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Non-Erotic PASCHATAP (restarting)

Koun sa character aapko acha laga

  • Krish

    Votes: 9 81.8%
  • Ankan

    Votes: 5 45.5%
  • Raj

    Votes: 4 36.4%
  • Kyle

    Votes: 4 36.4%
  • Vivek

    Votes: 5 45.5%

  • Total voters
    11

Swaraj

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Bless this story guys
Like my other stories

Characters
Dhruv-business tycoon and son of amitabh and suchitra ganguly

Sharon-wife of dhruv .dhruv se bohut pyaar karti hai

Ankan-dhruv ka chota bhai aur story ka ek perfectionist

Vivek-kamal ka brilliant student.
Lekin ek number ka darpok

Raj saxena-ankan aur Kyle ka dost.ek.numbrr ka playboy aur dilfenk type ka hai

Kyle-attitude, ghamand aur nafrat yahi Kyle ko define karta hai

Dheeraj saxena-raj ka bada bhai,apne paiso ke bal par sab kaam ho jaayega sochne wala insaan.ghamandi type ka

Krish-ek sadist jo apne pyaar ka gam bhool aage badhna chahta hai

5 logo ki kahani jo ek khoon ke jurm me arrest kar.liye jaate hai
Aur saza ke taur par samaj seva aur apni padhai india me karne par force kiye jaate hai
Jahan ek khoonkhar thakur ka Raaj chalta hai
 
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Paschatap start ho gyi :toohappy:
:congrats: sir for new thread
 

Swaraj

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pyare doston.is story ko padhne se pehle please meri story
"Badla" zaroor padhen.kyunki kuch situation aur characters wahi se liye gaye hai
Waise dono story alaghai.lekin fir bhi agar aap is story ko padhenge to is story me maza aayega



UPDATE 1
baarish rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi
Aur isi baarish ke beech aaj police headquarters me meeting chal rahi thi

"Kai sadiyon ke baad aisi aandhi aur baarish aayi hai,hai na madam??"commissioner sahab bole

"Sir mudde par aate hai please"college ke principal nirmala yadav boli

"Mudda aapko pata hi hai"commissioner sahab muskurakar bole

"Court ke aadesh anusar aapko 3 bacchon ko apne college me admission dena hai madam.aur aapko apne school me admission dena hai sir"dahlia high ki aur ishara karte hue inspector mukesh rana bole

"Dekhiye inspector is school me bohut naami girami ghar ke students padhai karte hai.hum sirf court ke aadesh par kisi ko admission nahi de sakte"Avishek Dubey bole

"Hmm lekin koi raasta nahi hai high court ka aadesh hai manna to padega hi,waise abhi tak ye saabit nahi hua hai poori tarah ki khoon in logo ne hi kiya hai"commissioner raman bassi bole

Sab chup the koi.sirf baarishon ki awaz hi a rahi thi

"Khair bachhein a jayenge ek hafte ke ander"inspector bole

"Hame izazat dijiye sir,namaste"nirmala yadav haath jodte hue boli

Meeting khatam hui.aur shayad kalankit hogi is college ki parampara.sadiyon se chali a rahi pratishtha aaj apna dum.tod degi
3 khooniyon ka admission sirf isliye ho gaya kyunki court ka manna hai ki bachhon ko sudharne ka mauka milna chahiye.waise bhi sab ke sab american NRI hai.lekin hai to khooni hi
Shayad ab college ko sambhalna mushkil ho jayega
Retirement nazdeek a raha hai.

"Madam kuch hua"bahar khade kuch teachers nirmala madam ko meeting se aate dekhkar pooch baithe

"Mere haath me nahi tha mishra ji"nirmala yadav ek feeki muskurahat ke saath boli

"Hey bhagwan.ab in khooniyon ko bhi padhana padega Humein??"mishra ji aatankit hokar bole

"Lekin court aisa kaise kar sakta hai,kam se kam hamari raay to poochh leta"lata madam is baar boli

Nirmala yadav ko pata tha ki abhi kisi ko samjhaya nahi ja sakta
Court ne saaf saaf keh diya hai ki ki saare aropi ko isi college me admission diya jayega,jisse wo apne aap ko sudhar sake
Saath me ek ghanta samajik kaam bhi karna hoga

"Madam to abhi kya karenge??"abha madam boli

"Kuch nahi jo bola hai court ne us par amal to karna hi hoga"bol tezi se nikal gayi nirmala madam
Shayad sabse bachne ke liye

