Nice update....Update 4
Kuch time baad mummy kitchen se khaana lekar aayi aur apne haathon se mujhe butter chicken aur rice khilane lagi, poore 5 saalon ke baad aaj bhi bilkul waisa hi swad tha maine apni college life me mummy ke haathon ke khaane ka swad sabse jyada miss kiya tha
Ab aage-
Mujhe khaana khilane ke baad mummy kitchen me chali gayi main toh bas apni mummy ke khayalon me hi dooba hua tha main soch raha tha ki mummy ki aisi kya majboori rahi hogi ki woh chacha aur mausa ji ke saath chudai kar rahi thi ya phir woh ek randi aur dhokhebaaz aurat hai jisko bas lund se matlab hai ya phir papa ke lund me dam nahi hai isliye woh chacha aur mausa ji ke lund ka sahara le rahi hain mera dimaag kaafi saare sawalon se bhara hua tha ab maine soch liya tha ki poori sacchayi jaane bina main chain se nahi baithunga.....
Kuch der baad mummy kitchen se bahar aayi aur bathroom me ghus gayi lekin unhone door lock nahi kiya shayad unhein bahut jor se peshaab lagi thi tabhi mujhe mummy ke mootne ki awaj sunayi di unki chut bahut jor jor se siti maar rahi thi mummy ki phooli hui chut kaise peshaab ki pichkaari maar rahi hogi ye drishya sochkar mera lund khada ho gaya
Phir mummy bathroom se bahar aayi aur living hall me sofe par mujhse chipak kar baith gayi
Mummy- beta ab toh tum jawan ho gaye ho tumhari koi girlfriend hai ya nahi ?
Me- girlfriend! nahi toh
Mummy- kyu?
Mummy ki baatein sunkar mujhe ajeeb laga ki woh itni romantic kyu ho rahi hai khair maine socha ki main bhi thoda maza leta hoon agar unhein bura lagega toh sorry bol dunga
Me- jiski mummy itni sundar ho usko girlfriend ki kya jarurat.....
Mummy- rehne do! aaj girlfriend nahi hai toh tumhe mera khyal nahi rehta kal tumhari biwi aa jayegi toh kahan tum mera dhyan rakhoge.....
Me- app jaise sundar mummy ke liye toh aisi 100 biwiyan kurbaan hain
Maine thodi himmat dikhayi aur mummy ki jaanghon par haath rakh diya
Mummy- dramebaaz kahin ka! kabhi socha hai ki tumhari mummy ghar me kitna lonely mehsoos karti hai
Me- i am sorry mummy main maanta hoon ki isme meri bhi galti hai ab aage se aapka beta poora khyal rakhega aur aapko shikayat ka koi mauka nahi dega aapki jo bhi icchhayein hain bata dijiye main aapki sabhi khwaishein poori karne ki koshish karunga
Mummy- ye hui na baat! pehle toh tum bas mujhe apni bike se ek long drive par le chalo lekin tumhe apni bhaari bharkam mummy ko bike par baitha ke le jaane me sharam toh nahi aayegi
main mummy ki jaanghon ko bade pyaar se sehlane laga
Me- aap bhi na mummy! aap kitni khoobsurat hain aapko bike par baitha ke le jaane me mujhe bhala sharam kyu aayegi, main aapko bike se parso ek long drive par lekar chalunga.....
Mummy- woh main kitni moti ho gayi hoon maine socha ki shayad tumhe acchha nahi lage.....
Me- aisi koi baat nahi hai mummy! shayad aap nahi jaanti ki mujhe aap jaisi auratein hi acchhi lagti hai jab bhi meri shaadi karna toh apne jaisi bhare hue shareer wali aurat se hi karna.....
Mummy- main apne jaisi bhare hue shareer wali aurat se tumhari shaadi karwa dungi toh tum mujhe bhool mat jaana!
Me- mummy aapko toh main zindagi bhar apne dil me hi rakhunga phir chahe aap mere liye kitni bhi khoobsurat aurat le aao....
Mummy- kya sach me itni acchhi lagti hoon tumhe main?
Me- aap is duniya ki sabse jyada khoobsurat aurat hain.....
