Fantasy Pakiza

[Armaaz]

Update 52 posted..

 

[ank@123]

Jabardast update

 

[K S Lover]

Nice update

 

[Raj9977]

Afsha - Ha bilkul zaroor chalungi kyu nahi .

Itne me mere bina kuch bole sab bole ham bhi chalenge ham bhi chalenge .

Me - Haaa haaa sab chalo isme zidd kya wo apna hi ghar or yhi kuch door bagal me hi he.


UPDATE-51

Hum sab wha se seedha Simra baaji ke pass aaye or Papa ka intezar krne lage todhi der me Papa bhi aa gye.

Me - Papa Kha reh gye the aap itni der se intezar kr rhe hai hum sab aapka

Papa- Are wo Chaupal pe kuch purane jaan pehchaan ke log mil gye the to gapshap me time kaise nikal gya pta nhi chala.

Me- oh Koi nhi Chaliye jaldi Ready ho jaiye bde papa ke wha jana hai yad hai naa aapko

Papa- yad hai, y
Afsha - Ha bilkul zaroor chalungi kyu nahi .

Itne me mere bina kuch bole sab bole ham bhi chalenge ham bhi chalenge .

Me - Haaa haaa sab chalo isme zidd kya wo apna hi ghar or yhi kuch door bagal me hi he.


UPDATE-51

Hum sab wha se seedha Simra baaji ke pass aaye or Papa ka intezar krne lage todhi der me Papa bhi aa gye.

Me - Papa Kha reh gye the aap itni der se intezar kr rhe hai hum sab aapka

Papa- Are wo Chaupal pe kuch purane jaan pehchaan ke log mil gye the to gapshap me wakt ka pta hi nhi chla, kyu kya hua

Me- Papa hame bade papa ke ghar jana hia yad hai naa aapko

Papa- oh haa! Yad hai yad hai lekin fahad sach khu to meri himmat nhi ho rhi wha jane ki, tum to bhai sahab ko jaante hi ho kuch ulta seedha bol diya to,koi tamashaa kdha kr diya to?

Me- Papa, aap ghabraiye mat bade papa itne bhi bure nhi hai or agar unhone kuch keh bhi diya to sun lenge bade hai hamre or aap fikar mat kriye mai hoon naa aapke sath.

Papa- Thik hai tum kehte ho to chalte hai or kon aa rha hai sath me.

peeche se awaj aati hai hum sab.. tabhi simra baaji bolti hai,

Simra baaji - koi nhi jayega siwaye Fahad, Papa or Afsha ke,
ye sun ke sab ka muh latak jata hai..

Mai - Baaji ab ye kya baat hui kyu nhi jaa skte ye sab hamare sath

Simra baaji - Samjha kro Fahad tum sab thik krne jaa rhe ho bade papa ko manane jaa rhe ho baat krne jaa rhe ho or wha itne logo ke saamne baat nhi ho payegi shi se or agar bade papa ne in sab ke saamne papa ko kuch bol diya to wo bhi sun nhi payenge or tamashaa ho jayega, Or Tum or Afsha to pehle bhi jaa chuke ho wha isliye tum dono ka or papa ka jaan hi behtar hoga.

Me- thik hai baaji jaisa aapko thik lge

Papa- Mujhe bhi yhi shi laga rha hai

Me- Papa, Chachu kha hai wo to sath chal hi skte hai

Papa - Wo to subah hi Saher gya hua hai kisi kaam aate aate jyada der ho jayegi use

Me- thik hai to phir hum log hi chalte hai

Simra baaji - Fahad

Me- ji baaji

Simra baaji - Sambhal ke baat krna tum sab thik krne jaa rhe ho sabko pehle jaisa ek krne jaa rhe ho is baat ka dhyan rkhna or agar bde papa kuch khe to jawab mat dena

Me- baaji aap fikar naa kre hum bade papa ko mana ke hi aayenge or waise bhi wha mere support ke liye meri teen behne pehle se maujood hai

Simra Baaji - haan wo to hai chalo khair se jao or khair se aao

me- ji baaji

Nimra baaji- All the best

ye sun kar mai muskura diya,phir baaki sabne bhi hame all the best bola or phir mai papa or Afsha hum teeno nikal pade bade papa ke ghar jaane ko.

Raaste me mai sochne lga ki Papa or baaki sabko to hosla de diya hai lekin mujhe hosla kon dega phir maine aankhe band ki upar wale ka naam liya or man hi man bola jo hoga dekha jayega.

