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kirti ji 
haa planning toh kar rahe hai, ab dekhte hai ki inki planning kitni bhari padti hai unn par
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kirti ji haa planning toh kar rahe hai, ab dekhte hai ki inki planning kitni bhari padti hai unn par
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bhai, kuch din me soch raha hu repost karne kaTo post kardo maine half hi padhi thi
tabtak aap meri running stories padh sakte hai
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yaar horror stories mein jab tak totally mout ka tandav na ho naa aisi lage ki bina namak ki daal..... gumnaam si woh dardnaak chikh andheri raat mein....
hmm... surprise! iske kayi pehlu hote hain... Kounsi pehlu intezaar mein inlogo ke liye.. ?
niyati.... inlogo ko kahan pahunchane wali hain... aane wala waqt hi bateyega...waise bhi takdeer mein likha koyi mita nahin sakta Khair.....
let's see what happens next
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sabse pehle toh Naina ji aapkajaankar acha laga ki aapko story pasand aayi hai
haa abhi toh bas shuruwat hui hai, aage kya hota hai yeh toh waqt hi bataeyga
saath bane rahiye
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Update : 15 (Nayi Subah)
Naya din..nayi taarikh, par haalat vahi ke vahi, jab bhi koi musibat aati hai toh mann me hamesa ek ummid lagi rahti hai ki naya savare ek nayi kiran lekar aayega, andhkar par roshni ka kabja hoga
Lekin asal jindagi me aisa nahi hota, jab bhi koi musibat aati hai toh har din ke saath voh musibat dugni hoti jaati hai, lekin hamare mann me yeh vishwaas hamesa rehta hai ki yeh muskil waqt bhi jald hi gujar jaayega
Akshar jab koi badi apati aati hai toh usse ladne me kahi din gujar jaate hai, kahi zindaagiya tabah ho jaati toh kahiyo ko apna balidan bhi dena padta hai..par fir bhi insaan har ek jung me apna vijay nischit kar hi leta hai
Khair Aryan ke saath bhi kuch aisa ho raha tha, aisa nahi tha ki uske pehle aane vale logo ne koshish nahi ki, par shayad yahi toh kudrat ka karishma hai ki voh apni chal waqt aane par hi chalta hai
Insaan chaahe kitna bhi bada kyu naa ho jaaye, par iss brahmand iss kudrat ke aage hamesa chota hi reh jaata hai
Iss gaanv me bahut se log maare jaa chuke the, anginat maute ab tak ho chuki thi jiska koi bhi record naa toh gaanv ke police station me tha aur naahi kisi aur ke pass
Jab ek rasta band ho jaata hai toh dusra rasta hamesa apne aap hi khul jaata hai..Aaj ek baar fir kudrat ne apna kamaal dikhaya tha, Aryan ke haath kuch ese saboot lage the jiske baad use ek ummid ki kiran najar aa rahi thi
Aryan apne cabin me baithe pichle din ke sari gatividhyo ke baare me soch raha tha, use yeh tak khayal nahi raha tha ki Patil apne beti ke saath uske cabin me aa chukka hai
Patil ne kahi baar Aryan ko pukara, par Aryan apne soch me iss kadar dub chukka tha ki use iss baat ka eshas tak nahi tha, Patil chalte hue Aryan ke pass gaya aur use baanhe se hilate hue kehta hai “saahaab, aap thik toh haina”
Patil ki iss harkat se Aryan apni soch se bahar aata hai, voh jese neend se jaaga ho uss tarah apni aankhe kholta hai aur patil ki aur dekhne laga
Patil samaj jaata hai ki Aryan ne uski baat nahi sunni hai, voh firse kehta hai “saab, kya hua..?? aap kuch pareshan lag rahe hai”
Aryan uski aur dekhte hue kehta hai “nahi patil, mai thik hu” voh ek aur baar apni aankhe band karte hue kehta hai “kuch kaam tha”
Patil “saab, voh mai apni beti ko lekar aaya hu, aapne kal mujse kaha tha”
Aryan ko fir apni kahi hui baat yaad aajati hai, voh apni aankhe kholte hue kehta hai “sunil..voh kaha hai..??”
