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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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Jaguaar

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nice aur dardbara update ..
sheetal dhoka de rahi thi aryan ko aur rajesh se pyar karti thi ,jab birthday par aryan ne dono ko saath dekha to rajesh ko peet diya ..
par buri kismat ki rajesh ne sabko jhooth bola aur sheetal ne bhi 😡..
par family me kisine vishwas nahi kiya aryan par siwaay soniya ke ..neha ne bhi usko galat samajha ..

aryan ke paas sabut nahi hai ki wo sachcha hai aur dadaji ko sab bata diya phir bhi family me koi vishwas karega ye keh nahi sakte 🤔.
isliye aryan ne sabko sach batane se mana kar diya .

sheetal aur rajesh ko sahi saja deni chahiye aur ankit bhi ghatiya hai jisne peet diya aryan ko ..

to ye tha aryan ka past jisme sirf dhoka hua uske saath ..
Thank you
 

Jaguaar

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Update 46
Subah Aryan school jaane ke liye ready hota hai.
Woh nichhe jaata hai toh sabhi breakfast kar rahe the. Toh woh bhi waha baithne wala hota hai ke tabhi.
Rashmi: Papa yaha pe sirf family members hi baith sakte hai. Kisi gairr ke liye yaha koi jagah nhi haii.
Dadaji: Par yeh tumhara beta hai.
Rashmi: Mere sirf 2 bachhe hai Ankit aur Neha.
Aryan: Maa. Aryan itni hi bolta hai ke tabhi uske muh pe ek thappad padhta hai.
Rashmi: Tujhe kaha tha naa mera tere se koi rishta nhi hai. Aur agar aaj ke baad tune mujhe ya kisi bhi member se baat karne ki koshish bhi ki mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.
Aryan bina kuch bole aankho mein aansu liye waha se chala jaata hai:
Dadaji: Yeh tumne thik nhi kiyaa.
Rashmi: Ek hawas ke pujari ko toh jail mein daal dena chahiye. Magar humlogo ne toh aisa kuch nhi kiyaa. Inki saari izaat ek jhatke mein dubaa di.
Dadaji: Toh phir thik hai. Main ek maid ka intezaam karunga. Jo sirf Aryan ka khana banayegi. Aur uske kaam karegi.
Vikram: Mere paas ab uske liye koi paise nhi hai.
Dadaji: Jeet Malhotra ke itne bhi bure din nhi aaye ke usse haath failana padhe. Aaj se uske saare kharche main uthaunga. Tumlog rakho apni yeh shaan aur daulat apne paas. Yeh keh ke dadaji bhi waha se chale jaate hai aur apne Lawyer ko call karke woh papers ready karne ko bolte hai jo unhone Aryan ke naam kiye the.
Aryan jab school pahonchta hai toh Sheetal wahi uske seat pe baithi hui thi. Woh waha pe naa baith ke pichhe chala jaata hai wapas Rishi ke paas.
Rishi ko bhi pata chal gaya thaa kal raat ke baare mein.
Aryan: Kya main yaha baith sakta hu.
Rishi: Ek maarunga. Agar permission lene ki koshish ki toh. Chal baith chup chaap aur bata kal exactly kya hua.
Aryan: Chorna kyaa karegaa. Jab mere family ne hi mere upar vishwaas nhi kiyaa. Toh kisi se kya bolu.
Rishi: Kar diya naa paraya. Kya mummy ne tere saath kabhi bhi mera dost hai aisa behave kiya nhi naa woh tujhe apna beta hi maanti hai.
Aur main tujhe apna bhai. Mummy Papa aur mujhe vishwaas hai tune kuch nhi kiya. Chal ab bata kya hua tha kal.
Aryan ki aankho mein yeh sunn ke aansu aajate hai. Phir woh Rishi ko sab kuch bata deta hai.
Rishi: Iss Sheetal aur Rajesh ko toh chorunga nhi.
Aryan: Rehne de yaar. Jab apne ne hi galat maan liya toh gairo se kya bolna. Chorr de kisi ko kuch karne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Phir aise hi din guzarne lage. Aryan ki family usko puri tarah se ignore kardiya tha. Jaise woh waha hai nhi.