Tabhi achanak mummy TV me news channel par khabar dekhne lagi jisme bata rahe the ki ek aurat ke saath uske bete aur uske doston ne g#ngr#pe kiya mujhe jor se peshaab lag rahi thi toh main living hall wale bathroom me chala gaya mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha tha ki mummy mujhse itni open-minded baatein kyu kar rahi hain jaroor koi na koi wajah hai.....
jaise hi main mootne laga toh mujhe mummy ki gulabi panty dikhayi di jo ki bucket me dhone ke liye rakhi hui thi maine turant unki panty ko utha liya uski chut ki taraf wala hissa bahut chipchipa sa tha matlab mummy sofe par saree ke andar bilkul nangi baithi hai aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki do lund se chudwane ke baad bhi mummy bahut chudasi ho rahi hai aisa sochte hue main mummy ki panty soonghne laga unki chut ki mast madak gandh aur peshaab ki gandh dono tarah ki khushboo se mera lund salami dene laga kuch time aise hi main mummy ki panty ko soonghte hue dekhta raha uske baad maine unki panty ko bucket me rakh diya aur bathroom se bahar nikal gaya phir wapas se mummy ke saath sofe par baith gaya woh TV me news channel par chal rahi khabar ko dhyan se sun rahi thi
Mummy- aajkal toh jahan dekho bas r#pe ki khabarein hi chalti rehti hain kuch log toh apne hi ghar ki auraton ko nahi chhodte hain, dekh kya dikha rahe hain ki ek bete ne apni maa ko nangi karke apne doston ke saath uska r#pe kiya aise bete ko toh fansi honi chahiye
Me- aapki baat bilkul theek hai lekin aajkal ki auratein bhi kam nahi hain , kuch mahine purani hi ek khabar hai ki ek maa apne hi ghar ke do rishtedaron ke saath nangi so rahi thi toh uske bete ne dekh liya aur apne baap ko sab kuch bata diya phir us aurat ke khilaaf uske pati ne police complain bhi karwayi lekin woh ek aurat thi isliye police ne koi action nahi liya waise bhi kisi ke saath apni marzi se sona koi jurm nahi hai lekin aap khud batao ki aisi aurat ko kya saza milni chahiye.....
ab mummy aisi situation me fas gayi thi jahan se nikalna unke liye bahut mushkil tha
Mummy- beta aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki us aurat ki koi majboori rahi hogi ya phir uske ghar ke woh dono rishtedar usko kisi baat ke liye blackmail kar rahe ho ya phir aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki uska pati khud kisi dusri aurat ke saath muh maarta ho isliye woh aurat majboor ho gayi ho un dono aadmiyon ke saath sone ke liye.....
Mummy ki baaton se mujhe itna toh clear ho gaya tha ki chacha aur mausa ji ke saath chudai karna ya toh mummy ki majboori hai ya phir woh dono unhein blackmail kar rahe hain lekin ek baar mujhe samajh me nahi aayi ki mummy ne aisa kyu kaha ki "us aurat ka pati khud kisi dusri aurat ke saath muh maarta ho" kahin iska matlab papa toh nahi kisi dusri aurat ke saath.....
mujhe laga ki main kuch jyada hi soch raha hoon aisa nahi ho sakta!
Me- chhodo na mummy! ek news ki wajah se aap kyu apna mood off kar rahi ho, ab aap thoda rest kar lijiye main rohan se milne ke liye uske ghar ja raha hoon.....
phir mummy apne room me sone chali gayi aur maine TV band kar diya.....
Kuch der baad main apni bike se rohan se milne uske ghar ki taraf nikal gaya
waise main bata doon ki rohan south delhi me rehta hai aur uski mummy yani shashi aunty politician hain uska ghar kisi mahal se kam nahi hai halanki uske ghar me bas woh aur uski mummy hi rehte hai
agar aapko typical family drama padhna hai toh aap bilkul sahi jagah aaye ho but sorry to say ki pichhli baar jaisi love story create karna is baar possible nahi hai utna likhne me bahut time lagta haiवैसे तो फिर से सनी, सोनिया और कविता जैसा love story create कर पाना बहुत कठिन है,
पर फिर भी मैं चाहता हूं की उसी प्रकार की सीधी साधी फैमिली ड्रामा पढ़ू, एकदम वास्तविकता के करीब
No six ABS no filthy richness, no extra flaunt
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Bakwaas. Bhai likh to achchha rahe the lekin magic nahi laana chahiye tha. Magic nahi aata to kahani reality lagati. Magic se achchha to scientific kar dete achchha rahta.
Khair aap writer ho kuchh bhi likh sakte ho
Bhai magic se achcha Jaise pahla part aapka usi tarah kuchh likhate to jyada achcha rahata aur usmein incest ho to aur maja a jaaye please bhai aur update thoda speed agar ho sake to request
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ptaa nahi mai kitne din se wait kar Raha tha
Please Please is kahani ko regularly start Karo.
Waise bhi is forum me bahut kam acchi kahani hai.
