Fantasy Revenge aur Redemption
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Update 1: Chhalava aur Dhoka
Ghar ka mahol sukoon bhara hai, lekin Arjun ke dil mein uljhan hai. Raat ka samay hai aur khichdi ki khushboo kitchen se aa rahi hai.
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Arjun apne kamre mein baitha tha, uski aankhein khidki ke bahar ghoom rahi thi, jahan chaand chamak raha tha. Uska mann sirf ek hi cheez mein tha—Riya. Uski muskurahat, uski hasi, aur woh pal jab usne pehli baar Arjun se pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha. Lekin ab woh sab sirf ek yaad ban chuki thi, ek khwab jo ab toot gaya tha.
Kuch din pehle, usne dekha tha Riya ko kisi aur ke saath—uska naya dost, Raj. Us pal uski duniya thodi der ke liye ruki, jaise sab kuch khatam ho gaya ho. Uska dil chhinta gaya jab usne suna Riya ka unke saath hansi-mazaak karna, aur wo ankhon mein chamak jo sirf Arjun ke liye hoti thi, ab kisi aur ke liye thi. Us din ka dard ab bhi uski raaton ko kharab kar raha tha.
Tabhi achanak se ek knock sunai diya. Yeh Kavya thi, uski chhoti behan. Uski aankhein chamak rahi thi, jaise uske paas koi secret ho.
“Bhai, kya tumhe pata hai aaj maine kya kiya?” Kavya ne pucha, uski muskurahat se Arjun ka dil thoda halka hua.
“Nahi, kya?” Arjun ne muskurate hue kaha, lekin uska mann ab bhi udaas tha.
“Mainne school mein dance competition mein participate kiya! Aur sabko impress kar diya!” Kavya ne bechaini se kaha, uski aankhein khushiyon se bhari hui thi.
“Wow, meri behan toh superstar hai! Tumhe toh mujhe dikhana padega!” Arjun ne use taang khichne ki koshish ki, lekin uske chehre par gham ab bhi tha.
Kavya chali gayi aur thodi der baad wapas aayi, uske haath mein ek trophy thi. “Dekho, mujhe yeh mila!”
“Arre wah, itna bada trophy? Mujhe proud feel ho raha hai,” Arjun ne kaha. Lekin uski khushi mehsoos karte hue, uske mann mein Riya ki yaad dard deti rahi.
Kavya ne dekha ki Arjun kuch samajh nahi pa raha hai. “Bhai, kabhi kabhi mujhe samajh nahi aata ki tum itne serious kyun rehte ho. Thoda chill karo! Sab theek hoga,” Kavya ne kaha.
“Bas, abhi thoda stress hai. Padhai aur relationships ki wajah se, kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha,” Arjun ne kaha, koshish karte hue ki woh apne gham ko chhupa sake.
Kavya ne uska haath pakda. “Agar tumhe kuch kehna hai toh keh do. Yeh sab tumhare liye acha nahi hai. Riya ke baare mein kya soch rahe ho?”
Arjun ne thoda hesitate kiya, lekin fir usne socha ki Kavya ka kehna sahi hai. “Tum sach keh rahi ho, Kavya. Shayad mujhe kuch kehna chahiye.”
Unka baat karne ka mahol tabhi badal gaya jab Kavya ne muskurate hue kaha, “Bhai, main hamesha tumhare saath hoon. Tumhe kabhi bhi koi baat karni ho, main yahan hoon.”
Arjun ne uski taraf dekha, “Thanks, Kavya. Tum mere liye bohot important ho.” Usne socha ki agar kabhi kuch aur ho gaya toh yeh behan hi hai jo usse sambhal legi.
Dinner ke dauran, maa ne sabko khush rakhne ki koshish ki, lekin Arjun ka man toh sirf Riya par tha. Usne khud se socha, “Kya yeh sach hai? Kya Riya ne mujhe sirf chhalava diya?”
