piche
Pramila:kyun kya hai wahan
Ravi:chalo pehle phir bataunga
Pramila:na baba..mujhe darr lagta hai
Ravi:kyun..
Pramila:raat ki baat se
Ravi:abhi to din hai
Pramila:wo hai..per darr apni jagah hai
Ravi:araam se dabaunga na
Pramila:kya
Ravi:aapka muh
Pramila lagatar Aate ko masle ja rahi..aate ja paani sookh chuka tha
Pramila aapna chehra thoda ravi ki or karte hue..sach me
Ravi:haan maa dhiree se dabaunga
Pravila:nahi..tujh per bharosa nahi..jada tej daba diya to kya karoongi..na baba na...
Agle din subah..
Pramila ki need late se khulti hai...kareeb 9 baje wo uthi to dekhti hai..ki vinod office jaane ki liye tayar ho raha hai..aur reema bhi college ke liye nikalne wali..aaj subah hai naasta reema ne bana diya tha..
Pramila: reema mujhe uthaya kyun nahi..
Reema: maa...mai gayi thi aapke kamre me aap uthi hi nahi..kitni awaaj lagayi maine..
Pramila mann me...4 baje soyi hoon..to kahan se uth pati...
Vinod: ok..mai nikal raha hoon aur reema ko college drop kar doonga
Pramila: ok
Pramila tabhi...sochti hai laat sahab kahin nahi dikh raha hai jiske wajah se mai late hui...aisa bolte hue to aas pass dekhti hai..us ravi nazar nahi aata...
Pramila: lagta hai...abhi bhi so raha hai...
Aisa bolte hue hue uske kamre ki tarah badhti..aur dawarwaja knock karti hai..
Bahut knock karne per ravi utha jata aur darwaze ki taraf badhta hai...per use need ke aagosh me dhyaan hi nahi rehta ki uski chaddi lund ke tanao se bilkul tani hui hai..aur wo darwaja khol deta hai...
Pramila: kyun re kab tak soega
Ravi: maa thodi der aur
Pramila: nahi...chal bahut so liya aur haan kya kaha tha tune ki kal college off rahega..to ghar ke kaam me hath batayega...
Ravi: ok maa..tum chalo mai aata hoon
Pramila: jaldi haan..
Aur jaise hi pramila jaane ki liye mudti hai...uski nazar ravi ki chaddi per jaati jo bilkul tani hui hai..pramila jaldi nazar ghuma leti hai jaldi jaldi bathroom ki taraf badh jaati hai
Bathroom me aate hi pramila me mann me wahi scene baar baar aa raha tha...wo sochti hai ki ravi ki chaddi ka tanao bahut jada tha...aisa tanao to usne apne pati ka bhi nahi dekha...wo apne apne pati ke lund ka size janti per ye to.....wo apne mann ko samjhati hai kya soch rahi hai aur..
Phir wo brush karke sidhe shower ke niche aa jati hai...kareeb 1 ghante baad wo bathroom ne towel lapte kar bathroom se nikalti hai..aur sidhe aaine ke saame aati hai..aaine ke saamne aate hi wo towel phek deti hai aur apne sareer ko dekhti hai...phir achanak use dhyaan aata hai ki ravi ne nasta nahi kiya hoga wo.jaldi jaldi apne kapde pehnati aur room se bahar aa jati...ravi dinning table per baitha hua..apni maa ka wait kar raha hota...
Tabhi...door bell bajti hai aur maa bete darwaze ki taraf jane wale raaste ki taraf dekhte hain...
Pramila: ravi dekh jara kaun hai
Ravi anmane mann se..dekhta hoon
Ravi jaise hi dawarza kholta saamne uski choti behan khadi rehti
Reema:kitni der laga di darwaza kholne me
Ravi:tu jaldi aa gayi college se..kyun
Ravi use kabab ki haddi ki tarah dekh raha hota hai
Reema: are...aaj sirf assigment submit hua hai..ab side me ho ..aur ander jane do
Pramila: ravi kaun hai...