Todhi der bad hum teeno bade papa ke ghar ke bahar khade the hum teeno ne ek bar ek dusre ko dekha phir maine darwaza khat khataya todhi der baad Uzma baaji ne darwaza khola or hame dekha or unhe jaise yakeen hi nhi hua ki papa sach me aaye hai

Me- kya hua baaji

UZma baaji - kuch nhi Fahad aao, Salam chachu kaise hai aap

Papa- Salam beti badhiya hu tum btao kaisi ho.

Uzma Baaji - Thik hu Chachu

Me - Baaji bade papa hai naa ander

UZma baaji- haa hai chai pi rhe hai aaiye naa aaplog mai unko bulati hu

Me - Rukiye baaji abhi mat bulaiye pehle mai or Afsha jayenge andar or aap btana bhi mat ki papa bhi sath me aaye hai Papa aap todhi der baad aaiyega jab mai aawaz du aapko

Papa- Thik hai

fir mai uzma baaji or Afsha teeno baari baari se ander ki taraf jaane lage

Uzma baaji - Fahad Mujhe to yakeen hi nhi ho rha tu sach me chachu ko le aaya abbu ko manane

Me- baaji maine bola tha naa mai laungaa to le aaya aap log bas sath dena mera bde papa ko manane me

Uzma baaji- thik hai fahad hum hamesha tere saath hai bas sab thik kr de tu

ME - baaji sab thik ho jayega fikar mat kro aap
Aise hi baat krte hue hum andar aa gye .

Saamne dekha yo bde papa baith ke news dekh rhe the or chai pi rhe the maine unko salam kiya to unhone aaj ache se jawab diya
bade papa -Aao bachcho baitho

mai or Afsha baith gye

AFsha - baaji ghazala baaji or farheen kha hai

uzma baaji - dono apne room me hai jaa bula laa mai tab tak chai banati hu tum log ke liye

Afsha uth ke upar chali gy or uzma baaji kitchen me ab mai or bde papa akele reh gy waha...


Aage kya hoga, kya bde papa manenge ya koi tamashaa ho ye sab janne ke liye pade next Update or apna review bhi de ki maine kaisa likha hai ya koi galti hui ho to wo bhi btaye jo mai aage sudharungaa kyuki ye mai pehli baar likh rha hu.

Nice start

 

[Raj9977]

UPDATE - 52

Afsha uth ke upar chali gy or uzma baaji kitchen me ab mai or bde papa akele reh gye waha...

Ab Aage...

Bade Papa News dekh rhe the or mujhe samajh me nhi aa rha tha ki bat kaise shuru kru phir maine farm house jane ki permission se bat shuru krne ki thaani..

Me- Bade Papa

B.Papa- (News dekhte hue) Haa bolo

Me- Bade Papa, Aap se kuch Darkhwast (request) krna chahta hu.

B.Papa- Darkhwast! Wo bhi mujhse, kya baat hai bolo

Me- Bade Papa hum sab log ka farm house jane ka plan hai or mai chahta hu ki Aap ,Gazala baaji, Uzma baaji Or Farheen bhi saath chale,
Maine ye baat darte hue ek saans me bol diya.
Ye sun kar bade papa todha chowk gye lekin kuch bole nhi or khamosh ho kr sochne lge or udhar mujhe lgne lga ab to pakka bade papa daantne wale hai ki tabhi .

B.Papa- Fahad, tum Gazala, Uzma or Farheen ko le ke jaao mai nhi aa pungaa.

Ye sun kar mai todha chowka kyuki mujhe nhi lag rha tha ki bade papa itni asaani se permission denge, phir maine isi se aage baat badhane ka socha or himmat krke bola..

Me - lekin bade papa aap kyu nhi aayenge

B.Papa - Mujhe kuch kaam hai mujhe khi bahar jana hai

Me - lekin baaji to bta rhi thi ki aaj aapko khi nhi jaana

B.papa- ek jaroori kaam aa gya hai

Me - Khi aap Papa or chachu ki wajah se to nhi jana chahte ,
. Bade papa kuch nhi bole or uth ke jaane ko hue

Me - Aakhir ye kab tak chalega bade Papa Aapki, Papa or Chachu se Narajgi akhir aisi kon si wajah ho gy jisse aap un dono se itna naraz hai Aakhir kya galti ho gy jisse aap log ek dusre ko dekhna bhi pasand nhi krte

B.Papa - Mai tumhare sawaal ka jawab nhi dena chahta
. Mai himmat krke
Me- kyu! Kyu nhi de skte aap jawab mere sawal ka bde papa aisa kya ho gya btaiye mujhe bataiye ( Mere andar pta nhi kha se himmat aa rhi thi baat krne ki aise )