Patil “sunil saab toh aaj subah hote hi sehar ke liye nikal gaye the”
Aryan “thik hai patil, dhyaan rahe ki yeh baate kisi tak naa pahuche”
Patil “ji saab” fir voh vanha se bahar chala gaya
Ab Aryan ke samne ek ladki baithi hui thi, jise dekhte hue Aryan usse sawal karta hai “kya naam hai aapka..??”
Voh ladki “ji, Naina naam hai”
Aryan kuch sochte hue “dekhiye, ab mai aapse jo puchne jaa raha hu, voh baate hamare alawa kisi aur ko pata nahi chalni chahiye, kya mai aap par bharosa kar sakta hu..??”
Naina “haa sir, muje papa ne batya tha, aap mujpar bharosa kar sakte hai”
Aryan “aap sarpanch ki beti ko jaanti hai..??”
Naina yeh sunkar thodi heran reh jaati hai, uski dil ki dhadkan bahut joro se chalne lagti hai, lekin voh apne aap ko sambhalte hue kehti hai “jiii..voh meri dost hai”
Aryan “acha, aur aap dono college me saath padhti ho”
Naina “ji sir”
Aryan “acha ek baat batao, voh..jo aapki dost hai, voh mujse itna darti kyu hai..??”
Yeh sunkar Naina bahut dar jaati hai, uske chehre par Aryan ko darr saaf dikhayi dene lagta hai, Aryan “dekhiye naina ji, please muje unse baat karni hai, kyunki muje aisa lag raha hai ki yeh jo jungle me hadse ho rahe hai, voh kahi na kahi gaanv ke sarpanch se jude hue hai”
Naina jo kaadi dari hui thi, voh badi dheemi awaaz se kehti hai “ji voh, darasal voh aapse nahi darti” fir voh thoda rukkar halkate hue bolti hai “voh har ek police vaalo se darti hai”
Aryan sawaliya bhari najro se uski aur dekhte hue kehti hai “par kyu..?? voh police se kyu darti hai..?? mai toh bas kuch janna chahta hu”
Naina “voh..mai, par mai janti hu, but..voh” naina samaj nahi paa rahi thi ki voh Aryan ko kya kahe, voh apne mann me yahi soch rahi thi ki use kya karna chahiye
Uska dimaag keh raha tha ki use Aryan ko sabkuch sach sach bata dena chahiye, par uska dil use iss baat par uska saath nahi de raha tha
Aryan “please naina, aap samajiye, mera unse baat karna bahut jaruri hai, bas ek baar aap meri unse baat karwa dijiye”
Naina “par sarpanch ji nahi manenge, unhe aap police valo se sakht nafrat hai”
Aryan “haan mai yeh baat ache se janta hu, isiliye mai aapse madad maang raha hu”
Naina ‘par…sonali nahi manegi”
Aryan “sonali..??” asamaj bhaav se voh puchta hai
Naina “I mean, meri dost ka naam sonali hai, voh aapse milne ke liye taiyaar nahi hogi”
Aryan “mai janta hu voh mujse kabhi baat nahi karegi, isiliye mai aapse keh raha hu, aap unki dost hai, agar aap unhe manayegi toh voh jarur manegi, dosti me itni takaat jarur hoti hai”
Naina kuch soch rahi thi, Aryan “acha, ek baat bataiye, voh itna dar kyu rahi hai..?? kya aap jaanti hai ki unke darne ka kaaran kya hai..??”
