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Story ke part 1 & part 2 ki story Puri Tarah alag hai
Ek taraf part 1 earth per ki story hai
To dusri taraf part 2 me other Planet ke Sath Sath supernatural power bhi hai

dono story ke 2-3 character hi same hai Baki sab different Hero & Heroine bhi





RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete) PDF





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DAIVIK-RAJ

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Back to business :cool:
Ye ajeeb hi chal raha hai kuch...Dada ji ko bada atpata laga hoga ye kahai batane mein...ki tere Maa Baap ne tere liye teri bahan ko choda fir apne agle baccho ke liye tujhe :lol1:
Training sahi chal rahi hai...Gussa aana lazmi tha...
Nice update
Brother Raj Ko To Sab Pata chalna Hi tha
Ab madhyam Agar dadaji bane Tu problem he kya hai
Aakhir unhone sach hi bataya
 

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Chalo ek couple to milla iss family mein jo apne bachon ke baare mein sochta hai :lol:
Neha ke saath bahut bura hua...
Dada ji bhi guzjar gaye :cry2:
VIllan bhi sahi lag raha hai....powers bhi bata di...bich bich mein writer jab apni baat kahta hai wo mast hai...
Kya mahasant ne sahi kiya...waise wo bhi to dost the Dadaji ke ...kya wo nahi jaa rahe..aur ab kya wo Raj ke maa baap wapas aayenge America se :sigh:
Brother jimmedari Sabse badi chij hoti hai aur Mahasant ki jimmedari Haridwar ke aashram se jud chuki hai aur sath mein abhi Raj se bhi Jiske Karan vah bahar Nahin Ja sakte Haridwar se
 

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Kya yaha pe Viraj ki power Raj ke ander aa gayi thi :shocked: yaa ye kuch aur tha
Neha dukhi hogi hi...usko to aaj tak yahi lagta tha uske apne Maa Baap hai ye Chacha chachi par ye wo nahi hai...Dada ji har mahine kaha chale jaate the :?:
next update mein Maa Baap wapas aane wale hai...saath hi bhai bahen bhi milne wale hai :yay:
Viraj ke andar ki power raj me Nahin gai hai lekin Raj ke power thoda badha jarur gayi Hai
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Neha ke sath sach me bahut bura hua and Neha ki mystery second part me hi solve hogi
 

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:sigh: kya jodi hai...aise Maa baap kaha hote hai....ab to agar Neha aur Raj ko uske Papa naa bhi pahchane to koi badi baat nahi hogi...aur wo Maa haiya kuch aur samajh nahi aa raha...emotion hi nahi inme...
Late aaye hai ye mahasay...apne hi Pita ke antim sanskar mein :sigh:
nice update
Brother mom-dad ki mystery last 2-3 update me solve ho jayegi
 

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Ab tak aapane padha---

Kuchh senior aur gunde Ansh ko maarte Hai

Tab vahan per Raj aata hun aur Ansh ko bacha kar Uske Ghar le jata hai.
Saath hi yah bhi Jana Ki Raj ke jaane Ke turant baad mom vhi Haridwar se ghar aa jaati Hai.

Sath hi Viraj ke bare mein bhi Kuchh charcha hui

Ab aage---
Anshu Se sab Kuchh Jaan lene ke baad mom Apne kamre mein gai
Aur apna mobile nikal kar ek number dial kiya--

62031*****
Lekin dusri taraf se koi response Nahin Aaya
Mom Ne fir se number dial kiya---

*****84959
Lekin fir se Kuchh response Nahin hua
Mom ne ek antim bar fir se try kiya---
**031849**
Is bar samne wale Ne call utha liya aur udhar Se ek awaaz aai

Awaaz-han bolo private number per call kyon Kiya

Mom-aapse ek jaruri baat karni thi

Awaaz-han bolo kya baat karni thi
Yahan per Ab koi Nahin Hai

Iske bad mom ne unhe Haridwar me Raj ki ghatna Se lekar
Mumbai me hue A&A ke kand ke bare me bata diya

Awaaz-vahan per jo ho raha hai vah tum Hi sambhal lo
Aur jald se jald Raj ko dhundho.
Yahan to hath dho kar Viraj mere piche pada hua Hai
Ab to mujhe lagta hai ki vah mujhe barbad karke hi rahega.

Mom-tum ab business per dhyan mat do
Agar Viraj hame barbad karna chahta hai to barbad kar hi dega
Aur jahan tak maine Viraj ke bare mein suna hai
Ab tak usne sari planning Kar li hogi.

Mom-Ab to hamare bachne ka ek hi upay hai
Wo unknown account
Tum jald se jald Uske bare mein pata karo
uske milte Hi ham donon sab Kuchh chhod Kar yahan se chale jaenge

Awaaz- Han tumne bikul Sahi Kaha
Ek bar vah account hamare hath mein aa jaaye
To koi hamara kuchh nahin bigar sakta hai.
Aaj fir mai Uske paas ja raha hun
Is baar mai use mental torture karunga
Iske baad dusre taraf se call cut Ho Gaya


Ek andhera kamra
Jahan per insan ko apna hath bhi dikhai Nahi dega

Achanak us kamre ka darvaja khula
Aur koi andar Aaya
Are yah kya kamre ke andar to ek aadami (A1) aur ek aurat(A2) janjiro mein bandhe hue Hai.
Kamre ke andar Aaye insan(I¹) Ko dekhkar vah dono ghabraye


A1-Tum kitni bhi koshish kar lo
Mai tumhen use account ke bare mein Kuchh bhi Nahin bataunga

