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Story ke part 1 & part 2 ki story Puri Tarah alag hai
Ek taraf part 1 earth per ki story hai
To dusri taraf part 2 me other Planet ke Sath Sath supernatural power bhi hai

dono story ke 2-3 character hi same hai Baki sab different Hero & Heroine bhi





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nice update ..to abhi ko wo anguthi king abhinav ne di thi ..

forest me jaakar sab kaha chale gaye world door se 🤔🤔 shayad himalaya me aa gaye ho 🤔🤔..

mahi bhi apne group ko lekar himalaya gayi hai dekhte hai kya hai waha par jiske liye raj ne A%A ko kaha tha ki mahi ko waha jaane ke liye 🤔🤔..
 
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nice update ..to abhi ko wo anguthi king abhinav ne di thi ..

forest me jaakar sab kaha chale gaye world door se 🤔🤔 shayad himalaya me aa gaye ho 🤔🤔..

mahi bhi apne group ko lekar himalaya gayi hai dekhte hai kya hai waha par jiske liye raj ne A%A ko kaha tha ki mahi ko waha jaane ke liye 🤔🤔..
Brother sayad aapne Himalaya ke bare jyada jante Nahi hai
Real me bhi Himalaya ke bahut mystery (rahasya) hai
Koi kahta Hai Himalaya pahle samundar tha

Kisi Ka kahana hai Ki Himalaya par sanjivan buti Jaise ausdhiya hai

Aur Sabhi jante Hai ki Himalaya ka ek bhag Kailash parvat hai Jahan Koi Nahin Ja Sakta


Aur bhi bahut Sare histry Himalaya per hai

Otherwise
Jaha Tak baat rahi Himalaya Jane ki to aapka anuman Sahi hai

Story dheere-dheere aage badh rahi hai

because

story ke Sare main character ko ek jagah to aana hi hai

Next update me padhenge
Mystery of Himalaya

Sath hi
Raj aur A&A Ka conversation
 
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UPDATE 3
Ab tak Apne padha ki---

Papa aur maa London chale gaye hain jahan unhen judva baccha hota Hai.
Sath mein yah bhi Jana ki ab sab log mujhe bhul chuke hain shivay Dada ji ke

Ab aage---
Aashram me mahasant mujhe Apne bacche Ki Taraf pyar karte hai.
Jab papa London gaye the to us waqt mei 1.5 sal Ka tha. Mahine me ek bar dadaji mujhse milane aate hai.
Jab mai 5 sal ka hua tabi mahasant Ne meri shiksha shuru kar diya ab mere dimag ka Vikas bhi hone laga tha.
Mere man me rah-rah kar ek hi prashn aata tha
Jab main 6 sal Ka hua tab main aam bacchon se jyada hoshiyar ho gaya tha


Ek bar dada ji mujhse Milne aaye

Mai-dadaji mere sabhi dost ke mummy papa hai mere mummy papa kahan hai
Dada ji ne jab yah baat suni to vah thode pareshan ho Gaya.

Dada-beta vah log kahin gaye hue isliye milane Nahin aa paate

Mai-lekin unhe mujhse milane aana chahie na

Dada-abhi tum yah sab baat Nahin samjhoge jab tum bade ho jaaoge tab main tumhen khud sab bata dunga
Aur iske baad is bare me koi bhi baat nahin hui.


Chaliye ab thodi apni shiksha per chalte Hain

Jab main 5 saal ka hua tab Se mai mahasant ko Guruji bolna shuru kar diya.
Guru ji Ne 5 sal ki avastha se mujhe dhyan lagana vyayam karna aur bhi bahut si baaton Ki shiksha dena shuru karne lage
Haridwar Ka sabse mashhur vidyalay hamare aashram mein Hi hai.
Yahan per admission lene ke liye bacchon ko exam pass karna padta hai.
Jab mai 6 sal ka hua tab guru ji Ne Mera admission usi vidyalay mein kaarvaya chauki mein aashram mein rahata tha isliye bahut Sare shikshak mujhe jante the.
Main pratidin subah 3 baje uthta hu aur 3:15 se 4:30 tak dhyan karta Hu Uske bad 2 ghante vyayam . FIR taiyar hokar 7:30 main vidyalay jata hu
Vidyalay se sham ko 3 baje chhutti hoti hai Uske bad fresh hokar Guruji ke pass jata hu Jo mujhe vedo aur purano Ki shiksha dete hai.

Guruji ka kahana hai ki adhunik jamane mein jitne bhi aavishkar hue hain yah jitni bhi bhasha bani hai un sabhi ka strot hamare ved aur puran Hain.
Dekhte hi dekhte main 10 sal Ka ho Gaya is bich maine ved aur puran Ki shiksha Puri kar li.

Jab mein 6 sal Ka tha tabhi se mujhe Apne andar bahut sari Shakti mahsus hoti thi
Kabhi Kabhi To aisa lagta tha ki koi mere andar chhupa hai vah bahar aana Chahta Hai lekin mujhe yah samajh Nahin aa raha tha ki yah mere sath kyon ho Raha Hai.

Jab main yah baat guru ji ko bataya tab Guruji ne mujhe bataya ki ya dhyan karne ka asar Hai.

