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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

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M:: thik h.. english ki book le kar aana ..( halki smile dete hue)

R:: hmmm....

Or fir ravi tution chala gya...uske mann main bhi ladoo futne lage the....madhu ke pass jane ka Sochte hue..


Ab aage:::

Ravi baar baar ghadi dekh raha tha..to vivek bola
V:: kya hua tujhe ...ahh padhne m mann nhi h kya?? Tu padh le sahi se nhi to mujhe kon padhega....( Dhere se teacher se nazar bachate hue)

R:: are ye aata h mujhe .sun main science ka tution nhi padhunga aaj...jana h ghar Zaldi ...( Dhere se)

V:: Kyn??? To matlab ki tu mujhe nhi padhega??? Yar tu bhi...( Gussa hote hue)

R:: are padha dunga yar kal...dun kal school nhi jayenge...main tere ghar aa jaunga...din bhar main pura ho jayega.....
V:: pakka??


R:: Haan...yaar..

Ravi Ka man kar raha tha kaise chale jaye...wo madhu ke ghar pe ...

Tabhi vivek bola..


V:: are tune wo bhuwan bhaiya ke ghar bola mere liye....
R:: main yaar gaya nhi waha....jaunga to bol dunga ..( vivek se nazar bachate hue)

V:: hmmm....waise to neha didi bhi aa jayegi...wo padha hi deti h.... Kal Ruma didi badi tariff kar rahi thi teri....( Smile de kar)

R:: Kyn??? ( Heran hote hue)

V:: are mujhe Daant rahi thi...unko mera result dikh gaya yaar...tab keh rahi thi...apne dost ko dekh or apne ko dekh .....fail hoga to chacha tujhe chorenge nhi....
Tabhi aage se teacher bola...

T:: ravi ,vivek aaj padhne ka mann nhi h kya ...??? Vivek pata h na kitne number aaye Hain..??.wo to kar lega....uske sath kya baaton m lage ho....ab dekha maine to dono ko bhar kar dunga.. .

Thodi der dono shant rahe ..vivek jaise hi kuch bola. To ravi ne usko danta or bola ...

R:: Tu marwayega yar ..sir mama se bol denge .. chup ho ja....( Dhere se)

Fir vivek bhi chup ho gaya....

Or thodi der baad tution ka time pura ho gya...or ravi vivek ko bol ke Zaldi se cycle le kar madhu ke ghar ko chala gaya....

Lekin badi sawdhani se kyonki....uska ghar or madhu ka ghar pass main tha...ager koi dekh leta to befaltu panga ho jata ...
Thodi der baad. Ravi chupke se madhu ke ghar

pahuncha...madhu chat m thi...kapde uthane gayi thi...or usne ravi ko dekha to uske face m ek muskan aa gayi...or wo Zaldi se niche aa gayi or main door khol diya ...

Ravi ne usko smile kiya or ander aa gya....madhu bhi qatil smile dete hue ander ko aa gayi....


Ravi ja ke hall main Beth gaya...jha rudra khel raha tha....
M:: pani piyoge????( Kamuk smile dete hue)
R:: Haan....( Ghur ke dekhte hue)


Madhu kamaal ki lag rahi thi....laal saree main wo qyamat lag rahi thi....

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Madhu kitchen ko gayi to.. Ravi bhi uske piche chala gya....
Madhu janti thi ki ravi zaror aayega kitchen m....
Madhu uske liye pani nikal rahi thi lekin nazar piche ko thi ...
Ravi turant uske piche aa gaya...or usse sat ke khada ho gaya....madhu bhi bas waise hi khadi rahi...sir jhukhaye....

Ravi ke ling main halka sa tanav aane laga...wo thoda sa aage ko hua...jise madhu ko apne khulhe pe dabav mehsoos hone laga...or usne apne dono hath kitchen ki self main rakh diye ..


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Ravi madhu ki is ada se romanchit ho gaya...or madhu ko is halat m ghar m akele or khud usko phone karke bulana ye soch ke ling zor marne laga....

Yaha madhu ki isthiti wo hi thi ..jaise koi mada Janwar jab gabhin hone ka man banati h to...alag tarah se awaz nikal ke..apne malik ko sankat deti h ki..Zaldi se kisi nar Janwar ka intezam karo....

Lekin yaha to madhu khud hi wo mada h or khud hi is mada ki Malkin bhi...is liye usne khud hi nar ka intezam kar diya....

Ravi ne jaise hi uski sarii pakad ke upper karne laga .madhu ek dam se palat gayi ..or ravi ko dekh ke boli ..dheere se...

