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Incest Ravan ek villan & The Ruhi ( fantasy, thriller family loves,action suspense story)

Best character in the story & i like the story


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Baap Ji

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Dosto ye story pehle se hi Xf par chal rahi hai baghi beti devil son k Naam se
Restart kar raha hu kuch karno ki vajh se hope you guys support me.

Ravan ek villan

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Spoiler 1
Kya Hoga jab sidha sadha ladka apne baap aur bahen ki vajh se ravan ban jata hai ghar chodne ke baad. Kya wo dubara apni bahen aur pariwar se mil payega... inhi sawalo ko janne k liye story pade.

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Spoiler 2
Ye story ek police commissioner ki hai jo system or netao ka Gulam hai.
Kya Hoga tab jab jab iski beti iske or system k khilaaf jung shuru kar degi aur naksalio k group ko join kar legi..

2 Spoiler dene ki vajh ye hai story alag alag Samay par chalegi
 
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Kai dino ki tarah aaj bhi Shimla me surja nahi nikla tha pure shaher ka thand se bura hal tha Jahan
Wohi central jail of Shimla me
Jail ke maidan me khade logo ke pasine chhut rahe they is kadake ki thand me bhi unke Jism pasine se naha rahe they.

police aur army ek maidan me ikatthi thi sama esa tha ki kisi ko fasi dene k liye ye police aur army ki bheed lagi inhi me kuch aam log bhi they jinka ro ro ke bura haal tha
Ansu pani ko tarah beh rahe they
Ek aurat jo bahut khubsurat thi wo cheekh cheekh k ye sadaye de rahi thi
Jab w dekhti hai ki kale kapro me ek pario jaisi ladki jise pakad ke do guard jail ki cell se nikal ke la rahe they.

Aur samne chabutre par Jahan fasi ka fanda latak raha tha wo ladki ek nazar us fasi ke fande ko dekhti jise marne ka koi gham nahi tha lekin barier me khadi apni Maa aur bahen ko dekhte uski ankhe behne lagti hai. Uske man me hazar tarah ke sawal Aa rahe they apni bahen ko lekar ke uske bina uski choti bahen Sohi kaise jiyegi uski maut ke sath uski choti bahen bhi mar jayegi ye sochte hue uska kaleja fatt raha tha .

Fasi k fande ke pass jaise jaise uske kadam badh rahe they uski zindagi uski ankho ke samne kisi film ki tarah chalne lagi. Apni yadon me khote hue use koi Yaad aata hai.

Ladki man me : meri Jaan tujhe kabhi samajh na paayi na tere pyar ko na jane ab tu kaha hai ek beti ka farz bhi maine bahut ache se nibhaya choti bahen ko bhi bharpur pyaar diya agar kisi ki gunehgar hu to Sirf teri... Aaj meri Rooh ka rishta mere Jism se tut jayega mai itni unlucky hu ki tujhse mafi mangne ka bhi chance nhi hai mere bas itna Jaan Le.. I love you more than everything..



Aurat us ladki ko dekhte hue : chod do meri beti ko chod do chod do mere kaleje ke tukde ko chor de..

Bina ruke wo bas ro ro ke cheekhti Jaa rahi thi esa malum padh raha tha jaise apni beti ki maut dekh k uski sanse bhi tham jayegi

Pass me apsara jaisi ladki zameen par ghutno k baal baith k sanse sambhalti hui bas apni bahen ko chorne ki bheekh mang rahi thi aansuo se uski frok bheeg gayi thi chahera laal pad gaya tha sara ..
Ladki : didiiiiiiiii........ Daddddddd..... Meri diii ko chor do chahe to mujhe fasi de do...

Ladki bheegti aankho se ek Sans me Kai baar minnate kar rahi thi apni di ko chod dene ki...

Unhi policewalo me ek 43 saal ka bhi aadmi tha jo apni beti ko dekhta hi is haal me to andar se wo bhi tadap jata hai
Gham ka sama charo or bana hua tha
Wo admi apni yadon me kho jata hai hai us ladki ko fasi ke fande ki or jata dekh k
Ki kitne nazo se Pala tha usne apni beti ko aaj khud apne hatho se fansi de raha tha
Jab us ladki k chahere par nazar dalta hai to uske samne us ladki ka bachpana Aa jata hai...

