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Ek anokhe prem ki kahani. Jiski ek taraf main aur mera biwi dusritaraf mere biwi uske pyar. Ham tino ki prem kya mode leti hai ye hai mera kahani
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Main hoon Raz . Main leke aya hoon ek anokhi kahani . Jismain love triangle hai. Ek taraf main , dusri taraf mere biwi aur tisri taraf uski pyar. To kahani main chalte hai.
Mera sab se pyara dost aur sabse best friend tha Shiv. Shiv amir ghar ki ladka hai. Main middle class ki family se belong karta hoon. Mera mom dad ek accident main chal base. Main apne nana nani ke ghar main pala badha hoon. Shiv mera padoshi tha. Oh apne maa baap ka ek lauta beta hai. Bachpan se shiv mera bahut achhe dost raha hai. Oh kabhi mujhe rulata nehi. Main bahut naram kisam ke insan tha. Per oh kisi se nehi darta tha. Ham bahut achhe dost the. Shiv ke mom dad mujhe apne bete jese mante the. Kabhi kabhi to main shiv ke sath unke ghar pe bhi reh jata tha kiunnki shiv dosti ke kasam deke rukwata tha. Main uske duniya tha. Oh bhi mera jindegi ke sabse ahem hissa tha. Shiv ke mom dad mujhe apne bete ke tarah pyar dete hai. Oh mujhe bolte the life main kisi tarah ki help chahe to hame bolna. Shiv ke papa ek bahut bade businessman the. Unki mom house wife thi. Shiv aur main sath main khelte hai. Sath main masti karte hai. Dekh te dekh te hum bachpan se jawani main kadam rakhe. Ek engineering college main admission liya. Hamari dosti har jagah famous tha. Uske paas mahngi car hone ke wabjud oh mere bike pe hi jata tha. Ek din first year student ki admission tha college main. Ham baithe the gate ke kuchh duri main. Aur hasi mazak kar rehe the . Tabhi gate main ek simple si ladki entry mari. Oh ladki bahut simple thi aur chudar main ayi thi. No make up. Per oh inta sunder thi jo bhi dekhta bas dekhta hi rehta. Oh sayad gaon ki hogi. Kiun ki choti bandh ke ayi thi. Bahut dar dar ke chali a rehi thi . Usko dekh ke main kho gaya. Mujhe laga ye meri dunia hogi. Pehli nazar main usse pyar ho gaya. Phir kuch seniors usko gher liye. Raging karne ke lie. Puchhe kanha se ayi ho. Usne bola kisi gaon ka naam. Senior ladkian uski bahut mazak udaye . Mujhe bahut gussa a raha tha. Phir ek senior ne had par kar diya. Boli ye engineer college hai. Yanha senior se badan chhupate nehi dikhate hain aur uske dupatta khich liya. Jiss se uski clevage dikhayi diya. Ladki apna file chhodke badan chhipane lagi aur roye jarehi thi . Mujhe chhod do bolke gid gida rehi thi .sab has rehe the. Usne bola dupatta de dunga per mujhe ek lipkiss dede tight hug kar ke aur dupatta leja. Usne bola yesi ladki nehi hoon. Mujhe chhod do. Main gusse se uske paas ja raha tha ki Shiv us batmiz ladke ko ek kick mara. Aur bola kiun be koi ese ladki ko misbehave karta hai kya. Ager ye teri behen hoti aur main iske sath ese kiya hota. Uske kapde faad ke chhota kar deta aur ese lipkiss mang ta to kya tujhe bahut maza ata. Usne maderchod bolke shiv ko attack karnr aya. Ye word to enginer college main common tha. Per ye word hamme jara bhi achha nehi lagta. Isse maa ki apman jesa lagta hai. Usne gusse se shiv ko marne aya . Per shiv ne itna gussa ho gaya ki kuchh minto main sab ko dhuli chata dia. Kiun ki oh boxing champion reh chuka hai. Uski mom dad ladhai jhagdo se dur rehne ke lie bahut baar bole hai. Ek lauta beta jo tha. Per oh nehi sunta tha. Sab ko dhul chatane ke baad usse dupatta lake ladki ki gale main laga diya . Oh ladki bas roye ja rehi thi. Maar khane ke baad un ladkone dhamki di. Tu janta nehi mujhe . Main kon hoon . Main Raka bhai ka beta hoon. Shiv gusse main bola ki tu beta hai aur tera baap main hoon. Suker mana aaj Raz se wada kiya tha khoon kharaba nehi warna tu aj hospital main hota. Chal yanha se. Phir shiv us ladki ko bola. Tum ko ghabrane ki koi jarurat nehi hai. Tumhe koi paresan nehi karega yanha. Jo bhi karne ki kosis karega. Sirf usko ye bol dena tum shiv ki friend ho. Uske baad kisi baap main itna dam nehi tumhe batmiz kare. Phir shiv 4-5 ladkion ko bulaya. Aur us ladki ko sambhalke admission karne ke lie le jane ko kaha. Main shiv ke paas gaya aur bola aaj bolta hoon tu jo kiya sahi kiya. Ek sarif ladki ko dekh ke sab chhedne ajate hai. Phir shiv ne bola oh sirf sarif nehi bahut sunder bhi hai. Baki ladkion se alag. Mujhe pucha Raz oh ladki kesi lagi tujhe. Main bola bahut achhi hai oh. Han sare ladion se alag ek dam susil swabhab ki lagti hai. Phir usne bola thank you dost. Tune bola hai to aur kuchh nehi sochna. Main usise hi shadi karunga aur ye tera bhabi hai aaj se.
