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( Main ek kursi pe baitha hoon, haath pasine se bhige hue hain. Saamne doctor meri reports dekh raha hai. Uska chehra serious hai, jaise kuch kehna chahta ho par shabdon ko tol raha hai. Room me sirf ek wall clock ki tik-tik sunai deti hai, jaise har second ek bhari khamoshi ko tod rahi ho. )


( Doctor ek gehri saans leta hai, apni chashme ko adjust karta hai aur mujhe seedha aankhon me dekhkar bolta hai )


Doctor (thodi dheemi magar gehri awaaz me): "Mujhe afsos hai… lekin aap bachhe paida nahi kar sakte."


( Jaise hi yeh lafz nikle, ek bhari khamoshi cha jati hai. Mera dimaag ekdum sun ho jata hai. Main apni biwi ki taraf dekhta hoon – uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye confusion dikhti hai, phir dheere-dheere uske chehre ka rang uddne lagta hai. Haath dheere se mere haath ki grip chhod dete hain. )


(Uski aankhon me aansu bharne lagte hain, par woh zabardasti unhe rokne ki koshish karti hai. Main kuch kehna chahta hoon, par shabdon ne jaise mera saath hi chhod diya ho. Doctor ki awaaz ek pal ke liye door hoti hui lagti hai, jaise koi sapna toot gaya ho.)


(Us pal me sirf ek sawaal dimaag me goonj raha hai – ab hum kya karenge...?)

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( Main aur meri biwi hospital ke gate se bahar nikalte hain. Raat ka waqt hai, hawa tez chal rahi hai. Sadak par halke-halke streetlights ki roshni pad rahi hai. Barish ruk chuki hai, par sadak abhi bhi gili hai. Doosre log apni zindagi me busy hain, koi apni gadi me ja raha hai, toh koi apni duniya me mast hai. Par hum dono ke liye jaise waqt ruk gaya ho.)


(Mai chup-chaap chal raha hoon, sir jhukaye. Dimaag me sirf ek hi baat gunj rahi hai – "Main bachha paida nahi kar sakta..." Yeh soch ek zeher ki tarah andar fail rahi hai. Saath me chal rahi meri biwi bhi chup hai, uske chehre par ek ajeeb si udaasi hai. Aankhon me aansu hain, par woh mujhe dekhar zabardasti unhe rokne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Uska ek haath mere kandhe pe aata hai, jaise mujhe sambhalne ki koshish kar rahi ho.)


(Par mujhe lagta hai ki yeh sab ek bhayanak sapna hai, jo abhi tut jayega… lekin har kadam ke saath yeh sachai aur gehri hoti ja rahi hai.)


(Hum dono bina kuch bole chal rahe hote hain. Achaanak meri saanson me ek ajeeb si ghabrahat hone lagti hai. Sar bhari hone lagta hai, aankhon ke samne sab kuch dheere-dheere dhundhla padne lagta hai. Pair ladkhadane lagte hain. Ek tez dard se seene me mehsoos hota hai, jaise andar kuch toot raha ho.)


(Phir ekdum se, bina kisi warning ke – main sadak ke beech be-hosh hokar gir jata hoon. Meri biwi ek jhatke se rukti hai, uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye darr aa jata hai. Pehle toh samajh hi nahi aata ki hua kya, par jaise hi woh mujhe neeche pada dekhti hai, uska dil ek pal ke liye ruk sa lagta hai.)


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Biwi (roti hui, ghabrahat bhari awaaz me): "Arrey… arrey uthona! Sun rahe ho?!"

(Uska haath mere chehre par aata hai, mujhe hilane ki koshish karti hai, par main hila tak nahi.)


(Uski saanson me ek ajeeb si bechaini hai. Woh ek dum se chillane lagti hai )


Biwi (zor se cheekh kar): "Koi hai?! Koi help kare please!!"


(Woh roti ja rahi hai, chilla rahi hai, par aas paas ke log pehle thoda hesitant rehte hain. Phir dheere-dheere kuch log mere aas paas jama hone lagte hain. Ek aadmi phone nikal kar ambulance ko call karta hai, aur doosre log mujhe hilane ki koshish karte hain.)


(Sirf 5 minute guzarna jaise 5 ghante lag rahe hain. Biwi ka ro-ro kar bura haal hai, woh mere sar ko apni godi me rakhti hai, baar-baar mujhe uthane ki koshish karti hai. Tabhi door se ek tez ambulance ki siren sunai deti hai.)


(Ek ambulance full speed me wahaan aati hai, uske red-blue lights sadak par chamak rahe hote hain. Log side hatne lagte hain. Ambulance rukti hai, aur do compounder jaldi se utarte hain. Ek doctor type ka banda bhi saath me aata hai. Woh log bina deri kiye mujhe uthakar stretcher pe dalte hain.)


Biwi (toot-ti awaaz me, ambulance staff se): "Please… please inhe bacha lo…!"


(Woh ambulance ke andar mere paas baithti hai, abhi bhi ro rahi hai. Ambulance tez speed me ussi hospital ki taraf bhaagti hai jahan se sirf kuch waqt pehle hum nikle the. Siren ki tez awaaz sadak par goonj rahi hai, aur meri biwi sirf ek hi baat soch rahi hai – "Kya main inhe kho dungi…?" )


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( dhoop tez hai, aasman bilkul saaf. Door-door tak har taraf cricket ka junoon chhaya hua hai. Ground me alag-alag jagah chhoti-chhoti teams bani hui hain, jo apna-apna match khel rahi hain. Kahin koi ball ke peeche bhaag raha hai, toh kahin koi shot marne ke liye stance le raha hai.)


( Pitch par mai khada hoon – 19 saal ka, aankhon me junoon aur haath me bat. Maidan par tez awaaz me cheering ho rahi hai. Team wale boundary line se chillakar support kar rahe hain )


Teammate: "Bhai, ek aur chauka maar de!"


(Front pe bowler tayyar hai, uska chehra serious hai, jaise mujhe out karne ka pura plan bana rakha ho. Woh ball ghumaata hai, bowling start hoti hai. Main ball pe nazar tikaye stance leta hoon, aur jaise hi ball mere pass aati hai – ZOR KA SHOT! Ball hawa me jaati hai, seedha boundary ke bahar.)



Crowd (chillakar): "Waaahhh! SIXKKKKK!"


(Opponent team ka ek ladka gusse me aa jata hai. Uska chehra ekdum tight ho jata hai, jaise haar seh nahi paa raha ho. Woh tez kadam chalta hua mere pass aata hai aur thoda jor se shoulder se dhakka deta hai.)


Opponent (gusse me): "Oyyee...! Chutiye... Bohot hero ban raha hai kya?"


( Ye baat sun kar mera dimag kharab ho jata hai, aur main uss ladke ko dekh kar bolta hoon.)


Mein: "sale madhrchod tu hai chutiya...! Tera baap hai chutiya...! Samjha bc..!"


(Mere andar garmi chadhne lagti hai. Main bat ko tight pakadta hoon, uski taraf ek kadam aage badhata hoon.)


(Ab dono ke beech tension badhne lagti hai. Ground me jo log match dekh rahe the, sab ekdum se idhar dekhne lagte hain. Ek teammate aage aakar beech me aane ki koshish karta hai.)


Teammate: "Chhod na bhai, match khel na."


(Lekin woh ladka aur gusse me aa jata hai, aur ekdum se mera bat kheenchne ki koshish karta hai. Uske haath lagte hi mujhe aur gussa aa jata hai. Main zor se uska haath hata deta hoon aur usse ek kadam aur paas aakar aankhon me aankhein daal kar dekhta hoon.)


( dono ke beech ek pal ke liye khamoshi, par hawa me ek alag hi tension hai. Ek pal me yeh mazedaar match ek ladai me badalne wala hai…)


(Opponent ladka abhi bhi gusse se mera bat kheenchne ki koshish kar raha hai. Mujhe uska attitude ek pal ke liye hazam nahi hota. Mere andar ek ajeeb si garmi chadhne lagti hai. Fir achanak – woh zor se mujhe dhakka de deta hai! Main ek kadam peeche girta hoon, par turant balance sambhal leta hoon.)


