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Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

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gagan243001

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Enigma bhai namaskar aapka Itna Achcha reply Dekhkar man bahut prasann hua aap yakin maniye is 1 story ko hamari ek kahani ki Najar se nahin dekhte hain balki yah ek vah man Jaaye Jahan Bhi Hamen Aap Jaisa Ek Mitra Mela aapke Kahane Vastav mein bahut Achcha hai lekin usse behtarin aapka likhane ka Andaaz hai aur aapki Bhavna hai jo aap is Manch per Hamare Sath share karte ho aise hi comments ke jarie Vastav Mein padh kar Aisa Lagta Hai Ki Jaise Aap Hamare Liye Koi Anjan Na Rahe balki Koi Mitra Hain Baki aap apne Swasthya Ka Dhyan rakhen aur Prabhu aapke liye Unnati ke aise hi avsar pradan Karen aapko Aage badhaen Aisi Hamari shubhkamnaen Hain
 

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lekhak ji .. katai gazab kar diya yaar .. ye line maine kam se kam 4 baar padhi .. not becoz of sexual nature .. kintu jo shabdo ka chayan kiya aur jis tarah un sabko ek saath samavesh karke jo zaaykedaar halwa banaya hai .. WAAH !! .. mooh mein meethas abhi tak hai ...



ye to Preeti ki sautan-behen aa gayi hai story mein .. bas iski ek aankh hari ki jagah bhoori hai ... Himani (bhai muzhe to ye ladki pehli baar mein he pasand aa gayi) .. pasand aaye bhi kyo na .. jab mool he itna pratibhashali ho to byaaz to lubhavna hoga he .. waise iski Himani ki maa se bhi jaldi milna padega .. kyonki hogi to mast item he .. aur kya iski maa ne shaadi nahi kari .. jo ye aadha pyaar aur aadhi nafrat ki baate kar rahi thi ...

Waise Aacharya ji sabko councelling dete fir rahe hai .. magar apni pauti ko sahi raste par laane mein ye bhi nakamyaab he rahe the .. khair kaam hona chahiye khud se na sahi Arjun se he sahi ...



Enigma bhai ye last line ka kuch logic samajh mein nahi aaya .. kya ye mausam ko bayan kar raha hai .. ya fir aane wale samay ki aur ishara tha ...

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waise ek baat main kaafi dino se note kar raha hu .. aur iske liye aap badhai ke paatr bhi hai sirf meri taraf se he nahi balki XF ke samast lekhak samudaye ki taraf se .. kyonki aapki kahani ka aisa jaado hai ki abhi tak jo paathak sirf yaha kahani padhne aate the .. unko aapne pratikirya dena sikha diya .. maine yaha aise kayi reader dekhe hai .. jo pehle kabhi "nice update'' aur "waiting'' se jyaada nahi likhte the .. ve sabhi backbenchers aaj kal honhaar shishyo ki tarah badh-chadh kar aapki kahani mein apni pratikirya dene lage hai .. 'Pyaar hai to sab mumkin hai' .. :wink:

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well aaj ke update ke liye to sabhi bahut badh-chadh kar likh rahe hai aur likhne wale hai .. magar main yaha apne tareeke se jo kuch khaas baat hai unhi par charcha karunga .. kyonki discuss karne ke liye bahut kuch hai aur sabhi baato ko cover karna shayad possible na ho ...

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sabse main baat ye hai ki .. Komal ko itni baato ka kaise pata hai .. aur kis-se pata lag raha hai .. sirf apni badi behen Richa se he to saari jaankaari nahi mil sakti ...

aur abhi tak jaisa Sanjeev ne Arjun se aagreh kiya tha ki ghar mein iss vishay mein koi bhi baat mat karna .. us hisaab se to ghar mein kayi log to munasib se jyaada he avgat hai ...