Ye sunke main chup ho gaya. Mujhe bahut bura laga. Ichha ho raha tha bata dun ye mera nehi tera bhabi hai. Per nehi bol paya. Shiv mera jigri dost hai. Main nehi chahta uski dil dukhe. Han ye sach main us ladki ko apne dil main basa liya tha. Mujhe bahut kast lag raha tha. Main apna man ko dabake bola chal ghar chalte hai mera dimag dukh raha hai. Usne bola bhai aaj mujhe jane ko maan nehi lag raha hai. Tu chalaja . Aur han bhai sambhal ke jana. Sath hi hamare driver ko bolna oh tere bike leke hi aye yanha se mujhko lene. Car nehi. Main ok bolke ghar chala aya.
Main bathroom main jake tap se pani chalake rone laga. Phir socha ek ladki ke liye itna possesive kiun ho raha hoon main. Oh ta abhi ayi hai. Per shiv mera bhai se badkar hai. Oh kabhi koi ladki ko aj tak nehi dekha sayad usko achhi susil ladki chahiye tha. Main socha pyar nehi to kya hua Friend banke kuchh pal sath guzar l
dunga. Bhabi man ke reh lunga.
Raat ko shiv mere paas hamare ghar aya. Aur ake khusi se mujhe hug kar diya. Main bola are kya baat hai mera bhai itni khus. Usne bola pata hai aaj kya hua. First yr ke admission ke baad oh ladki dhundta hua mere paas ayi. Mujhe haath jodke thank you boli. Aur mujhse kaha aap nehi hote to main mun dikhane layak nehi rehti. Apni jaan de deti. Main bola aap roye mat. Main hoon na. Koi batmiz nehi karega. Ap marne ki baat mat kijie mujhe achha nehi lagta. Usne boli yanha bahut log the koi bachane nehi aya. Aap bhagwan banke mujhe bacha liye. Mere ijjat ko bhi. Main bola main bas apna farz nibhaya. Main man main dar raha tha kanhi bhaiya na bol de. Per usne bola kya ham friend ban sakte. Main bola bina jan pehchan ke kese dosti karu. Kanhi mujhe leke kanhipe bech diye to. Phir usne hasne lagi. Boli koi nehi bechega. Phir usne boli mere naam Priyanka hai. Per sab log mujhe Pari kehke bulate hai. Priyanka sirf official name hai. Per koi nehi bulata. Main sirf uski ankhomain dekhta gaya. Kitna masoom ankhe hai. Main usko dekhke itna kho gaya ki mere munh se nikal gaya ki jo ladki itni sunder hai. Swarg ki apsara jesi roop hai. Oh ladki insan to nehi ho sakti. Koi pari hi hogi. Phir oh chonk gayi aur boli kya matlam main insan nehi dikh rahi hoon. Main hos main ake bola ager apke pankh hote aur aap udsakte to aap ka naam ek dam perfect ho jata. Phir oh apni tarif sunke thoda muskurai aur sharma gayi. Boli aap bhi na. Kya kya bol dete ho. Main insan hi hoon. Gaon main paida hui hoon. Pari sirf mera naam hai samjhe aap. Apna naam to nehi bataye apne. Main bola main shiv hoon. Tumhara ek saal senior. Phir usne bola aap jo Raz ki baat kar rehe the usbakt oh kan hai. Main bola Raz mera dost nehi balki bhai hai. Oh mere life ka ahem hissa hai.
