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Thriller RAAZ..... (Completed)

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Wonderful mind blowing story. Hope aage bhi aap aise aur stories denge. Intejar rahega
Dekhta Hu agar Kuch aur story mili to post jarur karunga .
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Baaki k 3 last updates post kardo Immo bhai, aur new Vampire bhai ki story bhi start kardo :D
Aur haan ye bhi bata do ke iss mein hero ka naam kia tha aakhir. Main wait karta reh gaya start se hi k kahin usska naam aaye :D
Posting casi Bhai .
 

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awesome update qatil pakda gaya akhir aur hum log aise uljhe story me ki sach kahun to mujhe last tak bilkul pata nahi tha ki qatil akhir hai kaun..sab nipat gaya ab kamni ki sadi ka intzaar hai dil se ab uame bhi koi hangama na ho jaye bas:jump:
Posting Rahul bhai.:dost:
 

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FINAL CHEPTAR - RAQEEB

Abhay Malhotra aur Kamini ki shaadi ki taiyyari zor shor se chal rahi thi. Shaadi ke cards bant chuke the aur kuchh log is shaadi se hairan the toh kuchh bahut khush. Jo hairan the vo isliye kyunki jis tarah se apni pehli biwi Renuka ke marne ke baad Abhay ne apne aapko sabse alag kar liya tha, usse kisi ko laga nahi tha ke vo dobara shaadi karega.

"You know I love you, right?" Kamini ne phone par Abhay se kaha.

"I know" Abhay ne muskura kar jawab diya.

"I will be there in half an hour" Kamini boli.

"Aaja. Aur sun, zara padosiyon se nazar bacha kar aana. Koi dekh na le ke ladki shaadi se pehle hi apni sasural mein akeli kya karne gayi thi, vo bhi tab jabki ghar par sirf uska hone wala pati hi maujood tha"

"Jo sochte hain sochne do yaar. Aur kya soch lenge, that we were having sex? Vo toh anyways we are going to aur agar tum chaho toh aaj bhi kar sakte hain. I mean why wait"

"Shut up, kuchh bhi bolti hai"

"I am serious. I mean mauka bhi hai, mahaul bhi hai. Kaho toh aaj thodi rehearsal kar lein?"

"Bakwaas band kar aur khana pack karake le aan, bhookh lagi hai mujhe" Abhay ne kaha aur phone rakh diya.

Phone rakh kar Abhay ne apne bedroom mein nazar daudayi. Vo pichhle kuchh din se apne dil par patthar rakh kar Renuka ka saara saman dheere dheere store-room mein shift kar raha tha jisse ke Kamini ke saman ke liye jagah banayi ja sake.

Lagbhag poora hi saman vo shift kar chuka tha.

"All right, lets move you" Kehte hue usne Almari ke paas chair khinchi aur uske uper chadhkar Almari ke uper rakhe suitcase ko utara. Suitcase khaali tha aur kayi din se uper rakha hua tha. Ye suitcase Renuka ka tha aur zaroorat na padne par Abhay ne kabhi iski taraf dhyaan hi nahi diya tha. Pata nahi kabse ye khaali suitcase Almari ke uper hi rakha hua tha.

Suitcase utaarte hi uska dhyaan suitcase mein side mein phase ek pen ki taraf gaya. Vo dekhne mein ek ball=pen jaisa tha jo suitcase ki side mein phasa hua tha.

"How did you get up there?" Abhay ne pen nikala aur use kholne ki koshish ki.

Pen ghooma toh zaroor par sirf ek click ki aawaz aayi, khula nahi. Abhay ne uski cap khinchne ki koshish ki par cap utri nahi. Thoda sa zor lgaya toh pen ki cap toot gayi aur ji saamne gira, vo ek pen ke parts toh bilkul nahi the.

"I know what you are but I dont remember you" Abhay ne parts uthate hue kaha. Parts dekh kar vo samajh chuka tha ke vo pen asal mein ek spy cam tha par hairat is baat ki thi ke khud Abhay ko bhi yaad nahi tha ke ye cam usne kab fit kiya tha.

Battery jaane kabki khatam ho chuki thi. Abhay ne pen mein fit memory stick ko nikala aur memory card mein dalkar Laptop ke saath attach kiya.

Aise aur na jaane kitne spycams usne apne ghar mein fit kiye the, is ummeed ke saath ke shayad kisi cam par use aisa kuchh dikh jaye jisse Renuka ki bewafai saabit ki ja sake par kaamyabi use kabhi haasil ho hi nahi paayi. Jis din Renuka ne suicide kiya, us din tak vo lagbhag khud hi saare spycams hata chuka tha. Us baat ki sabse badi vajah ye thi ke vo kahin apne dil mein is baat se samjhauta kar chuka tha ke uski biwi bewafa thi aur ye shaadi mehaz ek samjhauta banke reh gayi thi, uske bete Vikram ki khushi ke liye.

Memory card mein recorded video ko usne laptop par play kiya. Kul recording 72 ghante ki thi. Pehle kuchh ghanto tak toh koi khaas nahi tha. Sirf camera par use kamre mein aati kabhi Renuka, kabhi vo khud toh kabhi usne maan baap. Fast forward karte hue vo video dekh hi raha tha ke achanak anguli forward ke button se jaise apne aap hi hat gayi.