(Kab Tak main bolata rahunga ab thodi writer ki bhi sun lete hain)
Writer-jab vah liquid Raj ke body mein Gaya To Raj iske liye Puri Tarah Se taiyar nahin tha
Jis Karan use liquid dheere dheere apna asar dikhane lagi.
Iske prabhav se Kabhi Kabhi Raj Ko gussa bhi aata jab Raj 10 sal ka hua tab aadhe liquid ko Raj ka sharir absorb (apna liya) kar liya lekin liquid ke Bache hue bhag Ko Nahin apna saka
Jis Karan raj par kabhi kabhi liquid ka asar ho jata tha. Jiske bare mein raj ko bhi pata nahin tha lekin aap bahut jald yah samasya khatm hone Wali hai.
Vahin dusri Taraf villain bhi Apne shaktiyon ko pahchanne wala tha)


Ab wapas meri Taraf aate Hain

Ab mei 10 sal Ka ho gaya hu mujhe ab Har hal mein Apne parivar ke bare mein Janna tha. Is bar jab dada ji aaye tab Maine unse poochh liya

Mai-Dada ji aaj aapko hamare parivar ke bare mein batana Hi padega

Dada-beta Maine kitni baar kaha ki abhi Sahi samay Nahin aaya hai

Mai-nahin mujhe is bar Janna hi hai Ki main kaun hun
Iske bad Dada ji Ne mujhe ek ek kar sabhi bate batae kaise Didi ke janm ke bad Papa aur maa mere janm ke liye Haridwar Aaye the.
Vah log mujhse Kitna pyar karte the aur uske bad ek baar London ka jahan unhe judva bacche hue.
Dada ji Ne mujhe yah bhi bataya ki vah log Kabhi America Se wapas Nahin Hai. Iske baad dada ji chale gaye


Vahi sacchai pata chalne ke bad mujhe bahut gussa aa raha tha.
Mera Man kah Raha tha ki abhi vahan jakar unse poochho ki unhone aisa kyon Kiya.
Mera gussa is kadar badh Gaya Ki main vahi behosh hokar gir Gaya iis samay sham ke 8:00 baj rahe the.
Jab mujhe hosh aaya to subah ho chuki thi.

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me villain ki entry hogi and Neha Ka bhi jikr Hoga



THANKS
Back to business :cool:
Ye ajeeb hi chal raha hai kuch...Dada ji ko bada atpata laga hoga ye kahai batane mein...ki tere Maa Baap ne tere liye teri bahan ko choda fir apne agle baccho ke liye tujhe :lol1:
Training sahi chal rahi hai...Gussa aana lazmi tha...
Nice update
 
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UPDATE 4
Ab tak aap logon Ne padha ki---
Mujhe dadaji ne apne bare mein sab kuchh bata diya tha.
Jis Karan mujhe bahut gussa aata Hai aur main behosh ho jata hun

Ab aage---
Kuchh samay pahle jab dadaji Mumbai se Haridwar Aaye the

In Mumbai-
Iis samay Neha ki umra 13 saal hai .
Vah Chacha aur chachi Ko hi apna Mata pita manati hai.
Use Apne asali Mata pita Ke bare mein kuchh Nahin pata hai.
Use bachpan Se Hi bataya gaya tha ki Chacha aur chachi Uske Mata pita hai. Chacha ji ki badi beti hai jiska naam Muskan hai.
Muskan Neha se 1 sal bari hai.
Kabhi Kabhi Muskan aur Neha ke bich jhagada hota hai tab Chacha Neha Ka support karte Hain aur chachi Muskan ka lekin aaj un donon Ka jhagada bahut badh Gaye tab chacha ji Ne ek aisa faisla sunaya jo Neha ne nahin socha tha.
Chacha ji Neha ko 5 sal ke liye hostel bhejne wale the.

Neha-Papa mein Didi ke sath Kabhi jhagada Nahin karungi aap mujhe hostel mat bhejiye

Chacha-yah to hamesha Se hota Aaya hai lekin kab Tak main tumhara support karunga ab tum bahut bigad gaye ho ab tumhe hostel Jana hi hoga.

Chachi-aap apni sari jindagi mein sirf yahi ek achcha kam Karne Wale Hain.
Mai bahut pareshan a gai hun is bachhi se jab dekhu jhagara-jhagara.
Are apni didi se kuchh sikho vah Kabhi tumse jhagara karna nahin aati.
Tum hi hamesha usse larne ka bahana dhundhti ho.

Neha Ne hostel jaane ka bahut virodh Kiya. Lekin uski baat Kisi Ne Nahin mani aur ant me use hostel jana hi pada.
Jab dadaji wapas Ghar Aaye to unhe iis kar bahut gussa aaya.
Vah samaj Gaye ki Chacha, chachi Neha Ko pyar Nahin karte the unhen mere bhi bhavishya ki chinta hone lagi.
Jis Karan ek din vah Apne vakil ke pass gaye aur vasiyat banbai(jiske bare mein aage pata chalega)

Chaliye ab thoda villain ke darshan kar lete hain
Raj Ko sacchai pata chalne ke kuchh samay baad

