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To Guyz main hu is thread ka original writer ab jab maine isks part 2 ko post kar diya hai to socha isko bhi post kar hi du
Fantasy Manhoos - Life of a Innocent boy
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Update 1
Ek chote se ghar me jis me sirf ek kamra tha.....
Aur usi me ek side ek charpai padi thi.....
Ek kone me kuch bartan aur ek kone me toilet bana hua tha......
Toilet me darwaza aur diware sab thi........
Jani ki ek admi ke rehne ke liye bohat tha.......
Subha ke 5 am ka time tha.......
Ek ladka char pai pe so raha tha......
Ki tAbhi ghadi pe lagaya hua alarm baj utha.....
Woh ladka alarm mi awaz sun ke uth gya....
Fir usne alarm band kiya aur toilet me ghus gya......
Fir fresh hoke joging suit pehan liya......
Aur nikal gya joging pe......
15 minutes baad woh ek park me pohanch gya.......
Vahan kuch der joging karke thodi bohat dusri exercise karne
laga........
Kuch der baad usne exercise band ki.....
Aur chal pada gate ki aur......
Woh gate ke pass pohancha hi tha ki......
TAbhi vahan pe teen logo ki entry hui.......
Un teeno ko dekh ke ladke ke chehre pe muskurahat aa gayi.......
Par jese hi un teeno ki nazar us pe padi.....
Teeno ne muh fer liya aur age badh gaye......
In me se ek admi tha aur bakki do ladkia......
(Yahan me un teeno ko admi aur ladkio ko Lki1 aur Lki2
likhunga......)
Lki1 - pata nahi yeh Manhoos kab tak hame apni shakal dikhata
rahega......
Admi - pata nahi yeh Abhi tak hamre jivan me grehan ki tarha kyu
laga hua hai.......
Lki2 - ji karta hai ise yahin pe jaan se .ar dun.....
Aa jata hai subha subha muh utha ke........
Manhoos kahin ka......
Fir woh teeno apni joging karne lag jate hai........
Inke bate us ladke ne bhi sun li......
Woh ladka inki bato ko sun ke muh latka ke gate se bahar chala
gya.......
Yeh sab uske liye roj ka tha......
Uske sath yeh sabh kuch roj hota tha.......
Woh ladka ghar pohanch gya tha......
Aur apni Maa ki tasveer ko pakad ke use dekhne laga.....
Uski ankhon se ansun behne lage.......
Ladka - Maa mujhe kyu chod ke gayi.....
Akhir kya gunha tha mera......
Ek tu hi to thi jo mujhe samjhti thi......
Kyu chod ke gayi mujhe akhir kyu.......
Ab is duniya me main bilkul akela hun.......
Koi mujhe pyar nahi karta.....
SAbhi mujh se nafrat karte hai........
Sabh kehte hai ki me Manhoos hun......
Mene tumhe mara hai.....
Kya esa kAbhi ho sakta hai ki kAbhi kisi Bete ne apni hi Maa ko
mara ho......
Me mujhe bhi apne pass le chal Maa.....
Plz......
Ab aur nahi saha jata yeh akelapan.......
Kuch der tak woh ladka vese hi rota raha......
Fir woh utha aur tyar ho gya aur school dress pehan ke school li
aur nikal gya.......
( Ab thoda sa intro ho jaye......
Deep Verma - hero of the story jani ki main.....
"5-8" hight.....
Medium si body....
Fair color.......
Padne me bhi acha hun......
Sports me bhi acha hun......
Par mera na to koi friend hai nahi koi apna kehne wala.....
Kyu ki sAbhiujh se nafrat karte hai......
SAbhi mujhe Manhoos kehte hai......
Is liye aaj tak akela hun.......
Esa nahi hai ki mari family nahi hai......
Meri bhi family hai.....
Par sAbhi ne mujhe alag kar diya hai......
Kyu woh sab mujhe meri Maa ka katil mante hai......
Kyu ki main "Manhoos" hun......
Han par mwoh log mujhe mahine ke mahine kich rupee bhej dete
hai.....
Jis se mera guzara ho jata hai.......
Par isi ke sath me ek coffee shop pe bhi kam karta hun.......
Vahan se bhi kuch paise aa jate hai.....
Kuch log to mujh se nafrat karye hai aur kuch ke main apne kareeb nahi ane deta kyu ki kahin na kahin me bhi khud ko Manhoos manta
hun......
Yeh to tha hero ka intro......
Bakki ke character story me time to time aad honge......)
Aaj mera 12th ka result hai.........
Mujhe pata tha........
Is baar bhi me top karunga..........
Par fir bhi insan ke mann mein ek dar hota hai.....
Nervousness hoti hai......
Vahi sabh kuch mere under bhi tha......
Ki kahin koi aur top kar gya to......
Par mujhe is baat ke tension thi ki kahin top 3 ki ranking me mera
nam nahi aya to......
Isi udhed bun mein me School pohanch gya........
SAbhi students ek bade hall ki taraf jaa rahe the.......
Jab main hall mein pohancha to hall khacha khach bhara hua
tha.......
SAbhi seats book ho gayi thi.......
Mujhe kahin bhi Bethne ke liye yagha nahi mili is liye me ek side
khada ho gya.......
Fir kuch der baad Principal Mam stage pe ayi......
Aur Mike apne hath me le liya......
Aur bolna shuru kiya........
Pp Mam - mere pyare students.......
Mujhe yeh kehte hue khushi ho rahi hai ki hamare school ka result
is saal bohat acha aya hai.......
Bas kuch students ko chod ke sAbhi ka result bohat shandar
raha.......
Aur ek sabh se nadi khush khabri ki baat yeh hai ki hamare school
ke ek student ne pure state me top kiya hai......
Pure hall taliyon se gujh utha.........
Fir Principal Mam sAbhi ka result announce karne lagi.......
SAbhi stage pe ja ja ke apna result lene lage......
Fir ayi top three ke bari......
3rd no. Pe hamare school ki ek ladku thi......
2nd no. Bhi ek ladki thi......