Jaise hi unhone dinner khatam kiya, maa ne kaha, “Arjun, kya tumhe kuch kehna hai? Tum itne ghamgeen kyun ho?”
Arjun ne sirf sharmaate hue kaha, “Bas, thoda stress hai.”
Kavya ne beech mein bola, “Maa, bhai ko Riya ki yaad aa rahi hai. Shayad use baat karni chahiye.”
Maa ne uski taraf dekha, “Arjun, agar kuch hai toh share karo. Tumhe hamesha sabse zyada support milega.”
Arjun ne socha, “Maa, kya main tumhe yeh sab bata sakta hoon? Kya main apne dil ki baat tumhe kahoon?”
Lekin usne khud ko roka. Abhi sab kuch thik nahi tha. Uska dil is gham ko share nahi kar sakta tha, lekin kab tak? Yeh soch uski raat ki neend uda rahi thi.
Raat ko, Arjun apne kamre mein akele baitha raha, khud se baatein karte hue. “Agar mujhe kabhi wapas jaana mile, toh main sab kuch badal dunga. Riya ko dikhana hoga ki pyaar sirf ek chhalava nahi hota.”
Jaise hi wo khud se soch raha tha, usne socha ki shayad yeh sirf ek shuruaat hai. Uski zindagi mein kuch naya hone wala hai, aur yeh kuch aisa hoga jo uski duniya ko badal dega.
Ghar ka mahol sukoon bhara hai, lekin Arjun ke dil mein uljhan hai. Raat ka samay hai aur khichdi ki khushboo kitchen se aa rahi hai.
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Arjun apne kamre mein baitha tha, uski aankhein khidki ke bahar ghoom rahi thi, jahan chaand chamak raha tha. Uska mann sirf ek hi cheez mein tha—Riya. Uski muskurahat, uski hasi, aur woh pal jab usne pehli baar Arjun se pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha. Lekin ab woh sab sirf ek yaad ban chuki thi, ek khwab jo ab toot gaya tha.
Kuch din pehle, usne dekha tha Riya ko kisi aur ke saath—uska naya dost, Raj. Us pal uski duniya thodi der ke liye ruki, jaise sab kuch khatam ho gaya ho. Uska dil chhinta gaya jab usne suna Riya ka unke saath hansi-mazaak karna, aur wo ankhon mein chamak jo sirf Arjun ke liye hoti thi, ab kisi aur ke liye thi. Us din ka dard ab bhi uski raaton ko kharab kar raha tha.
Tabhi achanak se ek knock sunai diya. Yeh Kavya thi, uski chhoti behan. Uski aankhein chamak rahi thi, jaise uske paas koi secret ho.
“Bhai, kya tumhe pata hai aaj maine kya kiya?” Kavya ne pucha, uski muskurahat se Arjun ka dil thoda halka hua.
“Nahi, kya?” Arjun ne muskurate hue kaha, lekin uska mann ab bhi udaas tha.
“Mainne school mein dance competition mein participate kiya! Aur sabko impress kar diya!” Kavya ne bechaini se kaha, uski aankhein khushiyon se bhari hui thi.
“Wow, meri behan toh superstar hai! Tumhe toh mujhe dikhana padega!” Arjun ne use taang khichne ki koshish ki, lekin uske chehre par gham ab bhi tha.
Kavya chali gayi aur thodi der baad wapas aayi, uske haath mein ek trophy thi. “Dekho, mujhe yeh mila!”
“Arre wah, itna bada trophy? Mujhe proud feel ho raha hai,” Arjun ne kaha. Lekin uski khushi mehsoos karte hue, uske mann mein Riya ki yaad dard deti rahi.
Kavya ne dekha ki Arjun kuch samajh nahi pa raha hai. “Bhai, kabhi kabhi mujhe samajh nahi aata ki tum itne serious kyun rehte ho. Thoda chill karo! Sab theek hoga,” Kavya ne kaha.