Ekdin Ghar mein koi nhi thaa sirf Neha aur Aryan hi the.
Aryan nichhe aaya toh dekha Neha ka mobile baj raha thaa par woh waha nhi thi. Toh Aryan ne uska mobile liyaa aur usko dene ke liye uske kamre mein gaya. Par yaha Aryan se ek galti hojaati hai. Woh bina knock kiye hi room mein enter kar jaata hai jaha Neha change kar rahi thi. Aryan ne jab woh dekha toh woh turant waha se nikal gaya. Neha ne jaise hi apne kamre ke door pe Aryan ko dekha. Toh uska paara high hogyaa. Usne jaldi se change karke hall mein aayi aur Aryan ko khinch ke ek thappad maar deti hai. Tab tak uski family bhi door pe aachuki thi aur unhone bhi Aryan ko thappad padhte dekh liya tha.
Rashmi: Kya hua beti.
Neha: Maa iss hawas ke pujari ne mera ghar pe akele hone ka faiyda utha kar mere kamre aaya jab main change kar rahi thi. Akele hone ka faiyda utha kar mere saath jabardasti karna chahta hoga.
Rashmi ne yeh sunte hi usse 2-3 thappad laga diye.
Rashmi: Neech teri itni himmat tune meri beti pe gandi nazar di. Aaj toh tujhe maar hi dungi.
Tabhi dadaji aajate hai.
Dadaji: Kya horaha hai
Rashmi: Papa aap aaj bich mein mat aaiyegaa. Iss neech ne aaj meri beti pe apni gandi nazar di hai.
Dadaji: Apni jaban ko lagam do bahu. Aryan bol kya hua thaa.
Aryan: Dadaji jab mein yaha aaya tab inka phone baj raha tha. Tab main wohi dene ke liye inke room mein gaya thaa. Par mujhse ek galti hogyi maine door knock nhi kiya. Aur jab main andar gaya tab yeh change kar rahi thi.
Dadaji: Sunn liya. Chalo ab jao yaha se. Aur Aryan tum mere saath aao.
Aryan dadaji ke saath chala jaata hai.
Dadaji: Yehlo ab kuch property ke papers hai jo maine tumhare naam kardiye hai.
Aryan: Nhi dadaji main yeh nhi le sakta. Warna inko lagega maine aapko behla fusla kar yeh apne naam karwa liye hai.
Dadaji: Koi kuch nhi bolega. Kyoki yeh mere khud ke hai. Inpe innlogo ka koi hakk nhi hai.
Aryan: Thik hai dadaji par aap yeh papers mujhe naa dekar inka amount mere naam ka ek account khulwa kar usme de dijiye. Inn papers ka main proper use nhi kar paunga.
Dadaji: Thik hai main yeh karwa dunga.
Phir aise hi Aryan ke 12th ke final exams bhi aagye the.
Woh apne exams achhe se deta hai. Ab toh uss ghatna ko saal bhar hogya thaa aur uski family ne usse completely ignore kardiya tha.
Aaj Aryan ka last exam thaa. Aryan apne exam deke ghar aaraha thaa tab raaste mein ek gaadi ka break fail hogya thaa aur woh disbalance hoke ek ladki ko thokar maarne wali thi. Aryan jaldi se uss ladki bachha leta hai par uske haath mein chott aajaati hai.
Aryan jab uss ladki ko dekhta hai toh woh aur koi nhi Sheetal thi.
Sheetal thodi ghabrayi hui awaaz mein bolti hai
Sheetal: Maine tumhare saath bura kiya phir bhi tumne mujhe bachaya. Please mujhe maaf kardo. Main apne kiye pe bahkt sharminda hu. Tumhare saath woh karne ki saza mein Rajesh ne bhi mujhe dhokha de diya. Aur mom ka bhi accident hogya thaa.
Aryan: Maine toh pyaar kiya thaa. Tumhari tarah dhokha nhi diya. Ek baat kehna chahungaa kabhi bhi kisi ko dhokha naa denaa aur agar do toh please uski family ko jhoot bolke usse alag mat karna. Waise tumhe Thank You bhi bolna chahunga. Tumhare dhokhe ki wajah se mujhe itna toh pata chal gaya kaun mujhse sachha pyaar aur bharosa karta tha aur kaun dikhawa.
Yeh bol Aryan waha se chala jaata hai aur Sheetal wahi khade khade ro rahi thi.