Fir bari ayi no.1 position ki.....
Mera dil dhak dhak karne laga......
Kyu ki vahan hal mein ham char log the jinka result announce nahi
hua tha.......
Pp Mam - to students ab name hai hamare School ki shan jani ki
topper ki......
Lekin yahan char log bache hai.....
Jin me se ek topper hai aur bakki ke tin student fail hai.......
Principal Mam ki baat sun ke hum charo logo ke paseene chutne
lagw ki akhir kon hai woh topper aur kon teen fail hai......
Par mujhe jakeen tha ki me hi top karunga........
Pp Mam - to students pehle me aap sabhko fail students ke nam
announce karungi.......
Pehla name hai Rahul Sinha......
Dusra name hai Pulkit Sharma.......
Aur teesra nam hai any guesses......
SAbhi mera nam pukarne lage.......
Aur yahan hamare dono ke paseene chut rahe the.......
Pp Mam - to students teesre failure ka name hai Preet Partap
Singh......
Ab aap logo ko topper ka name bhi pata chal hi gya hoga......
And the name us Deep Verma the topper of our State give big
hands to him.......
Mr. Deep plz come on the stage.......
Me to yeh khabar sun kr ander se bohat khush hua.......
Fir me stage ke aur badhne laga.......
SAbhi teacher aur students mujhe kha jane wali nigaho se dekh
rahe the.......
Main stage pe pohncha aur jhuk ke Principal Mam ke pao chu
liye.......
Principal Mam ne mujhe gale se laga liya.......
Pure school me ek Principal Mam hi thi jo mujh se pyar karti
thi.....
Varna sAbhi teacher aur students mujh se nafrat karte the......
Pp Mam - congrats my boy......
Is baar bhi tum me mera sar ucha kar diya hai........
Students Deep ko pure state me top karne ki khushi me apni city
ke best college me scholarship mila hai......
To ek bar taliyon se Deep ko badhai dijiye.......
Ek baar fir hall me taliyon ka shor sunai dene laga.....
Fir me apna result leke Stage se niche aa gya......
SAbhi log vapis apne apne ghar jane lage.......
Me bhi apne ghar jane laga jese hi gate se bahar nikla ki.......
Aaaacccchhhhhaaaannnnnnkkkkkkk......
Ek chote se ghar me jis me sirf ek kamra tha.....
Aur usi me ek side ek charpai padi thi.....
Ek kone me kuch bartan aur ek kone me toilet bana hua tha......
Toilet me darwaza aur diware sab thi........
Jani ki ek admi ke rehne ke liye bohat tha.......
Subha ke 5 am ka time tha.......
Ek ladka char pai pe so raha tha......
Ki tAbhi ghadi pe lagaya hua alarm baj utha.....
Woh ladka alarm mi awaz sun ke uth gya....
Fir usne alarm band kiya aur toilet me ghus gya......
Fir fresh hoke joging suit pehan liya......
Aur nikal gya joging pe......
15 minutes baad woh ek park me pohanch gya.......
Vahan kuch der joging karke thodi bohat dusri exercise karne
laga........
Kuch der baad usne exercise band ki.....
Aur chal pada gate ki aur......
Woh gate ke pass pohancha hi tha ki......
TAbhi vahan pe teen logo ki entry hui.......
Un teeno ko dekh ke ladke ke chehre pe muskurahat aa gayi.......
Par jese hi un teeno ki nazar us pe padi.....
Teeno ne muh fer liya aur age badh gaye......
In me se ek admi tha aur bakki do ladkia......
(Yahan me un teeno ko admi aur ladkio ko Lki1 aur Lki2
likhunga......)
Lki1 - pata nahi yeh Manhoos kab tak hame apni shakal dikhata
rahega......
Admi - pata nahi yeh Abhi tak hamre jivan me grehan ki tarha kyu
laga hua hai.......
Lki2 - ji karta hai ise yahin pe jaan se .ar dun.....
Aa jata hai subha subha muh utha ke........
Manhoos kahin ka......
Fir woh teeno apni joging karne lag jate hai........
Inke bate us ladke ne bhi sun li......
Woh ladka inki bato ko sun ke muh latka ke gate se bahar chala
gya.......
Yeh sab uske liye roj ka tha......
Uske sath yeh sabh kuch roj hota tha.......
Woh ladka ghar pohanch gya tha......
Aur apni Maa ki tasveer ko pakad ke use dekhne laga.....
Uski ankhon se ansun behne lage.......
Ladka - Maa mujhe kyu chod ke gayi.....
Akhir kya gunha tha mera......
Ek tu hi to thi jo mujhe samjhti thi......
Kyu chod ke gayi mujhe akhir kyu.......
Ab is duniya me main bilkul akela hun.......
Koi mujhe pyar nahi karta.....
SAbhi mujh se nafrat karte hai........
Sabh kehte hai ki me Manhoos hun......
Mene tumhe mara hai.....
Kya esa kAbhi ho sakta hai ki kAbhi kisi Bete ne apni hi Maa ko
mara ho......
Me mujhe bhi apne pass le chal Maa.....
Plz......
Ab aur nahi saha jata yeh akelapan.......
Kuch der tak woh ladka vese hi rota raha......
Fir woh utha aur tyar ho gya aur school dress pehan ke school li
aur nikal gya.......
( Ab thoda sa intro ho jaye......
Deep Verma - hero of the story jani ki main.....
"5-8" hight.....
Medium si body....
Fair color.......
Padne me bhi acha hun......
Sports me bhi acha hun......
Par mera na to koi friend hai nahi koi apna kehne wala.....
Kyu ki sAbhiujh se nafrat karte hai......
SAbhi mujhe Manhoos kehte hai......
Is liye aaj tak akela hun.......
Esa nahi hai ki mari family nahi hai......
Meri bhi family hai.....
Par sAbhi ne mujhe alag kar diya hai......
Kyu woh sab mujhe meri Maa ka katil mante hai......
Kyu ki main "Manhoos" hun......
Han par mwoh log mujhe mahine ke mahine kich rupee bhej dete
hai.....