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3 MONTHS BACK(TEEN MAHINE PEHLE)

dear krish,
Samajh sakti hoon tum busy ho.shayad bohut busy.isliye to ek relationship me time de nahi paye.jab india aaye the dhruv bhaiyya ke saath tab humne kitna acha waqt bitaya.shayad wo hamare life ka sabse acha pal tha.lekin time ke saath hamara relationship kadwa hota gaya.dosh tum par nahi dalungi.
Riya didi ke mout ke baad hamare parivar ne tumhare pariwar ke saath saara rishta shayad khatam sa kar diya hai
Tum abhi zimmedari nahi uthana chahte meri.ghar me mere rishte ki baat ho rahi thi tab se tumhe bata rahi hoon.lekin tum par asar nahi hua.
Meri shaadi jo rahi hai krish.ladka acha hai.mere past ke saath accept kar raha hai mujhe.please apne life me tum bhi aage badho.mujhe bhool jao.ek bure sapne ki tarah

Tumhari
Ruhi

Gaadi full power par daud rahi thi
"K krish b bhaiyya please zara dheere chalaiye na.d darr lag raha hai"vivek bola

"Carry on.abhi to maza a raha hai bro"raj bola

"Nahi krish bhaiyya gaadi sachmuch bohut speed se ja rahi hai aap control me nahi ho.kyle kuch bol na"ankan bola

"Mai kya bolu,mujhe beer peene de"kyle bole

"Tujhe to kuch bhi....OMG krish bhaiyyaaa dekhke....."

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BHADAAAAAAM

ek zordar takkar ke baad sab shant ho gaya
 

kamdev99008

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:congrats: swaraj bhai paschatap shuru karne par.... Ek bar fir se

Badla puri hone ke bad ise padhne ka bahut man tha... Lekin.. Xossip ne hi sath chhod diya......

Ab xf... Usse bhi bada aur behtar foum bankar aya hai.... Hum purane dosto ki purani yadein taza karne ko
Keep it up
 
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Swaraj

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:congrats: swaraj bhai paschatap shuru karne par.... Ek bar fir se

Badla puri hone ke bad ise padhne ka bahut man tha... Lekin.. Xossip ne hi sath chhod diya......

Ab xf... Usse bhi bada aur behtar foum bankar aya hai.... Hum purane dosto ki purani yadein taza karne ko
Keep it up
Thanks a lot bro
Ye story Meri dream story thi us time par
Isliye is par zyada mehnat karna chahta hoon
Halki idhar udhar twist rahegi aur story ke characters shayad halke change ho jaaye
Baaki sab aap logo ka pyaar aise hi banaye rakhe
Saath rahiye
 
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Swaraj

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"holy shit"raj ki utar gayi

"Wtf"kyle ka beer ka bottle bhi haatho se choot gaya

"T takkar lagi takk takkar lagi"vivek chillaya

"Sshh sab thik hai??"ankan ne poochha

Kisi ne kuch nahi kaha.sab gaadi se utar gaye.ek bike giri hui mili.aur sawar kuch door chitakte hue dikha unhen

"K khoon khoon nikal raha hai ankan bhaiyya"vivek dar ke mare thar thar kaampne laga

"Krish bhaiyya apne aap ko sambhaliye"ankan krish ko sahara dekha wapas gaadi me baithaya

"Kya karenge guys??bura fans gaye"raj bola

"Wapas chalo shaadi me"kyle bola

"Kyle ise bachaya ja sakta hai"ankan ne protest kiya

"Bakwas mat kar ankan,teri har baat nahi maani jayegi"kyle ankan ke saamne aakar khada ho gaya

"Guys for God's sake lado mat please ,abhi kya karna hai jaldi bolo.udhar karan bhaiyya ki shaadi hone wali hai"raj bola

"Meri langdi behen ke saath"kyle kadwahat ke saath bola

"Wtf kyle Teri behen hai,badi behen"ankan bola

"Meri koi behen nahi hai.wo langdi meri behen nahi hai.samjha tu na meri koi maa hai na behen"kyle gala faad kar bola

"Guys tum sab chale jao.isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai.mai yahan rehta hoon.meri galti ki saza tum kyun sahoge"pehli Baar krish bola

"Krish bhaiyya..."raj ne bolna chaha

"Sahi keh rahe hai.galti unki hum kyun bhagidar bane??chalo wapas unhen yahi rehne do"kyle bola

"Dil naam ki koi cheez nahi hai kyle tere ander??"ankan hairan tha kyle ko dekhkar.waise bachpan se hi dekhta aaya hai is ladke ko.lafantar type ka
Dont care wala attitude.kisi se nahi banti kyle ki.ankan se nafrat bhi karta hai.lekin fir ankan ke bina duniya bhi nahi chalti iski

"Are ab kya karein koi kuch to bolo"vivek sar pakad kar baith gaya

"Kyle ka kehna sahi hai pehle shaadi me wapas chalte hai baaki dekha jayega,jagah sunsan hai"raj bola