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Arjun ki gardan par lipistik ke nishaan sirf Komal ne he dekhe aur usne bhi sirf apni maa Rekha ji ko lekar he chinta jatai .. magar un nishano par to Lalita taiji aur Rupali didi ka bhi dhyaan gaya hoga ...

Rekha ji ne Komal ke liye ye Shivji wale vratt ki baat kyon ki .. lagta hai Arjun ko inse bhi baith kar tasalli se baat karni chahiye .. sirf hafte mein ek baar pyaar karne tak he simit nahi rehna chahiye .. waise iss baat ki shikayat to Rekha ji ko bhi hai ki Arjun unki anjane mein he andekhi karta hai ...

waise itna kuch ho gaya magar lekhak ji ne ek baar bhi Bheem ki bewa ka jikrr nahi kiya ...

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waise meri taraf se jama chote pandat ne badhai nayi gaadi ki liyo .. par iske palle yo cielo kyu baand di .. wa bhi automatic .. ya to ghana tel khave hai .. bharat ke itihaas mein milege ke maamle mein sabse bura track record isi gaadi ka raha hai .. aur ford kaunsi aa rahi hai ford IKON .. aur kuch bhi kaho Daewoo Ceilo lagti black he mast hai .. aur pickup ke maamle mein to hyundai Sonata aur Honda Accord bhi nahi thi iske barabar mein ...

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ek mere samajh mein ye baat nahi aa rahi ki kyon Arjun ke nanihaal mein sab apni jameen Arjun ke naam kar rahe hai .. jabki unke ghar mein bhi abhi ek bahu pet se hai aur dono choti bahue jawaan hai ...

chalo nanihaal mein 4 mamao mein se koi to mazakia hai .. Rajesh ji ka swabhaav kaafi accha laga .. shayad isi liye ye sabhi ko pasand hai aur iska asar inki dharampatni aur beti par dikhta hai ...

Anita maami ki chaal dekh kar Sunandha ji ka bolna to samajh mein aaya .. magar Mamta maami ka tanz kasna kis aadhar par hua .. unhone to sirf Arjun ko Swati ke saath dekha tha .. ya fir Rekha ji se unka saalda kuch jyaada he gehra hai ...

abhi kal ke liye Anita maami ne Sangita maami ke liye to time nikalne ko kaha hai .. magar muzhe lagta nahi ki kal sara samay Arjun inhe de paayega .. kyon ki Pooja maami to aate he ghodi bann jaayengi .. aur unka grehn to bahut takda lagta hai .. ve to aate he choos dengi Arjun ko ...

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ek baat aur Arjun to apne dada ke saath vapas nikal liya .. magar isne to shaam ke 6 baje ka time diya tha Manju ki maa jo gathili shareer ki malkin hai aur apne Arjun ki iklauti Mausi bhi ...

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Preeti apne mano-bhaav chupa gayi apni maa ke saamne laane se .. magar Romelia ji bhi pori chokas thi .. kya to ve ghar ke peeche naye garden ko taiyaar kar rahi thi .. ya fir chupke se Preeti ke kamre mein chanbeen karne ko dekh rahi thi .. chor to inke mann mein bhi hai .. beshak ye apne aapko ek kalakar ke roop mein pesh karti ho .. magar uss kalakar ke saanche ke andar dil to ek mahila ka he hai ...

aur sabse badi baat .. Preeti ne 27-28 photo mein se 6-7 photo Arjun ke dekhe par camera ke reel mein 36 photo aate hai .. to baaki ke 8-9 photo kaha gaye ... "beast"

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Komal aaj raat ko chatt par sone ki taiyaari mein hai .. kuch he dino mein ghar mein 2-2 shadiya hone wali hai .. Shankar ji parso aane wale hai .. Dharamveer ji ne pandit pariwaar ke saath ghatit koi bhi ghatna apne Shahgird/bete Shankar se nahi sajha ki .. Dharamvir ji ke 3 pyaade abhi hospital mein admit hai aur haathi aane wala hai .. Shabnam ne waqai mein bada khel khela tha .. wo to Arjun n' party ki kismat saath de gayi warna waqai mein sabki photo tang jaati diwaar par .. Rameshwar ji ne Rishabh ko to maar diya magar Shabnam ko kyon chhod diya .. kya iske dwaara iski maa ko dabochne ka plan hai ...

