• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Romance Pyaar ki Anubhuti - Written By Ishikaaa (Completed)

KR$NA

NooB MembeR
Super-Moderator
6,463
5,017
259
Ye kahani Ishikaaa ke dwara Xossip mein likha gaya tha, aab Xforum mein post karne ka permission mil gaya hai toh is story ka saara credit Ishikaaa ko jaata hai

Ye kahani hai maahi ki . Jo khoobsoorat hai, jaheen hai aur talluk rakhti hai Banaras ke ek gaanv ke madhyam vargiya pariwar se...Yahan delhi me hostel me rah kar M.ba kar rahi hai...
Aj jab maahi college pahunchi to aj ki raunak beete dino se kuchh jyada hi thi,aur karan bahut hi romantic tha ..." valentine". Jawan dilon ke liye iss din ka khas mahtwa hota hai ..kuchh log to ise prem parv bhi kahte hain..Yu to velentine aane me abhi 4 din bache huye the par semester kal hi khatm hua tha to aaj sab free the apni velentine planning ke liye...

Ham sabhi jante hain ke college life aur valentine ka bada gahra saath hota hai..hosh aur josh ki fighting hoti hai.. Ladakpann se jawani ki dahleez par pahla kadam ,jindagi ko poori tarike se jee lene ki chah aur valentine ka lal rang..Sara mahol valentine ke isi lal rag me rang sa gaya tha.…… koi milne ki jagah nirdharit kar raha tha to kisi kone me party ki taiyariyon ke liye bahas ho rahi thi..ladko ko chinta thi ke unke red rose urf pranay nivedan ko sweekar kiya jayega ya nhi aur ladkiyon ko shopping list pareshan kar rahi thi...

Maahi ko valentine ki baton me kam dilchaspi thi kyu ki vo pyar ke ahsas se filhal koson door thi..magar apni saheliyon ki baton par lagatar kaan lagaye hui thi..Mahi ke dil me kai sawal kaundh rahe the jaise …… ye pyar hota kya hai? Kaise pata chalta hai ke samne wala hi apka mr. Right hai ? khair na hi Maahi ne kisi se poochha nahi kisi ko parwah thi Maahi ki ..sab khoye the pyar ki anjani rumani duniya me.

Sara din inhi sab baton me na jane kab chhoo mantar ho gaya...Maahi vapas hostal ayi ..aaj ka sara din romanchit kiye huye tha..ishi udhedbun me jab vo sone leti to uska cell phone bajne laga...screen par papa likha dekh kar Maahi chaunk kar uth baithi...itni raat ko papa ko call dekh kar mahi ko ghabrahat si hone lagi..papa ki call lene par uske papa ne kaha

Papa:-Maahi bete aaj tumhari exam khatm ho gai hai to mai chahta hoon last semester se pahle tum kuchh dino ke liye gaanv aa jao . Tumhara rishta tai kar diya hai baki yahan aao pata chal jayega..aj agar tumhari ma is duniya me hoti to ye bat tumse vo kahti..kal subah sameer tumko lene pahuch jayega. Khushh raho.."

Mahi:- (anmae man ke sath ) Ji papa jaisa ap kahein..

Maahi ko Uske papa ki call ne sapno ki duniya se dharatal par la diya tha..bahut darti thi maahi apne papa se..per papa hamesha se itne kathor nhi the, Use aaj bhi yaad hai kitna toot gaye the papa ma ke akasmik nidhan se aur dohri mar thi chacha ki beimaniyan aur dhokha .. natijan papa ke vyawhar me itna kathorpann...

Maahi ka chhota bhai Sameer bhi delhi me hi rah kar padhai kar raha tha. Bas dono ka college aur hostal alag tha.,Maahi ne raat me hi sari packing kar li .,subah tai vakt par Sameer Maahi ko lene aa gaya ..

Maahi aur Sameer Dono banaras jane wali train me baith jate hain..Shayad thand ki vajah se bheed bahut kam thi....Maahi ko railgadi ka safar bahut ubau lagta tha...upar se man bhi bojhil tha . Kitna bada faisla papa ne kar diya tha Maahi ki jindgi ka vo bhi bhina bataye...Maahi ko ye soch kar bahut hansi aa rahi thi apni bebasi par ki kahan mai valentine aur mr . Right ke baare me soch rahi thi aur aaj ye vajrapat...

Thodi der tak khamosh rahne ke bad Sameer ne poochha ki Maahi di akhir bat kya hai? Ap itni pareshan kyu ho? Maahi ne dukhi man se apne papa ke dwara kahi gai sari baton ko Sameer ko bata dee ..Sameer bhi pareshan ho jata hai par halat ko samhate huye bade pyar se Maahi ko samjhata hai ki " Maahi di vo hamare papa hain..aaj tak hamare sare faisle unhone hi to kiye hain.,Ap yakin rakhiye papa ne jo bhi faisla liya hoga vo apke hit me hoga ," Maahi anmane man se sir haan me hila deti hai.