Naina abhi bhi kuch nahi bol paa rahi thi, fir usne socha ki shayad use voh baat bata deni chahiye, Aryan “please agar aap jaanti hai toh please meri madad kijiye, aap jaanti hai ki uss jungle me kitne hi masoom log mar rahe hai, agar aap dono meri madad karegi toh shayad..shayad mai uss khooni tak pahuch sakta hu”
Naina “thik hai, par…”
Aryan samaj jaata hai ki naina kya kehna chah rahi hai “aap fikar naa kare, mai kisi ko kuch bhi nahi bataunga, I promise”
Naina fir Aryan ko kuch aisa bata deti hai jise sunkar uske rongte khade ho jaate hai, uska dimaag bahut teji se chalne lagta hai, kahi kadiya ek dusre se judti hui najar aane lagi thi, lekin abhi bhi sawal vahi ka vahi tha
“kyu..?? aur kaun kar raha hai yeh sab”
Aryan “shukriya, aapne bahut madad ki hai meri”
Naina “mai vaada toh nahi kar sakti, lekin mai sona ko samja ne ki puri koshish karungi ki voh aapse baat kare”
Aryan “thik hai, mai intezaar karunga” voh fir ek paper ke tukde par apna number likhar use de deta hai “agar aapki dost maan jaati hai toh please aap mujse contact kijiyega”
Uske baad naina vanha se chali jaati hai, Patil jo cabin ke bahar tha, Aryan use andar bula deta hai, aur Naina ko ghar chodne ke liye keh deta hai
Aryan fir voh paper nikalta hai jisme usne abtak ki saari ghatnaye likhi hui thi, voh use ek apni personal diary me likh deta hai voh uss paper ke piche hui ghatna ke baare me bhi sab likh deta hai
Patil jo apni beti ko ghar rakhkar vapas aagaya tha, voh aate hi Aryan se sawal karta hai “saab, kya pata chala”
Aryan gehri saans lete he kehta hai “patil, bahut kuch pata bhi chala hai lekin kuch bhi pata nahi chala”
Patil kuch samaj nahi paaya ki Aryan ne aisa kyu kaha, par voh kuch puchta nahi hai, Aryan jaanta tha ki patil kuch bhi nahi samja “yeh case, yeh bahut hi ulja hua case hai, isme ek nahi bahut saari kadiya hai, lekin umese ek bhi kadi aapas me nahi jud rahi, par voh har ek kadi sirf ek taraf ishara kar rahi hai, USS KHOONI JUNGLE ki taraf”
Patil “saab, iss tarah se toh hume kuch bhi maalum nahi chal payega”
Aryan “haa patil, par hume pata lagana hi hoga” fir kuch der ke baad voh fir kehta hai “lekin ek baat toh jarur pata chali hai”
Patil “konsi baat sahab”
Aryan “yeh sarpanch..yeh jesa dikhta hai vese nahi hai, kuch toh hai jo voh jaanta hai aur voh jaan bujkar use chuppa raha hai”
Patil thodi chintavyakt karte hue kehta hai “esi konsi baat ho sakti hai saab..??”
Aryan “yeh toh ab waqt hi batayega, jo humne suna hai aur voh sach hai toh..” voh bolte hue ruk gaya
Patil “saabji, aap bharosa rakhiye, Sunil ji pata laga kar hi rahenge”
Aryan thoda sa nirash hote hue kehta hai “haa patil, voh toh muje bhi yakeen hai” fir voh kuch sochne lag jaata hai
Vahi dsuri aur Naina aur Sonali aaj college me milte hai, Naina ko samaj nahi aa raha tha ki voh Sonali se kis tarah se baat shuru kare
Naina “sona, kya hua..?? tu aaj kuch pareshan lag rahi hai”
Sonali “kuch nahi, bas thoda sa sar dard hai” voh baat ko taal deti hai
Naina “sona, mujse juth bol rahi hai ya khudse..?? mai jaanti hu ki tu uss hadse ko bhula nahi paayi, par aisa kab tak chalega..??”
Sonali ki aankhe thodi naam ho jaati hai “mai nahi jaanti” voh ruk-ruk kar jawab deti hai
Naina thodi himmat karte hue kehti hai “papa ne bataya tha ki gaanv me ek naya inspector aaya hai”
Sonali “haa, jaanti hu mai, voh 3 baar hamare ghar aa chukka hai”
Naina sawaliya bhari najro se uski aur dekhte hue puchti hai “kis liye..??”