(Mujhse ye bardasht nahi hota. Meri muthi tight ho jaati hai, saans tez ho jati hai, aur bina soche-samjhe ek zor ka mukka uske muh pe maar deta hoon!)



(PUNCH!)


Opponent: "Aaahhh!" (Uska sir ek jhatke se peeche jata hai, hoth se thoda khoon nikalne lagta hai!)


(Pura ground ek pal ke liye shock me aa jata hai. Har taraf ekdum silence. Lekin us ladke ko bhi apni haar manzoor nahi. Woh gusse me ek dum jhatke se utta hai aur mujhe jor ka mukka maarta hai!)


(Mera sar ekdum side pe jata hai, aur mera hoth bhi kat jata hai. Wahaan se bhi khoon nikalne lagta hai. Gussa ab ek naya level pe pahuch jata hai.)


(Main bina der kiye uske collar pakadta hoon aur usko zor se neeche gira deta hoon. Fir uske upar jaake uske pet pe ek zor ka punch maar deta hoon. Uski cheekh nikal jati hai.)



Opponent: "Ahhh… saale…!"


(Par ab woh bhi peeche hatne wala nahi. Woh neeche se hi mere pet pe laat maar deta hai! Main ekdum se peeche gir jata hoon, maidaan par padh jata hoon. Halki si mitti mere muh pe lag jaati hai.)


(Ab dono ekdum pagalon ki tarah lad rahe hain – maidan ekdum battlefield ban chuka hai! Mujhe laga yeh bas ek normal jhagda hoga, lekin ab toh yeh ek dangerous fight ban chuka hai.)


(Blood, punches, and madness – ab yeh sirf ek cricket match nahi raha.)


(Opponent ladka uthta hai, aur ek patthar uthakar mujhe maarne ke liye tayyar hota hai!)


(Main neeche padha-padha yeh dekhta hoon. Mujhe samajh nahi aata ki kya karun! Lekin tabhi –)



Ek zor ki cheekh sunai deti hai – "BASSSS KARO!!"


(Ye meri team ka ek senior player hota hai. Woh aur doosre players daud kar beech me aate hain aur dono ko alag kar dete hain. Main abhi bhi gusse me hoon, uske taraf badhne ki koshish karta hoon, par teen log mujhe pakad lete hain. Wahin opponent ke saath bhi aisa hi hota hai.)


Teammate (gusse se chillata hai): "Kya kar rahe ho tum log?! Cricket match tha ya war?!"


(Main zor se saans leta hoon, gusse se hath band rakha hai. Mujhe ab bhi lag raha hai ki yeh ladka ek aur vaar karega. Lekin tabhi meri nazar uske haath pe padti hai – uske haath se khoon beh raha hai. Pichle punch aur girne ki wajah se uska haath fat gaya hai. Woh ab bhi gusse me hai, par ab dard bhi mehsoos ho raha hai.)


(Opponent ladka apna haath pakadta hai, zor se daant bhich leta hai. Uske chehre pe dard bhi hai, aur ego bhi. Woh mujhe ek teekhi nazar se dekhta hai, jaise keh raha ho – "Ye ladai yahin khatam nahi hui.")


(Fight ruk gayi, par dushmani abhi bhi zinda thi...)


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( Raat ho chuki hai, sadak par streetlights ki roshni pad rahi hai. Main ladayi ke nishan apne chehre aur haathon par le kar ghar ke darwaze ke saamne khada hoon. Andar se halki roshni aur TV ki awaaz aa rahi hai. Ek gehri saans leta hoon, fir darwaza dhakka de kar kholta hoon.)


(Jaise hi main andar entry karta hoon, saamne meri maa – Lalita.)


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( Meri maa 38 saal ki hain, bohot sundar dikhne wali, lekin sirf 5th tak padhi ki hain. Unki aankhon me ek alag hi teekha pan hai. Unhone bhagkar shaadi ki thi mere papa se, aur is wajah se dada-dadi, mama-mami kisi se koi contact nahi hai. Shayad unhe pata bhi nahi ki hum log kahan hain, kaise hain.)


(Papa USA me rehte hain, kya karte hain – kisi ko nahi pata. Na wo kabhi thik se baat karte hain, na kuch batate hain. Bas har mahine 20 lakh bhej dete hain. Is wajah se mummy bhi unse koi sawal nahi karti. jab paisa aata hai, toh aur kuch poochne ki zaroorat nahi.)


(Par abhi, jaise hi mummy mujhe dekhti hain – unka chehra ekdum badal jata hai. Unki aankhon me ek pal ke liye shock dikhai deta hai, fir gussa.)


(Main chup rehta hoon, lekin aankhon me ab bhi garmi hai. Hoth kata hua hai, haath pe khoon ke thode se nishan hain. Shirt bhi thodi faati hui hai. Mummy ekdum tezi se aage badhti hain aur mere haath pakad ke zor se kheenchti hain.)


Maa (gusse me, meri taraf dekhkar): "Ladai ki hai na?! Saaf dikh raha hai! Kabhi toh shanti se ghar aaya kar!"


Mein: " nahi...! Mummy wo gir gaya tha khelte khelte toh ye hal ho gaya

Maa: jhoot mat bol... Samjha


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( Fir meri nazar mummy ke kamar ke upar padta hai. Pasine se bhigi Hui gora kamar aur gora face tamatar jaise lal..lal... Gal , bikhre hue baal aur deep clevage saree maise saf saf dikh raha hota hai gori aur panise wali clevage sath hi unke body se aur saree se ek madhosh aur pagal kar dene wali smell ufff.... )


(Main chup chaap mummy ki taraf dekhta hoon. Mujhe pata hai, unka gussa sirf dikhawa hai, asli tension unki aankhon me hai. Lekin maa ka tareeka alag hai – wo pyaar dikhane me nahi, daantne me believe karti hain.)


(Main bina kuch bole andar chala jata hoon. Mummy ab bhi peeche se chillati hain –)


Mummy: "Koi din aisa hoga jab tu bina kisi chot ke ghar aayega?! Yeh kya masti chal rahi hai?!"


(Main apne room ka darwaza zor se band kar deta hoon… aur andar ek gehri saans leta hoon. aur fir bhag kar bathroom ja kar mummy ki ek used panty rakha hua tha )

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(usko apne muh mai thus kar toilet seat ke upar baith kar aakhen band kar ke ek gehri saans leta hoon, aur apne pant ka zip khul kar lund ko bahar nikalta hoon jo ki 4.5 inch lamba aur 2 inch mota hai, fir lund par sampoo laga kar muth marna suru kar deta hoon)

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( Aur Maan mai mummy ko yaad karte hue )


Mein : " Aahhhh....! Mummmyy......!! Mein apki chut far Dungaa.. aaahh.... Mummy


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( Aise bol bol kar muth marne lagta hoon, fir karib 15 min baad mera sara maal nikal jata hai, aur mera body pura dhila pad jata hai )

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( Fir mein apne muh se mummy ki panty nikalta hoon aur apne lund par aur mere navi par lage hue maal ko mummy ki panty se saf karta hoon.)


( Aur uss panty ko mein le ja kar, jahan par mere saf kapde rakhe hue hote hain, uthar le ja kar unke bich rakh deta hoon taki mere sare kapde mai ye smell fel jaye aur har time mein iss smell ke nase mai reh sakta hoon)

( Fir mein fresh ho kar niche aata hoon toh dekhta hun ki khana table par lag chuka hota hai,
toh mein jaldi se dinner kar deta hun aur apne room main ja kar so... Jata hoon.. )
 
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Hospital
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( Main ek kursi pe baitha hoon, haath pasine se bhige hue hain. Saamne doctor meri reports dekh raha hai. Uska chehra serious hai, jaise kuch kehna chahta ho par shabdon ko tol raha hai. Room me sirf ek wall clock ki tik-tik sunai deti hai, jaise har second ek bhari khamoshi ko tod rahi ho. )


( Doctor ek gehri saans leta hai, apni chashme ko adjust karta hai aur mujhe seedha aankhon me dekhkar bolta hai )


Doctor (thodi dheemi magar gehri awaaz me): "Mujhe afsos hai… lekin aap bachhe paida nahi kar sakte."


