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Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

Story kaisi lagi

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Badshah Khan

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Bhaiyo update par kam kar rha hun. Complete ho gya to aaj hi kar dunga post. Waise abhi kuch din sex encounter hone wale hain kyunki kahani aise mod par hai. Kuch bhai is bat se naraz bhi hain k story aage nahi bad rahi ya tempo sahi nahi hai. To main unke liye itna keh sakta hun bhai k main koi writer to hun nahi ye maine pehle bhi kaha tha. Mujhe jaise sahi lag rha hai main likh rha hun. Agar story ko fast mode par karne ki koshish ki to jaldi hi ye end par pahunch jayegi fir aap log hi kahenge ye kya kiya. Maine story ko sirf masal lagay hai baki story ka ek end fix hai jiske aage main story nahi chalaunga is liye patience rakhen. Mujhe ye tempo wagerah ki samajh nahi hai . Jitna likh sakta hun main apni taraf se acha karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kai bar comment pad kar mere dimag me story ko jaldi jaldi nye mod dene ki baat aane lagti hai aur fir story patri se neeche utar jaye iska dar lagta hai. Please jaise likh rha hun use swikar karen.
Brother jaise tumhare dimag main hai waise hi likho abhi tak to story bohut achi ja rahi hai so kisi ki bhi sunne ki zaroorat nahi aap apne hisab se likho
Hum ko bhi pata hai ki story likhna koi aam baat nahi hai logon ka kya sirf padhkar kuch na kuch Kahenge
 

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Yash420

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Bhaiyo update par kam kar rha hun. Complete ho gya to aaj hi kar dunga post. Waise abhi kuch din sex encounter hone wale hain kyunki kahani aise mod par hai. Kuch bhai is bat se naraz bhi hain k story aage nahi bad rahi ya tempo sahi nahi hai. To main unke liye itna keh sakta hun bhai k main koi writer to hun nahi ye maine pehle bhi kaha tha. Mujhe jaise sahi lag rha hai main likh rha hun. Agar story ko fast mode par karne ki koshish ki to jaldi hi ye end par pahunch jayegi fir aap log hi kahenge ye kya kiya. Maine story ko sirf masal lagay hai baki story ka ek end fix hai jiske aage main story nahi chalaunga is liye patience rakhen. Mujhe ye tempo wagerah ki samajh nahi hai . Jitna likh sakta hun main apni taraf se acha karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kai bar comment pad kar mere dimag me story ko jaldi jaldi nye mod dene ki baat aane lagti hai aur fir story patri se neeche utar jaye iska dar lagta hai. Please jaise likh rha hun use swikar karen.
Bhai take your time

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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Bhaiyo update par kam kar rha hun. Complete ho gya to aaj hi kar dunga post. Waise abhi kuch din sex encounter hone wale hain kyunki kahani aise mod par hai. Kuch bhai is bat se naraz bhi hain k story aage nahi bad rahi ya tempo sahi nahi hai. To main unke liye itna keh sakta hun bhai k main koi writer to hun nahi ye maine pehle bhi kaha tha. Mujhe jaise sahi lag rha hai main likh rha hun. Agar story ko fast mode par karne ki koshish ki to jaldi hi ye end par pahunch jayegi fir aap log hi kahenge ye kya kiya. Maine story ko sirf masal lagay hai baki story ka ek end fix hai jiske aage main story nahi chalaunga is liye patience rakhen. Mujhe ye tempo wagerah ki samajh nahi hai . Jitna likh sakta hun main apni taraf se acha karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kai bar comment pad kar mere dimag me story ko jaldi jaldi nye mod dene ki baat aane lagti hai aur fir story patri se neeche utar jaye iska dar lagta hai. Please jaise likh rha hun use swikar karen.
Bhai aap apne hisab se story continue kra
 

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Bhaiyo update par kam kar rha hun. Complete ho gya to aaj hi kar dunga post. Waise abhi kuch din sex encounter hone wale hain kyunki kahani aise mod par hai. Kuch bhai is bat se naraz bhi hain k story aage nahi bad rahi ya tempo sahi nahi hai. To main unke liye itna keh sakta hun bhai k main koi writer to hun nahi ye maine pehle bhi kaha tha. Mujhe jaise sahi lag rha hai main likh rha hun. Agar story ko fast mode par karne ki koshish ki to jaldi hi ye end par pahunch jayegi fir aap log hi kahenge ye kya kiya. Maine story ko sirf masal lagay hai baki story ka ek end fix hai jiske aage main story nahi chalaunga is liye patience rakhen. Mujhe ye tempo wagerah ki samajh nahi hai . Jitna likh sakta hun main apni taraf se acha karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kai bar comment pad kar mere dimag me story ko jaldi jaldi nye mod dene ki baat aane lagti hai aur fir story patri se neeche utar jaye iska dar lagta hai. Please jaise likh rha hun use swikar karen.
Don't worry bhai tum Shi ja rhe ho apne hisab se h likho bhai ..
 
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