Jis se mera guzara ho jata hai.......
Par isi ke sath me ek coffee shop pe bhi kam karta hun.......
Vahan se bhi kuch paise aa jate hai.....
Kuch log to mujh se nafrat karye hai aur kuch ke main apne kareeb nahi ane deta kyu ki kahin na kahin me bhi khud ko Manhoos manta
hun......
Yeh to tha hero ka intro......
Bakki ke character story me time to time aad honge......)
Aaj mera 12th ka result hai.........
Mujhe pata tha........
Is baar bhi me top karunga..........
Par fir bhi insan ke mann mein ek dar hota hai.....
Nervousness hoti hai......
Vahi sabh kuch mere under bhi tha......
Ki kahin koi aur top kar gya to......
Par mujhe is baat ke tension thi ki kahin top 3 ki ranking me mera
nam nahi aya to......
Isi udhed bun mein me School pohanch gya........
SAbhi students ek bade hall ki taraf jaa rahe the.......
Jab main hall mein pohancha to hall khacha khach bhara hua
tha.......
SAbhi seats book ho gayi thi.......
Mujhe kahin bhi Bethne ke liye yagha nahi mili is liye me ek side
khada ho gya.......
Fir kuch der baad Principal Mam stage pe ayi......
Aur Mike apne hath me le liya......
Aur bolna shuru kiya........
Pp Mam - mere pyare students.......
Mujhe yeh kehte hue khushi ho rahi hai ki hamare school ka result
is saal bohat acha aya hai.......
Bas kuch students ko chod ke sAbhi ka result bohat shandar
raha.......
Aur ek sabh se nadi khush khabri ki baat yeh hai ki hamare school
ke ek student ne pure state me top kiya hai......
Pure hall taliyon se gujh utha.........
Fir Principal Mam sAbhi ka result announce karne lagi.......
SAbhi stage pe ja ja ke apna result lene lage......
Fir ayi top three ke bari......
3rd no. Pe hamare school ki ek ladku thi......
2nd no. Bhi ek ladki thi......
Fir bari ayi no.1 position ki.....
Mera dil dhak dhak karne laga......
Kyu ki vahan hal mein ham char log the jinka result announce nahi
hua tha.......
Pp Mam - to students ab name hai hamare School ki shan jani ki
topper ki......
Lekin yahan char log bache hai.....
Jin me se ek topper hai aur bakki ke tin student fail hai.......
Principal Mam ki baat sun ke hum charo logo ke paseene chutne
lagw ki akhir kon hai woh topper aur kon teen fail hai......
Par mujhe jakeen tha ki me hi top karunga........
Pp Mam - to students pehle me aap sabhko fail students ke nam
announce karungi.......
Pehla name hai Rahul Sinha......
Dusra name hai Pulkit Sharma.......
Aur teesra nam hai any guesses......
SAbhi mera nam pukarne lage.......
Aur yahan hamare dono ke paseene chut rahe the.......
Pp Mam - to students teesre failure ka name hai Preet Partap
Singh......
Ab aap logo ko topper ka name bhi pata chal hi gya hoga......
And the name us Deep Verma the topper of our State give big
hands to him.......
Mr. Deep plz come on the stage.......
Me to yeh khabar sun kr ander se bohat khush hua.......
Fir me stage ke aur badhne laga.......
SAbhi teacher aur students mujhe kha jane wali nigaho se dekh
rahe the.......
Main stage pe pohncha aur jhuk ke Principal Mam ke pao chu
liye.......
Principal Mam ne mujhe gale se laga liya.......
Pure school me ek Principal Mam hi thi jo mujh se pyar karti
thi.....
Varna sAbhi teacher aur students mujh se nafrat karte the......
Pp Mam - congrats my boy......
Is baar bhi tum me mera sar ucha kar diya hai........
Students Deep ko pure state me top karne ki khushi me apni city
ke best college me scholarship mila hai......
To ek bar taliyon se Deep ko badhai dijiye.......
Ek baar fir hall me taliyon ka shor sunai dene laga.....
Fir me apna result leke Stage se niche aa gya......
SAbhi log vapis apne apne ghar jane lage.......
Me bhi apne ghar jane laga jese hi gate se bahar nikla ki.......
Aaaacccchhhhhaaaannnnnnkkkkkkk......
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Update 2
Jese hi me gate se bahar nikla achanak kisi me mera rasta rok
liya.....
Ueh koi air nahi balki hamare school le sab se bigde hue ladke
the.......
L1 - kyu be topper kaham chal diya......
Main - ghar ja raha hun Bhai.......
Plz kya aap mera rasta chode ge........
L2 - kya ne itni bhi kya jaldi hai.........
Hamse apne topper hone ka gift to leta ja......
Main - Bhai mujhe koi bhi gift bift nahi chaiye.....
Kya aap mujhe jane denge plz.....
L3 - kya be m*******d tujhe sunayi nahi deta.....
Tujhe rukne ke liye bola na to ruk.....
Main - dekho Bhai Maa gali mat do varna.....
L2 - varna kya be.....
Principal ko complaint karega......
Ja munna ja......
Yeh keh ke teeno ladke hasne lage.......
Main - dekho Bhai log yeh jayada ho raha hai......
L3 - yeh ese nahi manega.....
Ise sabak sikhana hi padega.....
Teri Maa ki sale.....
Woh ladka itna bol mujhe marne ke liye age badha.......
Yese hi usne mere muh pe punch marna chaha.....
Me twist karke side ho gya aur usi waqt uske pet ki left side me
punch mar diya.....
Jis se woh niche gir pada aur karhane laga.......
(Mujhe ladna to nahi ata par.....
Park mein subha jab mein joging pe jata hun to vahan ek teacher
apne students ko kuch karate bagera aur self defense sikhata
hai.....
Is liye kuch moves mene bhi sikh liye.......)
Main - mene pehle hi kaha tha ki mujhe Maa ki gali mat dena......
Par isne nahi suna ab bhugat.......
L2 bhi mujhe marne ko badha......
Par mene age badke niche baith ek twisting kick uske pero me
mari.....