Please please
Main kisi ke kehne se motivate hone wala writer nahi hoon Rekha rani ji , main apne according hi likhunga bas kuch alag likhne ka soch raha tha but itna time nahi hai isliye woh magic wala portion maine hata diyaUnke khud ke msg dekho ek ne pahla comment aapko kahani par kiya dusra bhi sirf 20 msg hi kr paya hai kya hi inko malum kahani kaise likhte hai
pichhli story me toh starting me mujhe incest walon se bahut gaaliyan padi thi , main bas sex nahi likhta hoon , thoda wait kariye patience rakhiye dhere dhere interest banne lagegaKahani bahut boring hai pichle jaisa nahi hai
Agr itna drama aur magic likhna hai to movie likhiye yaha log bas sex stories padhne aate hain
हां मुझे पता है की वैसी love story फिर से लिख पाना मुश्किल काम है, but फिर भी मुझे लगता है की कोमल और सत्यम के बीच एक अच्छी लव स्टोरी जरूर create की जा सकती है।agar aapko typical family drama padhna hai toh aap bilkul sahi jagah aaye ho but sorry to say ki pichhli baar jaisi love story create karna is baar possible nahi hai utna likhne me bahut time lagta hai
Nice update....Update 4
Kuch time baad mummy kitchen se khaana lekar aayi aur apne haathon se mujhe butter chicken aur rice khilane lagi, poore 5 saalon ke baad aaj bhi bilkul waisa hi swad tha maine apni college life me mummy ke haathon ke khaane ka swad sabse jyada miss kiya tha
Ab aage-
Mujhe khaana khilane ke baad mummy kitchen me chali gayi main toh bas apni mummy ke khayalon me hi dooba hua tha main soch raha tha ki mummy ki aisi kya majboori rahi hogi ki woh chacha aur mausa ji ke saath chudai kar rahi thi ya phir woh ek randi aur dhokhebaaz aurat hai jisko bas lund se matlab hai ya phir papa ke lund me dam nahi hai isliye woh chacha aur mausa ji ke lund ka sahara le rahi hain mera dimaag kaafi saare sawalon se bhara hua tha ab maine soch liya tha ki poori sacchayi jaane bina main chain se nahi baithunga.....
Kuch der baad mummy kitchen se bahar aayi aur bathroom me ghus gayi lekin unhone door lock nahi kiya shayad unhein bahut jor se peshaab lagi thi tabhi mujhe mummy ke mootne ki awaj sunayi di unki chut bahut jor jor se siti maar rahi thi mummy ki phooli hui chut kaise peshaab ki pichkaari maar rahi hogi ye drishya sochkar mera lund khada ho gaya
Phir mummy bathroom se bahar aayi aur living hall me sofe par mujhse chipak kar baith gayi
Mummy- beta ab toh tum jawan ho gaye ho tumhari koi girlfriend hai ya nahi ?
Me- girlfriend! nahi toh
Mummy- kyu?
Mummy ki baatein sunkar mujhe ajeeb laga ki woh itni romantic kyu ho rahi hai khair maine socha ki main bhi thoda maza leta hoon agar unhein bura lagega toh sorry bol dunga
Me- jiski mummy itni sundar ho usko girlfriend ki kya jarurat.....
Mummy- rehne do! aaj girlfriend nahi hai toh tumhe mera khyal nahi rehta kal tumhari biwi aa jayegi toh kahan tum mera dhyan rakhoge.....
Me- app jaise sundar mummy ke liye toh aisi 100 biwiyan kurbaan hain
Maine thodi himmat dikhayi aur mummy ki jaanghon par haath rakh diya
Mummy- dramebaaz kahin ka! kabhi socha hai ki tumhari mummy ghar me kitna lonely mehsoos karti hai
Me- i am sorry mummy main maanta hoon ki isme meri bhi galti hai ab aage se aapka beta poora khyal rakhega aur aapko shikayat ka koi mauka nahi dega aapki jo bhi icchhayein hain bata dijiye main aapki sabhi khwaishein poori karne ki koshish karunga
Mummy- ye hui na baat! pehle toh tum bas mujhe apni bike se ek long drive par le chalo lekin tumhe apni bhaari bharkam mummy ko bike par baitha ke le jaane me sharam toh nahi aayegi
main mummy ki jaanghon ko bade pyaar se sehlane laga
Me- aap bhi na mummy! aap kitni khoobsurat hain aapko bike par baitha ke le jaane me mujhe bhala sharam kyu aayegi, main aapko bike se parso ek long drive par lekar chalunga.....
Mummy- woh main kitni moti ho gayi hoon maine socha ki shayad tumhe acchha nahi lage.....
