Sci-FI Om--A story of A Boy(all in one)

[StarDust]

Hero 19, mother 34 ?

So she gave birth at the age of 15 ? You sure or is it a typo ?

 

[Abbasi]

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[Hunterrrr69]

Good start keep it up

 

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[Raja thakur]

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Hero 19, mother 34 ?

So she gave birth at the age of 15 ? You sure or is it a typo ?

Iska jawab baad me mil jaayega

 

[Rocky2602]

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Om3
Jaisa ki aap sbhi jaante hai ki us lady ne uska naam Om rakha tha
Ab aage
Aise hi kuchhh mahine beet jaane ke baad is aurat ki tabiyat kharab hone lagi lekin wo Om
Ka bahut khyal rakhti thi
Pata nhi Om ke aankhon me kya jaadu tha ki jo uski aankhon me dekhta kho jata tha
Aise hi haste khelte 8 saal ho gaye ab Om bhi bara ho gya tha lekin abhi school nhi jata tha
Kyunki au aurat ka pati jo ki ek sharabi tha phle se Om se nafrat krta tha aur wo jo kamata tha uska aadhe se jyada to wo daaru me kharch kar deta tha aur uski biwi ab bed se bhi uth nhi pati thi kyunki uski haalt bahut kharab thi lekin Om abhi duniya ke baare jyada kichh nhi jaanta tha isiliye use na to padhne ki fikr thi na hi us aurat ke bimari ki....
2 mahine baad us aurat ka death ho jata hai Om pata nhi chala ki kya hua uske samajh me kuchh nhi aaya ab wo aadmi ne antim sanskar krke ghar aaya dekha to Om chup chaap so raha hai
Tbhi uske dimag me ek plan aaya ki ab isse pichha chhudana hi padega
Wo Om ko uthata hai aur bolta hai
Aadmi--Om chal mai tjhe seher ghumane le chalta hoon
Ye sun kar Om fatt se uth jaata hai kyunki wo kbhi apne darwaje se bhi bahar nhi aaya tha kyunki wo aurat use hamesha apne paass rakhti isiliye
Om jaake fatafat apna fata hua lekim uske pass wahi kapde the to pehen leta hai aur bahar aata hai
Om--chalo baapu mai taiyaal hoon
Ab Om us aadmi ke saath bahar aata hai aur uske saath chalne lagta
Om to bs aankhe phaade sab kuchh dekh raha tha
Dopahar se shaam hongyi ab halka halka andhera hone lagta hai
Tbhi wo dono ek mandir me aate hai
Om--baapu mjhe bhukh lagi kuchh khaane ko do n
Aadmi--achha ruk tu yha se kahi mat jaana mai tere liye khaana leke aata hoon thik hai
Om--thk hai baapu jaldi aana
Ab wo aadmi waha se jaldi nikal jaata hai aur sochta hai chal ab jaan chhuti is manhoos ab to chain ki jindgi jiyunga
Aur wo wha se bhag jaata hai
Idhar Om chupchap mandir me bhagwan ke pass jaake baith jaata hai
Use ab dhire dhire nind aane lagi thi aur wo wahi so jata hai
Tbhi ek dum se sb kuchh ruk jata hai hawa paaani aag insaan jaise samay ruk jaata hai
Tbhi mandir me ek dum se ujaala hota hai
Aur
Devo dev mahadev aur maata paarvati Om ke paas aate hai
Mahadev--dekho parvati jo is sansar pe raaj krne ke liye paida hua ho. Aaj mandir ke farsh pe soya hua hai
Parvati---Haa mahadev lekin ab iske jeevan ke dukh khatm hone ka samay aa gya hai ab ise koi dukh nhi hoga
Mahadev--Haa parvati mai ise Vardaan deta hoon ki ye panchtatv pe vijay paayega ye ek aisa yodha hoga ki koi ise maar nhi paayega jab tak ye khud marna nhi chahta ho aur ise
Duniya ka saara gyaan prapt hoga
Aur ek tej roshni mahadev ke haathon se nikal kar Om ke sharir me jaa ghushi

Tbhi brahma ji prakat huye
Brahma ji---lekin mahadev iske pichhle janm me jo iski buri shaktiyan hai wo jab ye 18 saal ka ho jayega tb wo jaag uthengi tb hum kya karenge
Mahadev --Chinta ki koi baat nhi hum wo sambhal lenge
Ab sbhi bhagwan gayab ho jaate hai aur fir sab kuchh samanya ho jaata hai


2-3 ghante baad jb Om ki nind khuli to apne baapu ko khojne laga jb nhi mile to wo bhukh aur dar ke maare rone laga
Uske rone ki aawaj sun kar waha ek aadmi aaya shayad 30 saal ka tha aur uske pichhe pichhe ek aurat bhi aaya shayad 23 years ki thi
Aurat - Raj kaun hai ye ladka
Raj-pata nhi rekha dekho n kab se ro rha hai shayd ise bhukh lagi
(Rekha aur raj ke baare bata diya hai pehle update me)
Tbhi rekha jo prasad bhagwan ke liye laayi thi ladke ko dene lagi to raj bolta hai
Raj-rekha ye kya kar rhi ho ye to mahadev ke liye laaye the
Rekha-gusse me-mahadev ko ham dubara kharid ke chadha denge but pahle abhi ye bhukha hai to ise khane do waise bhi bachhe bhahwan ka roop hote hai
Ab raj kuchh nhi bolta kyunki biwi ke saamne kiski chalti hai???
Ab bachha wo prasad khane lagta hai tb wo chup hota hai aur undono ki taraf dekhte huye
Om-aap log kaun ho
Abhi tak Om apna chehra apne haatho se chhupakar ro raha hota jaise hi wo rekha ko aankhon me dekhta hai rekha kahi kho jaati hai
Raj-rekha kaha kho gyi tm
Rekha -kahi nhi dekho n kitna pyara bacha hai
Beta tmhara naam kya hai
Om-mera naam om hai aap log kaun hai
Rekha -beta hm tmhare mummy papa hai
Aur raaj ki taraf dekhne lagti hai
Raaj to pura shock hoke dekhne lagta hai lekin jaise hi qo rekha ko dekhta hai usse kuchh pucchhhne ki himmat nhi hoti hai use wo baad me puchhegabisiliye sochne lagta hai

Om --lekin mele baapu to koi aul hai aapnlog nhi
Tbhi rekha bolti hai-- nhi beta hum hi tmhare asli mata pita hai wo to bs naukar hai
Ab Om thehra bachha uske paas dimaag kaha wo to bs ek tak rekha aur raaj ko dekhne lagta hai
Achhanak se Om rekha ke gale lag jaata hai
--Maa Mqa Maa Maa Maaa
Kehte hue
Rekha to apne liye maa sun kar hi khush ho jaati hai aur kas gale laga leti hai Om ko
Lekin raaj abhi bhi ye manne ko taiyaar nhi tha kyunki wo jaanta tha ki pata nhi kaun h kaha se aaya hai aise kisi ko beta kaise maan loon jo mera khoon nhi
Lekin Rekha ke saamne kuchh nhi bolna chahta tha isiliye chup ho gya
Ab rekha aur raaj Om ko apne saath apne 2bhk wale makaan me le aaye
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Rekha aur raj ke baare me aaj raat ko bata aaunga

 

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Maaf krna abhi past hai isiliye jaldi khatm kar raha hoon

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

Nice update