( Jaise hi yeh lafz nikle, ek bhari khamoshi cha jati hai. Mera dimaag ekdum sun ho jata hai. Main apni biwi ki taraf dekhta hoon – uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye confusion dikhti hai, phir dheere-dheere uske chehre ka rang uddne lagta hai. Haath dheere se mere haath ki grip chhod dete hain. )


(Uski aankhon me aansu bharne lagte hain, par woh zabardasti unhe rokne ki koshish karti hai. Main kuch kehna chahta hoon, par shabdon ne jaise mera saath hi chhod diya ho. Doctor ki awaaz ek pal ke liye door hoti hui lagti hai, jaise koi sapna toot gaya ho.)


(Us pal me sirf ek sawaal dimaag me goonj raha hai – ab hum kya karenge...?)

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( Main aur meri biwi hospital ke gate se bahar nikalte hain. Raat ka waqt hai, hawa tez chal rahi hai. Sadak par halke-halke streetlights ki roshni pad rahi hai. Barish ruk chuki hai, par sadak abhi bhi gili hai. Doosre log apni zindagi me busy hain, koi apni gadi me ja raha hai, toh koi apni duniya me mast hai. Par hum dono ke liye jaise waqt ruk gaya ho.)


(Mai chup-chaap chal raha hoon, sir jhukaye. Dimaag me sirf ek hi baat gunj rahi hai – "Main bachha paida nahi kar sakta..." Yeh soch ek zeher ki tarah andar fail rahi hai. Saath me chal rahi meri biwi bhi chup hai, uske chehre par ek ajeeb si udaasi hai. Aankhon me aansu hain, par woh mujhe dekhar zabardasti unhe rokne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Uska ek haath mere kandhe pe aata hai, jaise mujhe sambhalne ki koshish kar rahi ho.)


(Par mujhe lagta hai ki yeh sab ek bhayanak sapna hai, jo abhi tut jayega… lekin har kadam ke saath yeh sachai aur gehri hoti ja rahi hai.)


(Hum dono bina kuch bole chal rahe hote hain. Achaanak meri saanson me ek ajeeb si ghabrahat hone lagti hai. Sar bhari hone lagta hai, aankhon ke samne sab kuch dheere-dheere dhundhla padne lagta hai. Pair ladkhadane lagte hain. Ek tez dard se seene me mehsoos hota hai, jaise andar kuch toot raha ho.)


(Phir ekdum se, bina kisi warning ke – main sadak ke beech be-hosh hokar gir jata hoon. Meri biwi ek jhatke se rukti hai, uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye darr aa jata hai. Pehle toh samajh hi nahi aata ki hua kya, par jaise hi woh mujhe neeche pada dekhti hai, uska dil ek pal ke liye ruk sa lagta hai.)


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Biwi (roti hui, ghabrahat bhari awaaz me): "Arrey… arrey uthona! Sun rahe ho?!"

(Uska haath mere chehre par aata hai, mujhe hilane ki koshish karti hai, par main hila tak nahi.)


(Uski saanson me ek ajeeb si bechaini hai. Woh ek dum se chillane lagti hai )


Biwi (zor se cheekh kar): "Koi hai?! Koi help kare please!!"


(Woh roti ja rahi hai, chilla rahi hai, par aas paas ke log pehle thoda hesitant rehte hain. Phir dheere-dheere kuch log mere aas paas jama hone lagte hain. Ek aadmi phone nikal kar ambulance ko call karta hai, aur doosre log mujhe hilane ki koshish karte hain.)


(Sirf 5 minute guzarna jaise 5 ghante lag rahe hain. Biwi ka ro-ro kar bura haal hai, woh mere sar ko apni godi me rakhti hai, baar-baar mujhe uthane ki koshish karti hai. Tabhi door se ek tez ambulance ki siren sunai deti hai.)


(Ek ambulance full speed me wahaan aati hai, uske red-blue lights sadak par chamak rahe hote hain. Log side hatne lagte hain. Ambulance rukti hai, aur do compounder jaldi se utarte hain. Ek doctor type ka banda bhi saath me aata hai. Woh log bina deri kiye mujhe uthakar stretcher pe dalte hain.)


Biwi (toot-ti awaaz me, ambulance staff se): "Please… please inhe bacha lo…!"


(Woh ambulance ke andar mere paas baithti hai, abhi bhi ro rahi hai. Ambulance tez speed me ussi hospital ki taraf bhaagti hai jahan se sirf kuch waqt pehle hum nikle the. Siren ki tez awaaz sadak par goonj rahi hai, aur meri biwi sirf ek hi baat soch rahi hai – "Kya main inhe kho dungi…?" )


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( dhoop tez hai, aasman bilkul saaf. Door-door tak har taraf cricket ka junoon chhaya hua hai. Ground me alag-alag jagah chhoti-chhoti teams bani hui hain, jo apna-apna match khel rahi hain. Kahin koi ball ke peeche bhaag raha hai, toh kahin koi shot marne ke liye stance le raha hai.)


( Pitch par mai khada hoon – 19 saal ka, aankhon me junoon aur haath me bat. Maidan par tez awaaz me cheering ho rahi hai. Team wale boundary line se chillakar support kar rahe hain )


Teammate: "Bhai, ek aur chauka maar de!"


(Front pe bowler tayyar hai, uska chehra serious hai, jaise mujhe out karne ka pura plan bana rakha ho. Woh ball ghumaata hai, bowling start hoti hai. Main ball pe nazar tikaye stance leta hoon, aur jaise hi ball mere pass aati hai – ZOR KA SHOT! Ball hawa me jaati hai, seedha boundary ke bahar.)



Crowd (chillakar): "Waaahhh! SIXKKKKK!"


(Opponent team ka ek ladka gusse me aa jata hai. Uska chehra ekdum tight ho jata hai, jaise haar seh nahi paa raha ho. Woh tez kadam chalta hua mere pass aata hai aur thoda jor se shoulder se dhakka deta hai.)


Opponent (gusse me): "Oyyee...! Chutiye... Bohot hero ban raha hai kya?"


( Ye baat sun kar mera dimag kharab ho jata hai, aur main uss ladke ko dekh kar bolta hoon.)


Mein: "sale madhrchod tu hai chutiya...! Tera baap hai chutiya...! Samjha bc..!"


(Mere andar garmi chadhne lagti hai. Main bat ko tight pakadta hoon, uski taraf ek kadam aage badhata hoon.)


(Ab dono ke beech tension badhne lagti hai. Ground me jo log match dekh rahe the, sab ekdum se idhar dekhne lagte hain. Ek teammate aage aakar beech me aane ki koshish karta hai.)


Teammate: "Chhod na bhai, match khel na."


(Lekin woh ladka aur gusse me aa jata hai, aur ekdum se mera bat kheenchne ki koshish karta hai. Uske haath lagte hi mujhe aur gussa aa jata hai. Main zor se uska haath hata deta hoon aur usse ek kadam aur paas aakar aankhon me aankhein daal kar dekhta hoon.)


( dono ke beech ek pal ke liye khamoshi, par hawa me ek alag hi tension hai. Ek pal me yeh mazedaar match ek ladai me badalne wala hai…)


(Opponent ladka abhi bhi gusse se mera bat kheenchne ki koshish kar raha hai. Mujhe uska attitude ek pal ke liye hazam nahi hota. Mere andar ek ajeeb si garmi chadhne lagti hai. Fir achanak – woh zor se mujhe dhakka de deta hai! Main ek kadam peeche girta hoon, par turant balance sambhal leta hoon.)