In Himalaya
Ek ladka Jo lagbhag Raj ke hi umra ka hoga.
Himalaya ke barfi le bhag jaha ka tapman -300⁰c se bhi niche hai.
Vaha par apni practice kar raha tha Kung Fu, karate, judo aur bhi bahut kuch.
Vah larka rukne ka naam hi nahin le raha tha.
Vah Kai dinon Tak apni practis karta Raha
Use bad usne dhyan lagana shuru Kiya aur Kai dino Tak dhyan lagata Raha dinon mahinon mein badal Gaye ek din jab vah dhyan se utha.
Jab vah dhyan se utha tab Uske chehre per ek rahasyamai Muskan thi
Ab vah ladka panch tatva per kabu pane ki koshish Karne laga .
Pahle agni phir jal aise hi Karke usne panch tatva per bhi kabu pa liya.
Usne fir se dhyan lagana shuru Kiya aur usne aapane Sare chakra ko jagrit kar liya.
Iekin iis karya mein use bahut samay laga lagbhag 8 sal ab vah ladka 18 sal Ka ho gaya tha.

Larka- Ab mai wapas aa Gaya Hun .
Aa Raha Hun main tumhari duniya me.
Main tumse tumhara sab kuchh chhin Lunga barbad kar dunga tumhen.
Tumhare pass kuchh Nahin bachega shivay dard ke bahut jald mulakat hogi Mr ?
I am back
Viraj is back

Chaliye aapko to pata chal Hi Gaya ki yah aur koi nahin hamare Story ka villain viraj hai .
Chaliye ab aapko ke power ke bare mein bata dete Hain

Viraj-Hai To Story ka villain lekin iske paas khali shaktiyan Nahin hai.
Iske paas thi formula ki Shakti.
Vahi formula Jo Raj ke andar gaya tha
Viraj ke andar bhi Gaya lekin kaise yah to bad me janenge
ab aate Hain Viraj ke power ki tarah
1 Roop badalna
2 Pal Bhar mein duniya ke kisi bhi jagah per pahunch Jana
3 Kisi bhi chij ko slow motion mein dekhna
4 Kisi bhi insan ko dekh kar Uske Man Ki baat Jaan lena uska atit Jain lena
5 panch tatva ko control karna
Abhi to bus itne hi power hai aage ka bad mein dekhenge

Chaliye wapas Hero ki taraf chalte Hain

In Haridwar
Jab mujhe subah hosh aaya to mai bahut halka mahsus kar raha tha.
Jab main dhyan karne baitha tab ek bahut hi ajeeb baat hai.
Aaj mujhe aisa Nahin laga ki mere andar koi hai.
(Writer-are bebkuf jab formula Puri Tarah Se sharir me adjust ho Gaya to ab kya problem hogi)
Mujhe Apne andar bahut sari pavar mahsus ho rahi thi.
Vahin dusri Taraf guru ji Ne ab meri Astra shastra Ki shiksha shuru ki thi sath hi karate, Kung Fu, judo Aadi.

Ab Mai 17 sal Ka ho chuka hu.
Mujhe ab koi bhi hara Nahin Sakta hai.
Mujhe Apne andar ke power ke bare mein bhi pata chalta
1 main kisi ke Mann Ki baat Jaan Sakta hu
2 koi bhi chij mujhe slow motion mein dikhegi
3 meri speed ab itni tej ho gai thi Ki koi mujhe pakad Nahin Sakta tha
(Writer-are abhi tumhara samna Viraj se nahin hua Hai Nahin to tumhen pata chal jata ki tum kitne paani me ho)

Ek Tarah Se meri jindagi Sahi chal rahi hai.
Tabhi meri jindagi mein ek tufan Aaya.
Aaj Ghar Se aashram mein ek call aaya tha aur udhar Se chacha ji ne mahasant ko bataya ki dadaji ki mrutyu ho gai hai.
Jab mujhe yah baat pata Chali to main bahut tut Gaya.

Mai-guru ji main ghar ja raha hun

M.S-jab tak tum 18 sal ke nahin ho jaate tum Haridwar se bahar Nahin ja sakte

Mai-lekin Guruji dada ji ki mrutyu ho gai hai aur mujhe Jana Hi padega

Jab Tak main apni baat se piche Nahin hata tab guru ji Ne mujhe Mumbai jaane Ki permission de di.
Lekin kuchh samay ke liye.
Main turant thi vahan se Mumbai ke liye Nikal Gaya.

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update mein jaanege ki Viraj kisse badla lene ki baat kar raha hai.
Kya Raj Sahi samay per Mumbai pahunch payega.
Neha ki jindagi mein kya hota Hai


Thanks
Chalo ek couple to milla iss family mein jo apne bachon ke baare mein sochta hai :lol:
Neha ke saath bahut bura hua...
Dada ji bhi guzjar gaye :cry2:
VIllan bhi sahi lag raha hai....powers bhi bata di...bich bich mein writer jab apni baat kahta hai wo mast hai...
Kya mahasant ne sahi kiya...waise wo bhi to dost the Dadaji ke ...kya wo nahi jaa rahe..aur ab kya wo Raj ke maa baap wapas aayenge America se :sigh:
 
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Ab tak aapane padha ki---
Neha hostel Chali gai hai vahi aur villain 18 sal Ka ho chuka hai aur use Apne power ke bare mein pata hai.
vahin dusri Taraf dadaji ki death ho chuki hai aur mai Mumbai ke liye nikalne wala hu.