B.Papa(gusse me chillate hue)- Bas! Bhot ho gya Fahad,
. Bade Papa ke aise gusse me chillane se upar se Gazala baaji, Afsha or Farheen daudte hue neeche aaye or uzma baaji kitchen se bhagte hue aai ye janne ko ki hua kya, Awaaz Papa tak bhi phochi wo andar aane wale the lekin unko meri baat yad aa gy ki jab mai awaaz du tbhi aaiyega to wo ruk gye

B.papa-bhot bahes kar chuke fahad tum tumahre liye yhi acha hoga ki ab tum chup ho jao
.
Me- nhi chup houngaa mai aapko btana hoga aisi kon si galti ho gy hamse jo aapne hame paraya kar diya

sab mujhe dekh rhe the lekin koi bol nhi rha tha, ki tbhi "Chataak" se ek thappad me gaal pe padta hai jo bde papa ne maara tha or pura hall gunj uthta hai baaki log bhi sahem jate hai

B.Papa- Chup! Janna hai naa kya narazgi hai kya galti hue hai to jaa jaake apne baap or chachu se puch wo btayenge tujhe
. Tbhi peeche se aawaj aati hai ,mujhe bhi nhi pta bhai sahab kya galti ho gy mujhse.....

Papa ander aa chuke the thappad or chillane ki awaj se unhe sabr nhi hua or wo khud ko rok nhi paaye

B.Papa- Tum! Tum yha kya kr rhe ho

Papa- Fahad laaya hai mujhe apne saath ye bolke ki bde papa ko manate hai phir narazgi or gile shikwe khatam krte hai Mai to aane wala nhi tha lekin isne mujhse bola bde papa gussa hai to kya hua wo bde hai unka hal hai gussa hona ham chote hai hamara farz hai unko manana ye bachcha hame ek krne ki koshish kr rha hai or aapne ise hi thappad maar diya bhai sahab mai poochta aisi kon si galti ho gy thi mujhse or chote se jo aap gussa ho aapne jo bhi baap dada ki jameen bachi thi aapne rakh li maine or chote ne kuch nhi bola, iske baad bhi aapne hamse rishta tod liya hamse baat krna band kr diya or aaj jab ye bachcha sab thik krne ki koshis me lga hai to aap use bhi maar diya Chalo fahad dekh liya tumne natiza.

Me- Nhi papa mai nhi jaungaa Bade papa hai wo mere thappad kya jaan se bhi maar de to bhi uff nhi krunga lekin jab tak nhi manenge tab tak nhi jaungaa

mai bde papa se

Me- bde papa mai bas itna hi to chahta hu ki ham sab pehle ki tarah saath rhe saare gile sikhwe bhool kar ek ho jaye kya itna jyada maang liya maine mai apni saari behno ko khus dekhna chahta hu apni family ko ek sath dekhna chahta hu kya mera ye sochna galat hai ye bolte hue meri aankho me aansu aa gye ,

meri aankho me aansu dekh ke gazala baaji se rha nhi gya or unhone himmat karke bde papa se bola

G.Baazi- Abbu fahad shi keh rha hai aapsi narazgi me kisi ka fayeda nhi hai aaplog ki narazgi ke chalte ham bhai bahene aapas me saalo se baat nhi kr paye apne hote hue bhi praye hone lage wo to fahad aa gya to milna shuru or ab hum log bhi sath rehna chahte hai sabke

Uzma baaji- Haa abbu maan jaiye

Farheen- Haa abbu mai bhi yhi chahti hu or mai apne bhai ko rota nhi dekh skti

Papa- Bhai sahab agar aapko lagta hai ki hamari galti hai to mai mere or chote ki taraf aapse maafi maangta or agar aap khenge to aap ke pair bhi pakadne ko taiyar hu bas fahad ki baat maan lijiye mai use rota nhi dekh skta..
ye keh kr papa nam aankho se bde papa ke pair ki taraf bade ki tbhi tabhi bade papa ne beech me hi unka hath pakad kr upar uthaya

B.papa- khabardaar jo pair chua bhi to bete ke aankh aansu dikh gya bade bhai ki nam aankhe nhi dikhi
ye bol kar bde papa ne papa ko gale lga liya or dono zor zor se rone lage .

un dono ko rota dekha baaki sabki aankhe bhi nam ho gy.

B.Papa- Inaayat mujhe maaf kr do bhai mai logo ke chadhawe me aakar tumse or chotey se rishta tod liya bahari logo ke bahkawe me aa kar us waqt jab tum log itna pareshan the saari zameen le li ye bhi naa socha bachcho ka kya hoga baad me jab fahad bahar job krne gya or tumlogo ne purani zameen jaydad phir se kharidna shuru kiya to logo ne mujhe or bhadkaya or mai unki baato me aake tum logo ko ghamandi samjhne lga lekin aaj meri aankhe khul mujhe maaf kr do bhai.