Vivek ne haan me haan milati.thak haarkar krish ko bhi inki baat manni padi aur sab wapas chale karan ki shaadi ke liye
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"Sharon ,dhruv abhi tak nahi aaya??"suchitra ganguly boli

"Maa wo a jayenge,aapko to pata hai na kitna kaam rehta hai"sharon ne muskurate hue kaha
Saree me Kamaal ki lag rahi thi sharon aaj

"Hun tujhe bhi to kaam rehta hai beta,tu bhi to events sambhalti hai.sirf ye baap bete busy rehte hai,waise kahan hai dhruv ke papa??"suchitra boli

"Wo apne doston ke saath carrom board me lage hue hai"sharon haste hue boli

"Sab ke sab nikamme ek number ke.kitna kaam pada hua hai.karan ke saath dhruv,vishal ya kisi ko to rehna chahiye tha na??"suchitra boli

"Aap na aaram karo aunty ,hum hai na "nivedita boli.tanya bhi saath thi

"Waise sharon tu halka fulka make up to kar le.hum dekh lenge tu ja"tanya boli

Sharon ko ye sahi laga.subah se lagi hui thi.sab decoration aur sab kuch apni dekh rekh me kar rahi thi
Tired bhi ho gayi thi

Room me jaate hi dhruv ka suit dikha sharon ko.shayad fresh hone wash room gaya hua hai
To janab ko aane ka waqt mil hi gaya,sharon muskurai.shaadi ke do saal pata nahi kab nikal gaye

Tabhi peeche se dhruv ne sharon ke kamar me haath rakha

"Ouch,dhruv chor do mujhe.late ho rahe hain hume chalna chahiye"sharon boli

"Mmm nahi pehle thoda romance,karan wait kar lega"dhruv bola

"Tum na paagal ho chuke ho poore ke poore,chalo hato"sharon boli

"Mood ka barah baja diya"bol halka sa naraz hone ke saath dhruv ne dress up kar liya
Black tuxedo ,white shirt aur back brush baal ke saath ekdum handsome lag raha tha
Sharon ka dil fir se wapas chala gaya lonavla ke un dino me jab dono me tu tu main main shuru hui thi
Kitna ghamandi tha,attitude tha.isi dhruv ka haath pakadkar jab ghar chod kar aayi thi.tab dhruv ka pyaar mile bina poore parivar ko ek kiya aur aakhirkar dhruv ka pyaar mil hi gaya use.ek top business tycoon dhruv ganguly ko koun nahi jaanta.
Lekin ab.....oh dhruv tum sirf mere ho
Apne haatho me dhruv ka haath rakh sharon shaadi me a gayi

"Are anjali bohut cute lag rahi ho"sharon ne anjali ke gaalon ko sehlate hue kaha

"Thanks didi"anjali ne muskurate hue apni nazrein jhukate hue kaha

"Look who's here dhruv ganguly SG corp ka MD"Dheeraj saxena ki awaaz peecha se aayi

"Pata nahi tha tum itna social ho Dheeraj"dhruv ne apne drink ki chuski lete hue kaha

"Business hai dost karna padta hai,karan ek important client hai hamare liye"Dheeraj haste hue bola

Kuch log kameenepan ki had paar kar jaate hai.aur unhen pata bhi nahi chalta
Dhruv waha se hat gaya apne papa ke paas gaya

"Ha ha dekh anubhav ye rani bhi meri hogi"amitabh ganguly bachhon ki tarah haste hue bole

"Are nahi itna asan nahi hai amitabh"nakul gupta bole

"Are bhai shaadi ka waqt ho gaya chalte hai"suresh saxena bole

Shaadi poore dhoom dhaam se ho gayi thi.tabhi ek call aayi dhruv ko

"Hello"sharon ke saath chhed chhad karte hue dhruv ne phone uthaya.
Lekin doosri aur se jo kuch wo sun raha tha usse uske chehre ke bhaav badal rahe the
 

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paanchon ke paanch ladke khade the hall me aur wahan sab ke sab the

"Kya hua tha exactly??"dhruv ne vivek se poochha
Aur vivek ne tote ki tarah sab ugal diya
Sab ke sab shocked aur hairan the

"Police a rahi hai, taiyyar raho sab"dhruv bola

"Dhruv apne bhai ko agar police ke hawale karna hai to karo lekin mera bhai raj saxena ko mai bachakar hi rahunga"Dheeraj saxena bola

"Dhruv sab ki jad krish hai.krish to jayega baaki kisi ka koi kasoor nahi hai"vishal bola

"Mera bhai bhi bekasoor hai dhruv bhaiyya"anjali boli

"Meri taraf dari karne ki zaroorat nahi hai,mai apne aap ko defend kar sakta hoon"kyle ne anjali ki taraf dekh kar kaha

"Kailash tu..."anjali ne bolna chaha

"Band kar apni bakwas langdi,bola na..."