Jis se woh hawa me gulati khata hua niche gir pada......
Jese hi me kahada hua......
Kisi ne piche se mere sar pe kisi sakht cheez se baar kiya.......
Mujhe sar me bohat jayada dard hone laga......
Aur khoon bhi behne laga......
Jab mene piche palat ke dekha to piche L1 ek baseball bat liye
khada tha.......
Jese hi woh dobara mujhe marne ko hua.....
Mene age badh ke baseball ko pakad liya......
Aur ek punch uske pet me de mara.......
Woh bhi pet pakad ke niche baith gya......
Fir mene uske face pe ek kick jad Di......
Woh vahin let ke tadafne laga.......
Hamare charo taraf kafi bhed jama ho gayi thi.......
Principal Mam aur bakki ke teachers bhi vahan pohanch gaye.......
T1 - kya hua yahan......
L2 - sir isne hame mara.......
T1 - kyu be ladke tumne inko kyu mara......
Main - sir ladayi inho me shuru ki thi.......
Aur inho ne mujhe Maa ki gali bhi Di........
Itne me Principal Mam ne age badh ke un teeno ladko ko thappad
mar diya......
T1 - Mam yeh aap kya kar rahi hai.....
Galti us ladke ki hai......
Principal Mam - galti uski nahi hai inki hai......
T2 - aap itne biswash ke sath kese keh sakte hai ki galti inki hai
aur us ladke ki nahi.......
Principal Mam - kyu ki me Deep ko kayi salo se janti hun......
Woh kAbhi bhi jhooth nahi bolta.......
Samjhe......
(Un teeno se) dafa ho jao yahan se......
Woh teeno mujhe ghurte hue vahan se chale gaye.......
Itne me mujhe chakkar ane lage aur me behosh hone laga.........
Aur kuch hi palo mein me niche gir pada......
Principal Mam ki nigha jab mujh pe padi to bhag ke mere pass aa
gayi.......
Jab unho ne mere sar ke piche hath lagaya to unhe vahqn kuch gila
gila sa mehsoos hua.......
Jab unho ne apna hath dekha to vahan khoon laga hua tha.......
Principal - hey bhagwan khoon....
Khade khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho......
Jaldi se ise meri gadi tak pohnchao......
Fur kuch teachers ne mujhe utha ke Principal Mam ki gadi me
litaya......
Principal Mam ne mera sar apni goad me rakh liya......
Aur driver ko gaddi hospital lejane ke liye kaha.......
Jaldi hi hum log hospital pohanch gaye......
Mam ne Ward boys ko bula ke mujhe stature pe litaya aur ander le
gayi.......
Doctor mere sar pe patti kar Di......
Principal - Doctor Deep Abhi kesa hai......
Doc - he's fine now.....
Jayada khoon beh jane ke ki bajhe se body me kamjori aa gayi aur
woh behosh ho gya.......
Agar thodi si bhi der ho jati to......
Ise bachana mushkil ho jata......
Bas kuch der me ise hosh aa jayega........
Principal Mam - thanks Doctor.......
Fir Doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Mam vahan mere pass hi baithi rahi.........
Kareeb raat ke 8 baje mujhe hosh aya........
Mene dekha me kahin nayi jagha pe hun......
Fur mujhe medicine ki smel ane lagi me samajh gya......
Me hospital me hun......
Fir me apni charo aur dekhne laga.......
Principal Mam mere pass hi baithi thi........
Principal Mam ne jab mujhe hosh me ate dekha to woh uth ke mere
pass aa gayi......
Aur mere mathe ko chum ke boli.....
Principal Mam - ab kese tabiyat hai Beta tumhari.......
Main - Abhi acha hun.....
Par me yahan kese......
Principal Mam - mein tumhe yahan leke ayi hun......
Tumhare sar oe chot lagi thi jisse tumhara bohat khoon beh
gya.......
Aur tum behosh ho gaye.......
Fir me tumhe yahan le ayi.......
Par tum mujhe yeh bataoge ki tumne unse jhagda kyu kiya.......
Main - (bholi si surat bana ke) Mam wo jhagda mene nahi unho ne
shuru kiya tha......
Fur main Mam ko vahan pe pe jo kuch hua sabh bata diya.....
Principal Mam - chalo koi baat nahi tum yahin ruko me Doctor ke
pass hoke ayi......
Tumhe discharge karvana hai.......
Fir Mam room se bahar chali gayi........
Kuch der baad woh room mein vapis ayi.......
Unke sath Doctor bhi tha........
Fir Doctor ne kuch checkup kiya aur kuch medicine bagera likh ke
mujhe discharge kar diya........
Jese hi me gate se bahar nikla achanak kisi me mera rasta rok
liya.....
Ueh koi air nahi balki hamare school le sab se bigde hue ladke
the.......
L1 - kyu be topper kaham chal diya......
Main - ghar ja raha hun Bhai.......
Plz kya aap mera rasta chode ge........
L2 - kya ne itni bhi kya jaldi hai.........
Hamse apne topper hone ka gift to leta ja......
Main - Bhai mujhe koi bhi gift bift nahi chaiye.....
Kya aap mujhe jane denge plz.....
L3 - kya be m*******d tujhe sunayi nahi deta.....
Tujhe rukne ke liye bola na to ruk.....
Main - dekho Bhai Maa gali mat do varna.....
L2 - varna kya be.....
Principal ko complaint karega......
Ja munna ja......
Yeh keh ke teeno ladke hasne lage.......
Main - dekho Bhai log yeh jayada ho raha hai......
L3 - yeh ese nahi manega.....
Ise sabak sikhana hi padega.....
Teri Maa ki sale.....
Woh ladka itna bol mujhe marne ke liye age badha.......
Yese hi usne mere muh pe punch marna chaha.....
Me twist karke side ho gya aur usi waqt uske pet ki left side me
punch mar diya.....
Jis se woh niche gir pada aur karhane laga.......
(Mujhe ladna to nahi ata par.....