Video recording us din ki thi jis din Renuka ne suicide kiya tha. Saamne video par is waqt vo khud apne aapko dekh raha tha, sharab ke nashe mein Renuka ko berehmi se peet-te hue. Renuka neeche zameen par giri hui thi aur vo apni belt liye use maare ja raha tha. Sound recording ka option shayad us pen mein tha nahi isliye sirf video hi record hua tha.

"I am so sorry Baby, I am so sory" Saamne ka nazara dekh kar khud uski apni aankh se hi aansoo aa gaye.

Video mein kuchh der tak Renuka ko peetne ke baad vo apni belt phenk kar kamre se bahar nikal gaya. Uske jaane ke baad kaafi der tak Renuka vahin zameen par padi subakti rahi aur phir uth kar kamre se bahar chali gayi. Abhay ne dil thaame video ko fast forward kiya kyunki isi kamre mein Renuka ne suicide kiya tha, usi din.

Takreeban 2 ghante ki recording ke baad Renuka ek baar phir kamre mein daakhil hui. Use dekhte hi Abhay samajh gaya ke vo ab kya karne wali thi kyunki uske haath mein ek rassi thi.

"Oh Renuka, why did you do it?" Abay ne aansoo ponchhte hue kaha. Renuka kamre ke beech khadi Rassi ko lapet=te hue uska phanda bana rahi thi aur Abhay laptop par khamoshi betha, nam aankho se saamne chal rahe video ko dekh raha tha.

Phanda banane ke baad Renuka ne kuchh aisa kiya jisne Abhay ko fauran hairat mein daal diya. Vo phanda haath mein pakde kisi se baat kar rahi thi, koi aisa insaan jo darwaze ke bahar drawing room mein khada tha.

"What the hell ..." Abhay ne kaha aur apne chehre ko laptop ke kareeb kiya jaise dekhne ki koshish kar raha ho ke Renuka kisse baat kar rahi hai.

Vo phanda haath mein pakde ro rahi thi, subak rahi thi aur aise andaaz mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi jaise koi ilteja kar rahi ho. Jaise ke vo jo bhi kar rahi thi apni marzi se nahi balki kisi ke dabaav mein kar rahi ho.

"Oh god... oh my god... oh my god" Agle hi pal Abhay ki aankhen hairat se phati reh gayi, dil ki dhadkan badh gayi aur haath paon thande pad gaye.

Video mein ab Renuka ke saamne kamre mein andar Kamini bhi thi.

Kamini ke ek haath mein uska beta Vikram tha aur doosre haath mein ek revolver jo usne Vikram ke sar par taani hui thi. Vikram ro raha tha, Renuka ro rahi thi aur Kamini chehre par ajeeb sa bhaav liye Renuka ko kuchh keh rahi thi.
 

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Abhay ki samajh nahi aa raha tha ke jo vo dekh raha hai vo asliyat thi ya uski aankha ka dhokha. Usne video ko ek pal ke liye pause kiya aur Kamini par zoom kiya, is ummeed ke saath ke shayad video mein koi aur ho jo Kamini jaisi dikhti ho par ummeed galat saabit hui. Jo vo do dekh raha tha vo bilkul vahi tha jo dikhai de raha tha. Koi nazar ka dhokha nahi, koi video ki gadbad nahi. Vo sach Kamini hi thi.

Usne phir se play ka button dabaya aur video dekhne laga.

Video ke saath sound recording nahi tha ilsiye keh pana mushkil tha ke Renuka aur Kamini ke beech kya baat ho rahi thi par andaza lagaya ja sakta tha ke Renuka apni jaan ki bheekh maang rahi thi aur Kamini Vikram ka istemaal karte hue use majboor kar rahi thi ke vo suicide kare.

Agle 15 min tak dono ke beech kuchh baat hoti rahi. Renuka baar baar Kamini ke aage haath jodti rahi. Rassi ka phanda ab bhi uske haath mein tha. Zahir si baat thi ke kisi ko apni jaan lene par majboor karna aasan kaam nahi tha par Kamini bhi apni jagah se tas se mas na hui. Vikram ko usne ek haath se uthaya hua aur doosre haath mein thami revolver ka rukh Vikram ki taraf tha. Achanak usne apne ek haath ka istemaal karte hue hi Vikram ke baal pakad kar khinche.

Vikram shayad zor se munh khol kar chillaya aur Kamini ne agle hi pal Revolver ki nali ko uske munh mein ghusa diya.

Uski ye harkat kaam kar gayi. Ek maan ke saamne uske doodh-peete bachche ke munh mein agar koi revolver ghusa de toh uska reaction vahi hoga jo Renuka ka hua. Usne agle hi pal fauran ek chair ko utha kar bed par rakha aur uske uper chadh kar khadi ho gayi. Haath mein pakdi rassi ke ek kone ko usne ceiling fan ke hook se nikalte hue neeche giraya aur phir chair se neeche utari. Uska rona ab band ho chuka tha aur vo bas bejaan si nazron se kabhi Kamini toh kabhi Vikram ki taraf dekhti. Chair se neeche utar kar usne rassi ke kone ko kamre ke darwaze ke handle se bandha aur phir table ki drawer se ek pen aur paper nikal kar kuchh likhne lagi.