M:: ander chalo..main pani laati hu ..( shram or uttejana m)
Lekin ravi to usko uske kitchen main hi chod lena chata tha ..bed room m Jane ka sabr nhi tha ab ..


Usne bina kuch bole madhu ko jhatka se khincha apni or .apni kamar ko aage ko kiya jisse uska ling kapdon ke bahr se hi madhu ke yoni pe bhid gaya ...



Halanki madhu ne abhi sarii pehni thi .lekin wo fauladi ling apni chaap chor hi gaya....

Madhu machal gayi. .or uske dono hath ravi ke kandhe pe aa gaye....

Ravi waise hi kamar aage piche hilata raha ..or madhu apne panje ke bal khade ho ke Apne khulhe sikodte hue ravi ki bahon me machalne lagi ...

Ravi ke hath uske bhare hue khulhon m the...ravi uske soft khulhon ko sikodta or failata ..madhu ne bhi khulhe dhile chor diye ...

Ravi ka ling kapde ke bhar se hi baar bar uske bhagnasa ko cher deta ..jisse madhu ke per kamjor padhe lage ...or uski chaddi lagatar pani chorne lagi ...


Madhu ravi se bed room m chalne ko bol rahi thi ..wo acchi tarah se chud lena chahti thi ..
ek vaishya ki bhanti...Madhu siskte hue ravi se ander chalne ko bol rahi thi... lekin ravi usko yahi khade khade chod lena chata tha ..

Ravi ne uske honth apne honth nm le kar ek zabrdast smouch kiya ..or usse bola...

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R:: blouse khol..or sarri upper kar...( Apna lower kholte hue)
M:: ander chalo na yha kaise karoge??( Blouse ke buton kholte hue)..

R:. Ho jayega..khol to sahi jaldi ...( Apne ling ko pakad ke madhu ke samne hilate hue)

Madhu ki nazar ravi ke ling pe gayi ...kya mota supada tha.... ling dekh ke madhu ke hath Apne app apni sarri pe chale gaye...or wo upper ko khichne lagi. .

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Ravi ne aage badh ke bra ke upper se hi uske boobs ko masla..
Madhu ne aaahhh ki dard se .. fir ravi ne sidha apna hath uski chaddi ke ander daal diya...


Usne dekha baal chote chote se aane ko tyar the...or chut buri tarh se paniya gayi thi ..

Ravi madhu ko zabrdast chod dena cha raha tha...to usne madhu ki chaddi ki lastik side ki..or apne supade ko uski chut m ghisa..
Madhu ne khud hi apne per faila diya...

Madhu ravi se chud chuki thi ..usko pata tha .ye mota .ling chut ko faila ke ander ghus jayega ..

Madhu ke hath ravi ke shoulder pe the. Or ravi uske honth chus raha tha .. kitchen m churiyon ki awaz aa rahi thi bhut dheere dhere ...


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Ravi madhu. Ke honth katne m laga tha . madhu ko ho rahi thi ki ravi daal de uske ander ..or bhar de uski khali jagh...
Ravi uski chut m ling ragdta raha to madhu boli kamukta vas.
M:: dalao na ab ..pls... bardasht nhi ho raha ..( machlte hue)..
R:: faad du isko. Hunnnhhhh ..( daant piste hue..ling ko bhagnasa m ragdte hue)


M:: haaannn...ufffff ...isse..issss.jo karna hhh karo...lekin daallo abb yaar...( Kamar ko hilate hue or machlte hue)

Madhu ka ye kehna or ravi ka uski chut m dalna....or agle hi pal madhu panje ke bal khade ho ke khule tight karke ling ko sidha ander jane se rokte hue ... boli...

M:: isssssss aannnnnnnnnnnnn...mar gayi...hai ..ravi pura mat dalna. Ek baar m ... aaarrmmm seee dheree se...fat jayegi....aannnhh...bhut mota h yaar...( Dard se Bolte hue)


R:. Per faila meri jaan ..ab to tere jadd tak hi dalna h ..per faila na ..( daant piste hue uttejana m)

Ravi ne waise hi dhakke marne chalu kiye...

Is position m or is halat m ling to ander tak nhi gaya.. lekin ling utna hi madhu ki yoni ko thokte raha...


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Kitchen m madhu ki masti bhari or dard bhari awaz aa rahi thi...

Madhu ki kamar kitchen ki self pe takra rahi thi har jhatke se.. ..uske hath ravi ke baal or gale m the ..sarri or petikot kamar tak tha... chaddi ki lastik side ko thi..or blouse open tha... lekin boobs bra m hi the ..

Or ravi ke hath uski kamar ko pakde the ..

Madhu bhi ab dhire dhire per kholne lagi thi ..jisse ravi ka ling uski gufa m or ander tak jane laga ..