Aryan sabse pahle ek doctor ke paas jaake usse first aid karwata hai. Phir ghar pahonchta hai.
Jab woh ghar aata hai toh uske pairon tale zameen hi khisak gayi thi. Waha uske dadaji ki arthi lagi hui thi. Matlab uske dadaji ab nhi rahe thee. Aryan unke paas jaata hai toh Vikram usse wahi rokh deta hai.
Vikram: Khabardaar agar tune unhe haath bhi lagaya toh. Durr hatt yaha se yeh bol usse dhakka de dete hai. Jisse Aryan pichhe ki taraf girr jata hai aur uske sir mein chott aajati hai aur khoon bhi nikalne lagta hai.
Phir bhi apne dard ki parwaah naa karte hue Aryan ne bahot minnate ki par kisi ne uski ek nhi sunni. Unke iss harqat se Aryan ke man mein unke liye nafrat hogyi thi. Waha khade har ek log ke liye.
Phir dadaji ka antim sanskaar kiya jaata hai Aryan bas durr se khada yeh sab dekh raha thaa. Ab uska iss duniya mein koi nhi raha thaa.
Phir sablog ghar aate hai ghar aate aate raat hogyi thi. Aryan sidha apne kamre mein chala jaata hai.
Aryan: Main yaha jinki wajah se thaa ab jab wohi naa rahe toh main yaha rehke kya karungaa. Ek wohi the jinhone mujhe sambhala mere upar vishwaas kiya. Ab main yaha nhi rahunga.
Phir Aryan ek bag mein 2 jodi kapre aur apne documents rakh leta hai. Aur ek letter likh deta hai. Aur ek cheque mein sign karke wahi rakh diya. Ab bas usse subah hone ka intezaar tha.
Subah Aryan apna bag liye ghar se nikal raha hota hai tabhi usse Soniya ka khayal aata hai. Woh ekbaar Soniya ko dekh ke waha se nikal jaata hai. Usse kaha jaana hai yeh nhi pata par ab usse Delhi mein hi nhi rehna thaa. Isiliye woh Railway Station jaake turant chorne wali train ki ticket leke train mein chadd jaata hai.
Udher ghar mein subah jab uthte hai toh sablog dadaji ke chale jaane se dukhi thee. Phir bhi Rashmi aur Meenakshi ne sabko jabardasti thoda sa nashta karwaya.
Woh log naashta karke uthe hi the ke waha Sheetal aajati hai.
Neha: Aree aao Sheetal. Kaisi ho. Ab toh yaha aati hi nhi.
Sheetal: Ji woh Aryan....
Neha: Samaj gayi tum uski wajah se nhi aati ho naa. Aakhir usne kaam hi aisa kiya hai. Ke tumse maafi maangne ke bhi layak nhi hai.
Sheetal: Nhiiii. Usne aisa kuch nhi kiya thaa.
Neha: Matlabb.
Phir Sheetal rote hue unhe sabkuch bata deti hai ussdin kya hua thaa. Sablog yeh sunke wahi jam gaye thee. Sablog wahi pe ro padhe.
Neha wahi se sidha Aryan ke kamre mein daud laga deti hai. Par woh usse waha nhi milta. Tabhi uski nazar letter pe jaati hai.
Woh letter leke nichhe aati hai.
Rashmi: Aryan kaha hai. Kya woh so raha hai. Main abhi use utha ke usse maafi maangti hu. Humse bahot badi galti hogyi.
Meenakshi Sheetal se. Tumne yeh sab ussdin waha pe kyo nhi bataya aur itna bada jhoot kyo bola.
Sheetal: Rote hue. Main waha itne saare logo ko dekh kar darr gayi thi. Isiliye maine waha jhoot bol diya.
Neha: Aryan ghar mein nhi hai. Mujhe waha ek letter mila. Aur yeh ek cheque bhi.
Vikram: Jaldi se dekho letter mein kya likha hai.
Neha letter padhti hai.
Malhotra Family main yeh ghar humesha humesha ke liye chorr ke jaa raha hu. Mujhe pata hai aap logo ko koi fark nhi padega mere jeene yaa marne se. Maine aapka koi bhi samaan nhi liya hai bas apne 2 jodi kapre aur documents hi liye hai. Aur uss kamre ka aur waha rakhe samaan ka kya karna yeh aaplog dekh lijiye.