Sare yatri aa chuke the aur train apne gantvya sthal ke liye prasthan kar chuki thi..Maahi ke samne ki berth par ek ladka baitha hua tha jo dekhne me kafi smart tha,6 ft ke karib hight aur athlete body ka.. Chehre par ek sadabahar manmohak si muskan...Us ladke ne sameer ki ore haath badhate huye kaha ,' hi i am sujal ' , Sameer ne bhi haath bdhakar reply kiya ...Sujal kafi milansar tha ..jald hi uski dosti Sameer se ho gai..Maahi ko bhi sujal ka sence of humer bahut pasand aaya.Teeno hi ghul mil gaye aur baton ka silsila chal nikla..kab dopahar se raat ho gai pata hi na chala..sab thak gaye ……

Sameer aur Sujal apni-apni berth par chale gaye, sujal bhi koi novel padhne me vyast ho gaya...Lagbhag sare hi yatri so chuke the..Maahi abhi apne hi khayalo me khoi hui thi.,khidaki se bahar bhagti hui shahar ki battiyon aur station ki lights ko dekh rahi thi..maahi ke dimag me yahi chal raha tha ki zindgi pal bhar me na jane kya se kya ho jati hai..agar sameer gaanv sath na ja raha hota to shayad thoda sa vakt lagati ,khair kisi station ke ane par mahi ki tandra tooti....koi purana sa station tha..coffee wale ki awaj sun kar maahi coffee lane ke liye khadi hi hui thi ki sujal bhi uth khada hua,sujal ke uthne se uska novel gir gaya jise maahi ne uthaya..novel par lal colour se likha hua tha -

" Will you be my valentine"

Maahi ko vapas sari ghatnayein yaad aa gai....sath hi pyar ke ahsas me doobe chehre bhi yaad aane lage....saheliyon ki batein aur unke prem prasang jise yaad karke maahi ke hothon par ek halki si muskan tair gai jo bahut ki pyari si thi...dheemi roshni aur thand ki vajah se Maahi ka chehra behad haseen dikh raha tha..Maahi unhi gudgudane wale khayalon me khoi hui thi ki Sujal coffee lekar aa gaya...

Sujal vapas aakar maahi ke bilkul paas aakar baith gaya..sujal ko itane paas dekh kar maahi ka dil joron se dhadkne laga...vo sujal ki khushboo ko mahsoos kar rahi thi..ye vo khoobsurat ahsas tha jiske bare me shayad usne socha bhi na tha..maahi ko samjh hi nhi aa raha tha ke ye kaun si feeling hai, Sujal maahi ke itne kareeb beirada hi baith gaya tha, par maahi ke haseen chehre ho itne sameep pakar uski halat ajib si ho gai thi...maahi ki jhuki palkein aur usake labon ki thartharahat sujal ko diwana bana rahi thi.Nazron ka takrane se dono par anjana sa nasha chha raha tha..mulaquat pahli thi par lagaw na jane kyu bahut purana lag raha tha ..Dil me umang uthh rahi thi...yun nazarein milane aur churane me aseem aanand ki anubhuti ho rahi thi..Dhadkane satve aasman par pahunch chuki thi..Sujal to poori tarah kho ho jana chahta tha maahi ke sadgi bhare roop me par coffee ke patle thermocol cup se jab ungliyan jali to vo Romance ki duniya se jami par aa gaya aur maahi se door khisak gaya...dono ne rahat ki saans lee.

,Maahi ko Sujal bahut achha lag raha tha...par vo na jane kyu dar rahi thi...coffee peene ke baad maahi ne sujal ko jab novel vapas kiya to sujal ne maahi se poochha ap romantic novels pasand karti hain ? To maahi ne hairat bhari nigah se sujal ho dekha ...sujal ne haste huye maahi se kaha kabhi try kijiyega bahut hi achha novel hai ye...isme romance ko bahut hi bariki se samjhaya gaya...maahi ko sujal ki baat sharm si aa gai na jane kyu ?? Maahi ne muskura kar muh fer liya aur vapas khidki se bahar dekhne lagi.

Raat ka na jane kaun sa pahar tha jab maahi ki aankhen neend se koson door kuchh meethi ankahi si yadon me khoi hui thi.Iss pal maahi sare shikave bhool chuki thi ya yun kahein ke yaad nhi karna chahti thi..Pahli muhobbat ka ahsas use lagatar gudguda raha tha..Sab kuchh naya naya sa lag raha tha..Aaj pahli baar maahi ko saheliyon ki baatein sahi lag rahi thi ke jab pyar hota hai to saari duniya khoobsurat lagne lagti hai...ek meethi si muskan chehre par liye maahi ne jagte huye hi sari raat gujar di.