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Bhan singh ko jail se nikalne ke peeche sirf jailer he nahi balke ek SHO bhi mila hua tha .. aur uss area ki PCR ko control room se bhi kisi ne model town ke market se hatane ke peeche sirf ek SHO he nahi ho sakta .. koi senior khiladi bhi iss shatranj ke khel mein peeche se apne mohre chala raha hai ...

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waise Saadhu singh ki gharwali aur kaajal ki maa Bimla devi se kiya wada abhi pending pada hua hai .. waise haramin ne gaali di thi .. muskaan ka to aaj game baja diya .. jam ke holi kehli iske saath .. par ye batao Enigma bhai ki Arjun ko sabke gharo mein chaadar kaha rakhi hoti hai ye kaise pata chalta hai .. aur sabse khaas baat kya wo seedhi wahi hostel ke peeche padi rahegi :winkiss: ...

aur ye Akanasha se kaunsi didi ne baat kar li hai .. jiski Rupali baata rahi thi .. kya Komal he hai ...

sasure sab ke sab jasoos hai .. ye Shankar ne jaha bhi beej bikher rakhe hai .. sab ki sab ek se badh kar ek hai .. Richa / Akshara / Ritu / Komal / Tara / Arjun / Mu***n / Ka**l / ??? abhi pata nahi kuch din mein koi aur bhi nikal aaye ...

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bas aaj ke liye itna he kaafi hai .. kuch Tintin bhiya (aka3829), Professsor aur baaki pyaar ke pujariyo aur bakshako ke liye chhod deta hu .. muzhe waise bhi apni ungli aur jagah bhi karni hai ? .... :D

adios Bitchessss :kiss1:
"ek mere samajh mein ye baat nahi aa rahi ki kyon Arjun ke nanihaal mein sab apni jameen Arjun ke naam kar rahe hai .. jabki unke ghar mein bhi abhi ek bahu pet se hai aur dono choti bahue jawaan hai ..."
Sab apni jameen nehi de rahe sir ji .. 3 hisso ke 1 hissa Jo Rekha ji ke hai sirf wohi de rahe Arjun ko..

"ek baat aur Arjun to apne dada ke saath vapas nikal liya .. magar isne to shaam ke 6 baje ka time diya tha Manju ki maa jo gathili shareer ki malkin hai aur apne Arjun ki iklauti Mausi bhi ..."
Story ek bar aur padhiye sayad jawab mil Jayega Bhai..Arjun Gaye the mausi ke paas lekin pure ghatna described nehi kiye writer Sahab ne...
 
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prithvirajsingh404

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Engima bhai... aapki story sidhe dil me utarti h. Aapki story ki gehri baate ek alag hi sukoon or ehsaas chhap chodti h. Iska mere real life me v a6a asar par rha h. mai competition ki tyari kar rha hu mai thoda niras v tha par apke likhe gye gehri baato c mere andar ek alag hi urga or josh mehsus kar rha hu. Iska parinam ye hua ki mai apne goal k prati phle c sajag or adhik focus kar pa rha hu..thankuu soo much bhai itni a6i or motivated line dalne k liye. Sach me bhot hi a6e writer ho♥️♥️
 

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"ek mere samajh mein ye baat nahi aa rahi ki kyon Arjun ke nanihaal mein sab apni jameen Arjun ke naam kar rahe hai .. jabki unke ghar mein bhi abhi ek bahu pet se hai aur dono choti bahue jawaan hai ..."
Sab apni jameen nehi de rahe sir ji .. 3 hisso ke 1 hissa Jo Rekha ji ke hai sirf wohi de rahe Arjun ko..