Sonali “pata nahi, voh papa se baat karke chala jaata hai”
Naina “dekh sona, mai teri dost hu, aur mai tuje ese ghut ghut kar jeete hue nahi dekh sakti, mere hisab se tuje uss inspector se baat kar leni chahiye”
Sonali hadbadate hue “nahi nahi nahi, bilkul bhi nahi” uski aankho me ek anjaan sa darr dikhayi de raha tha
Naina “please sona, tuje himmat se kaam lena hoga”
Sonali “par kese..?? tu jaanti haina ki pichli baar kya hua tha..?? mai voh sab dubara nahi karna chahti”
Naina “yaar, voh hadse sirf tere saath nahi ho rahe, toh please tu khud ko blame karna band kar, papa ne bataya tha ki voh inspector bahut koshish kar raha hai, aur unhe bahut sari esi baate pata chali hai jo kisi ko pata nahi chali”
Sonali “konsi baat..??” voh naina ki aur dekhte hue kehti hai
Naina “muje nahi pata, but please tu usse ek baar baat kar le, apne liye naa sahi..uske liye”
Sonali ki aankho se aansu beh jaata hai “par kese..?? agar papa ko pata chal gaya toh..??”
Naina “nahi pata chalega, mere pass ek plan hai”
Sonali “kya..??”
Naina “hum dono Mussoorie chale jayenge, aur mai papa se kehkar uss inspector ko vahi bula lungi”
To be continued
Naya din..nayi taarikh, par haalat vahi ke vahi, jab bhi koi musibat aati hai toh mann me hamesa ek ummid lagi rahti hai ki naya savare ek nayi kiran lekar aayega, andhkar par roshni ka kabja hoga
Lekin asal jindagi me aisa nahi hota, jab bhi koi musibat aati hai toh har din ke saath voh musibat dugni hoti jaati hai, lekin hamare mann me yeh vishwaas hamesa rehta hai ki yeh muskil waqt bhi jald hi gujar jaayega
Akshar jab koi badi apati aati hai toh usse ladne me kahi din gujar jaate hai, kahi zindaagiya tabah ho jaati toh kahiyo ko apna balidan bhi dena padta hai..par fir bhi insaan har ek jung me apna vijay nischit kar hi leta hai
Khair Aryan ke saath bhi kuch aisa ho raha tha, aisa nahi tha ki uske pehle aane vale logo ne koshish nahi ki, par shayad yahi toh kudrat ka karishma hai ki voh apni chal waqt aane par hi chalta hai
Insaan chaahe kitna bhi bada kyu naa ho jaaye, par iss brahmand iss kudrat ke aage hamesa chota hi reh jaata hai
Iss gaanv me bahut se log maare jaa chuke the, anginat maute ab tak ho chuki thi jiska koi bhi record naa toh gaanv ke police station me tha aur naahi kisi aur ke pass
Jab ek rasta band ho jaata hai toh dusra rasta hamesa apne aap hi khul jaata hai..Aaj ek baar fir kudrat ne apna kamaal dikhaya tha, Aryan ke haath kuch ese saboot lage the jiske baad use ek ummid ki kiran najar aa rahi thi
Aryan apne cabin me baithe pichle din ke sari gatividhyo ke baare me soch raha tha, use yeh tak khayal nahi raha tha ki Patil apne beti ke saath uske cabin me aa chukka hai
Patil ne kahi baar Aryan ko pukara, par Aryan apne soch me iss kadar dub chukka tha ki use iss baat ka eshas tak nahi tha, Patil chalte hue Aryan ke pass gaya aur use baanhe se hilate hue kehta hai “saahaab, aap thik toh haina”
Patil ki iss harkat se Aryan apni soch se bahar aata hai, voh jese neend se jaaga ho uss tarah apni aankhe kholta hai aur patil ki aur dekhne laga
Patil samaj jaata hai ki Aryan ne uski baat nahi sunni hai, voh firse kehta hai “saab, kya hua..?? aap kuch pareshan lag rahe hai”
Aryan uski aur dekhte hue kehta hai “nahi patil, mai thik hu” voh ek aur baar apni aankhe band karte hue kehta hai “kuch kaam tha”
Patil “saab, voh mai apni beti ko lekar aaya hu, aapne kal mujse kaha tha”
Aryan ko fir apni kahi hui baat yaad aajati hai, voh apni aankhe kholte hue kehta hai “sunil..voh kaha hai..??”
