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Fantasy Meri zindagi ka andkha safar (sci fic and magic )

Story ke bare me btaye?

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Jkking

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Meri ye dusri story hai..
Ye kisi se copy nahi ki hai ye story inspire jarur he Baki stories se ...
Ye mene khud likhi hai.... Please support or Meri pehle story (warrior of love )ko bhi support kere
 
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Jkking

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Ye anth ladke ki khani hai jo apni himat, mehnat aur samajadari Bal per keise wo sab kuch pata hai jo ose kabhi nahi mila.....
 
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Is story ke update lambe honge aur main hafte main srif 1 ya 2 update de Paun ga kioki mujhe apni pahle story do month main complete karni hai os ke badh main is per regular updates dunga .....
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Is story ke update lambe honge aur main hafte main srif 1 ya 2 update de Paun ga kioki mujhe apni pahle story do month main complete karni hai os ke badh main is per regular updates dunga .....
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Update 1
2089 ke 8.30 am Wednesday and

Subha ka waqt hai main abhi bhi bestar per hi hun kioki main Kal rat main der se soya tha...
Kio ki main apne project pe kaam ker rha tha....
Main apne lab main hi bene room main rehta hun kio ki main ek anath hun....
Bat ye hai ki bachpan se hi main jis anathaly me Main tha bha sab ko pdhaya bhi jata tha mujhe shuru se hi pdhayi ka shonk tha mene bahout mhenat ker ke scollership leker mane apni doctorate means Ph.d in Quntum Physics complete ki Punjab University se.....
Main hun tu Punjab se but mene kbhi bhi kisi se uchi avaj main bat nahi ki .....
Mene apne Ph.d kerne ke badh mene India ke sepace research and technology nam ki agency main apply kia Meri qulification ke karn main jaldi select ho gia jha ane ke badh mene Kai hatyiar bnaye jaise
High entencity lesser gun , neroliger is apki 15 min se leker 48 hours tak ki yaddasht mitai ya sakti hai....
Aur solar car ye car Suraj ki urja see chalti thi or bhi bahout kuch....
Ise Karan jaldi hi mujhe senior scientist bna dia gia jha ka or mujhe ek alug lab or room bhi dya tha government ne...
Present
Main .. Aryan hero of the story.umer 38 .rang bright .body average .hight 5.9'' . Pdhai pH.d in Quntum Physicse.....

Main.. subha 8.38 pe Meri neend khuli main abhi bhi neend main hi tha main Uth ker batroom gya bha ka sara kaam nepta ke mene khana bnaya and kha ke Kam pe lag gia lab coat phene ke....
Main... Aaj kal main ek project Jo ki hemari space research ke lie bahout important hai yo ki ek space ship hai kioki is ki madded se lite ki speed se bhi teez ja sekte he hai...
Main... Mene iska ek prototype bnaya hai jo ke 500 mm lemba aur 500mm hi chuda he aab is main sirf ek power source Jo ke ise ke engine ko power de space main lite ki speed se Jada tak Jane ke lie.....

Main... Main pchle 3 saal se fail ho rha tha power source bnane ke lie aaj main ek aur bar kossish ker rha tha....
Main...Main pchle 6 ghentu se lega hua tha achanak mujhe yad aya kio na main ek small Suraj create kero apne power source ke lie main lage gia kaam pe mene jaan lega di or din raat ek kerke mene mini sun aur os ki power ko control kerne bala device bnaya aur mini sun ke as pass mene ek force filed bna ke ose space ship Main power source ki terh fit ker dia or ose test kerne ki tyari kerne lega....
Main .. computer record the video main aaj bahout khush hun kioki aaj Mera sapna pura hone bala hai mene spaceship Puri ker lie hai ....
Main ... Aaj tarik hai 26 july 2089 subha ke 9.00am per main itihas rechene ja rha kio ki aaj tak insan ne lite ki speed se Jane ka soucha hi tha lakin aab insan bhi lite ki speed se hi nahi os se bhi kahi yada speed se insan safer kerre ga ....
Main ... 9.39am per main research center ke garden main apne sapceship ready ker rha Hu traial ke lie is traial main khud lunga....
Main... Ship ke control room main betaha tha mene artificial gravity bhi on ker di thi ....
Main.... Mene ship main lege artificial intelligence ko ship lunch kerne ka adesh dia ..
A I... Command recireced lunch in10 sec. Countdown start 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 lunch ....
Phir ship shuuuuuuuu. Ki avaj kesath space ship space Main tha woh bhi 1 sec mai. ..
AI.. sir hum space main phunch gae Hain ...
Main... Age ki space jump ke coordinate set ker rha hun jump ke lie start 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 jump
AI... Sir hum adhe ghante main manzil per hunge ...
After few minutes
AI... Sir hum bas phuchne bale Hain...
Main... Main tyar ho gya ..... Jab hum super space se bhar nikle tu main samene Bali chije ko dekh ker ghbra gya kio ki samne ek whamhole ek trah ka dusri jagha Jane ka gate bhi khe sekte Hain aur
Ye koi aam whamhole nahi tha magnetically disbalance tha jub Meri ship os whamhole ke pass se guzer rahi thi ki....
Os whamhole ne Meri ship ko apne ander khich Lia tha ship ander jate hi megnetic storm ke karn Meri ship ke tuker hone lege main jaldi se power source aur AI ke main system wale kamere main agia ....
Main... Bhagwan ko yad kerne lga... Aur power source aur AI ko paker ke beath gia aur Dua magnetically lega...
Kuch hi der main Meri ship blast ho gai power source ki power force filed ke karan mere ander cahle gai aur mere ander Suraj jitni urja agai
Ise ke sath ship ka Artificial Intelligence bhi mere ander program hogia power source ki power and megnetic storm ke mishran ke karan mere body main badlave Hune lege..
Kuch 1ghente badh whamhole ke dusri aur se ek bacha bahar aya aur
Lite ki speed se kisi grah ki tarf cahla gaia...
Idhar main
Main.. andhere main mene ankhe koli mujhe lga main yamlok a gia hun....
But thuri der badh jab Meri ankhe kholi main tu main dekhta hun ki Main khai per leta hua hu mene Uth ker dekhne ki kossish ki but main Uth nahi pa rha tha...
Tabhi mere samene ek secreen a gai jis pe likha hua tha....