(Mujhse ye bardasht nahi hota. Meri muthi tight ho jaati hai, saans tez ho jati hai, aur bina soche-samjhe ek zor ka mukka uske muh pe maar deta hoon!)



(PUNCH!)


Opponent: "Aaahhh!" (Uska sir ek jhatke se peeche jata hai, hoth se thoda khoon nikalne lagta hai!)


(Pura ground ek pal ke liye shock me aa jata hai. Har taraf ekdum silence. Lekin us ladke ko bhi apni haar manzoor nahi. Woh gusse me ek dum jhatke se utta hai aur mujhe jor ka mukka maarta hai!)


(Mera sar ekdum side pe jata hai, aur mera hoth bhi kat jata hai. Wahaan se bhi khoon nikalne lagta hai. Gussa ab ek naya level pe pahuch jata hai.)


(Main bina der kiye uske collar pakadta hoon aur usko zor se neeche gira deta hoon. Fir uske upar jaake uske pet pe ek zor ka punch maar deta hoon. Uski cheekh nikal jati hai.)



Opponent: "Ahhh… saale…!"


(Par ab woh bhi peeche hatne wala nahi. Woh neeche se hi mere pet pe laat maar deta hai! Main ekdum se peeche gir jata hoon, maidaan par padh jata hoon. Halki si mitti mere muh pe lag jaati hai.)


(Ab dono ekdum pagalon ki tarah lad rahe hain – maidan ekdum battlefield ban chuka hai! Mujhe laga yeh bas ek normal jhagda hoga, lekin ab toh yeh ek dangerous fight ban chuka hai.)


(Blood, punches, and madness – ab yeh sirf ek cricket match nahi raha.)


(Opponent ladka uthta hai, aur ek patthar uthakar mujhe maarne ke liye tayyar hota hai!)


(Main neeche padha-padha yeh dekhta hoon. Mujhe samajh nahi aata ki kya karun! Lekin tabhi –)



Ek zor ki cheekh sunai deti hai – "BASSSS KARO!!"


(Ye meri team ka ek senior player hota hai. Woh aur doosre players daud kar beech me aate hain aur dono ko alag kar dete hain. Main abhi bhi gusse me hoon, uske taraf badhne ki koshish karta hoon, par teen log mujhe pakad lete hain. Wahin opponent ke saath bhi aisa hi hota hai.)


Teammate (gusse se chillata hai): "Kya kar rahe ho tum log?! Cricket match tha ya war?!"


(Main zor se saans leta hoon, gusse se hath band rakha hai. Mujhe ab bhi lag raha hai ki yeh ladka ek aur vaar karega. Lekin tabhi meri nazar uske haath pe padti hai – uske haath se khoon beh raha hai. Pichle punch aur girne ki wajah se uska haath fat gaya hai. Woh ab bhi gusse me hai, par ab dard bhi mehsoos ho raha hai.)


(Opponent ladka apna haath pakadta hai, zor se daant bhich leta hai. Uske chehre pe dard bhi hai, aur ego bhi. Woh mujhe ek teekhi nazar se dekhta hai, jaise keh raha ho – "Ye ladai yahin khatam nahi hui.")


(Fight ruk gayi, par dushmani abhi bhi zinda thi...)


Time - 8 AM

( Raat ho chuki hai, sadak par streetlights ki roshni pad rahi hai. Main ladayi ke nishan apne chehre aur haathon par le kar ghar ke darwaze ke saamne khada hoon. Andar se halki roshni aur TV ki awaaz aa rahi hai. Ek gehri saans leta hoon, fir darwaza dhakka de kar kholta hoon.)


(Jaise hi main andar entry karta hoon, saamne meri maa – Lalita.)


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( Meri maa 38 saal ki hain, bohot sundar dikhne wali, lekin sirf 5th tak padhi ki hain. Unki aankhon me ek alag hi teekha pan hai. Unhone bhagkar shaadi ki thi mere papa se, aur is wajah se dada-dadi, mama-mami kisi se koi contact nahi hai. Shayad unhe pata bhi nahi ki hum log kahan hain, kaise hain.)


(Papa USA me rehte hain, kya karte hain – kisi ko nahi pata. Na wo kabhi thik se baat karte hain, na kuch batate hain. Bas har mahine 20 lakh bhej dete hain. Is wajah se mummy bhi unse koi sawal nahi karti. jab paisa aata hai, toh aur kuch poochne ki zaroorat nahi.)


(Par abhi, jaise hi mummy mujhe dekhti hain – unka chehra ekdum badal jata hai. Unki aankhon me ek pal ke liye shock dikhai deta hai, fir gussa.)


(Main chup rehta hoon, lekin aankhon me ab bhi garmi hai. Hoth kata hua hai, haath pe khoon ke thode se nishan hain. Shirt bhi thodi faati hui hai. Mummy ekdum tezi se aage badhti hain aur mere haath pakad ke zor se kheenchti hain.)


Maa (gusse me, meri taraf dekhkar): "Ladai ki hai na?! Saaf dikh raha hai! Kabhi toh shanti se ghar aaya kar!"


Mein: " nahi...! Mummy wo gir gaya tha khelte khelte toh ye hal ho gaya

Maa: jhoot mat bol... Samjha


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( Fir meri nazar mummy ke kamar ke upar padta hai. Pasine se bhigi Hui gora kamar aur gora face tamatar jaise lal..lal... Gal , bikhre hue baal aur deep clevage saree maise saf saf dikh raha hota hai gori aur panise wali clevage sath hi unke body se aur saree se ek madhosh aur pagal kar dene wali smell ufff.... )


(Main chup chaap mummy ki taraf dekhta hoon. Mujhe pata hai, unka gussa sirf dikhawa hai, asli tension unki aankhon me hai. Lekin maa ka tareeka alag hai – wo pyaar dikhane me nahi, daantne me believe karti hain.)


(Main bina kuch bole andar chala jata hoon. Mummy ab bhi peeche se chillati hain –)


Mummy: "Koi din aisa hoga jab tu bina kisi chot ke ghar aayega?! Yeh kya masti chal rahi hai?!"


(Main apne room ka darwaza zor se band kar deta hoon… aur andar ek gehri saans leta hoon. aur fir bhag kar bathroom ja kar mummy ki ek used panty rakha hua tha )

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(usko apne muh mai thus kar toilet seat ke upar baith kar aakhen band kar ke ek gehri saans leta hoon, aur apne pant ka zip khul kar lund ko bahar nikalta hoon jo ki 4.5 inch lamba aur 2 inch mota hai, fir lund par sampoo laga kar muth marna suru kar deta hoon)

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( Aur Maan mai mummy ko yaad karte hue )


Mein : " Aahhhh....! Mummmyy......!! Mein apki chut far Dungaa.. aaahh.... Mummy


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( Aise bol bol kar muth marne lagta hoon, fir karib 15 min baad mera sara maal nikal jata hai, aur mera body pura dhila pad jata hai )

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( Fir mein apne muh se mummy ki panty nikalta hoon aur apne lund par aur mere navi par lage hue maal ko mummy ki panty se saf karta hoon.)


( Aur uss panty ko mein le ja kar, jahan par mere saf kapde rakhe hue hote hain, uthar le ja kar unke bich rakh deta hoon taki mere sare kapde mai ye smell fel jaye aur har time mein iss smell ke nase mai reh sakta hoon)

( Fir mein fresh ho kar niche aata hoon toh dekhta hun ki khana table par lag chuka hota hai,
toh mein jaldi se dinner kar deta hun aur apne room main ja kar so... Jata hoon.. )


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( Main ek kursi pe baitha hoon, haath pasine se bhige hue hain. Saamne doctor meri reports dekh raha hai. Uska chehra serious hai, jaise kuch kehna chahta ho par shabdon ko tol raha hai. Room me sirf ek wall clock ki tik-tik sunai deti hai, jaise har second ek bhari khamoshi ko tod rahi ho. )


( Doctor ek gehri saans leta hai, apni chashme ko adjust karta hai aur mujhe seedha aankhon me dekhkar bolta hai )


Doctor (thodi dheemi magar gehri awaaz me): "Mujhe afsos hai… lekin aap bachhe paida nahi kar sakte."