Patil “sunil saab toh aaj subah hote hi sehar ke liye nikal gaye the”
Aryan “thik hai patil, dhyaan rahe ki yeh baate kisi tak naa pahuche”
Patil “ji saab” fir voh vanha se bahar chala gaya
Ab Aryan ke samne ek ladki baithi hui thi, jise dekhte hue Aryan usse sawal karta hai “kya naam hai aapka..??”
Voh ladki “ji, Naina naam hai”
Aryan kuch sochte hue “dekhiye, ab mai aapse jo puchne jaa raha hu, voh baate hamare alawa kisi aur ko pata nahi chalni chahiye, kya mai aap par bharosa kar sakta hu..??”
Naina “haa sir, muje papa ne batya tha, aap mujpar bharosa kar sakte hai”
Aryan “aap sarpanch ki beti ko jaanti hai..??”
Naina yeh sunkar thodi heran reh jaati hai, uski dil ki dhadkan bahut joro se chalne lagti hai, lekin voh apne aap ko sambhalte hue kehti hai “jiii..voh meri dost hai”
Aryan “acha, aur aap dono college me saath padhti ho”
Naina “ji sir”
Aryan “acha ek baat batao, voh..jo aapki dost hai, voh mujse itna darti kyu hai..??”
Yeh sunkar Naina bahut dar jaati hai, uske chehre par Aryan ko darr saaf dikhayi dene lagta hai, Aryan “dekhiye naina ji, please muje unse baat karni hai, kyunki muje aisa lag raha hai ki yeh jo jungle me hadse ho rahe hai, voh kahi na kahi gaanv ke sarpanch se jude hue hai”
Naina jo kaadi dari hui thi, voh badi dheemi awaaz se kehti hai “ji voh, darasal voh aapse nahi darti” fir voh thoda rukkar halkate hue bolti hai “voh har ek police vaalo se darti hai”
Aryan sawaliya bhari najro se uski aur dekhte hue kehti hai “par kyu..?? voh police se kyu darti hai..?? mai toh bas kuch janna chahta hu”
Naina “voh..mai, par mai janti hu, but..voh” naina samaj nahi paa rahi thi ki voh Aryan ko kya kahe, voh apne mann me yahi soch rahi thi ki use kya karna chahiye
Uska dimaag keh raha tha ki use Aryan ko sabkuch sach sach bata dena chahiye, par uska dil use iss baat par uska saath nahi de raha tha
Aryan “please naina, aap samajiye, mera unse baat karna bahut jaruri hai, bas ek baar aap meri unse baat karwa dijiye”
Naina “par sarpanch ji nahi manenge, unhe aap police valo se sakht nafrat hai”
Aryan “haan mai yeh baat ache se janta hu, isiliye mai aapse madad maang raha hu”
Naina ‘par…sonali nahi manegi”
Aryan “sonali..??” asamaj bhaav se voh puchta hai
Naina “I mean, meri dost ka naam sonali hai, voh aapse milne ke liye taiyaar nahi hogi”
Aryan “mai janta hu voh mujse kabhi baat nahi karegi, isiliye mai aapse keh raha hu, aap unki dost hai, agar aap unhe manayegi toh voh jarur manegi, dosti me itni takaat jarur hoti hai”
Naina kuch soch rahi thi, Aryan “acha, ek baat bataiye, voh itna dar kyu rahi hai..?? kya aap jaanti hai ki unke darne ka kaaran kya hai..??”