Papa- Maafi mat mangiye bhai sahab aap bade hai galti hum log ki bhi hai ki jab aapne bolna chodha to hame bhi aapke pass bat krne ke liye or samjhane ke liye aana chahiye lekin mai or chote aap gusse ki wajah se himmat nhi kr paye

B.Papa - Nhi galti meri hai bina soche samjhe bahari logo ki bato me aayega Fahad mujhe maaf krde beta maine tujh par hath uthaya

Me- bde papa aap maafi mat mangiye plz aap bde hai or mai aapni family ko ek krne aise 100 thappad bhi kha skta hu

B.papa- Suna Inayat aaj Fahad ne hume badi baat sikha di ki family se badh ke kuch nhi


Tbhi Farheen bolti hai

Farheen - Abbu, chachu, bhai aap sab ab bas kriye warna yha pe baad aa jayegi

Ye sunkar sab chehre pe hasi aa gy or Bde papa ne uske sar pe halki si chapat lga di phir wo uzma baaji se bole .

B.papa- Uzma Meetha lao aaj khusi ka din
. Uzma baaji daud ke sabke liye mithai or paani wagaira le ke aai gazala baaji ne farheen ko sabke liye chai bnane ko bola or mere pass aake baith gy mujhse boli

G.Baaji - Fahad jra mere room me chalna ek samaan utarna hai upar se.

Me- ji baaji
Ye keh kar mai unke saath upar unke kamre me jane laga Gazala baaji aage aage chal rhi thi or mai peeche maine notice kiya unki chaal ab todha theek ho gy hai, upar phoch kr gazala baaji pehle room me gy fir unke peeche jaise hi mai unke room ghusa unhone darwaza band kiya or mujhe gale se laga liya or subakne lgi ye sab itna jaldi hua ki mujhe samjhne me time lga

Me - baaji kya hua


G.baaji- Fahad mai bhot khush hu tune aaj bhot acha kaam kiya i am proud of u tumne apni family ko ek kr diya shukriya

Me- baaji isme Shukriya kaisa ye to mera farz tha or waise bhi maine ye sab aapke liye hi to kiya hai

G.baaji- Mere liye Matlab?

Me- Matlab ye ki ab jab hum sab sath rahenge to mai jab chahu jha chahu apni pakiza bahen ki garmi ko dur kar skta hu ye keh ke mai has diya,
Gazala baaji ne jab ye suna to unka chehra sharam se laal ho gya or wo mujhe seene halke haath se marne lgi or boli
G.baaji- Tu bhot badmash hai tere dimag me har waqt whi chalta hai gandaa khi ka or waise bhi abhi kuch nhi ho skta kyuki abhi bhi mujhe todha dard hai wha pe or sujan to bhot jyada hai

Me- baaji dard to mai mita dungaa baaki aap sujan dikhao pehle mujhe .

ye keh kr mai unki salwar ko pakadne ki koshish krne laga to unhone hath pakad liya or boli nhi fahad abhi nhi sab hai neeche

Me- Phir kab baaji

G.baaji- baad me

Me - thik hai par ek kiss to le hi skta hu mai ye keh apne teji se unka chehra apne hath me liya or apne honth ko unke hontho se mila diye,

. Ye sab itni teeji hua ki baaji kuch samjh nhi lekin jab samjh aaya to wo bhi mera sath dene lgi hum dono ke honth aapas me chumbak ki tarah chipke hue the kbhi mai unke neeche wale honth ko apne dono hontho ke beech me leke chusta to kbhi upar wale ko phir maine upar wale honth me chuste hue apni jaban baaji ke muh ander krne lga jaise hi baaji ko iska pta chala unhone apne dono honto se meri zaban ko pakad liya or use chusne lgi

Hum dono ek dusre me bilkul kho gye the ki tbhi room ke bahar se afsha ki aawaj aai baaji fahad neeche sab bula rhe hai
Hum dono jaldi se alag hue baaji ne apne aapko thik or darwaza khola or boli haa chalo baaji tezi se neeche jane lgi mai bhi bahar aaya to dekha Afsha ne mujhe dekh kr muskura kr aankh maari to mai bhi muskura diya or phir hum log neeche aa gye phir sabne chai piya sath me or maine or Papa ne sabko Kal raat ko khaane pe bulaya ghar pe fir hum log apne ghar ko nikal gye...



Aage kya hoga uske liye next Update

Nice update.

 

[Rony 007]

Nice update

 

[Nimesh]

Update

 

[Nadeem440]

Nice update sir
Waiting for next update sir

 

[Sonieee]

Stories ko aage badhane ke liye sukriya, ye bhi ek brethren stories h.

 

[Sing is king 42]

Superb update