Abhi A1 Ne itna hi kaha tha ki
I¹ ne A2 Ko electric shock de Diya

A1-Tum Kuchh bhi kar lo
Ham tumhen Kuchh bhi Nahin bataenge
Hamen pata hai ki tum hamen Kabhi Nahin maroge

I¹-mai tum donon ko 10 dino ka samay de raha hu
Agar tumne mujhe vah information Nahin Di
To main vah karunga Jo T
Tum soch bhi nahin sakte ho
Mai un charo ko maar dunga

A1&A2-tum aisa Kuchh bhi Nahin kar sakte ho

I¹-abhi tak tumne Mujhe theek se Jana nahin hai
Mai uss account ko hasil karne ke liye
Kuchh bhi kar sakta hu
Kuchh bhi


Writer language
Abhi aap log yahan sochkar pareshan ho rahe honge Ki

Iss account mein aakhir kya hai
Aur kaun Iske piche pada hai

Ise janne ke liye 1 small flashback me chalna hoga

FLASHBACK---
Baat kab ki hai Jab dad aur mom India se London aaye the

Tab unke sath dad ke college Ka ek friend Pradeep aur uski wife Riya bhi London aai thi
Donon ne London mein apna apna work start Kiya
Dad ka business to kamyabi Ko chhu gaya
Lekin pardeep ek company me employee bankar hi rah Gaya.
A&A ke janm ke Kuchh samay pahle
Dad aur Pradeep Kisi kaam se ek Iceland per gaye
Jahan per ek tarah se unki kismat hi badal gayi.
Un donon ko vahan per by mistake ek secret place per 5000 karor rupya mila
Pardeep ke bar-bar samjhane per dad ne Apne power ka use kar use paise ko ek business account mein dal diya
Jiska use Papa aur Pradeep donon kar sakte the
Kuchh hi dinon ke baad achanak pura paisa Kisi dusre account mein transfer ho gaya
Aur fir use account se ek unknown account me
Jab ab dad aur Pradeep ko yah baat pata chali
Unhen bahut shocked laga

Lekin vah paisa black tha isliye koi Kuchh Nahin kar sakta
FLASHBACK END
Kuchh update baad ek Aur flashback aaega
Fir story ke Sare secret khul jaenge


Vahin dusri Taraf
Viraj Ke Jo aadami papa ke business me the
Unhone Viraj ke order per
Papa ke Har business mein drugs aur inlegal work start kar diya
Jiska khabar abhi tak Dad Ko Nahin laga tha
Vahi Viraj ne bhi ek hacker ka mind ki sari information
Apne mind mein copy kar li
Aur sahi mauke Ka intezar Karne laga


In Hero side
Jis waqt mom Haridwar se Mumbai ke liye nikali thi
Usi waqt mahasant ne Raj se sampark Kar use jald se jald Haridwar bula liya
Aur iss waqt Raj mahasant Ke samne baitha hua tha

Raj-kya baat hai guru ji
Aaj aapane mujhe yahan kyon bulaya hai

M.S-Raj aaj tumhari Mata ji yahan aai thi

Raj- Mom yaha aai thi
Kahan per hai vah
Mujhe abhi ke abhi unse milana hai

M.S-main unhen wapas Mumbai bhej diya

Raj-lekin kyon Guruji
Aap unhe rok kar Rakh sakte the
Lekin aapane aisa Kuchh Kiya iska jarur Kuchh karan hoga

M.S-Mujhe tumhare mataji ke andar se
Vah energy mahsus Nahin ho rahi thi
Jo aaj se 20 sal pahle thi

Raj-aap kahana kya chahte Hai guru ji

M.S-mere kahane ka matlab yah hai ki
Ya to yah koi bahrupiya thi
Ya fir inke sath koi bahut buri ghatna ghati hai
Tumhen jald se jald uska pata lagana hai

Raj-jaisa aap kahe Guruji

Iske baad Raj wapas Mumbai a Gaya
Aur apne mom Ka pata lagane laga
Taki use uske sabhi sawalo Ke jawab mil jaaye
Ki aisa kya karan tha Jiske karan Uske Mata pita ab tak usse milane Nahin Aaye the.


Abhi ke liye itna hi
:shocked: ye kya ho gaya Mom koi aur hai...haa aisa ho sakta hai..ab kon si Maa apne hi bacche ko bhul jayegi..ye Pradeep aur Riya ka bhi kuch connection lagta hai...

Gajab update
 

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:shocked: ye kya ho gaya Mom koi aur hai...haa aisa ho sakta hai..ab kon si Maa apne hi bacche ko bhul jayegi..ye Pradeep aur Riya ka bhi kuch connection lagta hai...

Gajab update
Yes brother Mom koi aur hai and next flashback tak Sare jawab mil jaenge
Otherwise
Fast part ke update Ka size Kabhi small Kabhi medium tha
But
Second part me Bas first update hi small hai Baki Sare update medium ya fir Mega hai


Thanks for supporting Ristrcted Bhai
 

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Thanks for supporting Ristrcted Bhai
Otherwise
First time family type story likh Raha tha isliye character ko emotion dene me thoda mistake ho Gaya
Jiska ek bara Karan Kuch secret bhi tha Jo 1st part ke last me pata chalega

And first part ke last me Aapke Sare doubt clear Ho jaenge

Maine iss site pahli story Jo ki mere dwara likhi gai pahli story thi family base per hi thriller tha Jo ki long story thi but Bina anubhav ke likhane Ke Karan vah short story ban gai
First story link
aapki ye kahani padhi ..jyada samajh nahi aaya kyunki bahut jagah naam ko change kar diya hai ..
kabhi suman ke pati ka naam sanjay to kabhi suraj likha hai ..

kahi pe karan ko arjun likha hai .
matlab shayad aap naam ko yaad nahi rakh paaye 😁😁..
 
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