Madhu mast ho gayi . Uski chut ke fank ravi ke ling pe grip ke tarah chadd gaye the...


Or har jhatke se fatch fatch ki awaz aati ..

Chut ke fank ander ko jate time ling ke sath ander bhar ko hote rahe ..

Ravi ne apne honth madhu ke mangal sutr ke upper rakh ke chumne laga...or apne hath kamar se hata ke niche sare or petikot ke ander daal ke..chaddi ke ander daal diya...or. Uske khulhon ko masalne laga...

Madhu to swarg m thi ..halnki is position m ling usne utras ko nhi bhed raha tha .. lekin wo mast thi..is mote ling se chud ke...

Ravi or madhu kaam kriya m vyasth the ..tabhi rudra kitchen m aa gaya ..or apni maa ko ase siskte hue bas dekhta raha ..

Usko kuch samj nhi aaya bas...wo dekhta raha ki...

Kaise uski maa ne ravi ko pakda h ..or ravi ki kamar aage piche ko ho rahi h ..or wo uske baal sehlte hue boli rahi h...

M:: aaahhh...raviii...issss...isse ..aaahhh ravviiii... ander le chalo naa... khade nhii hua jaaa raahaaa....
aaannnhhhh..aaannnhh... rudra dekh rraaa h .... aannnhhhh ander chalo nasa...plsss....rudra..aa gaya ...( Rudra ko dekhte hue ravi se Bolte hue)

Ravi ne rudra ko dekha or madhu se bola .


R:: dekhne dee...ase hi leni h teri aajjj...( Madhu ki aankhon m dekhte hue).

Madhu khuch na boli bas muh fer liya sharm se. .


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Tavi ravi ne ling bhar khicha liye...chut se Pani tapak raha tha .
Madhu kuch sochti ki ravi ne apni 2 anguli uski chut m utar di ..or apne ling ko hilate hue bola ..

R:: bhut garam h teri ye... tujhe to roz chaiye lagta h. .
Madhu kuch na boli bas dard ka muh banate hue..ravikant hath pakadne lagi ..


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R:: bata na rozz chaiye na??( Chut m tezi se anguli karte hue)

Madhu ki halat kharab ho gayi .or uska muh khula reh gaya .annkh upperrr ko ho gayi ..or uski chut se pani ki..fatch fatch fatch awaz aane lagi ..or pani ki bunden bhar girne lagi ...

Ye madhu ka ajj ka pehla. Orgasm tha.


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Rudra dekhte raha...jabki madhu bhi adhi khuli aankhon se usko dekte rahi...


Or ravi ne usko kitchen ki self pe utha ke betha diya...or khud ek chuka pe khada ho ke.. ling uski yoni m utar diya...
Madhu ne aaahhh ki or apne bete ko dekhte rahi...jaise usse keh rahi ho ..

Beta ab ye hi tere papa h ...ab inka hi huq h tere mummy pe ...tu bhar ja ...apne mumy papa ko pyar karne de...


Ravi uttejit tha .or usne madhu ke honth muh m liye or chuste hue usko chodne laga .panty ander jane m dikkat kar rhi thi .to ravi ne..Ling nikala...or madhu ki chaddi niche kinch di .


madhu ne bhi apni kamar upper kar di Zaldi se agle pal ravi ke samane madhu ki chut thi ..jo thodi fail chuki thi ..or uske ander ka laal kall bhaag uski dikha raha tha...ravi ne madhu ko dekha ..or sidha ling.juski chut m utar diya...



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Thodi der tak Wahi pe karne ke baad Ravi ne ling nikala ..or madhu se bola bed room m chal...

Madhu ne apni saree petikot niche kiya...or sidha rudra ke pass gayi .jo ki apne khilone se khel raha tha ..


Madhu ne uske gaal pe kiss kiya..or usko hall m bethne ka wait kiya ..or apne bed room m chale gayi ...bed room ko jatw hue...usne blouse ke button fir laga diya tha ..


Madhu sidha aakar bed m let gayi .or..ravi ka wait karne lagi...

Ravi pani pi ke aaya or halka sa uska darwaja band kiya ..or sidha aa ke madhu ke upper let gaya...



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Madhu ne bhi Apne hath uske pith m rakh diya...ravi ne usko dekhte hue blouse khola ..or sidha uske boobs ko muh m le kar chusane laga....


Uttejana se madhu ke nipple full gaye the...
Madhu ki sitkari fir se futne lagi ...

Or room m fir se wo hi awaz aane lagi thi...
Siii.....issss......ufffff ....ufffff.....

