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Abhay message padhte he samaj gaya ki kya huva h aur usne dimag se kaam liya aur khud se baat karte huve bola..”shrutii aur ajju itni asani se kisi ke kabu mai nahi aasakte the jarur wo log geenti mai jayda the …aur puri planing ke sath aye the warna ajju ko kabhu karna bilkul asan nahi h ..aur dono ke phone not reacheble hona is baat ka proof h ki ye message …unhi logo ka h jinhone dono ko kidnap kiya h ..aur ab agar main akela gaya toh hum teeno mai se he koyi nahi bachega” ye kahte huve usne turant sonali ko phone laga diya madad ke liye….par sonali jo sunil ke pass puri raat jagi huvi thi usai nind ki jhapki lage abhi 1 hour he huva tha isliye uski nind gahri thi aur table pe vibrate ho rahe phone ki vibration usai mahsus nahi huvi par screen par officer abhay likha huva call lagatar aata raha..toh dusri taraf abhay laga taar phone karte huve bole ja raha tha “ please pickup phone mam ..pick up the demit phone mam” par sonali ko ahsas hota tab toh wo uthati… abhay “shitt” bolta huve … pareshan ho raha tha …usai kuch samaj nahi araha tha ki kua kare….
Abhay-- Fuck Fuck Fuck …..bhad mai gaya wada mere dosto se bhadke nahi h koyi bhi wada .. sonali madam naraj ho toh ho ab raj bhai ko batana he padega aur usne phone laga diya raj ko …..
Raj side …..
Alert alert….. ki tone sunte he wo jhanvi ke pass se jhatke se khada huva ….aur apne phone par pop huve message ko dekhte he uski ankho….mai jo bhav the wo padhna namukin tha…..aur usne apne phone mai jaldi se app kholi ….aur usmai dekhne laga…..
1-Host shweta …..
Status — active
Current Location …..delhi…. commissioner bunglow…
2-Host sunil
Status — inactive
Last location — Delhi…..xxx Hospital …tracker off …..
Raj ne jaise he ye dekha usne turant he first floor se 2 jump mai he sidhiya paar kar li aur uski raftaar pahli baar itni tez thi …aur usai jyada thi uske dil ki dhadkan jo dugni raftaar se dhadak rahi thi…choti chachi ajay Divya aur dadaji ne jab usai dekha toh sirf Dadaji he samaj paye ki kya huva h aur wo wanhi se cheekhe … “ bheemaaa…….chetak nikal…..
Raj aur thakur jagmaal ki ankhe mili …par kisi ne muu se ek sabd nahi kaha
Bheema jo gate ke pass khada tha usne bhi seconds mai he reaction dete huve garrage ki taraf doud laga di ……raj gate ke pass pahucha tab usai peeche se ek chetak ki awaj sunayi dii
Raj ke baithte he bheema ne chetak ko douda diya …
Raj —— delhi ….
Bheema ne ha mai gardan hilayi ….aur gear laga kar delhi ki taraf wale highway par tezi se lejane laga……
Raj man mai “sunil ka tracker band hona asan baat nahi h uska tracker tabhi off ho sakta h jab wo tut jaye ya uski body se 5 meter dur ho jaye 12 hour ke liye
Aur sunil aisa karta toh muje batata par usne nahi kiya h iska matlab wo unconscious h…..aur last location hospital dikha raha…… ye sochte huve usne sonali ko phone mila diya….
Dusri taraf…..
Abhay —- ye raj bhai ka phone bhi busy araha h…. Kya karu mai itna kahte huve usne phone cut kar diya aur ek message likh kar deatil mai raj ko send kar diya …aur khud se man mai sochta huve bola shuruti ne muje dil se bhai maan kar rakhi bandhi h….wanhi ajju ne dosti ko ji jaan se nibhaya h …..nahiii ….koyi meri madad ko aye ya na aye main jaunga unhe bachane ke liye… ……kuch bhi ho jaye …..mere rahte unhe kuch nahi hone dunga….itna kah usne apni bike ghar ki taraf bhaga di janha se wo raj ki taraf se mili fortuner ko lekar jane wala tha….
Dusri taraf ….
Raj ne do baar call lagayi par sonali ne phone nahi uthaya…….
