. Update-2
After 4 years:-
Somewhere in mountain ( in deep forests)
Ek ashram me :-
Aghori:- tumne joh hasil kiya hai beta woh aaj tak kisi ne nhi Kiya. Aur joh chiz tumne hasil kiya hai uske liye mai tumhe badhayi du ya maaru mujhe samjh nhi aata. Lekin joh v ho uska kabhi galat istemal mat karna. Yeh vidya laakhon -caroron me se ek ko milti hai. Aur sab chizon me toh tum avval ho hi.
Ladka- (fiki muskan ke sath) mujhe koi dukh nhi hai guru ji. Waise v iss jindgi me abb kuch bacha nhi. Aur mujhe thoda aur dukh mil hi gya toh kyaa hua.
Aghori- Mai tumhe samjha ke thak gya hu in 4 saalon me ki tum joh chahoge toh bahut kuch hasil kar sakte ho.
Ladka- mujhe na paise chahiye na hi mujhe vikhyat hona hai. Rahi baat bholenath ke karz ki woh toh mai marte dam tak nhi chuka sakta. Jabtak jinda hu unki sewa karta rahunga.
Aghori - jaisi tumhari iccha. Bhagwaan hamesa tumhara bhala kare.
Ladka- aap yaha kuch kaam se aaye hue hai kyaa????
Aghori- abb samay aa gya hai tum abb bahari duniya me kadam rakho aur jitni burayiyan hai unhe samapt karo.
Ladka- thik hai guru ji.
Aghori- jaao sabse Milo kal subah hamsab yaha se niklenge.
In 4 saalon me mai kabhi na kisi se matlab rakha na hi kisi se jayada mel-jol nahi koi dosti na yaari. Bass akela bitaya. Aaj fir wahi baitha tha jharne ke pass. Bass iss jagah ko miss karunga yeh shanti mujhe kabhi v bhang nhi karti thi. Mujhe hamesha meri yaadon me khoye rahne deti. Na kabhi pareshan kiya nahi kabhi kuch kaha. Abb pata nhi aisi jagah nayi duniya me milegi ya nhi.
Lekin idhar ashram me sabko pata chal gya tha ki unka priya unka dost jaane wala hain. Poore ashram me iss ladke ko sabhi maante the. Uska v kaaran tha. Yaha ashram me siksha ke prati yeh ladka hamesha apni jigyasa dikhta aur uss chiz ko aise pryog me lata ki sabhi gurujan v dang rah jaate. Aur toh aur iss ladke ne ashram me bahuto ki jaan bachayi hai bina apni jaan ke parwah kiye hue. Bhale hi yeh ladka kisi ko apna dost nhi manta kisi se nhi bolta magar isse sabhi prem karte iska aadar karte. Aap hi batao joh aapki jaan bachaye bina kisi parwah ke, aap iske prati kaisa khayal karengey. Kabhi kisi ko karya ya fir sashtra vidya sikhne. ke samay chot lag jati toh choti moti jadi buti se thik ho jaati magar yadi gambhir chot hai toh unhe bahari duniya me le jana padta. Yaha idhar v uska ilaz ho sakta magar itne ghane jangal me aur andar koi jaane ki himmat nhi karta tha. Aur gambhir chot ke samay kitna dard hota hai sabhi ko pata hi hai. magar is ladke ne uss ghane jangal me pravesh kiya waha jadi buti layi aur yeh ek baar nahi kayi baar kiya. Lekin jab v koi isse dhanyavad kahta bolta yeh mera kaam hai. Isme dhanyavad aisa koi baat nhi.
Sabko azib lagta magar sab isse sneh v karte. isse bahuto ne dosti karne ki koshish ki lekin sabko saaf mana kar diya.
Saam ke samay:-
" Tum kal jaa rahe ho tumhe nhi lagta tumhe apne mitro se mil lena chahiye" jhadne ke pass aate hue ek aadmi uss ladke se bola.
Ladka awaz ki disha me dekhta hai aur khade hokar pranam karta hai. Yeh ashram ke gurujano me se ek guru "ashrudev" joh shastra ke mahan gyata hai.
Ladka- prnam Gurudev. Kshama kare Gurudev mai samjhna nhi.
Ashrudev- tumhe apne mitro se Aur dusro se milna chahiye kal tum jane wale ho apni duniya me.
Ladka- m...errraaa ( fiki muskan ke sath) mera koi mitra nhi hai guru ji.
Ashrudev- lekin tumhe sab apna mitra apna sathi mante hai. Jaao mil lo sabse unhe accha lagega.