Ravi ne uski saree petikot fir se upper khicha to madhu ne bhi per faila diye....


Or agle hi pal ravi ne uske dudh ko pite hue ..ling ko uski yoni m set kiya...or tez jhatak maar ke utar diya ander....ling chut ko chirata hua jadd tak ja pahucha ...
Madhu ne dard se Chadar khinch li ...

Or aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh... maaaaaa.... Ki awaz ki ...
Ravi ne uske peer upper ko kar diya ...or uske hothon chuste hue madhu ko chodne laga.....

Madhu ka mazza ab dugana ho gaya kyonki ling uski yoni ko bhed ke .. garbh pe phuchna laga tha ...


Orrom m payal or churiyan or madhu ki...aaannnhhh sii haiii....ravi .....mar gayiiii.....aannnhhhh.....siiiii....hai....ki awazaane lagi ..jo ki...haal tak saaf sunai de rahi thi....

Ravi madhu ki lene laga tha...Wahi Madhu apne nakhun ravi ki back m chubane lagi thi....

Madhu ki tang hawa m thi...or ravi tezi se uski chut maar raha tha....

Payal ki chan cham or janghon ke takrane ki awaz aane lagi thi...thap thap thap...

M:: SIIII haaiiii ummmmm....unnnnhhhh.....maa meri.....hai....unnnhhhh.....siiiii....hai.....SIIII...ufffff.....thoda dhere dhere... aaanhhhh...fat jayegi....

R:: meri jaan ye to hoti hi fatne ke liye h....bhut sexy h teri chut....isko to roz chodna chaiye....
Degi na utha utha ke....Ase hi....( Per kandhe m rakh ke tezi se ling lete hue)


M:: maaaaaaa...haaiii mar gayi main......unnnhhhh....dhire maro na ....ander tak ja raha h....haiii.....issss.....unnnhhhh....unnnhhhh....mar gayi....( Dard se karhate hue...)

Ravi madhu ki tabtaod chudai karne laga ..

Kyonki ravi jab aaya tha to madhu Zaldi balaji main room ka door pure tarh se band karna bhul chuki thi ...

Tabhi madhu ka sasur apni hi dhun m aa gaya...halnki usne door khola ..or ander bi aaya lekin madhu or ravi Ase khote the ki bhar kon aaya pata hi nhi chala ...

Virendra ko madhu ke room ke bhar ,,kuch awaz sunai di...jaise wo ro rahi ho....

Siiiii nnnnnhhhjj...... maaaaaaa. Haaiiii... ssiiiiiii ufff.....hai ...mar gayi.....hai....

Or sath m churiyon or payal ki....bhi ..or thap thap thap....
Wo samj gaya ki ...ander kya chal raha h ....apni bahu ki asi kamuk awaz sun ke uske dil ki dhadkan badhne lagi thi ....
Wo to abhi bhi ye soch raha tha ki uska beta bhuwan aaya hoga....

Wo thodi der Wahi ruka...or bhar ko jane laga ..wo nhi chata tha ki ..usko or uske bete ko sharminda hona pade....
Or jaise bhi wo bhar jane laga ki uski nazar kitchen ke farsh pe pade ek kapde pe gayi ...

Wo turant uske pass gaya...or wo kapda uthaya ..to dekha ki...wo kapda kuch or nhi mashu ki panty thi...jo abhi Thodi der pehle ravi ne utari thi ..

Virendra ne us kaam ras se bhigi hui panty ko dekha..or fir sungha....wo ankh band kiye bas sunghate hi reh gaya...
Wo to soch raha tha ki uska beta ne hi ye sab kiya hoga...wo uttejit hone laga tha madhu ki chaddi dekh ke....




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... lekin usko kaha pata tha ki...uske bahu uske bete ke sath nhi balki ek jawan ladke ke sath uske bed room m kaam kriya m lipt h ...

Virendra ne Zaldi se wo panty uthayi or bina kuch soche jeb m rakh li ..or darwaza se dhere se bhar ko aa gya...

.or jaise hi main gate se bhar jane laga...to usko andhere m. Ek cycle dikhi....ghar m...

Uska matha thnka gaya....usko samj nhi aaya ki ye cycle kisi h...or ager bhuwan ghar aaya h to uski bike kaha h???..

Wo ander jaane ki sochne laga ki...usne khud ko rok liya...or ghar ke piche side chala gya...madhu ke room ki khidki ke piche....

Usne dekha ki madhu ke room ki light jal chuki h ..or khidki ki darar se jo usne dekha usko viswas nhi hua...

Usne dekha...ravi jo ki madhu se english padhta h...apna lower upper kar raha h...or madhu..jiska petikot ghutno se thoda upper h...or apne boluse ko laga rahi h...ravi se kuch Baat kar rahi h..hanste hue....