Pari ke munh se mera naam sunke thoda khus to hua. Phir bhi dukh laga.Phir shiv ne bola usko bike pe leke ladies hostel main chhoda. Uske baad ghar aya. Usne apna no bhi diya hai. Bhai mujhe aaj pehli baar pyar hua hai. Main bahut khus hoon. Tere baad jindegi main oh ayi hai. Kal tujhe usse mila dunga. Aur soja bhai tera sar to dukh rahs tha . Main uski cl ka intezar kar raha hoon . Phir so jaunga. Good night bhai . Phir shiv apne ghar chala gaya. To be continued.....
Main hoon Raz . Main leke aya hoon ek anokhi kahani . Jismain love triangle hai. Ek taraf main , dusri taraf mere biwi aur tisri taraf uski pyar. To kahani main chalte hai.
Mera sab se pyara dost aur sabse best friend tha Shiv. Shiv amir ghar ki ladka hai. Main middle class ki family se belong karta hoon. Mera mom dad ek accident main chal base. Main apne nana nani ke ghar main pala badha hoon. Shiv mera padoshi tha. Oh apne maa baap ka ek lauta beta hai. Bachpan se shiv mera bahut achhe dost raha hai. Oh kabhi mujhe rulata nehi. Main bahut naram kisam ke insan tha. Per oh kisi se nehi darta tha. Ham bahut achhe dost the. Shiv ke mom dad mujhe apne bete jese mante the. Kabhi kabhi to main shiv ke sath unke ghar pe bhi reh jata tha kiunnki shiv dosti ke kasam deke rukwata tha. Main uske duniya tha. Oh bhi mera jindegi ke sabse ahem hissa tha. Shiv ke mom dad mujhe apne bete ke tarah pyar dete hai. Oh mujhe bolte the life main kisi tarah ki help chahe to hame bolna. Shiv ke papa ek bahut bade businessman the. Unki mom house wife thi. Shiv aur main sath main khelte hai. Sath main masti karte hai. Dekh te dekh te hum bachpan se jawani main kadam rakhe. Ek engineering college main admission liya. Hamari dosti har jagah famous tha. Uske paas mahngi car hone ke wabjud oh mere bike pe hi jata tha. Ek din first year student ki admission tha college main. Ham baithe the gate ke kuchh duri main. Aur hasi mazak kar rehe the . Tabhi gate main ek simple si ladki entry mari. Oh ladki bahut simple thi aur chudar main ayi thi. No make up. Per oh inta sunder thi jo bhi dekhta bas dekhta hi rehta. Oh sayad gaon ki hogi. Kiun ki choti bandh ke ayi thi. Bahut dar dar ke chali a rehi thi . Usko dekh ke main kho gaya. Mujhe laga ye meri dunia hogi. Pehli nazar main usse pyar ho gaya. Phir kuch seniors usko gher liye. Raging karne ke lie. Puchhe kanha se ayi ho. Usne bola kisi gaon ka naam. Senior ladkian uski bahut mazak udaye . Mujhe bahut gussa a raha tha. Phir ek senior ne had par kar diya. Boli ye engineer college hai. Yanha senior se badan chhupate nehi dikhate hain aur uske dupatta khich liya. Jiss se uski clevage dikhayi diya. Ladki apna file chhodke badan chhipane lagi aur roye jarehi thi . Mujhe chhod do bolke gid gida rehi thi .sab has rehe the. Usne bola dupatta de dunga per mujhe ek lipkiss dede tight hug kar ke aur dupatta leja. Usne bola yesi