Ab aage---
Neha hostel to Chali gai lekin Uske man me muskaan ke parti nafrat janm Lene lagi.
Use ab vah har pal yad a raha tha jab Uske aur Muskan ke bich jhagada hota tha.
Har bar Galti Muskan ki hoti thi lekin pata nahin kaise Muskan Har bar Neha ko hi fasha deti thi.
Lekin is bar to had Hi ho gai Neha sabse dur hostel chale Gaye aur uske man mein nafrat janm Lene laga.

Neha-ab chahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye main tumhen Kabhi aage badhane Nahin dungi.
5 sal bus 5 sal per main wapas aaunga aur tum Se tumhara sab kuchh chhin lungi.
Khair kabhi kabhi Neha ko Muskan per bahut gussa aata tha.
To Kabhi Kabhi use Apne bachpan Ki baat yad aati thi yah kaise vua aur Muskan aapas me khela karte the jis Karan use Muskan par bahut pyar aata tha.

Jab neha hostel complete karne ke baad wapas Apne Ghar gai tab uski umr 18 sal ho chuki thi.
Vahin Muskan Apne pita Ke business mein hath batane lagi thi.

Neha-papa mujhe bhi ab business line kam karna hai

Uncle-Yah to bahut acchi baat hai beta lekin uske liye tumhen business management ka course karna padega.

Neha-lekin kyon papa apna hi to business hai koi pareshani Nahin hogi

Uncle-Bina knowledge ke business karna bahut kharab hota Hai.
Nuksan ka bhi samna karna padta hai.
Tumhen to business management ka course karna Hi padega.

Neha-theek hai papa jaisa aap chahe
Iske bad Neha Apne kamre mein Chali jaati Hai

In night 11 pm
Neha ko bahut pyas lagti Hai.
Vah Apne bistar Se uth Kar table ke pass jaati Hai.
Jab vah Jug se glass me Pani bharne lagti Hai tab use pata chalta haiai pata chalta Hai Ki Jag mein Pani khatam ho gaya hai.
Iske bad vah jug ko lekar kitchen mein jaati Hai.
Vahan par pani piti hai Uske bad Jug mein Pani bhar kar Apne kamre Ki Taraf Chali jaati Hai.
Lekin Jaise Hain vah hall me pahunchti Hai use Chacha chachi ke kamre ka light jala hua dikhta Hai.

Neha(man)-itne raat ko maa aur papa ke kamre ka bulb kyon jala hua hai. Mujhe jakar dekhna Chahiye.

Jaise-Jaise Neha kamre Ki Taraf jati hai kamre Ke andar Se kuchh awaaz sunai de rahi thi.
Jaise hi Neha kamre ke bahar pahunchi use kamre ke andar ki awaaz bahut acchi Tarah Se sunai dene lagi.
Jise sunkar Neha ke pair kapne hage aur vah diwal Ka Sahara lekar andar ki bato ko sunane lagi
(Are aap log kuchh galat mat samajh lijiye andar aisa vaisa kuchh Nahin ho raha hai jo aap samajh rahe hain)
Chaliye yah jante Hain Ki Neha Ne aisa kya suna.

Jaise hi Neha kamre ke bahar pahunchi to usne suna
" Tum thoda dhire Nahin bol sakti agar Kisi Ne sun liya to aaj ke bad tum yah bad Kabhi Nahin bologi ki Neha hamari beti Nahin Hai"
Jaise hi Neha ke kanoon mein yah baat pahunchi Uske to hosh in kho Gaye

Yah baat Chacha Ne Kahi thi chaliye ab andar ki baton ko sunte Hain

Chachi-main tumhen fir kha rahi hun use hamare business me involve nahin karna hai.

Chacha-are maine isiliye to use business management ka course karne ke liye kaha hai.

Chachi-bachpan mein jab bhai sahab ne use hamen diya tha. Tab Se humne use apni bacchi Ki Tarah Pala hai.
Lekin main usse Apne bacchon ka hak Nahin Lene dungi. Mai use apne business me Nahin aane dungi.

Chacha-jo bhi Karna hai karo lekin Babu ji ko iske bare mein kuchh pata nahin chalna chahie Nahin to bahut anarth ho jaega

Chachi-kya ho jaega kuchh Nahin hoga jyada Se jyada hamesha Ghar se chale jaenge hamara bhi apna business hai ham bhi sukhi se rah sakte hai.

Chacha-tumhen abhi kuchh Nahin pata hai hamara business empire bahut bada hai aur abhi mujhe to apne business ke bare mein Puri jankari bhi Nahin Hai. Sara kam babuji dekhte hain. Aur pata nahin Har mahine ve kahan chale jaate Hain.

Idhar bahar to Neha Ki duniya Hi ujar chuki thi.
Vah Apne kamre ko acchi Tarah Se band kar foot foot kar Rone lagi.
Aisa hi hota hai jab insan ka samna sacchai Se hota Hai aur aaj Neha ko bhi vahi halat se gujar na pad raha tha.
Kuchh Dino Tak vah bahut gumsum rahi. Lekin Uske baad vah normal ho gai.
Aur apne business management ke course ko karne Delhi Chali gai.