Usne dekha ki madhu ke baal bilkul bikhre hue hain...

Thodi der baad ravi bhar ko chala gaya...or madhu sise ke pass khade hoke ..apne baalon m juda bandh rahi thi or fir sari thik karne lagi....

Virendra to jaise sann reh gaya...madhu ko is halat m dekh ke....

Usko gussa to bhut aa raha tha ..ki uski bahu jo bhut apne ko sidha dikhati h...ek jawan ladke ke sath humbistar hui h thodi der pehle.


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Uska mann kiya ki ravi or madhu dono ko jaan se maar de... lekin wo chup rha...or ravi ke bhar jane ke baad..sidha apne dost raam singh ke ghar pahuch gaya....

Wo aaj madhu ke liye kuch laya bhi tha...ek chota sa gale ki gold ki chain...wo gusse m pagal tha...uska mann kar raha tha ki gold ki chain yahi fek de lekin wo chup raha or gusse m chla gaya....

Wahi Madhu fresh thi ..uska dimag thoda shant tha

..kyonki ravi ne aache se usko bhoga tha...uska 2 baar pani bhi nikala tha...or uske ander hi discharge hua tha....madhu ko abhi bhi yoni ke ander ravi ke ling ki sar sarahat mehsoos ho rahi thi...

Lekin jab wo kitchen m gayi or panty dhudhne lagai ...to usko wo nhi mili...waha....usko samj nhi aaya ki ..panty gayi to gayi kha ...

Wo kitchen se le kar bed room tak dekh li...lekin panty ka koi aata pata nhi ...

Uska mann kiya ki ravi se puch le...lekin baar baar phone kaise karti uske ghar. ..

Bas uske bad wo pani garam karke bhane gayi...or fir sabji kar e lagai....

Kyonki subah hi Virendra apna scooter nhi le gaya tha to...usko pata nhi tha ki Babu ji aa gaye h...

Lekin usko panty ko le kar dar tha ki aakhir wo gayi kaha ..kahi koi aaya to nhi tha.....wo bas ye sochte hue sabji katne lagi....


Wahi Virendra team singh ke ghar pahuncha ,ram singh kahi chala gaya tha to sidha daru pine akele hi ek chote se hotel m chala gaya...

Uska ndimag khrab tha ki...uski bahu uske ghar ko dhokha de rahi h....

Or daru pite hue khud se bolne laga....

Kya samjhta tha kya nikali ..mere bete ko dhoka se rahi h....Haan karegi bhi kya jab aisa chutiya pati milega to....
Wo suresh ka bhanja....usko to main bataunga....ab...meri bahu ke sath ....

Madhu ko itni hi aag thi to mere pass aa jati....main mar gaya tha kya..

.kab se ye sasur bahu wali kitab padh raha hu....khud bhi dekh li h ...tab bhi...apne yaar ko bula ke..karwa rahi h ....

Man to kar raha h..abhi ja ke chod du.....dimag kharab kar diya h....

Pure ghar ka naam mitti m mila diya ..are mujse to bolti to sahi... ...fir dekhti....ajj ye sone ki chain laya tha ki ..chalo...dunga isko ..ab to mann hi nhi kar raha dekhne ko bhi ...
Man to kar raha h...bhuwan ko bulau abhi or bhej du iske baap ke ghar.....

Virendra gusse m daru pite raha....or thoda pine ke baad uske mann m vasna badhne lagi....or sochne laga ...

Sala galti to bete ki h...jab asi jawan aurat ko Ase chor dega to or kya hona h....

Ajj to abb madhu se baat karni hi ..h ...ab to mujhe bhi chaiye...kaise bhi....ya to mere kamre m aaye ya muje apne kamre m bulaye....muje chaiye to chaiye bas ab iski...
Chaddi dekhi tune Virendra..kitnea pani chori thi ... Or awaz suni tune....kon kahega isko dekh ke.....

Mujse natak or uske sath sab kuch...
Ab to mujhe bhi chaiye teri..


Or ye sab soch ke daru ka pag mara or sidha ghar ko chala gya..thoda ladkhadate hue.....

Wahi Madhu ko samj nhi aa rah tha ki aakhir panty gayi kaha ..kahi koi aaya to nhi tha ..kahi babu ji to nhi the.... Hey bhagwan kya karu ab .....
Ye sab sochate hue sabji bnane lagi ...