“Bas, abhi thoda stress hai. Padhai aur relationships ki wajah se, kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha,” Arjun ne kaha, koshish karte hue ki woh apne gham ko chhupa sake.
Kavya ne uska haath pakda. “Agar tumhe kuch kehna hai toh keh do. Yeh sab tumhare liye acha nahi hai. Riya ke baare mein kya soch rahe ho?”
Arjun ne thoda hesitate kiya, lekin fir usne socha ki Kavya ka kehna sahi hai. “Tum sach keh rahi ho, Kavya. Shayad mujhe kuch kehna chahiye.”
Unka baat karne ka mahol tabhi badal gaya jab Kavya ne muskurate hue kaha, “Bhai, main hamesha tumhare saath hoon. Tumhe kabhi bhi koi baat karni ho, main yahan hoon.”
Arjun ne uski taraf dekha, “Thanks, Kavya. Tum mere liye bohot important ho.” Usne socha ki agar kabhi kuch aur ho gaya toh yeh behan hi hai jo usse sambhal legi.
Dinner ke dauran, maa ne sabko khush rakhne ki koshish ki, lekin Arjun ka man toh sirf Riya par tha. Usne khud se socha, “Kya yeh sach hai? Kya Riya ne mujhe sirf chhalava diya?”
Jaise hi unhone dinner khatam kiya, maa ne kaha, “Arjun, kya tumhe kuch kehna hai? Tum itne ghamgeen kyun ho?”
Arjun ne sirf sharmaate hue kaha, “Bas, thoda stress hai.”
Kavya ne beech mein bola, “Maa, bhai ko Riya ki yaad aa rahi hai. Shayad use baat karni chahiye.”
Maa ne uski taraf dekha, “Arjun, agar kuch hai toh share karo. Tumhe hamesha sabse zyada support milega.”
Arjun ne socha, “Maa, kya main tumhe yeh sab bata sakta hoon? Kya main apne dil ki baat tumhe kahoon?”
Lekin usne khud ko roka. Abhi sab kuch thik nahi tha. Uska dil is gham ko share nahi kar sakta tha, lekin kab tak? Yeh soch uski raat ki neend uda rahi thi.
Raat ko, Arjun apne kamre mein akele baitha raha, khud se baatein karte hue. “Agar mujhe kabhi wapas jaana mile, toh main sab kuch badal dunga. Riya ko dikhana hoga ki pyaar sirf ek chhalava nahi hota.”
Jaise hi wo khud se soch raha tha, usne socha ki shayad yeh sirf ek shuruaat hai. Uski zindagi mein kuch naya hone wala hai, aur yeh kuch aisa hoga jo uski duniya ko badal dega.
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Update 2: Bewafai ka Zakham
Arjun apne kamre mein baitha hai, raat ka andhera uske dil ki udaasi ko aur gehra bana raha hai. Bahar mausam badal raha hai, bijli chamak rahi hai aur baarish shuru ho chuki hai. Uske mann mein ab bhi sirf ek chehra hai—Riya.
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Arjun ki aankhein purani yaadon mein kho chuki thi. Usne apne phone ka screen on kiya aur Riya ki ek purani tasveer uske samne thi. Us din ki tasveer jab dono ne ek saath apna pehla trip banaya tha. Riya ki muskurahat ab bhi uski aankhon mein chhupi thi, lekin Arjun ko ab sab kuch jhoota lagta tha.
"Kya main andha tha? Kya sab kuch waise nahi tha jaise main sochta tha?" Arjun ne apne aap se kaha.
**Flashback Begins**:
Ek mahina pehle ki baat thi jab Arjun aur Riya ka rista sabse zyada gehra lagta tha. Woh dono ek college fest mein milte the. Arjun ke liye, Riya sab kuch thi—uski dost, uska pyaar, aur uski duniya. Lekin jab Riya ne thoda thoda dur hona shuru kiya, toh Arjun ke dil mein shak paida hone laga. Riya ke call kaam ho gaye, text messages bhi short aur rude hone lage.