CHATAAAAAAAAK

ek zordar thappad pada kyle ko.nakul gupta ka haath uth gaya tha

"Gala ghont kar maar dena chahiye tha jab tune janm liya tha.ek nalayak aur sabse ghatiya insan mere ghar me paida hoga,maine sapne me bhi nahi socha tha"nakul gupta toot gaye the.aur sofe par baith gaye

Tabhi police ki gaadi a chuki thi.

"Sir,hum poora co operate karenge please media ko door rakhiye isse"vishal bola

"Hmm dekhiye jitna ho sake koshish karunga"inspector bola aur paanchon ko le gaya

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HIGH COURT
"Milord bachhon ne hi maara koi proof nahi hai.fir mere kaabil dost kaise keh sakte hai ki ye doshi hai"defence lawyer bola

"Lagta hai mere dost ye bhool gaye hai ki ye paanchon me se ek ka bracelet wahi gir gaya tha,jis gaadi ko ye log chala rahe the.uska ek part,kuch logo ki gawahi.aur kya chahiye"sarkari lawyer bola

"Milord mai..."defence lawyer ke paas kuch nahi tha bolne ke liye
Dheeraj saxena ne poora zor laga diya tha apne bhai ko bachane ke liye.

"Saare sabooton aur gawahon ke madde nazar.adalat ye natije par pahunchi hai ki ye paanchon ne hi accident kiya tha under the influence of alcohol.
Lekin in paanchon k record dekhte hue in paanchon ko 2 saal sitapur me rehne ka hukm deti hai.
Kyunki sab ke sab students hai,adalat waha ke dahlia high school aur Wesley college ko nirdesh deti hai ki in students ke admission ka intezam kare,in paanchon ko har roz samaj seva ka bhi kaam karna hoga ek ghanta aur subah police station me haziri deni hogi,"
Judge ne sign kiya orders par

"tum paanchon ki zimmedari mujh par hai,ek baar bol deta hoon aur ye aakhiri baar samajh lo.koi shararat nahi honi chahiye tum logo se,hari singh tumhare saath contact me rahega hamesha "bol mukesh rana constable hari singh ki aur dekhkar ishara karte hue bola

Hari singh ke chehre par kutil muskaan a gayi
Aur vivek ke pair fir se kaampne lage
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SITAPUR

"Wo aayenge paandav aayenge,is rakshas raaj ko khatam karenge,dekh lena wo aayenge"paglu chacha bola

"Koi nahi aayega chacha ,aap khana kha lijiyega"aakansha khana dete hue ghadi dekhte hue boli.aaj college jaane me late ho jayega

"Nahi beta,wo zaroor aayenge,unko aana hi padega ,ye niyati hai"paglu chacha fir bola

"Acha baba jab aayenge tab dekha jaayega,filhal kyun ladne chale jaate ho un gundon ke saath??aapko pata hai na aap unse jeet nahi paoge"aakansha boli

"Mai nahi bhidunga beta wo bhidenge,is raavan raj ko khatam kar denge"paglu chacha bola

"Thik hai unhen hi ladne do kurukshetra ki ladai,aap apna khayal rakhna aur wada kijiye ab aage se nahi bhidenge"Akansha muskurate hue apna haath aage rakh deti hai

Paglu chacha apna haath aakansha ke haath me rakh dete hai

Aakansha haskar chali jaati hai,paglu chacha mandir ki aur jhankte hue sri krishna ki moorti ki aur dekhkte hue aankhen bandh kar deta hai
Na chahte hue bhi aankhon se kuch boondein aankhon se tapakte lagte hai


Barso purane is mandir ko paandav ne hi banaya tha banwas ke waqt.aur ye bhi kaha tha ki we wapas aayenge is jagah fir se
Barso se yahi kahani chali a rahi hai ,bachha bachha bhi jaanta hai ise


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Station me pair rakhte hi saamne constable dikh jaata hai paanchon ko


"Suno chokro tum logo ko first aur final warning de deta hoon.tum log kiske bete,bhai,bhatije ho hame pata nahi lekin yahan jo bhi karoge humse bina poochhe nahi karoge,Shaam 5 baje samaj kalyan karya karoge,aur shahar se bahar jaane se pehle permission loge aur..."constable apne list se bole ja raha tha tote ki tarah

"Huh ek copy de dena dekh lenge sir"kyle ne apna bag uthaya aur nikal gaya

Baaki bhi nikal gaye

"Are suno,suno mai kehta hoon,badmash chokro...."constable chillata raha lekin sunne ke liye koi nahi tha.sivay vivek ke
 
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