Police commissioner office-—
Meeting ….
Jogindar--- i dont care …muje RAC ki puri reserve force active within one hour puri city mai high alert par chahiye h har cctv mai dekho muje Acp shivani chahiye h dusre states mai fax karo dhundho unhe.. …
Sab — Yes sir ..
Jogindar —Ab Raj se aur chupaya nahi ja sakta h ..warna usai pata laga toh….sab gadbad ho jayegi….
3 police ki car tezi se college ke andar ghusi aur sidhi location trace karti huvi canteen mai ghus gayi..janha Deepika apne dosto ke sath baate kar rahi thi…..sabhi ne itne police walo ko dekha toh ghabra gaye …aur deepika ne moodkar unki taraf dekha wo bhi shok ho gayi itni police …sabhi police walo ne deepika ko charo taraf se cover kar liya
Senior SI-- Mam hume commissioner sir ne bheja h apko lane ke liye…apko hamare sath chalna hoga …
Deepika —-what happened..
SSI-- Emegency …
Deepika-- one minut….aur usne jogindar ko call laga dii….
Usai aise commissioner se baate karta dekh sab hakke bakke rah gaye ….udhar deepika situation samaj gayi thi isliye usne SSI ki taraf ha mai gardan hilayi aur bahar unke sath chalne lagi ….
Deepika-- mere body gaurds sath mai h…
SSI-- kanha h koyi bhi toh nahi dikhayi de raha h…
Deepika ne hawa mai hath wave kiya aur civil dress mai do 6 feet ke ladke samne agaye…….jinhe dekh police ssi bhi hairan ho gaya
Deepika--- Chaliye….
Dusri taraf is douran Jogindar singh ne raj ko call kar sab bata diya tha…..
Raj call cut karne ke baad chacha kya aur speed se nahi chal sakte h….
Bheema-- raj police rok kar time waste kar degi aur speed chalayi toh warna chetak ke engine ki power dikhata tumhe ….
Raj-- cheif ko call lagar kuch bolta h …aur phir chacha speed …..
Bheema-- ne chetak ki speed dikhayi jo highway par balance ke sath hawa ki raftar se daud rahi thi sara tarffic chief ne pahle he clear karwa diya tha …… Road ki side mai khadi police itni tezi se car ko jate huve dekh kar samaj nahi pa rahe the ki vip h ya vvip h….
Dur….
Ek wooden house mai jo pahado aur charo taraf jungle se ghira huva tha aur rah rah kar bhediye aur sher ki garajne ki awaje charo taraf se arahi thi…par us wooden house mai baithe huve insaan ke chahre par dar aur sikan ke koyi bhav nahi the … wo samne rakhe chess par wajir ko marte huve bolta h…“wajir gaya….bahut sakht jaan h wajir tu toh..bomb se bach gaya…. Par dont worry mara jayega aj tu jarur mara jayega mere bhai ko milke mara tha na tum sab tadap tadap ke maroge.…aur tere baad marenge tere hathi ghoda aur uuutt…wajir sab teri wajah se huva …isliye sabse pahle sunil singhaniya tu marega tere baad tera raja commissioner kuch nahi kar sakta h aur na tera baap kaptan singhaniya …aur rahe tere ye khass log unke sath ab hoga khel…jindgi aur mout ka itna kah kar wo jor jor se hasne laga aur uski hansi shant watawaran mai ghunj uthi…aur dubara cheekte huve bolta h…ki ..tumne dhokhe se mara mere bhai ko par main ….jisai duniya sanki urf death halo ke naam se janti h wo kabhi pith piche waar nahi karta h…ek mouka tum sabko jarur dunga….itna kah kar usne siti bajayi jisai se aaspass ki trees se kayi sare admi niche agaye….aur ek ghutna jamin par tikka kar sabne sir niche kar liya ….tab death halo bola vithal…..mehmaan 24 ghante mai ayenge jasien ko bolna ….mehman ka satkar khun se …..hona chahiye….koyi goli nahi chalayega cheer dalna h unki maut tadap tadap kar honi chahiye h jungli janwar unhe jinda noch noch kar khana chahiye h…
Dusri taraf abhay bhi car se nikal chuka tha destination ki taraf jo chattishgarh ka khunkaar Jungle tha janha janwaro ka raj tha insaano ki hadiya tak nahi milti thi …..aur udhar hospital mai sonali ki nind khulti h …wo apne phone ko check karti h toh 20 miscall dikhti h jismai jogindar deepika Raj Divya abhay ki thi…. Uske dil ki dhadkan badh gayiii.aur wo ek baar sunil ko dekhti jo behosh leta huva tha …phir message padhti h jo raj ka tha call back urgent…..itna padhte he uske dil ki dhadakna he rook jati h …..wo lambi lambi saans lekar raj ko call back karti h….par wo kuch bolti samne se awaj aati h…
“Sunil tumhare sath h”
Sonali-- Ha wo……
Raj “kabse behosh h”
Sonali--- kkkk kya….