Park mein subha jab mein joging pe jata hun to vahan ek teacher
apne students ko kuch karate bagera aur self defense sikhata
hai.....
Is liye kuch moves mene bhi sikh liye.......)
Main - mene pehle hi kaha tha ki mujhe Maa ki gali mat dena......
Par isne nahi suna ab bhugat.......
L2 bhi mujhe marne ko badha......
Par mene age badke niche baith ek twisting kick uske pero me
mari.....
Jis se woh hawa me gulati khata hua niche gir pada......
Jese hi me kahada hua......
Kisi ne piche se mere sar pe kisi sakht cheez se baar kiya.......
Mujhe sar me bohat jayada dard hone laga......
Aur khoon bhi behne laga......
Jab mene piche palat ke dekha to piche L1 ek baseball bat liye
khada tha.......
Jese hi woh dobara mujhe marne ko hua.....
Mene age badh ke baseball ko pakad liya......
Aur ek punch uske pet me de mara.......
Woh bhi pet pakad ke niche baith gya......
Fir mene uske face pe ek kick jad Di......
Woh vahin let ke tadafne laga.......
Hamare charo taraf kafi bhed jama ho gayi thi.......
Principal Mam aur bakki ke teachers bhi vahan pohanch gaye.......
T1 - kya hua yahan......
L2 - sir isne hame mara.......
T1 - kyu be ladke tumne inko kyu mara......
Main - sir ladayi inho me shuru ki thi.......
Aur inho ne mujhe Maa ki gali bhi Di........
Itne me Principal Mam ne age badh ke un teeno ladko ko thappad
mar diya......
T1 - Mam yeh aap kya kar rahi hai.....
Galti us ladke ki hai......
Principal Mam - galti uski nahi hai inki hai......
T2 - aap itne biswash ke sath kese keh sakte hai ki galti inki hai
aur us ladke ki nahi.......
Principal Mam - kyu ki me Deep ko kayi salo se janti hun......
Woh kAbhi bhi jhooth nahi bolta.......
Samjhe......
(Un teeno se) dafa ho jao yahan se......
Woh teeno mujhe ghurte hue vahan se chale gaye.......
Itne me mujhe chakkar ane lage aur me behosh hone laga.........
Aur kuch hi palo mein me niche gir pada......
Principal Mam ki nigha jab mujh pe padi to bhag ke mere pass aa
gayi.......
Jab unho ne mere sar ke piche hath lagaya to unhe vahqn kuch gila
gila sa mehsoos hua.......
Jab unho ne apna hath dekha to vahan khoon laga hua tha.......
Principal - hey bhagwan khoon....
Khade khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho......
Jaldi se ise meri gadi tak pohnchao......
Fur kuch teachers ne mujhe utha ke Principal Mam ki gadi me
litaya......
Principal Mam ne mera sar apni goad me rakh liya......
Aur driver ko gaddi hospital lejane ke liye kaha.......
Jaldi hi hum log hospital pohanch gaye......
Mam ne Ward boys ko bula ke mujhe stature pe litaya aur ander le
gayi.......
Doctor mere sar pe patti kar Di......
Principal - Doctor Deep Abhi kesa hai......
Doc - he's fine now.....
Jayada khoon beh jane ke ki bajhe se body me kamjori aa gayi aur
woh behosh ho gya.......
Agar thodi si bhi der ho jati to......
Ise bachana mushkil ho jata......
Bas kuch der me ise hosh aa jayega........
Principal Mam - thanks Doctor.......
Fir Doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Mam vahan mere pass hi baithi rahi.........
Kareeb raat ke 8 baje mujhe hosh aya........
Mene dekha me kahin nayi jagha pe hun......
Fur mujhe medicine ki smel ane lagi me samajh gya......
Me hospital me hun......
Fir me apni charo aur dekhne laga.......
Principal Mam mere pass hi baithi thi........
Principal Mam ne jab mujhe hosh me ate dekha to woh uth ke mere
pass aa gayi......
Aur mere mathe ko chum ke boli.....
Principal Mam - ab kese tabiyat hai Beta tumhari.......
Main - Abhi acha hun.....
Par me yahan kese......
Principal Mam - mein tumhe yahan leke ayi hun......
Tumhare sar oe chot lagi thi jisse tumhara bohat khoon beh
gya.......
Aur tum behosh ho gaye.......
Fir me tumhe yahan le ayi.......
Par tum mujhe yeh bataoge ki tumne unse jhagda kyu kiya.......
Main - (bholi si surat bana ke) Mam wo jhagda mene nahi unho ne
shuru kiya tha......
Fur main Mam ko vahan pe pe jo kuch hua sabh bata diya.....
Principal Mam - chalo koi baat nahi tum yahin ruko me Doctor ke
pass hoke ayi......
Tumhe discharge karvana hai.......
Fir Mam room se bahar chali gayi........
Kuch der baad woh room mein vapis ayi.......
Unke sath Doctor bhi tha........
Fir Doctor ne kuch checkup kiya aur kuch medicine bagera likh ke
mujhe discharge kar diya........
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Fir hum Pp Mam ki car mein baith ke ghar ko nikal liye.....
Mene Mam ko apne ghar chlane ko kaha......
Main - Mam plz mujhe mere ghar chod dijiye.....
Principal Mam - chup chap baithi raho......
Tum mere sath mere ghar ja rahe ho.......
Tumhare sar pe kafi chot ayi hai.....
Aur kafi kamjor bhi ho gaye ho......
Aur tum apnr ghar me akele rehte ho.......
Koi bhi tumhari dekh bhal karne wala nahi......
To ab chup chap mere ghar chalo samjhe.......
Main - par Mam.....
Principal Mam - (vich mein hi baat katte hue) koi excuse nahi......
Ab tum mere satg chal rahe ho to chal rahe ho.......
Understand......
Maine sirf han mein gardan hila Di......
Jise dekh Mam ke hotho pe muskurahat aa gayi......
Unho ne mujhe gale laga liya.....
Principal Mam - that's like a good boy.....
Mam ne mujhe lita ke mera sar apni goad me rakh liya.......