Delhi mein hi usne Apne course ko complete Kiya aur result Ka intezar karne lagi.
Tabhi ek din usse Ghar Se call hai aur yah bataya Gaya ki Uske dadaji Ka mrutyu ho Gaya hai. Kya khabar ko sunte Hain Neha fauran Mumbai ke liye nikal Gaye.

Vahi dusri taraf
Raj bhi Mumbai ke liye nikal chuka tha.
Usne sabse pahle airport se pata Kiya ki Mumbai jane ke liye koi plane hai ya nahin.
Lekin mausam kharab hone ke Karan Sare plane cancel ho gaye the.
Tab Raj by road Mumbai jane Ka faisla Kiya.

Yah vahi samay tha jab Viraj panch tatva ko control kar.
Apne chakra ko jagrit karne ke liye dhyan mudra mein baitha tha.
Jaise-Jaise samay bit raha tha vaise-vaise Viraj ke Charo Taraf ek energy ka circle ban raha tha.
Aur achanak hi ek energy ball us circle se nikalkar bahar aa gai aur dekhte hi dekhte vah gayab ho gai.

In hero side
Mujhe Car chalana aata tha isliye mai Apne Car Se Mumbai ki taraf nikal para (are mujhe dada ji ne car khareed kar di thi)

Jaise hi main Haridwar se bahar nikala to mujhe aisa laga ki koi bahut hi powerful energy mujhse takra gayi Hai.
Kuchh hi palo mai Haridwar me tha.
Jab meri aankh khuli tab maine apne aap ko aashram ke hi ek hospital me paya.

Aap logon Ne bilkul sahi socha
Vah powerful energy Viraj andar Se nikala energy ball Hi tha

Aaj ke liye itna hi

Next update me padhenge
Papa ka Mumbai aana
Neha aur Raj ki pahli mulakat
ke liye itna hi
Kya yaha pe Viraj ki power Raj ke ander aa gayi thi :shocked: yaa ye kuch aur tha
Neha dukhi hogi hi...usko to aaj tak yahi lagta tha uske apne Maa Baap hai ye Chacha chachi par ye wo nahi hai...Dada ji har mahine kaha chale jaate the :?:
next update mein Maa Baap wapas aane wale hai...saath hi bhai bahen bhi milne wale hai :yay:
 
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UPDATE 6
In London

Kahate Hai aisi koi sukh suvidha Nahin Hai Jo London me nahi Ho .
City Ke side area me ek bahut hi bara Ghar.
Ise Ghar kahana galat hoga kyunki yah to Mahal hai.
Chaliye ab ham iss Mahal ke andar chalte Hain.
Gate ke andar jaate Hai ek Taraf playground dusri Taraf phoolon Ka bagicha aur bich se ek rasta.
Raste per kareeb 500 metre jaane per mahal Ka gate.
Jaise hi Ghar Ke andar kadam rakhte Hain pata chalta Hai yah to Raja Maharaja ke Mahal se bhi shandar hai.
Kamre Ki ginti Nahin 2 floor ka yah Mahal aur Har floor per ek swimming pool.
Chaliye ab ham chalte Hain is Mahal ke sabse shandar kamre me.
Jahan per 14-15 sal ke do bacche so rahe hai.
Tabhi kamre ke andar koi aata Hai.

Maa- kab tak sote rahoge School bhi jana hai jao taiyar ho jao
(Aapane bilkul sahi pahchana yah bacche aur koi Nahi ansh aur Anshu hai)

Iske bad Ansh aur Anshu sabse pahle brush karte Hain Uske bad taiyar hote Hain fur niche breakfast ki table per pahunch jaate Hain.

Niche papa aur maa breakfast karne ke liye baithe hue the kabhi vaha par ye donon jaate Hain

Ansh&Anshu-good morning everyone

Papa&maa-good morning bacchon

Papa-aaj ka kya program hai school jana hai ya nahin

Maa-kyon Nahin jaega school jarur Jayega maine theek kahan hna Ansh.

Ansh- papa aaj hamare school mein program hai kya aap aur ma school mein aaenge

Papa-Maine tumhen kitni bar kaha hai hamare pass faltu ka time nahin hai aur aaj hamare ek business meeting mein hai

(Yah log breakfast karte hue baten kar rahe the)

Tabhi ek call aata hai jise papa receive karte hai aur pareshan Ho jaate Hai

Maa-kya baat hai itna pareshan kyon Ho Gaye

Papa-India se call aaya hai mujhe urgent India Jana Hoga is meeting ko tum hi attend karna.

Ansh-Papa main bhi aapke sath chalunga

Papa-main vahan akela ja raha hun koi mere sath Nahin Hai samjhe

Ansh-lekin papa Mera bahut man Hai vahan jaane ka

Papa- Ansh maine ek bar kah diya na

Ansh - ji papa

Breakfast ke baad papa India ke liye nikal jaate Hain

In Mumbai
Neha Delhi se Mumbai aa chuki hai.
Vah sabse jyada pyara dadaji Se Hi karte thi jis Karan vah bahut ro rahi hai.
Tabhi vahan per Abhishek aata Hai

Abhishek-didi ab rone se kya hoga, dadaji to ab Nahin rahe aap bhi apna tabiyat kharab kar rahi hai,
Iske bad Abhishek jabardasti Neha ko Uske kamre me le jata hai.