Ladka- ji.
Fir ladka waha se ashram chala jata hai. Waha ashram me sabhi jhijhak rahe the magar sab usse milne aane lage. Ashram me ladke 3 bhaago me bate the ek jisme sirf paise walo ke bacche the ( iss ashram ke baare me kisi kisi ko malum hai. Aur yaha yeh joh Amir bacche hai inhi ki daan se chalta hai) aur iska leader Rana tha.
Ek jisko bhavesh chalata tha jisme koi v aa sakta tha sirf woh talented Ona chahiye matlab saaf aap me koi ability hai. Matlab extra xtra mehnat karna jaante ho toh aaj nhi toh kal iss group ka hiss bann sakte ho.
Ek jisko niranjan chalata tha joh iss do group me nhi shamil ho sakte the woh isme shamil ho jaate.
3no group ke apne apne fayade the sabse pahle Rana ke group me joh v bacche the unn sabke pass paise the training me mahnge mahnge jadi butiya inhe assani se mil jaati. Isiliye iss group me yadi rank wise power divide hota suppose karo toh sabse lowest v B rank hota .
Maano char rank.
A- sabse powerful - joh bahut dino se training le rahe ho.
B- thoda kam powerful- jinhe Sab mil raha ho magar joh Jayda mehnat nhi karna chahte. Yeh v powerful hote hai.
C- joh thoda kam matlab jinhe jadi butiyon ka abhaw hota hai. Aur powerful v Jayda nhi hote.
D- jinhone start ki ho training.
Bhavesh ka group ka v same tha isme v lowest rank B hi hai. Magar rank A bahut kam hai aur B ki sankhya Jayda hai.
Sabse last me aata tha niranjan ka group. Isme teeno rank the A, B , C. Rank A niranjan ur iske saath 2 ladke aur the . Rank B v Jayda nhi thi muskhil se 10 bande magar c rank me bahut Jayda the bande.
Magar yeh teen group kisi se darte the ya pyaar karte the ya newcomer apna idol mante the toh woh tha divit pratap singh. Ek aisa ladka jisne sabhi simaye tod kar astra aur shashtra ki gyaan liya. Saath me kuch anokhi vidyaye v joh kisi kisi ko milti hai. Abb divit ka samay aur training poora ho chuka hai abb woh yaha se jaane wala hai apni jagah apne sahar apne logo ke pass.
Sab usse mile aur khush hue aur usse badhyai di. Isi tarah divit ka aaj ka din khatam hua.
Morning 5 baje.
Aghori - divit abb tumhara yaha se naya safar shuru hoga. Main tumhe phadi ke uss paar milunga.
Divit- ji.
After 15 days.
Divit - parnam Gurudev.
Aghori- khush raho jitna Maine socha tha usse pahle tumne apna Safar khatam kar liya. Maine tumhare ghar sandesh bhej diya tha tumhe koi lene aa jayega. Abb hame wapas apne jagah jana hoga. Main aasha karta hu tum jindgi me kabhi galat kaam nhi karoge. Hamesha sahi rashte par chalna. Kabhi kabhi ho sakta hai tumhare apne hi badha bane koshish karna unhe prem se samjha kar sahi rasta dikhao. Main chahta hu tum apne atit ko bhul jao aur aage badho.
Divit- ji guru ji dhyan rakhunga.
Aghori- thik hai abb chalne ka samay i gya hai. Hame chalna chahiye.
Aise hi sab apni apni jagah pahunch ate hai aur divit ko ek gadi lene aa jati.
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( Story me aage full details me sabkuch bataya jayega).