Raj gusai se “suna nahi maine pucha kab se“
Sonali-- Raat se…
Raj “ Tum…..phir rook kar ….mere ane tak kisi ko bhi matlb dr ko bhi bina check up ke ab andar mat jane dena khatra kam nahi huva h wo ab tumhare liye ayenge…
Sonali kya……
Raj-- jis par sak ho shoot kar dena
Abhi phone cut huve 15 minut he huve the ki niche police ki 2 bolero aakar rookti h….aur unmai se 10 police wale utarte h aur hospital mai jane lagte h ….reception par pahuch kar Dr asthana
Receptionist icu special word 3rd floor…itna soonkar wo sabhi 3rd floor wali lift se upar chale jate h …wanhi sonali room ko band karke bahar safty ke liye akeli khadi ho jati h par usai room ke bahar kuch suspicious nahi lagta h par wo koyi laparwahi nahi rakhna chahti thi isliye upar se niche jhankar dekhti h …phir bhi usai sab tikh lagta h…sunil ka room sabse last mai alag se tha ….kyoki ye ek vvip private room tha….sonali stairs aur lift ke pass aakar chair par baith jati h aur 2 minut baad uske tikh samne khulti h lift......aur sonali ki nazre milti h
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Abhay message padhte he samaj gaya ki kya huva h aur usne dimag se kaam liya aur khud se baat karte huve bola..”shrutii aur ajju itni asani se kisi ke kabu mai nahi aasakte the jarur wo log geenti mai jayda the …aur puri planing ke sath aye the warna ajju ko kabhu karna bilkul asan nahi h ..aur dono ke phone not reacheble hona is baat ka proof h ki ye message …unhi logo ka h jinhone dono ko kidnap kiya h ..aur ab agar main akela gaya toh hum teeno mai se he koyi nahi bachega” ye kahte huve usne turant sonali ko phone laga diya madad ke liye….par sonali jo sunil ke pass puri raat jagi huvi thi usai nind ki jhapki lage abhi 1 hour he huva tha isliye uski nind gahri thi aur table pe vibrate ho rahe phone ki vibration usai mahsus nahi huvi par screen par officer abhay likha huva call lagatar aata raha..toh dusri taraf abhay laga taar phone karte huve bole ja raha tha “ please pickup phone mam ..pick up the demit phone mam” par sonali ko ahsas hota tab toh wo uthati… abhay “shitt” bolta huve … pareshan ho raha tha …usai kuch samaj nahi araha tha ki kua kare….
Abhay-- Fuck Fuck Fuck …..bhad mai gaya wada mere dosto se bhadke nahi h koyi bhi wada .. sonali madam naraj ho toh ho ab raj bhai ko batana he padega aur usne phone laga diya raj ko …..
Raj side …..
Alert alert….. ki tone sunte he wo jhanvi ke pass se jhatke se khada huva ….aur apne phone par pop huve message ko dekhte he uski ankho….mai jo bhav the wo padhna namukin tha…..aur usne apne phone mai jaldi se app kholi ….aur usmai dekhne laga…..
1-Host shweta …..
Status — active
Current Location …..delhi…. commissioner bunglow…
2-Host sunil
Status — inactive
Last location — Delhi…..xxx Hospital …tracker off …..