Jaldi hi hum Mam ke ghar ke bahar the........
Mam ke ghar mein sirf unke pati unki Beti aur woh hi rehti thi......
Unka ghar 2 manjila tha.....
Ghar ke gate se enter hote hi sahmne sitting hall tha....
Uske ek side me dinning table tha.....
Aur usi side kitchen bhi tha.....
Sitting ke dusri side teen rooms the.....
Ek room Mam ka.....
Dusra guest room aur third store room......
First floor pe bhi teen room the......
Ek unki Beti ka......
Aur baki ke teen guest room the........
(Mam ki family ka thoda sa intro ho jaye.......
Mam's husband - Deepak Verma - age 38......
Achi khasi height hai......
Achi personality......
Nami business man.......
Apni family se bohat pyar karte hai.......
Mam - Kavita Verma - age 36......
Dikhne me khoob surat......
Dil ki saff.....
Inka kam hai sirf pyar batna......
Hamesha khush rehti hai.......
Mam's daughter - Preeti Verma - age **........
Bilkul cute c Gudiya.......
Ek lauti Beti.....
Shararti aur samajh dono ka combination hai........)
Jab ham ghar pohanche to Mam ke husband hall mein ho sofo pe
baithe the........
Jab unki nazar hum pe padi to woh uth ke hamare pass aa
gaye.......
Deepak - Kavita kahan thi tum aaj kafi der ho gayi......
Agar koi koi jaroori kam tha to bata to deti......
Upar se phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi........
Kavita Mam - sorry woh main bhool gayi thi.......
Aur phone silent pe tha.......
Fir Deepak Uncle ki nazar mujh pe padi......
Deepak - ok thik hai......
Vese yeh ladka kon hai......
Tumne intro nahi karvaya.......
Kavita Mam - khud pehchano.......
Deepak - ohh to challenge......
Hmmm sochne do kon ho sakta hai.......
Ahan kahin yeh Deep to nahi.......
Deepak Uncle ki baat sunn me san reh gya.......
Fir mene Mam ki taraf dekha jo muskura rahi thi.......
Unho ne Uncle ki taraf han mein gardan hila Di.......
Uncle ne bhi mujhe gale se laga liya.......
Fir mujhe alag karke bole.....
Deepak - par iske sar pe yeh patti kesi.......
Uske baad jo kuch aaj school mein hua Mam ne woh sab kuch Uncle
ko bata diya.......
Deepak - chalo koi baat nahi......
Aao Betho......
Fir hum sAbhi sofo pe baith gaye......
Kavita Mam - vese meri Gudiya kahan hai.......
Deepak - woh Abhi tak apne room mein padhai kar rahi hai......
Kavita Mam - hey Ram dinner kiya ke nahi usne......
Deepak - tumhari ladli hai.....
Me to keh keh ke thak gya.....
Par woh boli ke Maa ke sath hi khaungi.......
Kavita Mam - chalo me bula ke lati hun use.......
Kavita Mam - (ek naukar se) hariya jake Ramu se kaho woh Deep
ke liye khichdi bana de.......
Hariya - ji malkin......
Fir Kavita Preeti ke room ki aur badh gayi......
Idhar Deep is soch mein dooba hua tha ki.....
Mam use itna pyar kese karti hai bakki sAbhi to usse nafrat karte
hai......
Aur to aur Mam ke husband tak use jante hai.......
Esa kese ho sakta hai........
Udhar Mam Preeti ke room mein pohanch chuki thi......
Unho ne jake Preeti ka door knock kiya.......
'Knock Knock'
Preeti - papa mene keh diya na mujhe bhukh nahi hai.....
Fir aap kyu baar baar aa rahe ho......
Kavita Mam - acha Beta ji mere sath bhi nahi khaogi........
Jese hi Preet ne apni Maa ki awaz suni.....
Usne bhag ke darwaza khola......
Aur apni Maa ke gale lag gayi.......
Preeti - Maa aap aa gayi......
Mam ne use apne alag kiya.....
Aur uska gal chum liya.....
Kavita Mam - ji meri Gudiya.....
Preet - to fir jaldi jaldi niche chalo mujhe bohat bhukh lagi hai.....
Mam maze lene ke mood mein.....
Kavita Mam - lekin Abhi to tum keh rahi thi tumhe bhukh nahi
hai......
Preet - woh tab nahi lagi thi na.......
Ab lagi hai....
Ab jaldi se chalo.......
Kavita Mam - lekin tumhe bhukh nahi thi......
Ab to tum surf mere liye kha rahi ho.....
Preet - to jao ab mujhe sachi me nahi khana.......
Aur usne muh fula liya.......
Kavita Mam - ale ale meri Gudiya to gusse ho gayi.......
Main to mazak kar rahi thi.......
Preet - jao mujhe apse baat hi nahi karni hai......
Ek to itni late ayi ho aur upar se mujhe tang kar rahi ho.....
Kavita Mam - ok soly na baba....
Ab maff bhi kardo.....
Preet - nahi karungi nahi karungi....
Jao aap yahan se.......
Kavita Mam - Acha to theak hai.....
To main tumhare hisse ka khana tumhare Bhaiya ko khila dun......
Preet ne jese hi Mam ki yeh baat suni to woh foran apni Maa ki aur
dekhne lagi......
Preet - Maa kya sach mein Bhaiya aye hai.......
Kavita Mam ne siraf haa mein gardan hila Di.....
Preet khushi se uchal padi.......
Preet - kya sachi mein Deep Bhaiya aye hai.....
To chalo na jaldi se mujhe unhe milna hai.......
Fir Kavita Mam aur Preer niche aa gaye......
Main aur Uncle Abhi bhi sofo par baithe the.......
Preet bhag ke meri aur ane lagi.......
Me bhi khada ho gya.....
Khushi se nahi......
Me to iss liye khada hua tha ki yeh ladki meri taraf is tarha kyu
bhagi aa rahi hai......
Itne me Preet aa ke mere gale lag gayi......
Preet - mere Bhaiya aa gaye.......