Pahle to Neha bahut roi Uske bad fresh hokar antim sanskar mein jaane ke liye nikali
Tabhi usse kuchh baten sunai dene lagi

Buaa-Ramesh Tumne bhai sahab ko bol diya hai ki Papa ki death ho chuki hai

Uncle- Ha didi aaj subah hi bola hai.

Bua-ab to Neha bhi unke sath Chali jayegi kab tak vah apni beti ko yahan per rakhenge

Uncle-ab kar bhi kya sakte hai bhale hi humne use Pal pushkar bada kiya ho lekin vah to bhai sahab ki hi santan hai.

Jab Neha yah baat Ko sunti Hai ki aaj Uske Papa aane vale hai.
To vah thori khush ho jaati hai lekin fir kuchh sochti hai

Neha(man)-mai aapse jarur puchungi ki aap aaj Tak mujhse milane kyon Nahin Aaye. Aakhir mujhe bhi pata Hona chahie ki aisi kya baat hai jis Karan Mai aap logon ke sath Nahin thi.

Chaliye ab bahar chalte Hai.
Abhi Tak papa Nahi Aaye the aur Dada ke antim sanskar Ka samay ho Gaya tha.
Ab sabko lagne laga ki papa Nahi aayenge.
Tab Gupta uncle be Bola ki ab hame antim Yatra shuru Karni chahie.

(Gupta uncle hamare dada ke friend aur vakil the)
Lekin tabhi vahan papa aa gaye. uncle hamare dada ke friend aur vakil the)
Lekin tabhi vahan papa aa gaye.


Sorry readers update bahut chhota hai aaj update likhne Ka bilkul bhi man Nahi tha lekin fir bhi likh karvpost Kar Raha hu

otherwise
next update 1500-2000 word Ka

Thanks
:sigh: kya jodi hai...aise Maa baap kaha hote hai....ab to agar Neha aur Raj ko uske Papa naa bhi pahchane to koi badi baat nahi hogi...aur wo Maa haiya kuch aur samajh nahi aa raha...emotion hi nahi inme...
Late aaye hai ye mahasay...apne hi Pita ke antim sanskar mein :sigh:
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UPDATE 7
Ab tak aapne padha---

Dadaji ki mrityu ho chuki hai jismein shamil hone ke liye main nikala to tha lekin hospital pahuch gaya vahin papa bhi London se India as chuke hain.

Ab aage---

Papa Dada ke shav ke pass gaya fir shuru hui family drama.
Thodi der tak sab ek dusre se milte rahe aur uske bad antim sanskar ki prakriya shuru hui.
Sabhi Ke aankhon Se aansu nikal rahe the.
Antim sanskar me pure mohalle Ke log shamil hue the.
Kyunki dadaji bahut hi acche insan the unhone Puri jindagi mein bahut Sare logo ki madad ki thi.
Khair ab ham chalte Hain shamshan ghat vahin jahan per antim sanskar hota Hai.

Dada ji ke sharir ko lakadi per dala gaya tha uske upar se bhi lakadi.
Vahi panditji Sare Vidhi vidhan ko kar rahe the.
Kuchh samay bad jab dadaji ko Agni Dene Ka samay Aaya tab pitaji ne dadaji ko agni Di.
Uske baad sabhi bagal ke hi Nadi mein snan Kar Ghar wapas laut Aaye.
Ghar par matam ka mahaul tha vahin Neha jald se jald papa ke pass pahunchna chahti thi Lekin use samay hi nahin mil raha tha.
Thodi der ke bad sabhi log Apne-Apne Ghar Ko chale Gaye. Vahi chacha bua aur papa ko ek kamre me bulate hai

Chacha-bhai sahab ab to Neha aapke sath London Chali jayegi.
Hamara man Uske Bina bilkul bhi Nahin Lagta.

Yah baat sunkar achanak papa Ko achanak yaad aata hai ki unki ek beti bhi thi.
Jise unhone chacha ji ko diya tha.
Lekin tab unhen ek aur baat yaad aati hai.
Jiske baad vah kahate Hain.

Papa-Nahin Neha yahi rahegi.

Bua-dekh rahi hu bhai sahab aap bahut badal Gaye Hain.
Jab aapko Neha ki jarurat thi tab aapane use apne pass rakha.
Aur jab aapko uski jarurat Nahin hai tab aap use Puri Tarah Se bhul gaye.
Insaniyat naam Ki bhi koi chij hoti hai.
Aap to vah bhi bhul gaye.

Chacha-yah tum kya kah rahi ho Didi.
Tumhare kahane ka matlab kya hai.

Bua-yah baat tum bhai sahab se hi poochh lo unhone kya kiya tha
Lekin vah To bataenge Nahin mai hi bata deti hu
Bua-bhabhi ko ek mari hui bacchi paida hui thi
Tab bhai sahab ne nurse ki madad se hospital me hi janm li hui ek bacchi se use badal Diya.
Jab yah baat Chacha sunte Hain To unhen bahut bara jhatka lagta hai.

Yah log aapas mein baat kar rahe the lekin inhe pata nahin tha ki koi hai jo unki baton ko sun Raha Hai.