Host... Human
Name... Unknown
Level... 0
Powers.. 0
Fitnees... Like a baby
Age .... 3 days

Main... Main ye sab padh ker heran hu gia...
Tabhi Ai ne bulna suru kia
AI .. Master aab aap kaise Hain ...
Main... Tum kia hu or main kha hu..
AI.. main abhi sab btai hu aap ko yad hoga ki hemari ship whamhole ne khich li thi aap ko yad hoga kia Hoya tha aap ke behosh hone ke badh mere systam mai gadbadi ke chalte main aur power source ek ho ke aap ke body ke sath mil gye jis se aap ki aap ki body blast hone Bali the megar whamhole ke megnetic strm me aap ki body main aise badlave la die ki aap ki body aab kitani bhi urja aapne ander shokh sekta hain...
Whamhole ke end ane tak aap ki body ek Bache jaise ho gai jise Main is aap ki powers ki madded se yha le aye....
Ye grah bilkul Earth Jesa Hain but human jaise reace bahout kam hai....
Yha science nahi Magic ka raaj Hain...

Mene aapki powers ki madded se mene is grah ki information nikali hai ki yha jenam ke waqt hi jiv ko os ki magical powers mil jati Hain...
Yhe powers Hain aag, pani, hava, dharti, Akash, lithe, dark and mind powers.... etc ...
 

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Yhe Powers host ke behavior ke mutavik hi melti thi.....

1. Pani ki Shakti bala beta chanchal hota hai......

2.Aag ki Shakti bala gucial behavior bala hota hai......

3.Hava ki Shakti bale bahut hi hasmukh hotehain ......

4.Dharti ki Shakti bale bahut hi bede dil bale aur dialu hote Hain....

5.Akash ki Shakti bale bahut hi Kam log hote Hain

6. Lite yani roshni ki shaktiya bahut rare huti Hain yhe sirf subko pyar kerne bale logo ki Milti Hain Jo ki bahout Kam hote Hain....

7. Dark powers yani Kali shaktiya sirf un logo ko kunkhar ho only hi Milti hai.yhe bhi rare power s hai.

8. Mind powers yani demagi Shakti yhe to bahout hi rare yani croro me sirf 1 ko hi Milti hai ....

9. Infinity powers to powers Hain Jin ki madded se aap 1 sec. Ek dusri jagha ja sekte hai.yhe Shakti her kisi ke pass hoti hai butt aluge aluge....
Jaise teleport and portal....etc.....

Present time

Main .. mujhe yha kaun laya ....
AI.. aap ko yha yha ke ek gao bala Lia tha os ne aap ko apne ghar main rakh Lia yhe log insno yaise nahi nahi hai on se aluge enke kaan lembe hain bili jaise aur inki ek puch bhi hoti Hain ....
Tabhi kamere main koy dakhil hota Hain ...
Yhe do loge the ... Shayad the Patti patani ka jura lagta Hain ...
Admi .... Hum ise anth asharam shor ate Hain .....
Aurat... Nahi mere koi becha nahi hain main ise palun gi.....
Admi ... Thaick hai juli tumhari merji....
Aurat.. thanks Jim ....
Jim...tu ham is Kya khaker bulaye ge ....
Juli.... Main tu keti hu is ka nam love rakhte hain....
 
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John Cena

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Boht khoob yar mind blowing super duper awla start ha yar is story ko parh ka mujhe antriksh ka badsha shaan wali story yaad a gai keep posting like this
 
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