Reema: mai hoon maa..
Pramila mann me..ye ladki abhi kyun aa gayi..
Pramila:are beta aaj jaldi aa gayi
Reema: haan college ka kaam ho gaya tha
.isliye jaldi aa gayi
Dono maa bete ek dusre ko badi aas se dekhte hain...per kuch nahi bolte..
Reema: maa mujhe jaldi khana dedo..mujhe archana ke ghar jana hai...monday assignement submit karna hai uske liye
Ravi ye sun ka saatwe aasmaan per pahuch jata hai...aur apni maa ki taraf haste hue dekhta hai..pramila bhi apne bete hi taraf dekhti hai...aur uske chehre per halki halki muskurahat aa jaati hai
Tabhi ravi bolta hai...maa mai bhi ja kar naha leta hoon..phir mujhe bhi khana de dena..aur ghar ke piche chote se plot aur kue se lage bathroom ki taraf jane lagta hai..pramila use jaate hue dekhti hai aur sochti hai...ravi apne kamre ke bathroom me nahane kyun nahi gaya...piche wala bathroom to wo kam hi istemaal karta hai..
Pramila yehi soch soch kar garam hui ja rahi hai....mann me bolti hai...aaj se pehle kabhi aisa kabhi nahi hua...2 din me hi aisa kya hua...ki use apne bete ka sath zada achha lagne laga..vinod busy rehta hai..per office se aane ke baad use time deta tha...per vinod se jada use apne bete ke kareeb rehna pasand aane laga...
Tabhi..
Reema: maa...lao do jaldi khana...bahut bhook lagi hai..mujhe jaldi jaana bhi hai..
Pramila:bas beta...5 min..tere bhaiya bhi aate honge..sath me khana
Reema:maa..bhaiya kahan hain
Pramila: nahane gaya hai..aata hooga
Reema:are maa..unka koi bharosa nahi..kab aayenge..tum mujhe jaldi khana do...
Pramila: theek hai..ruk
Reema: waise bhaiya college kyun nahi gaye
Pramila: aaj uska college band tha
Reema:mera college bhaiya ke college se aage ja kar padta hai...unka college to khula tha...
Pramila ye sun kar kuch nahi bolti aur man me sochti hai ravi ne aaj college kyun bunk kiya...kahin jhooth bol kar wo mere sath ghar me hi samay to nahi bitana chah raha tha...ye sochte sochte uski panty gili hone lagi..aisa to vinod ke sath bistar per hone per bhi nahi hua..wo garam pehle se thi...ye sochte hue aur garam ho gayi...
Tabhi..
Reema:maa mai ja rahi hoon..archana ke ghar..abhi 1 baje hai..3 baje tak wapas aa jaungi
Pramila:theek hai...jaldi aana
Reema: ok maa..bye
Aur wahan se nikalti hai..pramila garden ka gate band karke...main door band karti hai..aur ander aakar sidhe kictchen me chali jati hai..
Thodi der baad..usi nazar gaadi ki taraf jaati hai..to dekhti hai..kareeb 1 baje the..aur badbati hai
Pramila: 2 gante se ye ladka kya kar raha hai bathroom me...aise kaise naha raha hai...
aur piche bathroom me jaane walen raaste ki taraf dekhti hai..
Idhar ravi bathroom me aaj subah aapni maa ke sath hue ghatna ko yaad kar raha hai...abhi usne shower chalu nahi kiya hai...bas sabun le kar apne lund per masal raha hai...is beech kai baar sabun sukhta jata hai...ravi phir thoda pani le kar sabun ragane lagta hai...sirf apne lund aur niche latke hue...goto ko kass kass ke ragda raha hai..usne apne sareer per sabun nahi lagaya hai sirf lund aur niche goto per..
aur bolta hai..lagta hai tumahri zaroorat padne wali hai..
tabhi
Pramila: 1.30 bajne ko aaye ye ladka...na..reema bhi ab to aati hogi
Aisa bolte hue piche bathroom ki taraf jaane lagti hai..