Kuchh samay ke baad parivar ke sabhi sadasya hall mein baithe hue the.
Aur unke samne Gupta uncle baithe hue the.
Gupta uncle dada ji ki wasiyat padhne walee the.

Aisa nahin tha ki chacha ji ke pass apni property Nahin hai.
Papa ne dadaji ke madad se apna business shuru kiya tha aur ab London ke number 1 businessman haj.
Vahi chacha ji aur bua ne ek sath milkar dada ji ki sahayata se apna business shuru kiya tha aur abhi India ke a top 10 businessmen me se ek hai.

Lekin Dada ji ka bhi apna ek business tha. Unhone pure Bharat mein Kai jagah jameen kharidi thi mall hotel Aur bhi bahut Sare business start kiye hue the aur unke dwara hone Wali income ek account mein jaati Hai.
Jiske bare mein abhi tak Ghar per kisi ko pata nahin tha.
Unhen bus itna pata tha ki dadaji Ka bhi ek business hai aur vah uske dwara hone Wali income ko Haridwar ke aashram me dete hai.

Khair ab chalte Hain Gupta uncle ki taraf.
Gupta uncle Dada ji ke vasiyat ko kholkar padhna shuru karte Hain


Mai Amrit Bansal aaj apni marji se yah vasiyat banvane ja raha hun

Meri Puri sampatti ka 25% aur apna yah Ghar mere Chote bete Ramesh Bansal Ke naam karta hoon
Aur apni beti Puja ke naam bhi apni property ka 25% karta Hu.
Baki ke bache 50% mai Apne pote Raj Bansal Ke naam karta hu.



Gupta uncle-jaisa ki wasiyat me bataya gaya hai us hisab se 25% property ki kimat 5000 karor rupya hai.

Jaise hi Gupta uncle mein yah baat Kahi Chacha aur bua ke hosh hi ud gaye.

Gupta uncle mein 1 passbook bua ko aur 1 passbook Chacha ko diya aur sath hi Ghar Ke property ke paper Chacha ko diya.

Gupta uncle-ine donon passbook me p
5000 karor gaya hai Jo Aapke finger print se hi khulenge.
Aur aapke jankari ke liye bata do Ki Raj ab aashram mein Nahin rahata hai.
Uske hisse ki money Uske pass pahle hi bahut chuki hai
Vah kahan per hai Kisi Ko Nahin pata

Papa koi in sabhi baton Se koi fark nahin par raha tha unka To Ghar hi 1000 karor Rs Ka hai. Dusre din papa bhi wapas London chale gaye

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me ham padhenge
Raj ka hosh me aana sath hi Raj aur Neha ki pehli mulakat
Neha uski beti hai hi nahi... :shocking: ye baatein jarur Neha ne hi sunni hogi...
Ab Neha ha kya hoga...usko to property mein bhi kuch nahi milla hai...
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UPDATE-8

Ab tak aapne padha---
Dada ka antim sanskar ho gaya hai.
Aur wasiyat bhi sabke samne aa gai hai.
Sath hi Neha ka ek sach Chacha ko pata Chala Hai

Ab aage---
Is waqt Neha Apne dadaji ke kamre me hai aur uske samne Dada ji baithe hue hain.

Neha-Dada ji aap bar-bar Haridwar kyon jaate Hain.

D.J-beti Haridwar duniya Ke sabse pavitra Jagho me Se ek Hai.
Ved-puran me likha hai Haridwar mein khud bhagwan Vishnu Aaye the.
Vahan ki hawaon mein bhi itna sukun hai ki log apni sari pareshani bhul jate hai.

D.J-jab bhi Mera Man asanth ho jata hai main Haridwar Chala jata hu.
Kabhi Kabhi to main yah sochta Hun main Haridwar hi ja kar rahu.

D.J-beti jab bhi tumhara man vichalit ho jaega.
Tumhe Sahi galat andaja Nahin rahega tum Haridwar Chali Jana.
Tumhen aage ka rasta khud-B-khud mil jaega.

Abhi yah sab Ho Hi Raha tha ki tabhi vahan per bahut jyada roshni hoti hai.
Jis Karan Neha ki nind khul jaati Hai.
(ab To aap samajh hi gaye honge ki Neha sapnon me Apne purane yadon me khoi hui thi)

Abhi Neha jagi hi thi ki usse Raat mein hui bua Papa aur chacha ki baten yad aane lagi.
Jisse uski aankhon mein aansu aa Gaya.
Vah raat ko Apne papa se milane gaye thi.
Lekin vahan per hui baton ko sunkar vah wapas Apne kamre mein laut aai aur rote rote So gai.
Tabhi use Dada ki baten yaad aane lagi Jo unhone kuchh din pahle hi use bataya tha.

Tabhi Neha Ko yad aata Hai ki uski hostel ki ek Friend ka Ghar Haridwar me hi hai.
Jiske baad neha use call Karti Hai

Neha-hello Anjali mai neha bol rahi hu.

Anjali-ha neha bolo kya Kam Hai.

N-Wo mein kuchh din ke liye Haridwar aa rahi thi to kya main tumhare ghar per ruk sakti hu.

A-ha-ha kyon Nahin vaise bhi abhi mere mummy-papa kuchh dinon ke liye bahar gaye hue hai.