Ek raat, Arjun ne himmat karke Riya se baat karni ki sochi. Usne usse milne ko kaha, lekin Riya ka jawab tha, “Main busy hoon, baad mein baat karte hain.” Yeh jawab sun kar Arjun ka dil thoda toot gaya tha, lekin usne socha ki shayad Riya sach mein busy hogi.
Lekin fir us raat, jab Arjun apne doston ke saath ghoomne gaya, usne Riya ko kisi aur ke saath dekha—Raj ke saath. Woh dono ek dusre ke bohot kareeb the, aur Arjun ne us pal jo dekha, usne uske dil mein ek theekri daal di.
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**Present Day**:
Arjun ab bhi us pal ke baare mein soch raha tha jab uski maasi andar aayi, uske haath mein ek garam chai ka cup tha. “Arjun, beta, tum itne udaas kyun ho? Tumhare chehre par woh muskurahat kahaan gayi?”
Arjun ne maasi ki taraf dekha, lekin kuch bol nahi paaya. Uske dil mein gham itna zyada tha ki shabdon mein bayan karna mushkil tha. Maa ko dekha toh mann mein ek guilt mehsoos hua. Usse laga ki apni maa ko yeh sab nahi batana chahiye.
Lekin maa ne uska haath pakda aur pyaar se kaha, “Beta, koi bhi baat ho, tum hamesha humse keh sakte ho. Main dekh rahi hoon ki tum kuch chhupa rahe ho.”
Arjun ne thoda hesitation ke baad kaha, “Bas maa, thoda personal problem chal raha hai. Riya... woh shayad...”
Uske aage woh kuch nahi bol paaya. Maa ne kuch seconds tak uski taraf dekha, aur phir uske balon mein haath phirate hue kaha, “Arjun, kabhi kabhi humari zindagi mein kuch log hote hain jo hamesha ke liye nahi hote. Shayad tumhare liye kuch aur socha gaya ho.”
Arjun ko maa ke shabdon mein thoda sukoon mila. Usne socha ki shayad maa sahi keh rahi hai. Lekin andar se uska gussa aur pain ab bhi bhara hua tha. Riya ne jo dhoka diya tha, uska dard usse kuch aur sochne nahi de raha tha.
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Night Time:
Arjun apne bed par leta, raat ke andhere mein apne sapno aur yaadon mein ghoom raha tha. Uska phone ka screen ab tak on tha, jisme Riya ki ek purani photo thi. Uski aankhon mein neend nahi thi, sirf sawal the.
Achanak se, ek ajeeb si awaaz uske phone se aayi. Screen par kuch likha tha: **"Agar tumhe wapas jaane ka ek mauka milta, toh kya tum sab kuch badal dete?"**
Arjun ne apni aankhein malte hue screen par dekha. “Yeh kya hai?” Usne khud se kaha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise phone mein kuch technical glitch hai, lekin phir ek aur message aaya:
**"Waqt ko badalne ka ek mauka tumhe diya gaya hai. Tumhari kismat ab tumhare haath mein hai."**
Arjun ne phone ko zor se pakad liya. “Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?” Uska dimag confusion mein tha, lekin dil kahin na kahin soch raha tha ki shayad yeh uska sapna hai. Usne apna phone band karne ki koshish ki, lekin phir ek aur message aaya:
**"Waqt wapas jaana chaahte ho? Tumhare liye ek naya raasta khula hai."**
Arjun ne deep breath liya. Usne khud se kaha, “Agar yeh sach hai, toh main wapas jaake sab kuch badal dunga. Riya ko dikhana padega ki pyaar ek mazak nahi hai.”
Usne apne phone ke button ko press kiya, aur achanak ek light chamki. Sab kuch blur hota gaya, aur Arjun ki duniya ek ajeeb si roshni mein doob gayi.