To be continued...
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bhai madhu toh ravi ki ho gayi hai usse pyaar karne lagi hai toh uske sasur ko villain bana do aur ravi madhu ko usse bachaye toh maja aajayega....madhu vidya jaisi nahi hai jo kisise bhi chudwa le yeh madhu ke character pe achha nahi lagega ki woh apne sasur se sambandh banaye aur usne apne chachere sasur ko bhi virodh kiya huva hai....isliye ravi hi usko ab bacha sakta hai virendra se aur virendra ka bhoot utar sakta hai madhu ke sath sex karne ka....kyunki jaise autowale ko ravi ne jawab diya tha ussi pe toh madhu ravi pe fida huyi thi....isliye ab madhu ko ravi se help leni chahiye kyunki woh pyaar bhi karne lagi hai ravi se..!!
bhai jo feel huva waisa bol diya aap bura mat maniyega..!!
 
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अब तक की कहानी के सफर में जितने किरदार आप ने पेश किए हैं।
उनमें दीपिका और मधु सब से मजबूत किरदार हैं, लेकिन इनका किसी और के साथ सम्भोग दिखाना,
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बाकी आप की कहानी है आप ने कुछ अछा सोचा होगा।
yeh aapne sahi kaha
 
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Bhai please in characters ke sath hero ke alawa kisi aur ko nhi.. vidhya ke sath jo krna hai aap kr skte hai kyun ki uska character aapne sure se hi aisa dikhaya hai. But madhu,suneeta, radha, Deepika in sb ka character bahut hi clean dikhya hai. To aisa hi sahi lagta hai. Baki sir aapki mrji. We trust your writing skills. Jo bhi aap likhoge mst hoga.
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Madhu ko ab bhar bhi jane main dar lag raha tha...Wahi Virendra rudra ko le kar bhar ko chala gya paas ki shop main..kahi na kahi wo kafi khush lag raha tha...

Subh ka time tha madhu ko basta bhi banana tha .lekin jaye kaise kitchen m ye hi sawal tha...

halanki usko abhas ho gaya tha ki Virendra rudra ko lekar bhar chala gaya h...lekin wo kab aa jaye ye usko nhi pata tha...or uski ab itni himmat nhi thi ki fir se Virendra ke samne jaye..

Thodi der baad Virendra bhi aa gaya...lekin madhu nhi nikali bhar.... Virendra ne bhi usko koi awaz nhi di...bas rudra ko madhu ke darwaje ke pass chor diya...

Rudra ki chips ka packet le kar apni maa ke pass chala gya....
Virendra bhi janta tha ki...madhu itne ashani se bhar nhi aayegi to bhar se hi bola...

V:: madhu....oh..madhu....( Bhar se shirt ke button lagate hue)
Madhu satark ho gayi or saree ka palla thik karke ander se boli ..
M:: ji babu ji....( Ander se hi)

V:: beta main Ram Singh ke ghar ja raha hu...uske sath kahi kaam se jana h....tu khana bna lena...main raat ko hi aunga ...din m khana mat banana mere liye...

M:: to nasta??? ( Ander se hi thoda pareshan hote hue darwaje ki aad main)

V:: abhi bhuk nhi h....kha lunga din main tu pareshan mat hona...tu bna le apne liye ...( Darwaja ke dusre side se)

Madhu kuch na boli....wo kam se kam khush thi ki...usko Virendra ke samne nhi jana padega din bhar....

Or Virendra chla gya....

Madhu bhi bhar aa gayi...or rahat ki saans li...or fir wo hi sochne lagi jo thodi der pehle room m hua tha....

Madhu ne aram se ghar ka kaam nipataya or fir khana bna ke... kha liya...or rudra ko le kar fir se chat m chale gayi dhup sekane....

Chat m ja ke pados ki ladeis se baat karne lagi...lekin uske dimag m wo hi kitab ki story ghum rahi thi....

Wo baar baar apna mind udhar se hata ke us ladeis se baat karne m lagati...lekin uske ander ki curiositycuriosity usko bethne nhi de rahi thi ...

Dil men raha tha...ja ke wo story padh le....lekin mind usko rok raha tha.....

Or jab wo ladeis bhi niche chale gayi...to madhu rudra ko lekar niche aa gayi....

Rudra to chat m hi so chuka tha...to madhu bhi uske sath room m aake let gayi....

Lekin niidd koso dur thi uski aankhon se....uska dil zor maar raha tha...us kitab ko padhne ko....lekin mind to rok hi raha tha....

To madhu apne mind ko samjhate hue sochne lagi ki...
Are dekhu to sahi babhu ji Kyn paste h wo kitaben....kya hai udne aisa...jo unko asi adat pad gayi...

Are Haan wo to jeb rahe the ki...ram singh uncle ki kitab hai...dekhu le kar gaye ki nhi....lekar jana to chaiye .