Achanak se badhte shor ki vajah se maahi khayalon ki duniya se vapas aayi to pata chala ki train banaras station par khadhi thi .. Sameer ne use uthne ka bola aur saman nikalne laga.. Sujal bhi jane ke liye taiyar tha .,use jata dekh mahi ke dil me hook si uthi ..nhi bhichhana chah rahi thi maahi..chand ghanton ka sath itna gahra tha hi maahi ki ghani palkon ko ashkon me duba gaya..vo apne dupatte se apni aankhon me aaye aansuon ko sameer aur sujal se chhipane lagi..Achank maahi ko kuchh khayal aata hai vo tezi se aage badh kar sujal ko khojne lagti hai...par sujal to ja chuka tha ..maahi khud kosne lagi ke cell no tak nhi liya..

Adhe ghante baad maahi apne ghar pahunch gai ...dukhi man se papa aur dadi se mili aur apne kamre me chali gai.....papa se samna hote hi maahi ko phir se usi dukh ne aakar gher liya ..bahut darti thi maahi apne papa se aur sabse badi baat ke maahi apne papa ko koi aur jhatka nhi dena chahti thi ...isi udhed bun me maahi yun hi kai ghanto tak khud se dwand karti rahi ...aur beti jeet gayi ek nayi naweli premika se..

Darwaje par dastak se maahi ki tandra tooti ..maahi ke papa hath me lifafa lekar khade huye the..maahi ko lifafa dete huye usake papa ne kaha " Maahi jaisa ki maine pahle bhi tumse kaha tha ke aaj agar tumhari ma jinda hoti to ye bate tumse vo hi kahti..beta mai tumhara pita hoon ..maine duniya dekhi hai..apni aulad ke liye koi pita kabhi galat faisla nhi karta hai. Mai ja raha hoon ..ye ladke ki tasweer rakhi hai dekh lo. Do din baad 14 feb ko tumhai sagai ki date fix kar di hai," …………
Lifafa maahi ke haanth me dekar uske papa bahar chale gaye.Apne papa ke jate hi maahi ne lifafe ko khud se door faink diya..aur sir ko ghutno me chhipa kar fafak fafak kar rone lagi ...Maa ka na hona bahut khal raha tha use.. Apne andar kuchh tootata hua sa mahsoos kar rahi rhi.Aaj agar ma hoti to ek baar jarur uske dil ki bat papa se kahti ..

Ladki hona aj use gunah sa lag raha tha...Achanak hi mahi ke jahan me sujal ka chehra kaundh gaya...dil bebsi ke aansu bahane laga ..pal bhar ko yun laga ke agar sujal na mila to maahi jinda nhi rah payegi.Agle hi pal ye bhi khayal aya ke kya batayegi vo apne papa se ...ek naam ke siva to vo bhi kuchh nhi janti sujal ke baare me...kuchh bhi nhi janti..kaun hai Kya karta hai ? Kaha rahta hai?……sari raat Maahi ne yu hi rokar gujar di..Kabhi ma ki yaad ati to kabhi sujal ke pyar me tadapti……

°°°°°°°°°14 Feb °°°°°°°°

Aaj 14 Feb ...mauka hai mahi ki sagai ka ... Sagai ki sham ki raunak dekhte hi ban rahi thi... Kahne ko to sagai saade samaroh me ho rahi thi par kafi log amantrit the .,Ladke wale bhi aa gaye the... sagai ke liye gaanv me rahte huye bhi bahut hi achhi taiyari ki gayi thi..Maahi ke papa ne Maahi ke man pasand phoolon ki sajawat karwaii thi... Sagai ke rasmo ki taiyari bahut hi manohari thi...Bahupratikshit ghadi bhi aa gai...Maahi ki aas pados ki saheliyan mahi ko sagai ki rasm ke liye le aayi...Gulabi sadi me lipti maahi khud hi koi gulab se kam nhi lag rahi thi .Maahi ka roop dekh Kar sabhi dang the.. Maahi ke aa jane par ladke ki ma ne maahi ki balayein vaari ..aur kaha " Sujal beta aao maahi ko angoothi pahnao "……………

Sujal ye naam sun kar Maahi ka dil achanak hi joron se dhadkne lagta hai...vo badi hi bekarari ke sath samne khade saksh par apni pahli nazar dalti hai...samne sujal khada tha ..maahi ke sapno ka prince...vahi chir parichit muskan aur aankhon me bepanah muhobbat...Maahi ki khushi ka to thikana hi na raha...Sujal aage badhta hai aur maahi ko angoothi pahnata hai aur lagbha fusfusate huye maahi ke kaano me kahta hai.………

" Will you be my valentine "
 

Aakash.

ᴇᴍʙʀᴀᴄᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ꜰᴇᴀʀ
Staff member
Moderator
33,398
150,109
304
Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
Top