Flashback :
Ek 5th class me padne wali ladki bistar pe leti thi jiske bistar par ek admi baitha tha jo us ladki k sar ko sehla raha tha..
Ladki : papa ap mujhe bhi marenge jaise devi laal ko mara
Admi : kabhi nahi meri beti papa to apko kabhi chhu bhi nahi sakte apka bhai devi laal bada shaitaan hai jo badi badi galtiyan karta isliye papa ne mara Taki age se esa kuch na kare
Ladki masoomiyat se : acha papa ap mujhe kabhi nahi marenge
Admi : Haa meri rajkumari...

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Jab wo commissioner in Lamho ko Yaad karta aur fansi ke fande k samne khadi apni beti ko dekhta aur pichey se Aa rahi cheekhe uski patni or beti ki to wo baa tadap jata hai..

Tabhi jailor bolna shuru karta hai jiske hatho me ek latter hota hai : ruhi Singh shakti ki beti
ilzam hai tum par tumne 5 mla 9 policemen aur high court ke judge ka katal kiya jinhe berehmi se mara aur sarkar ka arthik roop se bhi bahut nuksaan kiya in sab ki jurmo ki vajh se tumhe Fansi ki saza sunayi jati hai..

Fir jailor ek lambi Sans leke dubra bolna shuru karta hai

Jailor : ruhi Singh koi aakhiri khwahish hai tumhari.....

Jab ladki ye sunti to bheegi aankho se cheekh k kehti hai

Ladki : bharrrrrrr me jaaaaooo....


Ye Kehte hue fansi ka fanda apne gale me daal leti hai...



Karta nahi kyo tu mujhpe yaqin....
Kyo mere dil ki tu sunta nahi.....
Tere bagair kitna tanha sa hu
Aalam ye dil ka tu samjhe kabhi ..


Ruhi ki Maa tadap k cheekhte hue : ruhiiiiiiii meri bachi
Chor do meri beti ko chor do Mai tumhare hath jodti hu chor do ......



Karta nahi kyo tu mujhpe yaqin....
Kyo mere dil ki tu sunta nahi.....
Tere bagair kitna tanha sa hu
Aalam ye dil ka tu samjhe kabhi ..



Ruhi ki bahen jab apni didi k gale me fansi ka fanda dekhti to uski jaan pairo se nikalna shuru ho jati hai rote cheekhte hue apne komal hath zameen par marne lagti hai
Ladki : diiiiiii.... Daddy chor do unhe plz chor do diiiiiii....
Isi k sath wo zameen pe gir k behosh ho jati hai....



Hai pata ye tujhe na ji sakunga bin tere..
Fir bhi kyo mujhse judaa...
Tuuuuuuuu.. Tu hi hai tu hi to hai mera junu...
Tu hai tu to hai... Dil ka sukoon
Tu hai tu hi to hai jiske bina mai ji na sakun.....

Flashback....


To be continue.....

 

Baap Ji

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:congrats: bhai for starting this thread
Hope ki aap samay samay par update dogey aur kahani ko complete karoge
Thank you dear keep supporting

Ha bhi time par hi updates ayengi
Ye ab tak ki meri sabse great story hai aur ise mai definitely complete karunga support acha mila to time par update ayengi nhi mila to jab mera man hoga tab update ayengi.
 

Badshah Khan

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Great update bhai
Dekhte kya kahani hai in maa baap aur beetiyo ki aur ruhi ko fansi hogi ki nahi
Aur aisa kya kiya tha ruhi ne apne bhai ke sath jiska afsos usey aaj tak hai
Aur uska bhai ab hai ya nahi aur agar hai to kaha hai
Kahani bohut hi intresting lagrahi hai dekhte hai flash back mai kya kya huwa tha inke sath
Keep writing
Keep posting
 

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Introduction at present time




Commissioner of police shakti Singh
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Ye imandar hai na ghuskhor
Lekin kanoon or netao ke wafadaar hai age 43

Roha singh:
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age 40 hight 160 c. M
Educated hai khubsurat bhi bahut hai chandigarh se hai

