Sci-FI Om--A story of A Boy(all in one)

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[rahul.das]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Character Introduction.
1.Om- our hero Age-19
Height-6.2inch, kaafi handsome hai ,6 pack abs,neeli aankhein,aur padhai me tej
(Ye sb baaf me hua kaise hua aapko pata chal jayega)

2.Raj sharma-Hero's father
Inka abhi kahani me jyada role nhi hai isiliye baad me inka introduction dunga

3.Rekha sharma-hero'mother
Age 34
Size-40-30-42
Ab size se pata chal hi gaya hoga ki kaisi hai ek dum tabboo heroine ki tarah lagti hai
Aur apne bete se bahut pyaar karti jaan hai
Ye bahut sanskari hai
(Ab aap log sochenge ki itni kam age me ye maa kaise bani 19 saal ke ladke ki to mai bata dooon ki ye aapko kahani me pata chal jaayega)

4.Rupa -Hero'sister
Ye abhi College me hai 1st year me
Isko koi bf nhi bs ye apne bhai ko itna pyaar krti hai ki ise koi aur dikhta hi nhi hai
Iska figure 36-28-36 hai gazab ka husn hai ek dum rashmi desai jaisa

5.Rohit.-hero best frnd age 19 same class 12 th ka exam khatm hoke result ka intzaar kar rha hai
Hero ke liye jaan bhi de skta hi

Ab chalte hai hero ke ghar ke baare me jaante hai

Delhi ek seher me 2 manjila makàan
1 st floor pe room hai ek kitchen aur hall
Pehle room me mom dad
Dusre room me badi sister. Teesra room store aur 4th room guest room hai. .. 2nd floor pe 3 room hai pehla hero ka .. doosra room hero ke gym kaa samman .... Teesra room guest but secret hamesha lock rehta hai wo



Pehla update jaldi hi aayega
Please read this story

Nice introduction

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Aaj se karib 1000 saal phle kahi pe yudhh ho raha tha
Ek raja aur ek rakshas me bahut hi bhayanak yudhh tha
Akhirkaar raja ne rakshas ko maar diya lekin raja ko pichhe se kisi ne talwaar uske sharir me aaar paar kar di
Isi ke saath raja bhi mar gaya aur wo rakshas bhi

(Ye kaise hua kyo hua
Raaja ko kisne maara kyu maara yr sab aapko aage pata chalega)

Date--1/08/2000
Ek aadmi hospital me pareshaan hole idhar se udhar chal raha hai
Thodi der baad ek bachhe ki aawaj aati hai rote hue
Tbhi doctor bahar aata hai aur kehta hai.....
Mubaarak ho mr Singh aapko beta hua hai
Ab mr singh soch rahe the ki khush ho ki dukh ho
Tbhi wo us room me jate hai h aur dekhte hai mrs singh behosh hai aur wo ladka chup chaap apni maa ko dekh raha tha
Tbhi mr singh doctor aut nurse se kuchh baat krke us bachhe ko utha lete hai aur hospital se nikal jaate hai
Idhar hospital me dr aur nurse ek mare hue bache ko laakar mrs singh ke bagal me leta deti hai

Mr singh us bachhe ko leke ek basti ke gate pe chhod dete hai aut chale jaate hai..wo bachha abhi bhi ro nhi raha tha bs ek tak apne baap ko jata hua dekh raha tha
Udhar jab mrs singh ko hosh aata hai to apne bachhe ke baare me jaan ke apna hosh kho deti hai aur behosh ho jaati hai
Jb doctor dekhta hai to check up krne ke baad wo mr singh ko bolta hai
Dr..-mrs singh ab koma me chali gyi hai
Mr singh-dr please kaise bhi use thk kr do plzz
Dr..-mr singh yaha pe itna facility nhi aap inko foreign le jaiye waha pe inka ilaaj achhe se ho payega

Uske baad mr singh apne family ke sath america settle hone ke liye chale jaate hai

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.idhar jb ek aurat us bachhe ko dekhti hai to jaldi se bachhe ko utha leti hai aur apne ghar yaani jo ki ek jhopri thi usme le jaati hai
Jab wo bache ka chadar hatati hai to wo hairan ho jaati hai ki
Uske right chest pe om ka sign jo mahadev ka sign hota hai wo hota hai
Tbhi uska pati dekhta hai to kehta hai
Kon h ye
Pata nhi kisi ne ise road pe chhod diya tha to mai le aaai
Ab ye mere saath hi rahega
Uska pati maan jaata hai lekin ise bahut gusaa aa rha th ki apne khaane ke liye kuchh hai nhi isko kaha se paalunga

Aise hi kuchh din bitne ke baad jb aurat ko laga ki ab iska naam kuchh to rakhna padega to wo uska naam uske chest pe jo sign rehta hai wahi rakh deti hai


