Fantasy NAAG MANI

[spritemathews]

Agli update ki partiksha rahegi dost.

 

[Fantasy ?✌?????]

Dost ye tumhara pahla message hai kisi ki bhi story par.
Agar tumhe lagta hai ki meri stories dusri jagah se copy ki huyi hain to yaha ke sabhi readers ko Link de do jisse vo bhi vahi se meri sabhi stories padh sake....kyon ki phir mera aage likhna to bekar hi hai na.

Koun sa writer story copy paste kar raha hai ya phir khud likh raha hai ye janna koi mushkil kaam nahi hai.

Jo bhi copy paste kar raha hoga uski har story me lekhan shailly alag alag hogi...koi kisi ki kahani copy paste to kar sakta hai lekin uska hunar uski kabiliyat, uske likhne ke andaz ko nahi chura sakta hai.

Main Avi bhai, Pritam da, Milan bhai. Harshit bhai, Vampire, Casi bhai etc...jaise great writers me se sabhi ki story to chura sakta hu lekin unka hunar, unki skills ko nahi chori kar sakta sakta.

Meri iss site par Saajan, Chamatkar, Saand, Naag Mani aur Rishabh Mohini..ye paanch story running hain.

Agar tumhe lagta hai ki ye stories maine copy paste ki hain to ab se aage ke update tum hi jaha par padhte ho mujhe nahi malum vaha se update mere readers ko uplabdh karana ya unhe uss site ka link de dena.

Kyom ki mere liye mere regular readers bahut anmol hain...vo mujhse to nahi hain kintu main aaj jo kuch bhi hu unn readers ke apar pyar, aur sneh ki badaulat hi hu.

Meri inn paancho stories ko jisne bhi mere likhne se pahle padhi hain main unn sabhi se anurodh karta hu ki vo mere readers ko bhi link de de jisse vo bhi padh sake.

Dusra tumne jaha bhi padha hai ek baar vaha par update posting date aur time dekh lena aur meri posting date aur time dekh lena... dono ko compare kar lena...meri story copy paste hai ya nahi tumhe khud hi malum ho jayega.

Ek aur baat main Saajan ka bina incest aur bina sex wala version bhi likh raha hu...RAJ POCKET BOOKS ke liye...Jiske liye maine do novel ka anubandh kiya hai.....agle ek do saal me ye novel sabke liye india ke market me bhi uplabdh hoga.

Main apni dusri story "MAYAJAAL" ki ek jhalak bhi yaha aaj post kar dunga...usko bhi dekh lena ki shayad vo bhi to kahi copy paste nahi hai.

Aur main ab se update apni sabhi stories ka apne sabhi regular readers ko PM kar dunga....na to mujhe kisi ke likes ki jarurat hai aur na hi kisi ke reviews ki...maine inke lalach me likhna start nahi kiya hai...aur na hi mujhe legend banne ka koi shouk hai....ek bhi comment nahi ayega kabhi bhi, tab bhi main update dunga lekin jab mujhe time milega tab

Mujhe poori ummid hai ki tum ab se meri stories ke update mere readers ke liye yaha post karoge jaha bhi tumne padha ho...

Bhai chamatkaar ka dusra bhag kyon nhi khul rahi hai

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.

Regards :Xforum Staff.

 

[Huraiz]

Kha gayab ho gaya arjun

 

[Gloden dragon]

Nice story..

 

[netsunil]

Nice

 

[Yug Purush]

Hello everyone! We are thrilled to present the annual story contest of XForum! "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Win cash prizes up to Rs 8500!"

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 8000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 25th March ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th April 2025 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.

Important Links:
- Chit Chat Thread (For discussions)
- Review Thread (For reviews)
- Rules & Queries Thread (For contest details)
- Entry Thread (To submit your story)

Prizes

Position	Rewards
Winner	3500 ₹ + Award + 7000 Likes + 30-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	2000 ₹ + Award + 5000 Likes + 15-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-Up	1000 ₹ + 3000 Likes + 7-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-Up	500 ₹ + 3000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader (Top 3)	500 ₹ (Each) + Award + 1000 Likes
Reporting Plagiarized Stories	200 Likes per valid report

Regards, XForum Staff

 

[sheikh]

jab tak story puri nahe huti nice kesay ho sakti a

 

[Raj9977]

Ye Kahani hai Ek aise Painting karne wale Ladke ki jiske hatho har roj pahli tasveer ek ladki ki ban jati hai..jise usne kabhi dekha nahi, suna nahi...jiske bare me vo kuch janta tak nahi.....Lekin phir bhi uske hatho pahli painting ussi ladki ki banti hai.....jise vo chahe ya na chahe.. kya hai us tasveer ki haqiqat...?..koun hai vo Ladki...?..kya Rishta hai uska is Ladke se...?.. Janne ke liye padhte rahe

NAAG MANI
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Batti ke charo taraf Peetal ki chhalni jaisa khol chadha hua tha……Kumar jab bhi is batti ko jalata, batti ki roshni peetal ki surakho me se doodh ki dharao ki tarah bahne lagti jisse kamre ki deeware aur kamre ka fursh roshni se chhitka hua dikhta..

Yah batti kamre ki chhat me lagi huyi thi…dusri batti kumar ki mez par lagi huyi thi….batti ke mathe par peetal ka ek dhakkan laga hua tha jisse chhitra kar is batti roshni mez par rakhe huye shishe ke pyale me bhar jati thi aur pyala har samay chhalakta hua dikhayi deta..

Kumar jab kuch soch raha hota to uski mez ki batti bujhi huyi hoti aur chhat ki batti jal rahi hoti thi…..Peetal ki saikado surakho me se chhitrati huyi batti ki roshni jis tarah saikdo alag alag dharao me bati huyi hoti thi…..kumar ke khyal bhi saikado alag alag lakiro me chalte the..