Figure 32, 34, 36
Ye khud ko bahut maintain rakhti hai
Inki jaan inke bacho me hai


Ruhi Singh

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Hight 157 c. M age 21
Dikhne me pario jaisi khunkhar haseena lips anar ki tarah laal
Chahere ka naksa khada lambi naak hai rang dudhiya Indian to lagti hi nahi jitni khubsurat bahar se hai utni hi andar se hai shareer ki tarah dil bhi bahut khubsurat hai dusro ke gham ko dusro ki takleef ko apna gham takleef samajhti hai har kisi ki madad karti hai apni jaan se jyada pyaar apni choti behen se karti hai usme to jaan basti hai
Ruhi ne school me ncc ki training li hai college tak aate aate marshal arts me nipud hai or military ki training bhi hasil ki hai

Sohi :
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natkhat mazakiyan hamesha khush Rehne wali Jahan badi bahen khunkhar haseena hai wohi choti behen simple hai cutness ki to queen hai
Esa lagta hai dekhne me ki foreigner hai
Dushman bhi dil haar baithe Sohi ki khubsurati par
Age 18 saal hight 155 c. M
Abhi 12 th kar rahi hai

Devi laal, devil, ravan :
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Jitne Naam utna hi rahasya se bhara hai ye insan.
6 fut ka berahem yoddha.


Akanksha : 5 fut ki ek khubsurat ladki rang dudh se jyada gora esa lagta hai duniyabhar ki Masoomiyat isme samayi
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Samai hai akanksha ki hari ankho ko dekh k koi bhi Pagal ho jaye jald hi 18 saal ki hone wali hai . Ye bhi ek rahasya hai.

Aditi :
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hight 154 cm
Age 19 saal
Dikhne me behad khubsurat hai. C. B. I agent Kiraye ki
Bachpan me hi iske Maa baap mar gaye hai ab akeli rehti hai mad k sath.

Aslam devid mithun
Ye kon hai age pata chalega

Sodhi singh : primeminister budape me bhi bada chuddakd hai a hai achai se iska koi sambandh nhi yahan tak pahuch ne k liye isne na jane kitne masoom begunahi ka khun bahaya

Chandra, lakan, Peter
Ye kon age pata chalega

Durga :
dhande wali
Iska kotha hai

Aur waqi k character age pata chalenge..

Note : ye kahani system k against hai na ki desh k
Curruption etc k
Agar kisi ko kuch pasand nhi aata to sabhya tareeke se apni Baat rakhe




 
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Flashback...

Mumbai shaher

Commissioner shakti ka ghar
Jo sadak k kinare bana tha 3bhk flat..


Laxman ne sapudkha ke naak kaan Kaat ke uska apmaan kiya tha jiska badla ravan lena chahta tha .
Budhi nasihat karte hue
Apmaan ki aag bahut bhayanak hoti hai beta jo ek baar jal uthi to to sab kuch rakh kar deti hai

Ek budhi dadi apne 9 saal ke pote ko ravan ki kahani sunate hue kehti hai.

Ladka gusse me : yani ravan bilkul sahi tha

Dadhi : devi beta ab jao dusri kahani Baad me sunaugi

Devi uth ke apne ghar me pade jhule me aake baith jata hai jhula jhulte hue apni yadon me kho jata hai..
Falshback

Neele ambar ki choti si duniya rehte they panchi teen wahan..
Unme ek panchi chota sa bacha jo sehta sare Dard Jahan....

Ek ladka school ki bench par baitha hua hota hai
Tabhi resses ki well bajti wo bhi uth ke apna bag leke class se Bahar ki or chal deta hai
Ek class me aake ek choti bachi ko apni god me leke dusri class ki or chalne lagta hai
Ladki us ladki ki god me ladke ko dekh dekh k muskura rahi thi
Ladka : bhai ki jaan Sohi bhukh lagi hai
Sohi : Hmmm dher sara dudhu pina
Devi man me : 2sri class me aa gayi fir bhi dudh Pina nhi chodi hehehe
Man me muskurati hua class me aata Jahan uski badi bahen Ruhi baithi thi

Devi : didi khana.. Khaye
Apni di ko dekh k choti wali ladki god me jhatpatane lagti hai na chahte hue bhi devi use zameen par utar deta hai or Sohi bhagte hue apni di se chipat jati hai