Om

Nice start

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Om3
Jaisa ki aap sbhi jaante hai ki us lady ne uska naam Om rakha tha
Ab aage
Aise hi kuchhh mahine beet jaane ke baad is aurat ki tabiyat kharab hone lagi lekin wo Om
Ka bahut khyal rakhti thi
Pata nhi Om ke aankhon me kya jaadu tha ki jo uski aankhon me dekhta kho jata tha
Aise hi haste khelte 8 saal ho gaye ab Om bhi bara ho gya tha lekin abhi school nhi jata tha
Kyunki au aurat ka pati jo ki ek sharabi tha phle se Om se nafrat krta tha aur wo jo kamata tha uska aadhe se jyada to wo daaru me kharch kar deta tha aur uski biwi ab bed se bhi uth nhi pati thi kyunki uski haalt bahut kharab thi lekin Om abhi duniya ke baare jyada kichh nhi jaanta tha isiliye use na to padhne ki fikr thi na hi us aurat ke bimari ki....
2 mahine baad us aurat ka death ho jata hai Om pata nhi chala ki kya hua uske samajh me kuchh nhi aaya ab wo aadmi ne antim sanskar krke ghar aaya dekha to Om chup chaap so raha hai
Tbhi uske dimag me ek plan aaya ki ab isse pichha chhudana hi padega
Wo Om ko uthata hai aur bolta hai
Aadmi--Om chal mai tjhe seher ghumane le chalta hoon
Ye sun kar Om fatt se uth jaata hai kyunki wo kbhi apne darwaje se bhi bahar nhi aaya tha kyunki wo aurat use hamesha apne paass rakhti isiliye
Om jaake fatafat apna fata hua lekim uske pass wahi kapde the to pehen leta hai aur bahar aata hai
Om--chalo baapu mai taiyaal hoon
Ab Om us aadmi ke saath bahar aata hai aur uske saath chalne lagta
Om to bs aankhe phaade sab kuchh dekh raha tha
Dopahar se shaam hongyi ab halka halka andhera hone lagta hai
Tbhi wo dono ek mandir me aate hai
Om--baapu mjhe bhukh lagi kuchh khaane ko do n
Aadmi--achha ruk tu yha se kahi mat jaana mai tere liye khaana leke aata hoon thik hai
Om--thk hai baapu jaldi aana
Ab wo aadmi waha se jaldi nikal jaata hai aur sochta hai chal ab jaan chhuti is manhoos ab to chain ki jindgi jiyunga
Aur wo wha se bhag jaata hai
Idhar Om chupchap mandir me bhagwan ke pass jaake baith jaata hai
Use ab dhire dhire nind aane lagi thi aur wo wahi so jata hai
Tbhi ek dum se sb kuchh ruk jata hai hawa paaani aag insaan jaise samay ruk jaata hai
Tbhi mandir me ek dum se ujaala hota hai
Aur
Devo dev mahadev aur maata paarvati Om ke paas aate hai
Mahadev--dekho parvati jo is sansar pe raaj krne ke liye paida hua ho. Aaj mandir ke farsh pe soya hua hai
Parvati---Haa mahadev lekin ab iske jeevan ke dukh khatm hone ka samay aa gya hai ab ise koi dukh nhi hoga
Mahadev--Haa parvati mai ise Vardaan deta hoon ki ye panchtatv pe vijay paayega ye ek aisa yodha hoga ki koi ise maar nhi paayega jab tak ye khud marna nhi chahta ho aur ise
Duniya ka saara gyaan prapt hoga
Aur ek tej roshni mahadev ke haathon se nikal kar Om ke sharir me jaa ghushi

Tbhi brahma ji prakat huye
Brahma ji---lekin mahadev iske pichhle janm me jo iski buri shaktiyan hai wo jab ye 18 saal ka ho jayega tb wo jaag uthengi tb hum kya karenge
Mahadev --Chinta ki koi baat nhi hum wo sambhal lenge
Ab sbhi bhagwan gayab ho jaate hai aur fir sab kuchh samanya ho jaata hai