Pramila aas pass dusre ghar ki taraf dekhti jo uske piche khali plot se sate hue the..per use koi nazar nahi aata..dopahar thi..koi apne ghar ke piche nahi aata is samay...dhire dhire wo bathroom ke kareeb pahuchti hai..ravi ka saabun sookh chuka hai..wo phir thoda pani aur saabun le kar apne lund per ragta hai..
Pramila bathroom ke kareeb ja kar darwaze ke pass pachuti hai wo phir piche dekhti hai..ki kahin koi dekh to nahi raha..uske mann me thoda darr hai..wo darwaze se kaan laga kar sunne ki kosish karti hai..ki ander kya ho raha hai..per andar pani girne ki awaz nahi aati..wo hairaan hoti hai..wo phir sunne ki koshish karti hai..is baar use kuch..sapad sapad jaisa sunaiye deta hai...
Aage..
Pramila darwaze ke pass aa kar ravi ko awaaz deti hai...
Pramila:ravi...
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Pramila: raviiiiii
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Ravi bas masti me dooba rehta hai..aur tezi se apne 9 inch lambe lund per chalta jata jata..
Pramila:ravi kya kar rahe ho...2 ghante ho gaye..(darwaza band hai)
Aur darwaze me apna haath dhire me marti hai...ravi ko hosh aa jaata hai..
Pehle use yakeen nahi hota ki bahar uski maa khadi hai...phir dubara pramila kehti hai
Ravi..jaldi nikal na..kab se hai andar tu
Ravi:haa maa aaya..hadbada kar bolta hai
Pramila: kya kar raha hai 2 ghante se(dhire se)
Ravi:maa..wo naha raha tha
Pramila: per pani ki awaz nahi aa rahi thi...balki sappad sappad ki awaz zaroor aa rahi thi
Ravi kuch nahi bolta use samjh nahi aata ki kya bole apni maa se...
Pramila: theek hai..jaldi aa bahar..
Ravi:maa reema chali gayi
Pramila: haan kab ki...aur ab uske aane ka time bhi ho gaya hai...(sochti hue ke iske nahane ki wajah se keemti time nikal gaya)
Ravi turant mauke hai fayda uthana chahta hai..
Ravi: maa..ek kaam kar sakti ho(darwaze ke andar se)
Pramila: kya
Ravi:wo maa jaldi jaldi me underwear aur towel wahi apne room me bhool gaya..aap la sakti ho
Pramila: chaukte hue...kya
Ravi: haan maa
Pramila: kaisa ladka hai tu..jaroori samaan hi bhool gaya...haste hue
Ravi:are..maa wo mera dhyaan kahin aur tha
Pramila samjh jaati ki uska dhyan kahan tha...
Pramila:mai nahi laati
Ravi: maa..please
Pramila:na matlab na
Ravi: la do na maa..warna aise hi bahar aana padega
Pramila: to aa ja..kisne roka hai
Ravi: soch lo
Pramila: soch liya aur hass deti hai
Ravi tabhi darwaze ki kundi khole ka natak kar karta..
Jaise hi pramila ko kundi khulne ki awaaz aati wo chauk.jaati hai..aur bolti hai
Ruk ruk..
Ravi: ander se..kya hua
Pramila: ruk mai laati hoon
Ravi:ab kya hua..darr gayi kya
Pramila:mai nahi darti
Ravi:achha..to phir aaun
Pramila: badmash..ruk abhi lekar aati hoon underwear aur towel..
Aur ander jaane lagti hai..
Is samay uski panty puri gili ho gayi hai
.use apni choot me kuch chalta hua samjh me aata hai..
Ravi ke room me aakar..wo ek haath ravi ki underwear uthati hai..aur dusre haath se use sehalane lagti hai..use aisa.lagta hai ki ab wo apne aap ko sambhaal nahi payegi..ko jhad jayegi...per kisi tarah khud ko control karke under wear aur towel le kar piche bathroom ki taraf badhti hai..