Fir teeno bhai bahen khana khane lagte hai
Ruhi Sohi ko apne hatho se khila rahi hoti hai
Ye dekh ke devi bhi Ruhi k hatho se khana khane ki zidd karne lagta hai
Devi bholepan se : didi mujhe bhi khilaye na apne hatho se
Ruhi koi jawab nhi deti bas kabhi Sohi ko khilati to kabhi khud khati
Devi : didi please mujhe bhi khilaye na apne hatho se
Ese hi devi Kai baar kehta lekin Ruhi us par koi Dhyaan nhi deti
Devi ki bhi aankhe Nam ho jati hai

Tabhi devi nibala bana k Sohi ki taraf badhta hai ye soch k ki wo bhi apne hatho se khilaye

Devi nibala dete hue : gudiya lo bhai k hath se bhi Khao

Lekin Sohi apne hath se devi k hath ko hata deti hai
Aur Ruhi bhi ghurr ke dekhti jisse devi wo nibala khud hi kha leta hai

Tabhi ek ladka aata hai class me
Ladka : Ruhi akele akele kha rahi ho
Jaise hi devi us ladke dekhta hai uska gussa high ho jata hai
Devi : di ap iss subhash se fir bolne lagi us din apke liye isse jhagra kiya maine papa ki dant bhi khayi

Ruhi subhash se : Hmmm tum apna Khao na
Ruhi : ha ab usse Maine dosti kar li usne mafi mangi keh raha tha kabhi gaon ki gori nahi kahega.

Devi gussa pite hue : hmm or us din isne apke baal pakde uska kya iski vajh se meri pitayi hui uska kya
Ruhi kuch nhi bolti devi se

Subash : kyo devi maza aya us din kaise tujhe tere papa ne pure school k samne mara


Devi ko fir wohi apmaan se bhari ghadiyan Yaad Aane lagti hai aur uski behene bhi kab se uska apmaan kiye Jaa rahi thi
Sabse badi Baat bhai k dushman se dosti kar li uski bahen ne jise jaan k devi andar hi andar kudne laga..

Subash k sawal par devi kuch nhi kehta
Tabhi Ruhi ek parathe par achaar or sukhe aalu rakh k Subash ko deti hai
Ruhi : ye le Subash tume bhi bhukh lag ri na
Ye dekh k to devi ki puri hat jata hai or gusse me sabji ki pyali utha k Subash k mooh par marta hai

Devi pyali marte hue : ye le kha le
Jaise hi pyali uske mooh par lagti sabji se Subash ka poora mooh San jata hai
Waqi bacche ye dekh k kuch dar hate devi se to kuch Subash k mooh ko dekh kar Hasne lagte hai

Subash gusse me : teri itni himmat
Ruhi : ye kya kiya tune devi
Ye Kehte hue Ruhi apne chote hatho se ek thappar jad deti hai devi ko
Devi : didi apne uske liye mujhe mara
Devi gusse me ye apmaan Bhara chanta bardasht nhi kar pata
Aur use marne Aa rahe Subash ki or steel ki pani ki bottle leke Bhagat hua jata hai
Dhammmm se Subash ke sar par marta jisse subash ek hi botel me charo khane chitt hoke gir jata hai..



Tabhi Ruhi bhagte hue aati aur teacher ko bulane chali jati hai
Kuch der Baad teacher aate or Ruhi subash ko uthane lagti hai
Teacher gusse me devi ko thappar marte
Aur fir call karke devi k papa ko bulate hai

Devi ko ye dekh kar bahut gussa Aa raha tha ki uski bahen ko uski koi fikr nahi balki apne dost ki fikr hai
Andar hi andar devi apmaan ki aag me jalne laga tha
Fir teacher devi ko apne cabin me le jate hai

Kuch der Baad devi k papa aate hai shakti singh

Shakti : apki call se laga hu tha isne fir koi jhagra kiya
Teacher : ji sir esa hi hai aaj isne 5th me padne wale student ka sar fod diya hai,
Shakti : maaf karna sir iski taraf se mai mafi mang raha hu apse
Teacher : apki beti Ruhi wo kitni samajhdar hai hona har hai aur ye apka beta itna gusse wala hai
Har roz kisi na kisi ko marta hai