2-3 ghante baad jb Om ki nind khuli to apne baapu ko khojne laga jb nhi mile to wo bhukh aur dar ke maare rone laga
Uske rone ki aawaj sun kar waha ek aadmi aaya shayad 30 saal ka tha aur uske pichhe pichhe ek aurat bhi aaya shayad 23 years ki thi
Aurat - Raj kaun hai ye ladka
Raj-pata nhi rekha dekho n kab se ro rha hai shayd ise bhukh lagi
(Rekha aur raj ke baare bata diya hai pehle update me)
Tbhi rekha jo prasad bhagwan ke liye laayi thi ladke ko dene lagi to raj bolta hai
Raj-rekha ye kya kar rhi ho ye to mahadev ke liye laaye the
Rekha-gusse me-mahadev ko ham dubara kharid ke chadha denge but pahle abhi ye bhukha hai to ise khane do waise bhi bachhe bhahwan ka roop hote hai
Ab raj kuchh nhi bolta kyunki biwi ke saamne kiski chalti hai???
Ab bachha wo prasad khane lagta hai tb wo chup hota hai aur undono ki taraf dekhte huye
Om-aap log kaun ho
Abhi tak Om apna chehra apne haatho se chhupakar ro raha hota jaise hi wo rekha ko aankhon me dekhta hai rekha kahi kho jaati hai
Raj-rekha kaha kho gyi tm
Rekha -kahi nhi dekho n kitna pyara bacha hai
Beta tmhara naam kya hai
Om-mera naam om hai aap log kaun hai
Rekha -beta hm tmhare mummy papa hai
Aur raaj ki taraf dekhne lagti hai
Raaj to pura shock hoke dekhne lagta hai lekin jaise hi qo rekha ko dekhta hai usse kuchh pucchhhne ki himmat nhi hoti hai use wo baad me puchhegabisiliye sochne lagta hai

Om --lekin mele baapu to koi aul hai aapnlog nhi
Tbhi rekha bolti hai-- nhi beta hum hi tmhare asli mata pita hai wo to bs naukar hai
Ab Om thehra bachha uske paas dimaag kaha wo to bs ek tak rekha aur raaj ko dekhne lagta hai
Achhanak se Om rekha ke gale lag jaata hai
--Maa Mqa Maa Maa Maaa
Kehte hue
Rekha to apne liye maa sun kar hi khush ho jaati hai aur kas gale laga leti hai Om ko
Lekin raaj abhi bhi ye manne ko taiyaar nhi tha kyunki wo jaanta tha ki pata nhi kaun h kaha se aaya hai aise kisi ko beta kaise maan loon jo mera khoon nhi
Lekin Rekha ke saamne kuchh nhi bolna chahta tha isiliye chup ho gya
Ab rekha aur raaj Om ko apne saath apne 2bhk wale makaan me le aaye
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Rekha aur raj ke baare me aaj raat ko bata aaunga