Naina abhi bhi kuch nahi bol paa rahi thi, fir usne socha ki shayad use voh baat bata deni chahiye, Aryan “please agar aap jaanti hai toh please meri madad kijiye, aap jaanti hai ki uss jungle me kitne hi masoom log mar rahe hai, agar aap dono meri madad karegi toh shayad..shayad mai uss khooni tak pahuch sakta hu”
Naina “thik hai, par…”
Aryan samaj jaata hai ki naina kya kehna chah rahi hai “aap fikar naa kare, mai kisi ko kuch bhi nahi bataunga, I promise”
Naina fir Aryan ko kuch aisa bata deti hai jise sunkar uske rongte khade ho jaate hai, uska dimaag bahut teji se chalne lagta hai, kahi kadiya ek dusre se judti hui najar aane lagi thi, lekin abhi bhi sawal vahi ka vahi tha
“kyu..?? aur kaun kar raha hai yeh sab”
Aryan “shukriya, aapne bahut madad ki hai meri”
Naina “mai vaada toh nahi kar sakti, lekin mai sona ko samja ne ki puri koshish karungi ki voh aapse baat kare”
Aryan “thik hai, mai intezaar karunga” voh fir ek paper ke tukde par apna number likhar use de deta hai “agar aapki dost maan jaati hai toh please aap mujse contact kijiyega”
Uske baad naina vanha se chali jaati hai, Patil jo cabin ke bahar tha, Aryan use andar bula deta hai, aur Naina ko ghar chodne ke liye keh deta hai
Aryan fir voh paper nikalta hai jisme usne abtak ki saari ghatnaye likhi hui thi, voh use ek apni personal diary me likh deta hai voh uss paper ke piche hui ghatna ke baare me bhi sab likh deta hai
Patil jo apni beti ko ghar rakhkar vapas aagaya tha, voh aate hi Aryan se sawal karta hai “saab, kya pata chala”
Aryan gehri saans lete he kehta hai “patil, bahut kuch pata bhi chala hai lekin kuch bhi pata nahi chala”
Patil kuch samaj nahi paaya ki Aryan ne aisa kyu kaha, par voh kuch puchta nahi hai, Aryan jaanta tha ki patil kuch bhi nahi samja “yeh case, yeh bahut hi ulja hua case hai, isme ek nahi bahut saari kadiya hai, lekin umese ek bhi kadi aapas me nahi jud rahi, par voh har ek kadi sirf ek taraf ishara kar rahi hai, USS KHOONI JUNGLE ki taraf”
Patil “saab, iss tarah se toh hume kuch bhi maalum nahi chal payega”
Aryan “haa patil, par hume pata lagana hi hoga” fir kuch der ke baad voh fir kehta hai “lekin ek baat toh jarur pata chali hai”
Patil “konsi baat sahab”
Aryan “yeh sarpanch..yeh jesa dikhta hai vese nahi hai, kuch toh hai jo voh jaanta hai aur voh jaan bujkar use chuppa raha hai”
Patil thodi chintavyakt karte hue kehta hai “esi konsi baat ho sakti hai saab..??”
Aryan “yeh toh ab waqt hi batayega, jo humne suna hai aur voh sach hai toh..” voh bolte hue ruk gaya
Patil “saabji, aap bharosa rakhiye, Sunil ji pata laga kar hi rahenge”
Aryan thoda sa nirash hote hue kehta hai “haa patil, voh toh muje bhi yakeen hai” fir voh kuch sochne lag jaata hai
Vahi dsuri aur Naina aur Sonali aaj college me milte hai, Naina ko samaj nahi aa raha tha ki voh Sonali se kis tarah se baat shuru kare
Naina “sona, kya hua..?? tu aaj kuch pareshan lag rahi hai”
Sonali “kuch nahi, bas thoda sa sar dard hai” voh baat ko taal deti hai
Naina “sona, mujse juth bol rahi hai ya khudse..?? mai jaanti hu ki tu uss hadse ko bhula nahi paayi, par aisa kab tak chalega..??”
Sonali ki aankhe thodi naam ho jaati hai “mai nahi jaanti” voh ruk-ruk kar jawab deti hai
Naina thodi himmat karte hue kehti hai “papa ne bataya tha ki gaanv me ek naya inspector aaya hai”
Sonali “haa, jaanti hu mai, voh 3 baar hamare ghar aa chukka hai”
Naina sawaliya bhari najro se uski aur dekhte hue puchti hai “kis liye..??”