Ye sunte hi shakti gusse me shakti devi ki or badhta hai aur jin hatho se ghus leta unhi se devi ko marne lagta

Kafi der pittne k Baad teacher beech me aake rok leta hai

Shakti : kya karu mai tera itna gussa hai tujhme
Teacher : chodiye sir apka beta gusse wala zarur hai lekin ye bahut hi high level ka iq rakhta hai mind bhi bhut hai
Dono hatho se hamare pure school me iske siwa koi nahi likh sakta aur choti umar me bahut se experiment karne laga
Do din pehle 12th me padtne wale scien student ko isne hologram Bana k diya
Hes very creative but gussa iska kisi tarah Kam kare
Nahi to or bhi khatarnaak ho jayega ye

Shakti : thik hai taechr aaj k bad ye gussa to dur ye gusse wala mooh bhi nahi banayega


Ye Kehte hue shakti devi ko apne waqi bacho ko police jeebh me bitha k ghar le jata hai

Aur ghar aaye hi devi ko Santi se Marne Lagta hai

Devi rote cheekhte hue : papa Ruk jaye bada Dard ho raha hai aaahh Maa bacho
Shakti devi ki cheekho par koi Dhyaan nahi deta bas berahem ban k marta rehta ai

Shakti marte hue : bata ab jhagra karega bol ab karega meri naak Kata ke rakh di is ladke ne har kisi k samne aaye din sharminda karta hai ye Kehte hue kabhi tango par kabhi peeth par Santi barsata Rehta hai


Devi madad k liye pukare hue : Maa bacho bacho Maa
Dadi dadi maaa...
Devi ki Maa bhi shakti ke dar se bachane nahi aati
Tabhi andar se dadi bahar nikal k cheekhte sunti to wo bhagte hue aati hai aur devi ko apne sine se laga leti hai

Dadi : kya shakti tu pagl ho gaya itni berehmi se is bahe masoom ko mar raha hai
Khabdadar jo dubra hath lagaya

Shakti apni Maa ki vajh se marna band kar deta hai
Shakti : Maa ye aye din ladta rehta hi

Dadi : chal beta mere kamre me chal dadi maa sekengi tumhari peeth ko

Dadi ki ankhe nam ho jti hai kyoki devi ki peeth se school ki dree fatt Gayi thi aur kqi jagah se halka khun nikal raha tha

Shakti : mai jaa raha hu burma ji k bete se milne dekhun kya hal kiya is nalayk ne uska
Roha chonkte hue : hamare padosi burma ji k bete subsh ko mara

Shakti : haa


Ese hi din guzarne lagte hai
Har roz apmaan ki aag devi k sine me badh rahi thi har roz
Kabhi Maa baap to kabhi badi bahen ke hatho mila apmaan
Aur subash bhi devi se badle ki firaak me rehta..

Devi Sohi ko God me leke khila raha hota hai gudda gudio ka khel

Devi : Sohi ye Wali gudiya tum
Aur ye wala gudda mai ye didi
Sohi : Haa bhai ap mai or di hamesha ese hi rahenge

Tabhi bahar se shakti gar me aata dikhta jiske hatho me kai sare carry bag they

Sohi khush hote hue : papa.
Ye Kehte hue Sohi chote chote kadmo se shakti ki or bhagne lagti hai
Sohi ki Awaaz sun ke Ruhi bhi washroom se bhagti hui jati

Sohi Ruhi : papa papa hamare liye gift laye
Shakti : ha meri sehzadio

Ye dekh ke devi bhi Bhagta hua jata hai
Devi : papa papa mere liye kya laye

Shakti koi uttar nhi deta

Shakti : chalo ab jaldi se pehn k dikho

Fir dono apne Kapre leke change karne chali jati hai

Devi ek baar fir apmaanit mehsus karne lagta hai anadr jo apmaan ki chingari thi wo jwalamukhi ban gayi thi is umar me

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Apni yadon se nikalte hue devi ek shaitaani hasi Hasta hai

Devi : ravan ravan ravan banuga mai....

To be continue...
 
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