Badhiya update Bhai

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Om4
Raj -ek chhota sa businesss man tha jab iski shaadi rekha se hui
Rekha-bahut sundar hai aur sanskaari hai bachhon se pyar krti hai ise bachche bahut pasand figure to aapko phle bata diya hai
In dono ke pariwaar me koi nhi hai kyunki shadi ke baad sb ek bus se ghumne jaa rahe the( sivaay raaj aur rekha ke wo dono honeymoon gyae the )
Jaate waqt bus ke accident me inka pariwar khatm ho gya tha
Ab aate hai waapas kahani pe
Rekha aur raaj Om ko apne ghar le aaye use khana khila ke rekha usko sula deti hai air raaj ke paas jaati hai
Raaj --jaan ye kya hai ye sab isko apne ghar me kyu laayi ho hum to jaante bhi ise
Rekha---Ohho jaan aap bhi na dekho na aap bhi kaam pe chale jaate ho aur hamare ghar me bhi koi nhi hai mai v akeli rehti hoon to ab Om hamare pass rahega to mere bhi dil behel jaayega aur hum dono ko mummy papa kehne wala bhi mil jayega i mean ki hum dono ko beta mil jayega hamari family puri ho jayegi
Raaj--chalo tum kehti ho thk hai lekin mjhe ek bachha aur chahiye aur wo bhi tumhare pet se (man me --koi to hoga mera khoon bhagwaan mjhe ek beta ya beti kuchh bhi do lekin jaldi do mera apna khoon)
Raaj---jaan raat ho gyi hai aur chalo ab chalte ek bachhe pane ke liye jo karna padta hai
Ye sun ke rekha sharma jaati hai aur raaj ke saath chalne lagti hai
Subah Om ke rone se Rekha ki nind khulti hai aur bhagte hue Om ke room me jaati hai aur dekhti hai ki om apne pant me hi susu karke ro raha tha
Rekha jaldi se om ko chup karati hai aur uska pant kholne lagti
Jaise hi rekha ne uska pant khol ke dekha to shovk ho gyi aur sochne lagi itni kam umr me itna bada penis 4 inch ke aas pass to hoga hi
Aur mere pati ka to itna bada abhi hai matlb ye bada hoga to kitna bara ho jayega iska penis
Fir apne dimag jhattaak ke mai bhi paagal hoon kya kya sochti hoon ye mera beta hai ab
Aur fir Om ko utha nahane le jaati hai fir usko kapda pehnati hai aur fir usko dekhti hai to uske aankhon me hi kho jaati hai
Fir jaldi se hosh me aati hai aur ghar ka kaam krne lagti hai
Aise hi 3 month guzar jaate hai aur rekhaka pyaar Om ke liye badhta hi jaa raha tha air raaj apne business me busy rehta tha
Ek din sunday ke din jb raaj baithke akhbaar padh raha hota hai to tbhi ek sadhu baba aate hai
Raaj uthta hai pranaam krta hai rekha ko bhi bulata hai rekha saath me Om ko bhi apne saath le ke aayi baahar
Om ko dekh ke saadhu baba ke chehre pe muskaan aa gya ..
Rekha aur om ne bhi baba ko pranam kiya
Baba---beti mai tumhare yaha kuchh kaam se aaya hoon
Rekha---ji baba boliye mai aapki kya madad kr skti hoon
Baba --- beta mai Om ko le jaane aaya hoon
Ye sunte hi raaj aur rekha ek dum shock hoke baba ko dekhne lagte hai
Rekha-- baba aap ye kya keh rahe hai ye mera beta hai
Baba--haa beti mai jaanta hoon sab lekin iska janm kuchh vishesh kaaran se hua hai aur tbhi baba rekha aur raaj ke sar pe haath rakhte hai aur hata dete hai
Baba--ab to samajh gaye tm log isiliye mai ise apne saath le jaa raha hoon
Rekha-- lekin baba kya aap hamesha ke liye le jaa rhae hai ise
Baba--nhi beti jab ye 18 saal ka ho jayega tb ye waapas aayega tumhare passs
Rekha ab kuvhh nhi bolti bs chup chaap om ko dekhne lagti hai aur rone lagti hai raj use sambhalta hai uske bhi aankh me aansu aata hai kyunki itne dino me use bhi om se attachment ho gyi thi
Ab baba om ko god me utha lete hai aur chal dete hai raaj aur rekha bs unhe dekhte reh jaate hai.
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Baba Om ko lekar apne aashram aate hai jo baahari duniya se bilkul bhi juda hua nhi hota hai
Baba Om ko shiksha aarambh kr dete use duniya ka saara gyaan dete hai
Magic
Kaise dusro ko kaabu karna hai
Ladai ke saare tarike sikhate hai..
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Idhar om ke jaane ke baad rekha pregnent ho gyi aur ek bachhi ko janm diya jiska naam rakha Rupa.
Ab fir se us ghar me khushiya aa gyi thi lekin rekha om ko roj yaaf krti thi
Jab roopa ka janm hua to raaj ko business me bahut faayda hua aur uska business bahut badha aur videsh me bhi badhne laga isiliye usne america ne rehne ka faisla liya lekin 2 saal baad hi uske beti roopa ka death ho gyi
Isse raaj aur rekha dono buri tarah toot gye
Ab dono sirf apne business pe dhyan dete
Ek din rekha office se aa rhi thi dekha ek ladki sadak kinare behosh padi thi to use jaldi se utha kar hospital le gyi
Hosh me aane ke baad jab rekha ne usse puchha ki kon ho tum
Ladki-ji mera naam roopa hai mere maa baap ki death ho gyi hai aur mai apne mama ke pass rehti thi lekin mere padhai ke kharche ke kaaran unhone mjhe ghar se nikal diya
Roopa naam sunte hi rekha ke aankhon me aansoon aa gye
Rekha- tum behosh kaise ho hyi
Roopa- ji maine 3 din se kuchh nhi khaya isiliye
Ye sunte hi rekha to maano tadap gyi aur bhagte hue hospital ke baahr se khaana le ke aayi aur usko khilya
Roopa bhi rote hue khaa rhi thi khana khane ke baad roopa boli ---madam ji agar aapke ghar me koi kaam hai to plzz mjhe kaam pe rakh lo mai sb kuchh kar dungi
Rekha ye sunte hi gussa ho gyi or boli--
Nhi tumhe mai apne ghar pe kaam pe nhi rakhungi
Ye sunkar roopa rone lagi tbhi rekha boli
Rekha--lekin ek kaam kr skti ho tm agar chhaho to
Roopa ye sunkar khush ho gyi
Roopa--ji madam boliye mjhe kya karna hoga mai kuvhh bhi karungi
Rekha---thk hai aaj se tumhe meri beti banna hoga thk hai aur tm mjhe madam nhi maa kahogi thk hai
Roopa ye sunkar khoosh ho jaati hai aur rekha ke gale lag jaati hai
Iske baad dono ghar aate hai rekha ne roopa ka admission school me kara deti hai 6th class me
Lekin raaj to jaise duniya hi bhul chuka tha apne beti ki mait ke baad bs apne business me laga rehta tha bhagwaan ke daya se uska business bahut badha videshon me bhi badhne laga isiliye usne socha america shift hone ka lekin
rekha nhi maani to wo business badhane ke liye america chala gya aur yaha ka business rekha ko saunp kar wo america chala gya kyunki wo ab paiso ko jyada important manne lag gya tha
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10saal baad ...,...........continue

Nice update bro