Mere Bhaiya aa gaye.......
Ab main apne Bhaiya ko kahin nahi jame dungi......(apna chehra
upar karke)
Bolo na Bhaiya mujhe chod ke to nahi jaoge.......
Mene siraf naa me gardan hila Di......
Kyu tAbhi mera dimag chal hi nahi raha tha......
Me to iss baat se hairan tha.....
Ki Principal Mam ka pura Parivar mujhe janta tha......
Phir jab usne mere sar pe patti dekhi to mujhe pucha.....
Preet - Bhaiya yeh apke sar pe kya hua.......
Main - kuch nahi Gudiya woh thodi c chot lag gayi thi......
Preet - aap bhi na Bhaiya......
Bilkul bacche ho......
Bilkul bhi dhayan nahi rakhte ho apna........
Aao mere sath dinner karo aur fir apko room mein jana hai rest
karne samjhe ki nahi.......
Meme siraf han mein sar hilaya.......
Mam aur Uncle vahan baithe muskura rahe the......
Fir ham log dinning table pe baith gaye......
Preet - aaj me apne Bhaiya ko apne hath se khilaungi.......
Khaoge na mere hath se.......
Main is bar bhi sirf han mein gardan hilayi.......
Fir Preet mujhe apne hath se khilane lagi......
Mujhe aaj tak sirf nafrat hi mili thi.....
Aaj main itna pyar sehan na kar paya aur mere ankhon se ansun
nikal aye........
Meri akhon mein ansun dekh ke Preer ne Mam se bola......
Preet - Maa dekho Bhaiya ro rahe hai........
Mam uth ke mere pass aa gayi......
Kavita Mam - kya hua Beta ro kyu rahe ho.......
Main - kuch nahi Mam woh aaj tak mene sirf logo ki nafrat hi
dekhi hai.....
Aaj aapko logo ke dobara mila pyar sehan nahi hua......
Aur mere ankhon se apne aap asun nikal aye......
Yeh sun ke Mam me mujhe gale laga liya......
Kavita Mam - are mera bacha.....
Bas chuo hoja.......
Itne mein Preer boli......
Preet - Maa apne sahi kaha Bhaiya aach mein hi bache hai dekho
to kese bacho ki tarha ro rahe hai.......
Preet ki baat pe sAbhi muskura diye.......
Fir hum sab ne apna dinner complete kiya......
Fir sAbhi vaham baith ke bate karne lage.....
Fir hum Pp Mam ki car mein baith ke ghar ko nikal liye.....
Mene Mam ko apne ghar chlane ko kaha......
Main - Mam plz mujhe mere ghar chod dijiye.....
Principal Mam - chup chap baithi raho......
Tum mere sath mere ghar ja rahe ho.......
Tumhare sar pe kafi chot ayi hai.....
Aur kafi kamjor bhi ho gaye ho......
Aur tum apnr ghar me akele rehte ho.......
Koi bhi tumhari dekh bhal karne wala nahi......
To ab chup chap mere ghar chalo samjhe.......
Main - par Mam.....
Principal Mam - (vich mein hi baat katte hue) koi excuse nahi......
Ab tum mere satg chal rahe ho to chal rahe ho.......
Understand......
Maine sirf han mein gardan hila Di......
Jise dekh Mam ke hotho pe muskurahat aa gayi......
Unho ne mujhe gale laga liya.....
Principal Mam - that's like a good boy.....
Mam ne mujhe lita ke mera sar apni goad me rakh liya.......
Jaldi hi hum Mam ke ghar ke bahar the........
Mam ke ghar mein sirf unke pati unki Beti aur woh hi rehti thi......
Unka ghar 2 manjila tha.....
Ghar ke gate se enter hote hi sahmne sitting hall tha....
Uske ek side me dinning table tha.....
Aur usi side kitchen bhi tha.....
Sitting ke dusri side teen rooms the.....
Ek room Mam ka.....
Dusra guest room aur third store room......
First floor pe bhi teen room the......
Ek unki Beti ka......
Aur baki ke teen guest room the........
(Mam ki family ka thoda sa intro ho jaye.......
Mam's husband - Deepak Verma - age 38......
Achi khasi height hai......
Achi personality......
Nami business man.......
Apni family se bohat pyar karte hai.......
Mam - Kavita Verma - age 36......
Dikhne me khoob surat......
Dil ki saff.....
Inka kam hai sirf pyar batna......
Hamesha khush rehti hai.......
Mam's daughter - Preeti Verma - age **........
Bilkul cute c Gudiya.......
Ek lauti Beti.....
Shararti aur samajh dono ka combination hai........)
Jab ham ghar pohanche to Mam ke husband hall mein ho sofo pe
baithe the........
Jab unki nazar hum pe padi to woh uth ke hamare pass aa
gaye.......
Deepak - Kavita kahan thi tum aaj kafi der ho gayi......
Agar koi koi jaroori kam tha to bata to deti......
Upar se phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi........
Kavita Mam - sorry woh main bhool gayi thi.......
Aur phone silent pe tha.......
Fir Deepak Uncle ki nazar mujh pe padi......
Deepak - ok thik hai......
Vese yeh ladka kon hai......
Tumne intro nahi karvaya.......
Kavita Mam - khud pehchano.......
Deepak - ohh to challenge......
Hmmm sochne do kon ho sakta hai.......
Ahan kahin yeh Deep to nahi.......
Deepak Uncle ki baat sunn me san reh gya.......
Fir mene Mam ki taraf dekha jo muskura rahi thi.......
Unho ne Uncle ki taraf han mein gardan hila Di.......
Uncle ne bhi mujhe gale se laga liya.......
Fir mujhe alag karke bole.....
Deepak - par iske sar pe yeh patti kesi.......
Uske baad jo kuch aaj school mein hua Mam ne woh sab kuch Uncle
ko bata diya.......
Deepak - chalo koi baat nahi......
Aao Betho......
Fir hum sAbhi sofo pe baith gaye......
Kavita Mam - vese meri Gudiya kahan hai.......
Deepak - woh Abhi tak apne room mein padhai kar rahi hai......