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**Flashback to Teenage Years**:
Jab Arjun ne apni aankhein kholi, toh woh ek nayi jagah par tha—apne purane ghar ke kamre mein. Uska jawan chehra, apni purani books aur school ki uniform dekh kar, usse laga jaise woh waapis apne teenage days mein aa gaya ho.
“Kya main waqai wapas aa gaya hoon?” Arjun ne khud se pucha. Yeh ek nayi shuruaat thi, ek naya mauka, jahan ab sab kuch uske haath mein tha.
Tabhi ek awaaz uske kaan mein goonjti hai: **"Tumhare liye naye choices hain. Tumhe sab kuch sahi karna hai."**
**Option Choices Appear**:
**1. Focus on Studies**
- Reward: Intelligence +1
**2. Go Talk to Your Family**
- Reward: Affection +5 with family
**3. Ignore Everything and Stay . Alone**
- Reward: No reward
Arjun ne option 2 choose kiya aur apne ghar ke drawing room ki taraf chala. Ghar ka mahaul bilkul waise hi tha jaise usne apne school days mein chhoda tha. Uski maa kitchen mein kaam kar rahi thi, uski chhoti behan Kavya TV dekh rahi thi.
Arjun ne unhe dekha aur socha, "Yeh waqai ho raha hai... main waapas aa gaya hoon."
Arjun apne kamre mein baitha hai, raat ka andhera uske dil ki udaasi ko aur gehra bana raha hai. Bahar mausam badal raha hai, bijli chamak rahi hai aur baarish shuru ho chuki hai. Uske mann mein ab bhi sirf ek chehra hai—Riya.
---
Arjun ki aankhein purani yaadon mein kho chuki thi. Usne apne phone ka screen on kiya aur Riya ki ek purani tasveer uske samne thi. Us din ki tasveer jab dono ne ek saath apna pehla trip banaya tha. Riya ki muskurahat ab bhi uski aankhon mein chhupi thi, lekin Arjun ko ab sab kuch jhoota lagta tha.
"Kya main andha tha? Kya sab kuch waise nahi tha jaise main sochta tha?" Arjun ne apne aap se kaha.
**Flashback Begins**:
Ek mahina pehle ki baat thi jab Arjun aur Riya ka rista sabse zyada gehra lagta tha. Woh dono ek college fest mein milte the. Arjun ke liye, Riya sab kuch thi—uski dost, uska pyaar, aur uski duniya. Lekin jab Riya ne thoda thoda dur hona shuru kiya, toh Arjun ke dil mein shak paida hone laga. Riya ke call kaam ho gaye, text messages bhi short aur rude hone lage.
Ek raat, Arjun ne himmat karke Riya se baat karni ki sochi. Usne usse milne ko kaha, lekin Riya ka jawab tha, “Main busy hoon, baad mein baat karte hain.” Yeh jawab sun kar Arjun ka dil thoda toot gaya tha, lekin usne socha ki shayad Riya sach mein busy hogi.
Lekin fir us raat, jab Arjun apne doston ke saath ghoomne gaya, usne Riya ko kisi aur ke saath dekha—Raj ke saath. Woh dono ek dusre ke bohot kareeb the, aur Arjun ne us pal jo dekha, usne uske dil mein ek theekri daal di.
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**Present Day**:
Arjun ab bhi us pal ke baare mein soch raha tha jab uski maasi andar aayi, uske haath mein ek garam chai ka cup tha. “Arjun, beta, tum itne udaas kyun ho? Tumhare chehre par woh muskurahat kahaan gayi?”
Arjun ne maasi ki taraf dekha, lekin kuch bol nahi paaya. Uske dil mein gham itna zyada tha ki shabdon mein bayan karna mushkil tha. Maa ko dekha toh mann mein ek guilt mehsoos hua. Usse laga ki apni maa ko yeh sab nahi batana chahiye.