Divit ek gaadi me apne ghar ke liye nikal chuka tha. Divit ko bass itna pata tha ki uska ek ghar hai. Uske alawa usko kuch v nhi pata tha. Uski kishmat sayad sabse jayda badnashib thi ki isko poore pariwar me se koi nhi pahchanta tha.Bass kisi ko malum tha toh bass itna hi ki iss ghar ka ek aur beta hai divit. Kaisa hoga mara ya jinda hai chehara kaisa hai, pasand na pasand toh dur ki baat hai. Aur na khud divit kisi ko pahchanta tha. Badkismati itni ki apne maa- baap ki v chehara nhi pata tha. Divit thoda asahaj tha ki kaise woh poore pariwar ke samne jayega aur usse kahi jayda pahle kadwahat thi joh abb nirasha me badal chuki hai. Jaise ek tuta hua aadmi ko kisi se ummid nhi hoti chahe apne hi kyu na ho. Socho ki uski ahamiyat kitni hogi ki usse bass ek driver lene aaya tha. Fir v divit ko bura nhi lagta. Woh sahstro ko bahut manta tha. Isiliye usko kisi chiz ka malal nhi tha. Kabhi kabhi divit ko gussa v aata magar kuch soch ke shant ho jata. Magar uske pass kuch aur hi dard tha pichle kuch saalon me joh ab nasur ban gya hai. Kahte hai na kabhi kabhi koi itna dard sahta hai ki dard kya hota hai bhul hi jata hai kuch aisa hi divit ke saath v tha. Yeh sab chodte hai divit ke pass chalte hai. Divit ko thodi halki ghabrahat thi kisi ne kuch sawal kiya toh kya jawab dega. Isiliye chintit tha. Aise hi safar ke baad shaam ko 5 baje gadi ek ghar ne enter karti hai toh divit bolta hai.
Divit- bhaiya ham kaha aaye hai.
Driver- Saab ji hamlog pauch gye hai.
Divit - thik hai.
Divit charon taraf dekhta hai. Usse bich me ek ek floor ka ghar dikhta hai joh bahut hi acchi trah se banaya gya tha. Ek traf se garage aur baad baki jaghon par ped- paudhe aur phool lage the aur thik ghar ke saamne ek chota sa charo traf se khula hua baithak type ek jagah banayi hui thi. Bich me curve shape road gadiyon ke liye.
Divit dekhta hai bethak ke pass ek gaadi lagi hai aur waha 5 bujgurj baithe gaape maar rahe the. Waha ek bujurg gaadi dekhte hi gaadi ki traf badhe aur aakar gale mile aur halchal puchn mii e lage. Main kuch samjh nhi paya kya bolu. Kaise react Karu.
Mai- ji mai thik aap kaise hai.
Bujurg- mai thik hu. Lagta hai mujhe nhi pahchana. Mai tumhara dada.
Mai v ek phiki muskan ke saath muskuraya. Jaise kha raha hu kaun dada. Aur phir maine pair chhue toh unhone ashirwad diya.
woh mujhe poore saath lagaye baatchit karte hue gale laga liya aur le jaane lage. Aur sath me baate karne lage.
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After 4 years:-
Somewhere in mountain ( in deep forests)
Ek ashram me :-
Aghori:- tumne joh hasil kiya hai beta woh aaj tak kisi ne nhi Kiya. Aur joh chiz tumne hasil kiya hai uske liye mai tumhe badhayi du ya maaru mujhe samjh nhi aata. Lekin joh v ho uska kabhi galat istemal mat karna. Yeh vidya laakhon -caroron me se ek ko milti hai. Aur sab chizon me toh tum avval ho hi.
Ladka- (fiki muskan ke sath) mujhe koi dukh nhi hai guru ji. Waise v iss jindgi me abb kuch bacha nhi. Aur mujhe thoda aur dukh mil hi gya toh kyaa hua.
Aghori- Mai tumhe samjha ke thak gya hu in 4 saalon me ki tum joh chahoge toh bahut kuch hasil kar sakte ho.
Ladka- mujhe na paise chahiye na hi mujhe vikhyat hona hai. Rahi baat bholenath ke karz ki woh toh mai marte dam tak nhi chuka sakta. Jabtak jinda hu unki sewa karta rahunga.
Aghori - jaisi tumhari iccha. Bhagwaan hamesa tumhara bhala kare.
Ladka- aap yaha kuch kaam se aaye hue hai kyaa????
Aghori- abb samay aa gya hai tum abb bahari duniya me kadam rakho aur jitni burayiyan hai unhe samapt karo.
Ladka- thik hai guru ji.
Aghori- jaao sabse Milo kal subah hamsab yaha se niklenge.
In 4 saalon me mai kabhi na kisi se matlab rakha na hi kisi se jayada mel-jol nahi koi dosti na yaari. Bass akela bitaya. Aaj fir wahi baitha tha jharne ke pass. Bass iss jagah ko miss karunga yeh shanti mujhe kabhi v bhang nhi karti thi. Mujhe hamesha meri yaadon me khoye rahne deti. Na kabhi pareshan kiya nahi kabhi kuch kaha. Abb pata nhi aisi jagah nayi duniya me milegi ya nhi.
