Tony stark
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Nice n fantastic update
Behtreen mja aagya Bhai mujhe aisa Ku lag rha hai vaha pr manjari Ka episode khtm hojayega
Wah.... Kamini Mami bhi Maan banne waali hai ...
Lagta hai... Sheela Bua bahut se raaj kholne waali hai....
Very nice update
Acha update tha
Lagta hai amit ki life mai boht bada mood anny wala hai
Manjri apne chacha ke pass kaye gi wahan uske sath kuch bhi ho sakta hai
Nice update
Lagta hai manjri ke saath Kuch gadbad hogi wanha or ho skta hai ki ye manjri ka chapter close ho jayega
Behatrin ...... Bahut hi shandar update hai......
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Nice update
Super update hai bhai
Awesome updates
Awesome update as always. Lekin last ka padhke thodi manjri ki fikr hone lagi.
Waiting for next update.
Nice update
Nice update
Shukr hai update aaya main socha tu bhi Corona ka shikar ho gya bhai. Quarantine main phone to dete ni. But thx for posting update stay safe and keep Posting hme bhi tension hoti hai
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Aap apne hisab se story likhiye bhai......
Story bahut hi accha ban raha hai.....
Bhai u r right Jo Bola hai bilkul vaisa hi lag rha hai and focused on your platform jispr likh rhe ho usi pr likho
Very Nice, Fantastic, Awesome, Mind blowing update ....................
Keep it up bro ....................
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Bhai jese tm ne story ka plot bnaya hai osi pr story ko likho aur baqi readers ne to comment krna hota hai jo un k man mai hota hai
Sahi ja rahe ho bhai aise hi likhte raho aur ye acha kiya story ko detail mai likh rahe ho...
Ab tak sab badhiya hi raha Kushti bhi jeet li aur isi se Mahan banne ka shuruwat bhi ho gaya...
And ye Amit ke Cousins to ek se badh ke ek hai pehle to Neha di simple and caring hai like big sis wahi Naina & Karuna naughty hai I'm sure Nadi mai land ke sath masti karne wali Naina hi hogi
Asli maza to tab ayega jab Amit shehar jayega padhai ke liye aur ye log bhi waha hoge aur lage hath Reeta mausi ka bhi sewa karne ko milega...
Are mai Radha ko kaise bhool gaya wahi to main heroine hai waise to uske Dil mai bohot kuch tha kehne ko magar phir bhi sab se alag hi rahi shayad apni Ma ke wajah se..
Khair ab to Amit ko apne Maa Baap ke bare mai pata lagana hai aur sath hi apni dusri family ka bhi...
Ab aaj ke update se lag to raha hai Manjri kisi aur ki hone wali hai waise ek baat kahu Dost Manjri ka Pyar dekh ke lag to raha hai aisa hona nahi chahiye but isse ab hamara Hero strong banega story ka turning point yahi banegi bas baad mai Mila jarur dena yar
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Beshak Bhai...Yahan story ap likh rahe ho na ki readers.Unhone to apko apna sujhaw diya aur ap to jante hain ki har readers same nahin hoto..Kisiko kahani ke flow bahut achha lagta hai jaise mujhko aur kisikisiko bore lagta Hai...To writer ji ap bhale hi sabka comments padhiye..Agar apko lagta hai ki nahi readers jo keh rahe hain wo sach hai aur max inko agar support karte hai to phir ap uske baare me sochiye..warna aap apni planning ke hisab se likhiye...nahin to kahani track se hat jayega aur accident hone ki sambhawna hai...Fir wahi readers bolenge ki yaar apne to jaldbaazi kardiya...Saara maza kharab kar dia...To mere hisab se story bahut sahi ja raha Hai...Ap yese hi ise aage khicho..THANK YOU
Bhut bdiya update bro
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Bhut badiya dost
Gauri, Kamini aur Deepika ki batome aa gayi aur dono ko Amit ke sath jane ki manjuri de di. Waiting for next
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बहोत बढ़िया अपडेट , मंजरी के एग्जाम खत्म हो गए हैं तो मुझे लग रहा है उसके घर वाले उसकी शादी तय करने के लिए उसके चाचा के घर जा रहे हैं , अगर ऐसा हुआ तो फिर अपना हीरो क्या करेगा ???
कहानी जारी रखें ...
Next update please
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Intazaar hai bro
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