Aaplogo ne bachpan se mere liye jo bhi kiya uske liye Thank You. Par yeh mat sochna aaplogo ne aihsaan kiya hai. Main kisi ka aihsaan nhi rakhta. Maine ek blank cheque rakha hai. Aajtak aaplogo ne mere upar jitna bhi kharcha kiya hai uska amount bhar lenaa. Aur agar koi problem hojaaye toh hisaab karke rakhna. Future mein toh main aaplogo ki shakal tak nhi dekhna chahungaa kyoki ab mujhe aaplogo se aaplogo ki shakshiyat se nafrat hogyi hai gudiya ko chorke. Par agar kabhi bhi mulakat hojaaye toh apna hisaab ho toh lena aur nikal jaana.
Aakhir mein kahunga apne bachho pe vishwaas karna sikho. Dusro se jyaada apno pe vishwaas karna sikho.
Aur Sheetal se kehna uski wajah se mujhe yeh pata chala ke kaun sacha pyaar aur bharosa karta hai aur dikhawa.
Neha yeh sab padh ke rone lagti hai aur Sheetal ko thappad marne lagti hai.
Neha: Kya bigaada tha mere bhai ne yaa humne tera. Kyoki kiya tune aisa. Sirf paiso ke liye.
Sheetal: Mujhe maaf kardijiye mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi hai.
Neha: Tere maafi maangne se humne jo humare Aryan ke saath kiya woh sab badal jayega. Maine jo uspe itna ghatiya ilzaam lagaya tha woh badal jayega. Woh jo ab hum sab se nafrat karta hai woh thik hojayegaa. Jiss bhai ke aankho mein ek aansu nhi dekh sakti thi main usko kitni baar thappad mara usko kitna rulaya. Woh sab badal jayega. Usko dadaji ko aankhri baar chune tak nhi diyaa. Woh rota raha bilakta raha par humne uski ek naa sunni. Aur aaj sirf teri hi wajah se woh ghar chorr ke pata nhi kaha chala gaya.
Nikal jaa abhi ke abhi yaha se nikal jaa warna aisa naa ho mujhse koi gunaah hojaaye.
Idher woh letter sunte hi Rashmi behosh hogyi. Sab jaldi se usse sambhalte hai. Muh pe paani maar usse hosh mein laate hai.
Hosh mein aate hi. Rashmi jor jor se rone lagti hai.
Rashmi: Mujhe abhi ke abhi mera beta chahiye. Main ek maa kehlane ke layak nhi. Mujhe mere bete pe vishwaas nhi raha. Mujhe nhi pata aap usse kahi se bhi leke aaiye warna main kuch galat kar jaungi. Main usse maafi mangungi please usse kahi se bhi le aaiye. Maine inhi haatho se usse kitne thappad maare. Usse kitna rulaya. Usse maa kehne ka haq tak chinnn liya.
Sheetal abhi bhi wahi pe khadi thi. Rashmi usko dekh kar uske paas jaakar khinch ke thappad marne lagti hai.
Rashmi: Tujhe sharm nhi aayi aisa kaam karte hue. Yehi sikhaya hai tere maa baap ne tujhe. Ke kisi ko pyaar karne ka dikhawa karna phir usko uske parivaar se durr kardenaa. Kya bigada tha mere bete ne tera.
Vikram abhi ke abhi iske maa baap ko yaha bulaiye. Agar naa aaye toh police se ghasit kar mangwaiye. Aur police ko call karke iske pure family ke khilaf case kare.
 

DARK WOLFKING

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romanchak update ..dadaji ki death ho gayi 😔.aur kisine aryan ko unke body ke paas jaake apna dukh bahar nikalne ka mauka tak nahi diya .

neha bhi utni hi kamini hai jitna sheetal ,,sirf kamre me aane se itna ghatiya iljaam laga diya aryan pe 😡..

sheetal ko rajesh ne bhi dhoka de diya aur aryan ne accident se bachaya tab jakar usne sachchai batayi malhotra family ko par tab tak aryan ghar chhodke jaa chuka tha ..
ek baat vishwas nahi kiya aur ab behosh hona aur rone se kya faayda ..
aur sheetal ko thappad maarke bhi kya hoga ,galti to sabki thi ..

par ek baat sahi huyi ki sheetal ki wajah se aryan ko pata chal gaya apne pariwar ke baare me ..
 

Vickey1211

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Aaj ka update post kar diya hai


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