Bathroom ke pass pahuch kar ek baar phir wo aas pass dekhti hai ki kahin koi dekh to nahi raha..aur darwaze ke pass aa kar dhire se bolti hai..
Ravi mai le aayi..
Ravi: maa ek min.
Wo abhi bhi nahaya nahi hai...bas sabun apne lund per ragta raha tha
Aur dhire darwaza aadha khol kar apna haath badhata hai
Ravi:do maa
Pramila:le na
Ravi:kahan hai..towel
Pramila huste hue towel use me touch karke door kar deti hai..
Ravi:maa mazaj mat karo...jaldi.do
Pramila:kya
Ravi:wahi jo tumahre haath me hai
Pramila:kya hai mere haath me
Ravi:meri izzaat..haste hue
Pramila: wo aaj lut gayi..haste hue
Tabhi ravi thoda darwaza aur kholta hai aur zhat se apna haath aage badha deta...aise karne per pramila ka haath uske haath me aa jata hai..pramila chauk padti hai..
Pramila:ravi...
Ravi: haan
Pramila:chood na
Ravi: nahi..
Pramila: please
Ravi:nahii....aur use bathroom me khichne ki kosish karta hai
Pramila:please beta..chood na
Ravi..apni maa ko bathroom ke under aadha kichhe leta hai..aur hasta hai
Pramila..jaise hi aadhi bathroom ke under jaati hai..wahan ka nazara dekh kar uksa gala sukh jata hai..wo dekhti hai uske bete ka lund saabun me tipta hua aur bilkul akada hua uper ki or tana hua hai..uske bete se ka sareer bilkul sukha hai..sirf uske lund per aur goto per sabun laga hai....wo samjh jaati ki ravi naha nahi raha tha...kuch aur kar raha tha..ravi ki pakad dhili hote wo apna haath chuda leti aur bahar nikalte hue ravi ko bolti hai..
Pramila: kamine..kitne kass ke padka tha
Ravi hasta hai..ab darwaza pura khul.jaat hai
Ravi bilkul naga apni maa ke samne rehta hai..pramila.apne bete ke lund ki taraf dekhte hue bolti
Pramila: aise dabate hai kisi
Aage..
Pramila darwaze ke pass aa kar ravi ko awaaz deti hai...
Pramila:ravi...
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Pramila: raviiiiii
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Ravi bas masti me dooba rehta hai..aur tezi se apne 9 inch lambe lund per chalta jata jata..
Pramila:ravi kya kar rahe ho...2 ghante ho gaye..(darwaza band hai)
Aur darwaze me apna haath dhire me marti hai...ravi ko hosh aa jaata hai..
Pehle use yakeen nahi hota ki bahar uski maa khadi hai...phir dubara pramila kehti hai
Ravi..jaldi nikal na..kab se hai andar tu
Ravi:haa maa aaya..hadbada kar bolta hai
Pramila: kya kar raha hai 2 ghante se(dhire se)
Ravi:maa..wo naha raha tha
Pramila: per pani ki awaz nahi aa rahi thi...balki sappad sappad ki awaz zaroor aa rahi thi
Ravi kuch nahi bolta use samjh nahi aata ki kya bole apni maa se...
Pramila: theek hai..jaldi aa bahar..
Ravi:maa reema chali gayi
Pramila: haan kab ki...aur ab uske aane ka time bhi ho gaya hai...(sochti hue ke iske nahane ki wajah se keemti time nikal gaya)
Ravi turant mauke hai fayda uthana chahta hai..
Ravi: maa..ek kaam kar sakti ho(darwaze ke andar se)
Pramila: kya
Ravi:wo maa jaldi jaldi me underwear aur towel wahi apne room me bhool gaya..aap la sakti ho
Pramila: chaukte hue...kya
Ravi: haan maa
Pramila: kaisa ladka hai tu..jaroori samaan hi bhool gaya...haste hue
Ravi:are..maa wo mera dhyaan kahin aur tha
Pramila samjh jaati ki uska dhyan kahan tha...