Sonali “pata nahi, voh papa se baat karke chala jaata hai”
Naina “dekh sona, mai teri dost hu, aur mai tuje ese ghut ghut kar jeete hue nahi dekh sakti, mere hisab se tuje uss inspector se baat kar leni chahiye”
Sonali hadbadate hue “nahi nahi nahi, bilkul bhi nahi” uski aankho me ek anjaan sa darr dikhayi de raha tha
Naina “please sona, tuje himmat se kaam lena hoga”
Sonali “par kese..?? tu jaanti haina ki pichli baar kya hua tha..?? mai voh sab dubara nahi karna chahti”
Naina “yaar, voh hadse sirf tere saath nahi ho rahe, toh please tu khud ko blame karna band kar, papa ne bataya tha ki voh inspector bahut koshish kar raha hai, aur unhe bahut sari esi baate pata chali hai jo kisi ko pata nahi chali”
Sonali “konsi baat..??” voh naina ki aur dekhte hue kehti hai
Naina “muje nahi pata, but please tu usse ek baar baat kar le, apne liye naa sahi..uske liye”
Sonali ki aankho se aansu beh jaata hai “par kese..?? agar papa ko pata chal gaya toh..??”
Naina “nahi pata chalega, mere pass ek plan hai”
Sonali “kya..??”
Naina “hum dono Mussoorie chale jayenge, aur mai papa se kehkar uss inspector ko vahi bula lungi”
To be continued
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Naina
Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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musibate bin bataiye aate hain... par kuch log khud musibat ko gale bandh lete hain jaise ki yeh story wali naina 
massoorie jaane ki kya jarurat hain yaar phone par bhi toh bata sakti hain... are mobile recharge ke liye aryan hain na...
waise us jungle ko hi aag kyun nahi laga dete.... kissa hi khatam kar deni hain.. na rahegi bans naa bajegi bansuri
Khair
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill
massoorie jaane ki kya jarurat hain yaar phone par bhi toh bata sakti hain... are mobile recharge ke liye aryan hain na...
waise us jungle ko hi aag kyun nahi laga dete.... kissa hi khatam kar deni hain.. na rahegi bans naa bajegi bansuri
Khair
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill
Brilliant update
Jis tarah acha waqt beet jata hai usi tarah bura waqt bhi beet jata hai lekin bs fark itna h ki acha waqt jldi beet jata hai or bura waqt bht samay lg jata hai.or is gao mein bure waqt or yaaho ke halato se ladne ki koshish toh bahuto ne ki lekin kamyab koi na ho ska or ab aaryan bhi wahi koshish kr rha hai.naina or sona ko us mein umeed ki kiran nazar aa rhi hai ab dekhna ye h ki aarayn ko is mein kamyabi milti h ya use bhi apni zindagi se hath dhona padega
Jis tarah acha waqt beet jata hai usi tarah bura waqt bhi beet jata hai lekin bs fark itna h ki acha waqt jldi beet jata hai or bura waqt bht samay lg jata hai.or is gao mein bure waqt or yaaho ke halato se ladne ki koshish toh bahuto ne ki lekin kamyab koi na ho ska or ab aaryan bhi wahi koshish kr rha hai.naina or sona ko us mein umeed ki kiran nazar aa rhi hai ab dekhna ye h ki aarayn ko is mein kamyabi milti h ya use bhi apni zindagi se hath dhona padega
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Rehasymiye jungle lagta hai. Maut bhi truck accident se hui aisa lag raha hai.
Kahani horror damdar laggti hai. Dhire dhire padunga. Par bhai thoda dialouge par focus karo. Police wale kam lag rahe the ek word bar-bar use ho raha hai hai. jese Bhai-bhai bahut use hua. Ignore karo aise word bar bar.
Baki flow badia laga aage padhta hai
Kahani horror damdar laggti hai. Dhire dhire padunga. Par bhai thoda dialouge par focus karo. Police wale kam lag rahe the ek word bar-bar use ho raha hai hai. jese Bhai-bhai bahut use hua. Ignore karo aise word bar bar.
Baki flow badia laga aage padhta hai