Lekin idhar ashram me sabko pata chal gya tha ki unka priya unka dost jaane wala hain. Poore ashram me iss ladke ko sabhi maante the. Uska v kaaran tha. Yaha ashram me siksha ke prati yeh ladka hamesha apni jigyasa dikhta aur uss chiz ko aise pryog me lata ki sabhi gurujan v dang rah jaate. Aur toh aur iss ladke ne ashram me bahuto ki jaan bachayi hai bina apni jaan ke parwah kiye hue. Bhale hi yeh ladka kisi ko apna dost nhi manta kisi se nhi bolta magar isse sabhi prem karte iska aadar karte. Aap hi batao joh aapki jaan bachaye bina kisi parwah ke, aap iske prati kaisa khayal karengey. Kabhi kisi ko karya ya fir sashtra vidya sikhne. ke samay chot lag jati toh choti moti jadi buti se thik ho jaati magar yadi gambhir chot hai toh unhe bahari duniya me le jana padta. Yaha idhar v uska ilaz ho sakta magar itne ghane jangal me aur andar koi jaane ki himmat nhi karta tha. Aur gambhir chot ke samay kitna dard hota hai sabhi ko pata hi hai. magar is ladke ne uss ghane jangal me pravesh kiya waha jadi buti layi aur yeh ek baar nahi kayi baar kiya. Lekin jab v koi isse dhanyavad kahta bolta yeh mera kaam hai. Isme dhanyavad aisa koi baat nhi.
Sabko azib lagta magar sab isse sneh v karte. isse bahuto ne dosti karne ki koshish ki lekin sabko saaf mana kar diya.
Saam ke samay:-
" Tum kal jaa rahe ho tumhe nhi lagta tumhe apne mitro se mil lena chahiye" jhadne ke pass aate hue ek aadmi uss ladke se bola.
Ladka awaz ki disha me dekhta hai aur khade hokar pranam karta hai. Yeh ashram ke gurujano me se ek guru "ashrudev" joh shastra ke mahan gyata hai.
Ladka- prnam Gurudev. Kshama kare Gurudev mai samjhna nhi.
Ashrudev- tumhe apne mitro se Aur dusro se milna chahiye kal tum jane wale ho apni duniya me.
Ladka- m...errraaa ( fiki muskan ke sath) mera koi mitra nhi hai guru ji.
Ashrudev- lekin tumhe sab apna mitra apna sathi mante hai. Jaao mil lo sabse unhe accha lagega.
Ladka- ji.
Fir ladka waha se ashram chala jata hai. Waha ashram me sabhi jhijhak rahe the magar sab usse milne aane lage. Ashram me ladke 3 bhaago me bate the ek jisme sirf paise walo ke bacche the ( iss ashram ke baare me kisi kisi ko malum hai. Aur yaha yeh joh Amir bacche hai inhi ki daan se chalta hai) aur iska leader Rana tha.
Ek jisko bhavesh chalata tha jisme koi v aa sakta tha sirf woh talented Ona chahiye matlab saaf aap me koi ability hai. Matlab extra xtra mehnat karna jaante ho toh aaj nhi toh kal iss group ka hiss bann sakte ho.
Ek jisko niranjan chalata tha joh iss do group me nhi shamil ho sakte the woh isme shamil ho jaate.
3no group ke apne apne fayade the sabse pahle Rana ke group me joh v bacche the unn sabke pass paise the training me mahnge mahnge jadi butiya inhe assani se mil jaati. Isiliye iss group me yadi rank wise power divide hota suppose karo toh sabse lowest v B rank hota .
Maano char rank.
A- sabse powerful - joh bahut dino se training le rahe ho.
B- thoda kam powerful- jinhe Sab mil raha ho magar joh Jayda mehnat nhi karna chahte. Yeh v powerful hote hai.
C- joh thoda kam matlab jinhe jadi butiyon ka abhaw hota hai. Aur powerful v Jayda nhi hote.
D- jinhone start ki ho training.
Bhavesh ka group ka v same tha isme v lowest rank B hi hai. Magar rank A bahut kam hai aur B ki sankhya Jayda hai.
Sabse last me aata tha niranjan ka group. Isme teeno rank the A, B , C. Rank A niranjan ur iske saath 2 ladke aur the . Rank B v Jayda nhi thi muskhil se 10 bande magar c rank me bahut Jayda the bande.
Magar yeh teen group kisi se darte the ya pyaar karte the ya newcomer apna idol mante the toh woh tha divit pratap singh. Ek aisa ladka jisne sabhi simaye tod kar astra aur shashtra ki gyaan liya. Saath me kuch anokhi vidyaye v joh kisi kisi ko milti hai. Abb divit ka samay aur training poora ho chuka hai abb woh yaha se jaane wala hai apni jagah apne sahar apne logo ke pass.