( Jaise hi yeh lafz nikle, ek bhari khamoshi cha jati hai. Mera dimaag ekdum sun ho jata hai. Main apni biwi ki taraf dekhta hoon – uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye confusion dikhti hai, phir dheere-dheere uske chehre ka rang uddne lagta hai. Haath dheere se mere haath ki grip chhod dete hain. )


(Uski aankhon me aansu bharne lagte hain, par woh zabardasti unhe rokne ki koshish karti hai. Main kuch kehna chahta hoon, par shabdon ne jaise mera saath hi chhod diya ho. Doctor ki awaaz ek pal ke liye door hoti hui lagti hai, jaise koi sapna toot gaya ho.)


(Us pal me sirf ek sawaal dimaag me goonj raha hai – ab hum kya karenge...?)

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( Main aur meri biwi hospital ke gate se bahar nikalte hain. Raat ka waqt hai, hawa tez chal rahi hai. Sadak par halke-halke streetlights ki roshni pad rahi hai. Barish ruk chuki hai, par sadak abhi bhi gili hai. Doosre log apni zindagi me busy hain, koi apni gadi me ja raha hai, toh koi apni duniya me mast hai. Par hum dono ke liye jaise waqt ruk gaya ho.)


(Mai chup-chaap chal raha hoon, sir jhukaye. Dimaag me sirf ek hi baat gunj rahi hai – "Main bachha paida nahi kar sakta..." Yeh soch ek zeher ki tarah andar fail rahi hai. Saath me chal rahi meri biwi bhi chup hai, uske chehre par ek ajeeb si udaasi hai. Aankhon me aansu hain, par woh mujhe dekhar zabardasti unhe rokne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Uska ek haath mere kandhe pe aata hai, jaise mujhe sambhalne ki koshish kar rahi ho.)


(Par mujhe lagta hai ki yeh sab ek bhayanak sapna hai, jo abhi tut jayega… lekin har kadam ke saath yeh sachai aur gehri hoti ja rahi hai.)


(Hum dono bina kuch bole chal rahe hote hain. Achaanak meri saanson me ek ajeeb si ghabrahat hone lagti hai. Sar bhari hone lagta hai, aankhon ke samne sab kuch dheere-dheere dhundhla padne lagta hai. Pair ladkhadane lagte hain. Ek tez dard se seene me mehsoos hota hai, jaise andar kuch toot raha ho.)


(Phir ekdum se, bina kisi warning ke – main sadak ke beech be-hosh hokar gir jata hoon. Meri biwi ek jhatke se rukti hai, uski aankhon me ek pal ke liye darr aa jata hai. Pehle toh samajh hi nahi aata ki hua kya, par jaise hi woh mujhe neeche pada dekhti hai, uska dil ek pal ke liye ruk sa lagta hai.)


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Biwi (roti hui, ghabrahat bhari awaaz me): "Arrey… arrey uthona! Sun rahe ho?!"

(Uska haath mere chehre par aata hai, mujhe hilane ki koshish karti hai, par main hila tak nahi.)


(Uski saanson me ek ajeeb si bechaini hai. Woh ek dum se chillane lagti hai )


Biwi (zor se cheekh kar): "Koi hai?! Koi help kare please!!"


(Woh roti ja rahi hai, chilla rahi hai, par aas paas ke log pehle thoda hesitant rehte hain. Phir dheere-dheere kuch log mere aas paas jama hone lagte hain. Ek aadmi phone nikal kar ambulance ko call karta hai, aur doosre log mujhe hilane ki koshish karte hain.)


(Sirf 5 minute guzarna jaise 5 ghante lag rahe hain. Biwi ka ro-ro kar bura haal hai, woh mere sar ko apni godi me rakhti hai, baar-baar mujhe uthane ki koshish karti hai. Tabhi door se ek tez ambulance ki siren sunai deti hai.)


(Ek ambulance full speed me wahaan aati hai, uske red-blue lights sadak par chamak rahe hote hain. Log side hatne lagte hain. Ambulance rukti hai, aur do compounder jaldi se utarte hain. Ek doctor type ka banda bhi saath me aata hai. Woh log bina deri kiye mujhe uthakar stretcher pe dalte hain.)


Biwi (toot-ti awaaz me, ambulance staff se): "Please… please inhe bacha lo…!"


(Woh ambulance ke andar mere paas baithti hai, abhi bhi ro rahi hai. Ambulance tez speed me ussi hospital ki taraf bhaagti hai jahan se sirf kuch waqt pehle hum nikle the. Siren ki tez awaaz sadak par goonj rahi hai, aur meri biwi sirf ek hi baat soch rahi hai – "Kya main inhe kho dungi…?" )


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( dhoop tez hai, aasman bilkul saaf. Door-door tak har taraf cricket ka junoon chhaya hua hai. Ground me alag-alag jagah chhoti-chhoti teams bani hui hain, jo apna-apna match khel rahi hain. Kahin koi ball ke peeche bhaag raha hai, toh kahin koi shot marne ke liye stance le raha hai.)


( Pitch par mai khada hoon – 19 saal ka, aankhon me junoon aur haath me bat. Maidan par tez awaaz me cheering ho rahi hai. Team wale boundary line se chillakar support kar rahe hain )


Teammate: "Bhai, ek aur chauka maar de!"


(Front pe bowler tayyar hai, uska chehra serious hai, jaise mujhe out karne ka pura plan bana rakha ho. Woh ball ghumaata hai, bowling start hoti hai. Main ball pe nazar tikaye stance leta hoon, aur jaise hi ball mere pass aati hai – ZOR KA SHOT! Ball hawa me jaati hai, seedha boundary ke bahar.)



Crowd (chillakar): "Waaahhh! SIXKKKKK!"


(Opponent team ka ek ladka gusse me aa jata hai. Uska chehra ekdum tight ho jata hai, jaise haar seh nahi paa raha ho. Woh tez kadam chalta hua mere pass aata hai aur thoda jor se shoulder se dhakka deta hai.)


Opponent (gusse me): "Oyyee...! Chutiye... Bohot hero ban raha hai kya?"


( Ye baat sun kar mera dimag kharab ho jata hai, aur main uss ladke ko dekh kar bolta hoon.)


Mein: "sale madhrchod tu hai chutiya...! Tera baap hai chutiya...! Samjha bc..!"


(Mere andar garmi chadhne lagti hai. Main bat ko tight pakadta hoon, uski taraf ek kadam aage badhata hoon.)


(Ab dono ke beech tension badhne lagti hai. Ground me jo log match dekh rahe the, sab ekdum se idhar dekhne lagte hain. Ek teammate aage aakar beech me aane ki koshish karta hai.)


Teammate: "Chhod na bhai, match khel na."


(Lekin woh ladka aur gusse me aa jata hai, aur ekdum se mera bat kheenchne ki koshish karta hai. Uske haath lagte hi mujhe aur gussa aa jata hai. Main zor se uska haath hata deta hoon aur usse ek kadam aur paas aakar aankhon me aankhein daal kar dekhta hoon.)


( dono ke beech ek pal ke liye khamoshi, par hawa me ek alag hi tension hai. Ek pal me yeh mazedaar match ek ladai me badalne wala hai…)


(Opponent ladka abhi bhi gusse se mera bat kheenchne ki koshish kar raha hai. Mujhe uska attitude ek pal ke liye hazam nahi hota. Mere andar ek ajeeb si garmi chadhne lagti hai. Fir achanak – woh zor se mujhe dhakka de deta hai! Main ek kadam peeche girta hoon, par turant balance sambhal leta hoon.)


(Mujhse ye bardasht nahi hota. Meri muthi tight ho jaati hai, saans tez ho jati hai, aur bina soche-samjhe ek zor ka mukka uske muh pe maar deta hoon!)



(PUNCH!)


Opponent: "Aaahhh!" (Uska sir ek jhatke se peeche jata hai, hoth se thoda khoon nikalne lagta hai!)