Lekin maa ne uska haath pakda aur pyaar se kaha, “Beta, koi bhi baat ho, tum hamesha humse keh sakte ho. Main dekh rahi hoon ki tum kuch chhupa rahe ho.”
Arjun ne thoda hesitation ke baad kaha, “Bas maa, thoda personal problem chal raha hai. Riya... woh shayad...”
Uske aage woh kuch nahi bol paaya. Maa ne kuch seconds tak uski taraf dekha, aur phir uske balon mein haath phirate hue kaha, “Arjun, kabhi kabhi humari zindagi mein kuch log hote hain jo hamesha ke liye nahi hote. Shayad tumhare liye kuch aur socha gaya ho.”
Arjun ko maa ke shabdon mein thoda sukoon mila. Usne socha ki shayad maa sahi keh rahi hai. Lekin andar se uska gussa aur pain ab bhi bhara hua tha. Riya ne jo dhoka diya tha, uska dard usse kuch aur sochne nahi de raha tha.
---
Night Time:
Arjun apne bed par leta, raat ke andhere mein apne sapno aur yaadon mein ghoom raha tha. Uska phone ka screen ab tak on tha, jisme Riya ki ek purani photo thi. Uski aankhon mein neend nahi thi, sirf sawal the.
Achanak se, ek ajeeb si awaaz uske phone se aayi. Screen par kuch likha tha: **"Agar tumhe wapas jaane ka ek mauka milta, toh kya tum sab kuch badal dete?"**
Arjun ne apni aankhein malte hue screen par dekha. “Yeh kya hai?” Usne khud se kaha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise phone mein kuch technical glitch hai, lekin phir ek aur message aaya:
**"Waqt ko badalne ka ek mauka tumhe diya gaya hai. Tumhari kismat ab tumhare haath mein hai."**
Arjun ne phone ko zor se pakad liya. “Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?” Uska dimag confusion mein tha, lekin dil kahin na kahin soch raha tha ki shayad yeh uska sapna hai. Usne apna phone band karne ki koshish ki, lekin phir ek aur message aaya:
**"Waqt wapas jaana chaahte ho? Tumhare liye ek naya raasta khula hai."**
Arjun ne deep breath liya. Usne khud se kaha, “Agar yeh sach hai, toh main wapas jaake sab kuch badal dunga. Riya ko dikhana padega ki pyaar ek mazak nahi hai.”
Usne apne phone ke button ko press kiya, aur achanak ek light chamki. Sab kuch blur hota gaya, aur Arjun ki duniya ek ajeeb si roshni mein doob gayi.
---
**Flashback to Teenage Years**:
Jab Arjun ne apni aankhein kholi, toh woh ek nayi jagah par tha—apne purane ghar ke kamre mein. Uska jawan chehra, apni purani books aur school ki uniform dekh kar, usse laga jaise woh waapis apne teenage days mein aa gaya ho.
“Kya main waqai wapas aa gaya hoon?” Arjun ne khud se pucha. Yeh ek nayi shuruaat thi, ek naya mauka, jahan ab sab kuch uske haath mein tha.
Tabhi ek awaaz uske kaan mein goonjti hai: **"Tumhare liye naye choices hain. Tumhe sab kuch sahi karna hai."**
**Option Choices Appear**:
**1. Focus on Studies**
- Reward: Intelligence +1
**2. Go Talk to Your Family**
- Reward: Affection +5 with family
**3. Ignore Everything and Stay . Alone**
- Reward: No reward
Arjun ne option 2 choose kiya aur apne ghar ke drawing room ki taraf chala. Ghar ka mahaul bilkul waise hi tha jaise usne apne school days mein chhoda tha. Uski maa kitchen mein kaam kar rahi thi, uski chhoti behan Kavya TV dekh rahi thi.
Arjun ne unhe dekha aur socha, "Yeh waqai ho raha hai... main waapas aa gaya hoon."