Me- aisi koi baat nahi hai mummy! shayad aap nahi jaanti ki mujhe aap jaisi auratein hi acchhi lagti hai jab bhi meri shaadi karna toh apne jaisi bhare hue shareer wali aurat se hi karna.....
Mummy- main apne jaisi bhare hue shareer wali aurat se tumhari shaadi karwa dungi toh tum mujhe bhool mat jaana!
Me- mummy aapko toh main zindagi bhar apne dil me hi rakhunga phir chahe aap mere liye kitni bhi khoobsurat aurat le aao....
Mummy- kya sach me itni acchhi lagti hoon tumhe main?
Me- aap is duniya ki sabse jyada khoobsurat aurat hain.....
Tabhi achanak mummy TV me news channel par khabar dekhne lagi jisme bata rahe the ki ek aurat ke saath uske bete aur uske doston ne g#ngr#pe kiya mujhe jor se peshaab lag rahi thi toh main living hall wale bathroom me chala gaya mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha tha ki mummy mujhse itni open-minded baatein kyu kar rahi hain jaroor koi na koi wajah hai.....
jaise hi main mootne laga toh mujhe mummy ki gulabi panty dikhayi di jo ki bucket me dhone ke liye rakhi hui thi maine turant unki panty ko utha liya uski chut ki taraf wala hissa bahut chipchipa sa tha matlab mummy sofe par saree ke andar bilkul nangi baithi hai aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki do lund se chudwane ke baad bhi mummy bahut chudasi ho rahi hai aisa sochte hue main mummy ki panty soonghne laga unki chut ki mast madak gandh aur peshaab ki gandh dono tarah ki khushboo se mera lund salami dene laga kuch time aise hi main mummy ki panty ko soonghte hue dekhta raha uske baad maine unki panty ko bucket me rakh diya aur bathroom se bahar nikal gaya phir wapas se mummy ke saath sofe par baith gaya woh TV me news channel par chal rahi khabar ko dhyan se sun rahi thi
Mummy- aajkal toh jahan dekho bas r#pe ki khabarein hi chalti rehti hain kuch log toh apne hi ghar ki auraton ko nahi chhodte hain, dekh kya dikha rahe hain ki ek bete ne apni maa ko nangi karke apne doston ke saath uska r#pe kiya aise bete ko toh fansi honi chahiye
Me- aapki baat bilkul theek hai lekin aajkal ki auratein bhi kam nahi hain , kuch mahine purani hi ek khabar hai ki ek maa apne hi ghar ke do rishtedaron ke saath nangi so rahi thi toh uske bete ne dekh liya aur apne baap ko sab kuch bata diya phir us aurat ke khilaaf uske pati ne police complain bhi karwayi lekin woh ek aurat thi isliye police ne koi action nahi liya waise bhi kisi ke saath apni marzi se sona koi jurm nahi hai lekin aap khud batao ki aisi aurat ko kya saza milni chahiye.....
ab mummy aisi situation me fas gayi thi jahan se nikalna unke liye bahut mushkil tha
Mummy- beta aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki us aurat ki koi majboori rahi hogi ya phir uske ghar ke woh dono rishtedar usko kisi baat ke liye blackmail kar rahe ho ya phir aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki uska pati khud kisi dusri aurat ke saath muh maarta ho isliye woh aurat majboor ho gayi ho un dono aadmiyon ke saath sone ke liye.....
Mummy ki baaton se mujhe itna toh clear ho gaya tha ki chacha aur mausa ji ke saath chudai karna ya toh mummy ki majboori hai ya phir woh dono unhein blackmail kar rahe hain lekin ek baar mujhe samajh me nahi aayi ki mummy ne aisa kyu kaha ki "us aurat ka pati khud kisi dusri aurat ke saath muh maarta ho" kahin iska matlab papa toh nahi kisi dusri aurat ke saath.....
mujhe laga ki main kuch jyada hi soch raha hoon aisa nahi ho sakta!
Me- chhodo na mummy! ek news ki wajah se aap kyu apna mood off kar rahi ho, ab aap thoda rest kar lijiye main rohan se milne ke liye uske ghar ja raha hoon.....
phir mummy apne room me sone chali gayi aur maine TV band kar diya.....
Kuch der baad main apni bike se rohan se milne uske ghar ki taraf nikal gaya
waise main bata doon ki rohan south delhi me rehta hai aur uski mummy yani shashi aunty politician hain uska ghar kisi mahal se kam nahi hai halanki uske ghar me bas woh aur uski mummy hi rehte hai