(Pura ground ek pal ke liye shock me aa jata hai. Har taraf ekdum silence. Lekin us ladke ko bhi apni haar manzoor nahi. Woh gusse me ek dum jhatke se utta hai aur mujhe jor ka mukka maarta hai!)


(Mera sar ekdum side pe jata hai, aur mera hoth bhi kat jata hai. Wahaan se bhi khoon nikalne lagta hai. Gussa ab ek naya level pe pahuch jata hai.)


(Main bina der kiye uske collar pakadta hoon aur usko zor se neeche gira deta hoon. Fir uske upar jaake uske pet pe ek zor ka punch maar deta hoon. Uski cheekh nikal jati hai.)



Opponent: "Ahhh… saale…!"


(Par ab woh bhi peeche hatne wala nahi. Woh neeche se hi mere pet pe laat maar deta hai! Main ekdum se peeche gir jata hoon, maidaan par padh jata hoon. Halki si mitti mere muh pe lag jaati hai.)


(Ab dono ekdum pagalon ki tarah lad rahe hain – maidan ekdum battlefield ban chuka hai! Mujhe laga yeh bas ek normal jhagda hoga, lekin ab toh yeh ek dangerous fight ban chuka hai.)


(Blood, punches, and madness – ab yeh sirf ek cricket match nahi raha.)


(Opponent ladka uthta hai, aur ek patthar uthakar mujhe maarne ke liye tayyar hota hai!)


(Main neeche padha-padha yeh dekhta hoon. Mujhe samajh nahi aata ki kya karun! Lekin tabhi –)



Ek zor ki cheekh sunai deti hai – "BASSSS KARO!!"


(Ye meri team ka ek senior player hota hai. Woh aur doosre players daud kar beech me aate hain aur dono ko alag kar dete hain. Main abhi bhi gusse me hoon, uske taraf badhne ki koshish karta hoon, par teen log mujhe pakad lete hain. Wahin opponent ke saath bhi aisa hi hota hai.)


Teammate (gusse se chillata hai): "Kya kar rahe ho tum log?! Cricket match tha ya war?!"


(Main zor se saans leta hoon, gusse se hath band rakha hai. Mujhe ab bhi lag raha hai ki yeh ladka ek aur vaar karega. Lekin tabhi meri nazar uske haath pe padti hai – uske haath se khoon beh raha hai. Pichle punch aur girne ki wajah se uska haath fat gaya hai. Woh ab bhi gusse me hai, par ab dard bhi mehsoos ho raha hai.)


(Opponent ladka apna haath pakadta hai, zor se daant bhich leta hai. Uske chehre pe dard bhi hai, aur ego bhi. Woh mujhe ek teekhi nazar se dekhta hai, jaise keh raha ho – "Ye ladai yahin khatam nahi hui.")


(Fight ruk gayi, par dushmani abhi bhi zinda thi...)


Time - 8 AM

( Raat ho chuki hai, sadak par streetlights ki roshni pad rahi hai. Main ladayi ke nishan apne chehre aur haathon par le kar ghar ke darwaze ke saamne khada hoon. Andar se halki roshni aur TV ki awaaz aa rahi hai. Ek gehri saans leta hoon, fir darwaza dhakka de kar kholta hoon.)


(Jaise hi main andar entry karta hoon, saamne meri maa – Lalita.)


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( Meri maa 38 saal ki hain, bohot sundar dikhne wali, lekin sirf 5th tak padhi ki hain. Unki aankhon me ek alag hi teekha pan hai. Unhone bhagkar shaadi ki thi mere papa se, aur is wajah se dada-dadi, mama-mami kisi se koi contact nahi hai. Shayad unhe pata bhi nahi ki hum log kahan hain, kaise hain.)


(Papa USA me rehte hain, kya karte hain – kisi ko nahi pata. Na wo kabhi thik se baat karte hain, na kuch batate hain. Bas har mahine 20 lakh bhej dete hain. Is wajah se mummy bhi unse koi sawal nahi karti. jab paisa aata hai, toh aur kuch poochne ki zaroorat nahi.)


(Par abhi, jaise hi mummy mujhe dekhti hain – unka chehra ekdum badal jata hai. Unki aankhon me ek pal ke liye shock dikhai deta hai, fir gussa.)


(Main chup rehta hoon, lekin aankhon me ab bhi garmi hai. Hoth kata hua hai, haath pe khoon ke thode se nishan hain. Shirt bhi thodi faati hui hai. Mummy ekdum tezi se aage badhti hain aur mere haath pakad ke zor se kheenchti hain.)


Maa (gusse me, meri taraf dekhkar): "Ladai ki hai na?! Saaf dikh raha hai! Kabhi toh shanti se ghar aaya kar!"


Mein: " nahi...! Mummy wo gir gaya tha khelte khelte toh ye hal ho gaya

Maa: jhoot mat bol... Samjha


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( Fir meri nazar mummy ke kamar ke upar padta hai. Pasine se bhigi Hui gora kamar aur gora face tamatar jaise lal..lal... Gal , bikhre hue baal aur deep clevage saree maise saf saf dikh raha hota hai gori aur panise wali clevage sath hi unke body se aur saree se ek madhosh aur pagal kar dene wali smell ufff.... )


(Main chup chaap mummy ki taraf dekhta hoon. Mujhe pata hai, unka gussa sirf dikhawa hai, asli tension unki aankhon me hai. Lekin maa ka tareeka alag hai – wo pyaar dikhane me nahi, daantne me believe karti hain.)


(Main bina kuch bole andar chala jata hoon. Mummy ab bhi peeche se chillati hain –)


Mummy: "Koi din aisa hoga jab tu bina kisi chot ke ghar aayega?! Yeh kya masti chal rahi hai?!"


(Main apne room ka darwaza zor se band kar deta hoon… aur andar ek gehri saans leta hoon. aur fir bhag kar bathroom ja kar mummy ki ek used panty rakha hua tha )

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(usko apne muh mai thus kar toilet seat ke upar baith kar aakhen band kar ke ek gehri saans leta hoon, aur apne pant ka zip khul kar lund ko bahar nikalta hoon jo ki 4.5 inch lamba aur 2 inch mota hai, fir lund par sampoo laga kar muth marna suru kar deta hoon)

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( Aur Maan mai mummy ko yaad karte hue )


Mein : " Aahhhh....! Mummmyy......!! Mein apki chut far Dungaa.. aaahh.... Mummy


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( Aise bol bol kar muth marne lagta hoon, fir karib 15 min baad mera sara maal nikal jata hai, aur mera body pura dhila pad jata hai )

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( Fir mein apne muh se mummy ki panty nikalta hoon aur apne lund par aur mere navi par lage hue maal ko mummy ki panty se saf karta hoon.)


( Aur uss panty ko mein le ja kar, jahan par mere saf kapde rakhe hue hote hain, uthar le ja kar unke bich rakh deta hoon taki mere sare kapde mai ye smell fel jaye aur har time mein iss smell ke nase mai reh sakta hoon)

( Fir mein fresh ho kar niche aata hoon toh dekhta hun ki khana table par lag chuka hota hai,
toh mein jaldi se dinner kar deta hun aur apne room main ja kar so... Jata hoon.. )
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(Main apne room ke bed par lete hue aankhein dheere dheere kholta hoon. Mera poora sharir dard kar raha hai. Sar mein ek tez dard hai, jaise koi bhari cheez mere dimaag pe gir gayi ho. Sab kuch dhundla dikh raha hai, aur aankhon ke samne sab kuch blur ho raha hai. Main apni aankhon ko jhapat kar kholne ki koshish karta hoon.)

(Meri saans tez ho rahi hai. Main apne haath se apna sar pakad leta hoon, lekin dard aur badh jata hai. Mera jism kaanp raha hai, aur body mein ek ajeeb si jalan mehsoos ho rahi hai. Main apni bed ke kinare se uthkar dheere dheere chalne ki koshish karta hoon.)