N-theek hai to main tumse aaj sham me milati hu.

(ISI Tarah donon saheliyon Ke bich kuchh baat hui Uske baad Neha Ne call cut Kar Diya)

Uske baad Neha fresh hokar bahar jaati Hai.
Jahan sabhi log baithe hue the.
Neha sabhi ko Apne Haridwar jane ke bare mein batati hai.
Aur sabhi Raji Ho jaate Hain.

Dopahar Tak Neha Haridwar jaane ke liye nikal jaati Hai aur sham ko apne friend ke ghar pahunch jaati Hai

Vahin dusri Taraf
Mujhe 2 dinon ke baad hosh aata Hai.
Jab mujhe Hosh aata Hai to mai apne aap ko aashram ke Hi ek kutiya mein pata hai.
Jab mai theek se dekhta hai to vahan per mahasant baithe hue the.
Jab mahasant Ko pata chalta Hai Ki mujhe hosh Aaya Hai.
Vah ke pass jaate Hain aur Uske hath ki nari ko check karte hue

M.S-ab Kaisa lag raha hai tumhen

Mai-main yahan per kaise Aaye main To Mumbai ja raha tha.

M.S-Maine tumhen kitni baar mana Kiya Lekin tum Nahin mane.
Tumhara accident Ho Gaya tha aur tum 2 dinon ke baad hosh mein Aaye ho.

Abhi yah donon baat kar hi rahe the ki vahan per Gupta ji aate Hain aur Raj Ko dadaji ki vasiyat ke bare mein bata dete Hain.
Aur Raj ke hisse ki property use de dete Hain.

Mai-lekin mai iska kya karunga.
Mujhe to business ke bare mein kuchh knowledge Nahin Hai.

Gupta ji-aapke Dada ki antim ichha thi ki aap unke business ko aage badhaye.
Isiliye unha mein apni aadhi property Aapke naam Ki Hai.

iske baad Gupta ji chale jaate Hain.

M.S- Raj tumhen ek aise vyakti Ko dhundhna Hoga.
Jiske pass business ki knowledge Ho aur use per tum bharosa kar sako.

Mai-jaisa aap kahan guru ji.

Sham Tak mai Puri Tarah Se theek ho jata hai.
FIR vah Apne car mein baith kar Haridwar ghumne ke liye nikal jata hai


Vahi dusri Taraf
Neha apne Anjali ke ghar pahunch jaati hai.
Fir uske sath Haridwar ghumne jaati Hain.
Aur Raat Ko wapas aa jaati hun.
Dusre din Anjali Ko Kisi kam se a bahar jana para.
Tab Neha akele Hai ghumne ke liye nikal jaati hain.
Din bhar vah alag-alag Mandir mai darshan Karti hai aur jab sham ko Anjali Ke Ghar laut rahi hoti hai.
Tabhi ek Car use takkar mar deta hai.


Vahi Raj Car chalate hue use property ke bare mein Soch Raha tha
Raj Ko business ka ABCD bhi nahin aata tha.
Tabhi achanak Uske car Ke samne ek ladki aa gai aur Raj ne break laga diya.
Jab tak rukti tab tak usi ladki ka accident ho chuka tha lekin jyada serious nahi.
Raj car se utar Kar us ladki ko uthaya aur aashram Ke hi hospital me le gaya.
Thodi der ke baad us ladki ko hosh aa Gaya.

Raj- hay I am Raj and you.

Larki-I am Neha
(Thodi der tak raj ne Neha Ko Dekha Aur Jaan Gaya Ki vah is per vishwas kar sakta hai.
Raj Kisi bhi vyakti ke aankhon mein dekhkar Use swabhav ko pahchan sakta tha)

Thodi der tak Raj aur Neha mein baten hoti hai.
Neha ko ek achcha insan lag raha tha.
Jis jaran Neha Raj Ko Apne bare mein sab kuchh bata deti Hai.
Raj ne bhi Neha ko apne business problem ke bare me bataya aur usse pucha.

Raj- kya tum mere business ko chalane me meri madad karogi.

Neha-main tumhari kya madad kar sakte hu.

Raj-jab Tak mai apni study complete nahin kar leta.
Main business mein nahin aana Chahta to kya tab tak tim mere business ko Dekhogi.

Neha-yah to bahut badi jimmedari hai Har mujhe koi expression bhi Nahin Hai.

Raj- vah to tumhen kam karte karte mil hi jaega aur jahan tak baat rahi jimmedari ki to main tum per itna bharosa to karta Hu ki tumhara rahate mujhe koi pareshani Nahin hogi.

Neha-agar tum mujhpar itna bharosa karte Ho to main bhi taiyar hu

Raj-yah hui na baat aur aaj ke baad tum mujhko Raj Hi bologi

Neha-theek hai Raj.

Raj Neha ko apne business ka M.D banaa deta hai.
Ab Neha business ke Kai mamlo ko khud hi dekhtu gai,
Aur serious matter per Raj ki jarurat padti.

Abhi ke liye itna hi
Ho sake to 3-4pm tak ek aur update


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mulakat acchi rahi....raj ko yakkin ho gaya Neha pe aur usne usko business bhi saup diya...Neha ko bhi kaam mil gaya hai
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