Raj ne jaise he ye dekha usne turant he first floor se 2 jump mai he sidhiya paar kar li aur uski raftaar pahli baar itni tez thi …aur usai jyada thi uske dil ki dhadkan jo dugni raftaar se dhadak rahi thi…choti chachi ajay Divya aur dadaji ne jab usai dekha toh sirf Dadaji he samaj paye ki kya huva h aur wo wanhi se cheekhe … “ bheemaaa…….chetak nikal…..
Raj aur thakur jagmaal ki ankhe mili …par kisi ne muu se ek sabd nahi kaha
Bheema jo gate ke pass khada tha usne bhi seconds mai he reaction dete huve garrage ki taraf doud laga di ……raj gate ke pass pahucha tab usai peeche se ek chetak ki awaj sunayi dii
Raj ke baithte he bheema ne chetak ko douda diya …
Raj —— delhi ….
Bheema ne ha mai gardan hilayi ….aur gear laga kar delhi ki taraf wale highway par tezi se lejane laga……
Raj man mai “sunil ka tracker band hona asan baat nahi h uska tracker tabhi off ho sakta h jab wo tut jaye ya uski body se 5 meter dur ho jaye 12 hour ke liye
Aur sunil aisa karta toh muje batata par usne nahi kiya h iska matlab wo unconscious h…..aur last location hospital dikha raha…… ye sochte huve usne sonali ko phone mila diya….
Dusri taraf…..
Abhay —- ye raj bhai ka phone bhi busy araha h…. Kya karu mai itna kahte huve usne phone cut kar diya aur ek message likh kar deatil mai raj ko send kar diya …aur khud se man mai sochta huve bola shuruti ne muje dil se bhai maan kar rakhi bandhi h….wanhi ajju ne dosti ko ji jaan se nibhaya h …..nahiii ….koyi meri madad ko aye ya na aye main jaunga unhe bachane ke liye… ……kuch bhi ho jaye …..mere rahte unhe kuch nahi hone dunga….itna kah usne apni bike ghar ki taraf bhaga di janha se wo raj ki taraf se mili fortuner ko lekar jane wala tha….
Dusri taraf ….
Raj ne do baar call lagayi par sonali ne phone nahi uthaya…….
Police commissioner office-—
Meeting ….
Jogindar--- i dont care …muje RAC ki puri reserve force active within one hour puri city mai high alert par chahiye h har cctv mai dekho muje Acp shivani chahiye h dusre states mai fax karo dhundho unhe.. …
Sab — Yes sir ..
Jogindar —Ab Raj se aur chupaya nahi ja sakta h ..warna usai pata laga toh….sab gadbad ho jayegi….
3 police ki car tezi se college ke andar ghusi aur sidhi location trace karti huvi canteen mai ghus gayi..janha Deepika apne dosto ke sath baate kar rahi thi…..sabhi ne itne police walo ko dekha toh ghabra gaye …aur deepika ne moodkar unki taraf dekha wo bhi shok ho gayi itni police …sabhi police walo ne deepika ko charo taraf se cover kar liya
Senior SI-- Mam hume commissioner sir ne bheja h apko lane ke liye…apko hamare sath chalna hoga …
Deepika —-what happened..
SSI-- Emegency …
Deepika-- one minut….aur usne jogindar ko call laga dii….
Usai aise commissioner se baate karta dekh sab hakke bakke rah gaye ….udhar deepika situation samaj gayi thi isliye usne SSI ki taraf ha mai gardan hilayi aur bahar unke sath chalne lagi ….
Deepika-- mere body gaurds sath mai h…
SSI-- kanha h koyi bhi toh nahi dikhayi de raha h…
Deepika ne hawa mai hath wave kiya aur civil dress mai do 6 feet ke ladke samne agaye…….jinhe dekh police ssi bhi hairan ho gaya
Deepika--- Chaliye….
Dusri taraf is douran Jogindar singh ne raj ko call kar sab bata diya tha…..
Raj call cut karne ke baad chacha kya aur speed se nahi chal sakte h….
Bheema-- raj police rok kar time waste kar degi aur speed chalayi toh warna chetak ke engine ki power dikhata tumhe ….
Raj-- cheif ko call lagar kuch bolta h …aur phir chacha speed …..