Par jab kabhi uske mann me ye lakire jud jati to vah chhat ki batti bujha kar mez ki batti jala leta tha... Roshni ek hi jagah jama hokar sheeshe ke pyale ko bharne lagti aur kumar ke mann me judi huyi tasveer uske samne pade huye kagazo par utarne lagti…..

Aaj kumar pichhle teen ghanto se apni mez par sar jhukaye kaam me juta hua tha…Alka ne mez ke paas rakhe huye stool par coffee ka pyala rakhte huye dhire se chammach ko khan khanaya taki kumar ko malum ho jaye ki usne coffee ka pyala rakh diya tha…

Par kuch minto baad alka ne dekha ki coffee ka pyala vaise hi rakha hua tha aur kumar ussi tarah mez par sar jhuka kar kaam me juta hua tha…

Alka ne muh se kuch kahe bagair cup ko thoda sa sarka diya…kumar ne cup ki oor is tarah dekha jaise ki khidki me aati huyi hawa se khidki ki saankal hilne ki awaz aayi ho…Saankal phir jaise sthir ho gayi ho aur kumar ka dhyan jaise apni mez par kendrit ho gaya ho…

Alka ko kumar ke studio me akar kaam seekhte huye six months hone aaye the aur alka ko six mahine me nahi, pahle mahine me hi malum ho gaya tha ki jis samay kumar kaam karta ho, alka ki kahi huyi kisi baat me ya pyale ke chammach me …athva khidki ki saankal me koi antar nahi rahta…isliye alka muh se kuch na boli..

Karib adhe ghante baad kumar ne mez se sir uthaya...Jab vah bahut thak jata to uske mathe par ek nas ubhar aati..is nas ka kasaav uski ankhe bhi mahsus karti..

Usne ek minute ankhe band ki aur phir mathe ki nas ko apne hatho se sahlate huye usne alka ki or dekha

Kumar—ek cup coffee milegi kya…?

Alka ne stool par rakhe huye pyale ko uthaya aur kamre se sate huye chhote baramde me chali gayi… Rasoyi kuch dur padti thi, isliye kumar ne tea banane ka saman baramde me rakh chhoda tha..chulhe par pani rakh kar alka ne thandi coffee ko gira diya aur cup dhone lagi...

Garam coffee ka pyala lekar alka jab loutkar kamre me aayi to kumar mez par rakhe kagaz ko dhyan se dekh raha tha...

"Aaj itni khushbu kaha se aa rahi hai "...kumar ne is tarah puchha jaise vah khushbu ko nazar gada kar dhudh raha ho

Alka ne bhi tasveer ki oor gardan ghumayi aur phir tasveer ki ladki ke baalo me lage huye phoolo ki oor dekhti huyi kahne lagi..

Alka—in phoolo se aa rahi hogi khushbu..

Alka ke hath se coffee ka pyala pakadte huye kumar khil khilakar hasne laga..

Kumar—abhi maine apna hosh itna nahi khoya hai ki kagaz par banaye huye phoolo me se khushbu aane lage

Alka chup sadhe rahi....usne palang ke paaye ke paas padi huyi chouki ki oor dekha, jaise kah rahi ho ki itna hosh jarur jata raha hai ki kamre me pade huye taaze phool abhi tak dikhayi nahi diye the..ye phool alka ne subah aate hi kamre me laga diye the..

"Ohh...." kumar ne hosh me hone ka daava vapis le liya aur coffee la garam ghoont bharte huye kahne laga..

Kumar—Par ye aadat nahi dalni chahiye thi..

Alka—kaisi aadat... ?

Kumar—coffee ki aadat.....Phoolo ki aadat

Alka—aur... ?

Kumar—Paise ki aadat....Shoharat ki aadat....Aurat ki aadat..

Alka—aur apne aap ki aadat….?

Kumar—kya matlab.... ?

Alka—apne aap ki aadat bhi nahi dalni chahiye...kabhi kisi Michael Angelo ko Michael An Jelo rahna chahiye aur kabhi use bazar ke ek kone me baitha hua halwayi bhi ban jana chahiye...kabhi namak bechne wala baniya aur kabhi paan bidi bechne wala...

Kumar (haste huye)—tum samajh nahi payi ho alka....ek apne aap ki aadat bhar ke liye baki koi aadat nahi dalni chahiye...main sochta hu ki apne aap ki poori aadat kewal tabhi pad sakti hai jab admi baki aadato se mukt ho jaye...

Alka—yeh mai manti hu...Par mere vichar me shoharat aur aurat me bahut farak hota hai...

Kumar—kisi aadat aur aadat me antar nahi hota....mai ek baar....

Alka—chup kyo ho rahe... ?

Kumar—tumhari jagah agar koi dusri ladki hoti to mai shayad chup rahta…kisi ko bhi kuch batane ki mujhe kabhi jarurat nahi padi…..Jarurat ab bhi koi nahi par shayad batane me kuch harz nahi…tum mujhe galat nahi samjhogi..

Alka—mujhe bhi khud par bharosha hai..

Kumar—mai yeh batane chala tha ki ek baar mujh me aisi bhookh jagi ki mai kayi din so na saka.....vah sirf jism ki bhookh thi…ek aurat ke jism ki bhookh….par mai kisi bhi aurat ke sath apni jindgi ke saal baandhne ke liye taiyar na tha…isliye kuch din mai aisi aurat ke paas jata raha jo roj ke bees rupaye leti thi aur meri swatantrata ko kabhi nahi mangti thi..

Alka ne kuch nahi kaha…sirf nazar gadakar kumar ke chehre ki oor dekhti rahi…

Nice story