(Main apne kamre se nikal kar kitchen ki taraf badhta hoon. Mera poora sharir thoda weak aur kaanp raha hota hai, lekin kuch pani peene ka mann karta hai. Main dheere dheere kitchen ki taraf jata hoon, har kadam pe dard badhta jaata hai.)

Aaahhh.... Aur tez...tez...karo nah....!!

( Aise sound sunai deta hai, mujhe kitchen se, jab mein kitchen ke under entry karta hoon, toh mein dekh kar chowk jata hoon.)

( Mummy chud rahi hote hein, pratik ( jis ke sath fight kara tha maine graund main) se )

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Mummy : aahhh... Pratik... Fuck me...! Ufff...

Pratik : yeh....le...rand...!! Tu kiski kuttiya hai..?

Mummy : mein pratik ki kuttiya hoon....!!

( Tabhi mujhe mere aankhon main aakhen mila kar dekh kar bolti hain.)

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Mummy : aaahh....! Rahul betaa... Tu randi ka bachha....hai tu randi...ka bachha...haiuhinnnnn....

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( Ye bolte hue wo pratik ki middle finger ko apne muh mai le kar chus ne lagti hain...)

( Ye sab dekh kar mera dimag ghum jata hai, mujhe kuch bhi clear nahi dikh raha hota hai, mere kaan mai bas TU RANDI KA BACHHA HAI...!! Ye hi chal raha hota hai.)

( Fir achanak se ek jhatka lagta hai aur mein hospital ke ICU room ke under hota hoon, charo taraf andhera hota hai, aur fir se ek sound sunai deta hai mujhe )

Ufff....! Meri gand far dijiye.....nah....!! Aur tez....aur tezzzhhdhu*****.....!!!!

( Ye sun kar mein darwaza khol kar bahar bhagne lagta hoon... Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha hota hai, chakar aaraha hota hai )

( Charo taraf andhera hai hospital ke lambe-lambe raste, wo sound aur tez hone lagte hain...)

Aaahhh....! Aur tez...aur tez.....!#*#!!!***HHHH......!!!

(Room andhera hai. Sirf ek beeping sound sunai de rahi hai. Mera dimaag phat raha hai. Jaise koi andar se cheer raha ho. Pasine se bheega hua hoon. Har jagah ajeeb si ghutan mehsoos ho rahi hai. Main hosh mein hoon... ya nahi? Yeh sapna hai... ya haqeeqat?)

(Aankhein dheere dheere khulti hain. Sab kuch blurry hai. Samne hospital ki chhatt dikh rahi hai. Ek safed pankha dheere dheere ghoom raha hai. Light ki roshni aankhon par seedha pad rahi hai, jaise kisi ne tez torch maar di ho.)

(Main hil nahi sakta. Haath uthane ki koshish karta hoon, lekin jaise pura sharir band ho chuka ho. Saans lene ki koshish karta hoon, lekin dil tez dhadak raha hai. Aankhon ke kone se dekhta hoon—ICU ke bed pe hoon.)

Main: (Andar hi andar, ghabraye hue) “Main... yahan kaise aaya?”

(Dimaag ek dum hazy hai. Kuch yaad nahi aa raha. Lekin ek ajeeb si feeling ho rahi hai jaise kuch bohot bura dekha ho... ya mehsoos kiya ho... Par kya?)

(Tabhi, ek awaaz sunai deti hai—dheere dheere pehle, phir zor se.)

(ICU ka darwaza dheere se khulta hai. White coat pehne ek doctor andar aata hai. Uske piche meri biwi Priya hai. Priya ki aankhein laal ho chuki hain, jaise bohot der se ro rahi ho. Uske haath kaanp rahe hain. Jaise hi mujhe bed par hosh mein dekhati hai, ekdum bhaag kar paas aati hai.)

Priya: (Ghabrahat bhari awaaz mein) “Doctor...! Doctor...! Yeh hosh mein aa gaye!!”

(Doctor ruk jata hai. Ek gehri saans leta hai. Fir aage badhta hai. Mera chehra dekhta hai. Aankhon me kuch ajeeb si narami hai. Jaise koi badi baat kehni ho, par keh nahi pa raha ho.)

Doctor: (Thodi deer tak chup rehkar) “Ek achi news hai... aur ek buri.”

(Priya ek pal ke liye frozen ho jati hai. Uske haath aur zyada kaanpne lagte hain.
Aankhon me dar dikhai deta hai. Ek pal ke liye lagta hai ki wo saans bhi lena bhool gayi ho.)

Priya: (Dheere se, shakk bhari awaaz me) “Achi news kya hai?”

Doctor: (Halki si muskurahat ke saath) “Yeh... khatre se bahar hain.”

(Priya ki aankhon me ek pal ke liye chamak aa jati hai. Jaise andhere me ek chhoti si roshni dikh gayi ho. Ek halke se rone ki awaaz nikalti hai. Wo doctor ko thank you kehne jaati hai, par doctor peeche hat jata hai.)

(Fir achanak uska chehra phir serious ho jata hai. Doctor ki aankhon me dukh hai. Kuch aise jaise kisi ki maut ki khabar dene wala ho.)

Doctor: (Dheere se, ek gehri saans le kar) “Lekin... ek buri khabar bhi hai.”

(Priya ekdum se statue ban jati hai. Mera dil tez dhadakne lagta hai. Kya hone wala hai? Kya kehne wala hai?)

Doctor: (Ruk ruk kar, soch samajh kar bolta hai) “Yeh... ab kabhi waise nahi rahenge jaise pehle the.”

(Priya ka gala sukh jata hai. Ek pal ke liye kuch bol nahi paati.)

Priya: (Halke se, tootay hue shabdon mein) “Matlab...?”

(Doctor ne ek gehri saans li.)

Doctor: (Aankhein jhuka kar, dheere se) “Inka left brain damage ho chuka hai... Yeh coma mein chale gaye hain.”

(Ek pal ke liye pura room ek dum khamosh ho jata hai. Priya ke pair ladkhada jate hain. Uski aankhon se ansoo behne lagte hain. Ek pal ke liye wo bed ko pakadne ki koshish karti hai, lekin haath kaanp jate hain.)

Priya: (Aankhon me aansu bhar kar, haklate hue) “Nahi... aisa nahi ho sakta... nahi... nahi...”

(Doctor apni aankhon me dukh liye uske paas aata hai. Ek pal ke liye uske kandhe par haath rakhne lagta hai, par fir hat jata hai.)

Doctor: (Dheere se) “Aur ek baat aur hai...”

(Priya ab bhi shock me hai, lekin sirf dekhti hai.)

Doctor: (Ek gehri saans le kar) “Hamare left brain logic, thinking aur reality control karta hai... Lekin right brain imagination aur creativity ka hota hai. Ab ye hamesha sapno ki duniya mein rahenge.”

(Priya ke pairon se jaise zameen khisak gayi ho. Uska pura jism ek pal ke liye hila bhi nahi. Wo bas meri taraf dekhti hai. Main ICU ke bed pe lete hue, aankhein khuli hone ke bawajood, jaise kisi doosri duniya me chala gaya hoon.)

Priya: (Tootey hue, haklate hue) “Aisa nahi ho sakta... Please kuch kijiye, please...!”

Doctor: (Aankhein neeche kar ke) “Sorry... Ab hum kuch nahi kar sakte.”

(Priya apne muh pe haath rakh kar rone lagti hai. Pura room ek ajeeb si udaasi aur dukh se bhar jata hai.)

(ICU ka monitor beep karta hai... meri saansein chal rahi hain... par main hoon? Ya sirf ek sapna bacha hai?)...
 

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(Main apne room ke bed par lete hue aankhein dheere dheere kholta hoon. Mera poora sharir dard kar raha hai. Sar mein ek tez dard hai, jaise koi bhari cheez mere dimaag pe gir gayi ho. Sab kuch dhundla dikh raha hai, aur aankhon ke samne sab kuch blur ho raha hai. Main apni aankhon ko jhapat kar kholne ki koshish karta hoon.)