Bheema-- ne chetak ki speed dikhayi jo highway par balance ke sath hawa ki raftar se daud rahi thi sara tarffic chief ne pahle he clear karwa diya tha …… Road ki side mai khadi police itni tezi se car ko jate huve dekh kar samaj nahi pa rahe the ki vip h ya vvip h….
Dur….
Ek wooden house mai jo pahado aur charo taraf jungle se ghira huva tha aur rah rah kar bhediye aur sher ki garajne ki awaje charo taraf se arahi thi…par us wooden house mai baithe huve insaan ke chahre par dar aur sikan ke koyi bhav nahi the … wo samne rakhe chess par wajir ko marte huve bolta h…“wajir gaya….bahut sakht jaan h wajir tu toh..bomb se bach gaya…. Par dont worry mara jayega aj tu jarur mara jayega mere bhai ko milke mara tha na tum sab tadap tadap ke maroge.…aur tere baad marenge tere hathi ghoda aur uuutt…wajir sab teri wajah se huva …isliye sabse pahle sunil singhaniya tu marega tere baad tera raja commissioner kuch nahi kar sakta h aur na tera baap kaptan singhaniya …aur rahe tere ye khass log unke sath ab hoga khel…jindgi aur mout ka itna kah kar wo jor jor se hasne laga aur uski hansi shant watawaran mai ghunj uthi…aur dubara cheekte huve bolta h…ki ..tumne dhokhe se mara mere bhai ko par main ….jisai duniya sanki urf death halo ke naam se janti h wo kabhi pith piche waar nahi karta h…ek mouka tum sabko jarur dunga….itna kah kar usne siti bajayi jisai se aaspass ki trees se kayi sare admi niche agaye….aur ek ghutna jamin par tikka kar sabne sir niche kar liya ….tab death halo bola vithal…..mehmaan 24 ghante mai ayenge jasien ko bolna ….mehman ka satkar khun se …..hona chahiye….koyi goli nahi chalayega cheer dalna h unki maut tadap tadap kar honi chahiye h jungli janwar unhe jinda noch noch kar khana chahiye h…
Dusri taraf abhay bhi car se nikal chuka tha destination ki taraf jo chattishgarh ka khunkaar Jungle tha janha janwaro ka raj tha insaano ki hadiya tak nahi milti thi …..aur udhar hospital mai sonali ki nind khulti h …wo apne phone ko check karti h toh 20 miscall dikhti h jismai jogindar deepika Raj Divya abhay ki thi…. Uske dil ki dhadkan badh gayiii.aur wo ek baar sunil ko dekhti jo behosh leta huva tha …phir message padhti h jo raj ka tha call back urgent…..itna padhte he uske dil ki dhadakna he rook jati h …..wo lambi lambi saans lekar raj ko call back karti h….par wo kuch bolti samne se awaj aati h…
“Sunil tumhare sath h”
Sonali-- Ha wo……
Raj “kabse behosh h”
Sonali--- kkkk kya….
Raj gusai se “suna nahi maine pucha kab se“
Sonali-- Raat se…
Raj “ Tum…..phir rook kar ….mere ane tak kisi ko bhi matlb dr ko bhi bina check up ke ab andar mat jane dena khatra kam nahi huva h wo ab tumhare liye ayenge…
Sonali kya……
Raj-- jis par sak ho shoot kar dena
Abhi phone cut huve 15 minut he huve the ki niche police ki 2 bolero aakar rookti h….aur unmai se 10 police wale utarte h aur hospital mai jane lagte h ….reception par pahuch kar Dr asthana
Receptionist icu special word 3rd floor…itna soonkar wo sabhi 3rd floor wali lift se upar chale jate h …wanhi sonali room ko band karke bahar safty ke liye akeli khadi ho jati h par usai room ke bahar kuch suspicious nahi lagta h par wo koyi laparwahi nahi rakhna chahti thi isliye upar se niche jhankar dekhti h …phir bhi usai sab tikh lagta h…sunil ka room sabse last mai alag se tha ….kyoki ye ek vvip private room tha….sonali stairs aur lift ke pass aakar chair par baith jati h aur 2 minut baad uske tikh samne khulti h lift......aur sonali ki nazre milti h
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