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dindigul72
sundari ji plzz likhiye.. maine apko motivate krne k liye apki story ka review aur kuch suggestion diye h.. plzz padiye
i would like to mention 4 specific things
1. cuckolding is a lot of the psychological torment husband experiences.. u have described mohan's thoughts wonderfully.. he is hesitant, afraid, constantly fantasising about his wife with other men
2. Mohan being physically weaker than sundari's bulls.. add to the delicious sexual humiliation
3. vegetarian food habits of mohan & butcher profession of Aslam is also a nice subtle hint & adds to eroticism
4. Sundari acting as a maid for aslam. this is even more exciting than sex scenes.. kyuki sundari ka ek naukrani ki tarah kaam krna adds to the humiliation of both Sundari & her husband... loved it.. (plzz aise unique scenes aur add kare..)
i can suggest other scenarios (try to add if possible)
1. Aslam Sundari se naukrani wala kaam pados wale ghar mai karvaye (chahe sundari ke kapde na utarwaye) par usse sab ki naukrani bana ke zaleel kare
2. Aslam sundari se public mai peshab krwaye (jaha uske pakde jane ka khatra ho)
3. Aslam Sundari ki salwar/leggings aur panties utarwa le aur sirf kurte mai usse samne wali dukan se saman lene bheje (bottomless exhibitionist dare)
4. Aslam & Sundari subtly & slowly nudge Mohan into accepting his role as cuckold in following ways-
- Aslam orders Sundari even infront of Mohan, her husband, she reluctantly follows orders..
-Sundari disobeys some of his orders, so Aslam takes sundari over his knee & gives a spanking over her ass.. (it should be played like a joke to make mohan think it is not sexual and he cannot outright stop aslam).. spanking can be over naked ass or clothed
5. Do you have any plans to bring mohan's mother into the story.. and add cuckson elements as well.. as she encourages sundaari to cuckold her son mohan
i have many more ideas.. i can share more as the story progresses... plzz use them if u want.. these suggestions r just a polite request
plzz keep writing sundari ji.. readers will come.. i m here to support you.. u have a good talent for writing.. i have found that with time writing skill will become even better.. never lose hope.. keep moving forward
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