Pramila:mai nahi laati
Ravi: maa..please
Pramila:na matlab na
Ravi: la do na maa..warna aise hi bahar aana padega
Pramila: to aa ja..kisne roka hai
Ravi: soch lo
Pramila: soch liya aur hass deti hai
Ravi tabhi darwaze ki kundi khole ka natak kar karta..
Jaise hi pramila ko kundi khulne ki awaaz aati wo chauk.jaati hai..aur bolti hai
Ruk ruk..
Ravi: ander se..kya hua
Pramila: ruk mai laati hoon
Ravi:ab kya hua..darr gayi kya
Pramila:mai nahi darti
Ravi:achha..to phir aaun
Pramila: badmash..ruk abhi lekar aati hoon underwear aur towel..
Aur ander jaane lagti hai..
Is samay uski panty puri gili ho gayi hai
.use apni choot me kuch chalta hua samjh me aata hai..
Ravi ke room me aakar..wo ek haath ravi ki underwear uthati hai..aur dusre haath se use sehalane lagti hai..use aisa.lagta hai ki ab wo apne aap ko sambhaal nahi payegi..ko jhad jayegi...per kisi tarah khud ko control karke under wear aur towel le kar piche bathroom ki taraf badhti hai..
Bathroom ke pass pahuch kar ek baar phir wo aas pass dekhti hai ki kahin koi dekh to nahi raha..aur darwaze ke pass aa kar dhire se bolti hai..
Ravi mai le aayi..
Ravi: maa ek min.
Wo abhi bhi nahaya nahi hai...bas sabun apne lund per ragta raha tha
Aur dhire darwaza aadha khol kar apna haath badhata hai
Ravi:do maa
Pramila:le na
Ravi:kahan hai..towel
Pramila huste hue towel use me touch karke door kar deti hai..
Ravi:maa mazaj mat karo...jaldi.do
Pramila:kya
Ravi:wahi jo tumahre haath me hai
Pramila:kya hai mere haath me
Ravi:meri izzaat..haste hue
Pramila: wo aaj lut gayi..haste hue
Tabhi ravi thoda darwaza aur kholta hai aur zhat se apna haath aage badha deta...aise karne per pramila ka haath uske haath me aa jata hai..pramila chauk padti hai..
Pramila:ravi...
Ravi: haan
Pramila:chood na
Ravi: nahi..
Pramila: please
Ravi:nahii....aur use bathroom me khichne ki kosish karta hai
Pramila:please beta..chood na
Ravi..apni maa ko bathroom ke under aadha kichhe leta hai..aur hasta hai
Pramila..jaise hi aadhi bathroom ke under jaati hai..wahan ka nazara dekh kar uksa gala sukh jata hai..wo dekhti hai uske bete ka lund saabun me tipta hua aur bilkul akada hua uper ki or tana hua hai..uske bete se ka sareer bilkul sukha hai..sirf uske lund per aur goto per sabun laga hai....wo samjh jaati ki ravi naha nahi raha tha...kuch aur kar raha tha..ravi ki pakad dhili hote wo apna haath chuda leti aur bahar nikalte hue ravi ko bolti hai..
Pramila: kamine..kitne kass ke padka tha
Ravi hasta hai..ab darwaza pura khul.jaat hai
Ravi bilkul naga apni maa ke samne rehta hai..pramila.apne bete ke lund ki taraf dekhte hue bolti
Pramila: aise dabate hai kisi
Congrats bro for new thread, first of all aapki story jhakkas hai. But iss kuchh spelling mistake hai jaise ki intro me hero ka naam RAHUL or Maa ka naam Nirmala hai but updates me Ravi or Parmila. Toh find and replace karo edit karke. 