ladki nehi hoon. Mujhe chhod do. Main gusse se uske paas ja raha tha ki Shiv us batmiz ladke ko ek kick mara. Aur bola kiun be koi ese ladki ko misbehave karta hai kya. Ager ye teri behen hoti aur main iske sath ese kiya hota. Uske kapde faad ke chhota kar deta aur ese lipkiss mang ta to kya tujhe bahut maza ata. Usne maderchod bolke shiv ko attack karnr aya. Ye word to enginer college main common tha. Per ye word hamme jara bhi achha nehi lagta. Isse maa ki apman jesa lagta hai. Usne gusse se shiv ko marne aya . Per shiv ne itna gussa ho gaya ki kuchh minto main sab ko dhuli chata dia. Kiun ki oh boxing champion reh chuka hai. Uski mom dad ladhai jhagdo se dur rehne ke lie bahut baar bole hai. Ek lauta beta jo tha. Per oh nehi sunta tha. Sab ko dhul chatane ke baad usse dupatta lake ladki ki gale main laga diya . Oh ladki bas roye ja rehi thi. Maar khane ke baad un ladkone dhamki di. Tu janta nehi mujhe . Main kon hoon . Main Raka bhai ka beta hoon. Shiv gusse main bola ki tu beta hai aur tera baap main hoon. Suker mana aaj Raz se wada kiya tha khoon kharaba nehi warna tu aj hospital main hota. Chal yanha se. Phir shiv us ladki ko bola. Tum ko ghabrane ki koi jarurat nehi hai. Tumhe koi paresan nehi karega yanha. Jo bhi karne ki kosis karega. Sirf usko ye bol dena tum shiv ki friend ho. Uske baad kisi baap main itna dam nehi tumhe batmiz kare. Phir shiv 4-5 ladkion ko bulaya. Aur us ladki ko sambhalke admission karne ke lie le jane ko kaha. Main shiv ke paas gaya aur bola aaj bolta hoon tu jo kiya sahi kiya. Ek sarif ladki ko dekh ke sab chhedne ajate hai. Phir shiv ne bola oh sirf sarif nehi bahut sunder bhi hai. Baki ladkion se alag. Mujhe pucha Raz oh ladki kesi lagi tujhe. Main bola bahut achhi hai oh. Han sare ladion se alag ek dam susil swabhab ki lagti hai. Phir usne bola thank you dost. Tune bola hai to aur kuchh nehi sochna. Main usise hi shadi karunga aur ye tera bhabi hai aaj se.
Ye sunke main chup ho gaya. Mujhe bahut bura laga. Ichha ho raha tha bata dun ye mera nehi tera bhabi hai. Per nehi bol paya. Shiv mera jigri dost hai. Main nehi chahta uski dil dukhe. Han ye sach main us ladki ko apne dil main basa liya tha. Mujhe bahut kast lag raha tha. Main apna man ko dabake bola chal ghar chalte hai mera dimag dukh raha hai. Usne bola bhai aaj mujhe jane ko maan nehi lag raha hai. Tu chalaja . Aur han bhai sambhal ke jana. Sath hi hamare driver ko bolna oh tere bike leke hi aye yanha se mujhko lene. Car nehi. Main ok bolke ghar chala aya.
Main bathroom main jake tap se pani chalake rone laga. Phir socha ek ladki ke liye itna possesive kiun ho raha hoon main. Oh ta abhi ayi hai. Per shiv mera bhai se badkar hai. Oh kabhi koi ladki ko aj tak nehi dekha sayad usko achhi susil ladki chahiye tha. Main socha pyar nehi to kya hua Friend banke kuchh pal sath guzar l
dunga. Bhabi man ke reh lunga.