Kavita Mam - hey Ram dinner kiya ke nahi usne......
Deepak - tumhari ladli hai.....
Me to keh keh ke thak gya.....
Par woh boli ke Maa ke sath hi khaungi.......
Kavita Mam - chalo me bula ke lati hun use.......
Kavita Mam - (ek naukar se) hariya jake Ramu se kaho woh Deep
ke liye khichdi bana de.......
Hariya - ji malkin......
Fir Kavita Preeti ke room ki aur badh gayi......
Idhar Deep is soch mein dooba hua tha ki.....
Mam use itna pyar kese karti hai bakki sAbhi to usse nafrat karte
hai......
Aur to aur Mam ke husband tak use jante hai.......
Esa kese ho sakta hai........
Udhar Mam Preeti ke room mein pohanch chuki thi......
Unho ne jake Preeti ka door knock kiya.......
'Knock Knock'
Preeti - papa mene keh diya na mujhe bhukh nahi hai.....
Fir aap kyu baar baar aa rahe ho......
Kavita Mam - acha Beta ji mere sath bhi nahi khaogi........
Jese hi Preet ne apni Maa ki awaz suni.....
Usne bhag ke darwaza khola......
Aur apni Maa ke gale lag gayi.......
Preeti - Maa aap aa gayi......
Mam ne use apne alag kiya.....
Aur uska gal chum liya.....
Kavita Mam - ji meri Gudiya.....
Preet - to fir jaldi jaldi niche chalo mujhe bohat bhukh lagi hai.....
Mam maze lene ke mood mein.....
Kavita Mam - lekin Abhi to tum keh rahi thi tumhe bhukh nahi
hai......
Preet - woh tab nahi lagi thi na.......
Ab lagi hai....
Ab jaldi se chalo.......
Kavita Mam - lekin tumhe bhukh nahi thi......
Ab to tum surf mere liye kha rahi ho.....
Preet - to jao ab mujhe sachi me nahi khana.......
Aur usne muh fula liya.......
Kavita Mam - ale ale meri Gudiya to gusse ho gayi.......
Main to mazak kar rahi thi.......
Preet - jao mujhe apse baat hi nahi karni hai......
Ek to itni late ayi ho aur upar se mujhe tang kar rahi ho.....
Kavita Mam - ok soly na baba....
Ab maff bhi kardo.....
Preet - nahi karungi nahi karungi....
Jao aap yahan se.......
Kavita Mam - Acha to theak hai.....
To main tumhare hisse ka khana tumhare Bhaiya ko khila dun......
Preet ne jese hi Mam ki yeh baat suni to woh foran apni Maa ki aur
dekhne lagi......
Preet - Maa kya sach mein Bhaiya aye hai.......
Kavita Mam ne siraf haa mein gardan hila Di.....
Preet khushi se uchal padi.......
Preet - kya sachi mein Deep Bhaiya aye hai.....
To chalo na jaldi se mujhe unhe milna hai.......
Fir Kavita Mam aur Preer niche aa gaye......
Main aur Uncle Abhi bhi sofo par baithe the.......
Preet bhag ke meri aur ane lagi.......
Me bhi khada ho gya.....
Khushi se nahi......
Me to iss liye khada hua tha ki yeh ladki meri taraf is tarha kyu
bhagi aa rahi hai......
Itne me Preet aa ke mere gale lag gayi......
Preet - mere Bhaiya aa gaye.......
Mere Bhaiya aa gaye.......
Ab main apne Bhaiya ko kahin nahi jame dungi......(apna chehra
upar karke)
Bolo na Bhaiya mujhe chod ke to nahi jaoge.......
Mene siraf naa me gardan hila Di......
Kyu tAbhi mera dimag chal hi nahi raha tha......
Me to iss baat se hairan tha.....
Ki Principal Mam ka pura Parivar mujhe janta tha......
Phir jab usne mere sar pe patti dekhi to mujhe pucha.....
Preet - Bhaiya yeh apke sar pe kya hua.......
Main - kuch nahi Gudiya woh thodi c chot lag gayi thi......
Preet - aap bhi na Bhaiya......
Bilkul bacche ho......
Bilkul bhi dhayan nahi rakhte ho apna........
Aao mere sath dinner karo aur fir apko room mein jana hai rest
karne samjhe ki nahi.......
Meme siraf han mein sar hilaya.......
Mam aur Uncle vahan baithe muskura rahe the......
Fir ham log dinning table pe baith gaye......
Preet - aaj me apne Bhaiya ko apne hath se khilaungi.......
Khaoge na mere hath se.......
Main is bar bhi sirf han mein gardan hilayi.......
Fir Preet mujhe apne hath se khilane lagi......
Mujhe aaj tak sirf nafrat hi mili thi.....
Aaj main itna pyar sehan na kar paya aur mere ankhon se ansun
nikal aye........
Meri akhon mein ansun dekh ke Preer ne Mam se bola......
Preet - Maa dekho Bhaiya ro rahe hai........
Mam uth ke mere pass aa gayi......
Kavita Mam - kya hua Beta ro kyu rahe ho.......
Main - kuch nahi Mam woh aaj tak mene sirf logo ki nafrat hi
dekhi hai.....
Aaj aapko logo ke dobara mila pyar sehan nahi hua......
Aur mere ankhon se apne aap asun nikal aye......
Yeh sun ke Mam me mujhe gale laga liya......
Kavita Mam - are mera bacha.....
Bas chuo hoja.......
Itne mein Preer boli......
Preet - Maa apne sahi kaha Bhaiya aach mein hi bache hai dekho
to kese bacho ki tarha ro rahe hai.......
Preet ki baat pe sAbhi muskura diye.......
Fir hum sab ne apna dinner complete kiya......
Fir sAbhi vaham baith ke bate karne lage.....
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Bhai ye story restart nahi hui he Lovingheart bhai ne ye story complete kar di thi xossip par or yaha dusre reader jisne nahi padhi he unke liye phir se update de rahe he
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Bhai maine adha adhura hi pdha hai .
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