Ek baar check karti hu...main kya karungi asi kitab padh ke ..mujhe to aachi nhi lagti is type ki kitab....

Or apne ko gumrah karte hue... Virendra ke room ko chal padi...
Uska dil zor se dhadk raha tha....wo jaise hi us almira ke pass pahunchi or jaise hi handle ko pakda to ek baar hath piche le liya....or kuch socha...or fir turant. Bhar ko gayi...or main door band kar diya ...

Or wo almira bina kuch soche khol di...

Or wo kitab kapdon ke niche dhudhne lagi....akhir karar wo kitab madhu ke samne thi....

Madhu ne wo kitab nikali ..or direct wo nude hue pake ko dekhne lagi....

Kyonki wo kahani ke aadhe hisse se muda page tha to..madhu ne us kahani ki starting page...ko palta ..or padhna start kiya ...

Story padhte padhte wo kho si gayi...or Wahi pe rakhi hui chair pe beth gayi....

Or jisse hi usne padha ki....

मेरी बहु सुलेखा। बहुत सुंदर स्त्री थी। मैं उसके तरफ शुरू से ही आकर्षित था। लेकिन उसका बच्चा होने के बाद तो वो और भी निखर चुकी थी। उसका यौवन पूरे तरह से मदमस्त था।। सारी पेटीकोट में तो वो एक अपशारा लगती थी।।
उसके उरोजो की गोलाई अब और भी बढ़ गई थी।और नितम्ब भी अपना वजन लिए हुए थे।।


Madhu ne aankh band kar di...or thodi der baad fir se padhna start kiya ...thodi der bd usne fir se padhne lagi...
Madhu ek tak wo kitab padhne lagi bina kisi hosh khabar ke....jaise jaise wo kitab padhne lagi...

uski hart beat badhne lagi ..us kitab ke uttejak shabd uske dil ko or uski jananang ki garmi badha rahe the ...or shabd ye the ...

सुलेखा बार बार कह रही थी।। पिताजी छोर दीजिए। में आपकी बहु हूं।। लेकिन उसका विरोध नाम मात्र था। में भी जनता था। अगर मैं उसकी योनि तक अपना हाथ ले जाने में कामयाब हो तो वो खुद को मेरे नीचे आने से अपने को नही रोक पाएगी।।और मैंने भी अपना हाथ उसके पेटीकोट के अंदर डाल ही दिया।।।और मेरा हाथ उसकी गीली जांघिया के उपर था। सुलेखा मदहोश हो गई।।और मैने अपने हाथ को उसकी चड्डी के अंदर डाल दिया।।और उसके योनि के गीले बालों से खेलने लगा।।

और सीधा अपनी दो अंगुली उसकी योनि के अंदर डाल दी।।।सुलेखा मेरी बाहों में आके कांपने लगी।।।मेरे हाथों की गति बढ़ते गई।।।और सुलेखा की सिसकियां भी।।।।


Madhu se ye kamuk sahitya or nhi padha gaya...Uski yoni main pura gila pan aa chuka tha ..wo ab ravi se zaldi se Zaldi milna chati thi....

Or apni saree ke ander gila pan liye hue apne room ko aa gayi...or us story ke bare main sochne lagi...ki sach main aisa hota hai...

Kya babu ji mere liye bhi itna ganda Sochte hain ...maine to kabhi aisa kuch nhi kiya jo wo mujhe hawas ki nazar se dekhe....

Usne ghadi main time dekha 11 baj raha tha...Matlab ki ravi school m hoga ..lekin usse control nhi hua...or Deepikaa ke ghar phone mila diya....

Phone Ravi ki nani ne uthaya....

M:: hello...

Nani:: hello...kon....

M:: tai ji main madhu bol rahi hu...wo deepika hai???

Nani:: are wo to subh chale gayi..apne ghar...uske papa ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi na...koi kaam tha...???

M:: nhi wo ravi tution padhne nhi aa rahe h to pucha....

Naini:: kha se school se aata h ...fir tution se raat ko aata h...abhi school gaya h... ayega to baat karne ko bolungi thik h???

M:: ji tai ji....

Nani.:: Or sarla thik h???

M:: tai ji wo punam didi ke ghar gayi h...unka 7 month chal raha h na ...

Nani:: Accha Accha ...or sab thik ho raha h???

M:: ji tai ji....

Or fir madhu ne phone rakh diya or apne pero ke bich takiya rakh ke so gayi ...

Or jab school se ravi aaya to uski nani ne bata diya ki madhu ka phone aaya h...

Ravi turant Deepika ke room m Gaya or madhu ko phone kiya....