Sab usse mile aur khush hue aur usse badhyai di. Isi tarah divit ka aaj ka din khatam hua.
Morning 5 baje.
Aghori - divit abb tumhara yaha se naya safar shuru hoga. Main tumhe phadi ke uss paar milunga.
Divit- ji.
After 15 days.
Divit - parnam Gurudev.
Aghori- khush raho jitna Maine socha tha usse pahle tumne apna Safar khatam kar liya. Maine tumhare ghar sandesh bhej diya tha tumhe koi lene aa jayega. Abb hame wapas apne jagah jana hoga. Main aasha karta hu tum jindgi me kabhi galat kaam nhi karoge. Hamesha sahi rashte par chalna. Kabhi kabhi ho sakta hai tumhare apne hi badha bane koshish karna unhe prem se samjha kar sahi rasta dikhao. Main chahta hu tum apne atit ko bhul jao aur aage badho.
Divit- ji guru ji dhyan rakhunga.
Aghori- thik hai abb chalne ka samay i gya hai. Hame chalna chahiye.
Aise hi sab apni apni jagah pahunch ate hai aur divit ko ek gadi lene aa jati.
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( Story me aage full details me sabkuch bataya jayega).
Divit ek gaadi me apne ghar ke liye nikal chuka tha. Divit ko bass itna pata tha ki uska ek ghar hai. Uske alawa usko kuch v nhi pata tha. Uski kishmat sayad sabse jayda badnashib thi ki isko poore pariwar me se koi nhi pahchanta tha.Bass kisi ko malum tha toh bass itna hi ki iss ghar ka ek aur beta hai divit. Kaisa hoga mara ya jinda hai chehara kaisa hai, pasand na pasand toh dur ki baat hai. Aur na khud divit kisi ko pahchanta tha. Badkismati itni ki apne maa- baap ki v chehara nhi pata tha. Divit thoda asahaj tha ki kaise woh poore pariwar ke samne jayega aur usse kahi jayda pahle kadwahat thi joh abb nirasha me badal chuki hai. Jaise ek tuta hua aadmi ko kisi se ummid nhi hoti chahe apne hi kyu na ho. Socho ki uski ahamiyat kitni hogi ki usse bass ek driver lene aaya tha. Fir v divit ko bura nhi lagta. Woh sahstro ko bahut manta tha. Isiliye usko kisi chiz ka malal nhi tha. Kabhi kabhi divit ko gussa v aata magar kuch soch ke shant ho jata. Magar uske pass kuch aur hi dard tha pichle kuch saalon me joh ab nasur ban gya hai. Kahte hai na kabhi kabhi koi itna dard sahta hai ki dard kya hota hai bhul hi jata hai kuch aisa hi divit ke saath v tha. Yeh sab chodte hai divit ke pass chalte hai. Divit ko thodi halki ghabrahat thi kisi ne kuch sawal kiya toh kya jawab dega. Isiliye chintit tha. Aise hi safar ke baad shaam ko 5 baje gadi ek ghar ne enter karti hai toh divit bolta hai.
Divit- bhaiya ham kaha aaye hai.
Driver- Saab ji hamlog pauch gye hai.
Divit - thik hai.
Divit charon taraf dekhta hai. Usse bich me ek ek floor ka ghar dikhta hai joh bahut hi acchi trah se banaya gya tha. Ek traf se garage aur baad baki jaghon par ped- paudhe aur phool lage the aur thik ghar ke saamne ek chota sa charo traf se khula hua baithak type ek jagah banayi hui thi. Bich me curve shape road gadiyon ke liye.
Divit dekhta hai bethak ke pass ek gaadi lagi hai aur waha 5 bujgurj baithe gaape maar rahe the. Waha ek bujurg gaadi dekhte hi gaadi ki traf badhe aur aakar gale mile aur halchal puchn mii e lage. Main kuch samjh nhi paya kya bolu. Kaise react Karu.
Mai- ji mai thik aap kaise hai.
Bujurg- mai thik hu. Lagta hai mujhe nhi pahchana. Mai tumhara dada.
Mai v ek phiki muskan ke saath muskuraya. Jaise kha raha hu kaun dada. Aur phir maine pair chhue toh unhone ashirwad diya.
woh mujhe poore saath lagaye baatchit karte hue gale laga liya aur le jaane lage. Aur sath me baate karne lage.
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