(Meri saans tez ho rahi hai. Main apne haath se apna sar pakad leta hoon, lekin dard aur badh jata hai. Mera jism kaanp raha hai, aur body mein ek ajeeb si jalan mehsoos ho rahi hai. Main apni bed ke kinare se uthkar dheere dheere chalne ki koshish karta hoon.)

(Main apne kamre se nikal kar kitchen ki taraf badhta hoon. Mera poora sharir thoda weak aur kaanp raha hota hai, lekin kuch pani peene ka mann karta hai. Main dheere dheere kitchen ki taraf jata hoon, har kadam pe dard badhta jaata hai.)

Aaahhh.... Aur tez...tez...karo nah....!!

( Aise sound sunai deta hai, mujhe kitchen se, jab mein kitchen ke under entry karta hoon, toh mein dekh kar chowk jata hoon.)

( Mummy chud rahi hote hein, pratik ( jis ke sath fight kara tha maine graund main) se )

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Mummy : aahhh... Pratik... Fuck me...! Ufff...

Pratik : yeh....le...rand...!! Tu kiski kuttiya hai..?

Mummy : mein pratik ki kuttiya hoon....!!

( Tabhi mujhe mere aankhon main aakhen mila kar dekh kar bolti hain.)

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Mummy : aaahh....! Rahul betaa... Tu randi ka bachha....hai tu randi...ka bachha...haiuhinnnnn....

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( Ye bolte hue wo pratik ki middle finger ko apne muh mai le kar chus ne lagti hain...)

( Ye sab dekh kar mera dimag ghum jata hai, mujhe kuch bhi clear nahi dikh raha hota hai, mere kaan mai bas TU RANDI KA BACHHA HAI...!! Ye hi chal raha hota hai.)

( Fir achanak se ek jhatka lagta hai aur mein hospital ke ICU room ke under hota hoon, charo taraf andhera hota hai, aur fir se ek sound sunai deta hai mujhe )

Ufff....! Meri gand far dijiye.....nah....!! Aur tez....aur tezzzhhdhu*****.....!!!!

( Ye sun kar mein darwaza khol kar bahar bhagne lagta hoon... Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha hota hai, chakar aaraha hota hai )

( Charo taraf andhera hai hospital ke lambe-lambe raste, wo sound aur tez hone lagte hain...)

Aaahhh....! Aur tez...aur tez.....!#*#!!!***HHHH......!!!

(Room andhera hai. Sirf ek beeping sound sunai de rahi hai. Mera dimaag phat raha hai. Jaise koi andar se cheer raha ho. Pasine se bheega hua hoon. Har jagah ajeeb si ghutan mehsoos ho rahi hai. Main hosh mein hoon... ya nahi? Yeh sapna hai... ya haqeeqat?)

(Aankhein dheere dheere khulti hain. Sab kuch blurry hai. Samne hospital ki chhatt dikh rahi hai. Ek safed pankha dheere dheere ghoom raha hai. Light ki roshni aankhon par seedha pad rahi hai, jaise kisi ne tez torch maar di ho.)

(Main hil nahi sakta. Haath uthane ki koshish karta hoon, lekin jaise pura sharir band ho chuka ho. Saans lene ki koshish karta hoon, lekin dil tez dhadak raha hai. Aankhon ke kone se dekhta hoon—ICU ke bed pe hoon.)

Main: (Andar hi andar, ghabraye hue) “Main... yahan kaise aaya?”

(Dimaag ek dum hazy hai. Kuch yaad nahi aa raha. Lekin ek ajeeb si feeling ho rahi hai jaise kuch bohot bura dekha ho... ya mehsoos kiya ho... Par kya?)

(Tabhi, ek awaaz sunai deti hai—dheere dheere pehle, phir zor se.)

(ICU ka darwaza dheere se khulta hai. White coat pehne ek doctor andar aata hai. Uske piche meri biwi Priya hai. Priya ki aankhein laal ho chuki hain, jaise bohot der se ro rahi ho. Uske haath kaanp rahe hain. Jaise hi mujhe bed par hosh mein dekhati hai, ekdum bhaag kar paas aati hai.)

Priya: (Ghabrahat bhari awaaz mein) “Doctor...! Doctor...! Yeh hosh mein aa gaye!!”

(Doctor ruk jata hai. Ek gehri saans leta hai. Fir aage badhta hai. Mera chehra dekhta hai. Aankhon me kuch ajeeb si narami hai. Jaise koi badi baat kehni ho, par keh nahi pa raha ho.)

Doctor: (Thodi deer tak chup rehkar) “Ek achi news hai... aur ek buri.”

(Priya ek pal ke liye frozen ho jati hai. Uske haath aur zyada kaanpne lagte hain.
Aankhon me dar dikhai deta hai. Ek pal ke liye lagta hai ki wo saans bhi lena bhool gayi ho.)

Priya: (Dheere se, shakk bhari awaaz me) “Achi news kya hai?”

Doctor: (Halki si muskurahat ke saath) “Yeh... khatre se bahar hain.”

(Priya ki aankhon me ek pal ke liye chamak aa jati hai. Jaise andhere me ek chhoti si roshni dikh gayi ho. Ek halke se rone ki awaaz nikalti hai. Wo doctor ko thank you kehne jaati hai, par doctor peeche hat jata hai.)

(Fir achanak uska chehra phir serious ho jata hai. Doctor ki aankhon me dukh hai. Kuch aise jaise kisi ki maut ki khabar dene wala ho.)

Doctor: (Dheere se, ek gehri saans le kar) “Lekin... ek buri khabar bhi hai.”

(Priya ekdum se statue ban jati hai. Mera dil tez dhadakne lagta hai. Kya hone wala hai? Kya kehne wala hai?)

Doctor: (Ruk ruk kar, soch samajh kar bolta hai) “Yeh... ab kabhi waise nahi rahenge jaise pehle the.”

(Priya ka gala sukh jata hai. Ek pal ke liye kuch bol nahi paati.)

Priya: (Halke se, tootay hue shabdon mein) “Matlab...?”

(Doctor ne ek gehri saans li.)

Doctor: (Aankhein jhuka kar, dheere se) “Inka left brain damage ho chuka hai... Yeh coma mein chale gaye hain.”

(Ek pal ke liye pura room ek dum khamosh ho jata hai. Priya ke pair ladkhada jate hain. Uski aankhon se ansoo behne lagte hain. Ek pal ke liye wo bed ko pakadne ki koshish karti hai, lekin haath kaanp jate hain.)

Priya: (Aankhon me aansu bhar kar, haklate hue) “Nahi... aisa nahi ho sakta... nahi... nahi...”

(Doctor apni aankhon me dukh liye uske paas aata hai. Ek pal ke liye uske kandhe par haath rakhne lagta hai, par fir hat jata hai.)

Doctor: (Dheere se) “Aur ek baat aur hai...”

(Priya ab bhi shock me hai, lekin sirf dekhti hai.)

Doctor: (Ek gehri saans le kar) “Hamare left brain logic, thinking aur reality control karta hai... Lekin right brain imagination aur creativity ka hota hai. Ab ye hamesha sapno ki duniya mein rahenge.”

(Priya ke pairon se jaise zameen khisak gayi ho. Uska pura jism ek pal ke liye hila bhi nahi. Wo bas meri taraf dekhti hai. Main ICU ke bed pe lete hue, aankhein khuli hone ke bawajood, jaise kisi doosri duniya me chala gaya hoon.)

Priya: (Tootey hue, haklate hue) “Aisa nahi ho sakta... Please kuch kijiye, please...!”

Doctor: (Aankhein neeche kar ke) “Sorry... Ab hum kuch nahi kar sakte.”

(Priya apne muh pe haath rakh kar rone lagti hai. Pura room ek ajeeb si udaasi aur dukh se bhar jata hai.)

(ICU ka monitor beep karta hai... meri saansein chal rahi hain... par main hoon? Ya sirf ek sapna bacha hai?)...
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