Abhay janta tha ke vo kya likh rahi thi. Ye vo suicide note tha jo baad mein use aur police ko milne wala tha. Kamini ke hilte hue honth dekh kar lag raha tha ke vo suicide letter bhi Renuka ko khud hi dictate kar rahi thi.

Letter likhne ke baad Renuka ne pen ko paper ke uper rakha aur phir palat kar Kamini aur Vikram ko dekhne lagi. Uske chehre ke aasar us waqt kisi aise sipahi ki tarah the jo apni marzi ke khilaff majboor hokar hathyaar daal chuka ho. Na toh ab vo ro hi rahi thi aur na uski aankhon mein koi aansoo tha. Kuchh pal tak vo khamoshi se khadi Kamini ki taraf dekhti rahi. Phir un dono mein kuchh baat hui. Renuka shayad Kamini se ek aakhri baar apne bete ko thaamne ki guzarish kar rahi thi aur Kamini mana karte hue use chair par chadhne ko keh rahi thi. Revolver ki nali ab bhi rote hue Vikram ke munh mein hi thi.

Kuchh pal ki behas ke baad Renuka ek baar phir chair par chadhi aur phande ko apne gale mein daal kar kas liya. Phir jo hua vo within seconds ho gaya. Kamini ne bala ki furti se Vikram ke munh se gun nikali aur use kisi khilone ki tarah bed par uchhal diya. Vikram jakar bed par gira. Is harkat par Renuka ke munh se cheekh nikli. Kamini ne agle hi second mein Renuka ke pairon ke neeche se chair khiska di, jaise use khud darr ho ke kahin Renuka apna irada na badal de.

Bete ko bed par girte dekh Renuka ke munh se nikli cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut kar reh gayi hogi kyunki agle hi lamhe vo gardan mein phase rassi ke phande par jhool gayi aur uska poora shareer bin pani ki machhli ki taraf phadakne laga.

Isse aage Abhay dekh nahi saka. Iske baad kya hua tha, vo khud bhi bahut achhi tarah janta tha. Apne laptop ko usne ek jhakte ke saath band kiya aur chehre par avishvash ke bhaav liye apna sar pakad kar beth gaya.

"I am sorry" Kuchh seconds baad apne pichhe se aayi aawaz sunkar vo uchhal pada.

Vo video mein itna khoya hua tha ke use andaza hi nahi hua ke kab Kamini uske pichhe aa khadi hui thi.

"You want to explain this?" Kamini ke chehre se saaf zahir tha ke vo jaanti thi ke video mein Abhay kya dekh raha tha.

"I did this only for you" Kamini ke aawaz rooansi ho chali thi, "Because I loved you so much"

"Loved me, you loved me?" Uski baat sunte hi Abhay bhadak sa utha aur sofe se uth kar khatarnaak andaaz mein uski taraf badha.

Par Kamini ne jo kiya usne Abhay ko apni jagah par rukne par majboor kar diya. Usne fauran apne bag mein haath dala aur ek revolver nikal kar Abhay ki taraf taan di. Ye vahi revolver thi jisse usne kuchh din pehle Pratap Rana ki jaan li thi aur jo ke usne video mein Vikram ke uper taan rakhi thi.

"Kya karogi?" Abhay revolver dekh kar mazak udane wale andaaz mein hasa, "Mujhe bhi goli maarogi?"

Jawab mein Renuka ne kuchh na kaha. Sirf revolver haath mein pakde khamoshi se Abhay ki taraf dekhti rahi.

"Kyun? Why?" Abhay ne kuchh pal baad phir sawal kiya.

"Dont you still see it?" Kamini boli, "She was never right for you. She was never the girl for you"

"And you are? A cold-blooded murderer?"

"Maine jo kiya sirf tumhare liye kiya, sirf tumhare pyaar ke liye"

"My love was never yours" Abhay chilla pada, "It was always hers. Guess what, I still do not love you. Tumse shaadi sirf main apne bete ki bhalai ke liye kar raha tha par I am still in love with my wife"

"No you are not" Jawab mein Kamini bhi poore zor se chillayi, "You never loved her. If you did then you never would have doubted her, treated her bad, tried to spy on her, made her life a living hell and beat her up like a bloody animal. You never loved her. And guess what, I didnt kill her, you did. You killed her the day when you assured yourself that your wife was a whore, a worthless woman who was cheating on you. Tum kabhi is baat ko accept hi nahi kar paaye ke Renuka jaisi had se zyada khoobsurat ladki tumhari biwi thi, ek aam si shakal soorat wale insaan ki. You were insecure, you always were. You were only looking for an excuse to turn you insecurity into trust issues, and you grabbed the first chance that you had at it"


Kamre mein kuchh pal ki khamoshi chha gayi. Kahin apne dil mein Abhay bhi janta tha ke Kamini sach bol rahi thi.
 
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