R:: hello...

M:: hello...hmmmm....kha ho aj kal??

R:: bas yahi hu..school se ghar...ghar se tution....

M:: ghar se tution...( Muh banate hue)

Kyn english nhi padna h????( Halke gusse se)

R:: Aunga kal subah se...wo mummy log aaye the na....

M:: koi zarurat nhi h...abhi aao....( Thoda gusse se thoda request se)

R:: abhi to maths ka tution jana h fir science ka....( Hanste hue)

M:: aa rahe ho nhi....Haan ya na????( Gusse se)

R:: thik h maths ke tution ke baad aa jaunga....Kyn apki saas nhi h kya??( Thoda cherte hue).

M:: nhi h tabhi keh rahi hu samje...( Bhut dhere se).

R:: Or sasur ji...(dhere se)

Sasur ka naam sunte hi madhu ki dhadkan badh gayi....or boli ...
M:: nhi hain na abhi....raat ko ayenge....aa jana ...kitne baje aaoge???

R:: 5.30 baje....

M:: thik h.. english ki book le kar aana ..( halki smile dete hue)

R:: hmmm....

Or fir ravi tution chala gya...uske mann main bhi ladoo futne lage the....madhu ke pass jane ka Sochte hue....


To be continued.....
bhai madhu ke character ke sath nainsafi ho rahi hai..woh ravi ke sath hi karna chahti hai
aur jo maine suggestions diye hai uske bare me bhi soche
 
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Apne bola ki madhu or uske sasur ka sex scene khincho mat.. bhai bina koi situation bane .kaise sex ho sakta h??.. ab ek dam se to uska sasur usko pakad nhi lega... dekhiye bina koi reason ke koi chizz nhi hoti...har koi incident ke piche koi na koi reason hona bhut zaroori hai.....wo hi bas main karne ki koshish kar raha hu...
Madhu ke sasur or uske bich hue in chiizo ka aage bhut prabhav padega... isliye zaroori hai...
Abhi ek bhai ne bola ki madhu ko prostitute bnaya ja raha h...
Kya madhu khud let rahi h apne sasur ke samne?? Kya koi lady jab asi situation pe fas jaye ki usko apna body dene ke alawa koi chara nhi bache to kya wo ek prostitute ho gayi...???
Ager ye hai to.... Deepikaa bhi wo hi hai ...
Kyonki uska past bhi kuch aisa hi h....

Or apne bola kisi se bhi chudwao???

Pehli baat main koi inka dalal nhi hu...jo inka sabke sath fix karunga...
Dusri baat...jaise jaise situation banegi...or jo bhi banegi ...wo likhna padega.....



Life main hamesa apko acche anubhav mile ye zaroori nhi h....
Ager sab kuch accha hi milega to bure or acche ka difference ka hi nhi pata chlega...

Actually jab koi ye bolta hai ki story boring ho rahi h... to confidence lag hota hai...khud pe doubt hone lagta hai ki...kya sahi main chiiz khrab ho rahi h....

But as a story writer lagta h ki nhi thik h ..

Bus mind pe confusion hone lagta h ..or story se focus dur ho jata h ..

Kyonki sabki ek baar sabki ziid ke karan story thodi si khrab hui hai ..jab muje zabrdasti Deepika or ravi ke bich sex dikhana pada....
Har update ke baad sab ye hi puchte the ki...kab hoga sex ,kab hoga sex....
Na chate hue bhi mujhe likhna pada...or half hearted main jo bhi kaam karta hu ..nhi hota accha ..kynki socha kuch hai ..likh kuch or raha hu ...to jo result aana chahiye wo up to mark nhi hota....
Or jo pure man se likhta hu ..wo best hota h...iska sabse bada example hai....

Ravi or sunita ke bich ka ..jo kafi logo ko aacha laga ..wo isliye usko likhte time koi interruption nhi tha...main free mind ho ke likha ..to Zahir hai ki result aacha aana hi hai...

Isiliye pressure m aake nhi likhunga kuch bhi ..

Isliye main time le raha hu ..or koi reason nhi h....
bhai humko sirf sex nahi dekhna hai..aap ravi aur deepika ki romantic baate likh sakte hai....waise hi sunita aur madhu ki bhi romantic baate likh sakte hai..lekin madhu ke sath aisa mat kare....kisi ke bhi sath karne ke liye vidya hai hi....uske baare me aap likh sakte hai lekin madhu ko ravi ke sath rehne de....aur jo mera sujhav hai madhu ke sasur ke baare me jaise usko villain banane ka aur ravi madhu ko bachaye aisa kuchh kijiye....aur aisa karne se story bhi real hi lagegi..!!
 
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