Raat ko shiv mere paas hamare ghar aya. Aur ake khusi se mujhe hug kar diya. Main bola are kya baat hai mera bhai itni khus. Usne bola pata hai aaj kya hua. First yr ke admission ke baad oh ladki dhundta hua mere paas ayi. Mujhe haath jodke thank you boli. Aur mujhse kaha aap nehi hote to main mun dikhane layak nehi rehti. Apni jaan de deti. Main bola aap roye mat. Main hoon na. Koi batmiz nehi karega. Ap marne ki baat mat kijie mujhe achha nehi lagta. Usne boli yanha bahut log the koi bachane nehi aya. Aap bhagwan banke mujhe bacha liye. Mere ijjat ko bhi. Main bola main bas apna farz nibhaya. Main man main dar raha tha kanhi bhaiya na bol de. Per usne bola kya ham friend ban sakte. Main bola bina jan pehchan ke kese dosti karu. Kanhi mujhe leke kanhipe bech diye to. Phir usne hasne lagi. Boli koi nehi bechega. Phir usne boli mere naam Priyanka hai. Per sab log mujhe Pari kehke bulate hai. Priyanka sirf official name hai. Per koi nehi bulata. Main sirf uski ankhomain dekhta gaya. Kitna masoom ankhe hai. Main usko dekhke itna kho gaya ki mere munh se nikal gaya ki jo ladki itni sunder hai. Swarg ki apsara jesi roop hai. Oh ladki insan to nehi ho sakti. Koi pari hi hogi. Phir oh chonk gayi aur boli kya matlam main insan nehi dikh rahi hoon. Main hos main ake bola ager apke pankh hote aur aap udsakte to aap ka naam ek dam perfect ho jata. Phir oh apni tarif sunke thoda muskurai aur sharma gayi. Boli aap bhi na. Kya kya bol dete ho. Main insan hi hoon. Gaon main paida hui hoon. Pari sirf mera naam hai samjhe aap. Apna naam to nehi bataye apne. Main bola main shiv hoon. Tumhara ek saal senior. Phir usne bola aap jo Raz ki baat kar rehe the usbakt oh kan hai. Main bola Raz mera dost nehi balki bhai hai. Oh mere life ka ahem hissa hai.
Pari ke munh se mera naam sunke thoda khus to hua. Phir bhi dukh laga.Phir shiv ne bola usko bike pe leke ladies hostel main chhoda. Uske baad ghar aya. Usne apna no bhi diya hai. Bhai mujhe aaj pehli baar pyar hua hai. Main bahut khus hoon. Tere baad jindegi main oh ayi hai. Kal tujhe usse mila dunga. Aur soja bhai tera sar to dukh rahs tha . Main uski cl ka intezar kar raha hoon . Phir so jaunga. Good night bhai . Phir shiv apne ghar chala gaya. To be continued.....
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Sayad is kahani ki stating kisine pasand nehi kiya hai. Per main ye story jaroor puri karunga. After my current story "Kidnaper ke sath mom"
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bhai ye kahani us kahani se jyada achchhi lagi mujhe to
meusko padhna chhod chuka hoon...........kyonki wo pahle hi jarurat se jyada fantas par based thi aur ab chamatkar bhi add kar diye apne
ise continue rakho............ye kuchh realistic touch me hai
aur .................... thoda sabr rakha karo.............pahla update dete hi readers ki baadh nahin aa jati..........10-15 update to hone do uss kahani se jyada readers yahan honge
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Beautiful kahani bhai us se behtar hain ye usme utna maza nahin aaya..but ye starting bahot achi hain...
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kahani badhiya lag rahi hai ,,par ek hi line me likhte chale jaate ho ...
thoda paragraph me likho ,,
thoda gap bhi rakho to padhne me achcha lagta hai ..
thoda paragraph me likho ,,
thoda gap bhi rakho to padhne me achcha lagta hai ..
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Main hoon Raz . Main leke aya hoon ek anokhi kahani .
Jismain love triangle hai. Ek taraf main , dusri taraf mere biwi aur tisri taraf uski pyar.
To kahani main chalte hai.
Mera sab se pyara dost aur sabse best friend tha Shiv. Shiv amir ghar ki ladka hai. Main middle class ki family se belong karta hoon. Mera mom dad ek accident main chal base. Main apne nana nani ke ghar main pala badha hoon.
Shiv mera padoshi tha. Oh apne maa baap ka ek lauta beta hai. Bachpan se shiv mera bahut achhe dost raha hai. Oh kabhi mujhe rulata nehi. Main bahut naram kisam ke insan tha..
jyada nahi par aise thoda gap rahega to padhne me maja aata hai ..bura lage to sorry ..??..
Jismain love triangle hai. Ek taraf main , dusri taraf mere biwi aur tisri taraf uski pyar.
To kahani main chalte hai.
Mera sab se pyara dost aur sabse best friend tha Shiv. Shiv amir ghar ki ladka hai. Main middle class ki family se belong karta hoon. Mera mom dad ek accident main chal base. Main apne nana nani ke ghar main pala badha hoon.
Shiv mera padoshi tha. Oh apne maa baap ka ek lauta beta hai. Bachpan se shiv mera bahut achhe dost raha hai. Oh kabhi mujhe rulata nehi. Main bahut naram kisam ke insan tha..
jyada nahi par aise thoda gap rahega to padhne me maja aata hai ..bura lage to sorry ..??..