"ek baat aur Arjun to apne dada ke saath vapas nikal liya .. magar isne to shaam ke 6 baje ka time diya tha Manju ki maa jo gathili shareer ki malkin hai aur apne Arjun ki iklauti Mausi bhi ..."
Story ek bar aur padhiye sayad jawab mil Jayega Bhai..Arjun Gaye the mausi ke paas lekin pure ghatna described nehi kiye writer Sahab ne...

bhai Rekha ji wala hissa to pehle he Arjun ke naam karwa diya tha .. magar iss baar dono bade mama ki jameen ka no. tha Bittu mama aur Rajesh mama ke hisse ki jameen ...

aur bhai Saroj mausi se mera taatpriye lene jaane se nahi .. bakhoobi milne se tha .. jo nahi dikhaya ...

chalo kuch din aur intezaar kar lenge .. aaj ke update mein Anita maami aur Muskaan ka to ho he chuka tha .. inka kisi aur update mein ho jaayega ...

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but thanks for highlighting these ... :)
 

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Waah boht khub bade bhai ?
Update ka size to arjun ki tarah hi tha ....extra large :yippi:.
Wese pehle to writer mahoday ne jyada kuch bolne layak nhi chhoda aur uske upar firefox420 bhaiya k review ne rahi sahi kasar poori kardi.

Wese ek sawal mere mann me hai ki shankar ji ki jis tarah ki zindagi aur jitne dushman paal rakhe us hisab unko ye baat to pehle se hi pata honi chaiye ki unki gair maujudgi me yaha esa kuch zarur ho sakta hai fir jab wo bahar gaye bhi to sablogo k liye bina kisi suraksha ka intezam kare kaise chale gye...yaha tak ki unhe yaha ki koi khabar ...jis tarah se unka character h to ye baat kuch hajam nhi ho rhi ?.

Rajesh mama ki entry hogyi h aur kafi badhiya vyaktitva samajh me aaya unka.
Sath hi acharya ji eklauti nati ka bhi zikr hua jo shayad aage chalkar arjun ki kafi khas ban sakti hai.

Kya shankar ji samay se wapas aa payenge kyuki abhi abhi mujhe ek purani baat yaad aagayi saal 2012 ki

"Meri galti ki saja mere bachon ko mili. Main ghar wapis na aa paya.", khud se itna he keh paya tha ke fir gardan us lakdi ke mej par ludhak gai.

Wese ho sakta h iska isse koi sambandh na ho kyuki abhi 2012 k pehle boht si ese mauke aayenge lekin dimaag me aaya to bol diya ye baat.

Baki sab baatein toh firefox bhai ne kar hi di hai to aur kya bolna.
Enigma bhai apni sehat ka dhyan rakhe. Apko har choti badi khushiya milti rhe aur har pareshaniyo se dur rhe aap ham yahi prarthna karte hai.?
 

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bhai Rekha ji wala hissa to pehle he Arjun ke naam karwa diya tha .. magar iss baar dono bade mama ki jameen ka no. tha Bittu mama aur Rajesh mama ke hisse ki jameen ...

aur bhai Saroj mausi se mera taatpriye lene jaane se nahi .. bakhoobi milne se tha .. jo nahi dikhaya ...

chalo kuch din aur intezaar kar lenge .. aaj ke update mein Anita maami aur Muskaan ka to ho he chuka tha .. inka kisi aur update mein ho jaayega ...

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but thanks for highlighting these ... :)
Wo jis jameen par clg banenge wo Arjun Ka hai kyu ki wo road side hai toh Kuch jamen adla-badli Ka farmaiya tha writer Sahab ne, details toh nehi likh sikte (itne acche se likhna nehi aate mujhe ?).
Aur Jo saroj masi wala payar dekhne ki baat Kar rahe the wo toh hume bhi dikhne ke khwaish the..par sayad story badhne ke chakkar mei writer saheb ne bilupt kr Diya...
And thnx for replying..?
 
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