Thriller RAAZ..... (Completed)

[Casinar]

Baaki k 3 last updates post kardo Immo bhai, aur new Vampire bhai ki story bhi start kardo
Aur haan ye bhi bata do ke iss mein hero ka naam kia tha aakhir. Main wait karta reh gaya start se hi k kahin usska naam aaye

 

[Mishri]

Fantastic story.....greatest updates

 

[Rahul]

awesome update qatil pakda gaya akhir aur hum log aise uljhe story me ki sach kahun to mujhe last tak bilkul pata nahi tha ki qatil akhir hai kaun..sab nipat gaya ab kamni ki sadi ka intzaar hai dil se ab uame bhi koi hangama na ho jaye bas

 

[Casinar]

Immo bro plz post the 3 last updates yaar

 

[The Immortal]

To issi ke sang Raj ke raaz khtm hone wale hai I think

No . 1 RAAZ aur Baki hai .
Updates are next .

 

[The Immortal]

Aree Bhai hero ka to name hi nhi aaya h kabhi

Right . But last updates Mai hero Ka name bhi hai aur akhari RAAZ BHI hai.

 

[The Immortal]

Zabardast dimag paya ha yar sach kahon to agar kamini is case ma hero ka sath na deti to hero apni pori zindagi ya pta na kar pta ka akhir hoa kya tha too good story ha boss hatts off boht kamal ka writer ho ap
Ap ki next story ka intzar rahega mane abhi tak sirf 2 story parhi han ap ki dark girl or ya wali or koi ha to btana dost

Thanx bro but these stories are written by The Vampire. Unki aur Stories BHI post ki hai mane like Haweli . PAAP ( xossip to xforum thread Mai hai ) .
Aur story abhi Baki hai . Updates are next.

 

[The Immortal]

Bhut shandaar update.....

Thanx . Updates are next.

 

[The Immortal]

Abhi story baki hai par sawaal ye hai ki kamni se kya sadi hogi ya ek aur qatl hoga ya khud khusi hogi..wonderful update bhaiya ji

Is sawal Ka jawab Mai pehle hi de chuka hu Rahul Bhai agar Kisi ne mere comments dhyan se padha hote to use pata chal chuka hota ab tak (wese apko to pata hi hai) .
Updates are next .

 

[The Immortal]

Waaah wonderful story immo bhai. Maine aaj tak aisi dhamakedaar story nahi padhi thi. Thank you immo bhai and THE VAMPIRE Bhai ko salaam ki unhone dimaag ka dahi kar dene wali story likhi_____

Maine sare update padh liye aur sach kahta hu ki main koi idea nahi laga saka ki sala kaun asli kaatil ho sakta tha. Finally story to ab end ho chuki hai shayad but upar ke comments padhe to pata chala ki abhi kuch baaki hai. So dekhte hain aur kya majedaar baaki hai_____

And one more things agar THE VAMPIRE bhai ki aisi aur bhi stories hain immo bhai to iske end hote hi unko bhi post kariye. Sach kahu to aisi story ki ab aadat ho gayi hai. Yaha par maine dekha hai ki har writer magical & fantasy stories ke peechhe pada hua hai aur sex hi sex paros raha hai. Asal writer to THE VAMPIRE bhai jaisa hona chahiye. Meri in baato se agar kisi writer bhai ko bura lage to sorry guyss. But sach kahna koi gunaah nahi hai______

THANK YOU SO MUCH IMMO BHAI AND THANKS THE VAMPIRE BHAI TOO______

Yup story abhi Baki hai .
The vampire Bhai ki Haweli and PAAP ( Xossip to Xforum thread Mai hai ) post Kar chuka hu .
Updates are next.